diff --git a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy index 7f17368..477f676 100644 --- a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy +++ b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy @@ -8,23 +8,26 @@ label chapter_3: scene black with fade "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}" - scene classroom with fade + scene classroom with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 # TODO: chatter - "It's math.{w=.5} Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike." + "It's math. Bane of retards and lazy intellectuals alike." - "And teachers too,{w=.4} judging by the lack of a certain coomer teacher." + "And teachers too, judging by the lack of a certain coomer teacher." - "Substitute today,{w=.4} which means busywork.{w=.5} Group problems busywork specifically." + "Substitute today, which means busywork. Group problems busywork specifically." - "Of course,{w=.3} I can't escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment." + "Of course, I can't escape this any more than I could have escaped the lab partner assignment." "At least here I have the opportunity to just keep to myself for an hour." + pause .5 - "I don't even bother attempting the assignment,{w=.4} instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online." + "I don't even bother attempting the assignment, instead pretending my phone is a calculator and spending the first half shitposting about video games I haven’t played online." - stop music fadeout 2 - "The second half,{w=.4} interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome." + stop music fadeout 4 + pause .5 + "The second half, interrupted by something pointy to the back of the dome." pause .5 "*sshk*" @@ -32,19 +35,22 @@ label chapter_3: "I can feel something stuck between my chair and my back." - "I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane,{w=.4} a completed set of problems." + "I fish around and pull out a crumpled paper airplane, a completed set of problems." pause .5 + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reed's. And it's{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like To Shitpost.ogg' fadein 1.0 - "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}this is Reed's.{w=.4} And it's{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "...done?" + + "Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each." - "...done?{w=.5} Even the extra problems that I don't even bother with because they take another ten minutes each." - - "I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over.{w=.4} He's sitting next to Trish." + "I turn around to see that technicolor burnout waving me over. He's sitting next to Trish." + pause .5 "She's giving me the evil eye." - "At least I think it's the evil eye.{w=.5} Whatever that expression is,{w=.4} it clashes with her smile." + "At least I think it's the evil eye. Whatever that expression is, it clashes with her smile." pause .5 "Might as well see what they want." @@ -55,9 +61,9 @@ label chapter_3: show trish considering flip at sright with Dissolve(1) - "As I weave through the maze of desks squished together with partners more interested in their phones than the worksheet,{w=.4} I catch a hint of whatever Reed and Trish are talking about." + "As I weave through the maze of desks squished together with partners more interested in their phones than the worksheet, I catch a hint of whatever Reed and Trish are talking about." - Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Honesty is the best policy,{w=.3} eh?" + Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Honesty is the best policy, eh?" Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Bad juju to keep somethin’ bottled up{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -76,16 +82,16 @@ label chapter_3: with dissolve pause .5 - "Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trish's other side,{w=.4} nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever he's got in that thermos on his desk." + "Reed grabs hold of another chair and sets it on Trish's other side, nodding in my direction before taking a big pull from whatever he's got in that thermos on his desk." "The widening of his pupils suggest its more than just Roarbucks cold brew in it." show trish happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Hey,{w=.2} Anon!" + T "Hey, Anon!" A "You guys need something?" - T "Nah,{w=.3} just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time" + T "Nah, just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time" show trish neutral flip with dissolve "There’s something in her tone of voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -97,12 +103,11 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show reed explanatory flip - Re "Imma let you two get to whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} gonna go for a refill{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show reed neutral flip + Re "Imma let you two get to whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps} gonna go for a refill{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) "He shakes his thermos and heads for the door." - show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25): xalign 0.5 show reed: @@ -116,7 +121,7 @@ label chapter_3: show reed considering Re "Don't ask{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show reed neutral + show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 show reed: @@ -133,31 +138,31 @@ label chapter_3: pause .25 show trish neutral flip: - ease 1 xalign 0.6 - pause 1.5 + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.6 - T "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} You and Fang?" - pause .5 + T "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You and Fang?" A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You and Fang what?" T "They’ve been talkin’ about you." + pause .5 A "They?" "The tiny triceratops rolled her eyes dramatically." show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Fang.{w=.5} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you." + T "Fang.{w=.4} Fang’s been talkin’ bout you." pause .5 - A "All good things,{w=.3} I’m sure." + A "All good things, I’m sure." show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve - "Fang’s been talking about me?{w=.5} That’s dumb." + "Fang’s been talking about me? That’s dumb." - "Oh yeah.{w=.4} The phones." + "Oh yeah. The phones." + pause .5 "All we’ve been doing is more labwork in science." @@ -166,27 +171,27 @@ label chapter_3: "Last Thursday I tried to remember how to make a railgun." - "To show I could,{w=.4} of course." + "To show I could, of course." pause .5 - F "{i}Pfft,{w=.4} I could make one too.{/i}" + F "{alpha=0.8}\"{i}Pfft, I could make one too.{/i}\"{/alpha}" pause .5 - "She seemed unimpressed at the time,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "She seemed unimpressed at the time, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" hide dimmer_light with dissolve A "Was it about making a railgun?" show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Er{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Yeah,{w=.4} it was." + T "Er{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Yeah, it was." show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.15) T "What exactly are you talking about with them?" A "Just science stuff." - A "The railgun is just something I happen to know though,{w=.4} picked it up from an old game." + A "The railgun is just something I happen to know though, picked it up from an old game." show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) "Trish raises an eyebrow." @@ -197,7 +202,7 @@ label chapter_3: T "You learned to make a deadly weapon from a video game?" - "Her tone is flat.{w=.5} Unlike her chest." + "Her tone is flat.{w=.4} Unlike her chest." pause .5 A "{cps=*.4}I wouldn’t say deadl-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" @@ -211,7 +216,7 @@ label chapter_3: T "How did you not get in trouble?" show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - A "Spears actually did talk to me,{w=.4} said something about the 'great equaliser'." + A "Spears actually did talk to me, said something about the 'great equaliser'." pause .5 show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25) @@ -219,16 +224,16 @@ label chapter_3: T "This is why men are useless." - "She continues to mutter to herself.{w=.4} All of it incoherent." + "She continues to mutter to herself. All of it incoherent." pause .5 A "Is there a point?" show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - "She rounds back on me,{w=.4} anger painted clearly on her face." + "She rounds back on me, anger painted clearly on her face." show trish angry flip with dissolve - T "Look,{w=.4} Anon,{w=.5} YOU may be into that stuff,{w=.4} but leave Fang out of it." + T "Look, Anon, YOU may be into that stuff, but leave Fang out of it." T "They have better things to do than{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.1} than{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -256,10 +261,10 @@ label chapter_3: easein_cubic 1.2 xalign 1.15 show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - "Reed slumps into the seat next to Trish,{w=.4} sipping on his thermos of{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Reed slumps into the seat next to Trish, sipping on his thermos of{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed considering flip - Re "Just agua,{w=.2} bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Re "Just agua, bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed neutral flip "Thermos of water{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -339,10 +344,12 @@ label chapter_3: show reed neutral flip with dissolve: xalign 1.2 - "Trish’s face is a blur of emotions.{w=.5} At first confused,{w=.4} then fucking pissed,{w=.4} then aroused,{w=.4} then back to fucking pissed,{w=.2} all in the space of an attosecond." + "Trish’s face is a blur of emotions." + + "At first confused, then fucking pissed, then aroused, then back to fucking pissed, all in the space of an attosecond." pause .25 - T "Not those!{w=.6} {nw}" + T "Not those!{w=.4} {nw}" play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' show reed shocked flip: easein_cubic .5 xalign 1.3 @@ -354,7 +361,7 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show reed unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "But like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5}{nw}" + Re "But like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}" show reed explanatory flip extend "how do magnets work?" show reed neutral flip @@ -380,7 +387,7 @@ label chapter_3: show trish annoyed: xalign 0.425 easein 1 yalign -0.075 - extend "Damn it,{w=.1} Reed!" + extend "Damn it, Reed!" show trish: easein 0.5 yalign 0.0 @@ -388,8 +395,8 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show trish behind reed: - easein_back 0.25 xalign 0.7 - pause .1 + easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.7 + pause .15 play sound 'audio/effects/slapStickPunch.ogg' show reed: easein_cubic 0.25 xalign 1.325 @@ -398,7 +405,7 @@ label chapter_3: show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - "Trish punches Reed in the shoulder,{w=.4} gives me another evil stare,{w=.4} and saunters out the room." + "Trish punches Reed in the shoulder, gives me another evil stare, and saunters out the room." pause .5 show trish: @@ -406,7 +413,7 @@ label chapter_3: show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 hide trish with dissolve - pause .5 + pause 1 show reed: ease_cubic 1.25 xalign 0.5 @@ -432,12 +439,12 @@ label chapter_3: "He gives me a thumbs up and exits as well." - "Leaving only the substitute teacher,{w=.4} looking at me from her desk impatiently for me to leave." + stop music fadeout 6 + "Leaving only the substitute teacher, looking at me from her desk impatiently for me to leave." pause .5 - stop music fadeout 3 - - "Guess it’s her lunch period,{w=.2} too." + "Guess it’s her lunch period, too." + pause .5 show anon: easeout 1 xalign -0.9 @@ -445,32 +452,35 @@ label chapter_3: hide anon with dissolve pause .5 - scene black with fade + scene black with Dissolve(1.5) + pause .5 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 # CH 3 SCENE 2 - I can't believe Naser is fucking dead - play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg' fadein 2 + play music 'audio/OST/The Top of the Social Ladder.ogg' fadein 4 scene cafeteria show anon neutral at aleft show naomi neutral flip at scenter show naser unimpressed flip: yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1 - with Fade(0,.5,1.5) + with Fade(1, 0, 1.5) pause .5 "Naser ended up dragging me to sit with him and the magenta motormouth again." - - "Naomi hovers over Naser,{w=.4} who currently has Gucci under his eyes." pause .5 - Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} talked to the soccer team earlier." + "Naomi hovers over Naser, who currently has Gucci under his eyes." + pause .5 + + Nas "So, I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} talked to the soccer team earlier." Nas "They’re going to make the first game after all." show naomi explanatory flip - N "Isn’t that great,{w=.2} Anon?" + N "Isn’t that great, Anon?" show naomi neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -489,7 +499,7 @@ label chapter_3: easeout_quart 1 yalign -0.15 xalign 1.05 pause .5 - "Naser’s head lands in his chicken salad,{w=.4} then he jerks wide awake." + "Naser’s head lands in his chicken salad, then he jerks wide awake." show naomi behind anon: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.45 @@ -499,38 +509,36 @@ label chapter_3: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.55 N "NASER!" - show naser behind naomi: - easein_elastic 0.5 yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2 + show naser shocked flip behind naomi: + easein_elastic 1 yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' - show naser shocked flip with Dissolve(.1) - with vpunch - Nas "OH GOOD LORD NOT THE WATER-" + Nas "OH GOOD LORD NOT THE WATER-{fast}" with vpunch pause .5 A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naser sad flip with Dissolve(1) - Nas "Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Sorry." + Nas "Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} sorry." - show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25) - pause .25 + show naomi sad + show naser unimpressed flip + with dissolve + pause .5 + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Did you say something, Anon?" - show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Did you say something,{w=.2} Anon?" - - A "Naser,{w=.4} you look like you fell into another blender." + A "Naser, you look like you fell into another blender." show naomi behind naser: - easein 0.75 xalign 0.6 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6 show naomi unimpressed flip with dissolve pause .5 - A "What’s going on,{w=.2} big guy?" + A "What’s going on, big guy?" pause .5 Nas "Don’t worry about it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Nas "Just some{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Family problems last night{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "Just some{cps=*.1}...{/cps} family problems last night{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "Like what?" pause .25 @@ -539,7 +547,7 @@ label chapter_3: Nas "Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - N "You don’t have to tell him if you don’t want to,{w=.2} dear." + N "You don’t have to tell him if you don’t want to, dear." show naomi: easein 0.5 xalign 0.58 @@ -556,15 +564,17 @@ label chapter_3: show naomi sad with dissolve N "Aww{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Nas "I was going to sleep last night,{w=.3} when I heard something downstairs." + Nas "I was going to sleep last night, when I heard something downstairs." "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}When did this turn into an interrogation?" show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "It was about one or two in the morning.{w=.5} I checked what it was,{w=.3} and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "It was about one or two in the morning." + + Nas "I checked what it was, and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "Fang was just,{w=.5} standing in front of the microwave." + Nas "Fang was just, standing in front of the microwave." show naomi unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Staring at the dino nuggets rotate inside." @@ -576,7 +586,7 @@ label chapter_3: Nas "At one in the morning." show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25) - N "This is a personal issue,{w=.4} isn’t it?" + N "This is a personal issue, isn’t it?" show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) N "Wouldn’t you rather just be {nw}" @@ -586,7 +596,7 @@ label chapter_3: extend "enjoying lunch with us?" pause .5 - Nas "I just need advice from someone at this point,{w=.4} Naomi." + Nas "I just need advice from someone at this point, Naomi." show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25) N "But from Anon?" @@ -596,10 +606,10 @@ label chapter_3: "Naser continues." - Nas "I asked her what she was doing,{w=.4} and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "I asked her what she was doing, and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naser unimpressed flip - Nas "Just says{w=.2} 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'." + Nas "Just says 'fuck off...', so I think 'maybe dad will help'." show naser sad flip Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He didn’t." @@ -614,7 +624,7 @@ label chapter_3: show naomi sad with Dissolve(.25) N "Poor baby." - "Naomi wraps her arms around Naser’s head,{w=.4} cradling the tired pterosaur in her bosom." + "Naomi wraps her arms around Naser’s head, cradling the tired pterosaur in her bosom." show naser unimpressed flip with dissolve show naser: @@ -623,10 +633,9 @@ label chapter_3: hide naser with dissolve show naomi shocked - play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg' + play sound 'audio/effects/anontheaterfall.ogg' with vpunch - stop sound fadeout 1 - # This fadeout is just so there's no twangy end as that's exclusive to the trash room Anon has. + pause .5 "There’s a rumbling snore and it’s clear that Naser has checked out." @@ -644,7 +653,7 @@ label chapter_3: A "Going unconscious?" show naomi considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - N "Trying to help.{w=.5} Wearing himself ragged." + N "Trying to help.{w=.4} Wearing himself ragged." show naomi unimpressed flip with dissolve N "That Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -653,7 +662,7 @@ label chapter_3: show naomi sad flip with Dissolve(.25) N "We should help Naser." - A "What,{w=.4} by talking to Fang?" + A "What, by talking to Fang?" N "By taking him to the nurses office." pause .5 @@ -668,48 +677,51 @@ label chapter_3: easein 2 xalign 0.625 pause .25 - "Naomi looks at me with the biggest,{w=.4} wettest doe eyes possible." + "Naomi looks at me with the biggest, wettest doe eyes possible." hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.2) - A "Alright alright.{w=.4} He doesn’t look that heavy anyway." + A "Alright alright. He doesn’t look that heavy anyway." N "Only a hundred and sixty pounds." A "How do you-{w=.4} nevermind." + pause .5 - scene black with fade + scene black with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 - "Naomi puts herself under Naser’s left arm,{w=.4} motioning me to take the other one." + "Naomi puts herself under Naser’s left arm, motioning me to take the other one." "I sling his arm around my back and-" play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch - stop music fadeout 4 + stop music fadeout 5 pause .5 - N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk." + N "Alright, the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side, near the front desk." - "I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak,{w=.4} I can only get a slight nod out." + "I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak, I can only get a slight nod out." + pause .5 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 # CH 3 SCENE 3 - Steganography - play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 2 - scene hallway with fade + play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3 + scene hallway with Dissolve(1.5) pause .5 - "After dropping Naser at the nurse and leaving before Naomi could argue with her about staying,{w=.4} the lunch bell rings." + "After dropping Naser at the nurse and leaving before Naomi could argue with her about staying, the lunch bell rings." "With music at the ass end of the campus I have to sprint through the halls." - "Fuck today,{w=.4} I avoided gym class for a reason." + "Fuck today, I avoided gym class for a reason." pause .5 - "Halfway to Music class,{w=.4} I slam into somebody and tumble to the floor." + "Halfway to Music class, I slam into somebody and tumble to the floor." stop ambient fadeout 0.69 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' @@ -731,10 +743,9 @@ label chapter_3: unknown "{cps=*.2}You...{/cps}" - play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' - A "AH!" with vpunch + A "AH!" - "Sorry,{w=.3} sorry sorry!" + "Sorry, sorry sorry!" pause .5 show anon neutral flip: @@ -743,15 +754,19 @@ label chapter_3: show anon: easein 0.5 yalign 0.1 alpha 1 - "I get up from the floor and look at the stego who bumped into me.{w=.5} The plates on her back twitch as she looks me up and down." + "I get up from the floor and look at the stego who bumped into me." + + "The plates on her back twitch as she looks me up and down." + pause .5 + show anon: alpha 1 yalign 0.1 unknown "{cps=*.25}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show anon: - easein 0.5 xalign 0.8 - pause .75 + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.8 + pause .5 "A chill rolls over me." @@ -760,10 +775,10 @@ label chapter_3: show stella considering with Dissolve(.25) unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.75} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?" - "She draws closer,{w=.4} a contemplative expression on her face." + "She draws closer, a contemplative expression on her face." show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25) - unknown "Ah,{w=.4} I see now." + unknown "Ah, I see now." show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 @@ -771,7 +786,9 @@ label chapter_3: unknown "You’ve important choices to come." - A "I do?{w=.5} Wait back up{w=.2} what the fuck are you talking about?" + A "I do?" + + A "Wait back up what the fuck are you talking about?" unknown "This." pause .25 @@ -782,38 +799,48 @@ label chapter_3: easein 0.5 xalign 0.35 pause .75 - "She reaches toward my chest,{w=.4} plucking something off of it.{w=.6} She holds it up for me to see it’s some oversized playing card." + "She reaches toward my chest, plucking something off of it." + + "She holds it up for me to see it’s some oversized playing card." pause .5 A "Still lost." pause .5 show stella explanatory - unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.75} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.75} Reflect on them." + unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card." + + unknown "You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.75} Reflect on them." show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 - "I think about asking the green weirdo to make sense,{w=.4} but the bell is about to ring." + "I think about asking the green weirdo to make sense, but the bell is about to ring." - A "Yeah,{w=.3} thanks,{w=.3} sure.{w=.4} Sorry,{w=.1} gotta dash." + A "Yeah, thanks, sure." + + A "Sorry, gotta dash." pause .25 show anon behind stella: easeout 1 xalign 0.0 pause .5 hide anon with dissolve - show stella considering with Dissolve(.25) pause .5 + stop music fadeout 6 + show stella considering with Dissolve(.25) + pause 1 + # CH 3 SCENE 4 - It's almost Shakespearean - stop music fadeout 2 - scene bandroom with Fade(1,0,1) + scene bandroom with Fade(1,0,1.5) + pause .5 - "I slam into the band room door just as the late bell trills,{w=.4} panting and sweaty." + "I slam into the band room door just as the late bell trills, panting and sweaty." show jingo at sleft with Dissolve(1) - jingo "Good timing,{w=.3} Mr. Mous.{w=.4} Just in time for free period." + jingo "Good timing, Mr. Mous. Just in time for free period." pause .5 "What{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -825,23 +852,24 @@ label chapter_3: easeout 1 xalign -0.5 pause .25 hide jingo with dissolve - - "The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat,{w=.4} threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out." pause .5 - "I looked at the scattered instruments,{w=.3} left alone for whatever reason." - - "Dented-looking brass and cracked woodwinds.{w=.4} Even a bass with a missing string." - - "Wow.{w=.5} I feel like that right about now." + "The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat, threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out." pause .5 - "I reach for one at random,{w=.4} taking a wooden{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} thing{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "I looked at the scattered instruments, left alone for whatever reason." + + "Dented-looking brass and cracked woodwinds. Even a bass with a missing string." + + "Wow. I feel like that right about now." + pause .5 + + "I reach for one at random, taking a wooden{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thing{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "It looks like an oak tree made love to an eggplant and this is the aborted monstrosity in Mexico." pause .5 - "Whatever,{w=.4} I melt into my chair and pull out my phone.{w=.5} Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea." + "Whatever, I melt into my chair and pull out my phone. Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea." "I’ve some shitposting to do." @@ -849,15 +877,16 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show anonphone with easeinbottom + pause .5 # TODO: phone overlay with Elliot Raptor, and the text ‘he made some valid points :^)’ - "Ah yes,{w=.4} perfect.{w=.6} Click post {cps=*.3}aaaand{/cps} now to wait." + "Ah yes, perfect. Click post {cps=*.3}aaaand{/cps} now to wait." pause .5 hide anonphone with easeoutbottom - "Nefarious deed for the day done,{w=.4} I look around the room out of boredom." + "Nefarious deed for the day done, I look around the room out of boredom." pause .5 "Oh fuck no." @@ -877,7 +906,7 @@ label chapter_3: "In fact she’s actually playing something pleasant." pause .5 - "It’s mellow.{w=.5} Relaxed.{w=.6} A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it." + "It’s mellow.{w=.4} Relaxed.{w=.4} A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it." "The difference between this and the performance is night and day." pause .5 @@ -885,12 +914,12 @@ label chapter_3: "What gives?" pause .5 - "Looking a bit closer,{w=.4} she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm." + "Looking a bit closer, she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm." "She uses her tail as a metronome?" pause .5 - "Suddenly,{w=.3} the phone slips from my hand onto the floor." + "Suddenly, the phone slips from my hand onto the floor." stop music fadeout .25 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' @@ -935,7 +964,7 @@ label chapter_3: hide anonphone with easeoutbottom - F "Yeah,{w=.5} you got lucky." + F "Yeah, you got lucky." pause .5 "Fang has stopped playing and is throwing a small smirk my way." @@ -943,8 +972,7 @@ label chapter_3: "I should probably say something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "Her playing is pretty good,{w=.4} I'll compliment that." - pause .5 + "Her playing is pretty good, I'll compliment that." A "That sounded way better than in the video Reed took." @@ -955,12 +983,12 @@ label chapter_3: "Wrong choice of words." show fang angry - F "You’re still not off my shit list,{w=.4} watch it." + F "You’re still not off my shit list, watch it." - "Quick Anon,{w=.3} think." + "Quick Anon, think." pause .5 - A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then,{w=.4} you’re obviously a lot better with it." + A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then, you’re obviously a lot better with it." show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "Would’ve if I could’ve." @@ -971,7 +999,7 @@ label chapter_3: "There’s an empty seat next to Fang." - "Finders’ keepers,{w=.4} I guess." + "Finders’ keepers, I guess." show anon neutral flip: alpha 0 @@ -983,11 +1011,11 @@ label chapter_3: pause 1 show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "The band is just Reed,{w=.2} Trish,{w=.2} and I." + F "The band is just Reed, Trish, and I." F "So we all have to decide by majority what happens." - F "Reed says using a bass is more unique,{w=.4} and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’." + F "Reed says using a bass is more unique, and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’." pause .5 A "But it sounds like you play the guitar much easier than a bass." @@ -995,43 +1023,45 @@ label chapter_3: show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "I play the bass just fine." - show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout,{w=.5} you damn well better know what you’re doing." + F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout, you damn well better know what you’re doing." + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "If you’re anything short of masterful it won’t sound good." - F "And when it comes to music,{w=.4} it either sounds good or it doesn’t." + F "And when it comes to music, it either sounds good or it doesn’t." F "Simple as." + pause .5 "She continues strumming." pause .5 - A "But it’s just a high school band,{w=.4} right?" + show anon shrug flip with Dissolve(.25) + A "But it’s just a high school band, right?" A "Shouldn’t it just be fun?" - F "It is,{w=.4} yeah." + F "It is, yeah." + show anon neutral flip with dissolve A "Even though you’re just doing what they want without getting a say in it?" play sound 'audio/effects/badA.ogg' show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) "Fang flinches and misses a note." - pause .5 F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "It’s not like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - F "It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Trish says{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" + F "It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Trish says{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" show fang considering - extend "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} God damn it." + extend "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps} God damn it." pause .5 show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "Look,{w=.4} we’re better with two basses.{w=.6} Trish and Reed say so." + F "Look, we’re better with two basses. Trish and Reed say so." pause .5 A "The au--" @@ -1059,7 +1089,7 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) - F "You know what,{w=.4} we’re having band practice after school today." + F "You know what, we’re having band practice after school today." show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "Just show up and see for yourself." @@ -1075,7 +1105,7 @@ label chapter_3: "In that case." - A "Fuck you,{w=.4} I’m right,{w=.4} your band sucks with two basses,{w=.6} {nw}" + A "Fuck you, I’m right, your band sucks with two basses,{w=.4} {nw}" show fang unimpressed extend "and you shoulda been on guitar!" @@ -1132,15 +1162,14 @@ label chapter_3: with Fade(1, 0, 1) pause .5 - F "Hurry up,{w=.3} dweeb.{w=.5} If I can keep ahead of you while carrying two instruments,{w=.4} you can speedwalk." - pause .5 + F "Hurry up, dweeb. If I can keep ahead of you while carrying two instruments, you can speedwalk." A "You sure you don’t want me to carry one?" show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) F "Pfeh." - "Fang is leading me back to the auditorium with both the acoustic guitar ‘borrowed’ from the music room and her bass in hand,{w=.5} one over each shoulder." + "Fang is leading me back to the auditorium with both the acoustic guitar ‘borrowed’ from the music room and her bass in hand, one over each shoulder." scene door auditorium show anon neutral: @@ -1149,7 +1178,7 @@ label chapter_3: yalign 0.0 xalign 0.99 with Dissolve(1) - "When we eventually get to the auditorium,{w=.4} Fang stops." + "When we eventually get to the auditorium, Fang stops." show fang neutral flip with dissolve pause .5 @@ -1160,7 +1189,7 @@ label chapter_3: A "Uh,{w=.4} {cps=*.4}is everything-{/cps}{w=.3}{nw}" show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "The doors,{w=.3} moron." + F "The doors, moron." "She swings the guitar cases on her shoulders around a bit." pause .5 @@ -1205,7 +1234,7 @@ label chapter_3: with Fade(1, 0, 1) pause .5 - "Inside,{w=.4} Reed and Trish already have everything set up onstage." + "Inside, Reed and Trish already have everything set up onstage." show fang neutral behind dimmer_light: yalign -0.55 xalign -1.5 @@ -1224,7 +1253,7 @@ label chapter_3: "Trish waves her arms from the stage." - T "HEY,{w=.3} FANG!{w=.5} WHAT TOOK SO LONG?" + T "HEY, FANG! WHAT TOOK SO LONG?" pause .5 F "HAD TO GRAB SOMETHING." @@ -1232,7 +1261,7 @@ label chapter_3: play music 'audio/ost/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 3 show trish neutral flip with dissolve - "Trish squints in the spotlight,{w=.4} then finally notices me." + "Trish squints in the spotlight, then finally notices me." show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve T "What-" @@ -1243,7 +1272,7 @@ label chapter_3: T "What’s he doing here?!" pause .5 - "Fang slings both cases onto the stage,{w=.4} then climbs on herself." + "Fang slings both cases onto the stage, then climbs on herself." show fang: easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.4 @@ -1320,7 +1349,7 @@ label chapter_3: rotate 20 xalign 0.5 zoom 1.5 yalign 0.5 show dimmer_light as xtra_dimmer behind jewlcase with Dissolve(.25) - "Looking down at the makeshift shuriken,{w=.4} it was a copy of {i}\"VVORM DRAMA's hit new single INDRAGON ONSLAUGHT\"{/i}" + "Looking down at the makeshift shuriken, it was a copy of {i}\"VVORM DRAMA's hit new single INDRAGON ONSLAUGHT\"{/i}" hide xtra_dimmer with Dissolve(.25) hide jewlcase with easeoutbottom @@ -1344,7 +1373,7 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show reed explanatory flip - Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} are we on break now?" + Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} are we on break now?" show reed neutral flip show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) @@ -1354,12 +1383,13 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Fang,{w=.4} why is Anon here?!" - show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - pause .25 + T "Fang, why is Anon here?!" - show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "Like I said,{w=.4} proving him wrong." + show trish unimpressed flip + show fang neutral + with dissolve + + F "Like I said, proving him wrong." A "More like proving me right." @@ -1369,7 +1399,7 @@ label chapter_3: pause .25 show reed considering flip - Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Playing guitar,{w=.3} right?{w=.5} {nw}" + Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Playing guitar, right?{w=.4} {nw}" show reed explanatory flip extend "Ya wanted to play your guitar{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed neutral flip @@ -1383,21 +1413,21 @@ label chapter_3: A "Ha!" - F "No,{w=.4} I mean Anon thinks that if I used a guitar instead of bass the music would sound better." + F "No, I mean Anon thinks that if I used a guitar instead of bass the music would sound better." show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) T "What?{w=.4} No {cps=*.2}wayyyy{/cps}." show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) - F "I know,{w=.3} right?" + F "I know, right?" show reed explanatory flip - Re "{cps=*.3}Woooow,{/cps}{w=.3} way to try throwing everything off,{w=.2} Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Re "{cps=*.3}Woooow,{/cps} way to try throwing everything off, Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed neutral flip stop music fadeout 3 show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "Mm.{w=.4} Let's just go through{w=.1} 'I Need Meth Money By Tuesday Night And If I Don’t Get It I Will Stomp On Your Child'." + F "Mm. Let's just go through 'I Need Meth Money By Tuesday Night And If I Don’t Get It I Will Stomp On Your Child'." pause .5 "Don't say ayy lmao." @@ -1433,12 +1463,12 @@ label chapter_3: show anon neutral with Dissolve(.75) pause .25 - "I look to the stage and see Fang,{w=.4} panting,{w=.4} looking distressed." + "I look to the stage and see Fang, panting, looking distressed." pause .5 show fang: easein 0.5 xalign 0.5 - F "S-{w=.1}see?{w=.5} Totally awesome,{w=.2} r-{w=.1}right?" + F "S-see? Totally awesome, r-right?" pause .5 "Not the word I would use." @@ -1451,38 +1481,37 @@ label chapter_3: show trish: easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8 show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Oh shut up,{w=.4} you don't know anything about music." + T "Oh shut up, you don't know anything about music." show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Might as well.{w=.4} That’s what I brought him for,{w=.1} after all." - pause .5 + F "Might as well. That’s what I brought him for, after all." T "You’re really siding with him on this?" show trish explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "We already decided VVURM DRAMA is better with only drum and bass,{w=.4} remember?" + T "We already decided VVURM DRAMA is better with only drum and bass, remember?" show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) show reed considering flip - Re "Yeah man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} WAY more unique that way." + Re "Yeah man{cps=*.1}...{/cps} WAY more unique that way." pause .5 A "Aren’t there like two bands in existence that pulled it off?" pause .25 show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "That means there’s a chance then,{w=.3} yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" + Re "That means there’s a chance then, yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" show reed neutral flip pause .5 - A "It can’t hurt to try,{w=.3} right?" + A "It can’t hurt to try, right?" show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "You don’t get a say in this,{w=.4} it’s a band decision and we already made our choice." + T "You don’t get a say in this, it’s a band decision and we already made our choice." pause .5 show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Maybe he’s right,{w=.2} Trish.{w=.4} What’s the big deal?" + F "Maybe he’s right, Trish. What’s the big deal?" show trish angry flip with Dissolve(.25) T "The 'deal' is we’re wasting enough time as it is when we should be practicing!" @@ -1507,7 +1536,7 @@ label chapter_3: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.95 extend "What’s THAT supposed to mean?" - "Fang rounds on Trish,{w=.4} jabbing an accusing finger into the little triceratop’s surprisingly voluminous chest." + "Fang rounds on Trish, jabbing an accusing finger into the little triceratop’s surprisingly voluminous chest." show fang: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45 @@ -1521,12 +1550,12 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Come on Fang,{w=.4} you know I didn’t mean it that way!" + T "Come on Fang, you know I didn’t mean it that way!" - T "We decided that democratically,{w=.4} right Reed?" + T "We decided that democratically, right Reed?" show reed considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Yeah,{w=.2} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} like,{w=.4} there are only three of us,{w=.2} y’know?" + Re "Yeah, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} like, there are only three of us, y’know?" show trish considering flip with dissolve @@ -1563,7 +1592,7 @@ label chapter_3: "Fang does seem very passionate about playing guitar." - "It could only help their music,{w=.4} right?" + "It could only help their music, right?" pause .5 show reed neutral flip @@ -1571,7 +1600,7 @@ label chapter_3: with dissolve pause .25 - A "Just give Fang a chance,{w=.5} have you ever even let them play guitar with the band?" + A "Just give Fang a chance, have you ever even let them play guitar with the band?" show fang surprised show trish surprised flip @@ -1582,18 +1611,18 @@ label chapter_3: show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "I-{w=.2} uh,{w=.4} well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} not really.{w=.6} {nw}" + T "I- uh, well{cps=*.1}...{/cps} not really.{w=.4} {nw}" show trish neutral flip extend "We voted on it in our first jam session together." - "Fang made a weird face,{w=.4} like she couldn’t believe I was standing up for her." + "Fang made a weird face, like she couldn’t believe I was standing up for her." "Honestly I couldn’t believe I stood up for her either." "But god dammit I’m winning this challenge!" pause .5 - A "If you’re really Fang’s friend,{w=.4} you should at least let them try." + A "If you’re really Fang’s friend, you should at least let them try." show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) show trish explanatory flip: @@ -1604,13 +1633,13 @@ label chapter_3: show trish neutral flip pause .5 - "Trish’s mouth opened and closed,{w=.4} as if she was trying to find the right words." + "Trish’s mouth opened and closed, as if she was trying to find the right words." show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) "She threw up her hands and let out a frustrated sigh." show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Fine,{w=.4} I guess we can try it with the guitar{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + T "Fine, I guess we can try it with the guitar{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show fang happy show anon behind dimmer_light @@ -1635,16 +1664,16 @@ label chapter_3: with dissolve pause .5 - T "In the end,{w=.4} majority still rules." + T "In the end, majority still rules." show trish: easein 1 xalign 0.875 pause .1 show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "I’m sorry,{w=.1} Fang,{w=.5} but we can’t get into creative squabbles like this all the time." + T "I’m sorry, Fang, but we can’t get into creative squabbles like this all the time." - T "And you already agreed to it,{w=.4} right?" + T "And you already agreed to it, right?" show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 @@ -1664,20 +1693,20 @@ label chapter_3: pause .25 show reed unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Hey man,{w=.3} Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" + Re "Hey man, Fang{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" show reed considering flip extend "Don’t let it get to you so hard{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed explanatory flip - Re "We just gotta get it out of your system’s all,{w=.4} right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" + Re "We just gotta get it out of your system’s all, right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - Re "Like,{w=.3} y’know,{w=.4} get it all out now so you don’t have to later,{w=.4} yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" + Re "Like, y’know, get it all out now so you don’t have to later, yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?" Re "Like Trish said{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show reed neutral flip - pause .5 + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 show trish: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.825 #0.875 @@ -1685,47 +1714,47 @@ label chapter_3: T "I never said that." show reed explanatory flip - Re "Cuz’,{w=.2} that’s how these things work,{w=.3} right?{w=.6} You know until you don’t,{w=.4} and then all the rest is wack." - show reed neutral flip - pause .5 + Re "Cuz’, that’s how these things work, right? You know until you don’t, and then all the rest is wack." + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 show trish considering with Dissolve(.25) - T "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Guess?" + T "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} guess?" show trish neutral with Dissolve(.25) T "What?" pause .5 show reed explanatory flip - Re "It’s like the bigger picture,{w=.4} you got Fang playin' bass with all us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Re "It’s like the bigger picture, you got Fang playin' bass with all us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show reed neutral flip Re "And they’re all{w=.3} {nw}" show reed considering flip - extend "\"{cps=*.3}ohh yeah {/cps}good thing I’m not thinking about playing other instruments,{w=.4} yeah yeah\"" + extend "\"{cps=*.3}ohh yeah {/cps}good thing I’m not thinking about playing other instruments, yeah yeah\"" show trish surprised with Dissolve(.25) Re "And you’re all like{w=.4} {nw}" show reed explanatory flip - extend "\"see,{w=.4} I told you so\"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show reed neutral flip - pause .5 + extend "\"see, I told you so\"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 show trish happy with Dissolve(.25) - T "Yeah,{w=.4} so we should let them play now to get it all out for later!" + T "Yeah, so we should let them play now to get it all out for later!" show trish smug with Dissolve(.25) pause .75 show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) T "{cps=*0.25}Wait{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "If there were any cameras rolling,{w=.4} they’d be zooming in on Trish’s face." + "If there were any cameras rolling, they’d be zooming in on Trish’s face." show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) - F "Thanks,{w=.1} Reed." + F "Thanks, Reed." show trish annoyed with Dissolve(.25) - T "Yeah,{w=.4} thanks a lot." + T "Yeah, thanks a lot." show trish: easein 1 xalign 0.85 @@ -1741,7 +1770,7 @@ label chapter_3: stop music fadeout 3 pause .5 - F "Alright,{w=.4} this time we’re doing{w=.1} 'I Gave The Special Kids The Jonestown Special And Now I’m Going To Jail'!" + F "Alright, this time we’re doing 'I Gave The Special Kids The Jonestown Special And Now I’m Going To Jail'!" pause .5 show anon sad with Dissolve(.25) @@ -1762,7 +1791,7 @@ label chapter_3: play music 'audio/OST/That Almost Sounded Good.ogg' pause 1 - "Opposed to the nostalgic tune earlier,{w=.4} Fang rapidly strums on her borrowed guitar." + "Opposed to the nostalgic tune earlier, Fang rapidly strums on her borrowed guitar." "It’s fast and rough but the tone carried doesn’t melt my eardrums." @@ -1772,14 +1801,14 @@ label chapter_3: "They’re actually not bad." pause .5 - "Not good,{w=.4} not by any metric worth it’s weight." + "Not good, not by any metric worth it’s weight." "But at least I don’t cringe so hard my spleen erupts from my side and creates a splash zone." pause .5 - "I find myself bobbing to the song,{w=.3} in fact." + "I find myself bobbing to the song, in fact." - stop music fadeout 3 + stop music fadeout 5 "And just as I consider the song 'gittin’ gud' it ends." @@ -1800,7 +1829,7 @@ label chapter_3: with Dissolve(2) pause .5 - "There’s sweat dripping from Fang’s brow,{w=.4} and her black clothes are clinging to her a bit more tightly." + "There’s sweat dripping from Fang’s brow, and her black clothes are clinging to her a bit more tightly." "The grin on her face stands out the most though." @@ -1809,7 +1838,7 @@ label chapter_3: show trish surprised flip show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) - F "See!{w=.4} Totally better with a guitar Trish!" + F "See! Totally better with a guitar Trish!" show trish considering flip with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 @@ -1838,9 +1867,9 @@ label chapter_3: easein 2 xalign 1.5 #1.6 pause .75 - A "Ha!{w=.4} I win!" + A "Ha! I win!" - "Trish,{w=.3} Reed,{w=.2} and Fang turn to look at me." + "Trish, Reed, and Fang turn to look at me." show fang unimpressed flip show trish neutral flip @@ -1865,17 +1894,21 @@ label chapter_3: show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) "Trish scowls." - T "A vote then.{w=.5} Who votes if we stick to drum and bass?" + T "A vote then." + + T "Who votes if we stick to drum and bass?" show trish: easein 0.5 yalign 0.1 show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 + "She’s the only one to raise her hand." show trish: easein 0.5 yalign 0.0 show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "{cps=*.4}fff{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.6} {nw}" + T "{cps=*.4}fff{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}" show trish considering flip extend "{cps=*.4}And against?{/cps}" pause .25 @@ -1931,7 +1964,7 @@ label chapter_3: show trish annoyed flip with Dissolve(.25) T "There goes our main marketing strategy." - "Marketing strategy?{w=.4} I thought she was a triceratops,{w=.2} not a rhinorex." + "Marketing strategy? I thought she was a triceratops, not a rhinorex." show trish neutral flip with dissolve stop music fadeout 3 @@ -1939,9 +1972,9 @@ label chapter_3: "I’m abusing my good luck here so I probably should leave." show fang neutral flip with dissolve - A "That was very fun you guys,{w=.4} I hope I can see you all play more{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} better now than it was before{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.4}uuuhhhh{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + A "That was very fun you guys, I hope I can see you all play more{cps=*.1}...{/cps} again{cps=*.1}...{/cps} better now than it was before{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {cps=*.4}uuuhhhh{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "We’re cool right?{w=.3} Bye!" + A "We’re cool right? Bye!" show anon: easeout_back 0.5 yalign -0.45 xalign -0.275 #-0.225 @@ -1959,22 +1992,21 @@ label chapter_3: # TODO: play appreciating the moment? play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 1 - show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) - pause .25 + show anon neutral with dissolve "I look to see her fidgeting onstage." pause .5 show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "We {cps=*.35}couuuld{/cps} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} {nw}" + F "We {cps=*.35}couuuld{/cps} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}" show fang neutral flip - extend "OH!{w=.4} Feedback!{w=.5} We could use your feedback!" + extend "OH! Feedback! We could use your feedback!" pause .5 show trish surprised flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "We what?!{w=.5} {nw}" + T "We what?!{w=.4} {nw}" show trish unimpressed flip - extend "Fang,{w=.4} from him?" + extend "Fang, from him?" # temporarily commented out due to script document disparity # Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} He’s alright but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} like, for real?" @@ -1982,12 +2014,12 @@ label chapter_3: A "Wha-" show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "He’s been helpful!{w=.4} So why not?{w=.5} Reed,{w=.2} back me up here." + F "He’s been helpful! So why not? Reed, back me up here." show reed considering flip with Dissolve(.25) Re "mmmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Kay{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}" show reed neutral flip - extend "Anon should stay{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} He's a bro." + extend "Anon should stay{cps=*.1}...{/cps} He's a bro." show trish: easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7 #0.775 @@ -1995,7 +2027,7 @@ label chapter_3: T "REALLY?!{w=.5} {cps=*.4}BUT-{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}" show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25) - F "Anon,{w=.3} you’ll stick around a while,{w=.4} right?" + F "Anon, you’ll stick around a while, right?" pause .25 show trish: @@ -2003,7 +2035,8 @@ label chapter_3: show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve pause .5 - A "If you guys’ll order some Dino-moe’s,{w=.4} sure." + show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25) + A "If you guys’ll order some Dino-moe’s, sure." stop music fadeout 3 show trish neutral flip @@ -2014,7 +2047,7 @@ label chapter_3: "The three of them just stare blankly." pause .5 - "Wait.{w=.5} Auditorium.{w=.5} Pizza." + "Wait.{w=.4} Auditorium.{w=.4} Pizza." "{cps=*.4}Fuck.{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -2023,23 +2056,24 @@ label chapter_3: "Ohfuckohshitfortheloveofallthatisholywhynow." - A "I-{w=.1}I mean,{w=.3} uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) + A "I-{w=.1}I mean, uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "Actually,{w=.3} I have to go.{w=.5} Like,{w=.3} right now.{w=.5} So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Bye." + A "Actually, I have to go. Like, right now. So{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Bye." show fang unimpressed flip - F "Why?{w=.4} I can spring for pizza if you’re too broke." + F "Why? I can spring for pizza if you’re too broke." - A "Nah nah nah,{w=.4} no need." + A "Nah nah nah, no need." - A "Plus I just remembered,{w=.4} I have to do uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} important things." + A "Plus I just remembered, I have to do uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} important things." show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) F "More important than our music?" - A "Err,{w=.3} yeah.{w=.5} See I have to go return a blu-{w=.4} a book!" + A "Err, yeah. See I have to go return a blu-{w=.4} a book!" - "Fucking hell mouth,{w=.4} don’t go slipping weebtalk now!" + "Fucking hell mouth, don’t go slipping weebtalk now!" A "See it’s {cps=*.2}WAAAAY{/cps} overdue and I can NOT afford the late fee." pause .5 @@ -2049,10 +2083,10 @@ label chapter_3: "?" - "I almost didn’t recognize Reed’s voice,{w=.4} he said that way too sharply." + "I almost didn’t recognize Reed’s voice, he said that way too sharply." pause .5 - Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}the late date is like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} two weeks{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Are you up to something,{w=.2} Anon?" + Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}the late date is like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} two weeks{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Are you up to something, Anon?" "He sounds completely lucid and didn’t slur any words{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 @@ -2081,12 +2115,12 @@ label chapter_3: with Dissolve(.25) pause .25 - A "It’s from the library near my place.{w=.4} {cps=*.25}Suuuper{/cps} strict.{w=.5} Y’know how public libraries are like." + A "It’s from the library near my place.{w=.4} {cps=*.25}Suuuper{/cps} strict.{w=.4} Y’know how public libraries are like." pause .5 show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) Re "{cps=*.5}Riiiiiight.{/cps}" - show reed neutral flip + show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve pause .5 @@ -2096,15 +2130,17 @@ label chapter_3: T "WILL YOU JUST FUCKING LEAVE ALREADY?"with vpunch pause .5 - "I love you,{w=.2} Trish." + "I love you, Trish." - A "Sure,{w=.3} bye." + A "Sure, bye." show anon: easeout 1 xalign -0.7 show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) hide anon with dissolve - "I scramble away to the exit.{w=.5} As I turn to make my way out of there,{w=.4} on the stage I hear{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "I scramble away to the exit." + + "As I turn to make my way out of there, on the stage I hear{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) T "THANK YOU." @@ -2119,12 +2155,12 @@ label chapter_3: scene black with Fade(1, 0, 0) - "Don’t think about a threesome with Trish and Fang,{w=.3} don’t think about a threesome with Trish and Fang,{w=.6} they’re meteor dodgers for crying out loud!" + "Don’t think about a threesome with Trish and Fang, don’t think about a threesome with Trish and Fang, they’re meteor dodgers for crying out loud!" pause .5 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "Ok,{w=.3} just for one second" + "Ok, just for one second" pause .5 if persistent.lewd == True: