finish route A first pass

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@ -13,16 +13,16 @@ label chapter_14A:
"Groggily, I pull myself to my feet."
hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
"I pull back the curtain to reveal that a thick sunday fog had rolled in overnight."
"I pull back the curtain to reveal that a thick Sunday fog had rolled in overnight."
"What time is it?"
"Guess Ill check my phone"
"Guess Ill check my phone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
pause .5
"Ten AM, huh"
"Ten AM, huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
"Damn, I slept a while."
pause .5
"...Did Fang sleep well?"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Did Fang sleep well?"
A "Fang, you up?"
pause .5
@ -407,6 +407,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
T "I WAS RIGHT ABOUT YOU!! YOU!!"
"By now her tirade becomes incomprehensible screaming."
pause .5
"A teacher has to hold her back and try directing her to a nearby curb to sit."
pause 1
@ -534,7 +535,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Guess she didnt get that perfect highschool life in the end."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
pause 1
scene black with dissolve
pause 1
@ -595,6 +596,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}How long have I been standing here, staring at the doorknob?"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}How much longer could I get away with putting it off?"
pause .5
"As it is, its not the worst case scenario."
@ -626,30 +628,37 @@ label chapter_14A:
"The doorknob is still cold on my hand."
"I turn it and exit to the rooftop."
pause .5
image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
scene roof fog
show fangfog:
yanchor 0.5 xanchor 0.5
ypos 0.6 xpos 0.5
alpha 0.25 zoom 0.25
with Dissolve(2)
scene roof fog with Dissolve(2)
pause .5
"In the dense morning fog the only thing to stand out is the silhouette."
"One that I easily recognize."
pause .5
scene a10 with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
A "Fang."
pause .5
"Shes silent. I cant even tell if shes looking at me or not."
pause .5
A "Fang, please. Say something."
"My legs feel leaden as I approach her."
pause .5
A "Fang. Come on. T-this is all"
A "Fang. Come on. T-this is all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Slowly more and more details come too."
"Slowly more and more details come to."
pause .5
"The revolver that hung limply from her fingers."
@ -658,229 +667,326 @@ label chapter_14A:
"Her wings with multiple bald patches on them."
"And the sound of her ragged breaths."
pause .5
A "Fang"
A "Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"My fingers brush against her shoulder."
scene black
play sound "audio/effects/shottinnitus.ogg"
scene black with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color = "#ff0000")
pause 1
A "ARGH!"
A "{i}ARGH!{/i}"
pause .5
"Hot, searing pain."
"My left leg crumples under me."
pause 1
"As I fall I see Fangs beautiful amber eyes."
"Theyre red and puffy, with makeup-less tears running freely down her cheeks."
pause .5
F "A-Anon… WHY ARE YOU-!"
scene a10 with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
A "Aaaah… haaaah… Fang… Why…?"
F "A-Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} WHY ARE YOU-!"
A "Aaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} haaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps} why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
F "Y-you werent supposed to be here!"
pause .5
F "You shouldnt have come here!"
pause .5
A "Fuck… Because… Because I love you! Haaaaaah."
scene a10 with fade
A "Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps} because{cps=*.1}...{/cps} because I love you! Haaaaaah."
pause .5
"I struggle to balance on my left leg. The hole in my shin dribbles blood down to the floor."
"I dont care though."
pause .5
"I hobble forward."
pause .5
"Fang steps back."
F "S-stay back!"
"The revolver clatters against the concrete, spent on ammo."
pause .5
A "Fang… please…"
A "Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps} please{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"A painful step forward."
"She takes another back."
pause .5
F "Anon!"
A "Just come downstairs with me Its not over, it doesnt have to be this wa-"
A "Just come downstairs with me{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Its not over, it doesnt have to be this wa-"
# HL gib sound
scene black with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color = "#ff0000")
"With a crunch, my shin gives out completely, lurching me forward onto my hands and knees."
scene black with fade
pause 1
"I have to keep going."
"Even if its on my knees."
pause .5
"I can feel myself slowing."
"My thoughts cloudy."
pause .5
"The blood loss..."
"The blood loss{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"The pain is so intense, however."
"It brings some clarity to my mind."
"Enough that I can drag myself forward."
pause .5
image red = "#ff0000"
scene a10
show red:
alpha 0
block:
easeout_cubic 0.4 alpha 0.1
pause .1
easein_cubic 0.4 alpha 0
pause .75
repeat
show dimmer_lighter:
alpha 0
block:
ease_quad 2.5 alpha 1
ease_quad 2.5 alpha 0
repeat
with Dissolve(1)
pause 1
A "Please, come down with me."
F "Oh-oh god. Oh my god. S-stop…"
F "Oh-oh god. Oh my god. S-stop{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"The sharp bone pokes and tears through my leg muscle."
pause .5
"I briefly look behind me, the trail is spilling out and making my other leg wet."
"Bile rises up my throat at the sight."
pause .5
"I swallow hard and look back to Fang."
pause .5
"I have to reach her."
"I can still fix this."
"I can still save her."
pause .5
"Fang keeps backing away as I try to get closer, remaining out of my reach."
pause .5
"Fang stops and catches her balance."
pause 1
"Her foot is halfway over the edge."
pause 1
"Weve reached the edge of the rooftop."
pause 1
"End of the line."
hide red
hide dimmer_lighter
with Dissolve(2)
A "Fang."
A "Look at me."
scene a11 with fade
"Her head shakily turns from the concrete below to meet my eyes again."
pause .5
A "Back away from there, please."
F "I-I… I…"
F "I-I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Its not over."
A "Stay with me here, please."
pause .5
F "I"
F "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Dont leave me alone."
pause .5
"We stare for an eternity, all through the polices screaming below."
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Fang looks below once more, down the three story drop to the walkway below."
"The walkway wed passed through so many times to get to classes without a second thought."
"The walkway we crossed daily with our friends through all our trials."
pause 1
A "Please…"
A "Please{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
pause .5
scene a11 with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
"She looks to me again, less shakily this time."
pause 1
"The sides of her mouth curl into a warm smile."
pause 1
"The last of her tears falls."
scene a12 with fade
"The last of her tears fall."
pause 2
scene a12 with dissolve
"She jumps."
pause .5
A "Fang!"
A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
pause 2
"I cant look over."
pause .5
"I dont want to see it."
pause 2
"The authorities betray my final wish of death by bursting through the door at that exact minute."
pause .5
"I drift into unconsciousness when they start wrapping my leg."
pause 1
scene black with fade
scene black with Dissolve(3)
pause 2
pause 5
"..."
"{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
pause 2
"Three weeks pass."
pause .5
"Probably."
pause 1
"All I can remember is the sterile hospital room and an endless lineup of reporters."
"The whole incident made national news."
pause .5
"Apparently I had become the brave soul who took a bullet to stop a school shooting."
"But to everyone I know Im just the one who caused all this."
pause .5
"After I refused to answer the constant pestering enough, I was finally left in blissful solitude."
pause 1
"I expected a visit from Spears, or Reed, or Stella or someone."
"But they never came."
pause 1
"I got discharged just yesterday."
"Ill need to stay on a crutch for a few months, but thats hardly the wound I'm worried about."
pause 1
scene a13 with fade
scene a13 with Dissolve(3)
pause 2
"...Her funeral was today."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Her funeral was today."
pause 1
"I wasnt invited, of course."
"But I cant just leave it either."
pause .5
"So I wait out of sight several hundreds of feet away for the remaining family members to trickle out of the crowd and go home."
pause 2
scene a14a with fade
scene a14a with Dissolve(2)
pause 2
"The last figure lingers for over an hour."
"If anyone, hes the one who deserved this the least."
pause 1
"He was right the whole time, about me."
"And here I am, defiling her grave with my presence."
pause 1
"Eventually, he too leaves."
pause 1
scene a15 with fade
scene a15 with Fade(2, .5, 2)
pause 2
"The alternations of footsteps and the crutch make me feel more mechanical than human."
"Then again, that may be true regardless of having a crutch."
pause 1
scene a14 with fade
scene a14 with Dissolve(3)
pause 2
"The two graves are right next to each other."
"Various flowers pollute the fresh mounds."
pause .5
"In memory of Naser. Loving son and brother."
"{cps=*.4}{i}\"In memory of Naser. Loving son and brother.\"{/i}{/cps}"
pause 1
"... Im sorry, man."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Im sorry, man."
pause 1
"I hobble over to the other headstone."
pause .5
"{i}Here lies dearest Lucy. Heaven restores you in light.{/i}"
"{cps=*.4}{i}\"Here lies dearest Lucy. Heaven restores you in light.\"{/i}{/cps}"
pause 1
"They buried her using her real name."
pause 2
"God damn it."
"This is all my fault."
pause .5
"None of this would have happened if I noticed something was wrong."
@ -889,51 +995,71 @@ label chapter_14A:
"If I never got between her and her friends by telling her how I felt."
"If I never bothered Fang and just stayed to myself."
pause .5
"...If I never moved to Volcaldera in the first place."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}If I never moved to Volcaldera in the first place."
pause .5
"Fuck."
pause .5
"And because of me Naomi and Naser and Fang and the others are gone."
"Because Im too fucking stupid to see any of the warning signs."
pause 1
"I should be crying right now."
"I should be screaming to the world why I should have died instead."
"But I instead I just feel…"
"But I instead I just feel{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 1
"My final plea to Fang races through my head."
#fade in wind blowing here
play sound "audio/effects/wind.ogg" loop volume 0.3
"{i}Dont leave me alone.{/i}"
pause .5
# B: commented this stuff from the original game out so you can decide how to do your thing
# play sound "audio/effects/wind.ogg" loop volume 0.3
"{i}{cps=*.3}Dont leave me alone.{/cps}{/i}"
pause 1
"I just feel completely and utterly and hopelessly alone."
pause 2
"The sprinkling rain stops."
"Seems the world is tired of my monologuing."
pause .5
"Like Trish said, Im just some nobody from the middle of nowhere."
"And the only person I ever cared about is gone."
pause .5
"The split second I thought I was somebody, I ruined everything."
"So now, Im back to being nobody."
"..."
"{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
pause 2
"Its better this way."
$ quick_menu = False
window hide
play sound "audio/effects/wind.ogg" loop volume 0.2
play music "audio/OST/Sad!.ogg" fadein 1.0 volume 2.8 noloop
pause 20
stop sound fadeout 1.0
scene black with fade
pause 30
scene 1of4 with fade
pause 15
pause 4
# B: this track is absurdly quiet
# play music "audio/OST/Sad!.ogg" fadein 1.0 volume 2.8 noloop
stop sound fadeout 4
scene black with Dissolve(4)
pause 2
scene 1of4 with Dissolve(2)
pause
scene black with Dissolve(3)
pause 2
return