From 519094226f0ae946f371c87b9dd12a5822d4084c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Sun, 18 Jul 2021 11:42:59 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] add CTC to chapter 4 monologue --- .../4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy | 344 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 172 insertions(+), 172 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy index 61c2601..bb29672 100644 --- a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy +++ b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy @@ -5,56 +5,56 @@ label chapter_4: play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' show outside school fog - "-The Following Monday Morning-" - "I haven’t been able to focus much lately." + I "-The Following Monday Morning-" + I "I haven’t been able to focus much lately." - "My original plan is in absolute tatters." + I "My original plan is in absolute tatters." - "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict, I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club." + I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict, I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club." - "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well, and all their issues…" + I "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well, and all their issues…" - "At any moment I feel I’m going to get found out." + I "At any moment I feel I’m going to get found out." - "Trish would certainly beat me senseless." + I "Trish would certainly beat me senseless." - "Fang might as well…" + I "Fang might as well…" - "Definitely Naser." + I "Definitely Naser." - "All this shit happening, I can’t even get into my favorite hobby." + I "All this shit happening, I can’t even get into my favorite hobby." - "I don’t think I’ve made a single forum post in three days." + I "I don’t think I’ve made a single forum post in three days." - "I stare down at my phone screen and see a sea of threads to post in." + I "I stare down at my phone screen and see a sea of threads to post in." - "And yet, I have nothing to say." + I "And yet, I have nothing to say." - "Wait, it’s already seven?!" + I "Wait, it’s already seven?!" - "Fuck me, I dragged my feet too much!" + I "Fuck me, I dragged my feet too much!" - "I sprint the rest of the way to school." + I "I sprint the rest of the way to school." scene classroom with fade - "Luckily, I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass." - "Classes tick by in the daily slog, and like all things, lunch eventually comes to pass." + I "Luckily, I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass." + I "Classes tick by in the daily slog, and like all things, lunch eventually comes to pass." scene cafeteria with dissolve show anon neutral flip at sright - "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit." - "By now it’s a foregone conclusion, I already know what happens next." + I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit." + I "By now it’s a foregone conclusion, I already know what happens next." N "Anon!" - "Right on cue." + I "Right on cue." show naomi neutral at sleft with moveinleft show naser neutral behind nanomi with moveinleft: xalign 0.25 yalign -0.0 - "Naomi rushes over, followed by Naser. I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today." + I "Naomi rushes over, followed by Naser. I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today." N "Come on, Anon, let's continue our conversation from earlier!" - "I need to think of something, and fast." + I "I need to think of something, and fast." A "Err, sorry. I already promised Fang I’d be eating with her." - "Smooth." + I "Smooth." N "Oh..." - "Oh!" - "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!" + I "Oh!" + I "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!" Nas "Well hey, this is a welcome surprise!" A "Right. Actually, she doesn’t eat in the cafeteria, does she?" Nas "Didn’t she tell you? She hangs out with her band in the auditorium." @@ -66,15 +66,15 @@ label chapter_4: A "Right. Bye!" hide naser with moveoutleft hide naomi with moveoutleft - "I turn away from the two and leave them behind in the cafeteria." + I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind in the cafeteria." scene auditorium - "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once, I can get a decent look around the foyer." - "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building, but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there." - "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines, wouldn’t make much sense otherwise. Never really thought about it until now." - "I peer into the small window in the door to see Fang’s gang lazing about within. Reed is messing with some box on a table, and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other." - "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit. Then I pull it open." - "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare." - "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat." + I "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once, I can get a decent look around the foyer." + I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building, but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there." + I "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines, wouldn’t make much sense otherwise. Never really thought about it until now." + I "I peer into the small window in the door to see Fang’s gang lazing about within. Reed is messing with some box on a table, and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other." + I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit. Then I pull it open." + I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare." + I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat." show fang shocked at scenter with dissolve @@ -85,24 +85,24 @@ label chapter_4: show fang neutral at scenter show anon neutral flip at sright A "Hiding from Naomi." - "Fang throws her head back and goes limp on the shitty wooden chair." + I "Fang throws her head back and goes limp on the shitty wooden chair." F "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGHHHHHH, THAT BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH." show fang considering - "..." + I "..." A "..." F "..." A "..." - "Fang lifts her head back up." + I "Fang lifts her head back up." show fang unimpressed with dissolve F "Ffffffffine, you can stay." - "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat. Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before." - "Looks like a projector?" + I "I go sit a few yards away from Fang and Trish on the theater seat. Reed turns back to that device he was messing with before." + I "Looks like a projector?" A "You don’t like Naomi?" show fang angry with dissolve F "What was your first fuckin’ clue? That stupid bitch, acting all high and mighty all the time." T "Hey, Fang." F "Oh look at me I’m super smart and nice to everyone and everyone likes me so if you disagree with me I get the moral high ground no matter what!" - "Fang lets out some combination of a snort and a sigh." + I "Fang lets out some combination of a snort and a sigh." F "No different than Naser. What a couple." F "Ugh, whatever. What was she doing to bother you?" A "She’s been pestering me about every little thing since school started. Granted, she’s been a big help in some cases, but jeez she’s overbearing sometimes." @@ -117,18 +117,18 @@ label chapter_4: show fang neutral flip with dissolve F "Oh, right. What were you talking about Trish?" show trish neutral - "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack. She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it." + I "Trish pulls a cardboard tube out of her backpack. She pops the top of the tube open and pulls a rolled up poster out and unfurls it." T "This! Tada! Our first poster!" A "VVURM DRAMA? That’s an… interesting name… and what’s with the date on it?" F "Trish wants-" T "We need to have an actual show! Not some dumb school show. We need actual people who matter to show our genius to!" - "Genius? More like retardation." + I "Genius? More like retardation." show fang sad with dissolve F "I don’t know Trish." A "Yeeeaaaaahhhh I’m with Fang on this one." show fang neutral show trish unimpressed - "The glare Trish levels at me was akin to a very dull knife." + I "The glare Trish levels at me was akin to a very dull knife." T "You don’t even know how good we are!" T "That was simply a practice session!" T "Since you’re Naser’s friend too, just know HE ruined our first concert. Right Fang?" @@ -136,44 +136,44 @@ label chapter_4: A "Still I think-" show trish angry with dissolve T "It doesn’t matter what YOU think!" - "Whoa, where did that come from." + I "Whoa, where did that come from." show fang happy with dissolve F "Let’s drop it for now. My tuna sandwich is getting cold." show trish smug - "Trish grins in victory." + I "Trish grins in victory." Re "Dude… ya got told…" - "What the fuck am I doing? I’m dead if I out myself here outnumbered" + I "What the fuck am I doing? I’m dead if I out myself here outnumbered" - "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there." + I "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there." - "Had to happen EVENTUALLY." + I "Had to happen EVENTUALLY." - "I hope that’s not the case." + I "I hope that’s not the case." show trish neutral - "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch. A BLT, some chicken nuggets, and an orange." - "I take my first bite of the sandwich and-" + I "I finally get to opening my omnivore lunch. A BLT, some chicken nuggets, and an orange." + I "I take my first bite of the sandwich and-" stop music fadeout 1.0 - "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*" - "Are you kidding me." - "I cram as much of the sandwich into my mouth as I can and close the box." - "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room, and Trish makes for the exit with Fang. I follow after, cheeks still filled with food" + I "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*" + I "Are you kidding me." + I "I cram as much of the sandwich into my mouth as I can and close the box." + I "Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room, and Trish makes for the exit with Fang. I follow after, cheeks still filled with food" scene hallway with fade show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve - "Next class is… Music, that’s right. I’ll be walking with Fang then." + I "Next class is… Music, that’s right. I’ll be walking with Fang then." show hallway play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg' - "The three all wave each other goodbye and Fang turns towards our shared class." - "May as well make some small talk." + I "The three all wave each other goodbye and Fang turns towards our shared class." + I "May as well make some small talk." A "So, uh… What’s your favorite band, Fang?" F "My favorite band, huh…" F "Guess it’d be something like The Skinks… Maybe the Fossillies?" A "‘Oi, tha’ ‘ere’s sum pre’ey bri’ish tayste, yeah?" F "Pffft." - "She turns away to hide her snickers." + I "She turns away to hide her snickers." F "Shut it." F "I’m sure your favorite is much better." A "I’m into…" @@ -190,38 +190,38 @@ label chapter_4: jump regardlessofselect label regardlessofselect: - "Fang holds a hand up to her beak." + I "Fang holds a hand up to her beak." F "AHAHAHAHAHAHHA. God you are such a dweeb" - "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin." + I "I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin." A "Least I don’t need a ‘loisence’ to listen to it." F "Oi luv, didn’ share me taystes to get rallied on, bit rewd, innit?" stop music fadeout 1.0 scene black with fade - "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class." + I "The two of us banter with each other with increasingly strong british accents all the way to class." scene classroom with fade - "..." + I "..." play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' show bandroom - "ARGH!! This stupid-" - "Define a Treble clef? I don’t know what a Treble clef is! I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful." - "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?" - "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place." + I "ARGH!! This stupid-" + I "Define a Treble clef? I don’t know what a Treble clef is! I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful." + I "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?" + I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place." N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" - "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly." - "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck." - "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now." - "She tilts her head and taps her sheet." - "OH!" - "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple. My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat." - "Fang shakes her head, returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak." - "I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!" + I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly." + I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck." + I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now." + I "She tilts her head and taps her sheet." + I "OH!" + I "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple. My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat." + I "Fang shakes her head, returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak." + I "I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!" N "It can’t hurt to ask, though, right?" - "Maybe the neon Nero had a good point." - "Still, interrupting her now might piss her off." - "FFFFFfuck. I’ll flip a coin." + I "Maybe the neon Nero had a good point." + I "Still, interrupting her now might piss her off." + I "FFFFFfuck. I’ll flip a coin." #>>> Heads, ask Fang for help #>>> Tails, leave Fang alone @@ -239,18 +239,18 @@ label chapter_4: play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' - "Guess that’s that." - "May as well get it over with." - "I slink out of my chair and go around to Fang’s desk." + I "Guess that’s that." + I "May as well get it over with." + I "I slink out of my chair and go around to Fang’s desk." show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve A "Uh...." show fang shocked flip at sright with dissolve - "She jumps in her chair" + I "She jumps in her chair" F "How’d you get- don’t scare me like that!" A "Sorry…" hide fang shocked flip with dissolve show fang neutral flip at sright - "I look at her work and see she’s only a quarter done. Fuck, I hope we have enough time." + I "I look at her work and see she’s only a quarter done. Fuck, I hope we have enough time." A "sooo… You seem to be capable of deciphering dead languages." F "Wha-" A "canyouhelpmewiththis?!" @@ -258,64 +258,64 @@ label chapter_4: A "....Yes. I don’t get any of this. It’s all moon runes to me." F "How’d you even join this class?" A "Only elective that had an open spot. Even though it’s mid semester and I’m expected to be at the level of everyone that’s been here all year." - "Fang leans her head down and holds her hand on top of her muzzle." - "I’m guessing that’s supposed to be like pinching the bridge of your nose." + I "Fang leans her head down and holds her hand on top of her muzzle." + I "I’m guessing that’s supposed to be like pinching the bridge of your nose." F "Whatever, it’s fine if the teacher gives the greenlight." show reed king rex with moveinleft: xalign -0.35 yalign 0.0 Re "It’ll be fine." - "Fang and I jump several inches." + I "Fang and I jump several inches." F "What are you doing here?!" A "And what’s with the costume?" - "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume." + I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume." Re "Gotta get a signature for this absent note, man…" Re "Anyways... Mr. Jingo doesn’t care about if you use, like, partners and stuff… He just wants the work done…" A "I… I see. I didn’t know you were also the school mascot, Reed." Re "There’s, like, pockets in here man… You get to bring a lot of cool stuff… As long as you clean it after…" - "I’m not even going to bother at this point." + I "I’m not even going to bother at this point." F "Thanks, Reed." Re "s’all good, man…" - "Reed gets up and goes to the teachers’ desk in the corner of the room." + I "Reed gets up and goes to the teachers’ desk in the corner of the room." hide reed king rex with moveoutleft - "I turn back to Fang expectantly." + I "I turn back to Fang expectantly." F "I’m not getting up. Get your crap and sit down already." A "Thanks." - "..." + I "..." jump PostFlip #>>Tails, leave Fang alone. label Tails: - "Guess that settles it." - "Fang wouldn’t want to be bothered right now anyways." - "Looking back to my paper, I try once again to make sense of the questions and music notes." - "Write the following notes in both Treble and Bass clef." - "...What?" + I "Guess that settles it." + I "Fang wouldn’t want to be bothered right now anyways." + I "Looking back to my paper, I try once again to make sense of the questions and music notes." + I "Write the following notes in both Treble and Bass clef." + I "...What?" show reed king rex flip at rcenter Re "Yo, you should have like... asked Fang for help, man…" - "I have to grab the desk to keep myself from falling out of my chair." + I "I have to grab the desk to keep myself from falling out of my chair." A "Reed, what the fuck are you doing here?!" Re "Just getting an absent note signed by teach, man…" A "And what’s with the outfit?!" - "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume." + I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume." Re "School mascots are pretty cool… You wouldn’t believe the things they let you do with these…" - "I’m not going to ask for clarification." + I "I’m not going to ask for clarification." Re "But, uhh… You should get some help or something…" Re "I’ll ask the teacher for you…" A "No, Reed, you don’t have to-" Re "YO, TEACH! THIS GUY NEEDS SOME EXTRA HELP!" - "All eyes turn to us. The desk makes a nice ‘conk’ sound when my head hits it." + I "All eyes turn to us. The desk makes a nice ‘conk’ sound when my head hits it." show jingo at sleft jingo "Does he really?" jingo "Err… Someone… Fang! You help him with the packet." - "Fang glares daggers at the two of us." + I "Fang glares daggers at the two of us." A "Thanks, Reed." Re "Hey, no problem man! I gotta go…" hide reed - "Reed shuffles over to the teachers’ desk in the corner to get his signature." - "Fang calls out from her chair." + I "Reed shuffles over to the teachers’ desk in the corner to get his signature." + I "Fang calls out from her chair." F "I’m not getting up. If you need help grab your stuff and get over here." - "The damage is done. May as well at this point." - "..." + I "The damage is done. May as well at this point." + I "..." scene classroom with fade show fang angry flip at sright show anon neutral at aleft @@ -327,40 +327,40 @@ label chapter_4: A "No shit, I don’t know what half this shit is!" F "God, they tell you about treble notes in Elementary, it’s E, G, B, D, F for treble and G, B, D, F, A for bass!" A "How the hell do you know any of this" - "Anon then realized, he is horrendously fucking stupid." + I "Anon then realized, he is horrendously fucking stupid." F "I’ve been into playing music since pre-k" - "... Roll with it" + I "... Roll with it" A "So does it take that long to learn that horrid thing?" - "I point at the class’ electric guitar" + I "I point at the class’ electric guitar" show fang neutral flip with dissolve F "Nah, I started with piano. I didn’t get my first guitar ‘til freshman year." A "The piano? Isn’t that the hardest one?" - "I have no clue what i'm talking about" + I "I have no clue what i'm talking about" F "Maybe for some, but I started early and got ahead. My grandma had an old piano she would let me mess around with." F "She would try to get me to play all kinds of songs, mostly church stuff because she wanted me to be a little goodie two shoes like she was. It... was fun." F "Then I started taking piano lessons privately because my mom saw that I was interested in it, and in middle school I joined the band for awhile!" show fang happy flip F "Only quit because of marching season, I was not wearing a dumb uniform." show fang unimpressed flip - "Fang gets a strange expression, a mix between a blush and a scowl as she returns back to her snappy attitude." + I "Fang gets a strange expression, a mix between a blush and a scowl as she returns back to her snappy attitude." F "You done with that yet? It's taking you way too long, rather have you out of my way." - "Cute." - "I show her the half-finished worksheet." + I "Cute." + I "I show her the half-finished worksheet." A "I still don’t get this fucking part." F "It’s literally three classifications, it’s really easy" A "It doesn’t list them!" F "Did you even read the page?" - "Fang then grabs the paper and points at the top right. In a small box is a list of three types, woodwind, brass, and percussion." + I "Fang then grabs the paper and points at the top right. In a small box is a list of three types, woodwind, brass, and percussion." A "Oh..." F "You need me to still help you with this or do you have it from here?" - "Of course I have it, I know this shit, it's just 3 catagories" - "Percussion is simple enough. Getting the differences between woodwind and brass is a bit harder." + I "Of course I have it, I know this shit, it's just 3 catagories" + I "Percussion is simple enough. Getting the differences between woodwind and brass is a bit harder." A "Right. You know your stuff. Band stuff." play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' - "I heard a sigh from Fang" + I "I heard a sigh from Fang" F "I can’t believe this." @@ -398,15 +398,15 @@ label chapter_4: F "I know your kind." - "I-I, what did Fang mean by that? It all just came out of nowhere - I mean jeez-" + I "I-I, what did Fang mean by that? It all just came out of nowhere - I mean jeez-" - "We’re talking about how she can’t get friends and now she wants to know about THAT…" + I "We’re talking about how she can’t get friends and now she wants to know about THAT…" - "Oh God. I’m getting hot." + I "Oh God. I’m getting hot." - "It’s Trish. She told Fang and she knows everything." + I "It’s Trish. She told Fang and she knows everything." - "Play dumb? Hopefully that will work." + I "Play dumb? Hopefully that will work." A "I have no clue what you’re talking about." @@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ label chapter_4: show fang happy flip with dissolve - "She’s laughing." + I "She’s laughing." A "..." @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ label chapter_4: A "Whatever you say, Fang." - "With a roll of her eyes she returns to scrolling through her phone again. I seriously wonder now what she meant." + I "With a roll of her eyes she returns to scrolling through her phone again. I seriously wonder now what she meant." F "I gotta go." @@ -455,28 +455,28 @@ label chapter_4: show fang neutral at sright hide fang neutral with moveoutleft - "..." + I "..." play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' - "She knows." + I "She knows." - "But how?!" + I "But how?!" - "She left her phone on the desk." + I "She left her phone on the desk." - "I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the room’s lamps" + I "I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the room’s lamps" - "It… It wouldn’t be right." + I "It… It wouldn’t be right." - "...I have to know." + I "...I have to know." - "I reach over to pick up the phone." + I "I reach over to pick up the phone." - "Some movement in the corner of my eye solidifies me." + I "Some movement in the corner of my eye solidifies me." - "Why’s Reed still here?!" + I "Why’s Reed still here?!" Re "..." @@ -484,62 +484,62 @@ label chapter_4: Re "... {i}*snrrrk*{/i}" - "Oh thank Raptor Jesus. He’s asleep." + I "Oh thank Raptor Jesus. He’s asleep." - "Fang’s password is…" + I "Fang’s password is…" - "Wait, only the ‘one’ key is smudged?" + I "Wait, only the ‘one’ key is smudged?" - "I guess it’s worked until now…" + I "I guess it’s worked until now…" - "Ah, the messenger app." + I "Ah, the messenger app." #TODO: IMPLEMENT MESSAGING GUI #do we even have time for this? #maybe this will be a post release update #lmao as if #--refer to Writer1 for the entirety of the texting part as he wants it to be more interactive. - "... There’s surprisingly not a lot." + I "... There’s surprisingly not a lot." - "Seems they interact mostly in person." + I "Seems they interact mostly in person." - "...What did I even just accomplish?" + I "...What did I even just accomplish?" - "I shouldn’t have looked." + I "I shouldn’t have looked." - "All because of my paranoia… I just violated someone’s privacy." + I "All because of my paranoia… I just violated someone’s privacy." - "I can feel a pit open in my stomach." + I "I can feel a pit open in my stomach." - "I shouldn't have done it." + I "I shouldn't have done it." - "Trish is Fang’s friend. Not me." + I "Trish is Fang’s friend. Not me." - "God damn it, Anon. The fuck is wrong with you." + I "God damn it, Anon. The fuck is wrong with you." - "I set the phone back where it was." + I "I set the phone back where it was." - "A glance back at Reed and I confirm that he’s still unconscious." + I "A glance back at Reed and I confirm that he’s still unconscious." play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' - "What’s another secret to keep?" + I "What’s another secret to keep?" - "Each one just building on the last, the growing maw in my gut threatens to make me violently ill." + I "Each one just building on the last, the growing maw in my gut threatens to make me violently ill." show fang unimpressed flip at sright with moveinright F "Oi!" - "I’m startled as Fang retakes her seat." + I "I’m startled as Fang retakes her seat." F "Did you manage to do {i}anything{/i} on the sheet?" - "I simply shake my head as I show her the incomplete worksheet." + I "I simply shake my head as I show her the incomplete worksheet." show fang angry flip with dissolve - "Fang sighs frustratedly." + I "Fang sighs frustratedly." A "Look if I’m being a bother-" @@ -547,20 +547,20 @@ label chapter_4: show fang neutral flip with dissolve - "Fang began breaking down the questions, her tone less condescending than when we initially started." + I "Fang began breaking down the questions, her tone less condescending than when we initially started." - "The way she explained it was infinitely better than how Mr. Jingo did at the start of class." + I "The way she explained it was infinitely better than how Mr. Jingo did at the start of class." - "Over time the sheet was slowly filled in, things finally starting to click now." + I "Over time the sheet was slowly filled in, things finally starting to click now." F "Looks like you got the hang of this bit. Good job, dork." - "Fang smirks a bit." - "I see a chance to strike." + I "Fang smirks a bit." + I "I see a chance to strike." A "Helps to have an actual decent teacher." show fang surprised flip with dissolve - "The slight red tint tells me I was right on the mark." - "There’s also the steady *thump thump thump* of her tail on the back of her seat to clue me in. I can’t help thinking of tugging on the appendage." - "Wait, the thumping." - "*Thump thump… thump thump thump… thump thump… thump thump thump*" + I "The slight red tint tells me I was right on the mark." + I "There’s also the steady *thump thump thump* of her tail on the back of her seat to clue me in. I can’t help thinking of tugging on the appendage." + I "Wait, the thumping." + I "*Thump thump… thump thump thump… thump thump… thump thump thump*" A "Hey uh… Is… Is your tail drumming right now?" F "Hm? Oh, that. Kinda." show fang neutral flip with dissolve @@ -568,30 +568,30 @@ label chapter_4: F "I’m feeling out a rhythm. Thinking of a new song." A "Is that normally part of the creative process?" F "Maybe, maybe not. Are you done with the packet yet?" - "I groan." + I "I groan." A "Still got half a page left." F "That’s just a crossword puzzle. I’m not helping if you can’t do even that." A "I know, I know." - "I have to resort to good ol’ logic to solve the crossword. The longest and shortest words are easy enough to figure out." + I "I have to resort to good ol’ logic to solve the crossword. The longest and shortest words are easy enough to figure out." A "But, uhh…" F "Hm?" A "Thanks for helping me. With the assignment I mean." show fang considering flip with dissolve F "Uhh… Yeah. Sure." - "There’s that red tint again." + I "There’s that red tint again." F "I’ll help again… I mean, if you need it." A "Really? Thanks." F "Yeah, just-" show fang neutral flip - "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*" - "That’s the bell telling us to piss off to the last period. Crap, I still got a few words left." + I "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*" + I "That’s the bell telling us to piss off to the last period. Crap, I still got a few words left." scene black with fade - "I guess the last few words and rush over to the teachers’ desk to turn it in. When I turn back I catch sight of Fang leaving the room in a hurry, tail between her legs." + I "I guess the last few words and rush over to the teachers’ desk to turn it in. When I turn back I catch sight of Fang leaving the room in a hurry, tail between her legs." Nas "{i}She’s not that bad once you get to know her.{/i}" - "Guess he was right after all." + I "Guess he was right after all." stop music fadeout 1.0 scene black with fade - "God, I feel like a jerk now." - "..." + I "God, I feel like a jerk now." + I "..." return \ No newline at end of file