diff --git a/game/audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg b/game/audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..42f682e
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diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy
index c2c44eb..5760f32 100644
--- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy
+++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy
@@ -14,6 +14,9 @@ transform scloserleft:
 
 label chapter_1:
     #First Day of School
+    stop music fadeout 2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 2
+
     I "January sixth."
 
     I "Year 201M2020 BC."
@@ -21,6 +24,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "Volcaldera Bluffs."
 
     I "Weather conditions;{w=0.5} cold as balls."
+    pause .5
 
     I "It’s my first time living close to water."
 
@@ -31,10 +35,11 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "The heavy fog makes navigating to my new school more difficult as I fail to see anything five feet in front of me."
 
     I "Like a runt of a tree planted in the sidewalk that I swerve to avoid."
+    pause .5
 
     I "It’s my first time having to walk to school too."
 
-    I "My new apartment is in an awkward spot.{w=0.5} Opposite side of town,{w=0.3} yet no school or public bus to take me from there."
+    I "My new apartment is in an awkward spot.{w=0.5} Opposite side of town,{w=0.4} yet no school or public bus to take me from there."
 
     I "It’s my first day at a new school."
 
@@ -47,6 +52,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "But this{cps=*0.05}...{/cps}"
 
     I "I should take my mind off of it."
+    pause .5
 
     I "I whip out my phone,{w=0.3} and consider the best way to make people upset online."
 
@@ -60,14 +66,14 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "The thread goes 404 right as I'm ready to post my well thought-out reply."
 
-    I "Better hide my phone before someone sees fit to take it from me,{w=0.5} the only human around town.{w=0.4} I think."
+    I "Better hide my phone before someone sees fit to take it from me,{w=0.4} the only human around town.{w=0.4} I think."
+    window hide
 
-    play music 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadeout 1.0 fadein 1.0
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    pause .5
 
-    I "It’s the sounds that reach me first.{w} The chatter of people milling about."
-
-    show rosaSilo at scenter
-    show stellaSilo at nright
+    I "It’s the sounds that reach me first.{w=.5} The chatter of people milling about."
+    pause .5
 
     unknown "Bro"
 
@@ -104,6 +110,9 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "I move to the entrance,{w=0.3} only to see all of the steps occupied by students."
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 4
+    play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdLoop.ogg' fadein 4
+
     scene stairs at Pan((6000, 1200),(553, 169), 30.0) with fade
 
     I "Their eyes turn to me.{w=0.4} Expressions of confusion and contemplation.{w=1} I can feel their judging stares,{w=0.3} the same that had haunted me for four months previous."
@@ -135,10 +144,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     window hide
     show iris:
       xalign 0.99 yalign 0.75
-    stop music fadeout 2.0
-    with Dissolve(2.0)
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 3
+    with Dissolve(3)
 
-    pause 1.0
+    pause .5
 
     I "?"
 
@@ -151,12 +160,14 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "She does differ from the other technicolor students though{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     I "...in the worst way possible."
+    pause .5
 
     I "O-oh yeah.{w=0.5} She's staring at me{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     I "...with that look.{w=0.6} {cps=*0.4}Fucking hell.{/cps}"
 
     I "Has she never seen a human in her life?"
+    pause .5
 
     I "{cps=*0.4}I fucking hate that look.{/cps}"
 
@@ -169,6 +180,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "She’s probably no better than me,{w=0.3} miss \"my snout is so big I can land a plane on it\"."
 
     I "Go back to your friends."
+    pause .5
 
     scene fangtalkingwithtrish with Dissolve(1)
 
@@ -181,6 +193,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 1
 
     I "I notice that all this time my knees were weak and my arms were heavy."
+    pause .5
 
     I "My feet carry me over the soggy grass as I look for somewhere else to be."
 
@@ -224,11 +237,11 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "It took a day for me to want to change schools,{w=0.5} and three weeks to make it happen."
 
-    I "And this is my life now for the next year.{w=0.8} I think back to my old man’s ultimatum."
+    I "And this is my life now for the next year.{w=0.7} I think back to my old man’s ultimatum."
 
     I "{i}Once the lease is done,{w=0.4} Anon,{w=0.4} either college or the service.{/i}"
 
-    I "{i}{cps=*0.3}I don’t care which.{/cps}{/i}"
+    I "{i}{cps=*0.35}I don’t care which.{/cps}{/i}"
 
     pause 1
 
@@ -239,20 +252,26 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     unknown "{cps=*0.5}Would you happen to be Anon?{/cps}" #Naomi
 
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    I "I look up.{w=.5} The bench broke down."
+
+    show naomi silo shocked:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.05
+    show naser silo:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.99
+    with None
     play sound "audio/effects/WoodSnap.ogg"
     hide anon with Dissolve(0.2)
-    show naomi silo shocked
     with vpunch
 
-    I "I look up.{w} The bench broke down."
     pause .7
 
     I "I lay on the ground,{w=0.4} ass hurt from hitting jagged concrete and splintered wood."
 
     I "Thank god for jeans."
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 0.5
-    pause 0.5
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+    pause .5
 
     #TODO: does the audio work with the new ambience?
     scene pathetic at Pan((0, 1031), (0, 0), 10.0) with dissolve
@@ -282,7 +301,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "The hand tightens around my own and pulls roughly."
 
-    #Documentation on MoveTransition : https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/wiki/Tips#MoveTransition
+    # Documentation on MoveTransition : https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/wiki/Tips#MoveTransition
     show naser neutral flip at nmidright with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
 
     show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
@@ -298,19 +317,21 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "You're Anon,{w=0.4} yeah?"
 
+    show naomi explanatory
     unknown "I'm glad we found you!"
-    pause .5
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Who are you guys?{w=0.4} Why do you know my name?"
 
     show anon neutral flip at acenter behind naser with dissolve
 
     unknown "Where are my manners!{w=0.6}{nw}"
+    show naomi:
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
+        ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
     N "Where are my manners!{fast} My name is Naomi,{w=0.4} student council president and your guide.{w=0.6} It’s my sincere pleasure to make your acquaintance Anon!"
-
-    show naomi neutral at sleft
-    hide naomiSilo
-    with dissolve
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     Nas "We’re your welcoming committee."
 
@@ -324,16 +345,22 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "I had this prepared just for you!"
 
-    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    show anon neutral flip 
+    show naomi neutral
+    with dissolve
+    pause .25
+
     show naomi neutral at scloserleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
-    show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
 
     I "The orange one,{w=0.3} Naomi,{w=0.3} hands me a brochure."
+
+    show naomi neutral at sleft with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
     pause 0.5
 
     I "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.5} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}"
 
     I "The title alone makes me gag.{w=0.7} The pink one,{w=0.3} Naomi,{w=0.3} looks at me expectantly."
+    pause .5
 
     I "The brochure is full of the typical trivialities."
 
@@ -342,59 +369,69 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "None of it matters."
 
     show naser:
-        easein_quad 0.7 xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
-    pause .7
+        easein_quad 0.7 xalign 1.0
+    pause .5
     show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     Nas "Babe,{w=0.4} I’ve got some things to take care of."
 
     I "Naser looks back to the school entrance.{w=0.5} I follow his eyes and see some people trying to lift a large speaker up the stairs of the school."
 
-    show naomi sad
-
-    N "O-oh."
+    show naomi sad behind naser with Dissolve(.25)
+    N "O{w=.1}-oh."
 
     N "I’ll see you at lunch,{w=0.4} right Naser?"
+    pause .5
 
     I "She looks dejected."
+    pause .25
 
-    show naser happy flip
-
+    show naser happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "*chuckles*{w=0.4} Of course."
 
     show anon at aright
-    show naser happy flip:
+    show naser:
         xalign 0.05 yalign 0.1
     with MoveTransition(0.75, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
+    pause .25
 
     show naomi:
-        easein 0.5 xalign 0.02
+        easein_back 0.6 xalign 0.02 yalign 0.075
+    show naser:
+        easein_back 0.8 xalign 0.015 yalign 0.035
+    pause .5
 
     I "Naser pulls her into a hug and nudges his muzzle against hers.{w=0.6} Is that how dinos kiss?"
-    pause .7
 
-    hide naser with Dissolve(0.75)
+    show naomi:
+        easein 0.5 yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
+    show naser:
+        easein 0.7 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
+    pause 1
+
+    show naser neutral behind naomi with Dissolve(.25)
+    show naser:
+        easeout 1 xalign 1.9
+    pause .4
+    hide naser with dissolve
 
     show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
-
     I "He leaves,{w=0.3} running quickly to assist with the heavy sound equipment."
 
     pause 1
 
     N "ahem"
 
+    show anon neutral flip 
     show naomi neutral
-    show anon neutral flip
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    I "I turn back to Naomi.{w=0.6} She smiles again,{w=0.4} though there is a plasticity to it."
+    I "I turn back to Naomi.{w=0.5} She smiles again,{w=0.4} though there is a plasticity to it."
 
     show naomi explanatory
-
     N "So,{w=.3} Anon,{w=0.5} why did you transfer here?"
-
-    show naomi neutral
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     I "The question catches me off guard."
 
@@ -408,44 +445,40 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    A "Uh...{w=0.4} I..."
-
-    show naomi considering with dissolve
+    A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
+    show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
     N "You uh,{w=0.4} don’t have to answer if you don’t want to."
-
-    show naomi neutral with dissolve
-
-    I "I focus my attention on the brochure out of embarrassment."
     pause .5
 
-    I "Lunch!{w=.4} Right!{w=.5} I’m getting kinda hungry!{w=.4} What about something to eat?"
+    I "I focus my attention on the brochure out of embarrassment."
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+
+    I "Lunch!{w=.4} Right!{w=.5} I’m getting kinda hungry!{w=.6} What about something to eat?"
 
     I "Yadda yadda,{w=.3} herbivore,{w=.3} vegan,{w=.3} tofu,{w=.45} {cps=*0.6}disgusting{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     I "Wait,{w=0.3} hold on{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     I "Carnivore line,{w=.4} Filet Mignon-{w=.6} what the fuck is wrong with this school?!"
-    pause .6
+    pause .5
 
     A "Is there a soup kitchen or something around here?"
 
-    show naomi sad with dissolve
+    show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25)
 
     N "Oh dear{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.7}{nw}"
-
     show naomi explanatory
-
     N "Oh dear...{fast} Anon,{w=.3} are you in need of financial assistance?"
-
-    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+    show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     A "I can figure things out on my own,{w=.4} don’t worry too much about it."
 
     show naomi:
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
-
     N "Oh,{w=.3} the school here has programs to help it’s less fortunate students!"
 
     show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -456,7 +489,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "The absolute last thing I want to be doing is asking for handouts{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "{cps=*0.3}Actually,{w=.4} I-{/cps}{w=0.2}{nw}"
+    A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
 
     show naomi:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.7
@@ -474,30 +507,35 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "..."
     pause 0.5
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickSuperPunch.ogg'
-    show dimmer_darker behind anon, naomi with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff")
 
+    show dimmer_darker behind anon, naomi with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff")
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
     I "{cps=*0.5}AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA{/cps}" with vpunch
     pause .5
 
     I "ALERT"
+    pause .25
 
     I "ALERT"
+    pause .25
 
     I "DEFCON LEVEL ONE!{w=0.5} DEFCON LEVEL ONE!"
 
     I "FEMALE MAKING PHYSICAL CONTACT"
 
     I "DO NOT PANIC"
+    pause .25
 
     I "DO NOT PANIC"
     pause .5
 
     I "GET A GRIP ON THE SITUATION"
+    pause .5
 
     I "THIS IS NAOMI."
 
-    I "SHE’S TAKING ME SOMEWHERE BY THE HAND{w=0.25} {size=-5}HAND{/size}{w=0.25} {size=-10}HAND{/size}{w=0.25} {size=-15}HAND{/size}"
+    I "SHE’S TAKING ME SOMEWHERE BY THE HAND{w=0.15} {size=-5}HAND{/size}{w=0.15} {size=-10}HAND{/size}{w=0.15} {size=-15}HAND{/size}"
+    pause .5
 
     I "SHE ALREADY HAS A BOYFRIEND DOESN’T SHE?"
 
@@ -512,6 +550,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1
     hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
+    pause .25
 
     I "Okay,{w=.3} okay.{w=.5} Just stay silent and don’t make a mess of things."
 
@@ -568,7 +607,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     Sp "Tell him to come in later,{w=0.4} I’m dealing with another student."
     pause .65
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
     unknown "-THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang
 
     show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(1)
@@ -593,8 +632,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "And blows my eardrums out with a squeal capable of shattering glass."
 
-    show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    show anon:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.45
 
+    show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     N "We share first period and english together!{w=.6} Come on,{w=.3} I’ll introduce you to the class and you’ll be able to make all sorts of new friends!"
 
     show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -605,6 +646,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     scene black with fade
 
     # SCENE UPDATED
+    # START OF OLD SCENE
     # show naomi explanatory
 
     # N "How about I show you the campus,{w=0.3} Anon?{w=0.6} We wouldn’t want you getting lost on your first day, now would we?"
@@ -645,6 +687,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     # show naomi neutral
     # # play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' # already playing, was it supposed to be silent for a bit here?
     # scene black with fade
+    # END OF OLD SCENE
 
     I "I follow after her to a classroom on the 2nd floor.{w=0.5} The seats were being filled with students.{w=0.5} I take one near the front,{w=0.3} knowing I’ll have to introduce myself.{w=0.5} I’ll probably be doing that for all my classes."
 
@@ -662,10 +705,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "The artificial ring of a bell blares from a speaker on the wall.{w=0.5} With it everyone waits as the teacher finally enters the room and shuts the door."
 
-    show jinflip at sleft with dissolve
+    show jinflip at sleft with Dissolve(1)
 
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Ohayo gozaimasu curassu.{w=0.7} Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai{/cps}"
-    pause 0.6
+    pause 0.5
 
     I "What"
 
@@ -675,14 +718,16 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "Naomi coughs and makes a subtle nod up."
 
     stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg'
-    pause 0.8
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 1
+    pause 0.75
 
     I "OH!"
-    pause 0.6
+    pause 0.5
+
 
-    play ambient1 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' volume 0.8 fadein 20
     I "I stand from my seat and face the class.{w=0.5} Once again all eyes on me and the tightness in my chest returns.{w} I inhale deep,{w=0.3} willing my erratic heart to slow."
+    
+    play ambient1 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' volume 0.8 fadein 20
 
     show anon neutral flip at acenter
     show jinflip behind anon:
@@ -708,7 +753,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "{cps=*0.5}What was your old school like?{/cps}"
 
-    play music 'audio/effects/hungryBeast.ogg' fadein 10
+    play music 'audio/effects/hungryBeast.ogg' fadein 10 volume 0.3
 
     show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(1)
 
@@ -742,17 +787,17 @@ label chapter_1:
     Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Puriizu retaano tsu yo shiito,{w=0.3} Anon-kun.{w=0.5} {i}Hai{/i},{w=0.3} nao curassu-{/cps}"
     pause 0.75
 
-    I "{cps=*0.5}That was nothing like my Japanese animes.{/cps}"
+    I "{cps=*0.75}That was nothing like my Japanese animes.{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    hide anon neutral with dissolve
+    hide anon neutral with Dissolve(1)
 
-    I "Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.3} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w} I sat down,{w=0.4} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.2} leaving me lightheaded."
+    I "Mr. Tsuki continued on,{w=0.4} drawing what little attention there was to himself.{w} I sat down,{w=0.4} finally feeling the blood that had caught in my legs rush up,{w=0.3} leaving me lightheaded."
 
     hide jinflip with dissolve
 
     I "And I probably have to do this for each class today?"
-    pause 0.7
+    pause 0.6
 
     I "{cps=*0.6}Double fuck my life.{/cps}"
 
@@ -763,17 +808,17 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "And there’s still the rest of the day to go."
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
     scene cafeteria
     show anon neutral at aleft
-    with dissolve
-
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    with fade
 
     I "Eventually,{w=0.4} lunch comes around."
 
     I "All the edible stuff is well outside my price range of fucking free,{w=0.3} so I settle for a pseudopizza."
 
     I "The kind that becomes a viable weapon if you leave it alone for ten minutes."
+    pause .5
 
     I "No time to waste after exiting the line,{w=0.2} I scan the lunchroom for an open seat."
 
@@ -800,34 +845,33 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "I fought the momentum of the tray until the hand that had spun me stabilized it and me."
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1
     hide dimmer_light with dissolve
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
-
+    
     show anon sad flip behind naser with Dissolve(0.25)
-    pause 0.8
-    show naser explanatory
-    with Dissolve(0.25)
+    pause 0.75
 
-    Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.6} Nearly dropped your food Anon."
+    show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.15)
+    Nas "Whoa there!{w=0.5} Nearly dropped your food Anon."
 
     show naser happy
     show anon neutral flip
     with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     A "Yeah,{w=0.4} whose fault is that?"
 
     show naser considering with Dissolve(0.25)
 
-    pause 1.5
-
-    show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.2)
+    pause 1.25
 
+    show naser explanatory with Dissolve(0.15)
     Nas "...Yours?{fast}"
-    pause 0.6
+    pause 0.5
 
     I "I swear to all that is good and holy."
 
-    show naser happy with Dissolve(.25)
+    show naser happy with dissolve
     pause 0.5
 
     Nas "Wanna sit with us?"
@@ -878,22 +922,19 @@ label chapter_1:
     Nas "I get you,{w=0.5} hard to talk to people you don’t know,{w=0.2} right?"
 
     A "Something like that,{w=0.4} yeah."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Hell,{w=0.4} last period I tripped in front of everyone.{w=0.6} Talk about a first impression."
 
-    show naser happy flip
+    show naser happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     Nas "I don’t think they’d care too much."
 
-    show naomi explanatory flip
-
     show naomi explanatory flip:
         ease 0.18 yalign 0.04
         ease 0.35 yalign 0.0
         repeat
-
     N "Have you had any trouble since then?{w=0.5} Do you have enough money for food today?"
-
     show naomi neutral flip at sright with ease
 
     show naomi neutral flip
@@ -927,24 +968,25 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     A "Your what?"
 
-    Nas "Fang"
+    Nas "Fang."
 
     A "Your brother or{cps=*0.2}...?{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
     Nas "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{cps=*0.3}Sibling.{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     I "What."
 
-    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+    show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     Nas "Fang’s gonna have some extra pizzas for the show.{w=0.5} You could take some home."
 
     A "I uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} dunno about concerts.{w=0.6} Not really one for public events like that."
 
     show naser unimpressed flip
-
     Nas "Alright man,{w=0.4} just thought you could use a few opportunities to make friends."
+    pause .5
 
     I "What was that?"
 
@@ -1323,7 +1365,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause .5
 
     show naser at nleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp)
-    play sound "<from 0.2 to 2.0>audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 2.2
+    play sound "<from 0.2 to 2.0>audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 1.8
     show naser table hit behind anon with vpunch
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -1349,7 +1391,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "{cps=*0.5}I brought them here so Fang has an audience.{/cps}"
 
-    stop music fadeout 0.5
+    stop music fadeout 0.2
     pause 1
 
     A "Oh."
@@ -1360,7 +1402,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naser considering with dissolve
 
-    I "Naser’s phone rings.{w=0.4} He moves aside to answer it."
+    I "Naser’s phone rings.{w=0.5} He moves aside to answer it."
 
     show naser flip neutral with Dissolve(0.25)
 
@@ -1370,10 +1412,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "Fa-{w=0.6}{nw}"
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' # Attribution 3.0, LICENCE updated
-    window hide
-    with hpunch
-
+    show anon:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.8
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    I "{i}!#&$@*\%?!{/i}" with vpunch
     pause 0.7
 
     I "The voice on the other end is loud and shrill."
@@ -1381,11 +1423,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I-{w=0.5}{nw}"
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
-    window hide
-    with hpunch
-
-    pause 0.7
+    show anon:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.9
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
+    I "{b}&\%#$@*\%!@#&*\%!!{/b}" with hpunch
 
     I "He holds the phone away from his ear to save his eardrum."
     pause .5
@@ -1394,12 +1435,17 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause .5
 
     I "The call ends and Naser sags."
+    pause .25
 
     show naser sad at nleft with easeinleft
     pause 0.5
 
     Nas "I’ve gotta leave."
 
+    show anon:
+        easein_quad 0.5 xalign 0.825
+    pause .5 
+
     A "Seriously?"
 
     Nas "Yeah,{w=0.3} Fang doesn’t want me here.{w=0.6} Said I’ll ruin the show."
@@ -1566,7 +1612,6 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "Oh God I can’t take this,{w=0.3} I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much,{w=0.5} I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave"
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadeout 1.0 fadein 0.25
     scene auditorium
     show anon neutral flip at aright
     show spears neutral at sleft
@@ -1640,18 +1685,17 @@ label chapter_1:
     Sp "Next time it will be campus clean-up."
 
     stop music1 fadeout 2
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 2
     hide anon with Dissolve(1)
 
     show spears neutral flip with Dissolve(0.25)
 
     I "Behind me the principal’s voice shakes the room."
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 0.2
     show spears angry flip with Fade(.1, 0, .25, color="#fff")
-    play sound "audio/effects/spearYellVoice.ogg"  # TODO: volume boost, renpy volume multiplier sucks and makes this clip
-    with vpunch
-
-    Sp "{b}{cps=*0.5}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/cps}{/b}"
+    stop ambient fadeout 0.1
+    play sound "audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg"
+    Sp "{b}{cps=*0.5}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/cps}{/b}" with vpunch
 
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -1664,7 +1708,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "I consolidate them all into a pair of boxes and make my exit."
 
-    play ambient "audio/effects/outdoor ambience.ogg" fadeout 1.0 fadein 0.5
+    play ambient "audio/effects/outdoor ambience.ogg" fadeout 1.0 fadein 1.5
     scene outside school
     show anon neutral at acenter
     with fade
@@ -1676,6 +1720,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 1
 
     Sp "{i}{cps=*0.6}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}{/i}"
+    pause .5
 
     I "Pfft.{w=0.5} Like I don’t already know that.{w=0.4} There’s like{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -1684,8 +1729,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "Naomi’s annoying ass."
 
     I "That fucking caveman of a principal."
+    pause .5
 
     I "Naser,{w=0.4} whose been a bro."
+    pause .5
 
     I "Naser’s Sis-"
 
@@ -1708,9 +1755,9 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     play sound "audio/effects/digital_alarm.ogg" # CC0
 
-    I "{cps=*20}*BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{w=0.51} *BLEEP*{/cps}"
+    I "{cps=*20}*BLEEP*{w=0.481} *BLEEP*{w=0.481} *BLEEP*{w=0.481} *BLEEP*{w=0.481} *BLEEP*{w=0.481} *BLEEP*{/cps}"
 
-    stop sound fadeout 0.2
+    stop sound fadeout 2
 
     scene room anon dark with Dissolve(2.5)
     play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg"
@@ -1905,28 +1952,31 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     unknown "{cps=*0.4}-SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish
 
-    show naser explanatory flip
-
+    show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "Wait,{w=0.3} Trish,{w=0.4} you don’t understand-!"
 
-    show naser
+    # show naser
 
-    show trish at sleft
+    # show trish at sleft
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' volume .75
+    show trish:
+        easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.075
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' volume .75
     T "DON’T CUT ME OFF YOU GRAY PIECE OF SHIT!" with vpunch
+    pause .5
 
     show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
 
     I "Students are clearing out of the way,{w=0.4} just trying to get to their classes."
+    pause .5
 
     I "This must be a common occurrence."
+    pause .25
 
     show trish:
-        easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.05
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.01
         pause 0.5
         easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.175
-
     pause 1.5
 
     I "The diminutive triceratops,{w=0.4} Trish,{w=0.4} bows her head and charges Naser."
@@ -1966,7 +2016,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         repeat
 
     #play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
-    play sound '<from .25>audio/effects/slapstickSuperPunch.ogg' volume .7
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
     T "GET YOUR HANDS OFF ME!!" with vpunch
 
     Nas "Trish,{w=0.2} I’m not going to fight you again."
@@ -1975,8 +2025,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "Believe me,{w=0.3} I had no idea the concert would have turned out like that."
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
-    T "{b}LIAR!!{/b}" with vpunch
+    T "LIAR!!"
 
     Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-"
 
@@ -2026,8 +2075,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "Oh,{w=0.3} Anon."
 
-    show naomi neutral flip
-
+    show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     N "Don’t worry about it,{w=0.4} it’s nothing."
 
     show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(0.25)
@@ -2061,7 +2109,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naomi shocked flip
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
+    play audio 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'
     Sp "ANON MOUS,{w=0.4} IF YOU ARE NOT IN MY OFFICE WITHIN TEN MINUTES I SWEAR ON MY DEAR FAMILY I WILL PERSONALLY MOUNT YOU ON MY WALL." with vpunch
 
     pause 1
@@ -2140,7 +2188,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naomi angry:
         easein .25 xalign 0.45
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
     N "Reed!{fast}{w=0.7} You have a bong in your backpack!" with vpunch
 
     show reed neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -2229,9 +2277,9 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "Fuck am I tired already."
 
     stop music fadeout 1
-
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
     scene hallway with fade
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+
     pause 0.5
 
     A "How the fuck did I end up here?"
@@ -2283,10 +2331,11 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "Oh wait{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     I "Was that the drummer from last night?"
+    pause .5
 
     I "Huh."
 
-    pause 1
+    pause .75
 
     I "As I near the office I can feel a heavy tension suffusing the air."
 
@@ -2328,7 +2377,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "It was illegible,{w=0.2} Trish.{w=0.5} You should work on your handwriting a bit."
 
-    play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapStickPunch.ogg'
     T "{b}ARGH!{/b}" with vpunch
 
     show trish:
@@ -2357,13 +2406,13 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.5
 
     N "Sorry you had to see that,{w=0.2} Anon."
+    pause .5
 
-    N "Oh,{w=0.4} I didn’t notice we were blocking the door from you,{w=0.4} my apologies."
+    N "Oh,{w=0.4} I didn’t notice we were blocking the door from you,{w=0.5} my apologies."
 
     A "The principal asked to see me early,{w=0.4} I’m not really in any rush."
 
-    show naomi neutral flip
-
+    show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     N "Very commendable of you,{w=.1} though!"
 
     N "Go right ahead on in."
@@ -2596,8 +2645,8 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     label .finding_naser:
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
     scene hallway with Dissolve(1.5)
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
 
     I "Naser should be around here somewhere,{w=0.4} I wanted to talk to him before class."
 
@@ -2605,22 +2654,28 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "But where would Naser be hanging out about now?"
 
-    I "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.5} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{nw}"
+    I "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.5} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     play music 'audio/ost/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg'
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
     unknown "{cps=*0.25}WAOOOH!!{/cps}" with vpunch
 
     I "With the screech of a banshee,{w=0.3} a blur of purple launches itself onto an unsuspecting student."
 
     I "Everyone in the hallway pauses to watch as a midget of a triceratops attempts to bring down the taller raptor student."
+    pause .5
 
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
     unknown "{b}{cps=*2}IMMAKILLYOUTRIGGA!{/cps}{/b}" with vpunch
 
-    I "The student body collectively rolls their eyes and continues on,{w=0.3} choosing to ignore the pissed off trigga as she finally forces the helpless guy to the floor and sits triumphantly on his chest."
+    I "The student body collectively rolls their eyes and continues on,{w=0.5} choosing to ignore the pissed off trigga as she finally forces the helpless guy to the floor and sits triumphantly on his chest."
+    pause .5
 
     I "I’m pretty sure some would pay good money for this treatment."
 
     I "The ineffectual pummel-slapping included as she flails at the raptor’s face."
+    pause .5
 
     T "You were there last night weren’t you?!"
 
@@ -2633,19 +2688,22 @@ label chapter_1:
     T "If it’s good enough."
 
     unknown "ALRIGHT,{w=.2} ALRIGHT,{w=.2} I’M SORRY,{w=.4} JUST GET OFF!!"
+    pause .5
 
-    I "Wait,{w=0.3} she’s in the band that played yesterday?"
+    I "Wait,{w=0.4} she’s in the band that played yesterday?"
 
-    stop music fadeout 1
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
+    stop music fadeout 2
     I "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} Should get out of here."
 
     I "Last thing I need is whatever’s going on here."
 
-    I "I discreetly slip away,{w=0.2} down the nearest hall."
+    I "I discreetly slip away,{w=0.3} down the nearest hall."
 
     scene hallway
     show anon neutral flip at acenter
     with fade
+    pause .5
 
     A "That happen often{cps=*0.1}...?{/cps}"
 
@@ -2659,6 +2717,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "Does what happen often?"
 
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
     show anon fear:
         easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.3
 
@@ -2708,7 +2767,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "Oh."
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1
     hide dimmer_light with dissolve
 
     show naser neutral flip
@@ -2747,7 +2806,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     Nas "Weird guy."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Uh,{w=0.3} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.4}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{nw}"
+    A "Uh,{w=0.3} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.4}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
 
     window hide
     stop ambient fadeout 0.5
@@ -2761,15 +2820,16 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.5
     stop sound fadeout 0.5
 
-    show naser neutral flip:
+    show naser considering flip:
         easein_quad 0.5 xalign 1.7
     pause .5
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1
     play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 0.5
 
     Nas "Crap,{w=0.3} can’t miss my homeroom today."
 
+    show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "Sorry,{w=0.4} it’ll have to wait a bit."
     pause .5
 
@@ -2786,7 +2846,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     stop ambient fadeout 1
-    stop music fadeout 1
+    stop music fadeout 3
     scene black with fade
 
 
@@ -2799,12 +2859,11 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     I "It’s like it’s only me and the teacher in class,{w=0.3} phasing out everyone else."
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
     scene hallway
     show anon neutral at acenter
     with fade
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1
-
     I "I follow the flow of students towards the lunchroom,{w=0.3} mindlessly looking about the halls."
 
     I "Passing by the athletic awards case,{w=0.3} a decent amount of group photos have Naser front and center."
@@ -2850,13 +2909,20 @@ label chapter_1:
     I "With the lunch card in my possession I’m able to snag something actually edible."
 
     I "I should run the math on how much I’ll end up owing,{w=0.4} but I feel more like indulging myself."
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
+
         "Grab the cookies you fatass":
-          I "Why not both?"
+            
+            pass
 
         "That sandwich looks good":
-          I "Why not both?"
+
+            pass
+
+    pause .5      
+    I "Why not both?"
 
     I "Hence my tray stacked high with desserts and the tastiest looking sandwich from the lunchline."
 
@@ -2865,6 +2931,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' volume 0.65 fadein 0.05
 
     I "Next to her is Naser with a complicated expression."
+    pause .5
 
     # A small variation is needed here because Anon only hears the first line if he finds Naser before meeting Spears.
     if late_to_spears:
@@ -2875,10 +2942,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
         Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I brought them here so Fang has an audience.{/cps}{/i}"
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 1
-
+    pause .5
     I "Shit.{w=0.5} I go and sit across from Naser and Naomi."
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
     scene cafeteria
     show anon neutral at aleft
     show naomi neutral flip at sright
@@ -2981,8 +3048,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     A "Whoa{w=0.1} whoa,{w=0.3} calm down man."
 
     Nas "What else?{w=0.5} Did they say anything about Fang?!"
+    pause .5
 
     unknown "{cps=*.7}{i}NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU,{w=0.3} BITCH!{/i}{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.4}...Yeah...{/cps}{w=0.4} I don’t think you’d want to hear it though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -2993,8 +3062,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         linear 0.05 xalign 0.705
         repeat
 
-    # play sound '<from 0.25>audio/effects/slapstickSuperPunch.ogg'
-    play sound 'audio/effects/punch.ogg'
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
     Nas "And? What happened after?!{fast} I’m gonna kick all their asses!" with vpunch
 
     show naomi:
@@ -3027,6 +3095,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     N "If Fang wishes to stay home then that is her prerogative.{w=0.6} You just need to give her some time,{w=0.3} Naser."
 
     I "While she said that I noticed a strange expression cross over Naomi’s face."
+    pause .5
 
     Nas "I know babe.{w=.5} I just wish I could help them more."
     pause 0.5
@@ -3038,10 +3107,12 @@ label chapter_1:
     "We finish eating and make small talk until the bell signals us to go to our sixth period."
 
     "Day two out of however many left is now out of my way."
+    pause .5
 
     "I’m fairly certain that if Naser found out I laughed too I’d need to avoid him."
 
     "Those cheeto covered claws look like they’d freakin’ hurt,{w=0.3} man."
+    pause .5
 
     "With that drama now past me I can just disappear and cheese through the rest of the year like I’m invisible."