diff --git a/game/audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg b/game/audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg new file mode 100644 index 0000000..b926ac9 Binary files /dev/null and b/game/audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg differ diff --git a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy index 948d30f..39d0e39 100644 --- a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy +++ b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy @@ -680,12 +680,11 @@ label chapter_3: play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' I "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch + stop music fadeout 2 pause .5 N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk." - stop music fadeout 1.0 - I "I’m clenching my face too much to be able to speak,{w=.4} I can only get a slight nod out." I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -742,8 +741,7 @@ label chapter_3: show anon: alpha 1 yalign 0.1 - - unknown "{cps=*.3}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + unknown "{cps=*.25}Judgement{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show anon: easein 0.5 xalign 0.8 @@ -754,7 +752,7 @@ label chapter_3: show stella: easein 1 xalign 0.35 show stella considering with Dissolve(.25) - unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.6} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?" + unknown "Karma?{w=.6} No.{w=.75} No,{w=.4} maybe second chance?" I "She draws closer,{w=.4} a contemplative expression on her face." @@ -782,10 +780,10 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 A "Still lost." - pause .25 + pause .5 - show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25) - unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.6} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.6} Reflect on them." + show stella explanatory + unknown "It’s you.{w=.6} Your card.{w=.75} You are on the precipice of a great ordeal.{w=.6} Many difficult points of divergence and contention are coming your way.{w=.75} Reflect on them." show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25) I "I think about asking the green weirdo to make sense,{w=.4} but the bell is about to ring." @@ -1021,6 +1019,7 @@ label chapter_3: # TODO: cheesy record scratch? stop music fadeout 0.1 + play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 1 I "Uhp" @@ -1032,7 +1031,8 @@ label chapter_3: show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) F "What was that?" pause .5 - + + stop ambient fadeout 1 play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0 A "{cps=*.2}Nuthin’{/cps}" @@ -1383,6 +1383,7 @@ label chapter_3: I "I don’t know what just happened." + # TODO: this track doesn't loop very gracefully play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 2 pause .5 show anon sad @@ -1934,7 +1935,7 @@ label chapter_3: show trish surprised flip with Dissolve(.25) T "We what?!{w=.5} {nw}" show trish unimpressed flip - extend "Fang,{w=.4} from him!" + extend "Fang,{w=.4} from him?" # temporarily commented out due to script document disparity # Re "Like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} He’s alright but{cps=*.1}...{/cps} like, for real?" diff --git a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy index bedcf03..50542dc 100644 --- a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy +++ b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy @@ -1,13 +1,11 @@ label chapter_4: - #Music class - play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2 + # CH 4 SCENE 1 - Anon is one slice of toast away from living an anime pause 1 - I "-- The Following Monday Morning --" - pause .5 - - scene outside school fog with Fade(0,0,2) + play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 2 + scene outside school fog with Fade(1,0,1) + I "{cps=*.3}-- The Following Monday Morning --{/cps}" pause .5 I "I haven’t been able to focus much lately." @@ -15,83 +13,160 @@ label chapter_4: I "My original plan is in absolute tatters." - I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict, I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club." + I "As opposed to staying silent and not facing any conflict,{w=.4} I’m now all buddy-buddy with the school reject club." - I "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well, and all their issues…" + I "And then there’s Naser and Naomi as well,{w=.4} and all their issues{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - I "At any moment I feel I’m going to get found out." + I "At any moment I feel I'm going to get found out." I "Trish would certainly beat me senseless." - I "Fang might as well…" + I "Fang might as well{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" I "Definitely Naser." pause .5 - I "All this shit happening, I can’t even get into my favorite hobby." + I "All this shit happening,{w=.4} I can’t even get into my favorite hobby." I "I don’t think I’ve made a single forum post in three days." + pause .5 I "I stare down at my phone screen and see a sea of threads to post in." - I "And yet, I have nothing to say." + I "And yet,{w=.4} I have nothing to say." pause .5 - I "Wait, it’s already seven?!" + I "Wait,{w=.3} it’s already seven?!" - I "Fuck me, I dragged my feet too much!" + I "Fuck me,{w=.4} I dragged my feet too much!" I "I sprint the rest of the way to school." - scene classroom with fade - I "Luckily, I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass." - I "Classes tick by in the daily slog, and like all things, lunch eventually comes to pass." - scene cafeteria with dissolve - show anon neutral flip at sright - I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit." - I "By now it’s a foregone conclusion, I already know what happens next." - # TODO: play west coast kicking + scene classroom with fade + + I "Luckily,{w=.3} I’m able to slink into homeroom without the teacher molesting me for a tardy pass." + + I "Classes tick by in the daily slog,{w=.4} and like all things,{w=.4} lunch eventually comes to pass." + + stop music fadeout 3 + play ambient 'audio/effects/teenageCafeteriaLoop.ogg' fadein 2 + scene cafeteria + show anon neutral at aright + with fade + + I "I grab a packaged lunch from the omnivore line and begin looking for a place to sit." + + I "By now it’s a foregone conclusion,{w=.4} I already know what happens next." + pause .25 + stop ambient fadeout 3 + play music 'audio/ost/west_coast_kicking.ogg' fadein 1 + pause .5 N "Anon!" + pause .5 + I "Right on cue." - show naomi neutral at sleft with moveinleft - show naser neutral behind nanomi with moveinleft: - xalign 0.25 yalign -0.0 - I "Naomi rushes over, followed by Naser. I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today." - N "Come on, Anon, let's continue our conversation from earlier!" - I "I need to think of something, and fast." - A "Err, sorry. I already promised Fang I’d be eating with her." + + show anon neutral flip with dissolve + + show naomi neutral: + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.75 + show naomi: + easein 1 xalign 0.4 + with dissolve + show naser neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign -1 + show naser: + easein 1.5 xalign -0.275 + with dissolve + + I "Naomi rushes over,{w=.4} followed by Naser.{w=.6} I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today." + + show naomi explanatory + N "Come on,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.4} let's continue our conversation from earlier!" + show naomi neutral + + I "I need to think of something,{w=.4} and fast." + + A "Err,{w=.3} sorry.{w=.4} I already promised Fang I’d be eating with her." + pause .5 + I "Smooth." - N "Oh..." - I "Oh!" - I "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!" - Nas "Well hey, this is a welcome surprise!" - A "Right. Actually, she doesn’t eat in the cafeteria, does she?" - Nas "Didn’t she tell you? She hangs out with her band in the auditorium." + pause .25 + + show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25) + N "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show naomi neutral + N "Oh!" + + show naomi explanatory + N "I’m glad to hear you’re trying to be better friends with Fang!" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + + show naser happy + Nas "Well hey,{w=.4} this is a welcome surprise!" + + A "Right.{w=.4} Actually,{w=.2} she doesn’t eat in the cafeteria,{w=.4} does she?" + + show naser neutral + Nas "Didn’t she tell you?{w=.4} She hangs out with her band in the auditorium." + A "She’s allowed to do that?" - N "I’ve asked Principal Spears before, he sees no issue with it." - A "Huh. Anyways, I uh… Don’t want to keep them waiting!" + + show naser considering + N "I’ve asked Principal Spears before,{w=.4} he sees no issue with it." + + A "Huh.{w=.4} Anyways,{w=.2} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} Don’t want to keep them waiting!" + + show naser happy Nas "See you." + + show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) + show naomi: + ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 + ease 0.25 yalign 0.0 N "Have fun!" - A "Right. Bye!" - hide naser with moveoutleft - hide naomi with moveoutleft - I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind in the cafeteria." + pause .5 + + A "Right.{w=.3} Bye!" + + show anon: + easeout 1 xalign 1.5 + pause .1 + show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25) + hide anon with dissolve + + I "I turn away from the two and leave them behind." # TODO: scene door auditorium - scene auditorium - I "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once, I can get a decent look around the foyer." - I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building, but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there." - I "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines, wouldn’t make much sense otherwise. Never really thought about it until now." - I "I peer into the small window in the door to see Fang’s gang lazing about within. Reed is messing with some box on a table, and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other." - I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit. Then I pull it open." + scene door auditorium with fade - # TODO: scene auditorium + I "Now that i’m in front of the auditorium when it isn’t crowded for once,{w=.4} I can get a decent look around the foyer." + + I "The walls are as vine-covered as anywhere else in the building,{w=.4} but the ones here have small magenta flowers blooming on them here and there." + + I "I suppose there’s different kinds of vines,{w=.4} wouldn’t make much sense otherwise.{w=.5} Never really thought about it until now." + pause .5 + + I "I open the door enough to see Fang’s gang lazing about within." + + I "Reed is messing with some box on a table,{w=.4} and Fang and Trish are sitting on the first row of seats chattering to each other." + + stop music fadeout 3 + + I "I put my hand on the doorhandle and hesitate a bit.{w=.4} Then I pull it open." + + # CH 4 SCENE 2 - + + scene auditorium with Dissolve(1) I "The squeak of the door echoes through the near empty auditorium, and immediately all three turn their heads and stare." + I "There’s an awkward pause that goes on for just a bit too long. Eventually Fang calls out from her seat." + show fang shocked at scenter with dissolve # TODO: sound direction says play She Fucks Human Men, resolve this @@ -226,7 +301,7 @@ label chapter_4: I "Define a Treble clef? I don’t know what a Treble clef is! I don’t care about this shit, it won’t ever be useful." I "Fuck this, who can I cheat off of?" I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place." - N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" + N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}" # TODO: is this from a previous line? If so can't find it I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly." I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck." I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now."