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"I got an open can of soda, the lights are out, and I can hear RAYmba bumping around his box."
"This is the life."
pause .5
"Im about to reply to some guy claiming that he is most definitely angered in the posterior, but my phone buzzes, throwing off my answer."
"Its a text from Fang."
pause .5
"Fang: heyyyyyyy you got any plans later today?"
show anonphone with easeinbottom
pause .5
"Anon: who do you take me for"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} heyyyyyyy you got any plans later today?"
pause .5
"Anon: why do you ask?"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} who do you take me for"
pause .5
"Fang: ive shown you some songs from my favorite band right?"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} why do you ask?"
pause .5
"Fang: Bigly Die?"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} ive shown you some songs from my favorite band right?"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} Bigly Die?"
pause .5
"I vaguely recall Fangs phone bugging out occasionally, was that supposed to be music?"
"Anon: think so yeah"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} think so yeah"
pause .5
"Fang: theyre coming into town for tonight only!!!!!!!"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} theyre coming into town for tonight only!!!!!!!"
pause .5
"Anon: cool, you plan on buying a ticket?"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} cool, you plan on buying a ticket?"
pause .5
"Fang: no need >:)))))"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} no need >:)))))"
"Fang: i won them in a raffle!"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} i won them in a raffle!"
pause .5
"Anon: now when you say them..."
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} now when you say them..."
pause .5
"Fang: of course i want you to go dork"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} of course i want you to go dork"
pause .5
"Anon: oh. cool."
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} oh. cool."
"Anon: wait"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} wait"
pause .5
"Fang: ill come pick you up at six tonight, dont forget!"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} ill come pick you up at six tonight, dont forget!"
pause .5
"Anon: alright, see you then"
"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} alright, see you then"
pause .5
hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
pause .5
"My hand falls to my side, dropping the phone onto the mattress."
"A concert…"
"A concert{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"On the one hand, I get to spend time with Fang doing something they love."
"On the other, concert."
pause .5
"Who am I kidding, of course Im going."
"I should go run and buy some earplugs just in case…"
stop music fadeout 1.0
stop music fadeout 4
"I should go run and buy some earplugs just in case{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"..."
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
play music 'audio/OST/protestra_punk.ogg' fadein 3
scene skinrow
show anon neutral flip at aright
with fade
play music 'audio/OST/protestra_punk.ogg' fadein 1.0
with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"As I wait in front of my building for Fang I cant help but feel a bit nervous."
@ -79,33 +107,42 @@ label chapter_12B:
"The closest was Fang and the band at Moes place."
"That counts, right?"
pause .5
"Before I can continue that thought, I spot the NasCar speeding towards me."
"I feel myself cringe a bit for even thinking of that name."
pause .5
"I move to the back before the car comes to a complete stop and open the door, Fang sitting on the other side."
F "Get in, dweeb."
pause .5
"I can tell Naser is a bit nervous driving in this part of town with how hes constantly looking around the car."
pause .5
scene nascar day with dissolve
pause .5
scene nascar day
"The door barely shuts when he speeds away from my apartment building and back towards civilization."
pause .5
Nas "So uh, Anon"
Nas "So uh, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Yeah?"
pause .5
Nas "Thats where you live?"
"Essentially asking are you that poor."
"Essentially asking \"are you that poor\"."
A "Nah, I just sleep there, keep all my stuff there, and hang out there most of the time."
"That elicited a laugh from Fang and a confused look from Naser."
"Cant win them all I guess."
pause .5
A "So this band-"
@ -114,18 +151,20 @@ label chapter_12B:
A "Bigly Die. Where are they playing at?"
F "Some club on the other side of town called the Lava Lamp."
pause .5
"Cant say Ive really been to a club either."
A "...And what genre is their music exactly?"
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And what genre is their music exactly?"
F "Theyre a Post-Extreme Neo-Indie Experimental Hardcore-Mathcore-Grindcore Industrial Heavy Punk Metal band."
"...What."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What."
F "With an emphasis on creative expression and a down-to-earth worldview that just really speaks to me."
F "Its the kind of stuff I wish we could have played in our band but Trish never thought it was marketable enough."
pause .5
A "English?"
@ -136,6 +175,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
F "Oh, fuck both of you."
"Fang pouts, or as they put it, was in silent protest against the world."
pause .5
"Really, the way Fang crossed their arms and pointedly looked away from the two of us made me chuckle at the cute angry act."
@ -146,169 +186,281 @@ label chapter_12B:
F "Theyre pretty underground, honestly."
"Fang passes my ticket over so I can see."
pause .5
"Oh wow."
"The venue can hold double what Moes could."
"...Does that make it a big venue? Trish said Moes was small."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Does that make it a big venue? Trish said Moes was small."
F "The place shouldnt be too packed."
F "I know you dont exactly like crowds, Anon."
pause .5
"Awww, she does care."
pause 1
"When we get there Naser stops me before I get out."
Nas "You need earplugs bro?"
A "Oh, I brought my own actually, but thanks."
pause .5
stop music fadeout 5
F "Bunch of pansies. Both of you."
scene nightclub
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang neutral at scenter
with fade
"Naser smiles again and drives off, leaving Fang and I in front of the building."
pause .5
play ambient 'audio/effects/city'
scene nightclub
show fang neutral:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.3
with Fade(1, 0, 1)
pause .5
"Naser smiles again and drives off, leaving Fang and I in front of the building."
"The place is a warehouse shed three stories tall, with graffiti staining nearly every inch of it."
"Ive always wondered how people get up there."
pause .5
# B: no muffled bass SFX available?
"Already I can hear the bass rattling my eardrums."
play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg' fadein 1.0
pause .5
"A man by the entrance checks our tickets and lets us pass."
A "This place must be pretty nice if they have to use a bouncer."
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
F "Oh yeah, the band makes plenty. They can afford some neat stuff like that."
"Painted signs in the lobby point to a stairwell leading down into the basement."
pause .5
"The temperature rises a good twenty degrees on the trip down."
pause .5
scene concertlobby
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang happy flip at sright
with fade
show fang neutral:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.3
with Fade(1, 0, 1)
pause .5
A "Jeez, do they have a furnace going down here?"
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95
show fang happy flip with dissolve
F "Concerts are usually hot, Anon."
F "Didnt I tell you to bring a water bottle or something?"
pause .5
A "No?"
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Oops."
pause .5
F "Well, there was a water fountain back up in the lobby. Not sure if you want to actually drink from it though unless you have a lead stomach lining."
pause .5
A "Ill keep that in mind."
pause .5
"The musics starting to sound like a gaggle of pissed-off cats being dropped into lawnmower blades, so I pop in the earplugs I got earlier."
"I was starting to hear animalistic chanting combined with the arrhythmic bashing of drums and what could only be described as the unholy fusion of squealing feedback and an unmaintained generator running on overdrive."
show fang happy flip with dissolve
"Fang rolls their eyes and gestures to the open door to the concert hall."
F "The preshows almost done, we got here just in time."
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause.5
"As soon as we open the doors, were almost blown back by the wall of sound that blasts past us."
play music 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.0
pause .5
scene biglydie
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang happy at sright
show fang happy flip:
yalign -0.65 xalign 0.8
show anon neutral:
yalign -0.55 xalign 0.2
with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"The earplugs were not helping. At all."
"Im pretty sure I just went deaf."
pause .5
"There are about a hundred to a hundred fifty of the concert-goers, give or take."
"Most of them are thronging the stage while a few hang back and nurse their beers, waiting for the show to start."
pause .5
unknown "THANK YOU MOTHERFUCKERS FOR BEING HERE TONIGHT!"
show anon:
easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.1
show fang very happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
"The crowd responds with a collective roar of approval, Fang adding her voice to the cacophonic chorus."
unknown "It was an honor to open for the main show tonight, and theyre in for the gig of their lives judging by how brutal you guys were in the pit!"
"Another roar rips from the audience at the bare-faced flattery, probably the leftover adrenaline in their systems."
unknown "Alright… Its time. Are you guys ready?"
show dimmer_light behind anon, fang:
alpha 0
linear 2 alpha 1
unknown "Alright{cps=*.1}...{/cps} its time. Are you guys ready?"
"The crowd is practically foaming at the mouth as they scream unintelligibly yet again."
unknown "Come on, is that all you fucking got?! ARE YOU FUCKING READY?!"
"I thought that they couldnt possibly have been more ready, but they somehow manage to scream even louder."
show fang:
easein_elastic 1 xalign 0.7
show anon:
pause .1
easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.0
with vpunch
"{w=.5} I thought that they couldnt possibly have been more ready, but they somehow manage to scream even louder."
"I think I even saw some guy get punched as the person next to him thrust his fist upward while he yelled."
unknown "Now thats what I like to hear. Lets welcome… BIGLY DIE!"
unknown "Now thats what I like to hear. Lets welcome{cps=*.1}...{/cps} BIGLY DIE!"
stop music fadeout 4
show dimmer_darker behind anon, fang:
alpha 0
linear 1 alpha 1
show fang:
easein_cubic 0.25 yalign -0.55
easeout_cubic 0.5 yalign -0.65
repeat
"The crowd goes absolutely nuclear, people jumping up and down screaming their heads off as the band walks up onto the stage."
"Without another word they launch right into their opening song."
play music 'audio/OST/Many Such Cases of Being So True.ogg' fadein 1.0
# B: tentatively replaced Many Such Cases since by this point that track is associated with bad stuff happening
play music 'audio/OST/its_the_original_you_didnt_ask_for.ogg' fadein 0.5
with hpunch
pause 1
"A flurry of instruments meet my ears in something vaguely resembling music."
show anon grin with dissolve
"I still dont quite understand the appeal, but the energy of the moment is getting to me."
pause .5
scene black with dissolve
pause .5
"Before I know it Im jumping and fist swinging along with everyone else."
scene black with fade
pause .5
"Fang sees me join in and their beaming smile intensifies."
"Soon enough Im elbow deep in the pit screaming as wildly as the crowd."
stop music
"...Then a stray elbow clocks me out early."
"..."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Then a stray elbow clocks me out early."
pause .5
"Urgh…"
stop music fadeout 6
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
scene black with Fade(0.1, 1, 3, color="#fff")
pause 1
"Guh… Fuck piss cunt shit…"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"Urgh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"Guh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} fuck piss cunt shit{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 1
unknown "How the fuck are you so heavy?"
"Wha…?"
"Wha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
pause .5
"Someones dragging me?"
pause .5
F "Oh, youre back!"
"Fang lets me down onto my back, and I sit up straight."
scene concertlobby with fade
show fang happy at scenter
play music 'audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg' fadein 1.0
pause .5
play music 'audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg' fadein 2
scene concertlobby
show fang neutral:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
with Dissolve(2)
pause .5
"Were back in the lobby of the building, only its a lot quieter than when we first arrived."
show anon neutral flip at sright
pause .5
show anon sad flip:
yalign -0.5 xalign 0.7
show anon:
easein_cubic 1.5 yalign 0.1
with Dissolve(1)
"A dull pain rings through my head."
pause .5
F "Are you alright?"
pause .5
A "What happened?"
F "No idea, after the show I just found you laying on the ground."
F "Youre pretty lucky no one jumped on you. Everyones got good ole steel toes."
pause .5
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
A "I was out the rest of the show?"
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
F "Thats the concert experience, right?"
F "Isnt it great?"
pause .5
A "It… certainly is a different experience, yeah."
show anon shrug flip with dissolve
A "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps} certainly is a different experience, yeah."
A "Argh, my head…"
show anon:
easein_back 1 xalign 0.75
show anon sad flip with dissolve
A "Argh, my head{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
F "Yeah, youre gonna want a rag or something."
F "Your lips pretty busted."
pause .5
"I feel around my face, and sure enough a new pulse of pain shakes me."
@ -316,43 +468,69 @@ label chapter_12B:
A "Do you got one?"
F "No… Sorry…"
show fang sad with dissolve
F "No{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sorry{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"I bunch up the front of my shirt and hold it to my mouth."
show fang considering with dissolve
F "Naser always keeps a first-aid kit in his trunk, hell be here in ten or so minutes."
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
F "Youll look like ass at school for a few days but it cant be that much of a change."
"Fang laughs at their own joke and I try to join in before my splitting headache kicks in."
pause .5
F "Can you get up or do I have to drag you all the way out the door?"
pause .5
show fang:
ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
pause 1
show fang:
ease_back 1.5 xalign -0.1
show anon:
ease_back 1.5 xalign 0.55
show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(1)
"My legs are a bit wobbly but I manage to stand up with some assistance from Fang."
scene nightclub with fade
show anon neutral at acenter
show fang happy flip at sright
"They lead me out the front of the building and we sit on the curb to wait for Naser."
pause .5
scene nightclub
show fang neutral flip:
yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
show anon neutral flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.7
with Fade(1, 0, 1)
pause .5
"They lead me out the front of the building and we sit on the curb to wait for Naser."
pause .5
show fang sad with dissolve
F "You doing okay? The bleeding stopped."
A "I feel like my heads about to explode but Ill be fine."
A "Better than last time this happened at least."
show fang neutral with dissolve
"Fang reaches into their pocket and retrieves their lighter and pack of cigarettes."
F "...You want a smoke?"
F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You want a smoke?"
A "You know me too well."
"I take them from Fangs hand and light my own cigarette for once."
pause .5
"Taking my first draw and its almost enough to ignore my migraine."
show fang happy with dissolve
F "You seem to really like those."
A "Yeah"
A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
F "You should get around to scraping enough pennies to get your own sometime."
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A "Thats the plan!"
"We chuckle, and Fang shifts closer to me, hugging my arm."
show fang:
ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
pause .5
show fang happy flip with dissolve
pause .5
"We chuckle, and Fang shifts closer to me, hugging my arm."
pause .5
stop music fadeout 4
F "Dweeb."
scene black with fade
stop music fadeout 1.0
"..."
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 1
return