More polishing

game/script.rpy

@@ -20,7 +20,6 @@ define M = Character ('Morgan',color="#2D36E1",**kwargs) #Blue
 define F = Character ('Farelie',color="#8A0036",**kwargs) #Pink
 
 label start:
-$ Farelie = 0
 window auto hide
 
 "The script contains swearing and other family unfriendly images, would you be okay with seeing that?{w=.5}{nw}"
@@ -36,6 +35,7 @@ menu:
      $ lewd = True
 
 label replayStart:
+$ Farelie = 0
 
 window auto hide
 pause .5
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ stop ambient fadeout 1
 window auto hide
 pause 1
 
-play music 'audio/ragge.ogg'
+play music 'audio/she likes this a lotl.ogg'
 if lewd:
     scene farelie01 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 10.0) with dissolve
     pause 10
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ M "They’re not bland."
 M "And if you’re really dead set on this, follow me."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "I lead Farelie around to the entrance to the trail."
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ M "Alright, let me set the pace."
 "She nods and smiles uneasily."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with dissolve
+scene morning with dissolve
 pause .5
 
 "With her approval I set a sedate jogging pace for her and head towards the first obstacle."
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ jump secondchoice
 label secondchoice:
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with dissolve
+scene morning with dissolve
 pause .5
 
 M "You ready to keep going?"
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ pause .5
 "Taking a breath to ready myself, I hook a leg over the edge and push off."
 pause .5
 
-"My stomach flip-flops a little on the way down (thanks, gravity), and I hit the gymnastics mat after a few seconds."
+"My stomach flip-flops a little on the way down - thanks, gravity - and I hit the gymnastics mat after a few seconds."
 
 "I roll off the soft platform, and jog myself over to the side."
 
@@ -562,7 +562,7 @@ M "You good to go?"
 "I get a simple nod from her before she gets up."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 jump thirdchoice
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ F "It’s gonna be great."
 
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 jump thirdchoice
@@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ M "And we definitely won’t be safe after nightfall."
 F "Awww... Yeah, let’s keep going."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "I start a slow jog again and pick up the pace once I hear her following along."
@@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ M "Maybe... depends on what you actually signed us up for."
 
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "I consider how Farelie really did on all the obstacles today."
@@ -831,8 +831,12 @@ stop music fadeout 2.5
 pause .5
 
 "{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
+window auto hide
 pause .5
 
+scene evening with Dissolve(2)
+pause 1
+
 jump endingcheck
 
 label going:
@@ -939,7 +943,7 @@ M "Don’t worry, now’s the time for relaxing."
 M "A nice shower, a nice dinner..."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "I can hear her murmur in approval. After a few minutes, the only sign she’s alive is her slight breathing."
@@ -959,6 +963,10 @@ stop music fadeout 3
 pause .5
 
 "{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+
+scene evening with Dissolve(2)
 pause 1
 
 jump endingcheck
@@ -982,6 +990,10 @@ pause .5
 "I drift off to sleep, thinking about what all transpired today."
 
 "If all our training sessions will be like this one, I can’t see us being ready for the run."
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+
+scene black with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "I wake up groggily, silencing the alarm on my phone."
@@ -1026,8 +1038,15 @@ F "About that..."
 "Uh oh."
 
 F "I really don’t think I’m cut out for this hard exercise thing..."
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+
+play music 'audio/slug coomers.ogg'
+scene wakemeup with Dissolve(2)
+pause 1
 
 F "I’m going to drop from the Spartan Run."
+pause .5
 
 M "Oh."
 pause .5
@@ -1075,21 +1094,23 @@ pause .5
 pause .5
 
 F "Look, I’m just..."
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+scene wakemeupinside with Dissolve(1)
+pause 1
 
 "She sighs, screwing her eyes shut."
 
 F "Just leave me alone for a while, please."
 
 F "I’m going back to bed."
-pause .5
-
-"She returns to her room in a huff, leaving me all alone in the tiny offsite-house."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
+scene saaavemeee with Dissolve(1)
+pause 2
 
-play music 'audio/slug coomers.ogg'
-scene wakemeup with Dissolve(2)
-pause 1
+"She returns to her room in a huff, leaving me all alone in the tiny offsite-house."
+pause .5
 
 "I shift awkwardly, unsure what the appropriate action to do is."
 
@@ -1104,11 +1125,6 @@ pause .5
 
 "Maybe if I said this, or that, she’d still be up. Maybe we’d be laughing right now."
 
-window auto hide
-pause .5
-scene wakemeupinside with Dissolve(1)
-pause 1
-
 "I end up spending my last full day off for another several months reading to myself and watching television."
 
 "But no matter what I tried to watch, the couch under my body felt uncomfortable."
@@ -1116,14 +1132,13 @@ pause 1
 "The water I drank tasted foul, and the food I eat sits in my stomach like a stone."
 
 "Worst of all, I feel pangs of guilt every time I look over to her door, hoping it to be open..."
+pause .5
 
 "{cps=*1}...{/cps}"
+pause .5
 
 "{cps=*1}...{/cps}but seeing it still locked shut."
-window auto hide
-pause .5
-scene saaavemeee with Dissolve(1)
-pause 2
+pause 1
 
 "Maybe she doesn’t actually like me alotl."
 window auto hide
@@ -1184,12 +1199,20 @@ pause .5
 pause .5
 
 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+scene black with Dissolve(1)
+pause .5
+
 play ambient 'audio/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 2
 pause 1
 
 "This is it."
 
 "The day of the Spartan Run."
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "I move the shifter to park, having made sure that my metal steed is correctly positioned in the space."
@@ -1247,7 +1270,7 @@ pause 1
 "A momentary pause. Soon enough I see Farelie climb over the top."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with dissolve
+scene morning with dissolve
 pause .5
 
 "Having made sure she’s still in shape to continue, we pick back up and continue running."
@@ -1412,7 +1435,7 @@ pause .5
 "When we arrive home, we drag ourselves inside and rest a bit longer on the couch."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene evening with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "Farelie took a shower first, and true to her word she crashed in her bed before I even entered the bathroom to take mine."
@@ -1424,12 +1447,20 @@ stop music fadeout 3
 pause .5
 
 "{cps=*.1}... {/cps}"
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+scene black with Dissolve(1)
+pause .5
 play ambient 'audio/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 2
 pause 1
 
 "This is it."
 
 "The day of the Spartan Run."
+window auto hide
+pause .5
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
+pause .5
 
 "I move the shifter to park, having made sure that my metal steed is correctly positioned in the space."
 pause .5
@@ -1530,7 +1561,7 @@ M "Wanna jump together?"
 "I count down from three and-"
 window auto hide
 pause .25
-scene black with dissolve
+scene morning with dissolve
 pause .5
 
 "I can’t contain my laugh as I yank Farelie with me on ‘two’, her shriek morphing into laughs as well when we hit the cushion together."
@@ -1578,7 +1609,7 @@ if lewd:
     scene youknowwhatyouaredoing with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 else:
-    scene black with dissolve
+    scene morning with dissolve
 
 pause .5
 "Not at all."
@@ -1646,7 +1677,7 @@ F "Me too, me too."
 "I upend the rest of the bottle over my exhausted girlfriend, something between a surprised squeal and relaxed coo coming out of her mouth."
 window auto hide
 pause .5
-scene black with Dissolve(1)
+scene morning with Dissolve(1)
 pause .5
 
 "I finally feel my breathing even out when another event organizer swings by us, handing out simple looking coins to everyone."
@@ -1804,10 +1835,18 @@ if lewd:
     scene wewlad with Dissolve(2)
     pause
     scene black with Dissolve(2)
+    pause .5
+    show daend with Dissolve(1)
+    pause
+    hide daend with Dissolve(1)
     pause 1
     jump playAgain
 
 else:
+    show daend with Dissolve(1)
+    pause
+    hide daend with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 1
     jump playAgain
 
 

log.txt

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Sat Mar  5 03:55:46 2022
+Sat Mar  5 12:59:47 2022
 Windows-10-10.0.19041
 Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
  
@@ -6,16 +6,17 @@ Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
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