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The Grammar Nazi Update #263

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Pomi108 commented 2025-10-08 23:31:40 +00:00
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I went through the entire script and fixed all the small typos, mistakes and imperfections I could find.

Translations are not affected as I’ve added an id statement(?) after every changed line. (Though I did have to include the non-english versions for the files that use the old/new string replacement system as well.)

What this does

  • Grammatical changes:
    • Fixed the uncountable amount of apostrophe usage errors
    • Fixed typos
    • Rephrased weird sentences here and there
    • Changed the tense in some places to be more clear or to fit with the situation better
    • Fixed the capitalisation of “Mom” and “Dad” where it was wrong
    • More various stuff I don't remember
  • Typographical cleanup:
    • Changed all quotation marks to the “ and ” symbols, in line with what’s preferred in American literature; However, if single quotes are desired, it should be a simple find-and-replace job
    • Changed all apostrophes to the curved ’ character
    • Replaced hyphens with em dashes where appropriate
    • Made sure all ellipses have a space after them
  • Some things have been standardised:
    • All ellipses are now {cps=*.1}...{/cps}, unless they already had another character speed set or unless it made sense to use more than three full stops in a particular location
    • All phone conversation lines now use the same formatting with italics and the {fast} tag

Please feel free to review all the changes and tell me if you’ve got any objections. I’ve left comments in some places to hopefully explain my reasoning for some of the more complex changes.

I went through the entire script and fixed all the small typos, mistakes and imperfections I could find. Translations are not affected as I’ve added an `id` statement(?) after every changed line. (Though I did have to include the non-english versions for the files that use the old/new string replacement system as well.) # What this does - <ins>Grammatical changes:</ins> - Fixed the *uncountable* amount of apostrophe usage errors - Fixed typos - Rephrased weird sentences here and there - Changed the tense in some places to be more clear or to fit with the situation better - Fixed the capitalisation of “Mom” and “Dad” where it was wrong - More various stuff I don't remember - <ins>Typographical cleanup:</ins> - Changed all quotation marks to the `“` and `”` symbols, in line with what’s preferred in American literature; However, if single quotes are desired, it should be a simple find-and-replace job - Changed all apostrophes to the curved `’` character - Replaced hyphens with em dashes where appropriate - Made sure all ellipses have a space after them - <ins>Some things have been standardised:</ins> - All ellipses are now `{cps=*.1}...{/cps}`, unless they already had another character speed set or unless it made sense to use more than three full stops in a particular location - All phone conversation lines now use the same formatting with italics and the `{fast}` tag ___ Please feel free to review all the changes and tell me if you’ve got any objections. I’ve left comments in some places to hopefully explain my reasoning for some of the more complex changes.
Pomi108 added 1 commit 2025-10-08 23:31:44 +00:00
script cleanup & stuff b7ac2235ff
Legalo reviewed 2025-10-09 23:50:43 +00:00
game/src/credits.rpy Outdated
@@ -146,12 +146,6 @@ init 999 python:
'Ironclad Jimbo',
'Cdpraxis',
],
_('Translator (Thai):'): [
Legalo commented 2025-10-09 23:50:43 +00:00
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Why did you remove the thai translators?

Why did you remove the thai translators?
Pomi108 commented 2025-10-10 07:33:09 +00:00
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I started work on this before the Thai translation was released. I tried to keep my local copy updated but I guess this must have slipped through, sorry. Definitely not intentional, gonna fix it when I come back home on Sunday.

I started work on this before the Thai translation was released. I tried to keep my local copy updated but I guess this must have slipped through, sorry. Definitely not intentional, gonna fix it when I come back home on Sunday.
Pomi108 added 1 commit 2025-10-12 17:48:51 +00:00
add back mistakenly removed thai translator 5ca9b6a2c3
MichaelYick added 2 commits 2025-10-13 02:01:16 +00:00
add back mistakenly removed thai translator 5ca9b6a2c3
add back mistakenly removed thai translator 52bfe45136
Pomi108 added 4 commits 2025-10-15 23:41:42 +00:00
script cleanup & stuff b7ac2235ff
add back mistakenly removed thai translator 5ca9b6a2c3
i don't think this was supposed to be changed; reverted 81d8feae4d
Merge branch 'script-cleanup' of https://git.cavemanon.xyz/Pomi108/SnootGame into script-cleanup c19152d63b
Pomi108 added 1 commit 2025-10-15 23:45:37 +00:00
i hate git sometimes a3824af4e2
Pomi108 added 1 commit 2025-12-30 21:40:45 +00:00
made one forgotten ellipsis consistent with the rest fa05eee6cd
MichaelYick added the enhancementMedium Priority labels 2025-12-31 00:49:04 +00:00
MichaelYick self-assigned this 2026-01-11 21:24:17 +00:00
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Pomi108 added 1 commit 2026-02-23 20:27:23 +00:00
Fix #268, #269, #270 and #272 d25f9172bf
bighoss was assigned by MichaelYick 2026-02-24 00:57:45 +00:00
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game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy Outdated
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"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast}{w=.2} im friggin" id lMendingThings_98de5a0a
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} grounded from everything basically forever"
"{i}Fang:{/i}{fast{w=.2}} grounded from everything basically forever" id lMendingThings_8505003b
bighoss commented 2026-04-02 02:54:41 +00:00
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Microscopic regression, you misplaced the } in {fast{w=.2}} here.

Microscopic regression, you misplaced the `}` in `{fast{w=.2}}` here.
Pomi108 commented 2026-04-02 18:51:24 +00:00
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My bad, will fix

My bad, will fix
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bighoss commented 2026-04-02 02:56:36 +00:00
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Other than that, it looks good, just fix the missing }, update the branch, then I'll approve.

Other than that, it looks good, just fix the missing `}`, update the branch, then I'll approve.
Pomi108 added 1 commit 2026-04-02 18:56:59 +00:00
fix syntax error d56365a3c0
bighoss commented 2026-04-04 03:52:08 +00:00
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The branch is still out of date!!!!!

The branch is still out of date!!!!!
Pomi108 added 1 commit 2026-04-04 17:51:34 +00:00
Merge branch 'master' into script-cleanup 4075913153
Pomi108 commented 2026-04-04 17:52:34 +00:00
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Sorry again, didn't notice that the branch was out of date. Hopefully it's good now

Sorry again, didn't notice that the branch was out of date. Hopefully it's good now
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bighoss merged commit f1ab733228 into master 2026-04-04 17:56:29 +00:00
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