From 35dcbf58e43d109b7e151950089f585bbaca84c4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Thu, 19 Aug 2021 18:37:06 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch11 Anon's house scene --- .../11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy | 1040 ++++++++++------- 1 file changed, 600 insertions(+), 440 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy b/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy index 57bb896..0e74301 100644 --- a/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy +++ b/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy @@ -102,6 +102,8 @@ label chapter_11: stop ambient fadeout 3 play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0 + + show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.25) "Wait." "Naser’s sister, Fang." @@ -110,9 +112,11 @@ label chapter_11: "The Fang who skipped school and is spending the day at my apartment." "And never went home for the past two days." - pause .25 + pause .5 - show anon concerned flip with Dissolve(.25) + show anon concerned flip + hide dimmer_light + with Dissolve(.25) "Suddenly I feel like a fish being circled by a very Naser-shaped shark." "How do I even begin to explain to him?" @@ -182,6 +186,7 @@ label chapter_11: A "I mean, we played some video games but-" Nas "ALL that happened?" + pause .5 A "I don’t think- Oh. OH. We, uh, didn’t DO anything, if that’s what you mean." pause .5 @@ -250,9 +255,9 @@ label chapter_11: show dimmer_darker behind naser, anon with Dissolve(1) pause .25 show naser: - easeout_back 1 xalign 2.5 + easeout_back 1 xalign 2.7 show anon: - easeout_back 1 xalign 2.0 + easeout_back 1 xalign 2.2 pause .5 hide anon show dimmer_darker: @@ -260,12 +265,16 @@ label chapter_11: show naser elbow: easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 1.1 play sound 'audio/effects/slapsticksuperpunch.ogg' - A "FUCK!" with hpunch + play audio 'audio/effects/tableslam.ogg' + with hpunch + + A "FUCK!" pause .5 "A few students start turning their heads." "Naser is still frozen in place, staring at his outstretched hands with a thousand yard stare." + pause .5 unknown "Hey, isn’t that the track team leader?" @@ -333,6 +342,8 @@ label chapter_11: stop ambient fadeout 3 play music 'audio/OST/intercept.ogg' fadein 1.0 + pause .5 + show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom pause .5 @@ -370,7 +381,7 @@ label chapter_11: "I’ll worry about that when I get home." pause .5 - stop music fadeout 4 + stop music fadeout 3 scene black with Dissolve(1) pause .5 @@ -379,6 +390,147 @@ label chapter_11: #Naser Drama #THIS SECTION IS SCORE DEPENDENT + + play music 'audio/ost/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 1 + scene hallway + show anon neutral at acenter + with dissolve + pause .5 + + "Today needs to end. Now." + + "I have a backpack full of missed assignments, including Mr. Tsuki’s essay on the history of typefaces." + pause .5 + + "Who the fuck cares about typefaces?!" + + "Worst samurai english teacher ever." + + "My ribs are burning as I heave a sigh." + pause .5 + + "At least I can go home now." + + "Where my hot ptero Gee Eff is waiting." + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + "My hot ptero girlfriend who may or may not be having a mental breakdown in my apartment." + + "And I have no idea what to do with a fucking girlfriend. All those hours of dating simulators have not adequately simulated dating in the least." + pause .5 + + "Just as I exit the main doors of Volcano High my phone buzzes against one particularly bad bruise on my leg." + + "Fingers crossed it’s Fang." + pause .5 + + "{i}Naser:{/i}{fast} We need to talk" + pause .5 + + "{i}Naser:{/i}{fast} Meet me in the auditorium" + pause .5 + + show anon sad with Dissolve(.25) + "I’m going to die." + pause .5 + + unknown "You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!" + pause .5 + + show anon neutral with dissolve + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Best to get it over with now." + + "I meander my way to the school’s auditorium." + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 4 + scene auditorium + show dimmer_light + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 + + "Some of the lights are off when I get there, but I can make out Naser’s outline sitting alone in the front row." + + "He doesn’t turn to look at me when I enter or walk down the aisle." + pause .5 + + "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." + pause .5 + + play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0 + show naser considering: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign -0.8 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1 + with dissolve + pause 1 + + A "You uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} wanted to talk to me?" + + show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + # if C scene + "Naser’s face contorts in deep contemplation." + pause .5 + + "Maybe he’s trying to find the right words?" + + "Or the most discreet way to get rid of me." + pause .5 + + "I decided to keep some distance. For both our sakes of course." + + # else + "I fold down a seat." + + A "Funny, this is the same seat as the one I was in a few days ago." + # fi + + Nas "Hm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Why did you call me here?" + + Nas "Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Shut up. Let me think." + + "He fixes his gaze at the stage curtains." + + "I can see the gears in his head turning, but his expression is telling me he doesn’t actually know what he wants to do." + pause .5 + + Nas "I shouldn’t have pushed you earlier." + + Nas "Sorry. It was a moment of weakness." + + A "Don’t worry about it, I can take a hit or two." + pause .5 + + "He nods woodenly." + + Nas "*chuckle* Yeah man, sure." + + "The chuckle was less than convincing." + pause .5 + + show naser brooding flip with dissolve + pause .5 + Nas "Look Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + Nas "When you told me Fang could kiss you because you told her your feelings{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + Nas "I can’t really describe it." + pause .5 + + Nas "Don’t take it the wrong way, but my mind just screamed at me ‘worst case scenario’." + pause .5 + # B: condensed this if-else block for readability if anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4: jump .SortingThings @@ -389,150 +541,101 @@ label chapter_11: else: jump .PromAnnouncement - #Sorting Things label .SortingThings: - - play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3 - scene hallway - show anon neutral at acenter - with dissolve - pause .5 - - "Today needs to end. Now." - - "I have a backpack full of missed assignments, including Mr. Tsuki’s essay on the history of typefaces." - - "Who the fuck cares about typefaces?!" - - "Worst samurai english teacher ever." - - "My ribs are burning as I heave a sigh." - - "At least I can go home now." - - "Where my hot ptero Gee Eff is waiting." - - "..." - - "My hot ptero girlfriend who may or may not be having a mental breakdown in my apartment." - - "And I have no idea what to do with a fucking girlfriend. All those hours of dating simulators have not adequately simulated dating in the least." - - "Just as I exit the main doors of Volcano High my phone buzzes against one particularly bad bruise on my leg." - - "Fingers crossed it’s Fang." - pause .5 - - "{i}Naser:{/i}{fast} We need to talk" - pause .5 - - "{i}Naser:{/i}{fast} Meet me in the auditorium" - pause .5 - - show anon sad with Dissolve(.25) - "I’m going to die." - - unknown "You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!" - pause .5 - - show anon neutral with dissolve - "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Best to get it over with now." - - "I meander my way to the school’s auditorium." - pause .5 - - play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0 - scene auditorium - show anon neutral at aleft - "Some of the lights are off when I get there, but I can make out Naser’s outline sitting alone in the front row." - - "He doesn’t turn to look at me when I enter or walk down the aisle." - - "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." - - "Some of the lights are off when I get there, but I can make out Naser’s outline sitting alone in the front row." - - "He doesn’t turn to look at me when I enter or walk down the aisle." - - "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." - show naser neutral flip at ncenter with fade - A "You uh… wanted to talk to me?" - - Nas "..." - - "I fold down the seat next to his." - - A "Funny, this is the same seat as the one I was in a few days ago." - - Nas "Hm…" - - A "... Why did you call me here?" - - Nas "Just… Shut up. Let me think." - - "He fixes his gaze at the stage curtains." - - "I can see the gears in his head turning, but his expression is telling me he doesn’t actually know what he wants to do." - - Nas "I shouldn’t have pushed you earlier." - - Nas "Sorry. It was a moment of weakness." - - A "Don’t worry about it, I can take a hit or two." - - "He silently nods." - - Nas "When you told me Fang could kiss you because you told her your feelings… I can’t really describe it." - - Nas "Don’t take it the wrong way, but my mind just screamed at me ‘worst case scenario’." A "Why’s that?" - Nas "Because it’s {i}my{/i} sister we’re talking about here." + show naser angry flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "Because it’s my {i}sister{/i} we’re talking about here." + pause .5 A "So? Fang said she likes me too." A "So we’re dating now. I think." - play music "audio/OST/intercept.ogg" fadein 1.0 + play music "audio/OST/intercept.ogg" fadeout 1.0 fadein 1.0 + show naser annoyed flip with dissolve "Naser clamps his hands up to his crest." - Nas "Dating, even…Sweet Raptor Jesus..." + Nas "Dating, even{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Sweet Raptor Jesus{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 A "Why are you so surprised, I told you months ago I liked her, didn’t I?" + show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Yes, you told me {i}you{/i} liked {i}her{/i}." + show naser brooding flip with dissolve Nas "I never expected her to LIKE YOU BACK." + pause .5 + show naser: + easein_back 1 xalign 1.0 + show naser angry flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Explain yourself, now." + pause .5 - A "I… I don’t even really know how this happened- I-I mean, I’ve barely even had friends before, let alone something romantic!" - - A "I don’t know how this happened!" + show anon: + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.05 + A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I don’t even really know how this happened- I-I mean, I’ve barely even had friends before, let alone something romantic!" + pause .5 A "Why would someone, anyone want to go out with {i}me{/i}?! Me, Naser!" + pause .5 A "I wouldn’t go out with me!" + show anon sad with Dissolve(.25) A "I have no idea what I’m doing!" + pause .5 + show naser: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1 + show naser sad flip with dissolve "Naser leans back with a hand holding his beak." + pause .5 Nas "Oh, man, you’re worse off than I thought." + show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Breathe, man." + pause .5 A "I {i}am{/i}. It {i}hurts{/i}." + show naser brooding flip with dissolve + pause .5 Nas "Geez, at this rate I’m going to be more concerned for you than Fang." + show anon concerned with dissolve A "Like, thinking about being with Fang, a part of me is fucking exuberant to the point of being higher than Reed. Reed!" + pause .5 A "But then I start thinking how I don’t KNOW how to date and get so worried that I feel like I’m going to vomit." + show dimmer_darker behind anon, naser: + alpha 0 + show dimmer_darker: + easeout_cubic 3 alpha 1 + + show anon sad with dissolve + show anon: + pause .8 + block: + linear 0.04 xalign 0.045 + linear 0.04 xalign 0.05 + repeat 3 + pause .6 + block: + linear 0.04 xalign 0.045 + linear 0.04 xalign 0.05 + repeat 6 + repeat A "And then there’s my heart beating so hard and the fucking bruise and everything is fuck. Everything is fucking fuck, Naser." + show naser: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7 + show naser shocked flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "BREATHE!" "I finally notice the black spots in my vision and gasp." @@ -541,101 +644,182 @@ label chapter_11: A "Is this a panic attack? Naser I think I’m having a panic atta-" + play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg' + show naser: + easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.55 + show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.2) + show dimmer_darker: + linear 0.25 alpha 0 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickpunch.ogg' + show anon: + easein_elastic 0.5 xalign -0.05 + show anon fear with Dissolve(.15) + "My head snaps to the side and a fresh stinging pain blossoms on my cheek." + show anon sad with dissolve "I take the seconds of intense pain to focus and collect myself." + pause .5 + show anon neutral with dissolve A "Did you just slap me?" + show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Yes." - A "..." + show anon unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "You calm now?" A "Not really." + show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Would another slap help?" + show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) A "I’m calm I’m calm." + pause .5 + show naser: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.1 + pause .25 + show naser unimpressed with dissolve + pause .5 + + show naser annoyed with dissolve Nas "You’ve got it bad, Anon." A "Got what bad?" Nas "You’re in love with Fang." + pause .5 A "How is that bad?" - + + show naser brooding with dissolve Nas "Fang. You {i}both{/i} need help at this point." + pause .5 A "Now that’s just uncalled for." Nas "It’s true. Last thing you need is to be romantically involved." + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1 + show anon shrug with dissolve A "What if that’s exactly what we need?" + pause .5 - Nas "Just… Let me get this straight." + show anon neutral + show naser neutral flip + with dissolve + pause .5 + + Nas "Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Let me get this straight." Nas "You have never had a girlfriend before." A "Yes." + pause .5 Nas "Ever?" A "Yes, why?" + pause .5 - Nas "Aside from being sad, that just makes it really not a good idea to go for what seems like such a… poor combination." + show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "Aside from being sad, that just makes it really not a good idea to go for what seems like such a{cps=*.1}...{/cps} poor combination." + pause .5 A "That a challenge?" + show naser surprised flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Wha-are you even paying attention?" A "I can be a great boyfriend, just you watch." - Nas "Oh my g-" + stop music fadeout 4 + pause .5 - Nas "..." + show naser annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "Oh my g-" + pause .5 + + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show naser brooding flip with dissolve + pause .5 Nas "You know what?" Nas "You may be right." + pause .5 A "Hm?" Nas "Maybe just the thing Fang needs is someone to support her." + show naser sad flip with dissolve Nas "I clearly can’t do anything, and neither can our parents, or anyone we know." - Nas "But thinking back to a few days ago… she did shield you from the crowd and get you out of the auditorium." + Nas "But thinking back to a few days ago{cps=*.1}...{/cps} she did shield you from the crowd and get you out of the auditorium." + pause .5 - Nas "I brushed it off but... it’s clear she cares for you." + Nas "I brushed it off but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} it’s clear she cares for you." + pause .5 + show naser neutral flip with dissolve Nas "So you know what Anon? I’ll trust you." + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.05 A "Dowha?" - "Naser gets up from his seat, motioning for me to follow." play music "audio/OST/bayside_revamp.ogg" fadein 1.0 + "Naser gets up from his seat, motioning for me to follow." + pause .5 Nas "I’ll help you get to know Fang a bit better, and in return, you need to keep your promise of being a great boyfriend to her." + pause .5 A "I- uh, yeah! Thank you, Naser. Uh, where are we going?" + pause .5 Nas "You’re gonna need some supplies." + pause .5 scene outside school with fade "I follow Naser to the parking lot, where his half-beaten car awaits." + show naser neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5 + show naser: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0 + with dissolve + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1 + with dissolve + pause .25 + + show naser considering with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Listen up, because this is all I really know." A "Wait, should I be taking no-" Nas "First thing is you should always have a giant bag of dino-nuggies in your fridge, with her name written on it with a sharpie." + show naser unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Be warned, she counts them. You eat any and it’s all over." + pause .5 + scene nascar day with fade + pause .5 + "I climb into the passenger seat as Naser revs up the NasCar." Nas "You’re gonna need some barbecue sauce too. And none of the bargain bin stuff, Fang ONLY likes top shelf dipping sauce." @@ -647,6 +831,7 @@ label chapter_11: Nas "If she ever says she ‘isn’t hungry’, she is lying through her teeth." Nas "Most places know what you need if you say ‘my girlfriend isn’t hungry’." + pause .5 Nas "Next, either get a good supply of earplugs or say goodbye to your sense of hearing entirely. She can and will stay up until two a.m. listening to music on full blast." @@ -657,56 +842,74 @@ label chapter_11: A "What?!" Nas "Oh yeah. This is actually my fifth jacket this semester." + pause .5 - A "I-I see…" + A "I-I see{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "So that confirms Naser is just colorblind if he keeps getting these fuckugly jackets." + pause .5 - A "So… I’ve got your blessing?" + A "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I’ve got your blessing?" + pause .5 Nas "IF you help my sister, Anon." A "Of course! I’ll be the best boyfriend." Nas "You better. Because otherwise it won’t be me next time." + pause .5 A "Wha-" Nas "Dad needs a new caddy. He’ll probably ask you and then you’ll go missing." + pause .5 - A "..." + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "Ah. Fuck." + pause .5 Nas "Now tell me where your place is so I can drop you off." + pause .5 "Naser hesitates when I give him my address." - Nas "Skin Row? You know I should have figured, but still…" + Nas "Skin Row? You know I should have figured, but still{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "He speeds off in the direction of my apartment with all the grace of a semi truck." + pause .5 "Once we reach my neighborhood, his driving gets even more erratic." "Never stopping at stop signs and staying just above the speed limit." + pause .5 "Paranoid much?" + pause .5 "Naser finally comes to a stop in front of my building to let me out." + pause .5 + scene skinrow - show anon neutral at acenter + show anon neutral flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.8 with fade - A "Thanks for the ride, Naser. And the, er… Fang stuff, too." + pause .5 + + A "Thanks for the ride, Naser. And the, er{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fang stuff, too." "Naser’s gaze is fixed on the building’s doors instead." + pause .5 - Nas "So you’re going up to see Fang now, huh…" + Nas "So you’re going up to see Fang now, huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 A "You know you can come talk to her with me, if you want." Nas "No! I mean, can’t leave my car alone in this neighborhood. Don’t want something to happen to it, right?" "He tops it off with a less than genuine laugh." + pause .5 A "Naser, your car has more dents than most of the ones around here." @@ -715,340 +918,476 @@ label chapter_11: Nas "What? There’s like four bags, you can carry it fine." A "Not with these crippling injuries." + pause .5 A "You slamming me into the locker didn’t help either." + pause .5 - A "Oww, It’s a {i}miracle{/i} I’m still able to breathe." + A "Oww, it’s a {i}miracle{/i} I’m still able to breathe." + pause .5 "Naser rolls his eyes." Nas "Fine, I’ll carry the crap up. But only for a moment, I don’t want my car getting jacked." "He gets all the bags from the backseat and I lead him up the stairs to my place." + pause .5 - show naser neutral at sleft + play ambient 'audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg' fadein 3 + stop music fadeout 4 + scene black with dissolve + pause .5 - Nas "... Has Fang been doing alright here?" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Has Fang been doing alright here?" A "Probably still a bit rattled." A "Wasn’t in the best mood this morning either." + pause .5 A "Probably a good idea to not get confrontational or anything, yeah?" "Naser nods and I unlock the door." - scene room anon day - show anon neutral flip: - xalign 0.8 yalign 0.1 - show naser neutral flip at nright - show fang neutral flip at sleft - with fade - "I hold the door open for Naser. He hesitates to enter so I look in to see Fang sat on my bed mashing away on The Duke furiously." - play music "audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg" fadein 1.0 + pause .5 - show fang shocked with dissolve + scene room anon day + show fang neutral: + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.35 + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + "I hold the door open for Naser. He hesitates to enter so I look in to see Fang sat on my bed mashing away on The Duke furiously." + pause .5 + + show anon: + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2 + show anon neutral flip: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.8 + with dissolve + pause .5 + + show naser: + yalign 0.1 xalign 2.2 + show naser neutral flip: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.7 + with dissolve + pause 1 + + stop ambient fadeout 2 + play music "audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg" fadein 1.0 + show fang: + easein_quart 1.5 xalign -0.4 + show fang shocked with Dissolve(.25) F "Naser?!" A "Don’t freak out, he’s just here to- wait." + pause .5 A "Why are you playing rockband with a controller?" - show fang surprised + show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 F "You mean I was doing it wrong?" + pause .5 A "And my account was locked, how did you even get that to start?" + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) F "Dude, your password was ‘RAYmba’." + pause .5 - show fang angry with dissolve - + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "Who cares about that, why’s {i}he{/i} here?" + pause .5 "Naser waves dismissively." - show naser unimpressed flip - + show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Well, Anon, you’re welcome for the ride, I’ll just be going now." - show naser neutral + pause .5 - pause 0.4 - - show fang neutral + show naser: + easeout_cubic 1 xalign 2.0 + pause .25 + show naser unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + show fang neutral with dissolve F "-Wait, Naser." + show naser considering with Dissolve(.25) "He freezes halfway out the door." + pause .5 - F "... How much do you know?" + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}How much do you know?" + pause .5 - show naser neutral flip - - Nas "Uh… Know?" + show naser: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.7 + show naser neutral flip with dissolve + Nas "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} know?" F "About me and Anon." + pause .5 Nas "Anon filled me in earlier." - show fang shocked with dissolve - + show fang: + easein_quart 1.5 xalign -0.2 + show fang shocked with Dissolve(.25) F "You what?!" A "Fang, don’t worry, he’s cool!" F "You weren’t planning on telling Dad I’m here, were you?" - Nas "... No, I wasn’t." + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No, I wasn’t." F "I’m serious, you can’t tell him, he’d kill Anon!" + show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "No, really, I wasn’t going to tell." - - show naser unimpressed flip + pause .5 F "Please, Naser, I need to know for absolute sure." - show naser annoyed flip + stop music fadeout 4 + play ambient 'audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg' fadein 3 + show naser annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "God damn it, Fang!" Nas "Why don’t you trust me with even this?!" + pause .5 show fang sad with dissolve + pause .5 "Naser inhales deeply and turns towards the door." show naser unimpressed with dissolve - Nas "Sorry. I’m going now. I won’t tell, I swear." - F "..." + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - F "It’s not that I don’t trust you…" + F "It’s not that I don’t trust you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show naser considering with dissolve "He pauses again with his hand on the doorknob." + pause .5 - show anon neutral + show naser behind anon + show anon neutral + with dissolve "Like Spears’ did numerous times in the past, I take hold of Nasers’ shoulder." - show anon neutral flip + "I offer a reassuring smile and nod back towards Fang." - show anon neutral + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "..." + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Then what? Why do you hate me?" + pause .5 - show naser neutral + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1 + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t hate you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Nas "... Then what? Why do you hate me?" + F "Every time I see{cps=*.1}...{/cps} those{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 - F "... I don’t hate you…" - - F "Every time I see… those…" - - Nas "Those…?" + Nas "Those{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" F "Your scars, I mean." + pause .5 F "I just remember that day back then." + pause .5 Nas "What does that have to do with anything?" + pause .5 - show fang hiding + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.3 + show fang very sad with dissolve + pause .5 F "I mean, It’s my fault, isn’t it?" F "I lied to you, and you got hurt." - Nas "..." + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 F "But it’s like you don’t blame me, even though you should." - - show naser sad with dissolve + pause .5 F "Everyone depends on you, you’re the star player at school, but it’s in spite of your family instead of because of it." - F "You can’t even bring yourself to hate me…" + show fang hiding with Dissolve(1) + F "You can’t even bring yourself to hate me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + show naser sad with Dissolve(.25) Nas "All this time, that’s what this was about?" + pause .5 + + show fang sad with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "Fang wipes away a tear with her wing and nods." + pause .5 - "Naser brushes my hand off his shoulder and turns around." - + show anon: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.7 + with None + pause .5 show naser sad flip with dissolve + "Naser brushes my hand off his shoulder and turns around." + pause .5 Nas "I don’t hate you because I don’t blame you for anything, Fang." - show fang sad with dissolve - Nas "Back then, we were only kids, I was eleven? Twelve?" - + pause .5 + + show naser brooding flip with dissolve Nas "I was always thinking I’d done something wrong because of how you acted differently since then." Nas "I thought you hated me." + pause .5 Nas "I mean, look at all the shit I’ve ruined for you." Nas "Band practices, shows, parties, hell, dates even." + pause .5 Nas "All I ever do is ruin things for you." Nas "And when I did I’d always get told off by Trish." + pause .5 "A part of me wants to groan at just the mention of her name." - show fang very sad + show fang unimpressed show naser unimpressed flip + with dissolve + pause .5 - "Oh… I think I did since both Naser and Fang are looking at me." + stop ambient fadeout 4 play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0 - A "Ahaha…" + "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I think I did since both Naser and Fang are looking at me." + pause .5 - show fang neutral with dissolve + A "Ahaha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "Urgh, way to ruin the moment Anon." + show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Real smooth, man. Real smooth." - show anon neutral - + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6 + show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25) A "Oh come on, you two were finally making progress." - show fang happy with dissolve - + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) F "Remind me why we’re dating again?" + + show anon neutral flip with dissolve + pause .5 - show anon neutral flip - + show naser happy flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Hey, he’s your boyfriend. Cut him some slack." + show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) A "What’s that supposed to mean?!" - show naser happy flip with dissolve - "The siblings chuckle lightly at my expense." - "The things I do for people…" + "The things I do for people{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 "Once the laughter ends Fang looks at Naser." - F "Look, Naser, for all of Anon’s faults I do like him." - - show fang sad + show fang neutral show naser neutral flip - with dissolve + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + + F "Look, Naser, for all of Anon’s faults I do like him." + pause .5 F "Which is why I’d rather dad not arrest him and kill him." + pause .5 - F "I know I haven’t been a good… sibling…" + F "I know I haven’t been a good{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sibling{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" F "But I’m begging you here." + pause .5 Nas "I told you before, I won’t tell." Nas "Just be sure to come home later tonight." - show fang angry with dissolve - + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) "Fang hisses and looks away." + pause .5 - show naser unimpressed flip - - Nas "...You ARE coming home tonight, right?" + show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You ARE coming home tonight, right?" show fang considering with dissolve - F "Weeeeell…" + F "{cps=*.2}Weeeeell{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) A "What-" + show naser: + easein_quart 1 xalign 1.5 + show naser surprised flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "WHAT?!" + pause .5 - show fang happy with dissolve - + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) F "I need to stay to look after my idiot boyfriend." + pause .5 - show anon fear with dissolve + A "{cps=*.6}I don’t need-{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}" + show fang: + easein_back .75 xalign 0.2 + show anon fear flip behind fang: + easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.65 + extend "{cps=*3}AIIIEEE!{/cps}" + pause .5 - A "I don’t need- AIIIEEE!" + show fang: + ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.3 "Fang withdraws her finger from the bruise on my chest." - show anon sad with dissolve - + show anon sad flip with dissolve A "FUCK! God, again with the tests?" + pause .5 - show anon neutral with dissolve - + show naser brooding flip with dissolve Nas "What am I supposed to tell dad then? Hell, what have you been telling him?" F "That I’ve been staying at Naomi’s place for a group project." + + show anon neutral flip + show naser neutral flip + with dissolve + A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "..." - - Nas "..." + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "Well I can’t say I’m staying at Trish or Reed’s place." + pause .5 + show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "But Naomi?" + pause .5 + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) F "If I told dad I was staying at Anon’s place in Skin Row what do you think would happen?" - - Nas "...Okay, fair point." + + show naser neutral flip with dissolve + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Okay, fair point." + pause .5 A "Are you actually okay staying here though?" "Fang shrugs and looks away." - show anon neutral - - F "S’not bad. Just… boring when I’m all alone." + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) + F "S’not bad. Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} boring when I’m all alone." F "And there’s not much to eat here." + pause .5 A "Well let’s fix that last part then." - + + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) "I get a questioning look from Fang as I take one of the grocery bags from Naser." + show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25) "Her eyes instantly lock onto the hefty back of dinosaur shaped chicken nuggets I take out." + show anon neutral with dissolve A "You gonna stay for dinner Naser?" + pause .5 - Nas "I want to but-" + Nas "{cps=*.6}I want to but-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + + # TODO: car alarm sfx, can also be used in ch5 for Fang's car kicking + show naser: + easein_elastic 1 xalign 1.7 + show naser shocked flip with Dissolve(.25) - show fang surprised - show naser shocked flip - with dissolve "The loud blaring of a car alarm has Naser drop the rest of the bags onto the floor and rush out the door." Nas "Shit! The NasCar!" + + show naser: + easeout_cubic 0.6 xalign 2.6 + pause .1 hide naser with dissolve - A "Huh… Guess he wasn’t wrong about the carjacking thing." + pause 1 + + A "Huh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Guess he wasn’t wrong about the carjacking thing." + pause .5 + show anon neutral flip with dissolve "I turn back to Fang." + pause .5 "Whose currently writing her name on the bag of tenders." + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) F "Mine." + pause .5 + show anon: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.5 A "Fang you can’t hog-" + show fang: + easein_back 0.5 xalign -0.15 + show anon: + easein_quart 1.2 xalign 0.65 + show fang angry with Dissolve(.1) F "*hiss*" + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 A "Did you just hiss at me?!" + pause .5 + show fang considering flip with dissolve F "Mine." - + pause .5 + + show fang happy flip with dissolve "We ended up watching Top Spear until midnight while Fang hogged her bag of nuggies." - stop music fadeout 1.0 - scene black with fade - "..." - scene outside school with fade + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 4 + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg" fadein 1.0 + scene outside school with Dissolve(1) + "I was ready for an uneventful day of school." "In fact I’d be extremely happy if it was." @@ -1263,93 +1602,8 @@ label chapter_11: "..." - #Mending Things label .MendingThings: - scene hallway with fade - show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve - "Today needs to end. Now." - stop music fadeout 1.0 - play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0 - - "I have a backpack full of missed assignments, including Mr. Tsuki’s essay on the history of typefaces." - - "Who the fuck cares about typefaces?!" - - "Worst samurai english teacher ever." - - "My ribs are burning as I heave a sigh." - - "At least I can go home now." - - "Where my hot ptero Gee Eff is waiting." - - "..." - - "My hot ptero girlfriend who may or may not be having a mental breakdown in my apartment." - - "And I have no idea what to do with a fucking girlfriend. All those hours of dating simulators have not adequately simulated dating in the least." - - "Just as I exit the main doors of Volcano High my phone buzzes against one particularly bad bruise on my leg." - show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom - "Fingers crossed it’s Fang." - - "{i}Naser We need to talk{/i}" - - "{i}Naser Meet me in the auditorium{/i}" - - "I’m going to die." - hide anonphone with moveoutbottom - unknown "You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!" - - "... Best to get it over with now." - - "I meander my way to the school’s auditorium." - scene auditorium - show anon neutral at aleft - "Some of the lights are off when I get there, but I can make out Naser’s outline sitting alone in the front row." - - "He doesn’t turn to look at me when I enter or walk down the aisle." - - "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." - - "Some of the lights are off when I get there, but I can make out Naser’s outline sitting alone in the front row." - - "He doesn’t turn to look at me when I enter or walk down the aisle." - - "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." - - show naser neutral flip at ncenter with fade - A "You uh… wanted to talk to me?" - - Nas "..." - - "I fold down the seat next to his." - - A "Funny, this is the same seat as the one I was in a few days ago." - - Nas "Hm…" - - A "... Why did you call me here?" - - Nas "Just… Shut up. Let me think." - - "He fixes his gaze at the stage curtains." - - "I can see the gears in his head turning, but his expression is telling me he doesn’t actually know what he wants to do." - - Nas "I shouldn’t have pushed you earlier." - - Nas "Sorry. It was a moment of weakness." - - A "Don’t worry about it, I can take a hit or two." - - "He silently nods." - - Nas "When you told me Fang could kiss you because you told her your feelings… I can’t really describe it." - - Nas "Don’t take it the wrong way, but my mind just screamed at me ‘worst case scenario’." - A "It’s because I’m human, isn’t it." Nas "Just picture the fucked up flipper ba- hey! Anon this is serious!" @@ -1400,9 +1654,9 @@ label chapter_11: Nas "Hell, even Reed tells me how she’s doing sometimes." - Nas "Fucking hell, Anon, tell me: Why do I gotta hear about how Fang feels from Trish, Reed, and now YOU? What's so POISONOUS about me she can't tell me this shit ''THEMSELF''?" + Nas "Fucking hell, Anon, tell me: Why do I gotta hear about how Fang feels from Trish, Reed, and now YOU? What's so POISONOUS about me she can't tell me this shit \"THEMSELF\"?" - Nas "WHY do I aggravate ''THEM'' so much?" + Nas "WHY do I aggravate \"THEM\" so much?" A "Dude!" @@ -1415,75 +1669,66 @@ label chapter_11: Nas "What did I ever do to her…?" if wingStory: - jump wingA - else: - jump wingB - label wingA: + A "I-er…" - A "I-er…" + Nas "What, do you know?" - Nas "What, do you know?" + A "I’m thinking the two of you might be in the same boat, actually." - A "I’m thinking the two of you might be in the same boat, actually." + Nas "Wh-shut up." - Nas "Wh-shut up." + A "She told me a while back… she does want to reconnect with you, but…" - A "She told me a while back… she does want to reconnect with you, but…" + Nas "She’s afraid of me?" - Nas "She’s afraid of me?" + A "Herself. She’s been beating herself up ever since that… Thing that happened." - A "Herself. She’s been beating herself up ever since that… Thing that happened." + A "Still thinks you blame her." - A "Still thinks you blame her." + Nas "What thing?" - Nas "What thing?" + "I gesture to one of his scars." - "I gesture to one of his scars." + Nas "What?" - Nas "What?" + Nas "You're not serious, it's over THAT shit? From fucking YEARS ago?" - Nas "You're not serious, it's over THAT shit? From fucking YEARS ago?" + A "She was in tears when she told me." - A "She was in tears when she told me." + Nas "Holy shit, shut up." - Nas "Holy shit, shut up." + A "Why don't you ask her yourself?" - A "Why don't you ask her yourself?" + Nas "I told you already, she won’t even glance my direction." - Nas "I told you already, she won’t even glance my direction." + Nas "..." - Nas "..." + Nas "Why would it be about that? I was just a little retarded kid then. I didn't blame her for one second." - Nas "Why would it be about that? I was just a little retarded kid then. I didn't blame her for one second." + Nas "Not for one second..." - Nas "Not for one second..." + "He turns his head aside." - "He turns his head aside." + Nas "You know what happened while I was at the hospital recovering?" - Nas "You know what happened while I was at the hospital recovering?" + Nas "She never showed up. I don't know why." - Nas "She never showed up. I don't know why." + Nas "Mom and Dad were always there with me but Fang never saw me in the hospital." - Nas "Mom and Dad were always there with me but Fang never saw me in the hospital." + Nas "I wanted to see her the most." - Nas "I wanted to see her the most." + Nas "I worryingly asked mom and dad every day where Fang was." - Nas "I worryingly asked mom and dad every day where Fang was." + Nas "When I’d get restless, they had to keep telling me Fang was close by in the building, or at home, safe." - Nas "When I’d get restless, they had to keep telling me Fang was close by in the building, or at home, safe." + Nas "I didn't cry when I rolled down a cliff and broke every bone in my body, but every night when I was alone in that hospital room I cried like a baby thinking I had disappointed my sister by doing this to her." - Nas "I didn't cry when I rolled down a cliff and broke every bone in my body, but every night when I was alone in that hospital room I cried like a baby thinking I had disappointed my sister by doing this to her." + A "You think it's your fault?" - A "You think it's your fault?" + Nas "Yes! It’s all I do! It’s all I’ll ever do! Ruin my sister’s life!" - Nas "Yes! It’s all I do! It’s all I’ll ever do! Ruin my sister’s life!" - - Nas "..." - - jump wingB - - label wingB: + Nas "..." Nas "Man..." @@ -2968,93 +3213,8 @@ label chapter_11: "..." - #Breaking Things label .BreakingThings: - scene hallway with fade - show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve - "Today needs to end. Now." - - "I have a backpack full of missed assignments, including Mr. Tsuki’s essay on the history of typefaces." - - "Who the fuck cares about typefaces?!" - - "Worst samurai english teacher ever." - - "My ribs are burning as I heave a sigh." - - "At least I can go home now." - - "Where my hot ptero Gee Eff is waiting." - - "..." - - "My hot ptero girlfriend who may or may not be having a mental breakdown in my apartment." - - "And I have no idea what to do with a fucking girlfriend. All those hours of dating simulators have not adequately simulated dating in the least." - - "Just as I exit the main doors of Volcano High my phone buzzes against one particularly bad bruise on my leg." - show anonphone at center with moveinbottom - "Fingers crossed it’s Fang." - - "{i}Naser: We need to talk{/i}" - - "{i}Naser: Meet me in the auditorium{/i}" - - "I’m going to die." - hide anonphone with moveoutbottom - unknown "You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!" - - "... Best to get it over with now." - - "I meander my way to the school’s auditorium." - play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0 - scene auditorium - show anon neutral at aleft - "Some of the lights are off when I get there, but I can make out Naser’s outline sitting alone in the front row." - - "He doesn’t turn to look at me when I enter or walk down the aisle." - - "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." - - "Some of the lights are off when I get there, but I can make out Naser’s outline sitting alone in the front row." - - "He doesn’t turn to look at me when I enter or walk down the aisle." - - "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." - - show naser neutral flip at ncenter with fade - - A "You uh… wanted to talk to me?" - - Nas "..." - - "I fold down the seat next to his." - - A "Funny, this is the same seat as the one I was in a few days ago." - - Nas "Hm…" - - A "... Why did you call me here?" - - Nas "Just… Shut up. Let me think." - - "He fixes his gaze at the stage curtains." - - "I can see the gears in his head turning, but his expression is telling me he doesn’t actually know what he wants to do." - - Nas "I shouldn’t have pushed you yesterday." - - Nas "Sorry. It was a moment of weakness." - - A "Don’t worry about it, I can take a hit or two." - - "He silently nods." - - Nas "When you told me Fang could kiss you because you told her your feelings… I can’t really describe it." - - Nas "Don’t take it the wrong way, but my mind just screamed at me ‘worst case scenario’." - A "I don’t follow." Nas "Like, uh… I told you a while back how I can’t do anything to help my sister."