change CTC icon, add ambient sound channel, rework 'nasers a bro' scenes

game/script.rpy

@@ -83,15 +83,32 @@ transform randPosition:
 # Click-to-continue icons / animations
 # TODO: these are sucky placeholders and need to be graced by an artfriend
 image ctc_end_marker:
-   "end_marker"
+   "pickicon2"
-   xalign 0.9 yalign 0.98
+   xalign 0.5 yalign 0.98
-   pause 0.5
+   linear 0.5 alpha 0
-   xalign 0.92
+   linear 0.5 alpha 1
-   pause 0.5
    repeat
 image ctc_mid_marker:
-   "mid_marker"
+   "pickicon2"
-   xalign 1 yalign 1
+   xalign 0.5 yalign 0.98
+   linear 0.5 alpha 0
+   linear 0.5 alpha 1
+   repeat
+
+# image ctc_end_marker:
+#    "pickicon"
+#    xalign 0.9 yalign 0.98
+#    pause 0.5
+#    xalign 0.92
+#    pause 0.5
+#    repeat
+# image ctc_mid_marker:
+#    "pickicon"
+#    xalign 0.9 yalign 0.98
+#    pause 0.5
+#    xalign 0.92
+#    pause 0.5
+#    repeat
 
 #Characters
 define base = Character (ctc="ctc_end_marker", ctc_pause="ctc_mid_marker", ctc_timedpause=Null(), ctc_position="fixed") # try to remember some of the basics of CTC

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -1062,11 +1062,15 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     hide naser with easeoutleft
 
-    Nas "Fa-{w=0.5}{nw}"
+    pause 0.5
+
+    Nas "Fa-{w=0.6}{nw}"
 
     window hide 
     with hpunch # TODO: some crash / crack SFX would punctuate these interruptions, think AA
 
+    pause 0.7
+
     "The voice on the other end is loud and shrill." 
 
     Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I-{w=0.5}{nw}"
@@ -1074,6 +1078,8 @@ label chapter_1:
     window hide 
     with hpunch
 
+    pause 0.7
+
     "He holds the phone away from his ear to save his eardrum."
 
     Nas "Okay okay I-"
@@ -1152,16 +1158,16 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I don’t know too much about music,{w=0.4} but even I know that you don’t use two basses in one band unless you know exactly what you’re doing."
 
-    "{cps=*0.4}Ooooooh nooooooo.{/cps}"
+    "{cps=*0.3}Ooooooh nooooooo.{/cps}"
 
-    "{cps=*0.5}Ooooooooh{/cps} God."
+    "{cps=*0.3}Ooooooooh{/cps} God."
 
     "What were they thinking?!{fast}" with vpunch
 
     "I looked back to the crowd to gauge their interest."
 
     "Surely I’m not alone in thinking this is an absolute travesty."
-    unknown "PFFFT AHAHAHA THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK!!"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.5}PFFFT AHAHAHA{/cps}{w=0.4} THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK!!"
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 1.7 fadein 2.0
     
@@ -1253,7 +1259,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Sp "I don’t want to hear about any of this come tomorrow."
 
-    Sp "I expect some goddamned maturity from you,{w=0.2} Anon."
+    Sp "I expect some goddamned maturity from you,{w=0.3} Anon."
 
     Sp "You’ll be an adult once you graduate."
 
@@ -1261,9 +1267,10 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Sp "I’ve taught many students,{w=0.4} and I can tell these things."
 
-    show anon fear flip
     show spears:
         easein_quart 1.0 xalign 0.5
+    pause 1.0
+    show anon fear flip
 
     "His hand lands on my shoulder."
 
@@ -1303,7 +1310,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     with vpunch
     
 
-    Sp "{b}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/b}" # TODO: suitable SFX
+    Sp "{b}{cps=*0.5}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/cps}{/b}" # TODO: suitable SFX
 
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -1431,7 +1438,6 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 1
     scene black with fade
 
-
     # TODO: resolve accidental time warp? Anon has only been at school for a day here
     # "Opening the door blows the cool morning air in my face, and I stop to take a deep breath."
     # scene skinrow
@@ -1440,7 +1446,6 @@ label chapter_1:
     # scene outside school
     # show anon neutral at aleft
 
-
     play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
     show outside school fog with fade
 
@@ -1456,12 +1461,14 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I check my clock once again -{w=0.3} I’m early.{w=0.5} Fucking hell.{w=0.6} Should have shitposted a bit more."
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadeout 1 fadein 1
+    stop music fadeout 1
 
     "Why am I here so early again?"
 
     "Think I had to do something."
 
+    play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1
+
     "Oh yeah."
 
     "I should talk to Naser.{w=0.5} Give him my version of events."
@@ -1488,96 +1495,165 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     label .naserBro:
 
-    "Principal caveman can wait. I want to apologize to Naser about yesterday…"
+    "Principal caveman can wait.{w=0.4} I want to apologize to Naser about yesterday{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I hope I can be nice to him this time."
 
-    "Great job, Anon!"
+    "Great job,{w=0.3} Anon!"
 
-    "He saves you from soy poisoning by sacrificing his footlong, and how do you repay him? By laughing at his sister."
+    "He saves you from soy poisoning by sacrificing his footlong,{w=0.4} and how do you repay him?{w=0.6} By laughing at his sister."
 
-    "There he is, I hope he’s not too busy."
+    "There he is,{w=0.4} I hope he’s not too busy."
 
     "..."
 
     "I just realized I don’t know what to say to him"
 
-    "\"I wasn’t laughing AT your sister, I was laughing WITH the crowd\""
+    "\"I wasn’t laughing AT your sister,{w=0.4} I was laughing WITH the crowd\""
 
-    "No, that sounds bad"
+    "No,{w=0.3} that sounds bad"
 
-    "\"Weird sisters, amirite?\""
+    "\"Weird sisters,{w=0.2} amirite?\""
 
-    "I might be retarded. I just told him I’m an only son yesterday."
+    "I might be retarded.{w=0.5} I just told him I’m an only son yesterday."
 
-    "\"Can’t help it, dude. Some people just won’t amount to anything in life. Sorry.\""
+    "\"Can’t help it,{w=0.1} dude.{w=0.5} Some people just won’t amount to anything in life.{w=0.5} Sorry.\""
 
-    "This isn’t time to be edgy, Anon."
+    "This isn’t time to be edgy,{w=0.2} Anon."
 
     "As I try and fail to find some way to explain myself to Naser I also fail at actually finding Naser."
 
     "How the fuck did I even end up in the tard yard?"
 
+    window hide
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg'
+    pause 0.5
 
-    "What feels like a space decade of walking, or really just half an hour I find the crippled pteradon being accosted by a VERY pissed off purple midget."
+    stop music fadeout 1.0
-
-    unknown "-SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!" #trish
-
-    Nas "Wait, Trish, you don’t understand-!"
-
-    T "DON’T CUT ME OFF YOU GRAY PIECE OF SHIT!"
-
-    "Students are clearing out of the way, just trying to get to their classes."
     scene hallway with fade
-    show trish angry at tleft
+
-    show naser neutral flip at nright
+    "After what feels like a space decade of walking,{w=0.4} or really just half an hour,{w=0.4} I find the crippled pteradon being accosted by a {cps=*0.1}VERY{/cps} pissed off purple midget."
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg' fadein 0.5
+
+    # show trish angry at tleft
+    show trish angry:
+        yalign 0.1
+        linear 0.05 xalign 0.005
+        linear 0.05 xalign 0
+        repeat
+    show naser neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign 1.3
+    with Dissolve(1.5)
+
+    unknown "{cps=*0.4}-SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish
+
+    show naser explanatory flip
+
+    Nas "Wait,{w=0.3} Trish,{w=0.4} you don’t understand-!"
+
+    show naser 
+
+    show trish at tleft
+
+    T "DON’T CUT ME OFF YOU GRAY PIECE OF SHIT!" with vpunch
+
+    show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
+
+    "Students are clearing out of the way,{w=0.4} just trying to get to their classes."
 
     "This must be a common occurrence."
 
-    "The diminutive triceratops, Trish, bows her head and charges Naser."
+    show trish:
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.05
+        pause 0.5
+        easein_quart 0.5 xalign -0.15
+
+    pause 1.5
+
+    "The diminutive triceratops,{w=0.4} Trish,{w=0.4} bows her head and charges Naser."
+
+    # show naser shocked flip behind trish
+    show trish fury with Dissolve(0.25):
+        yanchor 0
+        ypos 0.35
+        easeout_quart 0.6 xalign 0.4
+
+    pause 0.3
+
+    show naser shocked flip behind trish:
+        easein_quart 0.2 xalign 1.45
+    show trish:
+        easein_quart 0.2 xalign 0.5
+    with hpunch
+    
+    pause 1
 
     "He just holds a hand out to her forehead."
-    show naser shocked flip at nright behind trish with dissolve
-    show trish fury:
-        xalign 0.0 yalign 10.0
-    show trish fury with move:
-        xalign 0.75 yalign 10.0
 
-    T "GET YOUR HANDS OFF ME!!"
+    # 0.5
+    show trish:
+        easeout_quart 0.4 xalign 0.525
+        pause 0.2
+        easeout_quart 0.4 xalign 0.55
+        pause 0.3
+        linear 0.3 xalign 0.49
+        pause 0.4
+        repeat
+    # 1.45
+    show naser:
+        easeout_quart 0.4 xalign 1.475
+        pause 0.2
+        easeout_quart 0.4 xalign 1.5
+        pause 0.3
+        linear 0.3 xalign 1.4
+        pause 0.4
+        repeat
 
-    Nas "Trish, I’m not going to fight you again."
+    T "GET YOUR HANDS OFF ME!!" with vpunch
+
+    Nas "Trish,{w=0.2} I’m not going to fight you again."
 
     Nas "The principal’s already gotten onto me about the lockers from last time."
 
-    Nas "Believe me, I had no idea the concert would have turned out like that."
+    Nas "Believe me,{w=0.3} I had no idea the concert would have turned out like that."
 
-    T "LIAR!!"
+    T "{b}LIAR!!{/b}" with vpunch
 
     Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-"
 
     T "WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?!?"
 
-    Nas "You know what I mean, come on..."
+    Nas "You know what I mean,{w=0.4} come on{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     T "Argh!"
 
-    show trish angry at ncenter with dissolve
+    show trish angry at tcenter with Dissolve(.25)
+    show naser:
+        xalign 1.6
+    with ease
 
     "She stops trying to gore Naser and throws her arms to her sides."
 
-    show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+
+    show trish:
+        easein_quart 1.0 xalign 0.4
 
     T "Screw you!"
 
+    show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
     T "Even if you weren’t trying to mess with Fang!"
 
-    T "Screw! You!"
+    T "Screw!{w=0.4} You!"
 
     "She stomps off."
 
-    hide trish with moveoutright
+    stop music fadeout 1.5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 1.5
+    hide trish with Dissolve(1.5)
 
     show naser annoyed flip with dissolve
 
@@ -1586,114 +1662,175 @@ label chapter_1:
     show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
     A "What was that all about?"
 
-    show naomi neutral flip with moveinright:
+    show naomi considering flip behind naser with easeinright:
          xalign 0.6
 
-    N "Oh, Anon."
+    N "Oh,{w=0.3} Anon."
 
-    N "Don’t worry about it, it’s nothing."
+    show naomi neutral flip
 
-    Nas "Y’know, girl issues, right? Haha..."
+    N "Don’t worry about it,{w=0.3} it’s nothing."
 
-    show naser sad flip with dissolve
+    show naomi explanatory flip
 
-    A "Sure…"
+    Nas "Y’know,{w=0.5} girl issues,{w=0.2} right?{w=0.5} {cps=*0.15}Haha...{/cps}"
+
+    show naomi neutral flip
+    show naser sad flip 
+    with dissolve
+
+    A "{cps=*0.4}Sure...{/cps}"
 
     A "Sounds like she was grilling you about the concert."
 
-    Nas "..."
+    Nas "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "Some concert, right?"
+    show naomi explanatory flip
 
-    A "Actually, about that…"
+    N "Some concert,{w=0.3} right?"
 
-    A "I, uhh…"
+    show naomi neutral flip
 
-    #play sound "audio/PANoise.ogg"
+    A "Actually,{w=0.5} about that{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
-    pause 1
+
-    Sp "ANON MOUS, IF YOU ARE NOT IN MY OFFICE WITHIN TEN MINUTES I SWEAR ON MY DEAR FAMILY I WILL PERSONALLY MOUNT YOU ON MY WALL."
+    A "I,{w=0.3} uhh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
-    #play sound "audio/PANoise.ogg"
+
+    #TODO: play sound "audio/PANoise.ogg"
     pause 1
 
-    A "..."
+    show naomi shocked flip
+
+    Sp "ANON MOUS,{w=0.4} IF YOU ARE NOT IN MY OFFICE WITHIN TEN MINUTES I SWEAR ON MY DEAR FAMILY I WILL PERSONALLY MOUNT YOU ON MY WALL." with vpunch
+    #TODO: play sound "audio/PANoise.ogg"
+
+    pause 1
+
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    A "{cps=*0.1}..."
 
     "A layer of cold sweat makes its presence known."
 
-    show naser neutral with dissolve
+    show naser considering
+    with dissolve 
 
-    Nas "It can wait, the office is down this hall on the right."
+    Nas "It can wait,{w=0.5} the office is down this hall on the right."
 
-    A "I know the way, but thanks."
+    A "I know the way,{w=0.3} but thanks."
 
     "Naser waves and heads off."
 
-    hide naomi with moveoutleft
+    hide naser
+    hide naomi
+    with Dissolve(1.0)
 
-    "Guess it’s to the principal’s office with me. Again."
+    "Guess it’s to the principal’s office with me.{w=0.3} Again."
 
     "And thinking about him makes me think about last night."
 
-    Sp "{i}You are not the only person in the world.{/i}"
+    Sp "{cps=*0.6}{i}You are not the only person in the world.{/i}{/cps}"
 
-    "Poor Naser, man. Just wanted to help his sister."
+    "Poor Naser,{w=0.3} man.{w=0.5} Just wanted to help his sister."
 
     "But it’s not like he did anything wrong."
 
     scene hallway
-    show naomi angry at scenter
+    show naomi unimpressed at sleft
-    show reed explanatory flip at rright
+    show reed neutral flip behind naomi:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2
     with fade
+
     "Just as I reach the office the sound of clinking glass draws my attention to the apricot asspain and some pink raptor."
 
-    N "Is that contraband, Reed?"
+    show naomi angry with Dissolve(0.25)
 
-    Re "Bro, you’ve known I’m in a band for like, a year now."
+    N "Is that contraband,{w=0.3} Reed?"
 
-    N "No! Contraband! In your backpack!"
+    show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    show reed explanatory flip
 
-    Re "Hmmm… nah, I left my games at home."
+    Re "Bro,{w=0.4} you’ve known I’m in a band for like,{w=0.4} a year now."
 
-    "Naomi facepalms, or whatever counts as a facepalm with a snout."
+    show reed neutral flip
+    show naomi angry:
+        easein 0.25 xalign 0.1
+    pause 0.25
 
-    N "Reed! You have a bong in your backpack!"
+    N "No!{w=0.5} Contraband!{w=0.5} In your backpack!"
 
-    Re "...But we aren’t in Britain?"
+    Re "{cps=*0.2}Hmmm...{/cps}{w=0.4}{nw}"
+    show reed explanatory flip
+    Re "Hmmm...{fast} nah, I left my games at home."
 
-    N "Ugh, you’re impossible…"
+    show reed neutral flip
+    show naomi unimpressed with dissolve
 
-    hide naomi with moveoutright
+    "Naomi facepalms,{w=0.4} or whatever counts as a facepalm with a snout."
+
+    show naomi angry:
+        easein .25 xalign 0.45
+
+    N "Reed!{fast}{w=0.7} You have a bong in your backpack!" with vpunch
+
+    Re "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}But we aren’t in Britain?"
+
+    show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    N "Ugh,{w=0.3} you’re impossible{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
+    # hide naomi with easeoutright
+    hide naomi with Dissolve(1)
 
     "Naomi huffs and returns her focus to a stack of papers on the desk, leaving a satisfied raptor in her wake."
 
-    show reed happy flip with dissolve
+    show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    Re "Heh, works every time…"
+    Re "Heh,{w=0.4} works every time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I need to learn how to do that."
 
-    Re "S’all ‘bout misdirection…"
+    show reed neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    Re "S’all ‘bout misdirection{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "What."
 
+    show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
     Re "Deuces."
 
-    hide reed with moveoutright
+    hide reed with easeoutright
+
+    pause 1.5
 
     "The fuck just happened?"
 
-    show naomi neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
+    window hide
+    pause 0.5
 
-    N "Oh! Anon, I didn’t see you there!"
+    show naomi neutral flip at scenter 
+    with Dissolve(1.0)
+
+    show naomi explanatory flip
+
+    N "Oh!{w=0.5} Anon,{w=0.3} I didn’t see you there!"
+
+    show naomi neutral flip
 
     N "Just in time to finish your paperwork!"
 
     A "Paperwhatsit now?"
 
-    N "Go inside, Principal Spears will finalize it with you now."
+    show naomi explanatory flip
 
-    "Paperwork? What fucking paperwork? I’m pretty sure all that stuff was finished before I even came here."
+    N "Go inside,{w=0.4} Principal Spears will finalize it with you now."
 
-    "Whatever. Probably a detention slip or whatever the principal has planned."
+    show naomi neutral flip
+
+    "Paperwork?{w=0.5} What fucking paperwork?{w=0.5} I’m pretty sure all that stuff was finished before I even came here."
+
+    "Whatever.{w=0.6} Probably a detention slip or whatever the principal has planned."
 
     scene office spears with dissolve