rework ch11 'sorting things' route
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@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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"While I’m checking for any more broken bones my phone buzzes."
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stop ambient fadeout 3
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play music 'audio/OST/intercept.ogg' fadein 1.0
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play music 'audio/ost/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 1
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pause .5
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show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
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@ -381,7 +381,6 @@ label chapter_11:
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"I’ll worry about that when I get home."
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pause .5
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stop music fadeout 3
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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@ -391,7 +390,6 @@ label chapter_11:
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#Naser Drama
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#THIS SECTION IS SCORE DEPENDENT
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play music 'audio/ost/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 1
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scene hallway
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show anon neutral at acenter
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with dissolve
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@ -435,11 +433,12 @@ label chapter_11:
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"I’m going to die."
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pause .5
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unknown "You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!"
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unknown "{size=-5}You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!{/size}"
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pause .5
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show anon neutral with dissolve
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Best to get it over with now."
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pause .5
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"I meander my way to the school’s auditorium."
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pause .5
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@ -458,7 +457,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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"He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side."
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pause .5
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play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0
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play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0 noloop
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show naser considering:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
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with Dissolve(1)
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@ -714,7 +713,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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show anon neutral
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show naser neutral flip
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with dissolve
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with Dissolve(.75)
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pause .5
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Nas "Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Let me get this straight."
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@ -736,7 +735,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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A "That a challenge?"
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show naser surprised flip with Dissolve(.25)
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Nas "Wha-are you even paying attention?"
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Nas "Wha- are you even paying attention?"
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A "I can be a great boyfriend, just you watch."
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@ -834,6 +833,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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pause .5
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Nas "Next, either get a good supply of earplugs or say goodbye to your sense of hearing entirely. She can and will stay up until two a.m. listening to music on full blast."
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pause .5
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"Naser tells me more information about Fang than I probably should have known."
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@ -946,6 +946,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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pause .5
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A "Probably a good idea to not get confrontational or anything, yeah?"
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pause .5
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"Naser nods and I unlock the door."
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pause .5
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@ -1274,7 +1275,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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A "FUCK! God, again with the tests?"
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pause .5
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show naser brooding flip with dissolve
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show naser annoyed flip with dissolve
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Nas "What am I supposed to tell dad then? Hell, what have you been telling him?"
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F "That I’ve been staying at Naomi’s place for a group project."
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@ -1302,6 +1303,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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pause .5
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A "Are you actually okay staying here though?"
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pause .5
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"Fang shrugs and looks away."
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@ -1378,7 +1380,7 @@ label chapter_11:
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"We ended up watching Top Spear until midnight while Fang hogged her bag of nuggies."
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pause .5
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stop music fadeout 4
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stop music fadeout 3
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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@ -1387,122 +1389,191 @@ label chapter_11:
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play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg" fadein 1.0
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scene outside school with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"I was ready for an uneventful day of school."
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"In fact I’d be extremely happy if it was."
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pause .5
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"This entire week has been the most dramatic in my life."
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"Even the walk to school was dramatic, with Fang escorting me as if she was Secret Service."
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pause .5
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"In English class I’m still trying to catch up with the rest of the class."
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scene classroom with fade
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pause .5
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"In English I’m still trying to catch up with the rest of the class."
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"In any other class I’d have been caught up, but Mr. Tsuki is an absolute slave driver."
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pause .5
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"My phone buzzes, and I try to tell myself it’s not worth getting distracted."
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"The next question is on Serif’s history, however, and I decide it’s not worth it."
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show anonphone at center with moveinbottom
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"Fang: Ughh"
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pause .5
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"Fang: Pleeeease tell me your morning is going better than mine"
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show anonphone at center with easeinbottom
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pause .5
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"Anon: could be better, why?"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Ughh"
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"Fang: I didnt even think of Trish"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Pleeeease tell me your morning is going better than mine"
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pause .5
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"Fang: She hasnt seen me in two days and is trying to bother me with band stuff"
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"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} could be better, why?"
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pause .5
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"Fang: Shes reeeaaaally not taking me taking a break well"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} I didnt even think of Trish"
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"Anon: oh. you serious about quitting music and all that?"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} She hasnt seen me in two days and is trying to bother me with band stuff"
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pause .5
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"Fang: What :V"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Shes reeeaaaally not taking me taking a break well"
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pause .5
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"Fang: Why would I quit music"
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"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} oh. you serious about quitting music and all that?"
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pause .5
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"Fang: Just taking off from the band for a while"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} What :V"
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"Anon: ah."
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Why would I quit music"
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"Fang: Think Trish gets the memo now"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Just taking off from the band for a while"
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pause .5
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"Fang: Apparently cold shoulder works wonders on her :V"
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"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} ah."
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pause .5
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"Anon: you think that’ll work for long?"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Think Trish gets the memo now"
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"Fang: No lol"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Apparently cold shoulder works wonders on her :V"
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pause .5
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"Fang: Will have to make distance at lunch"
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"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} you think that’ll work for long?"
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"Fang: Lets eat on the roof or something"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} No lol"
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"Anon: good idea"
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Will have to make distance at lunch"
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pause .5
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Lets eat on the roof or something"
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"{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} good idea"
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pause .5
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"She doesn’t respond further so I turn my attention back to the assignment."
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hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
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pause .5
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hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
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" ‘{i}Serif fonts can be broadly classified into one of four subgroups: old style, transitional, Didone and slab serif, in order of fir-{/i}-’ Nope."
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"Nope, just writing a review of BIIC: A PostPaleo RPG here."
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pause .5
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"(I passed the assignment.)"
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pause .5
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scene black with dissolve
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pause .5
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"After a torturous science period where Fang poked my bruises whenever she got bored lunch came around."
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scene cafeteria
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show fang happy at sleft
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show anon neutral at aright
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with fade
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"Fang and I got plates of country fried steak and start heading up the stairs, chattering about possibly seeing a movie this weekend."
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pause .5
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scene hallway
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show fang happy:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0
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show anon neutral:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3
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with fade
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F "-seemed like a Kong fan."
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pause .5
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A "Did Naser say that?"
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F "Maybe… But c’mon, it looked like it’d be a great movie."
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F "Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps} But c’mon, it looked like it’d be a great movie."
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pause .5
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"Before I can retort I hear footsteps rushing in from behind."
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pause .5
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show trish happy with dissolve:
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xalign -0.2
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show fang neutral with dissolve
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show trish happy:
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yalign 0.0 xalign -0.6
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show trish:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
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show fang neutral
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with dissolve
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T "Fang! I thought we’d be hanging out in the auditorium. Y’know, like usual?"
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pause .5
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scene hallway
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show fang neutral at sleft
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show anon neutral at aright
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show trish indignant:
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xalign -0.2
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with fade
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show fang:
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easeout 1 xalign 2.2
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pause .5
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hide fang with dissolve
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"Fang doesn’t even bat an eye and continues up the steps."
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hide fang with moveoutright
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show trish indignant with move:
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xalign 0.3
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show trish surprised with dissolve
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pause .5
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scene roof day broken with fade
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pause .5
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"Trish follows even as Fang starts taking the steps two at a time."
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T "Fang! C’mon!"
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"If the door was still there I’m pretty sure Fang would’ve kicked it open."
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pause .5
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show fang considering:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0
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show fang:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
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with dissolve
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"Instead she quickly turns with a huff and starts to scale the ladder one-handed."
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show fang:
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easeout 0.5 xalign 1.5
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hide fang with dissolve
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pause .5
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hide anon with moveoutright
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show anon neutral:
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.7
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show trish surprised:
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yalign 0.0 xalign 0.3
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show anon:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
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show trish:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
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with dissolve
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pause .5
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"Before Trish can climb it I pull myself up the ladder awkwardly."
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"Each step up a rung I need to pause, the rough movements causing bouts of pain across my chest."
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show anon:
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easeout 0.5 xalign 1.1
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hide anon with dissolve
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pause .5
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"Each step up a rung I need to pause, the rough movements causing bouts of pain across my chest."
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pause .5
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show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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"Trish growls as I take my time climbing up. Halfway up I’m able to hand Fang my tray of food and scale the ladder at a slightly faster snail’s pace."
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pause .5
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"Once I’m at the top I swing my legs onto the ladder, blocking Trish from climbing up too."
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show trish:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6
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show trish angry with dissolve
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T "Asshole! Let me talk with Fang!"
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pause .5
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A "Know any theaters with easily accessible fire exits?"
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A "Sweet, saves me some money."
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T "Anon I swear to fuck!"
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show trish:
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easein_elastic 0.75 xalign 0.65
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play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickpunch.ogg'
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T "Anon I swear to fuck!" with vpunch
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pause .5
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show trish:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
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show trish indignant with Dissolve(.25)
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T "Fang, please! Just say something!"
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"I can tell Fang is getting annoyed at Trish not taking the hint."
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show trish neutral with dissolve
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F "Trish, I just don’t want to see you right now, okay?"
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pause .5
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T "But… why?! I’m your best friend!"
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show trish:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45
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show trish surprised
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T "But{cps=*.1}...{/cps} why?! I’m your best friend!"
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pause .5
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F "I still need some time away after what you did."
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T "What about Reed? What about VVURM DRAMA? We can’t perform with just the two of us!"
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pause .5
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F "I think you should leave, Trish."
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show trish:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
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show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
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T "I think you aren’t thinking straight!"
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show trish:
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easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
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T "We {i}need{/i} you to come back to-"
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show dimmer_lighter behind trish with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Trish."
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pause .5
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"Her voice is a calm fury, cold and collected and bitter."
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show trish neutral with dissolve
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pause .5
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F "I am trying to have lunch."
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F "With my boyfriend."
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F "That you just humiliated in front of everyone barely two days ago."
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F "I am perfectly capable of deciding for myself if I want to take a break."
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pause .5
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F "If and when I want to get back into the band, I will talk to you."
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F "For now, all you’re doing is pissing me off and ruining our lunch together."
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pause 1
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F "Leave."
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"Trish’s jaw hangs open, a barely audible squeak of protest escaping her."
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pause .5
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easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.85
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"She wipes a tear away with her jacket sleeve and shimmies down the ladder."
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T "... Sorry."
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T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Sorry."
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pause .5
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pause 1
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"Fang waits until her footsteps quiet before letting out a sigh."
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scene roof day
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yalign 0.0 xalign 0.2
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yalign 0.1 xalign 0.8
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with Fade(1, 0, 1)
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pause .5
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F "... That hurt."
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F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}That hurt."
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easeout 0.5 xalign 0.35
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easein 1 xalign 0.2
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show anon:
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easein 1 xalign 0.725
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"Fang’s hand finds mine and grasps it."
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"Her grip is feather light, and I can feel her shuddering breath as a shiver in her palm."
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"I offer her silent reassurance, my fingers curling around her hand softly."
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pause .5
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F "Anon, do you think I fucked up?"
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pause .5
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"I consider for a moment."
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"While Trish did mess up, big time, she’s still Fang’s best friend."
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"It wasn’t all malicious. Just… Misguided."
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"It wasn’t all malicious. Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} misguided."
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pause .5
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"Maybe some time apart will help both Fang and Trish."
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"Maybe… but y’know…"
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"Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps} but y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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"I know you can hear this, though."
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"Fang simply rolls her eyes."
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F "Such a dweeb."
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A "Yep."
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pause .5
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"She held my hand the entirety of lunch."
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"Which was nice."
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scene black with dissolve
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pause .5
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"But it made eating my mediocre steak fucking difficult."
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"..."
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"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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pause .5
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jump .PromAnnouncement
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label .MendingThings:
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@ -3213,6 +3350,8 @@ label chapter_11:
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"..."
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jump .PromAnnouncement
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label .BreakingThings:
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A "I don’t follow."
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