More polishing
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game/script.rpy
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game/script.rpy
@ -20,7 +20,6 @@ define M = Character ('Morgan',color="#2D36E1",**kwargs) #Blue
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define F = Character ('Farelie',color="#8A0036",**kwargs) #Pink
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label start:
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$ Farelie = 0
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window auto hide
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"The script contains swearing and other family unfriendly images, would you be okay with seeing that?{w=.5}{nw}"
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@ -36,6 +35,7 @@ menu:
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$ lewd = True
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label replayStart:
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$ Farelie = 0
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ stop ambient fadeout 1
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window auto hide
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pause 1
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play music 'audio/ragge.ogg'
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play music 'audio/she likes this a lotl.ogg'
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if lewd:
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scene farelie01 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 10.0) with dissolve
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pause 10
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@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ M "They’re not bland."
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M "And if you’re really dead set on this, follow me."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I lead Farelie around to the entrance to the trail."
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@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ M "Alright, let me set the pace."
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"She nods and smiles uneasily."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with dissolve
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scene morning with dissolve
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pause .5
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"With her approval I set a sedate jogging pace for her and head towards the first obstacle."
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@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ jump secondchoice
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label secondchoice:
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with dissolve
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scene morning with dissolve
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pause .5
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M "You ready to keep going?"
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@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ pause .5
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"Taking a breath to ready myself, I hook a leg over the edge and push off."
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pause .5
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"My stomach flip-flops a little on the way down (thanks, gravity), and I hit the gymnastics mat after a few seconds."
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"My stomach flip-flops a little on the way down - thanks, gravity - and I hit the gymnastics mat after a few seconds."
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"I roll off the soft platform, and jog myself over to the side."
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@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ M "You good to go?"
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"I get a simple nod from her before she gets up."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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jump thirdchoice
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@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ F "It’s gonna be great."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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jump thirdchoice
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@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ M "And we definitely won’t be safe after nightfall."
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F "Awww... Yeah, let’s keep going."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I start a slow jog again and pick up the pace once I hear her following along."
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@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ M "Maybe... depends on what you actually signed us up for."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I consider how Farelie really did on all the obstacles today."
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@ -831,8 +831,12 @@ stop music fadeout 2.5
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pause .5
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"{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene evening with Dissolve(2)
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pause 1
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jump endingcheck
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label going:
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@ -939,7 +943,7 @@ M "Don’t worry, now’s the time for relaxing."
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M "A nice shower, a nice dinner..."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I can hear her murmur in approval. After a few minutes, the only sign she’s alive is her slight breathing."
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@ -959,6 +963,10 @@ stop music fadeout 3
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pause .5
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"{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene evening with Dissolve(2)
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pause 1
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jump endingcheck
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@ -982,6 +990,10 @@ pause .5
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"I drift off to sleep, thinking about what all transpired today."
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"If all our training sessions will be like this one, I can’t see us being ready for the run."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I wake up groggily, silencing the alarm on my phone."
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@ -1026,8 +1038,15 @@ F "About that..."
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"Uh oh."
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F "I really don’t think I’m cut out for this hard exercise thing..."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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play music 'audio/slug coomers.ogg'
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scene wakemeup with Dissolve(2)
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pause 1
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F "I’m going to drop from the Spartan Run."
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pause .5
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M "Oh."
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pause .5
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@ -1075,21 +1094,23 @@ pause .5
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pause .5
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F "Look, I’m just..."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene wakemeupinside with Dissolve(1)
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pause 1
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"She sighs, screwing her eyes shut."
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F "Just leave me alone for a while, please."
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F "I’m going back to bed."
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pause .5
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"She returns to her room in a huff, leaving me all alone in the tiny offsite-house."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene saaavemeee with Dissolve(1)
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pause 2
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play music 'audio/slug coomers.ogg'
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scene wakemeup with Dissolve(2)
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pause 1
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"She returns to her room in a huff, leaving me all alone in the tiny offsite-house."
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pause .5
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"I shift awkwardly, unsure what the appropriate action to do is."
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@ -1104,11 +1125,6 @@ pause .5
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"Maybe if I said this, or that, she’d still be up. Maybe we’d be laughing right now."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene wakemeupinside with Dissolve(1)
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pause 1
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"I end up spending my last full day off for another several months reading to myself and watching television."
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"But no matter what I tried to watch, the couch under my body felt uncomfortable."
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@ -1116,14 +1132,13 @@ pause 1
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"The water I drank tasted foul, and the food I eat sits in my stomach like a stone."
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"Worst of all, I feel pangs of guilt every time I look over to her door, hoping it to be open..."
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pause .5
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"{cps=*1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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"{cps=*1}...{/cps}but seeing it still locked shut."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene saaavemeee with Dissolve(1)
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pause 2
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pause 1
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"Maybe she doesn’t actually like me alotl."
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window auto hide
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@ -1184,12 +1199,20 @@ pause .5
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pause .5
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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play ambient 'audio/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 2
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pause 1
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"This is it."
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"The day of the Spartan Run."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I move the shifter to park, having made sure that my metal steed is correctly positioned in the space."
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@ -1247,7 +1270,7 @@ pause 1
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"A momentary pause. Soon enough I see Farelie climb over the top."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with dissolve
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scene morning with dissolve
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pause .5
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"Having made sure she’s still in shape to continue, we pick back up and continue running."
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@ -1412,7 +1435,7 @@ pause .5
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"When we arrive home, we drag ourselves inside and rest a bit longer on the couch."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene evening with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"Farelie took a shower first, and true to her word she crashed in her bed before I even entered the bathroom to take mine."
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@ -1424,12 +1447,20 @@ stop music fadeout 3
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pause .5
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"{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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play ambient 'audio/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 2
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pause 1
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"This is it."
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"The day of the Spartan Run."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I move the shifter to park, having made sure that my metal steed is correctly positioned in the space."
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pause .5
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@ -1530,7 +1561,7 @@ M "Wanna jump together?"
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"I count down from three and-"
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window auto hide
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pause .25
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scene black with dissolve
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scene morning with dissolve
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pause .5
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"I can’t contain my laugh as I yank Farelie with me on ‘two’, her shriek morphing into laughs as well when we hit the cushion together."
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@ -1578,7 +1609,7 @@ if lewd:
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scene youknowwhatyouaredoing with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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else:
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scene black with dissolve
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scene morning with dissolve
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pause .5
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"Not at all."
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@ -1646,7 +1677,7 @@ F "Me too, me too."
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"I upend the rest of the bottle over my exhausted girlfriend, something between a surprised squeal and relaxed coo coming out of her mouth."
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window auto hide
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pause .5
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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scene morning with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I finally feel my breathing even out when another event organizer swings by us, handing out simple looking coins to everyone."
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@ -1804,10 +1835,18 @@ if lewd:
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scene wewlad with Dissolve(2)
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pause
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scene black with Dissolve(2)
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pause .5
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show daend with Dissolve(1)
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pause
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hide daend with Dissolve(1)
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pause 1
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jump playAgain
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else:
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show daend with Dissolve(1)
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pause
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hide daend with Dissolve(1)
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pause 1
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jump playAgain
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