ch6 tweaks from feedback
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@ -6,5 +6,5 @@ WoodSnap.wav - "Snapping, Wooden Fence, N.wav" by InspectorJ (www.jshaw.co.uk) o
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firealarm.ogg - "School Fire Alarm" by Cullen Card
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shot.ogg - "38 Caliber Gun Shot 5x" by Mike Koenig
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wind.wav - "Wind" by Mark DiAngelo
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punch.ogg - "Strong Punch" by Mike Koenig
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menacing.ogg - "Scaryscape 01" by Suonho (soundcloud.com/suonho) of Freesound.org
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rumble.ogg - "CinematicBoomNorm" by Herbert Boland
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sizzle.ogg - "Hot Sizzling" by Mike Koenig
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@ -65,7 +65,11 @@ label chapter_6:
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"Fang:{fast}{w=.3} Do you want to come with?"
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pause .5
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alone{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}{w=.4} No,{w=.2} shut the fuck up alarms."
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alone{nw}"
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play sound 'audio/effects/alarmklaxonloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
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extend "{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}{w=.4} No,{w=.2} shut the fuck up alarms."
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stop sound fadeout 3
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"Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Why alone?"
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@ -82,6 +86,7 @@ label chapter_6:
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#cut to Reed in bathroom cg
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Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Dude{w=.2} like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} back to the story{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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#cut back to Anon
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"Anon:{fast}{w=.3} Alright, where we dropping?"
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@ -179,11 +184,14 @@ label chapter_6:
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show anon:
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easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.1
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pause 1.5
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pause 1.25
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stop ambient fadeout 3
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play music "audio/OST/Tracy was fired from her real job.ogg"
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show anon:
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easein_back 1 xalign 0.1
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SV "Some storm,{w=.5} eh?"
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pause .5
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@ -226,7 +234,9 @@ label chapter_6:
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A "Maybe later.{w=.4} I’ll keep it in mind."
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pause .5
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show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
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show tracy unimpressed
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show anon neutral flip
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with dissolve
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"I turn to leave,{w=.4} behind me I hear the vendor mutter to herself."
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show anon:
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@ -291,24 +301,29 @@ label chapter_6:
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menu:
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"Knock":
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stop ambient fadeout 1
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pause .5
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"Before my knuckles reach the door it swings open."
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"Text Fang":
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stop ambient fadeout 1
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pause .5
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"Before I can hit ‘Send’ the door swings open."
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stop ambient fadeout 1
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pause .5
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play music "audio/OST/Prized Bowling Ball.ogg" fadein 1.0
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play music "audio/OST/Prized Bowling Ball.ogg" fadein 0.6
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# TODO: thunder or other sudden-but-lingering bassy rumble
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play sound 'audio/effects/rumble.ogg'
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play ambient 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' fadein 1
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show dimmer_light behind anon
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show dimmer_darker behind anon
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with vpunch
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hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(1)
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"{cps=*.5}{i}What is this killing intent?!{/i}{/cps}"
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stop ambient fadeout 3
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pause .5
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show fangdad neutral flip:
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@ -319,9 +334,14 @@ label chapter_6:
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pause .5
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unknown "Hm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} you Anon?"
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play ambient 'audio/effects/alarmclicheloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
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show dimmer_lighter behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
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"Shitshitshitalarms shut the fuck up right now please I need to think."
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pause .5
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stop ambient fadeout 1
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hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve
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A "Y-{w=.1}yeah,{w=.3} I’m Anon.{w=.4} P-{w=.2}pleased to m-{w=.4}meet you uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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@ -1176,7 +1196,7 @@ label chapter_6:
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scene park
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show naser neutral:
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xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0
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xalign 0.1 yalign 0.1
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show fang unimpressed flip:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
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show anon neutral flip:
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@ -2249,7 +2269,7 @@ label chapter_6:
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Nas "Dad said he’ll do to {i}me{/i} anything that you do to Fang!"
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pause .5
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"Anon, Fang & Naomi" "{cps=*.3}...What...{/cps}"
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"Anon Fang & Naomi" "{cps=*.3}...What...{/cps}"
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# F "...What..."
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# A "...What..."
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@ -2257,7 +2277,7 @@ label chapter_6:
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pause .5
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Nas "Fang,{w=.4} you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy."
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Nas "Fang,{w=.3} you gotta promise to not let Anon do anything creepy."
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pause .5
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show askfang2 with Dissolve(.25)
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@ -2345,9 +2365,13 @@ label chapter_6:
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"Now it’s just the two of us."
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"Alone."
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pause .5
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"Oh and there’s the alarms again.{w=.4} I think I’m finally starting to tune them out though."
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play ambient2 'audio/effects/alarmklaxonloop.ogg' fadein 0.5
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pause .5
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"Oh and there’s the alarms again.{w=.4} {nw}"
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stop ambient2 fadeout 4
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extend "I think I’m finally starting to tune them out though."
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pause .5
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stop ambient fadeout 3
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@ -2524,6 +2548,7 @@ label chapter_6:
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A "Living in the ass-end of this place,{w=.4} I’ve picked up a thing or two."
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pause .5
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$ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient')
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show black with dissolve
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"The two of us check the sparsely located buildings one by one."
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"Several hours pass as both the sun and the temperature drops."
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pause .5
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$ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 3, 'ambient')
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show fang unimpressed
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hide black with dissolve
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pause .5
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@ -2550,6 +2576,8 @@ label chapter_6:
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A "Still,{w=.4} we must have checked dozens of places by now."
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A "But why won’t anyone have a band?"
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stop ambient fadeout 4
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play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 1.0
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pause .5
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"He puts the device on,{w=.3} and it whirrs to life,{w=.4} slowly crossing the screen."
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pause .5
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"When it reaches the edge,{w=.3} it beeps and turned around,{w=.4} making a return trip to where it started."
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"When it reaches the edge,{w=.3} it beeps and turns around,{w=.4} making a return trip to where it started."
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"After a few trips,{w=.4} the merchant turns the roomba off and gives us an expectant leer."
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pause .5
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show fang angry:
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easein_back 0.4 xalign 0.05
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pause .25
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# TODO: possibly some kind of quick sizzle SFX?
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play sound 'audio/effects/sizzle.ogg'
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show anon:
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easein_quart 1 xalign 0.95
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pause .1
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show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
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F "But the venue{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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stop music fadeout 4
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A "We still have time.{w=.5} So,{w=.4} pizza first and then we find a place for your show."
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pause .5
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Moe "Someone say pizza?"
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play music 'audio/OST/Venetian Values.ogg' fadein 1
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pause .5
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show moe neutral flip behind fang:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.65
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Moe "Mister?{w=.5} Young punk ya don’ need ta be so formal."
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show anon:
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easein_back 1 xalign 0.75
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show moe:
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