More polishing

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Map
2022-03-05 13:22:28 -06:00
parent 927c2f3631
commit a2bcedd7a3
25 changed files with 321 additions and 42 deletions

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@ -20,7 +20,6 @@ define M = Character ('Morgan',color="#2D36E1",**kwargs) #Blue
define F = Character ('Farelie',color="#8A0036",**kwargs) #Pink
label start:
$ Farelie = 0
window auto hide
"The script contains swearing and other family unfriendly images, would you be okay with seeing that?{w=.5}{nw}"
@ -36,6 +35,7 @@ menu:
$ lewd = True
label replayStart:
$ Farelie = 0
window auto hide
pause .5
@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ stop ambient fadeout 1
window auto hide
pause 1
play music 'audio/ragge.ogg'
play music 'audio/she likes this a lotl.ogg'
if lewd:
scene farelie01 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 10.0) with dissolve
pause 10
@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ M "Theyre not bland."
M "And if youre really dead set on this, follow me."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I lead Farelie around to the entrance to the trail."
@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ M "Alright, let me set the pace."
"She nods and smiles uneasily."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with dissolve
scene morning with dissolve
pause .5
"With her approval I set a sedate jogging pace for her and head towards the first obstacle."
@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ jump secondchoice
label secondchoice:
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with dissolve
scene morning with dissolve
pause .5
M "You ready to keep going?"
@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ pause .5
"Taking a breath to ready myself, I hook a leg over the edge and push off."
pause .5
"My stomach flip-flops a little on the way down (thanks, gravity), and I hit the gymnastics mat after a few seconds."
"My stomach flip-flops a little on the way down - thanks, gravity - and I hit the gymnastics mat after a few seconds."
"I roll off the soft platform, and jog myself over to the side."
@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ M "You good to go?"
"I get a simple nod from her before she gets up."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
jump thirdchoice
@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ F "Its gonna be great."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
jump thirdchoice
@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ M "And we definitely wont be safe after nightfall."
F "Awww... Yeah, lets keep going."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I start a slow jog again and pick up the pace once I hear her following along."
@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ M "Maybe... depends on what you actually signed us up for."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I consider how Farelie really did on all the obstacles today."
@ -831,8 +831,12 @@ stop music fadeout 2.5
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
window auto hide
pause .5
scene evening with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
jump endingcheck
label going:
@ -939,7 +943,7 @@ M "Dont worry, nows the time for relaxing."
M "A nice shower, a nice dinner..."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I can hear her murmur in approval. After a few minutes, the only sign shes alive is her slight breathing."
@ -959,6 +963,10 @@ stop music fadeout 3
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
window auto hide
pause .5
scene evening with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
jump endingcheck
@ -982,6 +990,10 @@ pause .5
"I drift off to sleep, thinking about what all transpired today."
"If all our training sessions will be like this one, I cant see us being ready for the run."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I wake up groggily, silencing the alarm on my phone."
@ -1026,8 +1038,15 @@ F "About that..."
"Uh oh."
F "I really dont think Im cut out for this hard exercise thing..."
window auto hide
pause .5
play music 'audio/slug coomers.ogg'
scene wakemeup with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
F "Im going to drop from the Spartan Run."
pause .5
M "Oh."
pause .5
@ -1075,21 +1094,23 @@ pause .5
pause .5
F "Look, Im just..."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene wakemeupinside with Dissolve(1)
pause 1
"She sighs, screwing her eyes shut."
F "Just leave me alone for a while, please."
F "Im going back to bed."
pause .5
"She returns to her room in a huff, leaving me all alone in the tiny offsite-house."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene saaavemeee with Dissolve(1)
pause 2
play music 'audio/slug coomers.ogg'
scene wakemeup with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
"She returns to her room in a huff, leaving me all alone in the tiny offsite-house."
pause .5
"I shift awkwardly, unsure what the appropriate action to do is."
@ -1104,11 +1125,6 @@ pause .5
"Maybe if I said this, or that, shed still be up. Maybe wed be laughing right now."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene wakemeupinside with Dissolve(1)
pause 1
"I end up spending my last full day off for another several months reading to myself and watching television."
"But no matter what I tried to watch, the couch under my body felt uncomfortable."
@ -1116,14 +1132,13 @@ pause 1
"The water I drank tasted foul, and the food I eat sits in my stomach like a stone."
"Worst of all, I feel pangs of guilt every time I look over to her door, hoping it to be open..."
pause .5
"{cps=*1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"{cps=*1}...{/cps}but seeing it still locked shut."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene saaavemeee with Dissolve(1)
pause 2
pause 1
"Maybe she doesnt actually like me alotl."
window auto hide
@ -1184,12 +1199,20 @@ pause .5
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
play ambient 'audio/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 2
pause 1
"This is it."
"The day of the Spartan Run."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I move the shifter to park, having made sure that my metal steed is correctly positioned in the space."
@ -1247,7 +1270,7 @@ pause 1
"A momentary pause. Soon enough I see Farelie climb over the top."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with dissolve
scene morning with dissolve
pause .5
"Having made sure shes still in shape to continue, we pick back up and continue running."
@ -1412,7 +1435,7 @@ pause .5
"When we arrive home, we drag ourselves inside and rest a bit longer on the couch."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene evening with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Farelie took a shower first, and true to her word she crashed in her bed before I even entered the bathroom to take mine."
@ -1424,12 +1447,20 @@ stop music fadeout 3
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
play ambient 'audio/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 2
pause 1
"This is it."
"The day of the Spartan Run."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I move the shifter to park, having made sure that my metal steed is correctly positioned in the space."
pause .5
@ -1530,7 +1561,7 @@ M "Wanna jump together?"
"I count down from three and-"
window auto hide
pause .25
scene black with dissolve
scene morning with dissolve
pause .5
"I cant contain my laugh as I yank Farelie with me on two, her shriek morphing into laughs as well when we hit the cushion together."
@ -1578,7 +1609,7 @@ if lewd:
scene youknowwhatyouaredoing with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
else:
scene black with dissolve
scene morning with dissolve
pause .5
"Not at all."
@ -1646,7 +1677,7 @@ F "Me too, me too."
"I upend the rest of the bottle over my exhausted girlfriend, something between a surprised squeal and relaxed coo coming out of her mouth."
window auto hide
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
scene morning with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"I finally feel my breathing even out when another event organizer swings by us, handing out simple looking coins to everyone."
@ -1804,10 +1835,18 @@ if lewd:
scene wewlad with Dissolve(2)
pause
scene black with Dissolve(2)
pause .5
show daend with Dissolve(1)
pause
hide daend with Dissolve(1)
pause 1
jump playAgain
else:
show daend with Dissolve(1)
pause
hide daend with Dissolve(1)
pause 1
jump playAgain