rework ch14A up to roof scene

game/script/14A.KO_OP-ending.rpy

@@ -1,87 +1,105 @@
 label chapter_14A:
     #Bowling for Volcano High
     scene room anon day 
+    show dimmer_darker
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     "I wake up the next morning with my head cradled in my arms."
-    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
+    play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "My back aches from the lack of proper bedding, but that’s hardly anything new."
 
     "Groggily, I pull myself to my feet."
 
+    hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
     "I pull back the curtain to reveal that a thick sunday fog had rolled in overnight."
 
-    "What time is it…?"
+    "What time is it?"
     
     "Guess I’ll check my phone…"
 
-    show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
+    show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
+    pause .5
 
     "Ten AM, huh…"
+    pause .5
 
-    hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
+    pause .5
 
     "Damn, I slept a while."
+    pause .5
 
     "...Did Fang sleep well?"
 
     A "Fang, you up?"
+    pause .5
 
-    stop music
+    stop music fadeout 3
 
     "The bed is empty."
 
     A "Oh."
+    pause .5
 
     "Wait a second."
 
-    "My phone has seventy missed calls and over a hundred texts from Naser…"
+    "My phone has seventy missed calls and over a hundred texts from Naser{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "That’s right, my phone was on silent last night for Prom."
 
     "He’s probably just worried about Fang, but by Raptor Jesus’ right nut man."
+    pause .5
 
     "I open the most recent voicemail."
 
     FD "By Raptor Jesus’ left testicle if Fang is not home within the hour I will hunt you down and mount your head on my trophy wall! You will RUE the day that-"
 
     "Whoa."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Next one…"
+    "Next one{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    FD "Maybe I didn’t make myself fucking clear. You will be sleeping with the fishes if Lucy is not home in the morning. I have a particular set of-"
+    FD "Maybe I didn’t make myself fucking clear. I will drag your skinny ass down to the station myself if Lucy is not home in the morning. I have a particular set of-"
 
     "I’m starting to get the idea."
 
     "All the texts are written in a similar vein."
+    pause .5
 
     "I try texting Fang to see if she got home safe."
 
-    "Anon: hey, you alright?"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} hey, you alright?"
 
-    "Anon: just noticed your dad was pretty livid last night"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} just noticed your dad was pretty livid last night"
 
-    "Anon: he mustve been writing all night long"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} he mustve been writing all night long"
+    pause .5
 
-    "...No immediate response."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No immediate response."
 
     "Well, she’ll see it when she sees it."
 
     "S’not like I can do much else for Fang right now."
+    pause .5
 
     "I take note of the mess that Fang created, a reminder of how badly I fucked up."
 
     "Fuck me. So this is what they mean by Prom Night disasters."
 
     "I always thought it was just a euphemism for teen pregnancies."
+    pause .5
 
-    "There’s laminate… something, splinters all over the floor from my dresser."
+    "There’s laminate{cps=*.1}...{/cps} something, splinters all over the floor from my dresser."
 
     "And a check inside my bathroom reveals that The Duke managed to crack my porcelain throne."
+    pause .5
 
     "Shit. No way am I getting my deposit back now."
 
     "I check the controller carefully, only barely relieved that there’s no damage."
+    pause .5
 
     "After I’ve swept up the bits of broken dresser I find I have no real clue what to do."
 
@@ -92,193 +110,270 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "How do I make this up to her?"
 
     "I feel like a fucking heel right now."
+    pause .5
+
+    "The XROX is still running, might as well finish Rock Ring."
 
     "It’ll take my mind off things at least."
+    pause .5
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Master Grug, you mind telling me what you’re doing on that boat?"
 
     "Ooga booga, finish this fight."
+    pause .5
 
     "Guess I’ll play the next one, I really don’t feel like doing anything else today."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    scene room anon night with fade
+    scene room anon night with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     "Wake Grug when you need Grug."
+    pause .5
 
     "Really wish I could just float away in an iceberg like Master Grug after last night."
-    show anonphone with moveinbottom
+    pause .5
+
+    show anonphone with easeinbottom
+    pause .5
     "I glance at my phone and realize I spent ten hours playing Rock Ring."
 
     "My mind was turned off for most of that, guess I just lost track of time."
 
-    hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+    pause .5
+    show anon neutral behind anonphone:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.5 alpha 0
+        linear 0.5 alpha 1
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
+    pause .5
 
     "I’m shaken from my thoughts by a knock at my door."
 
     "The door I forgot to lock."
+    pause .5
 
+    show anon concerned with Dissolve(.25)
     "Oh god, I’m gonna be murdered, butchered, my body parts sold on the black market and turned into some disgusting rhinorex’s sex toys."
 
     "Hopefully in that order."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Before I can search for my knife, the door opens to reveal…"
+    show anon:
-
+        easein_quart 1.5 xalign -0.1
-    show anon neutral at aleft
+    show anon fear with dissolve
-    show fang neutral flip at sright
+    "Before I can search for my knife, the door opens to reveal{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     play music "audio/OST/appreciating_the_scenery.ogg" fadein 1.0
+
+    show fang neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause 1
+
     F "Anon? You- oh! Hey…"
 
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Uh… Why are you huddled in the fetal position?"
 
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.15
+    show anon sad with dissolve
+    pause .5
     A "Fang? Oh thank fuck."
 
     "I deflate, slumping lifelessly on my bed."
 
     A "I thought your dad was here to kill me."
 
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Ah. Yeah. Sorry."
 
     "Fang sets her backpack down on the kitchen table."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "So…"
+    F "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
-    show anon sad with dissolve
 
     "Shit. Should have actually thought about what I should say to her."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Fang, about last ni-"
 
     F "It’s fine."
 
     show anon neutral with dissolve
-
     A "-ight.. What?"
 
     F "It’s fine, Anon. I don’t blame you for what happened."
+    pause .5
 
     "What."
 
     F "In fact, I’m sorry for overreacting last night."
+    pause .5
 
     "There’s something about this all that is setting off alarms in my head."
 
     "I don’t know what kind though. Or why."
 
-    A "I… What?"
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} what?"
 
     F "I said I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have blown up on you like last night."
 
     A "Even if it was my fault? I should have-"
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) 
     F "It isn’t, Anon."
 
     A "But-"
 
-    show black with fade
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.0
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+    show black with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     "My words are cut off. My mind goes completely blank."
 
     "Fang’s hands grip my dirty dress shirt tightly as her beak presses against my parted lips, her tongue invading my mouth."
+    pause .5
 
     "She pulls away abruptly, leaving me confused and lightheaded."
+    pause .5
 
     A "I..wha...Fang?"
 
+    F "It's fine, Anon. Everything is fine."
+    pause .5
+
+    stop music fadeout 5
     "Her hands guide me down onto my bed and she straddles my lap."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause 1
-    show black with fade
 
-
+    "{cps=*0.05}...{/cps}"
-    "..."
+    pause 1
 
     "Sometime in the night the bed shifts."
+
+    pause .5
     play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    pause .5
 
     "I hear the bathroom door close so I pay it no mind and drift back to sleep."
+    pause .5
 
     "Eventually my internal clock wakes me up."
-
+    pause .5
-    scene room anon day with fade
+    scene room anon day with Dissolve(2)
+    pause .5
 
     "Stretching and yawning, realize that it’s a lot brighter than normal."
 
     "Did I sleep in?"
+    pause .5
 
-    "The alarm clock on my table has been unplugged…"
+    "The alarm clock on my table has been unplugged{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I reach over to grab my phone to check the time."
+    pause .5
 
     "Nine-o-two AM?"
 
     "Oh shit, Fang and I are beyond late."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    pause .5
+    
     "Wait, where is Fang?"
 
     "Her backpack is gone, too."
+    pause .5
 
     "Oh come on, she went to school without me?!"
 
+    stop music fadeout 4
     "I rush to put my clothes on and get out the door as soon as possible."
-
+    pause .5
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
 
     "About halfway there my phone buzzes in my pocket."
 
     "Unread texts from Fang?"
+    pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang: ♪ Control over my life you denied, And now death approaches from the sky, Why'd it be me you had to vilify? I guess this is Goodbye, Volcano High ♫{/i}"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} ♪ Control over my life you denied,{w=.6}{nw}"
+    extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}And now death approaches from the sky,{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Why'd it be me you had to vilify?{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Goodbye Volcano High ♪{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     "The cryptic message stops me in my tracks."
 
     "Something is definitely wrong."
+    pause .5
 
-    "This almost reads like…"
+    "This almost reads like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    pause .5
+    play music 'audio/ost/sage goes in all fields.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    pause .5
 
     "The adrenaline pushes my feet back into a desperate bolt towards the school."
+    pause .5
 
-    scene outside school fog
+    scene black with Dissolve(1)
-    show anon neutral at aleft
+    pause .5
-    with fade
 
     "The whole time my mind floods with horrid worst-case scenarios."
 
     "I tell myself I’m just worrying, but my mad sprint betrays the lie."
 
+    scene outside school fog with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
     "As I approach the school, I notice a crowd through the haze."
 
     "Surely it’s just a drill."
+    pause .5
 
     "The deceit is shattered when I see the crowd consists of students huddling and crying, with teachers quietly making sure everyone is accounted for."
 
-    "...Where’s Fang?"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Where’s Fang?"
 
     "She has to be in this crowd."
 
     "There’s just a fire in the school that scared people."
 
     "She’s in this crowd somewhere."
+    pause .5
 
+    stop music fadeout 0.5
+    play music1 'audio/ost/many such cases of being so true.ogg' fadein 0.5
     scene a02 with fade
+    pause 1
 
-    T "YOU!!"
+    T "{b}YOU!!{/b}"
+    pause 1
 
     "The voice calls out through the silence for all to hear."
+    pause 1
 
     "Trish moves to stand a dozen feet in front of me on the pavement."
 
     "A shaky finger directing malice towards me."
+    pause .5
 
     "She’s redfaced, streams of tears running the mascara down her face."
 
-    T "WHY DID YOU COME HERE?!?"
+    T "{b}WHY DID YOU COME HERE?!?{/b}"
 
     "Blurred heads turn to the commotion."
 
@@ -291,14 +386,17 @@ label chapter_14A:
     T "LOOK WHAT YOU’VE DONE!"
 
     T "ARE YOU HAPPY?"
+    pause 1
 
     "I can’t say anything."
+    pause .5
 
     "Is this really happening?"
+    pause .5
 
     T "LEAVE US ALREADY!!"
 
-    T "YOU SHOW UP, GET THEIR ATTENTION, AND NOW… AND NOW…!"
+    T "YOU SHOW UP, GET THEIR ATTENTION, AND NOW{cps=*.1}...{/cps} AND NOW{cps=*.1}...{/cps}!"
 
     "She chucks her phone through the air."
 
@@ -311,158 +409,211 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "By now her tirade becomes incomprehensible screaming."
 
     "A teacher has to hold her back and try directing her to a nearby curb to sit."
+    pause 1
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(2)
+    pause .5
 
-    "...I don’t have time for this."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t have time for this."
 
     "Where is Fang?"
 
     "I gotta get in that building."
+    pause .5
 
     "I turn around and dash away into the fog as Trish is being consoled by a group of students."
+    pause .5
 
-    scene hallway with fade
+    stop music1 fadeout 4
+    scene hallway 
+    show dimmer_lighter
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     "The side door is still unlocked, and I’m able to slip in without being noticed."
+    pause .5
 
     "The halls are silent, despite it all."
 
     "My footsteps clatter through the empty halls."
+    pause .5
 
     "It’s third period now, Fang always talks about having to deal with Naomi in Econ."
 
     "That’s not on this floor, fuck!"
+    pause .5
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "I pause when I reach the stairwell upwards."
+    pause 1
 
     "I can’t say for sure what, but my instincts are screaming at me to not go up, to turn back now."
 
-    "... I can’t."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can’t."
 
     "My hand lightly glides along the handrail while I cautiously cross the stairs to the second floor."
+    pause 1
+
+    play music 'audio/ost/sadist.ogg' fadein 0.5
+    pause 1.5
 
     "The first thing that hits me is the smell."
+    pause .5
 
     "That electric, almost metallic stench of wet ozone."
 
-    "I’ve never been in a real fight before, but even so…"
+    "I’ve never been in a real fight before, but even so{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "It’s a smell everyone instinctively knows."
+    pause .5
 
     "I couldn’t tell what sound I made, because I frankly don’t remember."
 
     "All I will ever remember from this is the sight of my former classmates splattered across the halls like bags of waste."
+    pause .5
 
-    scene a04 with fade
+    scene a04 with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 2
 
     "The spills and trails of blood tell the story of their final moments."
+    pause 1
 
     "Two were trying to run and still remain face down in their final resting places."
+    pause 1
 
     "One slumped from a locker, smearing his remains all the way down like a puppet string."
+    pause 1
 
     "And the last one, who tried fighting back, now clumped in the middle of the hallway soaked in the collective pooling blood."
+    pause .5
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    pause 1
 
     "It was Naser."
 
+    show dimmer_light with Dissolve(1)
+
     "This isn’t real, none of this is real."
 
     "I’m just having a nightmare after last nights’ episode."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Things are just fine, I’ll return to reality soon…"
+    "Things are just fine, I’ll return to reality soon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
-    "Please…"
+    "Please{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
-    "...God...Damn it..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}God{cps=*.1}...{/cps} damn it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "...Where is Fang…?"
+    hide dimmer_light with dissolve
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Where is Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
 
     "I just need to find her."
+    pause 1
 
     "There’s one open door in the hall, the one closest to the battlefield."
 
     "I already know I’m not going to see her."
 
     "Fang hasn’t been in that room since she started."
+    pause .5
 
     "The only thing in there is the huddled corpse of our student council president."
+    pause .5
 
-    "...Guess she didn’t get that ‘perfect highschool life’ in the end."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Guess she didn’t get that ‘perfect highschool life’ in the end."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
     "The stairs."
 
     "There’s only one place she can be."
 
     "One place where she’d go."
+    pause 1
 
     "When I turn back to the stairwell, something makes a wet thud behind me."
+    pause .5
 
     "Somehow, Naser’s still alive."
 
     "He’s moved his arm in my direction, and still has the strength to move a bit."
+    pause .5
 
     "His eyes meet mine for a moment."
+    pause 1
 
     "Disappointment."
 
     "Sorrow."
 
     "Mourning."
+    pause 1
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
 
     "I can’t focus on him."
 
     "He’s got seconds left, anything I tried would just be a waste of time."
+    pause .5
 
     "His hand makes a wet slap against the hard tiles one last time while I start up the stairs."
+    pause 1
 
     "Somehow, the remaining two flights of stairs have gained another several hundred steps."
+    pause .5
 
     "I haven’t seen who it was yet, it might not be her."
 
     "You know well it can only be her."
+    pause .5
 
-    "How could I have known this would happen? This isn’t my fault..!"
+    "How could I have known this would happen? This isn’t my fault.{cps=*.1}...{/cps}!"
 
     "You had just as much a hand in this as she did."
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang isn’t here. She’s at home being grilled by her father for seeing me again."
 
     "She’s behind that door with a loaded gun."
+    pause .5
 
-    "...How long have I been standing here, staring at the doorknob?"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}How long have I been standing here, staring at the doorknob?"
 
-    "...How much longer could I get away with putting it off?"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}How much longer could I get away with putting it off?"
 
     "As it is, it’s not the worst case scenario."
 
-    "Even if Naser and Naomi are gone…"
+    "Even if Naser and Naomi are gone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "There’s a chance it’s not Fang up here."
+    pause .5
 
     "I’d rather just stand here forever."
 
     "Relishing in the possibility that there’s some hope left."
+    pause 1
 
     "However."
 
     "Time stops for no one."
 
     "Not even me."
+    pause .5
 
     "The police sirens have been outside for a while."
 
@@ -470,18 +621,25 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "I owe Fang this much at least."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "The doorknob is still cold on my hand."
 
     "I turn it and exit to the rooftop."
 
+    scene roof fog with Dissolve(2)
+    pause .5
+
     "In the dense morning fog the only thing to stand out is the silhouette."
 
     "One that I easily recognize."
-    scene a10 with fade
+    pause .5
+
+    scene a10 with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 1
 
     A "Fang."
+    pause .5
 
     "She’s silent. I can’t even tell if she’s looking at me or not."
 
@@ -506,7 +664,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "My fingers brush against her shoulder."
     scene black
 
-    play sound "audio/effects/shot.ogg"
+    play sound "audio/effects/shottinnitus.ogg"
 
     A "ARGH!"