Fix some proper noun capitalization

There are a lot of comma splices, but “fixing” them all would
totally change the feel of the game.  These two were the only
ones that stood out in any way thus far.

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Volcaldera Bluffs."
 
-    "Weather conditions; cold as balls."
+    "Weather conditions: cold as balls."
     pause .5
 
     "It’s my first time living close to water."
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Wait, hold on{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Carnivore line, Filet Mignon-{w=.4} what the fuck is wrong with this school?!"
+    "Carnivore line, Filet Mignon—{w=.4}what the fuck is wrong with this school?!"
     pause .5
 
     A "Is there a soup kitchen or something around here?"
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naomi:
         ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.05
         ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
-    N "Oh, the school here has programs to help it’s less fortunate students!"
+    N "Oh, the school here has programs to help its less fortunate students!"
 
     show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
 
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The absolute last thing I want to be doing is asking for handouts{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
+    A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I—{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
 
     window hide Dissolve(0.001)
     window auto
@@ -729,11 +729,11 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "I think he means the loan program, sir."
 
-    Sp "Tell him to come in later, I’m dealing with another student."
+    Sp "Tell him to come in later; I’m dealing with another student."
     pause .65
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
-    unknown "-THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang
+    unknown "—THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang
 
     show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(1)
 
@@ -1116,7 +1116,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "How about your classes?{w=0.3}{nw}"
 
-    N "You seem-{w=0.3}{nw}"
+    N "You seem—{w=0.3}{nw}"
 
     "I just nod along, starting to not pay attention."
 
@@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Naomi is starting to look disappointed I’m only picking up on Naser’s interjections."
 
-    Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, there’s going to be free refreshments at my si—{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show naser considering flip with Dissolve(0.25)
     pause 0.5
@@ -1244,7 +1244,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "The kind you listen to."
 
-    A "Wh-{w=0.3} Well what genre?"
+    A "Wh—{w=0.3} Well what genre?"
 
     show naser considering flip with dissolve
     Nas "The good kind?"
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naser considering with dissolve
     Nas "It is."
 
-    Nas "Like, I know sh-{w=0.4} THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesn’t even wanna be around me."
+    Nas "Like, I know sh—{w=0.4}THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesn’t even wanna be around me."
 
     A "{cps=*0.25}Hmmm.{/cps}"
     stop music fadeout 6
@@ -1546,7 +1546,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "A month? That explains that disaster of a jacket."
     pause .5
 
-    A "So about the actual show-"
+    A "So about the actual show—"
 
     Nas "I’ll check on them. Be right back."
 
@@ -1566,13 +1566,13 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}-nother shitshow-{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}—nother shitshow—{/cps}"
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid-{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid—{/cps}"
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}-they even bother?{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}—they even bother?{/cps}"
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers-{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers—{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
     hide dimmer_light with dissolve
@@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     pause 0.5
 
-    Nas "Fa-{w=0.6}{nw}"
+    Nas "Fa—{w=0.6}{nw}"
 
     show anon:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.8
@@ -1686,7 +1686,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "The voice on the other end is loud and shrill."
     pause .5
 
-    Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I-{w=0.5}{nw}"
+    Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I—{w=0.5}{nw}"
 
     show anon:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.9
@@ -1696,7 +1696,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "He holds the phone away from his ear to save his eardrum."
     pause .5
 
-    Nas "Okay okay I-"
+    Nas "Okay okay I—"
     pause .5
 
     "The call ends and Naser sags."
@@ -1732,7 +1732,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     Nas "They're actually a really nice person once you get to know them."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "Naser why did you just murder the english language in cold blood?"
+    A "Naser why did you just murder the English language in cold blood?"
     pause .5
 
     "Within I see the rest of the audience, huddled in groups around tiny snack tables."
@@ -1772,7 +1772,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "That must be Naser’s sister."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Wh-"
+    A "Wh—"
 
     "Then why the whole confusion over her sex? For fuck’s sake."
 
@@ -2073,10 +2073,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     "That fucking caveman of a principal."
     pause .5
 
-    "Naser, whose been a bro."
+    "Naser, who’s been a bro."
     pause .5
 
-    "Naser’s Sis-"
+    "Naser’s Sis—"
 
     stop music fadeout 3
     pause 0.5
@@ -2128,7 +2128,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Finally, I lean out of bed and turn the alarm clock off."
 
-    "I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school - and it takes twenty to walk."
+    "I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school—and it takes twenty to walk."
 
     "That leaves twenty-five minutes to get ready."
 
@@ -2213,7 +2213,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The halls before class are as crowded as always, with hundreds of students filing in unison towards their homerooms."
 
-    "By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, I've walked the same path twice already after all."
+    "By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot—I've walked the same path twice already after all."
     pause .5
 
     "Even after the longest sleep of my life, I still feel miserably tired and ready to crash once again."
@@ -2221,7 +2221,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "I found another entrance at the side of the school that has less students on it. The less the merrier."
     pause .5
 
-    "I check my clock once again - I’m early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more."
+    "I check my clock once again—I’m early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more."
 
     stop music fadeout 1
     pause 1
@@ -2333,10 +2333,10 @@ label chapter_1:
         xalign 1.3
     with Dissolve(1.5)
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.4}-SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish
+    unknown "{cps=*0.4}—SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish
 
     show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "Wait, Trish, you don’t understand-!"
+    Nas "Wait, Trish, you don’t understand—!"
 
     show trish:
         easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.075
@@ -2416,7 +2416,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     T "LIAR!!"
 
-    Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-"
+    Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience—"
 
     T "WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?!?"
 
@@ -2741,7 +2741,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     unknown "Don’t worry man, it happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    A "Wha-?"
+    A "Wha—?"
 
     "Some pink raptor smelling of very heavily burnt grass surprises me."
     pause .5
@@ -2749,7 +2749,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show reed happy with Dissolve(.25)
     unknown "If you’re looking for the office you’re gonna wanna go thataway."
 
-    A "Oh-{w=0.3} thanks."
+    A "Oh—{w=0.3} thanks."
 
     show reed neutral with dissolve
     unknown "Yeah, no problem, man{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -3030,7 +3030,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     stop sound fadeout 2
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1.0, 2, 'music')
 
-    Sp "-dismissed Naomi."
+    Sp "—dismissed Naomi."
 
     Sp "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
 
@@ -3062,7 +3062,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
 
-    N "{cps=*0.5}Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any other prob-{/cps}{nw}"
+    N "{cps=*0.5}Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any other prob—{/cps}{nw}"
 
     Sp "You may leave now, Naomi."
 
@@ -3153,7 +3153,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "But where would Naser be hanging out about now?"
 
-    "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
+    "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa—{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
 
     stop ambient fadeout 2
     play music 'audio/ost/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg'
@@ -3315,7 +3315,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     Nas "Weird guy."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to—{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.2, 0.05, "music")
     #pause 0.1
 
@@ -3458,7 +3458,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     # A small variation is needed here because Anon only hears the first line if he finds Naser before meeting Spears.
     if late_to_spears:
 
-        Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-{/cps}{/i}"
+        Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience—{/cps}{/i}"
 
     else:
 
@@ -3491,7 +3491,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     A "{cps=*.4}Yyyyeeeaaaaah...{/cps}"
 
     show naomi explanatory flip
-    N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This school’s vegan options-"
+    N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This school’s vegan options—"
 
     "I tune her out with the help of a crunchy sugar cookie."
     show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -3509,10 +3509,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.5
 
     show naser neutral flip
-    Nas "Huhwha-{w=0.6}{nw}"
+    Nas "Huhwha—{w=0.6}{nw}"
     show naser:
         easein_quad 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.75
-    Nas "Huhwha-{fast} OH! Anon, what’s up?"
+    Nas "Huhwha—{fast} OH! Anon, what’s up?"
 
     A "Not much. And you?"
 
@@ -3647,7 +3647,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I’m fairly certain that if Naser found out I laughed too I’d need to avoid him."
 
-    "Those cheeto covered claws look like they’d freakin’ hurt, man."
+    "Those Cheeto-covered claws look like they’d freakin’ hurt, man."
     stop music fadeout 6
     pause .5