Merge pull request 'The Grammar Nazi Update' (#263) from Pomi108/SnootGame:script-cleanup into master

Reviewed-on: #263
Reviewed-by: bighoss <bighoss@noreply.git.cavemanon.xyz>

.android.json

@@ -1 +0,0 @@
-{"expansion": false, "heap_size": "3", "icon_name": "Snoot Game", "include_pil": false, "include_sqlite": false, "layout": null, "name": "Snoot Game", "numeric_version": 1, "orientation": "sensorLandscape", "package": "cavemanon.snootgame", "permissions": ["VIBRATE", "INTERNET"], "source": false, "store": "none", "update_always": true, "update_icons": true, "update_keystores": true, "version": "INTERNAL-BUILD"}

.gitea/ISSUE_TEMPLATE/choreo.yaml

@@ -0,0 +1,21 @@
+name: Choreography Problem
+about: A template for discussing choreography problems
+title: "[Chapter XX]: "
+labels:
+- bug
+- "help wanted"
+body:
+  - type: input
+    id: where
+    attributes:
+      label: On what line did this bug occour?
+      placeholder: "I \"This shit fucks and sucks!\""
+    validations:
+      required: true
+  - type: textarea
+    id: what
+    attributes:
+      label: "What happened?"
+      placeholder: "The expression \"Inco Sad\" was used at a time when it shouldn't have been used."
+    validations:
+      required: true

.gitea/workflows/release.yml

@@ -0,0 +1,58 @@
+name: CI Build
+
+on:
+  push:
+    tags:
+      - '*'
+
+env:
+  RenpyVersion: "8.3.7"
+  RenkitVersion: "6.0.0"
+  JAVA_HOME: "/usr/lib/jvm/java-21-openjdk-amd64"
+
+jobs:
+  build-and-archive:
+    runs-on: ubuntu-latest
+    steps:
+      - name: Checkout code
+        uses: actions/checkout@v4
+        with:
+          repository: ${{ gitea.repository }}
+          fetch-depth: 1
+
+      - name: Install Dependencies
+        run: |
+          sudo apt update
+          sudo apt install git libgl1 openjdk-21-jdk golang-go -y
+          JAVA_HOME="/usr/lib/jvm/open-jdk"
+
+      - name: Update Internal Build Name
+        run: |
+          sed -i -e "s/INTERNAL-BUILD/${{ gitea.ref_name }}/g" game/options.rpy
+          sed -i -e "s/INTERNAL-BUILD/${{ gitea.ref_name }}/g" android.json
+
+      - name: Build With Renkit
+        run: |
+          mkdir dist
+          sed -i -e "s/VERSION/${{ env.RenpyVersion }}/g" renconstruct-gitea.toml # This is so we can control the renpy version just from this script
+          wget -q "https://github.com/kobaltcore/renkit/releases/download/v${{ env.RenkitVersion }}/renkit-x86_64-unknown-linux-gnu.tar.xz" -O renkit.tar.xz
+          tar -xJf renkit.tar.xz -C /tmp/
+          rm renkit.tar.xz
+          /tmp/renkit-x86_64-unknown-linux-gnu/renconstruct build -c "./renconstruct-gitea.toml" "." dist/
+          mkdir "dist/android"
+          mv dist/*.apk "dist/android"
+
+      - name: Upload Release
+        uses: https://gitea.com/actions/release-action@main
+        with:
+          files: dist/*
+          api_key: '${{ secrets.RELEASE_SMITH_TOKEN }}'
+#
+#      - name: Nextcloud Artifact
+#        uses: trympet/nextcloud-artifacts-action@v2
+#        with:
+#          name: 'Wani'                                   # Name of the artifact
+#          path: 'dist/**'                                  # Globbing supported
+#          nextcloud-url: 'https://cloud.dev.cavemanon.xyz/remote.php/dav/files/ReleaseSmith/Wani/Internal%20Builds/SOMETHING/' # Nextcloud URL
+#          nextcloud-username: "ReleaseSmith"
+#          nextcloud-password: ${{ secrets.RELEASE_SMITH_NEXTCLOUD_PASSWORD }}

.gitignore

@@ -15,10 +15,12 @@ ehthumbs_vista.db
 /traceback.txt
 /errors.txt
 /log.txt
+/files.txt
+project.json
 log.txt
 errors.txt
 traceback.txt
-
+files.txt
 
 #Vim (best text editor) swap files
 .sw?
@@ -51,4 +53,13 @@ env
 *.rpymc
 
 #backups
-*.bak
+*.bak
+
+#android
+.android.json
+
+#linux
+*.sh
+
+# Exclude mod folders, but not files in the root mod directory
+/game/mods/*/

.woodpecker.yml

@@ -1,81 +0,0 @@
-steps:
-  changelog:
-      image: debian
-      commands:
-        - apt update
-        - apt install git -y
-        - mkdir dist
-        - git log --oneline --decorate --since="7.days" --pretty="## %s%n%an%n%aD%n%b" > dist/README.md || echo "Could not write changelog!" >> dist/README.md #Get that changelog
-
-  version-tag:
-    image: debian
-    commands:
-      - sed -i -e "s/INTERNAL-BUILD/${CI_COMMIT_TAG}/g" game/options.rpy #Change the internal build name to the tagged version
-      - sed -i -e "s/INTERNAL-BUILD/${CI_COMMIT_TAG}/g" .android.json         
-    when:
-      - event: tag
-  
-  version-cron:
-    image: debian
-    commands:
-      - sed -i -e "s/INTERNAL-BUILD/${CI_COMMIT_SHA}/g" game/options.rpy #if no tag, make it the commit num
-      - sed -i -e "s/INTERNAL-BUILD/${CI_COMMIT_TAG}/g" .android.json 
-
-    when:
-      - event: cron
-
-  build:
-    image: openjdk:8
-    commands:
-      - apt update
-      - apt install libgl1 -y
-      - sed -i -e "s/VERSION/${RenpyVersion}/g" game/options.rpy #Change the renpy version to the woodpecker reuqested one.
-        #Get Renkit
-      - wget -qO- "https://github.com/kobaltcore/renkit/releases/download/v${RenkitVersion}/renkit-linux-amd64.tar.gz" | tar xz --directory=/tmp/
-      - /tmp/renconstruct build -i "." -c "renconstruct.toml" -o dist/
-      - cd /tmp/
-
-  archival-sha:
-    image: debian
-    commands:
-      - apt update
-      - apt install curl bash -y
-      - curl https://git.cavemanon.xyz/Cavemanon/Woodpecker-Webdav/raw/branch/master/push.sh > /tmp/push.sh ## I'd use a proper docker container, but dockerhub is owned by the CIA and I refuse to deal with that (also I don't care to maintain it or set it up). #TODO: merge this script as apart of the file so we don't make unnecessary network requests every time we build.
-      - chmod +x /tmp/push.sh
-      - PLUGIN_USERNAME=$RELEASESMITHNEXTCLOUDUSERNAME PLUGIN_PASSWORD=$RELEASESMITHNEXTCLOUDPASSWORD PLUGIN_DESTINATION=https://cloud.dev.cavemanon.xyz/remote.php/dav/files/ReleaseSmith/Snoot%20Game/Internal%20Builds/nightly-${CI_COMMIT_SHA}/ PLUGIN_MAKE_FOLDER_AT=https://cloud.dev.cavemanon.xyz/remote.php/dav/files/ReleaseSmith/Snoot%20Game/Internal%20Builds/nightly-${CI_COMMIT_SHA}/ PLUGIN_FILE_GLOB=dist/* /tmp/push.sh #sovl
-      - rm -rf "dist"
-    secrets: [ releasesmithnextcloudusername, releasesmithnextcloudpassword ]
-    when:
-      - event: cron
-        cron: "nightly"
-  
-  archival-tag:
-    image: debian
-    commands:
-      - apt update
-      - apt install curl bash -y
-      - curl https://git.cavemanon.xyz/Cavemanon/Woodpecker-Webdav/raw/branch/master/push.sh > /tmp/push.sh ## I'd use a proper docker container, but dockerhub is owned by the CIA and I refuse to deal with that (also I don't care to maintain it or set it up). #TODO: merge this script as apart of the file so we don't make unnecessary network requests every time we build.
-      - chmod +x /tmp/push.sh
-      - PLUGIN_USERNAME=$RELEASESMITHNEXTCLOUDUSERNAME PLUGIN_PASSWORD=$RELEASESMITHNEXTCLOUDPASSWORD PLUGIN_DESTINATION=https://cloud.dev.cavemanon.xyz/remote.php/dav/files/ReleaseSmith/Snoot%20Game/Internal%20Builds/release-${CI_COMMIT_TAG}/ PLUGIN_MAKE_FOLDER_AT=https://cloud.dev.cavemanon.xyz/remote.php/dav/files/ReleaseSmith/Snoot%20Game/Internal%20Builds/release-${CI_COMMIT_TAG}/ PLUGIN_FILE_GLOB=dist/* /tmp/push.sh #sovl
-      - rm -rf "dist"
-    secrets: [ releasesmithnextcloudusername, releasesmithnextcloudpassword ]
-    when:
-      - event: tag
-
-  release:
-    image: woodpeckerci/plugin-gitea-release:latest
-    settings:
-      base_url: https://git.cavemanon.xyz
-      api_key:
-        from_secret: releasesmithapikey
-      files: "*-dists/*"
-      prerelease: true
-      title: "${CI_COMMIT_TAG}"
-    when:
-      - event: tag
-
-matrix:
-  RenpyVersion:
-    - "8.0.3"
-  RenkitVersion:
-    - "3.3.1"

android.json

@@ -0,0 +1,24 @@
+{
+    "expansion": false,
+    "google_play_key": null,
+    "google_play_salt": null,
+    "heap_size": "3",
+    "icon_name": "Snoot Game",
+    "include_pil": false,
+    "include_sqlite": false,
+    "layout": null,
+    "name": "Snoot Game",
+    "numeric_version": 1,
+    "orientation": "sensorLandscape",
+    "package": "cavemanon.snootgame",
+    "permissions": [
+        "VIBRATE",
+        "INTERNET"
+    ],
+    "source": false,
+    "store": "none",
+    "update_always": true,
+    "update_icons": true,
+    "update_keystores": true,
+    "version": "INTERNAL-BUILD"
+}

game/gui.rpy

@@ -11,7 +11,8 @@ init offset = -2
 init python:
     gui.init(1920, 1080)
 
-
+## Enable checks for invalid or unstable properties in screens or transforms
+#define config.check_conflicting_properties = True
 
 ################################################################################
 ## GUI Configuration Variables
@@ -72,6 +73,9 @@ define gui.name_text_font = "gui/FallingSky.otf"
 ## The font used for out-of-game text.
 define gui.interface_text_font = "gui/FallingSky.otf"
 
+## This is so when switching from Thai, the system font gets reset
+define gui.system_font = "DejaVuSans.ttf"
+
 ## The size of normal dialogue text.
 define gui.text_size = 42
 #define gui.text_outlines = [ (absolute(0.5), gui.text_color_outline, 0, 0) ]
@@ -104,7 +108,6 @@ define gui.main_menu_text_size = 60
 ## The images used for the main and game menus.
 define gui.main_menu_background = "gui/main_menu.png"
 define gui.game_menu_background = "gui/game_menu.png"
-define gui.extras_submenu_background = "gui/overlay/extras_submenu.png"
 define gui.extras_submenu_panel = "gui/overlay/extras_submenu_panel.png"
 
 ## Dialogue ####################################################################
@@ -360,7 +363,9 @@ define config.history_length = 250
 
 ## The height of a history screen entry, or None to make the height variable at
 ## the cost of performance.
-define gui.history_height = 210
+define gui.history_height = None
+
+define gui.history_spacing = 50
 
 ## The position, width, and alignment of the label giving the name of the
 ## speaking character.
@@ -370,9 +375,9 @@ define gui.history_name_width = 233
 define gui.history_name_xalign = 1.0
 
 ## The position, width, and alignment of the dialogue text.
-define gui.history_text_xpos = 255
+define gui.history_text_xpos = 248
 define gui.history_text_ypos = 3
-define gui.history_text_width = 1110
+define gui.history_text_width = 1112
 define gui.history_text_xalign = 0.0
 
 
@@ -419,6 +424,7 @@ define gui.nvl_thought_xalign = 0.0
 define gui.nvl_button_xpos = 675
 define gui.nvl_button_xalign = 0.0
 
+
 ## Localization ################################################################
 
 ## This controls where a line break is permitted. The default is suitable
@@ -448,9 +454,9 @@ init python:
         gui.text_size = 44
         gui.name_text_size = 46
         gui.notify_text_size = 38
-        gui.interface_text_size = 45
+        gui.interface_text_size = 40
         gui.button_text_size = 45
-        gui.label_text_size = 51
+        gui.label_text_size = 45
 
         ## Namebox
         gui.name_xpos = 395
@@ -470,8 +476,8 @@ init python:
         gui.navigation_spacing = 30
         gui.pref_button_spacing = 15
 
-        gui.history_height = 285
-        gui.history_text_width = 1035
+        gui.history_spacing = 75
+        gui.history_text_width = 1012
 
         gui.quick_button_text_size = 30
 

game/mods/README.md

@@ -1,55 +1,120 @@
-To normal users installing multiple mods: It's recommended to only have one mod folder installed in the mods directory in case two mods have duplicate `green_fang_story` label, otherwise the game will error out if mods conflict each other, this includes not only labels but images & sound too.
+--- MOD LOADER USAGE ---
 
-The game loads an alternate storyline.rpy, this allows you to control the flow of the game's storytelling
-Examples include:
-- You want to inject more stuff inbetween chapters, maybe you hate time skip writing
-- You want to have more of an after story kind of ordeal, for example expanding Ending 2
-- You want to replace the entire story route
-You can still call the vanilla game's chapters like the intro (call chapter_1) for example but you might want to either copy the vanilla scripts and mix in your edits to have full control
+If there's problems with installed mods - like if an enabled mod makes the game crash on startup - there's 3 file flags you can apply to work around it, checked only in the root of the mods folder. They will be any file starting with:
+- "DISABLEALLMODS". This will force disable all currently installed mods, but will still load all their metadata. This doesn't change the saved states of your mods, so you can still enable/disable them while this flag is active.
+- "NOLOADORDER". This will erase the load order/states and always load mods in folder alphabetical order, with mod states depending on the "Enable New Mods" option in the preferences menu.
+- "NOMODS". This turns off mod loading entirely by making the game not find any metadata files to load.
+These file flags already exist in the mods folder, but renamed to not trigger in-game. Enable them by renaming the file to take off the first hyphen.
 
-You will need to learn bit of Ren'Py & bit of actual Python anyways but you don't have to think too hard in learning anything new other than familiarizing with this game's script.rpy's already defined Character objects and images, you can freely ignore most of the UI and so on for the inexperienced but passionate artist and/or writer.
+When ordering the mods in the mod menu, know that not all mod code will be loaded according to the order. Ren'Py has a feature called 'init' that will run code at certain mod-defined stages (priorities) of the engine starting up, so if one mod's init block is set to run at an earlier priority than another mod's, it doesn't matter what order it is in the mod loader, it will always load that init first. The only time when the order comes into effect is if two mod's init blocks run at the same priority, or aren't running in an init block.
 
-Textbox limitation: ~300 characters / four lines, the maximum in the vanilla game's script is around roughly ~278 and that only barely overflows to four lines, so <200 characters / three lines of text should be fine.
 
---- Ideal file structure of your mod ---
+--- MOD CREATION PRE-REQUSITES ---
+
+Before modding, you may want to do either of these things:
+
+-Download Snoot Game as a renpy project and launch through the SDK so you can have easy access to debugging and other QoL tools, including dev mode. (Download the repo in this link: https://git.cavemanon.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame)
+-Open script.rpy and put 'config.developer = True' somewhere in the 'init python' block to have access to renpy's dev mode.
+
+Pick the latter option if you're lazy, since you don't seriously need to use the SDK for most things.
+
+
+--- MOD CRREATION ---
+
+When creating a mod, make a new folder within the 'mods' directory at the root of the game directory and name it whatever you want. Inside that folder, make a file called 'metadata.json', and follow the JSON file format to implement details about your mod. An example would be:
+
+```
+{
+    "ID": "234234u9SDjjasdhl23",
+    "Name": "Test Mod",
+    "Label": "test_mod_label",
+    "Version": "1.0",
+    "Authors": [ "Author1", "Author2", "Author3" ],
+    "Links": "Link1",
+    "Description": "This contains the description of my mod"
+}
+```
+
+Make sure there isn't a comma at the end of the last entry in your JSON.
+
+Below is all the possible entries you can put in, and explanations for what they do. Note that you don't need to put all of these in your metadata file, and infact the only hard requirement is the "ID" entry.
+
+    "ID"                        : The ID of your mod. Required to be able to load your mod at all, as it is used by the mod loader for mod orders and enabling/disabling. Make this as unique of a string as you can, like a hash. Smash your keyboard if you must. This is how the game knows to differentiate your mod from others (And can be used by other mods to find if a user has your mod installed, if they so choose).
+    
+    "Name"                      : The name of your mod. If this doesn't exist, the game will assume the name of your mod folder.
+    
+    "Label"                     : The label to jump to start your mod story. If this doesn't exist, the button this mod will appear as will do nothing when clicked. Useful if you're only modifying something relating to the base game.
+    
+    "Version"                   : The version number of your mod.
+    
+    "Authors"                   : The authors of your mod. This can be a list of strings or just a string. If it's just a string, it will display in the mod details pane with only "Author:" instead of "Authors:"
+    
+    "Links"                     : The links to download your mod and/or advertisement. This can be a list of strings or just a string. If it's just a string, it will display in the mod details pane with only "Link:" instead of "Links:". In order for this to be useful, use the 'a' text tag to make these texts hyperlinks.
+    
+    "Description"               : The description of your mod.
+    
+    "Mobile Description"        : The description of your mod, but only appearing while playing Snoot on Android. If this doesn't exist, it will assume the contents of the description entry. Otherwise, you can copy your description text here and format it however you think it fits for Android.
+    
+    "Display"                   : How your mod button appears if there's an icon image detected. This can be set to "name" - which only displays the mod name - "icon" - which only displays the icon, taking up the entire button - or "both" - which displays the name and icon together, with the icon miniaturized and to the side of the name. This defaults to "both" if it doesn't exist, and if an icon image is not present, it will fall back to "name" mode.
+    
+    "Thumbnail Displayable"      : What displayable to use for the thumbnail when the mod is enabled. If this doesn't exist, the game will use the thumbnail image found alongside your metadata file
+    
+    "Icon Displayable"          : What displayable to use for the icon when the mod is enabled. If this doesn't exist, the game will use the icon image found alongside your metadata file
+    
+    "Screenshot Displayables"   : What displayables to use for screenshots when the mod is enabled. This should be a list of strings. The game will choose each displayable in the list over images found alongside the metadata file sequentially, so if there's 5 screenshot images and 3 screenshot displayables, the last 2 will still display the screenshot images, and the first 3 will display the screenshot displayables. If there's more displayables than images, then the mod will appear to gain screenshots in the mod details pane when the mod is enabled. If you enter empty strings in the list ( "" ), the game will interpret that as a deliberate skipping over to load screenshot images instead of displayables, so if your list consists of '[ "", "my_displayable" ]' and there's any number of screenshot images found, the first screenshot will still show a screenshot image, and only the next one will show a displayable. If this entry doesn't exist, it will just use the screenshot images found alongside your metadata file.
+
+In the same directory as your metadata file, there's image files you can put in the to make your mod more appealing. These can be any of Ren'Py's supported image file types, so the file extension here is just for demonstration:
+
+    -'thumbnail.png' will appear as a banner for your mod, at the top of the mod details pane
+    -'icon.png' will show a small image next your mod name or take up the entire button depending on what your "Display" entry is set to. NOTE: Putting in an image too big in dimensions will crash the game.
+    -'screenshot(number).png' will show screenshots at the bottom of the mod details pane. The '(number)' is a placeholder for a number that represents what order your screenshots appear in. For example, you can have 'screenshot1.png', 'screenshot2.png', and 'screenshot3.png' in your mod directory, and they will all appear in the mod details pane in order. These numbers don't need to be strictly sequential, they can be any number as long as they are integers, and the order will be derived from ASCII ordering.
+
+As the game loads the metadata, it will also collect scripts for loading. When you make your mod scripts, ALL OF THEM NEED TO HAVE .rpym EXTENSIONS. This is important for being able to control mods with the mod loader, otherwise there would be mod conflicts galore. If you use .rpy extensions to make your mod scripts, they will work, but they will not be manageable by the mod loader. This means you should only use them for development, or if you're not using the mod loader anyway - such as adding a translation to the base game.
+
+Additionally, Ren'Py will not load any files from the mods folder automatically, so any and all audio/image/video files need to be manually defined to be usable.
+
+--- TRANSLATION ---
+
+For disambiguation, a "language code" refers to the code Ren'Py uses to refer to languages program-wide, and can be found on the folder names in "game/tl", with "None" being the default language (Representing a fallback language, but usually meaning English. Internally, it's an actual None variable)
+
+For translating mods, you should use the Ren'Py SDK to automatically generate translations from mod scripts. Make sure to use a language code that Snoot supports when you do so, so you don't accidentally create a new language. Put them into an organized directory in your mod and change them to use .rpym extensions so that translations don't activate unless your mod is as well (This prevents potential conflicts from other mods from interface/string translations). 
+
+For assets, the easiest way is to put them in the "tl" folder and have the same filepath to your mod asset as it is from the "game" folder to your asset, just like how the officially supported translations are. This will make your mod less portable, but at least there's no namespace or file conflicts for translating images. If you're deadset on making your mod portable, you'll have to make conditionals in your mod to swap out images depending on the language, which means other people translating your mod can't just add a file somewhere and be done with it, they will need to edit your mod scripts as well.
+
+For translating metadata, you can translate the .json file by creating a new .json and naming it "metadata_(language code).json" (Ex: "metadata_es.json" for spanish). Fill out the .json how you would with the normal metadata file, but with your translated strings. The game will automatically pick this up and replace the strings (or add, if there's no 'None' variant of an entry) according to your language. Note that translating the ID or Label will do nothing, so you will always need a metadata.json file with at least an ID entry even if your mod isn't in english.
+
+For the images found alongisde your metadata, you can do the same thing as your .json to replace them. Simply append your language code to your image filename like "thumbnail_es.png", "icon_es.png", etc.. For screenshots, the number in your filename will determine if any given translated image will replace another image, or add it inbetween images. So if you have "screenshot4.png", and you have "screenshot2_es.png" and "screenshot5_es.png", all screenshots will show up if your language is in spanish. If there's "screenshot4_es.png" in the directory, then it will replace "screenshot4.png". The final screenshot display will always take the english screenshots as a base before replacing the images with whatever translated images that exist.
+
+
+--- TIPS ---
+
+The Ren'Py documentation is your friend, but it is also a bitch-ass friend. It will sometimes be notoriously unhelpful, so consult other renpy dudes from the Ren'Py discord, your snoot communities, or youtube. This may also be of interest, as it will link to other documentation as well as many interesting libraries you can use:
+    https://github.com/methanoliver/awesome-renpy
+
+Link to Ren'Py documentation:
+	https://www.renpy.org/doc/html/
+
+When making the file structure for your mod, this is the ideal. Keep it nice and organized, preferably keeping the root of your mods folder clear of eveything but metadata related stuff:
+```
     In the root of the mods folder:
     folder_of_your_mod_name
-        - name_of_storyline.rpy
+        - metadata.json
+        - Your various image metadatas
         -> asset_folder
             - asset.png
         -> script_folder
-            - script.rpy
-
-	name_of_storyline.rpy
+            - script.rpym
+		-> etc. folders...
+			- etc. files...
 ```
-init python:
-    # Modding Support variables
-    # All mod rpy files must have title of their mod (this shows up on a button)
-    # and finally the label that controls the flow of dialogue
-
-    mod_menu_access += [{
-        'Name': "Mod Name",
-        'Label': "mod_storyline"
-    }];
-
-image template_sample = Image("mods/folder_of_your_mod_name/asset_folder/asset.png")
-
-label mod_storyline:
-    call chapter_1_new
+To start your mod, just make it under the label you defined in your metadata file in a mod script. An example in a newly created "mymodscript.rpym":
+```
+	label my_mod_label:
+		scene my_background
+		show my_sprite
+		"blah blah dialogue"
 ```
 
-	script_folder/script.rpy
-```
-label chapter_1_new:
-    show template_sample at scenter
-    "Sample Text"
+Textbox limitation: ~300 characters / four lines, the maximum in the vanilla game's script is around roughly ~278 and that only barely overflows to four lines, so <200 characters / three lines of text should be fine.
 
-    hide template_sample
-    play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg'
-    show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
-    A "Sample Text"
-
-    return
-```
-
-The funny thing is I don't even like 'fanfictions' to begin with but this mod support allows these 'fanfictions', ironic.
+If a user has many mods installed, it would be annoying to need to keep track of which mods to enable or disable because of code conflicts, so make your variables/functions unique. Since Ren'Py's own scripting doesn't support namespaced stuff, a very simple way is to prefix all your variables/functions with a mod-unique name, similar to your mod ID. An example would be "mymodisfantastic2349234_function_or_variable". Kinda ugly, but manageable with Ctrl-F and string replacement if there's problems. If there must be code conflicts, let the user know in your mod description!

game/options.rpy

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ define gui.show_name = True
 
 ## The version of the game.
 
-define config.version = _("INTERNAL-BUILD")
+define config.version = "INTERNAL-BUILD"
 
 ## Text that is placed on the game's about screen. Place the text between the
 ## triple-quotes, and leave a blank line between paragraphs.
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ define build.name = "SnootGame"
 
 define config.has_sound = True
 define config.has_music = True
-define config.has_voice = False
+define config.has_voice = True
 
 define config.play_channel = "uisounds"
 
@@ -133,9 +133,47 @@ default preferences.text_cps = 50
 
 default preferences.afm_time = 15
 
+
+## Disables loading all languages at once at startup, only loading a language when selecting a language
+
+define config.defer_tl_scripts = True
+
+
+## Retains linear audio fading so mixing doesn't get fucked from the update to 8.2+
+
+define config.linear_fades = True
+
+
+## The variable used for making the splashscreen not show when reloading a mod
+default persistent.reloading_mods = False
+
+
+## Snoot-specific config variables
+
+define config.developer = "auto"
+
+default persistent.use_epilogue_menu = False
+default persistent.enable_debug_scores = config.developer
+default persistent.enable_chapter_select = config.developer
+default persistent.lewd = False
+default persistent.autoup = False
+default persistent.show_mod_screenshots = True
+default persistent.gallery_edgescroll = True
+default persistent.scroll = False
+
+init -1000 python:
+    if persistent.newmods_default_state == None:
+        persistent.newmods_default_state = False
+
+init python:
+    # Makes going forward on the scroll wheel advance dialogue, rather than just seen dialogue
+    if persistent.scroll == True:
+        config.keymap['dismiss'].append('mousedown_4')
+
 ##Default Audio is not ear rape
-define config.default_music_volume = 0.48
-define config.default_sfx_volume = 0.80
+define config.default_music_volume = 0.61
+define config.default_sfx_volume = 0.8
+define config.default_voice_volume = 0.8
 
 ## Save directory ##############################################################
 ##
@@ -192,10 +230,19 @@ init python:
     build.classify('**/#**', None)
     build.classify('**/thumbs.db', None)
 
-    # Do not include mod_examples as part of the build process
-    build.classify('game/mods_example/**', None)
-    build.classify('game/mods_example/.**', None)
+    # Do not include dev folders on distribution
+    build.classify('game/dev/', None)
+    build.classify('README.md', None)
 
+    #Development files need not apply
+    build.classify('renconstruct*', None)
+    build.classify('bundle.keystore', None)
+    build.classify('android.keystore', None)
+    build.classify('bundle.keystore.original', None)
+    build.classify('android.keystore.original', None)
+    build.classify('patch*', None)
+    build.classify('dist/', None)
+    build.classify('cache/', None)
 
     ## To archive files, classify them as 'archive'.
 
@@ -209,9 +256,9 @@ init python:
     build.documentation('*.txt')
 
 
-## A Google Play license key is required to download expansion files and perform
-## in-app purchases. It can be found on the "Services & APIs" page of the Google
-## Play developer console.
+## A Google Play license key is required to perform in-app purchases. It can be
+## found in the Google Play developer console, under "Monetize" > "Monetization
+## Setup" > "Licensing".
 
 # define build.google_play_key = "..."
 
@@ -220,6 +267,3 @@ init python:
 ## by a slash.
 
 # define build.itch_project = "renpytom/test-project"
-
-#RenPy updating from snootgame.xyz
-define build.include_update = True

game/script.rpy

@@ -14,43 +14,21 @@
 #Why yes all my code was formerly in one massive file called "script" thats 28k lines long, how could you tell?
 #Licensed under the GNU AGPL v3, for more information check snootgame.xyz or the LICENSE file that should have came with this work.
 
-init -1 python:
-    # Modding Support variables
-    # All mod rpy files must run a small init python script
-    mod_dir = "mods/"
-    mod_menu_access = []
-
 init python:
-
+    import webbrowser # This is for the ch2 "look the link up" choice
     import random
-    import webbrowser
-    #function for insult layers
-    def showCG():
-        files = ["text1", "text2", "text3", "text4", "text5", "text6", "text7", "text8", "text9"]
-        length = len(files)
-        picked = random.randint(0,length - 1)
-        fileName = files[picked]
-        renpy.show(fileName, at_list=[randPosition])
+
     # extra music channel so we can do crossfade instead of fadeout followed by fadein
-    # TODO: function for stopping both channels with optional fadeout so we don't have to keep track of which channel is playing
     renpy.music.register_channel("music1","music",True,tight=True)
     renpy.music.register_channel("music2","music",True,tight=True)
+
     # allows playing looped ambience alongside music
     renpy.music.register_channel("ambient","sfx",True,tight=True)
     renpy.music.register_channel("ambient1","sfx",True,tight=True)
     renpy.music.register_channel("ambient2","sfx",True,tight=True)
     renpy.music.register_channel("ambient3","sfx",True,tight=True)
-    if persistent.scroll == True:
-        config.keymap['dismiss'].append('mousedown_4')
-    elif persistent.scroll == None:
-        persistent.scroll = False
-
-    if persistent.lewd == None:
-        persistent.lewd = False
-
-    if persistent.autoup == None:
-        persistent.autoup = False
 
+    # Set vars for bonus chapter completion
     if persistent.bonus_chapters == None:
         if renpy.seen_image("big ending"): #for returning players
             persistent.bonus_chapters = 0b111111111
@@ -59,272 +37,40 @@ init python:
             persistent.bonus_chapters = 0b0
             persistent.old_bonus_chapters = 0b0
 
+    # Randomizes the placement of choice boxes when a choice menu appears
     def randomize_choices(choices):
         # fine for size of 2
         if (renpy.random.randint(0, 1)):
             choices.reverse()
         return choices
 
-    pass
+    # For people upgrading to patch 11 and onwards, a fix to make sure the fang tail movie is unlocked.
+    if renpy.seen_image("fang tail"):
+        renpy.mark_image_seen("fang_tail_movie")
 
-transform randPosition:
-    alpha 0.0
-    xalign random.uniform(0.2,0.8)
-    yalign random.uniform(0.2,0.8)
-    linear 0.6 alpha 1.0
-    linear 1.0 alpha 0.0
+    # Determine the splash type for the Snoot game logo
+    persistent.splashtype = random.randint(0,2000 - 1)
 
 
-#python:
-#  def Walking( name ):
-#     show name:
-#     xalign 0.2 yalign 0.25
-#     ease 1.0 yalign 0.0
-#     ease 1.0 yalign 0.25
-#     repeat
-
-
-#layeredimage aquariumexhibit:
-#group animals:
-#     attribute babyTurtle:
-#     attribute octo:
-#     attribute
-#     attribute
-#     attribute
-#     attribute
-
-#layeredimage aquarium
-#group kids:
-#     attribute wkids:
-#     "smolpatrol.webp"
-
-#layeredimage anon:
-#  group face:
-#    attribute neutralFace default:
-#         "anonb1f1.webp"
-#    attribute happyFace:
-#         "anonhappyface.webp"
-#    attribute flipNeutralFace:
-#         "flipanonb1f1.webp"
-#    attribute flipHappyFace:
-#         "flipanonhappyface.webp"
-#  group body:
-#    attribute neutralBody default:
-#         "anonspriteneutral.webp"
-#    attribute thumbsUp:
-#         "anonspritethumbsup.webp"
-#    attribute flipThumbsUp:
-#         "flipanonspritethumbsup.webp"
-#    attribute:
-#         "flipanonspriteneutral.webp"
-#    attribute monkey:
-#         "monkeyanon.webp"
-#  group holding:
-#    attribute guitar:
-#         "guitar.webp"
-
-# Click-to-continue icons / animations
-# TODO: settle on a position/animation that people like
-
-
-#Raw Image & kwargs for long textboxes
-define long_textbox_img = Image("gui/textbox_long.png", xalign=0.5, yalign=1.0)
-define long_textbox = { "window_background": long_textbox_img, 'namebox_style': "namebox_large" }
-
-#Characters
-define base = Character (ctc="ctc_end_marker", ctc_pause="ctc_mid_marker", ctc_timedpause=Null(), ctc_position="nestled") # try to remember some of the basics of CTC
-define narrator = Character(kind=base)
-define A = Character (_('Anon'), base, color="#36E12D", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#0C300A')]) # Light Green
-define F = Character (_('Fang'), base, color="#B4D4CE", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#0F3930')]) # Light Cyan
-define Lucy = Character (_('Lucy'), base, color="#B4D4CE", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#0F3930')]) # Light Cyan
-define Ro = Character (_('Rosa'), base, color="#FE712B", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#54230F')]) # Red-Orange
-define St = Character (_('Stella'), base, color="#D5FFAE", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#294211')]) # Light Green
-define N = Character (_('Naomi'), base, color="#FDD2C1", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#462628')]) # Peach
-define Nas = Character (_('Naser'), base, color="#FFB561", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#512322')]) # Orange
-define T = Character (_('Trish'), base, color="#B675E6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#3A0C5D')]) # Purple
-define Attendant = Character (_('Attendant'), base, color="#5BF0F8", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#121C68')]) # Aqua
-define Sp = Character (_('Spears'), base, color="#C7C7C7", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#272727')]) # Light Grey
-define Re = Character (_('Reed'), base, color="#ED4C5B", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#421014')]) # Bright Red
-define D = Character (_('Driver'), base, color="#FFECBC", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#563010')]) # Yellow-Orange
-
-define FM = Character (_("Fang's Mom"), base, color="#FFD8F6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#521947')]) # Bright Pink
-define FD = Character (_("Fang's Dad"), base, color="#D8A09A", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#461B1F')]) # Desaturated Orange
-
-define LM = Character (_("Lucy's Mom"), base, color="#FFD8F6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#521947')]) # Bright Pink
-define LD = Character (_("Lucy's Dad"), base, color="#D8A09A", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#461B1F')]) # Desaturated Orange
-
-define Tsuki = Character (_('Mr. Tsuki'), base, color="#A7F2A2", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#471054')]) # Pear Green
-define unknown = Character (_('(???)'), base, color="#FFF", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#000')]) # White
-define jingo = Character (_('Mr. Jingo'), base, color="#CD8283", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#0F0D49')]) # Desaturated Red
-define MaitD = Character (_('Maitre D'), base, color="#AF9EFF", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#241630')]) # Cobalt Blue
-define Moe = Character(_('Moe'), base, color="#A5BEED", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#1F253B')]) # Desaturated Blue
-define Vince = Character (_('Vince'), base, color="#FFECBC", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#563010')]) # Yellow-Orange
-define Waitress = Character (_('Waitress'), base, color="#F691C8", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#512040')]) # Pink
-define Riley = Character (_('Riley'), base, color="#B675E6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#1F0632')]) # TODO
-define Tana = Character (_('Tana'), base, color="#B675E6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#1F0632')]) # TODO
-define Trevor = Character (_('Trevor'), base, color="#B675E6", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#1F0632')]) # TODO
-#long TB chars
-define AnonAndFang = Character(_('Anon and Fang'), base, color="72DFA8", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#113623')]) # Cyan
-define SV = Character (_('Street Vendor'), base, color="#F8E120", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#58260C')]) # Yellow
-define carl = Character ('Mr. Carldewskii', base, color="#EECB99", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#082337')]) #Puke Orange
-define Drf = Character ('Dr. Fernsworth', base, color="#DCEEF5", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#253354')]) #Yellow-Orange
-define FRT = Character (_('Fang Reed & Trish'), base, color="#DCBBF7",  who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#191C78')]) #Light Purple
-define FangAndTrish = Character(_('Fang and Trish'), base, color="#42DFA8", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#183623')])
-define NaserAndNaomi = Character(_('Naser and Naomi'), base, color="#22DFA8", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#2036B3')])
-define TeamMember = Character(_('Team member'), base, color="#D32552", who_outlines=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#445F42')])
-define Everyone = Character(_('Everyone'), base, color="#A45489", who_outline=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#4F5F81')])
-define Chet = Character(_('Chet'), base, color="#B45411", who_outline=[(gui.name_text_thickness, '#BF5F81')])
-
-
-#Custom Vars for positions
-transform scenter:
-    xalign 0.5 yalign 0.0
-transform sleft:
-    xalign 0.0 yalign 0.0
-transform sright:
-    xalign 1.0 yalign 0.0
-
-#Stella
-transform stcenter:
-    xalign 0.5 yalign 0.1
-transform stleft:
-    xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
-transform stright:
-    xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
-
-#Anon
-transform acenter:
-    xalign 0.5 yalign 0.1
-transform aleft:
-    xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
-transform aright:
-    xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
-
-#Naser
-transform ncenter:
-    xalign 0.6 yalign 0.1
-transform nleft:
-    xalign -0.2 yalign 0.1
-transform nright:
-    xalign 1.9 yalign 0.1
-
-#Fangs mom
-transform fmcenter:
-    xalign 0.5 yalign 0.1
-transform fmleft:
-    xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
-transform fmright:
-    xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
-
-#Trish
-transform tcenter:
-    xalign 0.5 yalign 0.1
-transform tleft:
-    xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
-transform tright:
-    xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
-
-#Reed and other long tailed dinos
-transform rcenter:
-    xalign 1.2 yalign 0.1
-transform rleft:
-    xalign -0.2 yalign 0.1
-transform rright:
-    xalign 1.7 yalign 0.1
-
-#misc transforms
-transform shudder:
-    subpixel True
-    around (.5, .5) alignaround (.5, .5) xalign .5 yalign .5
-    rotate 0
-    linear 0.0 rotate -0.75
-    block:
-        linear 0.04 rotate 0.75
-        linear 0.05 rotate -0.75
-        linear 0.07 rotate 0
-
-transform turnaround:
-    linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
-
-transform wiggle:
-    subpixel True
-    block:
-        xpos 0.5 ypos 1.0 xanchor 0.5 yanchor 1.0 zoom 1.02
-        alignaround (.5, .5)
-        linear 10.0 yalign 1.0 clockwise circles 1
-        repeat
-
-
-transform raymbatransform:
-    xcenter 0.6 ycenter 0.385 zoom 0.5
-
-# PHONE SCROLLING
-
-
-transform cursortransform:
-    block:
-        yalign 0.2 xalign 0.60
-        pause .25
-        easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.75 xalign 0.54
-        pause .5
-        repeat
-
-screen prompt():
-    fixed:
-        add "cursor"
-
-screen mousedetect():
-    transform: # thanks based nutbuster
-        zoom 0.8
-        rotate 12.5
-        mousearea:
-            ypos -75
-            area(432, 0, 795, 1100)
-            # xalign 0.5 yanchor 0 ypos 0
-            hovered Hide("prompt" )
-            unhovered Show("prompt")
-
-screen textscroll():
-    timer 2.0 action(Show("mousedetect"), Show("prompt"))
-
-    add Solid("FFF")
-
-    transform:
-        zoom 0.8
-        rotate 12.5
-        viewport:
-            xalign 0.51 yanchor 0 ypos -75 xysize(795, 1150)
-            child_size(795, 7650)
-            draggable True
-            arrowkeys True
-            # edgescroll(400, 800)
-
-            yinitial 1.0
-
-            imagebutton auto "fangbutton%s" xalign 0.53 yalign 0.5:
-                ypos 65+(int(107/2))
-                xsize 284
-                ysize 107
-                action (Hide("mousedetect"), Hide("prompt"), Hide("textscroll", transition=Dissolve(1.0)), Return())
-            add "texts"
-
-    add "fang phone"
-
-
-# Naser's position when helping Anon get up
-transform nmidright:
-   xalign 1.5 yalign 0.08
-
-# Naomi's position when handing the brochure to Anon
-transform scloserleft:
-   xalign 0.1 yalign 0.0
+label before_main_menu:
+    # Force users pre-Patch 11 to use english if they were on 'None'
+    if preferences.language == None:
+        $ preferences.language = 'en'
 
+    # Setting this here means we're past reloading scripts, therefore we're not reloading mods
+    $ persistent.reloading_mods = False
 
+    # Call initial language setup screen
+    # languaged_up is set within lang_sel
+    if (persistent.languaged_up is None):
+        $ preferences.set_mixer("ui", config.default_sfx_volume)
+        call screen lang_sel
+    return
 
 label start:
-    $ fangscore = 0
-    $ anonscore = 0
-    $ tradwife = False
-    $ wingStory = False
+
+    $ toggle_debug()
+
     pause 1.0
-    call storyline from _call_storyline
+
+    $ renpy.call(chapter_list[chapter_list_index]) # Call first element of the chapter_list array

game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "It’s my first time living close to water."
 
-    "The idea of ‘marine layer’ is new to me, but I do understand morning mist."
+    "The idea of “marine layer” is new to me, but I do understand morning mist." id chapter_1_51ab5b42
 
     "This was like it, except infinitely more shitty."
     pause .5
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ label chapter_1:
             pass
 
     pause .5
-    "The thread goes 404 right as I'm ready to post my well thought-out reply."
+    "The thread goes 404 right as I’m ready to post my well thought-out reply." id chapter_1_e9db9787
 
     "Better hide my phone before someone sees fit to take it from me, the only human around town. I think."
     window hide
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     A "Perfect setting for a horror game. Or maybe a shitty WAD."
     pause 0.5
 
-    "The attempt at humouring myself just made me feel more alone."
+    "The attempt at humoring myself just made me feel more alone." id chapter_1_ac54fa65
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -132,13 +132,13 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I can already picture what they’re thinking."
 
-    "{i}\"Dude, check it out!\"{/i}"
+    "{i}“Dude, check it out!”{/i}" id chapter_1_6a98e0dd
 
-    "{i}\"Is that a skinnie?\"{/i}"
+    "{i}“Is that a skinnie?”{/i}" id chapter_1_7550897a
 
-    "{i}\"Where’s his spear?{w=0.4} Aren’t they all like, spear chuckers or something?\"{/i}"
+    "{i}“Where’s his spear?{w=0.4} Aren’t they all like, spear chuckers or something?”{/i}" id chapter_1_caa565bb
 
-    "{i}\"Bet he eats his own kind.\"{/i}"
+    "{i}“Bet he eats his own kind.”{/i}" id chapter_1_a073d7b7
     pause .5
 
     "They probably see me as some kind of circus attraction and nothing more."
@@ -148,16 +148,16 @@ label chapter_1:
     "Taking acid is not nearly as colorful as going to Volcano High, I should write that down."
     pause .5
 
-    "As I write \"{i}write that down{/i}\" on my phone’s note app, I noticed the surrounding students stopped looking at me, which is good."
+    "As I write {i}“write that down”{/i} on my phone’s note app, I noticed the surrounding students stopped looking at me, which is good." id chapter_1_95fcf390
 
     "I can peep around the friend circles without a problem now."
 
-    "Not like I'll ever be a part of one anyway."
+    "Not like I’ll ever be a part of one anyway." id chapter_1_d3abf380
 
     scene stairs at Pan((553,169), (553, 169), 0) with None  # snap here if the player is advancing the dialogue quickly
     window hide
     show iris:
-      xalign 0.99 yalign 0.75
+        xalign 0.99 yalign 0.75
     stop ambient fadeout 4
     stop ambient1 fadeout 4
     with Dissolve(3)
@@ -193,9 +193,9 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     pause 1.5
 
-    "O-oh yeah.{w=0.4} She's staring at me{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    "O-oh yeah.{w=0.4} She’s staring at me{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_1_60e2a362
 
-    "...with that look."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}with that look." id chapter_1_599c4881
 
     "{cps=*0.4}Fucking hell.{/cps}"
     pause .5
@@ -213,9 +213,9 @@ label chapter_1:
     "Everyone that has looked at me like that never proved to be anything more than an asshole."
     pause .5
 
-    "Like I'M the anomaly here. She's just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them."
+    "Like I’M the anomaly here. She's just as dumb and insufferable as the rest of them." id chapter_1_b6bf5d89
 
-    "She’s probably no better than me, miss \"my snout is so big I can land a plane on it\"."
+    "She’s probably no better than me, miss “my snout is so big I can land a plane on it”." id chapter_1_1d6c3c9a
 
     "Go back to your friends."
 
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The pavement is cracked to bits and the shrubs surrounding it are overgrown."
 
-    "Even the bench, cracked paint on rotted wood held between two concrete legs, matched the ‘abandoned’ vibe of the place."
+    "Even the bench, cracked paint on rotted wood held between two concrete legs, matched the “abandoned” vibe of the place." id chapter_1_a74eebe1
     pause .5
 
     "It was perfect."
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     A "{cps=*0.35}Never better...{/cps}"
 
-    "I instinctively apply my ‘chill guy’ facade in the presence of strangers to hide how uneasy I am today."
+    "I instinctively apply my “chill guy” facade in the presence of strangers to hide how uneasy I am today." id chapter_1_1804798f
 
     "A hand is held over my face.{w=0.5} In my pain addled confusion, I shake it."
     pause .5
@@ -406,12 +406,12 @@ label chapter_1:
     show anon neutral at acenter#
     pause .5
 
-    A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} 'Sup?"
+    A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} ’Sup?" id chapter_1_771142b2
 
-    Nas "You're Anon, yeah?"
+    Nas "You’re Anon, yeah?" id chapter_1_fbdfd63f
 
     show naomi explanatory
-    unknown "I'm glad we found you!"
+    unknown "I’m glad we found you!" id chapter_1_d9856389
     show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .25
 
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         easein_quad 0.5 xalign 0.0
     pause 1
 
-    "{i}\"Volcano High and You:{w=0.4} A New Beginning to Adulthood.\"{/i}"
+    "{i}“Volcano High and You:{w=0.4} A New Beginning to Adulthood.”{/i}" id chapter_1_850cabfa
 
     "The title alone makes me gag."
 
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Wait, hold on{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Carnivore line, Filet Mignon-{w=.4} what the fuck is wrong with this school?!"
+    "Carnivore line, Filet Mignon—{w=.4} what the fuck is wrong with this school?!" id chapter_1_312bc1f1
     pause .5
 
     A "Is there a soup kitchen or something around here?"
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naomi:
         ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.05
         ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
-    N "Oh, the school here has programs to help it’s less fortunate students!"
+    N "Oh, the school here has programs to help its less fortunate students!" id chapter_1_bc766f4f
 
     show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
 
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The absolute last thing I want to be doing is asking for handouts{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
+    A "{cps=*0.35}Actually,{w=.4} I—{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" id chapter_1_1fae028b
 
     window hide Dissolve(0.001)
     window auto
@@ -733,7 +733,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause .65
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
-    unknown "-THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch # Fang
+    unknown "—THE FUCKING HELL DO YOU MEAN I HAVE TO CLEAN UP AFTER?!" with vpunch id chapter_1_1f9f56e2 # Fang
 
     show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(1)
 
@@ -747,11 +747,11 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
     show naomi explanatory flip
 
-    N "Well Anon, why don’t I show you to class? Home room should be starting soon."
+    N "Well Anon, why don’t I show you to class? Homeroom should be starting soon." id chapter_1_bf193cce
 
     show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    "Right. Home room. I take out my crumpled schedule from my pocket."
+    "Right. Homeroom. I take out my crumpled schedule from my pocket." id chapter_1_7a4749a2
 
     "Naomi takes the slip from me."
 
@@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "Before I even sit down the barrage of questions begins."
+    "Before I even sit down, the barrage of questions begins." id chapter_1_011b9a25
     pause .5
 
     show naomi explanatory flip:
@@ -1116,7 +1116,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     N "How about your classes?{w=0.3}{nw}"
 
-    N "You seem-{w=0.3}{nw}"
+    N "You seem—{w=0.3}{nw}" id chapter_1_9825e9a1
 
     "I just nod along, starting to not pay attention."
 
@@ -1167,12 +1167,12 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "Naomi is starting to look disappointed I’m only picking up on Naser’s interjections."
 
-    Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, there’s going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
+    Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, there’s going to be free refreshments at my si—{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_1_06c36783
 
     show naser considering flip with Dissolve(0.25)
     pause 0.5
 
-    Nas "At Fang’s concert after school today"
+    Nas "At Fang’s concert after school today." id chapter_1_42bd1eee
 
     A "Your what?"
 
@@ -1244,7 +1244,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "The kind you listen to."
 
-    A "Wh-{w=0.3} Well what genre?"
+    A "Wh—{w=0.3} Well what genre?" id chapter_1_2a83dfa7
 
     show naser considering flip with dissolve
     Nas "The good kind?"
@@ -1265,7 +1265,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I curse life for a third time today."
 
-    "The dreaded ten-minute mark has passed, rendering my ‘pizza’ only useful as building material."
+    "The dreaded ten-minute mark has passed, rendering my “pizza” only useful as building material." id chapter_1_cc1da391
 
     show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(0.25)
 
@@ -1289,9 +1289,9 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
     show naser:
-      easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.62
-      pause 0.75
-      ease 0.75 xalign 0.4
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.62
+        pause 0.75
+        ease 0.75 xalign 0.4
     pause 2
 
     "He tears the sandwich in two and hands me the larger half."
@@ -1377,7 +1377,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naser unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
     Nas "Fang’s words, not mine."
 
-    A "Is your uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}sibling{w=0.4} always like this?"
+    A "Is your uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} sibling{w=0.4} always like this?" id chapter_1_a72c93ea
 
     Nas "{cps=*0.4}Fang’s{/cps}{cps=*0.1}....{/cps}"
 
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show naser considering with dissolve
     Nas "It is."
 
-    Nas "Like, I know sh-{w=0.4} THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesn’t even wanna be around me."
+    Nas "Like, I know sh—{w=0.4} THEY care{w=0.4} but Fang doesn’t even wanna be around me." id chapter_1_630812d9
 
     A "{cps=*0.25}Hmmm.{/cps}"
     stop music fadeout 6
@@ -1473,7 +1473,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     A "{cps=*0.1}Uh...{/cps}"
 
-    "It’s the spear-shaped pin on his lapel that reads ‘principal’ that informs me of who this giant is."
+    "It’s the spear-shaped pin on his lapel that reads “principal” that informs me of who this giant is." id chapter_1_918a4b16
 
     A "O{w=0.1}-oh!{w=0.4} It’s uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}nice?!"
 
@@ -1535,18 +1535,18 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "I check the logo on the box."
 
-    A "And to get so many larges from{cps=*0.2}...{/cps} \"Dino-moe’s Pizza\"?"
+    A "And to get so many larges from{cps=*0.2}...{/cps} “Dino-moe’s Pizza”?" id chapter_1_557c71ef
 
     A "That’s a couple hundred bucks though."
 
     show naser unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "Meh, ‘bout a month’s allowance."
+    Nas "Meh, ’bout a month’s allowance." id chapter_1_151cd8be
     show naser neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     "A month? That explains that disaster of a jacket."
     pause .5
 
-    A "So about the actual show-"
+    A "So about the actual show—" id chapter_1_b288cfc6
 
     Nas "I’ll check on them. Be right back."
 
@@ -1566,13 +1566,13 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}-nother shitshow-{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}—nother shitshow—{/cps}" id chapter_1_e630f1c5
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid-{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid—{/cps}" id chapter_1_92bda576
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}-they even bother?{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}—they even bother?{/cps}" id chapter_1_67a711a5
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers-{/cps}"
+    unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers—{/cps}" id chapter_1_886e5482
     pause .5
 
     hide dimmer_light with dissolve
@@ -1675,7 +1675,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     pause 0.5
 
-    Nas "Fa-{w=0.6}{nw}"
+    Nas "Fa—{w=0.6}{nw}" id chapter_1_00f32a37
 
     show anon:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.8
@@ -1686,7 +1686,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "The voice on the other end is loud and shrill."
     pause .5
 
-    Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I-{w=0.5}{nw}"
+    Nas "Yeah{w=0.2} I—{w=0.5}{nw}" id chapter_1_768fb1ac
 
     show anon:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.9
@@ -1696,7 +1696,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "He holds the phone away from his ear to save his eardrum."
     pause .5
 
-    Nas "Okay okay I-"
+    Nas "Okay okay I—" id chapter_1_803a2ce8
     pause .5
 
     "The call ends and Naser sags."
@@ -1729,7 +1729,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Nas "Look, whatever happens promise you won’t hold this against them."
 
-    Nas "They're actually a really nice person once you get to know them."
+    Nas "They’re actually a really nice person once you get to know them." id chapter_1_6921293f
     pause 0.5
 
     A "Naser why did you just murder the english language in cold blood?"
@@ -1772,7 +1772,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "That must be Naser’s sister."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Wh-"
+    A "Wh—" id chapter_1_44a17d88
 
     "Then why the whole confusion over her sex? For fuck’s sake."
 
@@ -1808,7 +1808,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "And then the vocals kicked in."
 
-    "It’s horrific screeching, combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass created a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed."
+    "Its horrific screeching combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass created a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed." id chapter_1_f7387105
 
     "I fight the urge to cover my ears."
 
@@ -1846,9 +1846,9 @@ label chapter_1:
     window hide
     $ i = 0
     while i < 20:
-      $ showCG()
-      pause 1
-      $ i = i + 1
+        $ showCG()
+        pause 1
+        $ i = i + 1
 
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.4, 2, 'ambient')
 
@@ -1976,7 +1976,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "His hand lands on my shoulder."
 
-    "It’s grip was firm as it weighed on me."
+    "Its grip was firm as it weighed on me." id chapter_1_69bc47c0
 
     show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(1)
 
@@ -2073,10 +2073,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     "That fucking caveman of a principal."
     pause .5
 
-    "Naser, whose been a bro."
+    "Naser, who’s been a bro." id chapter_1_3b9f7e48
     pause .5
 
-    "Naser’s Sis-"
+    "Naser’s Sis—" id chapter_1_7533fc51
 
     stop music fadeout 3
     pause 0.5
@@ -2121,14 +2121,14 @@ label chapter_1:
     "That band, if you could call it such."
     pause .5
 
-    "Great idea Anon, start the day by dissing everything you've done so far in your new life."
+    "Great idea Anon, start the day by dissing everything you’ve done so far in your new life." id chapter_1_d1309b30
 
-    "No wonder you're so damn popular."
+    "No wonder you’re so damn popular." id chapter_1_43988396
     pause .5
 
     "Finally, I lean out of bed and turn the alarm clock off."
 
-    "I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school - and it takes twenty to walk."
+    "I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school — and it takes twenty to walk." id chapter_1_4e965170
 
     "That leaves twenty-five minutes to get ready."
 
@@ -2165,7 +2165,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show anon neutral at acenter with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "Picking myself up, I slide into todays’{w=0.2} (and everyday's){w=0.2} clothes and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before."
+    "Picking myself up, I slide into today’s{w=0.2} (and everyday’s){w=0.2} clothes and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before." id chapter_1_6a63c1f7
 
     "My eyes scan over my phone while I shovel my sugary breakfast into my mouth."
     pause .5
@@ -2213,7 +2213,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The halls before class are as crowded as always, with hundreds of students filing in unison towards their homerooms."
 
-    "By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, I've walked the same path twice already after all."
+    "By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, I’ve walked the same path twice already after all." id chapter_1_0cd91a5f
     pause .5
 
     "Even after the longest sleep of my life, I still feel miserably tired and ready to crash once again."
@@ -2221,7 +2221,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "I found another entrance at the side of the school that has less students on it. The less the merrier."
     pause .5
 
-    "I check my clock once again - I’m early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more."
+    "I check my clock once again — I’m early. Fucking hell. Should have shitposted a bit more." id chapter_1_a617a85e
 
     stop music fadeout 1
     pause 1
@@ -2255,12 +2255,12 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause .5
 
     menu:
-        "Naser's a bro":
+        "Naser’s a bro":
             # affects dialogue with Spears when entering his office
             $ late_to_spears = True
             pause .5
             jump lnaserBro
-        "I don't wanna piss off the caveman.":
+        "I don’t wanna piss off the caveman.":
             $ late_to_spears = False
             pause .5
             jump lpissOffCaveman
@@ -2285,17 +2285,17 @@ label chapter_1:
     "I just realized I don’t know what to say to him."
     pause .5
 
-    "\"I wasn’t laughing AT your sister,{w=0.4} I was laughing WITH the crowd.\""
+    "“I wasn’t laughing AT your sister,{w=0.4} I was laughing WITH the crowd.”" id lnaserBro_f3c64976
 
     "No,{w=0.3} that sounds bad."
     pause .5
 
-    "\"Weird sisters,{w=0.2} amirite?\""
+    "“Weird sisters,{w=0.2} amirite?”" id lnaserBro_de4e1ca8
 
     "I might be retarded.{w=0.5} I just told him I’m an only son yesterday."
     pause .5
 
-    "\"Can’t help it,{w=0.1} dude.{w=0.5} Some people just won’t amount to anything in life.{w=0.5} Sorry.\""
+    "“Can’t help it,{w=0.1} dude.{w=0.5} Some people just won’t amount to anything in life.{w=0.5} Sorry.”" id lnaserBro_72296700
 
     "This isn’t time to be edgy,{w=0.2} Anon."
 
@@ -2333,10 +2333,10 @@ label chapter_1:
         xalign 1.3
     with Dissolve(1.5)
 
-    unknown "{cps=*0.4}-SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" #trish
+    unknown "{cps=*0.4}—SAID YOU INVITED ALL THOSE ASSHOLES!{/cps}" id lnaserBro_0c148ca0 #trish
 
     show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    Nas "Wait, Trish, you don’t understand-!"
+    Nas "Wait, Trish, you don’t understand—!" id lnaserBro_037dbe7c
 
     show trish:
         easein_elastic 0.5 xalign 0.075
@@ -2416,7 +2416,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     T "LIAR!!"
 
-    Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-"
+    Nas "I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience—" id lnaserBro_410545a6
 
     T "WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?!?"
 
@@ -2647,7 +2647,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     show reed neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    Re "S’all ‘bout misdirection{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Re "S’all ’bout misdirection{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id lnaserBro_c9697865
     pause .5
 
     "What."
@@ -2741,7 +2741,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     unknown "Don’t worry man, it happens to new students all the time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    A "Wha-?"
+    A "Wha—?" id lpissOffCaveman_36c1271c
 
     "Some pink raptor smelling of very heavily burnt grass surprises me."
     pause .5
@@ -2749,7 +2749,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show reed happy with Dissolve(.25)
     unknown "If you’re looking for the office you’re gonna wanna go thataway."
 
-    A "Oh-{w=0.3} thanks."
+    A "Oh—{w=0.3} thanks." id lpissOffCaveman_1196f077
 
     show reed neutral with dissolve
     unknown "Yeah, no problem, man{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -2787,7 +2787,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "As I near the office I can feel a heavy tension suffusing the air."
 
-    "In front of the principals’ office is Naomi and some other chick, engaged in a heated conversation."
+    "In front of the principal’s office is Naomi and some other chick, engaged in a heated conversation." id lpissOffCaveman_8e8fc47e
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -2925,7 +2925,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         A "N-no, sir."
         pause .5
 
-        Sp "{i}{cps=*.25}*sigh…*{/cps}{/i}"
+        Sp "{i}{cps=*.25}*sigh...*{/cps}{/i}" id lspears_office_f4a717de
 
         Sp "Take this as a learning experience, Anon."
 
@@ -3030,7 +3030,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     stop sound fadeout 2
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1.0, 2, 'music')
 
-    Sp "-dismissed Naomi."
+    Sp "—dismissed Naomi." id lspears_office_2bf1c244
 
     Sp "And just to be absolutely clear, Anon did ask you for this, correct?"
 
@@ -3062,7 +3062,7 @@ label chapter_1:
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.05
         ease 0.25 yalign 0.0
 
-    N "{cps=*0.5}Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any other prob-{/cps}{nw}"
+    N "{cps=*0.5}Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any other prob—{/cps}{nw}" id lspears_office_6cab2144
 
     Sp "You may leave now, Naomi."
 
@@ -3118,7 +3118,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     if late_to_spears:
         "I thank Mr. Spears one last time and head to homeroom."
 
-        "..."
+        "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id lspears_office_a20cefa7
 
         stop music fadeout 4
 
@@ -3153,7 +3153,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "But where would Naser be hanging out about now?"
 
-    "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}"
+    "Maybe near the cafeteria?{w=0.4} {cps=*0.5}This place serves breakfa—{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" id lfinding_naser_9dfd4c27
 
     stop ambient fadeout 2
     play music 'audio/ost/Fuck You I Like To Ignore Problems.ogg'
@@ -3284,7 +3284,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     Re "Nah man, s’cool."
 
-    Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it."
+    Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don’t know why a bunch of people came there to watch it." id lfinding_naser_49c0c397
     pause .5
 
     Nas "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} And you’re absolutely sure Trish is taking it okay?"
@@ -3315,7 +3315,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     Nas "Weird guy."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to-{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    A "Uh,{w=0.4} Naser,{w=0.4} {cps=*.7}I actually wanted to talk to—{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}" id lfinding_naser_3d62f163
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.2, 0.05, "music")
     #pause 0.1
 
@@ -3402,7 +3402,7 @@ label chapter_1:
 
     "The kid ended up trying to run away and got hit by a car, with the credits scrolling over a scene in the hospital."
 
-    "Everyone in class just said things like \"Man,{w=0.2} good thing I’m not like that bully.\", \"Yeah, if I ever see a bully like that I’ll help the kid!\""
+    "Everyone in class just said things like “Man,{w=0.2} good thing I’m not like that bully.”, “Yeah, if I ever see a bully like that I’ll help the kid!”" id lpostCavemanConference_ffa42251
     pause .5
 
     "Then they went right back to talking about me."
@@ -3458,7 +3458,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     # A small variation is needed here because Anon only hears the first line if he finds Naser before meeting Spears.
     if late_to_spears:
 
-        Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience-{/cps}{/i}"
+        Nas "{i}{cps=*.7}I just wanted to make sure you guys had an actual audience—{/cps}{/i}" id lpostCavemanConference_f83fe2ae
 
     else:
 
@@ -3479,7 +3479,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     show anon neutral at aleft
     show naomi neutral flip at sright
     show naser sad flip behind naomi:
-      xalign 0.7 yalign -0.1
+        xalign 0.7 yalign -0.1
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause 0.5
 
@@ -3491,7 +3491,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     A "{cps=*.4}Yyyyeeeaaaaah...{/cps}"
 
     show naomi explanatory flip
-    N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This school’s vegan options-"
+    N "But all those sugars! All that is bad for your health, Anon. This school’s vegan options—" id lpostCavemanConference_f7853b71
 
     "I tune her out with the help of a crunchy sugar cookie."
     show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -3509,10 +3509,10 @@ label chapter_1:
     pause 0.5
 
     show naser neutral flip
-    Nas "Huhwha-{w=0.6}{nw}"
+    Nas "Huhwha—{w=0.6}{nw}" id lpostCavemanConference_07ef26a2
     show naser:
         easein_quad 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 0.75
-    Nas "Huhwha-{fast} OH! Anon, what’s up?"
+    Nas "Huhwha—{fast} OH! Anon, what’s up?" id lpostCavemanConference_a3c93083
 
     A "Not much. And you?"
 
@@ -3560,7 +3560,7 @@ label chapter_1:
     "Ah, shit."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "The band never made it past the first song. Someone said they ‘still’ sucked."
+    A "The band never made it past the first song. Someone said they “still” sucked." id lpostCavemanConference_2efb2439
 
     show naser angry flip:
         easein_quad 0.5 xalign 0.7
@@ -3663,4 +3663,4 @@ label chapter_1:
     window auto
     pause 1.5
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/10.an-excellent-reason-to-start-abusing-mod-powers.rpy

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     "I awkwardly fish around for it in my pocket, hand weighed down by some cheap first aid stuff from the nearby liquor store."
     pause .5
 
-    A "{cps=*.4}This stuff wasn’t nece-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
+    A "{cps=*.4}This stuff wasn’t nece—{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" id chapter_10_d8901b47
 
     F "Shut up."
 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "And you’re fucking hurt. At least let me try and patch you up."
 
-    A "You do-"
+    A "You do—" id chapter_10_cc65cf93
 
     show fang angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
     pause .5
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     F "Is{cps=*.1}...{/cps} is that the phone roomba you bought a while back? You actually kept that thing?"
 
-    "Fang is standing over the shoebox I’ve been using to hold my ‘pet’."
+    "Fang is standing over the shoebox I’ve been using to hold my “pet”." id chapter_10_4825cab4
 
     "I’ve put in a few wooden blocks for it to bump around."
     pause .5
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     F "Take off your shirt."
 
-    A "{cps=*.4}Wait wha-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
+    A "{cps=*.4}Wait wha—{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" id chapter_10_0953ffde
 
     show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.15)
     F "Take it off or I’ll cut it off with your knife."
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     scene wounds7 with dissolve
     pause 1
 
-    F "Jesus that's bad{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    F "Jesus that’s bad{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_10_cac3da1d
     pause .5
 
     "I then felt a cold cream and soft touch on my back, along with a massive jolt of pain."
@@ -397,12 +397,12 @@ label chapter_10:
     "Did I?"
     pause .5
 
-    A "I- um{cps=*.1}...{/cps} w-was that{cps=*.1}...{/cps} did I say-"
+    A "I— um{cps=*.1}...{/cps} w-was that{cps=*.1}...{/cps} did I say—" id chapter_10_5186e326
     pause .5
 
     F "Y-yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "{cps=*.3}Fffffffffff-{/cps}"
+    A "{cps=*.3}Fffffffffff—{/cps}" id chapter_10_fabe2da1
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     "My head sinks back into my pillow."
 
-    A "{cps=*.3}-ffffffffff{/cps}{i}fuck{/i}."
+    A "{cps=*.3}—ffffffffff{/cps}{i}fuck{/i}." id chapter_10_de50291a
     pause 1
 
     "A snort escapes from Fang’s beak."
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     F "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} It’s uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} kinda cute{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 1
 
-    A "Raptor Jesus on his cross of rock. So for months now-"
+    A "Raptor Jesus on his cross of rock. So for months now—" id chapter_10_a57cac18
 
     F "I’ve known. And{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     "Her head slowly descends toward mine."
 
-    "And before we can start trying to figure out how Human-Dino tonsil hockey is played."
+    "But before we can start trying to figure out how Human-Dino tonsil hockey is played{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_10_64faa66b
 
     "Fang’s weight begins to press down behind her hand."
     pause .5
@@ -474,7 +474,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     window auto
     A "FUCK!" with vpunch
 
-    F "Oh shit sorrysorrysorry-"
+    F "Oh shit sorrysorrysorry—" id chapter_10_18853c65
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -500,7 +500,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     F "Er{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {cps=*.25}liiiiike{/cps}{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    A "{cps=*.2}Liiike{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} hug? Maybe? I don-"
+    A "{cps=*.2}Liiike{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} hug? Maybe? I don—" id chapter_10_97151cd8
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -550,4 +550,4 @@ label chapter_10:
     window auto
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/11A.fang-desperately-wants-to-win-prom-night.rpy

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ label chapter_11A:
     "Maybe Fang will feel the same about skipping prom and just going to the beach or something."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Hey Fang. Do-"
+    A "Hey Fang. Do—" id chapter_11A_0665a8e3
 
     play music 'audio/OST/That Monochromatic Weirdo.ogg' fadein 1.0
     pause .5
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ label chapter_11A:
     F "It’s the only way that everyone will finally see our talent."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Wait, your band? But I thought you broke off last mon-"
+    A "Wait, your band? But I thought you broke off last mon—" id chapter_11A_af05d71e
 
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
@@ -53,11 +53,11 @@ label chapter_11A:
     show fang considering flip with dissolve
     F "Thinking about it again, leaving the band was something of an overreaction on my part."
 
-    A "Overreaction? But she-"
+    A "Overreaction? But she—" id chapter_11A_0cf62217
     
     F "Trish has been my friend for a long time, and I shouldn’t have been so harsh on her."
 
-    A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} ye-{w=.4}{nw}"
+    A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} ye—{w=.4}{nw}" id chapter_11A_f42f0ced
 
     show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "So the band’s back together!"
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ label chapter_11A:
 
     A "You sure about Trish though?"
 
-    A "{cps=*.6}She proba-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
+    A "{cps=*.6}She proba—{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" id chapter_11A_1db507b4
 
     show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Oh, you can apologize to her at lunch today."
@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ label chapter_11A:
     A "The janitors have stopped washing my locker since it just gets more dicks drawn on it every day!"
     pause .5
 
-    A "There’s more dicks on my locker than in a pride parade for fucks sake!"
+    A "There’s more dicks on my locker than in a pride parade for fuck’s sake!" id chapter_11A_a7a14206
 
     show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
     F "It’s easier than just letting it boil, right?"
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ label chapter_11A:
 
     "Well, this can’t be a good sign."
 
-    "\"Highlight of our time here at Volcano High\" indeed."
+    "“Highlight of our time here at Volcano High” indeed." id chapter_11A_261c87bf
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -158,4 +158,4 @@ label chapter_11A:
     window auto
     pause .5
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/11B.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-and-she's-smug-about-it.rpy

@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@ label chapter_11B:
 
     play music 'audio/ost/fuck you i like to shitpost.ogg' fadein 1
 
-    "Fang's eyebrows rise and fall faster and faster."
+    "Fang’s eyebrows rise and fall faster and faster." id chapter_11B_7fc66b1e
 
-    "as if she's trying to send a message in morse code."
+    "As if she’s trying to send a message in morse code." id chapter_11B_e170ad3a
     pause .5
 
-    "Wait wha-"
+    "Wait wha—" id chapter_11B_6f942cd0
 
     F "Heh. See, you can learn, Anon."
     pause .5
@@ -42,10 +42,10 @@ label chapter_11B:
     "I guess it’s the least I can do to start going along with it."
     pause .5
 
-    F "I didn’t realize you were Pan, Anon."
+    F "I didn’t realize you were pan, Anon." id chapter_11B_c07d00fd
     pause .5
 
-    A "Pan? Wait, what does a Raptor William’s movie have to do with this?"
+    A "Pan? Wait, what does Raptor William’s movie have to do with this?" id chapter_11B_8a3002c3
 
     show fang:
         easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
@@ -53,13 +53,13 @@ label chapter_11B:
     pause .15
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
-    F "No, dummy! You’re Pansexual!"
+    F "No, dummy! You’re pansexual!" id chapter_11B_4ad8ed04
 
     show anon:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
     A "I’m sorry, what?"
 
-    F "You’re Pan!"
+    F "You’re pan!" id chapter_11B_7deaa74f
 
     F "That means you’re willing to date people regardless of identity!"
     pause .5
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ label chapter_11B:
 
     #I knew someone who would say shit like this and it was a great pain ~ Programnon
     # B: pics or it didn't happen
-    F "I’m an enbie, you recognize me, we’re dating, therefore you are Pan!"
+    F "I’m an enbie, you recognize me, we’re dating, therefore you are pan!" id chapter_11B_52f0f46c
     pause .5
 
     "Fang deserves a gold medal at the mental gymnastic olympics."
@@ -173,4 +173,4 @@ label chapter_11B:
     window auto
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/11C.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right,-but-she-tells-him-she's-okay-with-being-called-a-girl.rpy

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ label chapter_11C:
     "An embarrassed smile forms as she begins to shake her head."
     pause .5
 
-    F "Yeah. I'm good. Just, was reminded of something embarrassing."
+    F "Yeah. I’m good. Just, was reminded of something embarrassing." id chapter_11C_9b60d411
 
     A "What?"
     pause .5
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ label chapter_11C:
     A "Trish?"
 
     show fang sad flip with dissolve
-    F "I can't help it, I see her every day. We tried signing up to as many classes together as we could and now I regret it."
+    F "I can’t help it, I see her every day. We tried signing up to as many classes together as we could and now I regret it." id chapter_11C_6ef0e4de
 
     F "And every time I do I’m reminded of{cps=*.1}...{/cps} this whole thing."
     pause .5
@@ -48,15 +48,15 @@ label chapter_11C:
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}her."
     pause .5
 
-    "There's some disdain in the way she said it."
+    "There’s some disdain in the way she said it." id chapter_11C_425c3dde
     pause .5
 
     "Now that they mentioned it, Trish has been very weird lately."
 
-    "Should I mention to Fang the fact that every day in Math period I try to check if there's a bomb under my seat?"
+    "Should I mention to Fang the fact that every day in Math period I try to check if there’s a bomb under my seat?" id chapter_11C_06d65c06
 
     show fang sad flip with dissolve
-    F "You're the one I see the least. It's such a shame."
+    F "You’re the one I see the least. It’s such a shame." id chapter_11C_b4da441f
     pause .5
 
     "Fang starts stroking my hand on the table."
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label chapter_11C:
 
     "There’s a fragility to her voice. A stiffness in her nod."
 
-    "But if Fa-"
+    "But if Fa—" id chapter_11C_66dcaae3
 
     "If Lucy would like it then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ label chapter_11C:
 
     "While her voice was petulant there was an underlying tone of cheer in it."
 
-    "I reassured Lucy with a smile, which she responded by lowering her wings until they folded neatly behind her."
+    "I reassured Lucy with a smile, which she responded to by lowering her wings until they folded neatly behind her." id chapter_11C_906ac76b
 
     show fang neutral flip
     show anon neutral 
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ label chapter_11C:
     A "Anyways, you got anything to wear?"
 
     show fang considering flip with dissolve
-    Lucy "My mom’s already probably bought the 'perfect outfit' for me."
+    Lucy "My mom’s already probably bought the “perfect outfit” for me." id chapter_11C_8f2619d9
 
     A "But the announcement for prom was just earlier this period."
 
@@ -302,4 +302,4 @@ label chapter_11C:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/11D.anon-gets-fangs'-pronouns-right-and-she-teases-him-while-carrying-herself-with-more-confidence.rpy

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     F "Gawd! No! I’m not actually enbie, Anon."
     pause .5
 
-    "What? Oh! 'She'."
+    "What? Oh! “She”." id chapter_11D_b3fa5df7
 
     A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} still, why do you have feathers on your elbows?"
 
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
 
     "This is ridiculous, I’m just going to ask."
 
-    A "Hey, Fang, you-"
+    A "Hey, Fang, you—" id chapter_11D_ac5af2a8
 
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
     F "We’re going to prom together, right?"
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     F "That’s because I used you."
     pause .5
 
-    A "I’ll get you fo-"
+    A "I’ll get you fo—" id chapter_11D_459360ef
 
     Sp "Ah, Fang! There you are, a moment please."
 
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "A party dress isn’t a performance dress!"
 
-    F "It’s like- you know what I mean."
+    F "It’s like— you know what I mean." id chapter_11D_3fb0b181
 
     A "I guess?"
     pause .5
@@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ label chapter_11D:
     A "You don’t seem as excited as last time you got somewhere to play."
 
     show fang sad flip with dissolve
-    F "I know, I mean... last time I had a whole band to play with."
+    F "I know, I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps} last time I had a whole band to play with." id chapter_11D_3ff16d82
     pause .5
 
     A "You sure you’ll be alright playing solo?"
@@ -392,4 +392,4 @@ label chapter_11D:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/12.5C.prom-night-intro.rpy

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
     "The top half looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
     pause .5
 
-    "And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
+    "And I’m one hundred percent certain there’s nothing beneath the bottom half." id chapter_12_5C_ef6e42e7
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -74,10 +74,10 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
 
     N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
 
-    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
+    A "Nah. She said something about the “fascist sexist monarchy system”." id chapter_12_5C_0a7f51c1
 
     show naomi prom happy with dissolve
-    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
+    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser—" id chapter_12_5C_9bdc511e
 
     "I’ve already tuned her out."
 
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
     LD "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
     show fangdad happy with dissolve
-    LD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+    LD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing—" id chapter_12_5C_a3fea71c
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
     show fangdad unimpressed:
@@ -445,4 +445,4 @@ label chapter_12_5C:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/12.5D.prom-night-intro.rpy

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
     "The top half looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
     pause .5
 
-    "And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
+    "And I’m one hundred percent certain there’s nothing beneath the bottom half." id chapter_12_5D_ef6e42e7
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -74,10 +74,10 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
 
     N "You and Fang just make the cutest couple! Did you two sign up for prom king and queen?"
 
-    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
+    A "Nah. She said something about the “fascist sexist monarchy system”." id chapter_12_5D_0a7f51c1
 
     show naomi prom happy with dissolve
-    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
+    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser—" id chapter_12_5D_9bdc511e
 
     "I’ve already tuned her out."
 
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
     FD "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
     show fangdad happy with dissolve
-    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing—" id chapter_12_5D_13b059c4
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
     show fangdad unimpressed:
@@ -443,4 +443,4 @@ label chapter_12_5D:
 
     F "Oh, Anon, you’re already here!"
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/12A.music-museum-date.rpy

@@ -12,56 +12,56 @@ label chapter_12A:
     show anonphone with easeinbottom
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Alright i got a plan"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} Alright i got a plan" id chapter_12A_22fb148b
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} a plan?"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} a plan?" id chapter_12A_f400a95f
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} To make sure the concert goes off without a hitch"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} To make sure the concert goes off without a hitch" id chapter_12A_5c2b10c1
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} First we need to learn right from the source"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} First we need to learn right from the source" id chapter_12A_d19ef7d5
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} the source?"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} the source?" id chapter_12A_a000864b
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Theres an old museum of fine arts doing a special exhibit on music next week"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} Theres an old museum of fine arts doing a special exhibit on music next week" id chapter_12A_bb8380b3
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Lots of stories of bands pulling through last minute right?"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} Lots of stories of bands pulling through last minute right?" id chapter_12A_02bc79a6
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} If we study from those old guys we’re guaranteed to do great!"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} If we study from those old guys we’re guaranteed to do great!" id chapter_12A_605a702e
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} is it really that simple?"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} is it really that simple?" id chapter_12A_2b11be63
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Sure!"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} Sure!" id chapter_12A_86ddd414
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Were gonna learn how old bands did well, were gonna play our music at prom, everyones gonna love us, and its gonna be great."
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} Were gonna learn how old bands did well, were gonna play our music at prom, everyones gonna love us, and its gonna be great." id chapter_12A_b1baa0c3
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} that’s a lot of ‘gonnas’"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} that’s a lot of “gonnas”" id chapter_12A_25c56719
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} And youre gonna come with me"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} And youre gonna come with me" id chapter_12A_317eca2d
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} what about trish and reed?"
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} what about trish and reed?" id chapter_12A_830d8f71
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Sending them to a bunch of old record shops to cover more ground"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} Sending them to a bunch of old record shops to cover more ground" id chapter_12A_70e11978
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} So itll just be the two of us"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} So itll just be the two of us" id chapter_12A_5095b963
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} sounds like a plan."
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} sounds like a plan." id chapter_12A_6724b157
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Meet me at the galleria at three alright?"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} Meet me at the galleria at three alright?" id chapter_12A_9a71f559
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} i’ll be there."
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} i’ll be there." id chapter_12A_66baf07d
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "We reach the exhibit hall with the big words ‘THE STYGY MOLDRIX EXPERIENCE’ hanging over the door."
+    "We reach the exhibit hall with the big words “THE STYGY MOLDRIX EXPERIENCE” hanging over the door." id chapter_12A_724498d6
 
     "Despite it being a limited time event on the life and times of a famous musician, there’s only a few dozen people here."
     pause .5
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     show anon neutral with dissolve
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Yeah, my thoughts exactly. Glad I could help."
 
-    F "I saw some good stuff in the next row over we can go check out. too."
+    F "I saw some good stuff in the next row over we can go check out too." id chapter_12A_0d3d4cc0
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     hide fang
     with dissolve
 
-    "She drags me away from the screen to whatever it is she wants to take ‘inspiration’ from."
+    "She drags me away from the screen to whatever it is she wants to take “inspiration” from." id chapter_12A_cec16da3
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.15
     show anon neutral with dissolve
-    A "About that, I’m still not sure what your plan is meant to-"
+    A "About that, I’m still not sure what your plan is meant to—" id chapter_12A_0ab93cd7
 
     show fang:
         easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.85
@@ -421,14 +421,14 @@ label chapter_12A:
     show fang surprised with Dissolve(.25)
     hide fang with dissolve
 
-    "She dashes off back into the room we just came in, leaving my words dangling from my mouth."
+    "She dashes off back into the previous room, leaving my words dangling from my mouth." id chapter_12A_e2de294b # changed so it doesn’t say the same thing as the last line mentioning the room
     pause .5
 
-    "While I’m gone her phone buzzes."
+    "While she’s gone her phone buzzes." id chapter_12A_7618a05f # fairly sure the “I’m” that used to be here before made no sense
     pause .5
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    "{i}Trish:{/i}{fast} hey r u rdy to mt up lik u sad we wud?"
+    "{i}Trish:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} hey r u rdy to mt up lik u sad we wud?" id chapter_12A_6f81317f
     pause .5
     show anon sad with dissolve
     "What{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I see{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "Right, so I’ll tell her we should meet at-"
+    F "Right, so I’ll tell her we should meet at—" id chapter_12A_88765e6b
 
     A "Actually, Fang, hold on a second{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
 
     "I think I saw that truck a block east from here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "By the way, do you take pollo or asada or what on your taco. Please don’t say leng-"
+    A "By the way, do you take pollo or asada or what on your taco. Please don’t say leng—" id chapter_12A_c319bece
 
     show fang:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 1.0
@@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     show fang shocked with dissolve
     F "I didn’t see this on the way in, we have to see that too!"
 
-    A "But what abou-"
+    A "But what abou—" id chapter_12A_5bf23bfc
 
     show fang sad with Dissolve(.25)
     F "I know, I know, I’m sorry Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
     with dissolve
     pause 1
 
-    "Trish and Reed were already eating at one of the tables."
+    "Trish and Reed are already eating at one of the tables." id chapter_12A_6a615a5b
     pause .5
 
     "Fuck that."
@@ -881,10 +881,10 @@ label chapter_12A:
     show reed:
         pause .2
         easein_back 1 xalign 1.425
-    "Reed is qualed by Trish’s sneer."
+    "Reed is quelled by Trish’s sneer." id chapter_12A_f274bdf1
     pause .5
 
-    "'Know what, I don’t care any more."
+    "’Know what, I don’t care any more." id chapter_12A_25368dcd
 
     show fang neutral
     show trish neutral flip
@@ -932,12 +932,12 @@ label chapter_12A:
     pause .5
 
     menu:
-        "It's not worth it.":
+        "It’s not worth it.":
 
             pause .5
             "I can see it now."
 
-        "I've had about enough of this.":
+        "I’ve had about enough of this.":
 
             pause .5
             "Just before I get up I think through it one more time."
@@ -1034,4 +1034,4 @@ label chapter_12A:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/12B.band-fang-likes-concert.rpy

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
 
     "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} ive shown you some songs from my favorite band right?"
 
-    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} ‘Bigly Die’?"
+    "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} “Bigly Die”?" id chapter_12B_47412463
     pause .5
 
     "I vaguely recall Fang’s phone bugging out occasionally, was that supposed to be music?"
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
     "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} i won them in a raffle!"
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} now when you say ‘them’..."
+    "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} now when you say “them”{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12B_f9bebf67
     pause .5
 
     "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.15} of course i want you to go dork"
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
 
     Nas "That’s where you live?"
 
-    "Essentially asking \"are you that poor\"."
+    "Essentially asking “are you that poor”." id chapter_12B_034750bf
 
     A "Nah, I just sleep there, keep all my stuff there, and hang out there most of the time."
 
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
     "Can’t win them all I guess."
     pause .5
 
-    A "So this band-"
+    A "So this band—" id chapter_12B_ce9d61f6
 
     F "Bigly Die."
 
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
 
     F "With an emphasis on creative expression and a down-to-earth worldview that just really speaks to me."
 
-    F "It’s the kind of stuff I wish we could have played in our band but Trish never thought it was ‘marketable’ enough."
+    F "It’s the kind of stuff I wish we could have played in our band but Trish never thought it was “marketable” enough." id chapter_12B_efcfdc40
     pause .5
 
     A "English?"
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
 
     F "Oh, fuck both of you."
 
-    "Fang pouts, or as they put it, was in ‘silent protest against the world.’"
+    "Fang pouts, or as they put it, was in “silent protest against the world”." id chapter_12B_64ad30f8
     pause .5
 
     "Really, the way Fang crossed their arms and pointedly looked away from the two of us made me chuckle at the cute angry act."
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
     "I was starting to hear animalistic chanting combined with the arrhythmic bashing of drums and what could only be described as the unholy fusion of squealing feedback and an unmaintained generator running on overdrive."
 
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
-    "Fang rolls their eyes and gestures to the open door to the concert hall."
+    "Fang rolls their eyes and gestures to the door to the concert hall." id chapter_12B_fb60bd12 # anon says they open the doors so they couldn't have been open already
 
     F "The preshow’s almost done, we got here just in time."
     window hide
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ label chapter_12B:
         easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.0
     with vpunch
 
-    "{w=.5} I thought that they couldn’t possibly have been more ready, but they somehow manage to scream even louder."
+    "{w=.5}I thought that they couldn’t possibly have been more ready, but they somehow manage to scream even louder." id chapter_12B_af57635b
 
     "I think I even saw some guy get punched as the person next to him thrust his fist upward while he yelled."
 
@@ -591,4 +591,4 @@ label chapter_12B:
     window auto
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_12C:
     stop music fadeout 1.0
 
-    "Later at my hovel of a home…"
+    "Later at my hovel of a home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_c5f7e175
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -18,24 +18,24 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     Lucy "I wish I could get some help for the other periods, this took way too long."
     show fang sad flip with dissolve
-    Lucy "Fuck, man. Trish keeps staring at me during class expecting me to talk to her, I gotta avoid Reed and Stella now because they're always around her too, it's agonizing!"
+    Lucy "Fuck, man. Trish keeps staring at me during class expecting me to talk to her, I gotta avoid Reed and Stella now because they’re always around her too, it’s agonizing!" id chapter_12C_c23ba8c1
 
-    Lucy "I keep having these dreams where she mans up and I'm forced to talk to her again! They feel more like nightmares now!"
+    Lucy "I keep having these dreams where she mans up and I’m forced to talk to her again! They feel more like nightmares now!" id chapter_12C_fe4378d0
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
-    Lucy "Rosa is too busy to help - with the exercises, I mean - but I hope the camping trip will be fun."
+    Lucy "Rosa is too busy to help — with the exercises, I mean — but I hope the camping trip will be fun." id chapter_12C_d1ebfb24
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "Well it's done. All of it."
+    A "Well it’s done. All of it." id chapter_12C_eb5abcd1
     show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "Thanks, Anon. You're a pretty cool guy."
+    Lucy "Thanks, Anon. You’re a pretty cool guy." id chapter_12C_4b35d8fd
 
     A "No problem, I just like helping you, I guess."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "...and without asking for anything in return."
+    Lucy "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And without asking for anything in return." id chapter_12C_ce0a3c4e
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
-    Lucy "..."
+    Lucy "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_cebf421c
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -47,13 +47,13 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     $ renpy.mark_image_seen('fullbody_kissu1')
 
-    Lucy "You're so good to me."
+    Lucy "You’re so good to me." id chapter_12C_f17b64bd
 
-    A "Thanks. F- Lucy."
+    A "Thanks. F— Lucy." id chapter_12C_3be267da
     pause 0.5
     Lucy "Is there nothing you really want from me?"
 
-    A "You mean repay? I don't know, things are too good now, though."
+    A "You mean repay? I don’t know, things are too good now, though." id chapter_12C_ba818e31
 
     Lucy "More naps?"
 
@@ -61,9 +61,9 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     Lucy "Hand holding?"
     pause 0.5
-    "I'm sweating profusely."
+    "I’m sweating profusely." id chapter_12C_11b9a704
 
-    Lucy "Or maybe{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}a kiss?"
+    Lucy "Or maybe{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} a kiss?" id chapter_12C_b9569433
     pause 0.5
 
     A "Kiss?{w=0.1} With that huge snoot?"
@@ -79,16 +79,16 @@ label chapter_12C:
     A "{cps=*0.5}Uhhh...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "So I'm your first?{w=0.2} That's exciting."
+    Lucy "So I’m your first?{w=0.2} That’s exciting." id chapter_12C_c559fac5
 
-    A "This is so weird, I don't know how I'm feeling right now. Don't you feel weird too?"
+    A "This is so weird, I don’t know how I’m feeling right now. Don’t you feel weird too?" id chapter_12C_c0623946
 
-    Lucy "I've kissed shorter snouts, yours can't be that different."
+    Lucy "I’ve kissed shorter snouts, yours can’t be that different." id chapter_12C_5f1155e1
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} look Anon, if it doesn't work out..."
+    Lucy "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} look Anon, if it doesn’t work out{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_0ef9f288
 
-    Lucy "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}It won't change anything.{w=0.3} Right?"
+    Lucy "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}It won’t change anything.{w=0.3} Right?" id chapter_12C_577feca2
 
     A "Promise?"
 
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     A "O-okay."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "I won't bite, though I've never had human before..."
+    Lucy "I won’t bite, though I’ve never had human before{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_daf63f9c
 
     A "Okay, here it goes{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     window hide
@@ -143,31 +143,31 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     Lucy "*cough*{w=0.2} Oh god *cough*{w=0.2} I think I reached your tonsils! *hurk*"
 
-    A "Shit sorry sorry sorr-"
+    A "Shit sorry sorry sorr—" id chapter_12C_b55f9b12
 
     Lucy "No no. It’s fine. Let me think."
 
     Lucy "Let’s try the other one again."
 
-    A "O-okay…"
+    A "O-okay{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_c1594a5a
     pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Don’t open as *mnph*... wide."
+    Lucy "Don’t open as *mnph*{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} wide." id chapter_12C_a1562518
     pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Wait…"
+    Lucy "Wait{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_edae74fc
     pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Tilt to the side… like this."
+    Lucy "Tilt to the side{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} like this." id chapter_12C_42fc5725
     pause 0.5
 
     "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -177,9 +177,9 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "I don’t know…{w=0.2} I’ll probably never get the hang of this."
+    A "I don’t know{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} I’ll probably never get the hang of this." id chapter_12C_638e3f1c
 
-    Lucy "Really? I uh… {w=0.2}think it was… {w=0.2}nice."
+    Lucy "Really? I uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} think it was{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} nice." id chapter_12C_b887746e
 
     A "Wait seriously?"
 
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Don’t be shy now…"
+    Lucy "Don’t be shy now{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_a8da3a2d
 
     A "Lucy."
     pause 0.5
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     Lucy "See? Getting better."
 
-    A "Mmm…"
+    A "Mmm{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_51d68716
 
     Lucy "I can feel your heart beating. It’s so loud."
     window hide
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "{i}I understand maybe a third of what Stella’s saying and mostly just nod along.{/i}"
     pause .5
 
-    St "{i}-nights really important because the moon will be in perfect alignment for my divinations.{/i}"
+    St "{i}—night’s really important because the moon will be in perfect alignment for my divinations.{/i}" id chapter_12C_7985e04a
 
     A "{i}Right, right. Lunar eclipse. Is that the one where you can’t see the Moon or the one where you can’t see the sun?{/i}"
 
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     St "{i}It’s a very important night for me, Anon.{/i}"
 
-    St "{i}I feel as though my divinations will be at their best under it’s crimson glow.{/i}"
+    St "{i}I feel as though my divinations will be at their best under its crimson glow.{/i}" id chapter_12C_70c45404
     pause .5
 
     A "{i}But camping?{/i}"
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
         xalign -1.0
         easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.55
 
-    Lucy "{i}Anon! We should go to!{/i}"
+    Lucy "{i}Anon! We should go too!{/i}" id chapter_12C_e80ee70b
 
     show sepiaanon neutral flip with dissolve
     A "{i}Wait what why?{/i}"
@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     Lucy "{i}We can go stargazing Anon. Just imagine it.{/i}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "{i}But camping? Can’t we just-{/i}"
+    A "{i}But camping? Can’t we just—{/i}" id chapter_12C_e5774777
 
     show sepiafang:
         ease_cubic 1.0 xalign -0.2
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     show sepiafang happy with dissolve
     pause 0.5
-    A "{i}As long as we have tents.{/i}{w=0.2} Me and my stupid fucking mouth."
+    A "{i}“As long as we have tents.”{/i}{w=0.2} Me and my stupid fucking mouth." id chapter_12C_65d01cf9
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     pause 0.5
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.55
-    A "Wha- If I bite into even a single bug your cards are going into the campfire."
+    A "Wha— If I bite into even a single bug your cards are going into the campfire." id chapter_12C_dac834c3
 
     Ro "Hey! Camping is supposed to be relaxing! Relax!"
 
@@ -514,7 +514,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "What."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Er, what? I don’t speak… whatever the fuck that was."
+    Lucy "Er, what? I don’t speak{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} whatever the fuck that was." id chapter_12C_f524df6a
     show rosa neutral
     show stella sad flip
     with dissolve
@@ -652,7 +652,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     Lucy "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}Your kebab’s on fire."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "Huh- {w=.5}{nw}"
+    A "Huh— {w=.5}{nw}" id chapter_12C_008137ff
     show anon ohshit
 
     extend "Shit!"
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     "I blow out the now burnt chunks of meat."
     show anon neutral with dissolve
 
-    A "Uhhh… Flambe?"
+    A "Uhhh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} Flambe?" id chapter_12C_f1383582
     show fang happy with dissolve
 
     "Lucy snorts."
@@ -826,7 +826,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     "Hearing her put it that way{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Maybe I did ‘fix’ Lucy after all."
+    "Maybe I did “fix” Lucy after all." id chapter_12C_915523ec
 
     "She seems so happy with how things are, it doesn’t matter if it was all part of someone’s stupid plan."
     pause 0.5
@@ -837,9 +837,9 @@ label chapter_12C:
 
     "Her eyes lid as she leans forward, her head tilting and her mouth opening slowly."
 
-    "It’s taken a month for us to figure this out, but now that we’ve had practice…"
+    "It’s taken a month for us to figure this out, but now that we’ve had practice{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_12C_0f600599
 
-    "I raise myself up, my own mouth meeting her’s in a slow and soft connection."
+    "I raise myself up, my own mouth meeting hers in a slow and soft connection." id chapter_12C_219dd22c
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -901,4 +901,4 @@ label chapter_12C:
     window auto
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "Some days we would go to her place, and other days her father was home early."
 
-    "Those days Fang would ‘politely ask’ Naser to drop her off at my place."
+    "Those days Fang would “politely ask” Naser to drop her off at my place." id chapter_12D_c5b3a657
 
     "The bribes to keep it from her dad stopped being necessary after the third time."
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     A "Uhh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps} {w=0.2}They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}Eenie{w=0.15} meanie{w=0.15} mini-"
+    A "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}Eenie{w=0.15} meanie{w=0.15} mini—" id chapter_12D_5ab41393
 
     F "Really?"
 
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
         pause .1
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.175 #0.725
 
-    "I take Fang’s hand and lead her through the lobby into the chamber labeled ‘Sea Turtle Conservatory’."
+    "I take Fang’s hand and lead her through the lobby into the chamber labeled “Sea Turtle Conservatory”." id chapter_12D_80a5ff73
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     pause 1
 
-    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- {w=.5}{nw}"
+    F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin— {w=.5}{nw}" id chapter_12D_5affe53b
     show fang:
         easein_back 0.4 xalign 0.680
     show fang surprised
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
         pause .2
         "anon grin flip" with dissolve
 
-    A "{w=.5}Oh look, {w=.5} a Dumbo Octopus."
+    A "{w=.5}Oh look, {w=.5}a Dumbo Octopus." id chapter_12D_21ece3c6
     show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     F "{cps=*2.0}Whereisit?{/cps}"
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
 
     #confirmed that fang has autism
-    Attendant "Ma’am, please refrain from-"
+    Attendant "Ma’am, please refrain from—" id chapter_12D_c6969596
 
     #show fang adorable flip at sleft with dissolve# at sleft
 
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     A "Is that the first analogy you can think of{cps=*0.1}...?{/cps}"
 
     #Fang has the zoomies
-    F "And what’s over there? Are those seahorses{cps=*1.5} holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}"
+    F "And what’s over there? Are those seahorses? {cps=*1.5}Holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}" id chapter_12D_96966cb2
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     #show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom
     show anonphone at scenter with dissolve
 
-    "She’ll probably kill me if she found out."
+    "She’ll probably kill me if she finds out." id chapter_12D_8eb6e551
     hide fang adorable with dissolve
 
     "But it’d be a good death."
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "Fang doesn’t seem completely convinced, though."
     pause 0.5
 
-    F "You sure they’re alright to just touch like that? Aren't those dangerous?"
+    F "You sure they’re alright to just touch like that? Aren’t those dangerous?" id chapter_12D_16d0a27f
 
     A "I mean, it’s a bit slimy, but there’s a hand sanitizer thing on the wall right there."
 
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "I put my hand back in and motion for Fang to do the same."
 
-    "She hesitates with her hand raised just above the waters’ surface, then plunges her hand down next to mine."
+    "She hesitates with her hand raised just above the water’s surface, then plunges her hand down next to mine." id chapter_12D_edee984e
     pause 0.5
 
     "It doesn’t take long for a few rays to make the corner and brush up against our hands."
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "I notice the trainer has traded the hoop for a large brush and is getting one of the dolphins to open its mouth."
 
-    "The trainer starts brushing the Dolphin’s teeth and showing off the rows of neatly spaced cones."
+    "The trainer starts brushing the dolphin’s teeth and showing off the rows of neatly spaced cones." id chapter_12D_9a24698b
 
     "I make a show of craning my neck down to get a view of Fang’s teeth from below."
     show fang neutral with dissolve
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     show anon flip with dissolve
 
-    A "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} are you sca-"
+    A "Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2} are you sca—" id chapter_12D_7b3f61a7
     show fang unimpressed with dissolve
 
     F "No! I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Wasn’t expecting it, is all."
@@ -781,4 +781,4 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/13A.fang-loses-it-after-losing-prom-queen.rpy

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show naomi prom neutral:
         yalign 0.0 xalign -0.4
     show naomi prom neutral:
-       easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.125
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.125
     with dissolve
     pause .5
 
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     N "That’s an{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{nw}" 
     show naomi prom considering
-    extend "Interesting outfit you’re wearing."
+    extend " Interesting outfit you’re wearing." id chapter_13A_22dc0d7b
     show naomi prom unimpressed with dissolve
 
     "Naomi side-eyes me a dagger."
@@ -162,14 +162,14 @@ label chapter_13A:
     N "How in the fuck did you manage to make Fang {i}worse{/i}?"
     pause .5
 
-    A "I… What the hell are you talking about?"
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} What the hell are you talking about?" id chapter_13A_3dc5c705
 
     "Naomi begins to somehow look even more earth-shatteringly mad."
 
     N "I thought you were gonna make her better!"
 
     show anon prom sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    A "What the fuck do you mean, \"make her better\"?"
+    A "What the fuck do you mean, “make her better”?" id chapter_13A_17e1fd6b
 
     N "It’s like you didn’t even try to help her."
 
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show naomi prom considering flip
     with dissolve
 
-    "Without a word she grabbed me by the wrist and dragged me through the front door, guitar in her other hand."
+    "Without a word she grabs me by the wrist and drags me through the front door, guitar in her other hand." id chapter_13A_fae1afd1
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "The engine is surprisingly quiet, and leaves the silence awkward between the three of us."
 
-    "In the mirror, the Drivers’ eyes start showing a bit of concern."
+    "In the mirror, the driver’s eyes start showing a bit of concern." id chapter_13A_9eb430ca
 
     "He glances towards the radio."
 
@@ -366,11 +366,11 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     F "We’ll pass."
 
-    A "No Thanks."
+    A "No thanks." id chapter_13A_6700fc0e
 
     D "Sure, sure."
 
-    "The Driver sighs a little."
+    "The driver sighs a little." id chapter_13A_5a37e450
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "I considered carrying the guitar case for her, but Fang is already a couple yards ahead power walking to Prom."
+    "I considered carrying the guitar case for her, but Fang is already a couple yards ahead power walking to prom." id chapter_13A_9916c193
 
     "Fang leads the way to the school’s gymnasium. Her shoulders are tense and her wings are raised higher than usual."
     window hide
@@ -446,7 +446,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show fang a prom considering with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Just something simple me and Trish wrote up, why?"
 
-    A "Just curious about what's going to knock the prom out of the park, what about Reed?"
+    A "Just curious about what’s going to knock the prom out of the park, what about Reed?" id chapter_13A_0b924f19
 
     F "He was busy."
     window hide
@@ -497,9 +497,9 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     show reed sunglasses happy flip with dissolve
-    Re "Yooo buddy, how's it going? Ready to see us kill it up on the stage?"
+    Re "Yooo buddy, how’s it going? Ready to see us kill it up on the stage?" id chapter_13A_cc724d9e
 
-    A "Yeah man! Fang said you guys were going to keep it pretty simple with what's up there?"
+    A "Yeah man! Fang said you guys were going to keep it pretty simple with what’s up there?" id chapter_13A_24c38862
 
     show reed sunglasses flip with Dissolve(.25)
     Re "Yeah, don’t want to do something super complex, just wanna keep it simple and cool for these guys."
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show trish prom neutral flip:
         yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
     with Dissolve(1)
-    "We hauled ass to Mr.Jingo’s room, where the band had stored their gear."
+    "We hauled ass to Mr. Jingo’s room, where the band had stored their gear." id chapter_13A_1188babf
 
     "Reed’s drumset was in pieces and I helped him reassemble it while Trish and Fang tuned their guitars."
     window hide
@@ -573,17 +573,17 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}At home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    T "There’s got to be some here! Reed! Anon! Look arou-"
+    T "There’s got to be some here! Reed! Anon! Look arou—" id chapter_13A_aed2a85d
 
     F "We don’t have time!"
 
-    A "What? But-"
+    A "What? But—" id chapter_13A_cc2b38a8
 
     Re "A spare guitar, maybe?"
 
     F "We do not have the time!"
 
-    A "Look me and Reed can-"
+    A "Look me and Reed can—" id chapter_13A_7cb8899a
 
     show fang:
         easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.9
@@ -612,7 +612,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     stop music fadeout 5
 
-    A "I- Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sure{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    A "I— Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sure{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_13A_dcb113e8
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -690,13 +690,11 @@ label chapter_13A:
     pause .5
 
     menu:
-     "Could be worse":
+        "Could be worse":
+            A "Could be worse."
 
-       A "Could be worse."
-
-     "Going great, actually":
-
-       A "Going great, actually."
+        "Going great, actually":
+            A "Going great, actually."
 
     pause .5
     Sp "Where’s your date, I thought I saw the two of you enter."
@@ -730,7 +728,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "Ugh, here we go."
 
-    Sp "Back when I was in the game, I learned a thing or two about-"
+    Sp "Back when I was in the game, I learned a thing or two about—" id chapter_13A_eac77eb9
 
     show dimmer_light behind anon:
         alpha 0
@@ -742,7 +740,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I just want to go home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     hide dimmer_light with dissolve
-    Sp "-ake responsibility and take it seriously."
+    Sp "—ake responsibility and take it seriously." id chapter_13A_e33178f8
 
     Sp "Relationships are a give and take sort of deal."
 
@@ -787,7 +785,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     Sp "Alright everyone. Before we end tonight’s prom we have a couple of items to take care of."
 
-    Sp "First thing is-"
+    Sp "First thing is—" id chapter_13A_1747c65c
 
     "The principal pulls a tiny gold sheaf envelope from his lapel and holds it up for the audience to gawk at."
 
@@ -876,7 +874,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     N "My, I don’t really have a speech prepared. But{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "In just one short year, we-"
+    N "In just one short year, we—" id chapter_13A_5968886b
     show spears neutral flip
 
     Sp "Alright, alright, let’s stay on schedule."
@@ -928,7 +926,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     unknown "I’ll just start recording{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    "Feh. Screw ‘em."
+    "Feh. Screw ’em." id chapter_13A_0d12efe4
 
     "Fang’ll show them how much they’ve all improved."
     pause .5
@@ -987,7 +985,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "Just like before, Fang’s bass sounds horrifically wrong, far too heavy. She’s a guitarist using a fucking jazz bass, so of course it sounds horrid."
 
-    "And then the vocals kicked in. Reed’s lyrical expertise was not on display here, no these sounded like they came from an edgy teen’s twitter page."
+    "And then the vocals kicked in. Reed’s lyrical expertise was not on display here, no, these sounded like they came from an edgy teen’s twitter page." id chapter_13A_5c7ffd06
 
     "It’s horrific screeching, combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass creating a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed."
     pause .5
@@ -1065,7 +1063,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "The room goes completely silent aside from the sounds of Fang’s sprinting footsteps and sobbing."
 
-    "Spear’s lazer gaze is directed at me."
+    "Spear’s laser gaze is directed at me." id chapter_13A_e1ec00b7
     pause .5
 
     "He jams his thumb in the direction of the exit Fang just took."
@@ -1078,7 +1076,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "I slip out the side door towards the music room once again."
     pause .5
 
-    "Trish and Reed were sitting in the far corner of the room, and Fang was nowhere to be seen."
+    "Trish and Reed are sitting in the far corner of the room, and Fang is nowhere to be seen." id chapter_13A_bac2a10f
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -1120,7 +1118,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     show trish:
         easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.65
     show trish prom surprised flip with dissolve
-    T "I, whu-"
+    T "I, whu—" id chapter_13A_ca31d07a
 
     A "I don’t care, I need to find Fang. Now."
 
@@ -1167,7 +1165,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "What do I even say to her?"
 
-    "‘Just bear with it?’ ‘You still have friends?’"
+    "“Just bear with it”? “You still have friends”?" id chapter_13A_6694287c
 
     "All of that’s terrible."
 
@@ -1178,7 +1176,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "The light spills through the foyer into the darkened chamber."
 
-    "Spear’s jacket is thrown over one of the seats near me."
+    "Spears’ jacket is thrown over one of the seats near me." id chapter_13A_dc4e74fd
     pause .5
 
     "The door shuts behind me, leaving me in the dark."
@@ -1248,7 +1246,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     F "If she was never around Naser."
 
-    F "If-"
+    F "If—" id chapter_13A_6fd4fb53
 
     A "Fang!"
 
@@ -1258,7 +1256,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     A "Look, forget all of that. It doesn’t matter. None of it matters."
     pause .5
 
-    F "I-"
+    F "I—" id chapter_13A_ec6285dc
 
     A "Naomi doesn’t matter at all. She and her stupid plan don’t fucking matter."
 
@@ -1434,7 +1432,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
         subpixel True
     pause .5
 
-    "Fang plops down next to me, the shirt's hem falling down to barely cover her thighs and lack of shorts I could give her."
+    "Fang plops down next to me, the shirt’s hem falling down to barely cover her thighs and lack of shorts I could give her." id chapter_13A_01623971
 
     "If only she wasn’t so depressed, she’d look really cute right now."
 
@@ -1449,18 +1447,18 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "Fuck me sideways, what do I have that’s presentable to someone else{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "I got uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Kingdom He-no{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "I got uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Kingdom He— no{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_13A_915f43c1
 
-    "Dark So-no{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "Dark So— no{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_13A_e4fdc69a
 
-    "Senran- I feel retarded for even considering it, FUCK NO{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "Senran— I feel retarded for even considering it, FUCK NO{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_13A_24ef0971
 
-    "Screw it, I'll just go with Rock Ring. That always calms you down."
+    "Screw it, I’ll just go with Rock Ring. That always calms you down." id chapter_13A_39a50379
 
     "Don’t get many opportunities these days to use The Duke, anyways."
     pause .5
 
-    "I boot up the XROX and insert the Rock Ring 2 disc."
+    "I boot up the Xrox and insert the Rock Ring 2 disc." id chapter_13A_a7eeed1b
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -1497,7 +1495,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     F "Yeah, cool{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    F "Hey, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} you said something about Naomi having a ‘plan’ earlier. What did you mean by that?"
+    F "Hey, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} you said something about Naomi having a “plan” earlier. What did you mean by that?" id chapter_13A_c1c13d27
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     pause .5
 
@@ -1518,7 +1516,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     F "It’s not nothing. What. Did. She. Do?"
 
-    A "Now’s not a good time, we should talk about it lat-"
+    A "Now’s not a good time, we should talk about it lat—" id chapter_13A_f9619cb7
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -1544,7 +1542,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
     "Her free hand raises into a slashing position, clenched into a claw so her nails protrude like razors."
     pause .5
 
-    F "{i}TELL ME OR I’LL{/i}-"
+    F "{i}TELL ME OR I’LL{/i}—" id chapter_13A_3c70d4b5
 
     A "SHE PUT ME WITH YOU!"
     stop music fadeout 4
@@ -1573,7 +1571,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     A "Naser’s always worrying about you, so she wanted to get his full attention{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}By trying to have someone ‘fix’ you."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}By trying to have someone “fix” you." id chapter_13A_41829d39
 
     "Fang’s hands cradle her head, as though squeezing it hard enough would wake her up from this nightmare."
     pause .5
@@ -1582,7 +1580,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     A "You know I really do have feelings for you, I genuinely like you."
 
-    A "It doesn’t matter what Naomi’s stupid ‘plans’ are, we still-"
+    A "It doesn’t matter what Naomi’s stupid “plans” are, we still—" id chapter_13A_41532d86
 
     "Out of nowhere Fang’s energy returns into a fit of unrepressed rage."
 
@@ -1613,7 +1611,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "With a swift kick, the Duke is catapulted into the bathroom."
 
-    "I hope Fang's foot is okay."
+    "I hope Fang’s foot is okay." id chapter_13A_85ca2fef
 
     A "Calm down! Don’t break anything!"
 
@@ -1623,7 +1621,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     "My pleas are ignored, instead all I get are continued desperate grunts as she tries to pummel the wooden door."
 
-    A "Fang, really, you need to stop-"
+    A "Fang, really, you need to stop—" id chapter_13A_c88c0e94
 
     "With one last scream, she punches clean through the shelf’s cabinet door, leaving a hole about the size of a football."
     window hide
@@ -1650,13 +1648,13 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     F "You don’t like me, you just wanted to change me to something I’m not to get Naomi off your back."
 
-    A "That’s not true! Fang, listen to me. I do lo-"
+    A "That’s not true! Fang, listen to me. I do lo—" id chapter_13A_a39a42da
     window hide Dissolve (0.001)
     window auto
 
     scene roomthrash9 with hpunch
 
-    "Before I can finish, Fang plants her foot on my chest and pushes my away with all her strength."
+    "Before I can finish, Fang plants her foot on my chest and pushes me away with all her strength." id chapter_13A_f0301559
 
     "The force makes me stumble back several feet."
 
@@ -1742,7 +1740,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
 
     A "Look{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "You're tired, I'm tired, let's just sleep and think it over tomorrow."
+    A "You’re tired, I’m tired, let’s just sleep and think it over tomorrow." id chapter_13A_06884574
     pause .5
 
     "As I drape the blanket over her shoulders, she reaches out to squeeze my hand."
@@ -1799,4 +1797,4 @@ label chapter_13A:
     window auto
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/13B.fang-breaks-up-with-anon.rpy

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
     "The top half looks like it’s been shrink-wrapped to her body."
     pause .5
 
-    "And I'm one hundred percent certain there's nothing beneath the bottom half."
+    "And I’m one hundred percent certain there’s nothing beneath the bottom half." id chapter_13B_ef6e42e7
     pause .5
 
     show anon neutral flip:
@@ -50,10 +50,10 @@ label chapter_13B:
 
     N "But you and Fang just make the cutest couple! You could have signed up for prom King and Queen!"
 
-    A "Nah. She said something about the ‘fascist sexist monarchy system’."
+    A "Nah. She said something about the “fascist sexist monarchy system”." id chapter_13B_0a7f51c1
 
     show naomi prom happy with dissolve
-    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser-"
+    N "Well, Naser and I have entered and we are going to be prom royalty. Ooooh, I can not wait to wear that beautiful tiara, I picked it out and everything and the crown for Naser—" id chapter_13B_9bdc511e
 
     "I’ve already tuned her out."
 
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
     FD "You’d be surprised how effective staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
     show fangdad happy with dissolve
-    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
+    FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing—" id chapter_13B_13b059c4
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
     show fangdad unimpressed:
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 1.0
     show fang surprised flip with dissolve
 
-    F "Jeez, anon, you look terrible!"
+    F "Jeez, Anon, you look terrible!" id chapter_13B_af8ed57a
 
     A "*huff* yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}  I *huff*{cps=*.1}...{/cps} don’t feel great{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
     "His hand darts to the radio knob."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Don-"
+    A "Don—" id chapter_13B_8bc5974e
 
     play music 'audio/OST/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "The way I dance with youuuu~"
@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
         easein_back 1.5 xalign 0.3
     pause 1
 
-    F "We were gonna play a show at prom and everyone was gonna love us and it was gonna be our ‘big break’ like she always said."
+    F "We were gonna play a show at prom and everyone was gonna love us and it was gonna be our “big break” like she always said." id chapter_13B_65c19b73
     pause .5
 
     F "Now{cps=*.1}...{/cps} fuuuck. Now Trish went and did all that to you and now none of that’s happening."
@@ -695,12 +695,12 @@ label chapter_13B:
     A "It’sh all a bunch of bullshit. Shkool is bullshit and promf is bullshit and err’thang is bullshit."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Not you though, you- you- you’re not bullshit."
+    A "Not you though, you— you— you’re not bullshit." id chapter_13B_8f7d741e
     pause .5
 
     A "Err’thin was great ’til fuckin’ Trish done did me dirty and turned it into Rock Bottom two point oh."
 
-    A "I ackshually had frens ’n life ‘n shit."
+    A "I ackshually had frens ’n life ’n shit." id chapter_13B_3c3731cf
 
     A "’n not come off as a fuckin’ retard for once."
     pause .5
@@ -742,7 +742,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
 
     "How does that pink bitch keep doing it?!"
 
-    "Always puttin’ her nose into everythin’. ‘How’s Fang, Anon?’ ‘What have yoush and Fang been up to?’"
+    "Always puttin’ her nose into everythin’. “How’s Fang, Anon?” “What have yoush and Fang been up to?”" id chapter_13B_d9d0b124
 
     "Whatta bitch."
 
@@ -761,7 +761,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
 
     A "Yeah, poor Naser."
 
-    "How the fuck did he even hook up with her ‘nyways?"
+    "How the fuck did he even hook up with her ’nyways?" id chapter_13B_b6daf4b3
     pause .5
 
     A "He’s soo worried about everyone, I always see him fretting about you."
@@ -772,10 +772,10 @@ label chapter_13B:
 
     "I can just imagine her now."
 
-    A "‘Nooo stop paying attention to Fang, waaaah’."
+    A "“Nooo stop paying attention to Fang, waaaah”." id chapter_13B_73163568
     pause .5
 
-    "The fuck’s her deal anyway{cps=*.1}...{/cps} tryna ‘fix’ Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "The fuck’s her deal anyway{cps=*.1}...{/cps} tryna “fix” Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_13B_f33cce99
 
     "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} s’not her shit to fix{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
     pause .5
     
     show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "You said Naomi was trying to ‘fix’ me?"
+    F "You said Naomi was trying to “fix” me?" id chapter_13B_8f21095d
     pause .5
 
     A "Fuuuuuuuuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -908,7 +908,7 @@ label chapter_13B:
     show fang:
         easein_quart 1 xalign 0.85
     show fang very angry flip with dissolve
-    F "Did you ever care about me or were you just ‘fixing’ everything Naomi didn’t like?"
+    F "Did you ever care about me or were you just “fixing” everything Naomi didn’t like?" id chapter_13B_d6f15e1c
 
     F "Like the fucking tool that you are."
 
@@ -1048,4 +1048,4 @@ label chapter_13B:
     window auto
     pause 1
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy

@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The onslaught of flashes continues as the four of us are directed to stand and pose together in every possible combination."
 
-    "After a millenia Fang’s mother is satisfied, or her camera ran out of storage."
+    "After a millenium Fang’s mother is satisfied, or her camera ran out of storage." id chapter_13D_66ec30ce
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     with Dissolve(.75)
     pause .5
 
-    "Naser and Fang both crash onto the couch rubbing their photo-bleached eyes, Even Naomi is holding her eyes closed."
+    "Naser and Fang both crash onto the couch rubbing their photo-bleached eyes, even Naomi is holding her eyes closed." id chapter_13D_fccd7666
 
     "The whole thing left me parched."
     pause .5
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "So?"
 
-    N "I mean, I thought you would try to make her{cps=*.2}...{/cps} {w=0.2}Presentable, you know?"
+    N "I mean, I thought you would try to make her{cps=*.2}...{/cps} {w=0.2}presentable, you know?" id chapter_13D_4c0437f4
     pause .5
 
     "Mmm, love me some water."
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "I see."
     show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    N "Oh, really? That’s grea-"
+    N "Oh, really? That’s grea—" id chapter_13D_dd719bac
 
     stop music fadeout 0.02
 
@@ -379,10 +379,10 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "Why do you look so surprised? Isn’t me being invisible exactly what you want?"
 
-    N "W-well, n-no, I was only planning-"
+    N "W-well, n-no, I was only planning—" id chapter_13D_71218acb
     show fang d prom unimpressed flip with dissolve
 
-    F "Oh, right! Your ‘plan’!"
+    F "Oh, right! Your “plan”!" id chapter_13D_1a8e9e8d
 
     F "I’ve known for months now you were up to something retarded, but not what."
 
@@ -560,7 +560,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     D "City taxi service."
 
-    A "Yes, can you come to the bus stop at-"
+    A "Yes, can you come to the bus stop at—" id chapter_13D_901c7a90
 
     D "Got it."
 
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "Did he hang up on you?"
 
-    A "I dunno, maybe-"
+    A "I dunno, maybe—" id chapter_13D_056ff5a0
     show fang d prom shock with dissolve
 
     "The taxi skids around the corner, barreling towards the bus stop."
@@ -648,7 +648,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "His hand darts to the radio knob."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "Don-"
+    A "Don—" id chapter_13D_8bc5974e
 
     "The way I dance with youuuu~"
 
@@ -813,7 +813,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
             A "Weren’t you going to talk to her about it, Fang?"
 
     show fang prom d sad with dissolve
-    F "I’ve{cps=*.125}...{/cps}been meaning to, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    F "I’ve{cps=*.125}...{/cps} been meaning to, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_13D_d8a431d7
 
     F "It’s just sort of awkward, you know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -824,7 +824,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "She bought a ticket? Does she even have a date?"
 
-    Re "Took advantage of my ‘plus one’ deal for deejaying tonight, dude."
+    Re "Took advantage of my “plus one” deal for deejaying tonight, dude." id chapter_13D_d54370f0
 
     Re "Don’t think she wanted a dance with King Rex though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
@@ -1134,7 +1134,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
         repeat
     show fang d prom happy with dissolve
 
-    "Fang seems glad I’ve joined in, she even tries to mimic a few of my ‘moves’."
+    "Fang seems glad I’ve joined in, she even tries to mimic a few of my “moves”." id chapter_13D_e0bd99a4
 
     "Then she raises an eyebrow and her smile curls a bit more."
     show fang:
@@ -1181,7 +1181,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Reed wades through the crowd and grabs Fang’s shoulder from behind."
     show fang prom d shocked flip with dissolve
 
-    F "Yah! What the-"
+    F "Yah! What the—" id chapter_13D_4d689074
 
     F "Reed, why aren’t you on stage?"
 
@@ -1201,7 +1201,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show fang prom d neutral with dissolve
 
-    Re "How did you-{w=0.25} nevermind."
+    Re "How did you—{w=0.25} nevermind." id chapter_13D_fad9c04f
 
     Re "Come on, there’s no time!"
 
@@ -1281,7 +1281,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Sitting alone at a table in the back is Trish, blankly staring at her phone and not touching the plate of food in front of her."
 
-    "I really don't pay any mind to her, my focus solely on getting to the buffet table."
+    "I really don’t pay any mind to her, my focus solely on getting to the buffet table." id chapter_13D_78056a2f
     pause 0.5
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
@@ -1362,7 +1362,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     T "No! I mean here!"
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "To{cps=*.1}...{/cps}eat?"
+    A "To{cps=*.1}...{/cps} eat?" id chapter_13D_9631f120
     pause 0.5
 
     "For emphasis I show her my half finished plate."
@@ -1374,7 +1374,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Oh!"
 
-    A "Because it’s prom-"
+    A "Because it’s prom—" id chapter_13D_d302ad4d
     show trish:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
     show trish prom angry with dissolve
@@ -1519,7 +1519,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Poor Reed."
     show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
 
-    A "Well, how ‘bout with me?"
+    A "Well, how ’bout with me?" id chapter_13D_aeba47b6
 
     T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Do you even know how to dance?"
     pause 0.5
@@ -1545,7 +1545,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     stop music fadeout 3
     T "Alright, I’ll teach you."
 
-    A "Wait wha-"
+    A "Wait wha—" id chapter_13D_13386564
 
     T "I want to dance, and so help me Raptor Jesus I’m getting a dance."
     pause 0.5
@@ -1645,7 +1645,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Wanna head back to the food table?"
 
-    T "Er- yeah. Sorry."
+    T "Er— yeah. Sorry." id chapter_13D_f54e506c
 
     A "For what? Come on."
     window hide
@@ -1702,7 +1702,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     with dissolve
     pause 0.5
 
-    "Well then. Got some time to kill, time to shitpo-"
+    "Well then. Got some time to kill, time to shitpo—" id chapter_13D_9bf6bcea
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg'
     "*THUNK*" with vpunch
@@ -1927,7 +1927,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Sp "Alright everyone. Before we end tonight’s prom we have a couple of items to take care of."
     stop music fadeout 3.0
 
-    Sp "First thing is-"
+    Sp "First thing is—" id chadshark_1747c65c
 
     "The principal pulls a tiny gold sheaf envelope from his lapel and holds it up for the audience to gawk at."
 
@@ -1957,7 +1957,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Sp "Twenty-twenty class."
 
-    Sp "{cps=*.6}Aaaaaare{/cps}.{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Sp "{cps=*.6}Aaaaaare{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chadshark_2b7adf0f
 
     pause 0.5
     play sound 'audio/effects/drumrollEnd.ogg'
@@ -2043,7 +2043,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "My, I don’t really have a speech prepared. But{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "In just one short year, we-"
+    N "In just one short year, we—" id chadshark_5968886b
     show spears neutral flip
 
     Sp "Alright, alright, let’s stay on schedule."
@@ -2075,7 +2075,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Sp "To close off this wonderful night, I’ve asked a student to play one final song for us."
 
-    Sp "Now I know she’s played before with... mixed results, but please give her a second chance."
+    Sp "Now I know she’s played before with{cps=*.1}...{/cps} mixed results, but please give her a second chance." id chadshark_1a054b5c
 
     Sp "To finish up, please welcome Fang!"
 
@@ -2143,13 +2143,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Trish sees what I’m doing and whistles with her thumb and index finger."
     show trish prom indignant with dissolve
 
-    unknown "Who the-"
+    unknown "Who the—" id chadshark_6e1ede90
 
-    unknown "-that the weeb?"
+    unknown "—that the weeb?" id chadshark_ed3b0071
 
-    unknown "Only he would-"
+    unknown "Only he would—" id chadshark_37a27311
 
-    unknown "-match made for losers-"
+    unknown "—match made for losers—" id chadshark_272a0107
     pause 0.5
 
     "Fang notices us and some of the nervousness melts off her face."
@@ -2300,7 +2300,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "When I had brought up calling the taxi to take us home, Fang insisted on walking instead."
 
-    "And I couldn’t turn her down after she gave me ‘the look’."
+    "And I couldn’t turn her down after she gave me “the look”." id chadshark_353e5bf5
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -2367,7 +2367,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "Hehehe, sorry. One sec."
     show anon prom neutral with dissolve
 
-    "A check of it shows I'm getting dangerously close to my midnight curfew."
+    "A check of it shows I’m getting dangerously close to my midnight curfew." id chadshark_1780ab0e
 
     "Also, Reed had been texting me several pictures in rapid succession."
 
@@ -2378,9 +2378,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "And Stella, with a blurred gray elbow barely in frame."
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Reedman: yooooo i got my dances{/i}"
+    "{i}Reedman:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} yooooo i got my dances" id chadshark_21e1f5d8
 
-    "{i}Reedman: also swing by the hospital some time, bring my backpack{/i}"
+    "{i}Reedman:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} also swing by the hospital some time, bring my backpack" id chadshark_29681fe2
     show anon prom grin with dissolve
 
     "He really does it to himself."
@@ -2427,7 +2427,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I look around and see that she’s telling the truth."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "W-well, okay? Any-"
+    A "W-well, okay? Any—" id chadshark_b9cb5025
 
     "Before I can ask for a music request Fang yanks my phone out of my hand and is already looking for one online."
 
@@ -2442,7 +2442,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
     F "I can improvise?"
     pause 0.5
 
-    "I chuckle as my hands finds its place on her hip and takes her other."
+    # original: "I chuckle as my hands finds its place on her hip and takes her other."
+    "I chuckle as my hand finds its place on her hip and the other takes her hand." id chadshark_861795ed # reworded, hope I got the meaning right
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -2585,12 +2586,12 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show trish neutral flip with dissolve
     "She just points back to the van."
 
-    "The drivers’ door opens, letting out a gust of smoke from within."
+    "The driver’s door opens, letting out a gust of smoke from within." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_f20147ed
 
     "Reed emerges from the cloud as if nothing’s wrong."
     pause 0.5
 
-    T "Reed... {w=0.2}*huff*... {w=0.2}Your car.... {w=0.2}*huff*{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    T "Reed... {w=0.2}*huff*... {w=0.2}Your car... {w=0.2}*huff*{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_b972b8fd
     pause 0.5
     show trish:
         block:
@@ -2705,7 +2706,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show lighter at scenter with easeinbottom:
         yalign 0.5 zoom 2.0
     pause 1
-    "Catching it out of the air, I only briefly catch the words ‘FUCK COMMUNISM’ engraved in its side when I hear yet another car approaching."
+    "Catching it out of the air, I only briefly catch the words “FUCK COMMUNISM” engraved in its side when I hear yet another car approaching." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_55986cf2
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -2805,11 +2806,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Naser starts sliding the jacket off his back and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    "What the-{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
+    "What the—{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_dc4cad17
 
     "What is this noneuclidean bullshit I see before me."
 
-    "Why is there a second jacket below the first...?"
+    "Why is there a second jacket below the first{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_0e9b3a7f
     show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
 
     #show reed:
@@ -2938,9 +2939,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     scene d01 with Dissolve(2)
     pause 1
 
-    T "-are totally in! Come on, you’d look great in it!"
+    T "—are totally in! Come on, you’d look great in it!" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_3c8743ff
 
-    F "No fucking way that’s fucking real! ‘Beach maid’?! Have you been sneaking Reed’s stash again?"
+    F "No fucking way that’s fucking real! “Beach maid”?! Have you been sneaking Reed’s stash again?" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_648689ba
     pause 0.5
 
     N "And-and-and another thing!"
@@ -3020,7 +3021,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Ro "I think it’s so cute!"
 
-    "Rosa and Reed apparently finished their botanical conversation and were listening in on Stella’s entire ‘fortune’."
+    "Rosa and Reed apparently finished their botanical conversation and were listening in on Stella’s entire “fortune”." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_ff078461
 
     Re "Ooh! Do me next, man."
     #show stella unimpressed flip with dissolve
@@ -3049,7 +3050,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
         zoom 1.3
     pause 0.5
 
-    "Holding it up to the light, I barely make out the words ‘NON ALCOHOLIC’ written in microscopic font."
+    "Holding it up to the light, I barely make out the words “NON ALCOHOLIC” written in microscopic font." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_3caecbf0
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -3058,7 +3059,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     scene d01 with dissolve
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "So you mean they’re-"
+    A "So you mean they’re—" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_c0b43fa1
 
     Re "Totally sober, dude."
     pause 0.5
@@ -3078,10 +3079,10 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Re "Hey Naser! What’s your plan now that you’re, like, out of school?"
 
-    "The two virgin drunks turn their attention to us, Naser clearly ‘deep’ in thought."
+    "The two virgin drunks turn their attention to us, Naser clearly “deep” in thought." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_da01e6a4
     pause 0.5
 
-    Nas "Aw, man, like... {w=0.5}I’m gonna be-{w=0.2} gonna go and be a nur-{w=0.2} nyros-{w=0.1} sturgon."
+    Nas "Aw, man, like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.5}I’m gonna be—{w=0.2} gonna go and be a nur—{w=0.2} nyros—{w=0.1} sturgon." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_918f8a9e
 
     #show naomi neutral with dissolve
 
@@ -3114,17 +3115,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
     pause .5
 
     menu:
+        "Go to college":
+            A "Well{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_94e85886
 
-     "Go to college":
-
-      A "Well... {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
-
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
-
-     "Not certain just yet":
-      A "I’m not sure yet."
-
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
+        "Not certain just yet":
+            A "I’m not sure yet."
+    
+    A "I’m thinking of doing something with music{cps=*.1}...{/cps} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
 
     Re "Oh nice, dude! You can be the band’s sound technician when you’re done!"
 
@@ -3136,13 +3133,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Re "Me? Flow with the go, dude. Like the dinos of old, gotta get in sync with the universe first, y’know?"
     pause .5
 
-    A "Riiiight. What about-"
+    A "Riiiight. What about—" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_eec439d3
 
     T "I’m gonna get my cosmetologist license and open my own horn salon!"
 
     "The miniature triceratops bursts out from the other side of the bonfire, catching me off guard."
 
-    T "We’ll do hair and horns and piercings and- oh! Engravings too! Fang even said-"
+    T "We’ll do hair and horns and piercings and— oh! Engravings too! Fang even said—" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_be06961a
 
     F "That I’d be your first customer, I’ve told you a million times by now."
     pause .5
@@ -3153,7 +3150,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The flickering light of the bonfire is enough to illuminate the cover of the school yearbook she’s holding."
 
-    "Without a word she walks in front of us, conspicuously carrying the yearbook right towards-"
+    "Without a word she walks in front of us, conspicuously carrying the yearbook right towards—" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_31a270c7
 
     A "You’re not going to burn your yearbook, are you? That thing was like, eighty bucks!"
 
@@ -3164,7 +3161,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I hold up three fingers, though why is it suddenly nine?"
     pause .5
 
-    "Hmmmm... Gonna need some more beer to fix that."
+    "Hmmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Gonna need some more beer to fix that." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_a0ab60ae
     pause .5
 
     F "God, Anon, I was thinking we could all{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I dunno{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sign it? I saw a lot of others doing that."
@@ -3184,7 +3181,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "Why else would I even have one of these things?"
 
-    A "Your mom-"
+    A "Your mom—" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_a63f1d25
 
     F "Aside from my mom."
 
@@ -3203,27 +3200,27 @@ label chapter_13D:
     N "WOOOOOOOOOO!"
     pause .5
 
-    "The yearbook makes its way around the fire, each of us leaving some meaningful message on it’s inside covers."
+    "The yearbook makes its way around the fire, each of us leaving some meaningful message on its inside covers." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_f4797ff8
     pause .5
 
     "I’m the last to receive the book and I look at what each of our friends wrote."
 
-    "{i}You’ll always be my best friend, no matter what happens, Lucy. - Trish{/i}"
+    "{i}You’ll always be my best friend, no matter what happens, Lucy. —Trish{/i}" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_8fe4b3f8
 
     "Lucy? Heh, nah, Fang will always be Fang to me."
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Stay frosty. - Reed{/i}"
+    "{i}Stay frosty. —Reed{/i}" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_56d4023c
 
-    "Wow, he even drew King Rex, complete with ‘fire breathing’."
+    "Wow, he even drew King Rex, complete with “fire breathing”." id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_f1c4cde7
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}Even the most wilted flower flourishes under God’s light. -Rosa{/i}"
+    "{i}Even the most wilted flower flourishes under God’s light. —Rosa{/i}" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_530fee5b
 
     "I think reading that one counts for my next few church visits. Amen, Raptor Jesus."
     pause .5
 
-    "{i}The future is something that you build by yourself. - Stella{/i}"
+    "{i}The future is something that you build by yourself. —Stella{/i}" id FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh_20d1d6c5
 
     "So close to kneecapping her with this book. Fuckin’ Sailor Moon."
     pause .5
@@ -3330,7 +3327,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "*{cps=*0.6}VRRRRRRRRRMMMM{/cps}*"
 
-    F "‘M UP!"
+    F "’M UP!" id tink_b5425680
     pause .5
 
     play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1
@@ -3531,7 +3528,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I reach under the bed to retrieve the bag I tried hiding, and I pull out the jacket from within."
 
-    "Two expertly stitched gorilla heads stare back at me, with the text ‘MNKY 4 LYF’ embroidered in gold thread."
+    "Two expertly stitched gorilla heads stare back at me, with the text “MNKY 4 LYF” embroidered in gold thread." id tink_c38304be
     pause .5
 
     "I still don’t know if Naser is racist or if he really is just that clueless."
@@ -3622,7 +3619,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Fang’s moved from being wrapped up on the bed to being wrapped up on the rug, laying on her stomach."
 
-    "Her feet wagging back and forth in a pair of plush green dino slippers." #we had a guy on our dev team who had a fetish for massive animal slippers, I blame him for this line.
+    "Her feet are wagging back and forth in a pair of plush green dino slippers." id tink_0cdc0d63 #we had a guy on our dev team who had a fetish for massive animal slippers, I blame him for this line.
     pause 0.5
 
     A "Better hurry, in this weather this’ll get cold in minutes."
@@ -3713,7 +3710,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "As the amber dangles in the air, it catches the light from outside and glows the same brilliant orange as her eyes."
     pause 0.5
 
-    F "Anon...{w=0.3} it’s beautiful."
+    F "Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} it’s beautiful." id tink_8870d3fa
 
     A "Here."
     window hide
@@ -3737,7 +3734,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "...There."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}There." id tink_289a554d
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -3792,7 +3789,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "I wish moments like these could last forever."
     pause 0.5
 
-    "But just like the music in the air, they always do and before long we reach the end of the song."
+    "But just like the music in the air, they never do and before long we reach the end of the song." id tink_7b254be3 # moments don't last forever
 
     "A comfortable silence fills the room after the notes fade."
     pause 0.5
@@ -3801,7 +3798,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "I hope so, you wrote it after all."
 
-    F "Yeah, but you know we-"
+    F "Yeah, but you know we—" id tink_864525b5
     show fang pendant shock with dissolve
 
     "Her thought is interrupted by a knock at the door."
@@ -3819,7 +3816,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
 
-    "My momentary fear of it being a potential addict or murderer are quelled upon opening the door, revealing-"
+    "My momentary fear of it being a potential addict or murderer are quelled upon opening the door, revealing—" id tink_4e097dc1
 
     A "Principal Spears? What are you doing here?"
     window hide
@@ -3847,7 +3844,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Inside is a box set of some anime I’ve never heard of before."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}’Rurouni Kenshin’?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}“Rurouni Kenshin”?" id tink_347938e7
     show spears happy flip with dissolve
 
     Sp "As I said, I am always open to giving some quality anime suggestions."
@@ -3864,7 +3861,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "Thanks, yeah. I’ve had fun exchanging gifts with my friends."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Sp "I can see you’re wearing a new jacket now-"
+    Sp "I can see you’re wearing a new jacket now—" id tink_2c3e29f8
     show spears neutral flip with dissolve
 
     "He stares with a certain thinly veiled disgust creeping on his face."
@@ -3987,7 +3984,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "I{cps=*.15}...{/cps}Want to do some thinking."
+    F "I{cps=*.15}...{/cps} want to do some thinking." id tink_c603c3b5
 
     A "More thinking? Wow, that’s new for you."
     pause 0.5
@@ -4043,7 +4040,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Fang’s grin is just shy of mischievous."
 
-    F "On the bed.{w=0.2} Now.{w=0.2} I’m collecting on those cuddles right now."
+    F "On the bed.{w=0.2} Now.{w=0.2} I’m collecting one of those cuddles right now." id tink_8e5e8e9e
 
     A "Yes ma’am."
     window hide
@@ -4057,4 +4054,4 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/14A.KO_OP-ending.rpy

@@ -64,14 +64,14 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "I open the most recent voicemail."
 
-    FD "By Raptor Jesus’ left testicle if Fang is not home within the hour I will hunt you down and mount your head on my trophy wall! You will RUE the day that-"
+    FD "By Raptor Jesus’ left testicle if Fang is not home within the hour I will hunt you down and mount your head on my trophy wall! You will RUE the day that—" id chapter_14A_f427f993
 
     "Whoa."
     pause .5
 
     "Next one{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    FD "Maybe I didn’t make myself fucking clear. I will drag your skinny ass down to the station myself if Lucy is not home in the morning. I have a particular set of-"
+    FD "Maybe I didn’t make myself fucking clear. I will drag your skinny ass down to the station myself if Lucy is not home in the morning. I have a particular set of—" id chapter_14A_af27fcaf
 
     "I’m starting to get the idea."
 
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "I feel like a fucking heel right now."
     pause .5
 
-    "The XROX is still running, might as well finish Rock Ring."
+    "The Xrox is still running, might as well finish Rock Ring." id chapter_14A_ea8a5171
 
     "It’ll take my mind off things at least."
 
@@ -202,10 +202,10 @@ label chapter_14A:
     with dissolve
     pause 1
 
-    F "Anon? You- oh! Hey…"
+    F "Anon? You— oh! Hey{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_14A_c73063d9
 
     show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "Uh… Why are you huddled in the fetal position?"
+    F "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Why are you huddled in the fetal position?" id chapter_14A_fd939103
 
     show anon:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.15
@@ -228,12 +228,12 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "Shit. Should have actually thought about what I should say to her."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Fang, about last ni-"
+    A "Fang, about last ni—" id chapter_14A_11fd38da
 
     F "It’s fine."
 
     show anon neutral with dissolve
-    A "-ight.. What?"
+    A "—ight{cps=*.1}...{/cps} What?" id chapter_14A_8e8b2fae
 
     F "It’s fine, Anon. I don’t blame you for what happened."
     pause .5
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     F "I said I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have blown up on you like last night."
 
-    A "Even if it was my fault? I should have-"
+    A "Even if it was my fault? I should have—" id chapter_14A_e9c34143
 
     show fang:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
@@ -277,9 +277,9 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "She pulls away abruptly, leaving me confused and lightheaded."
     pause .5
 
-    A "I..wha...Fang?"
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} wha{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fang?" id chapter_14A_8878c5f7
 
-    F "It's fine, Anon. Everything is fine."
+    F "It’s fine, Anon. Everything is fine." id chapter_14A_3db03bc8
     pause .5
 
     stop music fadeout 5
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     scene room anon day alt with Dissolve(2)
     pause .5
 
-    "Stretching and yawning, realize that it’s a lot brighter than normal."
+    "Stretching and yawning, I realize that it’s a lot brighter than normal." id chapter_14A_4d3126f3
 
     "Did I sleep in?"
     pause .5
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} ♪ Control over my life you denied,{w=.6}{nw}"
     extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}And now death approaches from the sky,{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
-    extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Why'd it be me you had to vilify?{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Why’d it have to be me you had to vilify?{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}" id chapter_14A_4028c8f4
     extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Goodbye Volcano High ♪{/cps}"
     pause 1
 
@@ -567,7 +567,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "This isn’t real, none of this is real."
 
-    "I’m just having a nightmare after last nights’ episode."
+    "I’m just having a nightmare after last night’s episode." id chapter_14A_5b4565ae
     pause .5
 
     "Things are just fine, I’ll return to reality soon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "The only thing in there is the huddled corpse of our student council president."
     pause .5
 
-    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Guess she didn’t get that ‘perfect highschool life’ in the end."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Guess she didn’t get that “perfect highschool life” in the end." id chapter_14A_3e594e1f
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "You know well it can only be her."
     pause .5
 
-    "How could I have known this would happen? This isn’t my fault.{cps=*.1}...{/cps}!"
+    "How could I have known this would happen? This isn’t my fault{cps=*.1}...{/cps}!" id chapter_14A_df426b3a
 
     "You had just as much a hand in this as she did."
     pause .5
@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
         ypos  0
     with Dissolve(2)
 
-    F "A-Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} WHY ARE YOU-!"
+    F "A-Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps} WHY ARE YOU—!" id chapter_14A_7b2383c3
 
     A "Aaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} haaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
 
@@ -944,7 +944,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 6, 'ambient')
 
-    A "Just come downstairs with me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} It’s not over, it doesn’t have to be this wa-{w=.4}{nw}"
+    A "Just come downstairs with me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} It’s not over, it doesn’t have to be this wa—{w=.4}{nw}" id chapter_14A_4c903e72
 
     window hide Dissolve(0.02)
     window auto
@@ -1247,7 +1247,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "The whole incident made national news."
     pause .5
 
-    "Apparently I had become ‘the brave soul who took a bullet to stop a school shooting.’"
+    "Apparently I had become “the brave soul who took a bullet to stop a school shooting”." id chapter_14A_ee2ddb88
 
     "But to everyone I know I’m just the one who caused all this."
     pause .5
@@ -1262,7 +1262,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     "I got discharged just yesterday."
 
-    "I’ll need to stay on a crutch for a few months, but that’s hardly the wound I'm worried about."
+    "I’ll need to stay on a crutch for a few months, but that’s hardly the wound I’m worried about." id chapter_14A_c801aaba
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -1334,7 +1334,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "Various flowers pollute the fresh mounds."
     pause .5
 
-    "{cps=*.4}{i}\"In memory of Naser. Loving son and brother.\"{/i}{/cps}"
+    "{cps=*.4}{i}“In memory of Naser. Loving son and brother.”{/i}{/cps}" id chapter_14A_1286b2a1
     pause 1
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I’m sorry, man."
@@ -1343,7 +1343,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     "I hobble over to the other headstone."
     pause .5
 
-    "{cps=*.4}{i}\"Here lies dearest Lucy. Heaven restores you in light.\"{/i}{/cps}"
+    "{cps=*.4}{i}“Here lies dearest Lucy. Heaven restores you in light.”{/i}{/cps}" id chapter_14A_f506a4c6
     pause 1
 
     "They buried her using her real name."
@@ -1442,4 +1442,5 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 5
 
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
-    return
+    
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/14B.bad-ending.rpy

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ label chapter_14B:
 
     "I was sold on the idea of picking a real job and getting training."
 
-    "Instead I was at the mercy of brutal Boatswain's Mates."
+    "Instead I was at the mercy of brutal Boatswain’s Mates." id chapter_14B_ba05ef90
 
     "I have the pig and chicken shit tattooed on my feet to prove it."
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ label chapter_14B:
 
     "Plane ticket to anywhere."
 
-    "And I picked Volcadera Bluff."
+    "And I picked Volcadera Bluffs." id chapter_14B_21b063ca
     pause .5
 
     "What the fuck was I thinking?"
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ label chapter_14B:
 
     "There’s only a few people inside the joint when I enter."
 
-    "The entire place could be described as ‘slow’."
+    "The entire place could be described as “slow”." id chapter_14B_6f94bac7
     pause .5
 
     "A cashier leans on one arm over the counter, the customers’ pizza already looks cold on their plates, an ambient track plays at a molasses pace."
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ label chapter_14B:
     "Before{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    F "{alpha=0.75}{i}{cps=*.4}\"Trish was right about you.\"{/cps}{/i}{/alpha}"
+    F "{alpha=0.75}{i}{cps=*.4}“Trish was right about you.”{/cps}{/i}{/alpha}" id chapter_14B_804ae115
     pause 1
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' fadein 1.0
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ label chapter_14B:
     scene doomeranon04 with Fade(2, 0, 1)
     pause .5
 
-    "The bell on the door jingles it’s farewell, and I open the box to eat the first slice."
+    "The bell on the door jingles its farewell, and I open the box to eat the first slice." id chapter_14B_cda5cd21
 
     "As the taste of cardboard fills my mouth I try to erase the last few minutes from my memory."
     pause .5
@@ -305,21 +305,21 @@ label chapter_14B:
 
     "I can just picture Fang, looking like a junkie like she does now in that pizzeria, playing to an audience of nobody: judging me and how I’m living from now on."
 
-    "And I’ll say \"Yes Fang. I live on a pension alone in my apartment, playing games and watching movies and sleeping.\""
+    "And I’ll say “Yes Fang. I live on a pension alone in my apartment, playing games and watching movies and sleeping.”" id chapter_14B_a814e4e2
 
-    "\"It’s all I could ever want because I never wanted much in the first place.\""
+    "“It’s all I could ever want because I never wanted much in the first place.”" id chapter_14B_6a9e2ed3
     pause .5
 
     "And she’ll probably scream at me, vent her frustrations on me, call me selfish."
 
-    "And I’ll just say \"Goodbye, Fang.\""
+    "And I’ll just say “Goodbye, Fang.”" id chapter_14B_2cd54830
     pause .5
 
     "It could’ve been a painful way of separating again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}after some possibly pleasant time playing catch-up{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}but the thought of coming back to my apartment alone with my pizza, watching a movie on my tv, undisturbed, with no judgement for my appearance or the place I live, it fills me with relief."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}but the thought of coming back to my apartment alone with my pizza, watching a movie on my TV, undisturbed, with no judgement for my appearance or the place I live, it fills me with relief." id chapter_14B_9941ff37
     pause .5
 
     "It’s all I ever wanted."
@@ -350,4 +350,4 @@ label chapter_14B:
     scene black with Dissolve(3)
     pause 2
 
-    return
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy

@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     "I pull back, both for air and to figure out if this is who I think it is and not some well dressed sexual harassing lady-hobo."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "Lucy..?"
+    A "Lucy{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}" id chapter_14C_8980a700
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -190,12 +190,12 @@ label chapter_14C:
     "{cps=*.2}...{/cps}Maybe I’ll wait before showing her my scars."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Wow, you’re pretty amazing…"
+    Lucy "Wow, you’re pretty amazing{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_14C_82f76473
     show anon c neutral with dissolve
 
     A "What’ve you been up to?"
 
-    Lucy "Oh, I got my Associates and then-"
+    Lucy "Oh, I got my Associate’s and then—" id chapter_14C_ee9d39b6
 
     unknown "{cps=*.5}MIIIISSSS LUCCYYYYYYYY!!!{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     show anon c considering with dissolve
     A "Stupid?"
 
-    Lucy "Yeah- no, I mean careless. Innocent."
+    Lucy "Yeah— no, I mean careless. Innocent." id chapter_14C_d7ab79fb
     show anon c neutral with dissolve
 
     A "Suppose we were."
@@ -323,27 +323,27 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "One day they’re gonna start thinking and doing all the wrong things we thought and did when we were teenagers{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    Lucy "I wish I could stop it from happening. They're perfect just like this."
+    Lucy "I wish I could stop it from happening. They’re perfect just like this." id chapter_14C_0f368cd7
     pause .5
 
-    A "Kids can be, mean to each other."
+    A "Kids can be mean to each other." id chapter_14C_8a7803dc
     pause .5
 
     Lucy "But not cruel. The world makes them cruel."
 
-    Lucy "Until then{cps=*.1}...{/cps} they're free. We gotta protect their freedom. Save them from our mistakes."
+    Lucy "Until then{cps=*.1}...{/cps} they’re free. We gotta protect their freedom. Save them from our mistakes." id chapter_14C_6b3b8f38
     pause .5
 
     "That’s quite a statement to hear from her."
     pause .5
 
-    A "You've changed."
+    A "You’ve changed." id chapter_14C_43d0ec28
     pause .5
 
     "I think now would be a good time for a segue."
     pause .5
 
-    A "I'm glad to see you're doing good. How’s everyone else?"
+    A "I’m glad to see you’re doing good. How’s everyone else?" id chapter_14C_8e2536a6
 
     show fang:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.70
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "And the others?"
 
-    Lucy "Haven't seen them since either."
+    Lucy "Haven’t seen them since either." id chapter_14C_8267f87e
     pause 0.5
     show fang c happy flip with dissolve
 
@@ -421,18 +421,18 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "You get any break time today?"
 
-    A "I'd love to check out the town, see what else is different."
+    A "I’d love to check out the town, see what else is different." id chapter_14C_4c229369
 
     Lucy "I’d love to! I’ll go ask, I might get a few minutes to step away."
 
-    A "Yeah, and we could go and check Volcano High again, for old time's sake."
+    A "Yeah, and we could go and check Volcano High again, for old times’ sake." id chapter_14C_5d381063
     pause 0.5
     show fang c sad3 flip with dissolve
 
     "She freezes for a second."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "I-I’d rather not Volcano High. Too many bad memories."
+    Lucy "I-I’d rather not go to Volcano High. Too many bad memories." id chapter_14C_46126c15
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 0.5
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     pause .5
 
     show fang:
-       easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
     show fang c happy with dissolve
     hide fang with dissolve
     pause 0.5
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.65
     #show anon c neutral at aleft with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "They said I deserve it after a hard day's work."
+    Lucy "They said I deserve it after a hard day’s work." id chapter_14C_f78dc3f2
 
     A "You do look exhausted dealing with the ankle biters."
 
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Hope Trish is alright, the two of you were friends for the longest time."
 
-    Lucy "I guess I{cps=*.15}...{/cps} {w=0.1}Didn’t feel the need to see them again?"
+    Lucy "I guess I{cps=*.15}...{/cps} {w=0.1}didn’t feel the need to see them again?" id chapter_14C_fe1dbe83
     pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "Looking back, they were terrible influences."
@@ -495,23 +495,23 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "And Stella and Rosa?"
 
-    Lucy "Haven't seen them either."
+    Lucy "Haven’t seen them either." id chapter_14C_a601f047
 
     A "Seems weird, considering Rosa was of such help to us."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Don't get me wrong, Anon. I love what Rosa did for me, Naser and you, but I guess I{cps=*.175}...{/cps}{w=0.1}just didn't need to see her anymore."
+    Lucy "Don’t get me wrong, Anon. I love what Rosa did for me, Naser and you, but I guess I{cps=*.175}...{/cps}{w=0.1} just didn’t need to see her anymore." id chapter_14C_b53695dd
 
-    Lucy "I didn't want to see anyone else, for that matter."
+    Lucy "I didn’t want to see anyone else, for that matter." id chapter_14C_9c549921
 
-    Lucy "You must've had friends in the army, back at rock bottom, or even before that, right?"
+    Lucy "You must’ve had friends in the army, back at Rock Bottom, or even before that, right?" id chapter_14C_cad4be4d
 
-    Lucy "They're gone from your life too, there's nothing wrong with that."
+    Lucy "They’re gone from your life too, there’s nothing wrong with that." id chapter_14C_ad44692f
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "Haven't you looked for them?"
+    A "Haven’t you looked for them?" id chapter_14C_657dd1fd
 
-    Lucy "I don't want to."
+    Lucy "I don’t want to." id chapter_14C_155d13a4
     pause 0.5
 
     "The scenery here seems familiar{cps=*.125}...{/cps}"
@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "Oh, this is my old path to school. Maybe I will get to see it after all."
 
-    Lucy "L-let's turn away. To Moe's, or somewhere."
+    Lucy "L-let’s turn away. To Moe’s, or somewhere." id chapter_14C_70374922
     pause 0.5
 
     A "Aww, I wanted to see the school again though."
@@ -533,7 +533,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     Lucy "Seems like we just repeat each other, I get upset over nothing, and I apologize."
     pause 0.5
 
-    Lucy "Sorry, I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}don't want to remember Volcano High, I just{cps=*.125}...{/cps}"
+    Lucy "Sorry, I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}don’t want to remember Volcano High, I just{cps=*.125}...{/cps}" id chapter_14C_321efb5d
     pause 0.5
 
     Lucy "I did too much dumb stuff there, you know?"
@@ -558,7 +558,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     scene outside moes with Dissolve(2)
     pause 0.5
 
-    "It took a while to get there, getting to be nearly five when we arrived at Moe's, we ordered our usual and picked a table."
+    "It took a while to get there, getting to be nearly five when we arrived at Moe’s, we ordered our usual and picked a table." id chapter_14C_47cd9cbe
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "There were times I’d cry. I would think back to when you were here and miss you so much."
 
-    Lucy "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1}don't wanna worry you with the details of what I did during that time, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Lucy "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} don’t wanna worry you with the details of what I did during that time, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_14C_f5a691da
     pause .5
 
     Lucy "I guess I realized something."
@@ -602,18 +602,18 @@ label chapter_14C:
     Lucy "Looked like it worked for a lot of famous people."
     pause .5
 
-    Lucy "I didn't want to make my family sad anymore, so I just did what I've always should have done and learned to love them, to thank them for all they did for me."
+    Lucy "I didn’t want to make my family sad anymore, so I just did what I always should have done and learned to love them, to thank them for all they did for me." id chapter_14C_c765e430
     pause .5
 
-    A "So you kept playing? I'd love to see what else you've composed over the years. I'm sure it's great."
+    A "So you kept playing? I’d love to see what else you’ve composed over the years. I’m sure it’s great." id chapter_14C_402c0ee3
     show fang c sad2 flip with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "No{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1}I just gave that up."
+    Lucy "No{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.1} I just gave that up." id chapter_14C_44931e13
 
     A "What? Really? It was such a huge part of you!"
     show fang c sad3 flip with dissolve
 
-    Lucy "I didn't need it anymore, plus it reminded me too much of Trish, I've put away the instruments somewhere and never played anything ever again."
+    Lucy "I didn’t need it anymore, plus it reminded me too much of Trish, I’ve put away the instruments somewhere and never played anything ever again." id chapter_14C_d0e0b40e
 
     A "Then what have you been doing all these years?"
     show fang c sad4 flip with dissolve
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I saw the children, they ran around me, they offered me toys to play with, I joined them."
 
-    Lucy "I lifted them from the ground, some clung to my legs as I moved about-"
+    Lucy "I lifted them from the ground, some clung to my legs as I moved about—" id chapter_14C_2006e019
 
     Lucy "No one ever played with me like that, no one ever approached me like that, it was so pure, so innocent."
     pause .5
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "THAT would be hilarious."
 
-    Lucy "But yeah, I enjoyed my time with the children so much{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.15}I asked around in my church and eventually I got a gig dealing with preschoolers."
+    Lucy "But yeah, I enjoyed my time with the children so much{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.15}I asked around in my church and eventually I got a gig dealing with preschoolers." id chapter_14C_ca536e2e
     pause .5
 
     "She looks so happy right now.{w=0.2} I feel like I would ruin the mood to bring up Trish, Reed and the others again."
@@ -657,12 +657,12 @@ label chapter_14C:
     Lucy "Anon, I’d never forget about you or our promise."
     pause .5
 
-    "Part of me is glad she's saying this to me, but I still have too many questions."
+    "Part of me is glad she’s saying this to me, but I still have too many questions." id chapter_14C_2a2652ae
 
-    "It's weird because I know she’s happy, she looks happy in her work, and she's glad I'm here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    "It’s weird because I know she’s happy, she looks happy in her work, and she’s glad I’m here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_14C_1913f3ea
     pause .5
 
-    "But something deflates the moment, I don't know what it is."
+    "But something deflates the moment, I don’t know what it is." id chapter_14C_22e2ea84
 
     "I look towards the decorative piano Moe always had in the corner."
     pause .5
@@ -674,11 +674,11 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "You think they’d let us play it?"
 
-    Lucy "I don't know, it's probably out of tune{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
+    Lucy "I don’t know, it’s probably out of tune{cps=*.15}...{/cps}" id chapter_14C_34822c10
 
     A "Might be worth a shot, come on."
 
-    Lucy "But you can't play{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    Lucy "But you can’t play{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" id chapter_14C_3c86f69f
 
     A "Then {i}you{/i} play."
     window hide
@@ -689,19 +689,19 @@ label chapter_14C:
     scene c05 with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    "As we sit by the piano, I think she understands why I'm teasing her like that."
+    "As we sit by the piano, I think she understands why I’m teasing her like that." id chapter_14C_f7ea1f38
 
     "I open the lid, the keys look rather pristine."
     pause .5
 
-    Lucy "Anon, I-"
+    Lucy "Anon, I—" id chapter_14C_b0905fc5
 
     "Her fingers lightly roll across the keys."
 
     "She retracts herself."
     pause .5
 
-    Lucy "I haven't played in a long time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2}I don't know if I can still do it."
+    Lucy "I haven’t played in a long time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.2}I don’t know if I can still do it." id chapter_14C_f2f4c203
     pause .5
 
     A "I bet you still remember how to do it."
@@ -709,9 +709,9 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "She positions her hands just above the keys."
 
-    Lucy "I haven't done this in years. I don't even know which song to play."
+    Lucy "I haven’t done this in years. I don’t even know which song to play." id chapter_14C_d3b35dc4
 
-    A "I wanna see you play, that's all. I wanna hear you after all this time away."
+    A "I wanna see you play, that’s all. I wanna hear you after all this time away." id chapter_14C_82a4ad3a
     pause .5
 
     Lucy "Alright."
@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I always thought of this melody when I thought about you{cps=*.2}...{/cps}"
 
-    Lucy "Guess I never forgot how to do it. Thought I'd be rusty with the piano."
+    Lucy "Guess I never forgot how to do it. Thought I’d be rusty with the piano." id chapter_14C_e8b47598
     pause .5
 
     A "You play beautifully."
@@ -755,7 +755,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     "I sit closer to Lucy, she rests her head on my shoulder. Her hands are still resting on the keys, eager to play again."
     pause .5
 
-    A "You shouldn't have abandoned music."
+    A "You shouldn’t have abandoned music." id chapter_14C_f359b9d7
     pause .5
 
     Lucy "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -778,14 +778,14 @@ label chapter_14C:
     with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
-    Lucy "I don't know, Anon! It's just so WEIRD! A music teacher?"
+    Lucy "I don’t know, Anon! It’s just so WEIRD! A music teacher?" id chapter_14C_34b61533
 
-    A "I don't know, Fang, it could be cool if you tried."
+    A "I don’t know, Fang, it could be cool if you tried." id chapter_14C_ba8e76fb
     pause .5
 
     "Fang is shivering, the colder air setting in."
 
-    A "Here, this'll get you warmer."
+    A "Here, this’ll get you warmer." id chapter_14C_6a211535
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .25
@@ -805,56 +805,56 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "Thank you."
 
-    "She's precious. Being taller now, I guess the animal part of my brain is telling me to protect my smaller and more fragile mate."
+    "She’s precious. Being taller now, I guess the animal part of my brain is telling me to protect my smaller and more fragile mate." id chapter_14C_c40822e8
     pause .5
 
-    A "Little by little, I'll get you back to music, your friends, I'm sure it'll work out fine towards the end."
+    A "Little by little, I’ll get you back to music, your friends, I’m sure it’ll work out fine towards the end." id chapter_14C_65612de4
     pause .5
 
     "Lucy stirs. She doesn’t like the idea."
     pause .5
 
-    Lucy "Anon{cps=*.125}...{/cps}{w=0.13}please don't ask me to do that. I'm not ready."
+    Lucy "Anon{cps=*.125}...{/cps}{w=0.13} please don’t ask me to do that. I’m not ready." id chapter_14C_583e3c3a
 
     A "How are you not ready?"
     pause .5
 
     Lucy "I lied, Anon. Ok?"
 
-    Lucy "I lied, I disappointed you, I promised I would get better, but you're clearly not happy with how I turned out."
+    Lucy "I lied, I disappointed you, I promised I would get better, but you’re clearly not happy with how I turned out." id chapter_14C_a4ae4ebc
 
     A "Nonsense, you have no idea how proud I am of you."
 
-    Lucy "I'm still broken, Anon."
+    Lucy "I’m still broken, Anon." id chapter_14C_2d5a7f3e
     pause 1.0
 
-    Lucy "I’ve even started preening again because I had no one, but remembering I promised you and Naser I wouldn't do it anymore hurt even more so."
+    Lucy "I’ve even started preening again because I had no one, but remembering I promised you and Naser I wouldn’t do it anymore hurt even more so." id chapter_14C_27dc12cd
 
     Lucy "But that was years ago. I swear, I tried getting better."
 
     Lucy "Forgive me."
     pause .5
 
-    "I'm the one sighing this time."
+    "I’m the one sighing this time." id chapter_14C_c66c1816
     pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    Lucy "You wanted me to live my own life, be this great person you wanted me to be, yet I'm here doing menial church tasks and dealing with children."
+    Lucy "You wanted me to live my own life, be this great person you wanted me to be, yet I’m here doing menial church tasks and dealing with children." id chapter_14C_eacbae76
 
     Lucy "I got no friends, no new songs, nothing going on for me."
 
-    Lucy "I know I needed to be a famous musician to make you happy, I know I needed to have forgiven Trish and the others, but it just didn't work out.{w=0.3} I couldn't do it."
+    Lucy "I know I needed to be a famous musician to make you happy, I know I needed to have forgiven Trish and the others, but it just didn’t work out.{w=0.3} I couldn’t do it." id chapter_14C_0531c268
 
-    Lucy "I'm lonely, Anon. You're all that's left for me."
+    Lucy "I’m lonely, Anon. You’re all that’s left for me." id chapter_14C_a82e36d6
     pause .5
 
-    A "You didn't need to be all that to be happy, I still think you're the best."
+    A "You didn’t need to be all that to be happy, I still think you’re the best." id chapter_14C_aa08447f
 
-    A "Forget it, Lucy. What's done is done. We're here."
+    A "Forget it, Lucy. What’s done is done. We’re here." id chapter_14C_9f7eaf1e
 
-    A "That's all it matters."
+    A "That’s all that matters." id chapter_14C_6d07be72
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .25
@@ -868,12 +868,12 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "I embrace her, I could tell she was getting tense, but slowly she relaxes in my arms."
 
-    "When I said that we're being together was all that mattered, she hugged me back."
+    "When I said that being together was all that mattered, she hugged me back." id chapter_14C_66297f62
     pause .5
 
-    A "I'm here."
+    A "I’m here." id chapter_14C_1e25c934
 
-    Lucy "And I still can't believe it."
+    Lucy "And I still can’t believe it." id chapter_14C_67ea8d1d
     pause .5
 
     "Lucy is shaking with excitement in my arms now."
@@ -881,7 +881,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "I already am thinking up all kinds of things we could do!"
 
-    Lucy "Fuck, just knowing I won't see you until tomorrow already hurts me."
+    Lucy "Fuck, just knowing I won’t see you until tomorrow already hurts me." id chapter_14C_f0790432
 
     Lucy "I can take you to see Mom and Dad! Right now! They would get a kick out of seeing you like this."
 
@@ -935,7 +935,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     "A peace shattered by my stomach demanding sustenance loudly."
     pause .5
 
-    A "Mmm{cps=*.15}...{/cps}{w=0.13}How about we get some breakfast?{w=0.1} My treat."
+    A "Mmm{cps=*.15}...{/cps} {w=0.13}How about we get some breakfast?{w=0.1} My treat." id chapter_14C_fc5e08e6
 
     Lucy "A breakfast date sounds nice."
 
@@ -959,7 +959,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     Lucy "Tomorrow."
 
-    Lucy "I'll tell them first! Get them hyped to see you!"
+    Lucy "I’ll tell them first! Get them hyped to see you!" id chapter_14C_6152b822
 
     A "That would be great. So{cps=*.125}...{/cps}{w=0.1} tomorrow then?"
 
@@ -985,19 +985,19 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     $ renpy.mark_image_seen('fullbody_c09')
 
-    A "Urgh-- it's ok, Lucy."
+    A "Urgh— it’s ok, Lucy." id chapter_14C_afdf9814
     pause .5
 
     Lucy "I was so lonely, Anon."
 
-    A "You don't need to be alone, you know."
+    A "You don’t need to be alone, you know." id chapter_14C_44b2c54e
 
-    Lucy "I'm so glad you're here. I missed you."
+    Lucy "I’m so glad you’re here. I missed you." id chapter_14C_7559c6e9
 
     A "I missed you too, Lucy."
     pause .5
 
-    "Though I miss the old Fang, I'm elated. I love you, Lucy."
+    "Though I miss the old Fang, I’m elated. I love you, Lucy." id chapter_14C_50359ebb
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 2.0
@@ -1014,4 +1014,5 @@ label chapter_14C:
     pause 1.0
     stop music
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'music')
-    return
+
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     unknown "It’s been too long!"
 
-    unknown "It was only five years *Giggle*"
+    unknown "It was only five years *giggle*" id chapter_14D_68bdbd55
     pause 1
 
     "I can make out the building now. I use the sleeve of my shirt to wipe the sweat from my eyes and brow."
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "What? Nothing. No idea what you’re talking about."
     pause 0.5
 
-    A "So, how did you get to become the 'richest raptor in the world'?"
+    A "So, how did you get to become the “richest raptor in the world”?" id chapter_14D_b067c3ff
 
     Re "You wouldn’t believe it, man!"
 
@@ -129,9 +129,9 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Reed proceeds to run his mouth off about a bunch of gibberish."
 
-    "I cannot understand anything he's saying."
+    "I cannot understand anything he’s saying." id chapter_14D_275d184f
 
-    "I think I heard ‘pharmaceutical business’ at one point?"
+    "I think I heard “pharmaceutical business” at one point?" id chapter_14D_81c95434
     pause 0.5
 
     Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}and then I was brought here by the birds, dude."
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     A "Definitely, I need some air conditioning."
     pause 0.5
 
-    "We quickly moved along to the gymnasium."
+    "We quickly move along to the gymnasium." id chapter_14D_f920cb1b
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "I go over to write in my John Hancock and the person behind the counter stands up."
 
-    "My nose is assaulted by the pheronomes of perfumes that probably cost more than a years' salary."
+    "My nose is assaulted by the pheromones of perfumes that probably cost more than a year’s salary." id chapter_14D_86be81a4
 
     show naomi future at sright with dissolve
     show naomi:
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     T "Anon! It’s been years!"
 
-    A "Trish, Rosa, glad we found you here!"
+    A "Trish, Rosa, so happy to meet you again!" id chapter_14D_42e84332 # changed so it doesn’t say the exact same thing as Anon’s last line
 
     Re "Come on man, we’ve been texting this whole time."
     pause .5
@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     pause 1
 
-    F "Wha-{w=0.2} I-{w=0.2} dammit Anon,{w=0.2} I told you to stop calling me that!"
+    F "Wha—{w=0.2} I—{w=0.2} dammit Anon,{w=0.2} I told you to stop calling me that!" id chapter_14D_88ec99ea
     pause 0.5
 
     Re "Isn’t that the name Lucy used back in senior year?"
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     Re "C’mon, get over here. I’ll order us all another watchamacallit of drinks. It’s on me, the richest raptor in the {cps=*0.3}woooorld{/cps}!"
     pause 0.5
 
-    "Reed cheerfully throws his arms up as he shouts out a prolonged ‘world’."
+    "Reed cheerfully throws his arms up as he shouts out a prolonged “world”." id chapter_14D_5c9f902c
     pause 0.5
 
     F "Sure, thanks. I can’t have too much though, I’m the event organizer and all."
@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "Show-off. They’re twist-offs, ya know."
 
-    "To prove her point she takes the capped one and simply twists it’s top off."
+    "To prove her point she takes the capped one and simply twists its top off." id kino_074666ed
     pause 0.5
 
     A "Ow. My ego."
@@ -702,14 +702,14 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     A "Can’t be that bad."
 
-    F "Well you see, it happened during band camp-"
+    F "Well you see, it happened during band camp—" id kino_52983a3b
 
     "Lucy’s rant went on for what felt like an hour."
 
     "Though judging by the pile of beer bottles, it couldn’t have been more than twenty minutes."
     pause 0.5
 
-    F "-at the fucking dance of all places."
+    F "—at the fucking dance of all places." id kino_37b76fb1
 
     A "Snrk."
     show fang d neutral with dissolve
@@ -732,7 +732,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
         pause .02
         easein_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.82
         ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.8
-    "Lucy’s elbow finds it’s familiar spot in my side."
+    "Lucy’s elbow finds its familiar spot in my side." id kino_91805932
     pause 0.5
 
     F "Nuh uh."
@@ -801,7 +801,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
     F "But I’ve got work like you wouldn’t believe."
     show fang d neutral with dissolve
 
-    A "O-oh. Well, if it’s too mu-"
+    A "O-oh. Well, if it’s too mu—" id kino_8f704d6c
 
     F "However!"
     show fang d happy with dissolve
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     "Feels just like old times, honestly."
 
-    "Like no time has passed since I left Volcaldera Bluff."
+    "Like no time has passed since I left Volcaldera Bluffs." id kino_7cc37b0f
     pause 0.5
 
     "I guess I never did say goodbye to Volcano High."
@@ -898,4 +898,5 @@ label chapter_14D:
     pause 16
     scene black with Dissolve(1.0)
     pause 1
-    return
+
+    $ next_story_chapter()

game/script/2.fourth-day-of-school.rpy

@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     show naomi:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.65
 
-    A "Actually, wait,{w=0.3} {cps=*.4}I don’t really wan-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
+    A "Actually, wait,{w=0.3} {cps=*.4}I don’t really wan—{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" id chapter_2_69f93945
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -363,14 +363,14 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     "Or a mix of the two{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
 
-    "Either way there's something on her mind."
+    "Either way there’s something on her mind." id lnaomiStressMerge_f29691ff
     pause .5
 
-    "I can't help but think that that must be how I looked on my first day."
+    "I can’t help but think that that must be how I looked on my first day." id lnaomiStressMerge_a43ba220
 
     "But it was my first day of school, she had been going here all year."
 
-    "What's her excuse then?"
+    "What’s her excuse then?" id lnaomiStressMerge_71426f79
     pause .5
 
     "Either way, doesn’t look like she recognizes me."
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     "I DON’T WANNA GET SHANKED BY A JUNKIE PTERODACTYL."
     pause .5
 
-    F "You{cps=*.1}...{/cps}uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2}SKINNIE."
+    F "You{cps=*.1}...{/cps} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} SKINNIE." id lnaomiStressMerge_5ae0caed
 
     A "Y{w=.2}-yeah?"
 
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     F "What? No!"
 
-    F "it’s multiple!"
+    F "It’s multiple!" id lnaomiStressMerge_0d5b9ea1
     pause .5
 
     A "They’re dinosaurs though, right?"
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     "Right before the tone, one last student rushes in, out of breath."
     pause .5
 
-    "Oh, it's that girl again. I guess we shared a period or two on the first day and I just didn't notice."
+    "Oh, it’s that girl again. I guess we shared a period or two on the first day and I just didn’t notice." id lnaomiStressMerge_aaba4b0e
 
     "She strides across the room, taking her seat without a word."
     pause .5
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     show farnsworth at sright with Dissolve(1)
     Drf "Good news everyone!"
 
-    Drf "Today we'll be having a lab on magnetic fields."
+    Drf "Today we’ll be having a lab on magnetic fields." id lnaomiStressMerge_2001b5dd
 
     Drf "Find a partner and get prepared."
 
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     "My heart sunk as those dreaded words passed my ears."
     pause .5
 
-    "\"Find a partner.\""
+    "“Find a partner.”" id lnaomiStressMerge_eded8315
     pause .5
 
     "I know it’s pointless, but I at least have to try. Maybe someone was out sick."
@@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     window auto
 
     show fang neutral with Dissolve(1):
-       xalign -0.6 yalign 0.0
+        xalign -0.6 yalign 0.0
     pause .75
 
     show white:
@@ -697,7 +697,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     Drf "How are you two doing so far?"
 
     show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "We're{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fine, Dr. Fernsworth."
+    F "We’re{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Fine, Dr. Fernsworth." id lnaomiStressMerge_655b3f88
 
     Drf "I see, and you Anon?"
 
@@ -716,7 +716,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     "Why is Dr. Fernsworth making that face?"
 
-    "I turn to Fang to ask her what the deal is and-"
+    "I turn to Fang to ask her what the deal is and—" id lnaomiStressMerge_133fb6a0
 
     window hide
     window auto
@@ -748,7 +748,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     "Oh Raptor Jesus almighty this is the absolute worst case scenario."
     pause .5
 
-    "The infuriated pteradactyl's wings spread wide and her taloned finger jabs my chest."
+    "The infuriated pteradactyl’s wings spread wide and her taloned finger jabs my chest." id lnaomiStressMerge_1717dfe0
     pause .5
 
     show fang:
@@ -785,7 +785,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     show fang very angry with Dissolve(.15)
 
-    F "YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST SPIT IN MY FACE AND THEN-{w=.4} AND THEN GIVE ME THE COLD SHOULDER?!"
+    F "YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST SPIT IN MY FACE AND THEN—{w=.4} AND THEN GIVE ME THE COLD SHOULDER?!" id lnaomiStressMerge_766292a4
 
     show fang:
         linear 0.045 xalign -0.300
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ label chapter_2:
         repeat
     pause .5
 
-    F "{cps=*.3}I’LL HAVE YOU KNOW-{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}"
+    F "{cps=*.3}I’LL HAVE YOU KNOW—{/cps}{w=0.3}{nw}" id lnaomiStressMerge_a5448f0c
 
     stop music fadeout 0.1
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickSuperPunch.ogg'
@@ -903,7 +903,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     pause .5
 
     show fang sad flip:
-       ease_cubic 1.5 xalign -0.6
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign -0.6
     pause 1.15
     show fang sad with dissolve
     pause 1.2
@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     "Why would someone be wearing revealing clothes in contradiction to their identity{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
 
-    "It’s almost like they’re just looking for attent-"
+    "It’s almost like they’re just looking for attent—" id lnaomiStressMerge_3a182e58
     pause .5
 
     "Then suddenly, it hits me."
@@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}And three plastic katanas."
     pause .5
 
-    "That was a quick way to get sent to the principal's office."
+    "That was a quick way to get sent to the principal’s office." id lnaomiStressMerge_adb830b0
 
     show fang angry with dissolve
     F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Are you even listening to me?!"
@@ -986,12 +986,12 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     pause .5
     show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
-    F "Non-binary people don't owe you androgyny."
+    F "Non-binary people don’t owe you androgyny." id lnaomiStressMerge_1150e7b1
     pause .5
 
     "Doesn’t seem like it’s something she wants to hear right now."
 
-    A "So um, you're Naser’s sister, right?"
+    A "So um, you’re Naser’s sister, right?" id lnaomiStressMerge_6a11a6c4
 
     show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
     F "SIB-ling."
@@ -1018,9 +1018,9 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     "Actually, thinking about Naser{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "{i}\"It’s more that he worries a bit too much for that{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sister of his.\"{/i}"
+    N "{i}“It’s more that he worries a bit too much for that{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sister of his.”{/i}" id lnaomiStressMerge_4af67f30
 
-    N "{i}\"Oftentimes when I’m with him, he’s anxious about something she’s done.\"{/i}"
+    N "{i}“Oftentimes when I’m with him, he’s anxious about something she’s done.”{/i}" id lnaomiStressMerge_d618e870
     pause .5
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He told me about what happened the other day."
@@ -1122,7 +1122,7 @@ label chapter_2:
 
     show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
 
-    "Hesitantly, I slide out of my chair and trundle my way to the whiteboard, trying to decipher the runes I'm expected to make sense of."
+    "Hesitantly, I slide out of my chair and trundle my way to the whiteboard, trying to decipher the runes I’m expected to make sense of." id lnaomiStressMerge_24dce0e0
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -1134,7 +1134,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     show dimmer_light behind anon with Dissolve(.15)
     "Only I never made it to the whiteboard."
 
-    "Three rows down and my foot catches on a loose backpack strap in the isle."
+    "Three rows down and my foot catches on a loose backpack strap in the aisle." id lnaomiStressMerge_6a3220c9
 
     window hide Dissolve(0.0001)
     window auto
@@ -1209,7 +1209,7 @@ label chapter_2:
     "With a very detailed centerfold, by the way he turned it sideways."
     pause .5
 
-    "Looking ahead to Reed’s desk, he’s been joined by Trish who's trying to get him to get started."