Story revision and all CGs added

game/script.rpy

@@ -413,28 +413,42 @@ M "Alright, Farelie. That’s good enough."
 F "Um…"
 
 "I follow her eyes, and see the long section of ladder she would need to climb back down."
-M "Here."
 
-"I walk forward, holding my arms out."
+M "We can take a break, use the mat to relax."
 
-"She blinks, not understanding."
+"Farelie nods and slowly reverses herself backwards down the ladder."
 
-M "I’ll catch you."
+"At the bottom she wobbles to the protective mat at the base."
 
-"After a moment of thought, she slides between the rungs and hops down."
+"I should’ve realized that she’d essentially be doing twice the work by going backwards too."
 
-"I struggle to keep upright as her form impacts my arms."
+"I walk over, and can see the familiar results of strenuous exercise."
+scene shedidit
 
-"Luckily, I still stand upright."
-scene princesscarry
+"A heaving chest, ragged breath."
 
-"Weary they may be, my arms have yet to fail me"
+F "I… just… sit… a while…"
 
-"My self-congratulation is cut short by the sudden sound of giggling."
+M "Take all the time you need."
 
-"I look down at Farelie, still in my embrace."
+"I sit down next to her on the mat."
+
+"The silence is interrupted by a breathless giggle from Farelie."
+
+M "Hm?"
+
+F "I’m tired, but…" 
+
+F "That was fun…"
+
+"I sit up and look back at her."
+
+"The oscillating of her gills is starting to slow down as she catches her breath."
+
+M "You good to go?"
+
+"I get a simple nod from her before she gets up."
 
-F "You can let me down now."
 scene black with dissolve
 
 jump thirdchoice
@@ -462,18 +476,25 @@ M "We can take a breather after you’re done."
 
 "I look up and wave to her. She sees me, and returns the favor with a smile."
 
-"She jumps off, though with less grace than her normal, and lands on the mat."
-scene shedidit
+"She jumps off, though with less grace than the norm."
 
-"I walk over, and can see the familiar results of strenuous exercise."
+"I react quickly as her angle is off, falling towards me."
 
-"A heaving chest, ragged breath."
+"My arms threaten to come out their sockets as she lands on them."
+scene princesscarry
 
-F "I… just… sit… a while…"
+"Luckily, I still stand upright."
 
-M "Take all the time you need."
+"Weary they may be, my arms have yet to fail me"
+
+"My self-congratulation is cut short by the sudden sound of giggling."
+
+"I look down at Farelie, still in my embrace."
+
+F "You can let me down now."
+
+"I’m careful to set her back on her feet."
 
-"I sit down next to her on the mat."
 
 "The silence is interrupted by a breathless giggle from Farelie."
 
@@ -1346,7 +1367,7 @@ label bonusend:
 
 "... for me."
 if lewd:
-    scene wewlad
+    scene wewlad2
 else:
     scene black
 
@@ -1398,4 +1419,9 @@ F "Maybe."
 F "Maybe we can arm wrestle for it."
 
 "..."
+if lewd:
+    scene wewlad2
+    "The end"
+else:
+    "The end"
 return