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@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Its my first time living close to water."
"The idea of marine layer is new to me, but I do understand morning mist."
"The idea of a marine layer is new to me, but I do understand morning mist."
"This was like it, except infinitely more shitty."
pause .5
@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pass
pause .5
"The thread goes 404 right as I'm ready to post my well thought-out reply."
"The thread goes 404 right as Im ready to post my well thought-out reply."
"Better hide my phone before someone sees fit to take it from me, the only human around town. I think."
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@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"I can peep around the friend circles without a problem now."
"Not like I'll ever be a part of one anyway."
"Not like Ill ever be a part of one anyway."
scene stairs at Pan((553,169), (553, 169), 0) with None # snap here if the player is advancing the dialogue quickly
window hide
@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 1.5
"O-oh yeah.{w=0.4} She's staring at me{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
"O-oh yeah.{w=0.4} Shes staring at me{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
"...with that look."
@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Everyone that has looked at me like that never proved to be anything more than an asshole."
pause .5
"Like I'M the anomaly here. She's just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them."
"Like IM the anomaly here. Shes just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them."
"Shes probably no better than me, miss \"my snout is so big I can land a plane on it\"."
@ -406,12 +406,12 @@ label chapter_1:
show anon neutral at acenter#
pause .5
A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} 'Sup?"
A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} Sup?"
Nas "You're Anon, yeah?"
Nas "Youre Anon, yeah?"
show naomi explanatory
unknown "I'm glad we found you!"
unknown "Im glad we found you!"
show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
@ -1269,7 +1269,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(0.25)
N "{cps=*0.3}Oh dear.{/cps}{w=0.4} Naser why dont you split your sandwich with him?"
N "{cps=*0.3}Oh dear.{/cps}{w=0.4} Naser, why dont you split your sandwich with him?"
show naser annoyed flip with Dissolve(0.25)
@ -1540,7 +1540,7 @@ label chapter_1:
A "Thats a couple hundred bucks though."
show naser unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "Meh, bout a months allowance."
Nas "Meh, bout a months allowance."
show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25)
"A month? That explains that disaster of a jacket."
@ -1729,10 +1729,10 @@ label chapter_1:
Nas "Look, whatever happens promise you wont hold this against them."
Nas "They're actually a really nice person once you get to know them."
Nas "Theyre actually a really nice person once you get to know them."
pause 0.5
A "Naser why did you just murder the english language in cold blood?"
A "Naser, why did you just murder the English language in cold blood?"
pause .5
"Within I see the rest of the audience, huddled in groups around tiny snack tables."
@ -2121,9 +2121,9 @@ label chapter_1:
"That band, if you could call it such."
pause .5
"Great idea Anon, start the day by dissing everything you've done so far in your new life."
"Great idea Anon, start the day by dissing everything youve done so far in your new life."
"No wonder you're so damn popular."
"No wonder youre so damn popular."
pause .5
"Finally, I lean out of bed and turn the alarm clock off."
@ -2165,7 +2165,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show anon neutral at acenter with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Picking myself up, I slide into todays{w=0.2} (and everyday's){w=0.2} clothes and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before."
"Picking myself up, I slide into todays{w=0.2} (and everydays){w=0.2} clothes and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before."
"My eyes scan over my phone while I shovel my sugary breakfast into my mouth."
pause .5
@ -2181,7 +2181,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Like a poorly-oiled machine until it runs out of fuel with a noisy slurp."
pause .5
"Soon enough, it's time to leave for school. I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders."
"Soon enough, its time to leave for school. I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders."
"I take my jacket off the hanger and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -2213,7 +2213,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"The halls before class are as crowded as always, with hundreds of students filing in unison towards their homerooms."
"By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, I've walked the same path twice already after all."
"By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, Ive walked the same path twice already after all."
pause .5
"Even after the longest sleep of my life, I still feel miserably tired and ready to crash once again."
@ -2255,17 +2255,17 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .5
menu:
"Naser's a bro":
"Nasers a bro":
# affects dialogue with Spears when entering his office
$ late_to_spears = True
pause .5
jump lnaserBro
"I don't wanna piss off the caveman.":
"I dont wanna piss off the caveman.":
$ late_to_spears = False
pause .5
jump lpissOffCaveman
# Anon tries to find Naser before heading to Spear's office
# Anon tries to find Naser before heading to Spears office
label lnaserBro:
"Principal caveman can wait. I want to apologize to Naser about yesterday{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
@ -2647,7 +2647,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show reed neutral flip with dissolve
Re "Sall bout misdirection{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Re "Sall bout misdirection{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"What."
@ -2787,7 +2787,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"As I near the office I can feel a heavy tension suffusing the air."
"In front of the principals office is Naomi and some other chick, engaged in a heated conversation."
"In front of the principals office is Naomi and some other chick, engaged in a heated conversation."
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@ -3284,7 +3284,7 @@ label chapter_1:
Re "Nah man, scool."
Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it."
Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I dont know why a bunch of people came there to watch it."
pause .5
Nas "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} And youre absolutely sure Trish is taking it okay?"

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@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
"Looking through one of the map kiosks, I try to make a mental plan for the trip."
show fang neutral at scenter:
show fang neutral at scenter
show anon neutral at aleft:
xalign 0.1
with dissolve

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@ -363,14 +363,14 @@ label chapter_2:
"Or a mix of the two{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
"Either way there's something on her mind."
"Either way theres something on her mind."
pause .5
"I can't help but think that that must be how I looked on my first day."
"I cant help but think that that must be how I looked on my first day."
"But it was my first day of school, she had been going here all year."
"What's her excuse then?"
"Whats her excuse then?"
pause .5
"Either way, doesnt look like she recognizes me."
@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"Right before the tone, one last student rushes in, out of breath."
pause .5
"Oh, it's that girl again. I guess we shared a period or two on the first day and I just didn't notice."
"Oh, its that girl again. I guess we shared a period or two on the first day and I just didnt notice."
"She strides across the room, taking her seat without a word."
pause .5
@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show farnsworth at sright with Dissolve(1)
Drf "Good news everyone!"
Drf "Today we'll be having a lab on magnetic fields."
Drf "Today well be having a lab on magnetic fields."
Drf "Find a partner and get prepared."
@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ label chapter_2:
hide dimmer_darker with dissolve
pause .5
F "Sup."
F "Sup."
pause .5
A "Thanks, you too."
@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ label chapter_2:
Drf "How are you two doing so far?"
show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
F "We're{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fine, Dr. Fernsworth."
F "Were{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fine, Dr. Fernsworth."
Drf "I see, and you Anon?"
@ -748,7 +748,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"Oh Raptor Jesus almighty this is the absolute worst case scenario."
pause .5
"The infuriated pteradactyl's wings spread wide and her taloned finger jabs my chest."
"The infuriated pteradactyls wings spread wide and her taloned finger jabs my chest."
pause .5
show fang:
@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"All eyes are on Fang."
"And in Fangs eyes I see something flash briefly."
"And in Fangs eyes I see something flash briefly."
"Judging by those exaggerated movements and the eloquent speech, this is something Fang had been practicing."
pause .5
@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And three plastic katanas."
pause .5
"That was a quick way to get sent to the principal's office."
"That was a quick way to get sent to the principals office."
show fang angry with dissolve
F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Are you even listening to me?!"
@ -964,7 +964,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
F "Uh{cps=*.1}....{/cps}{w=.2} Youve been staring at me for the past 5 minutes. Freak."
show anon neutral with dissolve:
show anon neutral with dissolve
show anon:
easein 0.5 xalign 0.2
pause .5
@ -986,12 +986,12 @@ label chapter_2:
pause .5
show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
F "Non-binary people don't owe you androgyny."
F "Non-binary people dont owe you androgyny."
pause .5
"Doesnt seem like its something she wants to hear right now."
A "So um, you're Nasers sister, right?"
A "So um, youre Nasers sister, right?"
show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
F "SIB-ling."
@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
"Hesitantly, I slide out of my chair and trundle my way to the whiteboard, trying to decipher the runes I'm expected to make sense of."
"Hesitantly, I slide out of my chair and trundle my way to the whiteboard, trying to decipher the runes Im expected to make sense of."
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@ -1209,7 +1209,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"With a very detailed centerfold, by the way he turned it sideways."
pause .5
"Looking ahead to Reeds desk, hes been joined by Trish who's trying to get him to get started."
"Looking ahead to Reeds desk, hes been joined by Trish whos trying to get him to get started."
"I think I can feel their eyes following me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
@ -1355,7 +1355,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
T "We know that."
T "We want to know where youre from, what you've been doing since you got here, if you have any friends{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
T "We want to know where youre from, what youve been doing since you got here, if you have any friends{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "I{w=.1}-Ive been doing nothing. I dont really care about friends."
pause .5
@ -1600,7 +1600,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"This backpack{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"It's from the Reed guy, Ill bet."
"Its from the Reed guy, Ill bet."
"When I rushed out of class{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
@ -1620,7 +1620,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"Any amount of money is NOT worth my power level being revealed."
"I can't ruin my life."
"I cant ruin my life."
"Not again."
@ -1700,7 +1700,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"He holds out my backpack to me."
Re "Ere ya go, man."
Re "Ere ya go, man."
pause .5
show reed:
@ -1795,7 +1795,7 @@ label chapter_2:
A "Hrmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Re "s fine for you to be worried."
Re "s fine for you to be worried."
Re "Youll see, shes plenty nice."
pause .5
@ -1955,7 +1955,7 @@ label chapter_2:
pause .25
show trish explanatory flip
T "Yknow those lunch cards they have on posters near the principals office?"
T "Yknow those lunch cards they have on posters near the principals office?"
show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
@ -2108,7 +2108,7 @@ label chapter_2:
A "Huh?"
show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Get your phone out man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Look up {cps=*.4}'{color=#78FF65}LW_S9znpklI{/color}'..{/cps}"
Re "Get your phone out man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Look up {cps=*.4}{color=#78FF65}LW_S9znpklI{/color}.{/cps}"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
@ -2144,7 +2144,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"Save it for later":
pause .5
"I'll save this one for when I get home."
"Ill save this one for when I get home."
label lPostCheckLinkOut:
@ -2413,7 +2413,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"Her shrill goody goody sugary voice is piercing through the chatter of the lunchroom, I dont wanna reply if it means hearing more of her voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
N "Wasn't that Naser's sister? How wonderful that you're making friends, Anon!"
N "Wasnt that Nasers sister? How wonderful that youre making friends, Anon!"
N "Tell me everything! What were you and Fang talking about?"
@ -2427,7 +2427,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"I just want to go home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"But there's still half a day to go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"But theres still half a day to go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Nas "Hey Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} you uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}"
show naser unimpressed
@ -2444,7 +2444,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show naser neutral
show naomi happy
with Dissolve(.25)
N "{cps=*.3}Aaaww,{/cps} he's just thrilled to make new friends!"
N "{cps=*.3}Aaaww,{/cps} hes just thrilled to make new friends!"
show naser happy
Nas "Yeah man, good on you. Youre quite the extrovert!"
@ -2460,7 +2460,7 @@ label chapter_2:
A "Fang and her friends, yeah. Strange group, I know."
show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
N "I'll say."
N "Ill say."
show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "Sh-{w=.4}{nw}"

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@ -14,18 +14,18 @@ label chapter_3:
pause .5
# TODO: chatter
"It's math. Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike."
"Its math. Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike."
"And teachers too, judging by the lack of a certain coomer teacher."
"Substitute today, which means busywork. Group problems busywork specifically."
"Of course, I can't escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment."
"Of course, I cant escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment."
"At least here I have the opportunity to just keep to myself for an hour."
pause .5
"I don't even bother attempting the assignment, instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I havent played online."
"I dont even bother attempting the assignment, instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I havent played online."
stop music fadeout 4
pause .5
@ -40,19 +40,19 @@ label chapter_3:
"I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane, a completed set of problems."
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reed's. And it's{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reeds. And its{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0
"...done?"
"Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each."
"Even the extra problems that I dont even bother with because they take another ten minutes each."
"I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over. He's sitting next to Trish."
"I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over. Hes sitting next to Trish."
pause .5
"She's giving me the evil eye."
"Shes giving me the evil eye."
"At least I think it's the evil eye. Whatever that expression is, it clashes with her smile."
"At least I think its the evil eye. Whatever that expression is, it clashes with her smile."
pause .5
"Might as well see what they want."
@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ label chapter_3:
with dissolve
pause .5
"Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trish's other side, nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever he's got in that thermos on his desk."
"Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trishs other side, nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever hes got in that thermos on his desk."
"The widening of his pupils suggest its more than just Roarbucks cold brew in it."
@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ label chapter_3:
"Theres something in her tone of voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
" Its like she's getting ready to gore me with those nubs she calls horns."
" Its like shes getting ready to gore me with those nubs she calls horns."
pause .5
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Sure"
@ -121,12 +121,12 @@ label chapter_3:
show trish:
ease 0.6 xalign 0.85
"What's in that anyway?"
"Whats in that anyway?"
pause .5
show reed considering
Re "Don't ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Re "Dont ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ label chapter_3:
T "How did you not get in trouble?"
show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Spears actually did talk to me, said something about the 'great equaliser'."
A "Spears actually did talk to me, said something about the great equalizer."
pause .5
show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25)
@ -636,7 +636,7 @@ label chapter_3:
Nas "I asked her what she was doing, and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show naser unimpressed flip
Nas "Just says 'fuck off...', so I think 'maybe dad will help'."
Nas "Just says fuck off..., so I think maybe dad will help."
show naser sad flip
Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He didnt."
@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ label chapter_3:
"I should probably say something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Her playing is pretty good, I'll compliment that."
"Her playing is pretty good, Ill compliment that."
A "That sounded way better than in the video Reed took."
@ -1145,7 +1145,7 @@ label chapter_3:
"Fuck."
pause .5
"I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her out loud."
"I almost said the audience at the concert to her out loud."
show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
F "What was that?"
@ -1439,7 +1439,7 @@ label chapter_3:
rotate 20 xalign 0.5 zoom 1.5 yalign 0.5
show dimmer_light as xtra_dimmer behind jewlcase with Dissolve(.25)
"Looking down at the makeshift shuriken, it was a copy of {i}\"VVORM DRAMA's hit new single INDRAGON ONSLAUGHT\"{/i}"
"Looking down at the makeshift shuriken, it was a copy of {i}\"VVORM DRAMAs hit new single INDRAGON ONSLAUGHT\"{/i}"
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@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ label chapter_4:
"And then theres Naser and Naomi as well, and all their issues{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"At any moment I feel I'm going to get found out."
"At any moment I feel Im going to get found out."
"Trish would certainly beat me senseless."
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"Id really rather not deal with her any more today."
show naomi explanatory
N "Come on, Anon, let's continue our conversation from earlier!"
N "Come on, Anon, lets continue our conversation from earlier!"
N "You know, about extracurriculars like the gardening club!"
show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ label chapter_4:
A "I dont think I have the time. Im way behind in some of my classes already."
N "You're talking about Music, aren't you?"
N "Youre talking about Music, arent you?"
show naser considering with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "Naomi, please stop memorizing the schedules of the new students."
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show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25)
N "Sorry, but I did help Anon pick his electives."
"Why did I agree to padding out my credits with a new subject, I never thought I'd live to regret zoning her out."
"Why did I agree to padding out my credits with a new subject, I never thought Id live to regret zoning her out."
pause .5
"Naomi places a finger on her chin{w=.15}(?){w=.15} for a moment and stares into space."
@ -122,13 +122,13 @@ label chapter_4:
show naser neutral
show naomi happy
with dissolve
N "Wait, don't you share that class with Fang?{w=.4} Why not ask her, I'm sure she'd lend a hand!"
N "Wait, dont you share that class with Fang?{w=.4} Why not ask her, Im sure shed lend a hand!"
pause .5
A "I dunno{cps=*.1}...{/cps} she's usually very busy with her own work, and I don't want to bother her more than I already do every day."
A "I dunno{cps=*.1}...{/cps} shes usually very busy with her own work, and I dont want to bother her more than I already do every day."
show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
N "It can't hurt to ask, though, right? Just a thought."
N "It cant hurt to ask, though, right? Just a thought."
pause .5
N "Anyway, will you be joining us for lunch again?"
@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Guess itd be something like The Skinks{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Maybe the Fossillies?"
A "Oi, tha eres sum preey briish tayste, yeah?"
A "Oi, tha eres sum preey briish tayste, yeah?"
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.975
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"I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
N "{i}\"Wait, don't you share that class with Fang?{w=.4} Why not ask her, I'm sure she'd lend a hand!\"{/i}"
N "{i}\"Wait, dont you share that class with Fang?{w=.4} Why not ask her, Im sure shed lend a hand!\"{/i}"
pause .5
"I crane my head, looking for Fang."
"She's at her own desk shes filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like shes strumming honestly."
"Shes filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like shes strumming."
pause .5
"Agh, and thats another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ label chapter_4:
"Fang shakes her head, returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak."
pause .5
"I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!"
"I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we supposed to do this by the end of class?!"
pause .5
N "{i}\"It cant hurt to ask, though, right?\"{/i}"
@ -958,12 +958,12 @@ label chapter_4:
"I point at the class electric guitar."
pause .25
F "Nah, I started with piano. I didnt get my first guitar til freshman year."
F "Nah, I started with piano. I didnt get my first guitar til freshman year."
pause .5
A "The piano? Isnt that the hardest one?"
"I have no clue what i'm talking about."
"I have no clue what Im talking about."
pause .25
F "Maybe for some, but I started early and got ahead. My grandma had an old piano she would let me mess around with."
@ -986,7 +986,7 @@ label chapter_4:
"Fang gets a strange expression, a mix between a blush and a scowl as she returns back to her snappy attitude."
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "You done with that yet? It's taking you way too long, rather have you out of my way."
F "You done with that yet? Its taking you way too long, rather have you out of my way."
"Cute."
pause .5
@ -1012,7 +1012,7 @@ label chapter_4:
F "You still need me to help you with this or do you have it from here?"
"Of course I have it, I know this shit, it's just 3 categories."
"Of course I have it, I know this shit, its just 3 categories."
"Percussion is simple enough. Getting the differences between woodwind and brass is a bit harder."
@ -1061,10 +1061,10 @@ label chapter_4:
F "Its like I make people avoid me{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I dont like new people{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "That's weird."
A "Thats weird."
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Fuck em', you know?"
F "Fuck em, you know?"
A "Sure."
pause .75
@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@ label chapter_4:
pause .25
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
F "I'll almost miss you when you leave and start finding your own friends."
F "Ill almost miss you when you leave and start finding your own friends."
pause .25
A "Whatever you say, Fang."
@ -1252,7 +1252,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show anon sad with dissolve
"I can feel a pit open in my stomach."
"I shouldn't have done it."
"I shouldnt have done it."
"Trish is Fangs friend. Not me."
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@ -883,7 +883,7 @@ label chapter_5:
show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Think Ill stick to stealing the occasional protein bar from Naser's stock."
F "Think Ill stick to stealing the occasional protein bar from Nasers stock."
pause .5
show rosa:
@ -1585,7 +1585,7 @@ label chapter_5:
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Fang, dont break into a teacher's car{w},{cps=*.5} well get-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
A "Fang, dont break into a teachers car{w},{cps=*.5} well get-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
show fang:
easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.2
@ -2185,7 +2185,7 @@ label chapter_5:
with dissolve
"I dont really{cps=*.1}...{/cps} get compliments."
"Its just circumstance, its not like I'm actually any less lazy or unskilled."
"Its just circumstance, its not like Im actually any less lazy or unskilled."
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 4
stop music fadeout 6
@ -2667,7 +2667,7 @@ label chapter_5:
A "{cps=*.25}ffff....{/cps}{w=.4} just{w=.3} fix the projector Reed."
show reed happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
Re "Kay{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} almost done{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Re "Kay{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} almost done{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
window hide
window auto
stop music fadeout 5
@ -3301,7 +3301,7 @@ label chapter_5:
pause .5
"Her eyes wetten.{w=.6} Her voice roughens.{w=.6} Her shoulders quake."
F "Nobody's ever said Good job, Fang! Can I get a copy of that last song on CD."
F "Nobodys ever said Good job, Fang! Can I get a copy of that last song on CD."
pause .5
F "Ive been playing music since I was basically in diapers and all I have to show for it is a shit reputation."
@ -3652,7 +3652,7 @@ label chapter_5:
"Fang stares pleadingly.{w=.5} Eventually she buries her eyes in my jacket arm."
pause .5
A "It's like{cps=*.1}..{/cps}{w=.4} I dont know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Its like{cps=*.1}..{/cps}{w=.4} I dont know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "Youre trying to be something youre not."
pause .5
@ -3664,7 +3664,7 @@ label chapter_5:
F "Naturally{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
A "If you are forcing this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} then it's like some misplaced idea or like, a refusal to leave the comfort zone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "If you are forcing this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} then its like some misplaced idea or like, a refusal to leave the comfort zone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
A "Argh, what Im trying to say is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -3679,7 +3679,7 @@ label chapter_5:
A "I just do what makes me, well, me."
A "I'm the only me here, and I think it's safe to assume that there's several of you."
A "Im the only me here, and I think its safe to assume that theres several of you."
A "Like, you dont know, you said it yourself."
pause .5

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@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ label chapter_6:
SV "Come onnnn, you cant fool me."
# SV "WAH-HA!! Im certain it aint."
SV "At any rate, why not pick up a few dogs to impress her?"
SV "At any rate, why not pick up a few dogs to impress her?"
SV "We got ice cream too, if shes an herbie."
pause .5
@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"The knife in my pocket feels excessive as an officers car passes by."
pause .5
"I suppose to someone who's lived here it would seem normal, but to someone from bumfuck nowhere? The suburb felt decadent."
"I suppose to someone whos lived here it would seem normal, but to someone from bumfuck nowhere? The suburb felt decadent."
pause .5
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorloop.ogg' fadein 4
@ -975,7 +975,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"By the time I get outside everyone else is getting into the fancy and beat up car from before."
"Guess it was Naser's."
"Guess it was Nasers."
pause .5
play music "audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg" fadein 1.0
@ -985,7 +985,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"Naser, still mentally fried, is being goaded by Naomi into driving to the city."
"Eventually, he robotically enters the driver's seat."
"Eventually, he robotically enters the drivers seat."
pause .5
"Naomi ecstatically shoots into the shotgun seat."
@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"Naomi turns the radio on, shattering my ears with the most nauseatingly upbeat love-song on max volume."
"Im left to retch as the song violates my virgin ears with its too-cheery tune."
"Im left to retch as the song violates my virgin ears with its too-cheery tune."
window hide
window auto
pause .5
@ -1320,7 +1320,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"Thank you, coastal weather."
pause .5
"We sit in near silence aside from Naser's audible chugging of his sports drink."
"We sit in near silence aside from Nasers audible chugging of his sports drink."
"He crushes the bottle in one hand and tosses it into a trash can five yards away."
pause .25
@ -1617,7 +1617,7 @@ label chapter_6:
pause .5
# TODO: this dialogue doesn't appear to have made the final cut in previous chapters
N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Wasn't that Naser's sister?{w=.4} How wonderful that you're making friends, Anon!\"{/i}{/alpha}"
N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Wasn't that Nasers sister?{w=.4} How wonderful that youre making friends, Anon!\"{/i}{/alpha}"
N "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Tell me everything!{w=.4} What were you and Fang talking about?\"{/i}{/alpha}"
@ -2332,7 +2332,7 @@ label chapter_6:
A "Hell listen to you."
A "He's only doing this because your dad put him up to it."
A "Hes only doing this because your dad put him up to it."
pause .5
A "I think he trusts you enough to be willing to take Naomi elsewhere for a while."
@ -2847,7 +2847,7 @@ label chapter_6:
unknown "Only the finest tool to clean your phone."
unknown "Here,{w=.3} let me show you its brushing majesty."
unknown "Here,{w=.3} let me show you its brushing majesty."
pause .5
"He feels around his fanny-pack for one of the roombas, then holds his phone out on one hand."
@ -3416,7 +3416,7 @@ label chapter_6:
show anon sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .5
Moe "You younguns, I eard ya talkin bout yer parents."
Moe "You younguns, I eard ya talkin bout yer parents."
pause .5
"Ah man, here comes the lecture."
@ -3437,7 +3437,7 @@ label chapter_6:
"Moe hangs his head in despair."
Moe "Old dat thought, kids. Ize gots a pissed off motha ta deal wit."
Moe "Old dat thought, kids. Ize gots a pissed off motha ta deal wit."
window hide
window auto
pause .5
@ -3595,7 +3595,7 @@ label chapter_6:
with dissolve
pause .5
Moe "Ey son, youse enjoy da meal?"
Moe "Ey son, youse enjoy da meal?"
A "Definitely. Feel like Imma black out any second."
@ -3629,7 +3629,7 @@ label chapter_6:
Moe "Me and da boys are used to makin room for shows."
Moe "Youse jus tell ma lil Lucy ya got a place, then yas sure ta sweep er of er feet."
Moe "Youse jus tell ma lil Lucy ya got a place, then yas sure ta sweep er of er feet."
pause .5
A "Ah{w=.2} er{w=.2} wha{w=.2} I{w=.2} th{w=.4} huh?"
@ -4094,7 +4094,7 @@ label chapter_6:
show fangdad:
easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.0
FD "I've half a mind of bringing you to the station boy!"
FD "Ive half a mind of bringing you to the station boy!"
FD "And the other half of testing my new nightsick on ya!"
@ -4590,7 +4590,7 @@ label chapter_6:
A "How long has it been?"
show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "Bout an hour I think."
Nas "Bout an hour I think."
pause .5
A "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"

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@ -586,7 +586,7 @@ label chapter_7:
T "At least it wasn't a dinosaur pun this time."
pause 0.5
A "I'm not that unfunny!"
A "Im not that unfunny!"
T "You are."
@ -980,7 +980,7 @@ label chapter_7:
pause 1
Moe "LOOKIT DIS ERE AH-PRON YA LIL TRIGGA FRIEN SOL ME!"
Moe "LOOKIT DIS ERE AH-PRON YA LIL TRIGGA FRIEN SOL ME!"
show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(0.5)
"Trish looks split on whether to be mad about the trigga comment or happy about the successful sale."
@ -1302,7 +1302,7 @@ label chapter_7:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.6 yalign 0.0
pause 1
Moe "LOOKIT DIS ERE AH-PRON YA LIL TRIGGA FRIEN SOL ME!"
Moe "LOOKIT DIS ERE AH-PRON YA LIL TRIGGA FRIEN SOL ME!"
pause 0.5
"Reed looks almost jealous of Moes new garb."

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@ -907,7 +907,7 @@ label chapter_8:
"Fang sat there, looking down at her guitar realizing she showed me something she had never shown anyone before."
"Fang bit back tears, fighting the sob that threatened to spill from her."
"She bit back tears, fighting the sob that threatened to spill from her."
pause 0.5
"She sets her guitar down and slouches, rubbing her eyes and trying to repress her inner turmoil."
@ -962,7 +962,7 @@ label chapter_8:
F "Thank you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}thank you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}thank you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 0.5
"Unlike the rooftop Fangs voice was a weak mumble, broken by hiccups and uneasy breaths."
"Unlike the rooftop, Fangs voice was a weak mumble, broken by hiccups and uneasy breaths."
pause 0.5
show fanganonhug_moving:
@ -1170,7 +1170,7 @@ label chapter_8:
F "Anyways, go ahead and just try playing."
"She reaches over and plucks a string on the guitar I'm holding."
"She reaches over and plucks a string on the guitar Im holding."
pause 0.5
A "Just whatever comes to mind?"
@ -1790,7 +1790,7 @@ label chapter_8:
show fang surprised flip with Dissolve(0.25)
F "Those're for Naser."
F "Thosere for Naser."
pause 0.5
show anon grin with Dissolve(0.5)

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@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ label chapter_x7:
A "Well talk later, Fang. Have fun with the party okay?"
show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended with dissolve:
show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended with dissolve
# yalign -0.045
# yalign 0
pause .5