From 3478d6e67ff0ce09c0cd9b1ea5b193f097e7ee31 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Map Date: Wed, 21 Jun 2023 03:28:06 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Fix some sentence errors throughout the chapters --- game/script/1-Anons-Cousin-goes-to-CalArts.rpy | 2 +- game/script/2-Second-Time's-the-Charm.rpy | 2 +- game/script/3-Canvas-of-Opportunity.rpy | 2 +- 3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/1-Anons-Cousin-goes-to-CalArts.rpy b/game/script/1-Anons-Cousin-goes-to-CalArts.rpy index 94d1a0a..8f3e271 100644 --- a/game/script/1-Anons-Cousin-goes-to-CalArts.rpy +++ b/game/script/1-Anons-Cousin-goes-to-CalArts.rpy @@ -1917,7 +1917,7 @@ label chapter_1: hide solly pause 0.5 - "With a violently loud blow of his whistle the couch also takes his position to show the proper technique." + "With a violently loud blow of his whistle the coach also takes his position to show the proper technique." show inco concerned diff --git a/game/script/2-Second-Time's-the-Charm.rpy b/game/script/2-Second-Time's-the-Charm.rpy index d6c831e..d28f213 100644 --- a/game/script/2-Second-Time's-the-Charm.rpy +++ b/game/script/2-Second-Time's-the-Charm.rpy @@ -2217,7 +2217,7 @@ label chapter_2: show inco shocked at setx(0.6), nudgeup() - "The girl lets out a laugh as lays an arm around my shoulder, her smile growing wider" + "The girl lets out a laugh as she lays an arm around my shoulder, her smile growing wider." "Heat creeps along my face as her muzzle nears my ear, especially when a puff of hot air blows by the lobe." pause 0.5 diff --git a/game/script/3-Canvas-of-Opportunity.rpy b/game/script/3-Canvas-of-Opportunity.rpy index 523a6ec..0702688 100644 --- a/game/script/3-Canvas-of-Opportunity.rpy +++ b/game/script/3-Canvas-of-Opportunity.rpy @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ label chapter_3: "{i}'You are allowed to borrow one lighting tool, and must take the shot on school premises.'{/i}" - "{i}'And I swear, I've handed out this assignment for years now;if one more student just takes a picture of the hallway outside the classroom I'm going to personally throw them over the railing.'{/i}" + "{i}'And I swear, I've handed out this assignment for years now; if one more student just takes a picture of the hallway outside the classroom I'm going to personally throw them over the railing.'{/i}" "{i}'Be original, please.'{/i}"