diff --git a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
index 26155d5..7af9780 100644
--- a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
+++ b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
@@ -2930,474 +2930,758 @@ label chapter_5:
     "I can’t stop the gnawing feeling in my chest."
     pause .5
 
+    scene black with fade
+
+    "I’m at the door to the roof now.{w=.6} It’s shut,{w=.4} but by the handle I notice a piece of cardboard tucked between the door and frame,{w=.4} keeping the latch open."
+    pause .5
+
+    F "\"{i}Good job,{w=.3} dork.{/i}\""
+
+    "{i}Fang smirks a bit.{/i}"
+    pause .5
+
+    "Damn it all.{w=.5} Fang’s problems first,{w=.4} then I can figure out my chest."
+    pause .5
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 5
     scene roof day
-    show fang neutral:
-        xalign -0.2
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
-    with fade
-    "I’m at the door to the roof now. It’s shut, but by the handle I notice a piece of cardboard tucked between the door and frame, keeping the latch open."
-    F "Good job, dork."
-    show fang happy
-    "Fang smirks a bit."
-    "Damn it all. Fang’s problems first, then I can figure out my chest."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    with Fade(1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
+    pause .5
+
     "I open the door and am immediately blinded by the sun."
+
     "I shade my eyes."
+    pause .5
+
     "The door clicks shut behind me."
-    A "Oh… shit…"
-    show fang neutral
-    F "Whose the- Anon?... What’s with the guitar?"
+
+    A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} shit{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang unimpressed flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    F "Whose the-{w=.4} {nw}"
+    show fang neutral flip
+    extend "Anon?{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} What’s with the guitar?"
+
     "Fang is sitting atop the stair enclosure looking down at me."
-    A "Mr. Jingo’s hall pass. I uh… Kinda need help with sheet music again."
-    F "Wow. You really suck at music."
-    A "Yeah. I really do."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
+    show anon:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause 1
+    
+    A "Mr. Jingo’s hall pass.{w=.5} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} kinda need help with sheet music again."
+
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Wow.{w=.4} You really suck at music."
+
+    A "Yeah.{w=.4} I really do."
+    pause .5
+
+    # TODO: I can't really think of a good way to show this
     "I find the ladder easily enough and climb on top of the tiny hut."
+    pause .5
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    pause 1
+
     "Around Fang are scattered feathers."
-    A "You alright? The feath-"
+    pause 1
+
+    A "You alright?{w=.5} {cps=*.5}The feath-{/cps}"
+
     F "Preening."
+    pause 1
+
     "What."
-    "Fang sighs. She holds one of her wings and gently brushes her fingers through the feathers."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang considering flip with dissolve
+    "Fang sighs.{w=.5} She holds one of her wings and gently brushes her fingers through the feathers."
+    pause .5
+
     F "I’m preening my wing."
-    "She winces. A feather drifts to the floor."
+    pause .5
+
+    "She winces.{w=.6} A feather drifts to the floor."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.15
+    pause .5
     A "That looks painful."
-    show anon neutral flip at acenter behind fang with move
-    "I move closer."
+    pause .5
+
+    # "I move closer."
+    # pause .5
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "A little."
-    "I sit down next to her and look out at Volcaldera Bluff. It’s a beautiful view."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.1
+    pause 1
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause 1
+
+    "I sit down next to her and look out at Volcaldera Bluff.{w=.6} It’s a beautiful view."
+    pause .5
+
     "It’s a distraction."
-    F "You ever…"
+    pause 1
+
+    F "You ever{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
         "stay quiet...":
-         jump quiet4b
+            pause .5
         "Interrupt":
-         jump interrupt4b
+            pause .5
+            jump .interrupt4b
 
-    label quiet4b:
     "There’s a time to speak and a time to listen."
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang sad
-
-    F "... You ever feel like you just don’t matter?"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You ever feel like you just don’t matter?"
 
     "Fang stares at the vista of Volcaldera but her eyes are vacant."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I feel like no matter what I do, I’ll never be able to make something."
+    F "I feel like no matter what I do,{w=.4} I’ll never be able to make something."
 
     F "I try and try but nobody likes the ways I express myself."
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang angry
-
+    show fang angry flip with dissolve
     "She growls."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "Not once after all the work I’ve put into VVURM DRAMA has anyone ever told me it was good,"
+    F "Not once after all the work I’ve put into VVURM DRAMA has anyone ever told me it was good."
+    
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    "Her eyes wetten.{w=.6} Her voice roughens.{w=.6} Her shoulders quake."
 
-    "Her eyes wetten. Her voice roughens. Her shoulders quake."
-
-    F "nobodies ever said ‘Good job, Fang! Can I get a copy of that last song on CD’ ."
+    F "Nobody's ever said{w=.2} ‘Good job,{w=.3} Fang!{w=.4} Can I get a copy of that last song on CD’."
+    pause .5
 
     F "I’ve been playing music since I was basically in diapers and all I have to show for it is a shit reputation."
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang very angry
+    show fang:
+        block:
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.895
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.9
+            repeat 5
+        pause .5
+        block:
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.89
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.9
+            repeat 6
+        pause .5
+        block:
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.895
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.9
+            repeat
+    pause 1
+    show fang angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause 1
 
-    "Her hand curls into a fist. Her nails bite into her palm, and I can clearly see the minute trickle of blood."
+    show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    "Her hand curls into a fist.{w=.6} Her nails bite into her palm,{w=.4} and I can clearly see the minute trickle of blood."
 
     F "How much harder do I have to try to get people to notice me!"
 
+    show fang:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.5
     "Her fist crashes down on the floor."
 
-    show fang ultra angry
+    show fang ultra angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     F "Even my own parents!"
+    pause .5
 
     F "When dad looks at me it’s like he just sees a lost cause!"
 
-    F "\"Oh, Fang is the scene teen, better focus on the one that ISN’T broken so we don’t screw up again!\""
+    F "\"Oh,{w=.2} Fang is the scene teen,{w=.5} better focus on the one that ISN’T broken so we don’t screw up again!\""
 
-    "She punctuated her shouts with her fist, striking the roof beneath her."
+    "She punctuated her shouts with her fist,{w=.4} striking the roof beneath her."
 
-    "Her fist lands softly one final time, uncurling to reveal the bleeding grooves her sharp nails have left."
+    "Her fist lands softly one final time,{w=.5} uncurling to reveal the bleeding grooves her sharp nails have left."
 
-    F "..."
 
-    show fang ear cover
+    show fang ear cover flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    show fang:
+        block:
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.495
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.5
+            repeat 4
+        pause .6
+        block:
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.495
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.5
+            repeat 7
+        pause .75
+        repeat
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Watching her break apart, it’s causing the dull pain in my chest to intensify."
+    "Watching her break apart,{w=.5} it’s causing the dull pain in my chest to intensify."
+    pause .5
 
     F "Why can’t I be popular like him?"
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang very sad
+    show fang:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.5
+    show fang very sad flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
-    "Fang deflates completely. All her anger gone, replaced with melancholy."
+    "Fang deflates completely.{w=.6} All her anger gone,{w=.4} replaced with melancholy."
+    pause .5
 
     F "Naser doesn’t have to try at all!"
 
-    F "Even crippled, he just breezes through life!"
+    F "Even crippled,{w=.4} he just breezes through life!"
+    pause .5
 
     F "Why does he get straight A’s?"
 
     F "Why does he get my parents’ attention?"
+    pause .5
 
     F "Why do I have to be the burden on everyone?!"
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang hiding
+    show fang hiding flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "She grabs her knees and buries her face in her lap."
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
         "stay quiet...":
-            jump quiet4c
+            pause .5
         "Interrupt":
+            pause .5
             jump interrupt4c
 
-    label quiet4c:
-
     $ wingStory = True
 
     F "And the worst part is he can’t even hate me."
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang sad
+    show fang sad flip with Dissolve(1)
 
     "She picks her head up."
 
     "Rivulets of tears and orange eyeliner run down her cheeks and leave bright stains on her knees."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang sad with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     F "I can tell him to fuck off every day and he’ll still be there the next."
 
     F "As if nothing fucking happened."
+    pause .5
 
     F "He’s a constant reminder of everything I can’t be."
+    pause .5
 
     F "He’s a goddamned boy scout!"
 
     F "Lil’ Mr. Perfect!"
 
     F "And I’ll always be in his fucking shadow!"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I can’t just change, just magically get better at everything even if someone like Naser tries to help."
+    F "I can’t just change,{w=.4} just magically get better at everything even if someone like Naser tries to help."
 
     F "And it’s clear he wants to."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "But the sheer difference between us…"
+    F "But the sheer difference between us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "It won’t ever happen."
+    pause .75
 
     F "But my brother tries."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "He’s always trying. He just FUCKS UP!"
+    show fang angry with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "He’s always trying."
+    pause .5
+    
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.4
+    show fang very angry with dissolve
 
-    F "Every. Fucking. Time."
+    F "He just{w=.3} {nw}"
+    show fang:
+        linear 0.045 xalign 0.395
+        linear 0.045 xalign 0.4
+        repeat
+    extend "FUCKS UP!"
 
-    show fang anguish
+    F "Every.{w=.3} Fucking.{w=.3} Time."
+    pause 1
 
-    "She wipes a tear with one of her hands, but leaves a bloody smudge instead."
+    show fang:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.4
+    show fang anguish with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    "She wipes a tear with one of her hands,{w=.5} but leaves a bloody smudge instead."
+    pause .5
 
     F "Naser knows who he is."
 
     F "I don’t even know what I am."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    "Do I step in now{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Do I step in now…?"
     menu:
         "stay quiet...":
-            jump quiet4d
+            pause .5
         "Interrupt":
+            pause .5
             jump interrupt4d
+    
+    show fang:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.2
+    show fang ultra angry with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "WHO AM I,{w=.4} DAMN IT?!"
+    pause .5
 
-    label quiet4d:
-
-    show fang ultra angry
-
-    F "WHO AM I, DAMN IT?!"
-
-    show fang very sad
+    show fang very sad with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     F "I can only define myself by the thing’s I’m not."
+    pause .5
 
     F "I’m not a good band player."
 
     F "I’m not a good sibling."
 
     F "I’m not a good friend."
+    pause .5
 
     F "I’m not a good person."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "My mind is a fucking mess. In my head it’s all…"
+    F "My mind is a fucking mess.{w=.6} In my head it’s all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "My thoughts… they’re all fucking foggy. Half the time I’m hating myself."
+    F "My thoughts{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} they’re all fucking foggy.{w=.6} Half the time I’m hating myself."
 
-    show fang hiding
+    show fang hiding with dissolve
 
-    F "‘Am I who I say I am?’ Maybe? Not really…"
+    F "‘Am I who I say I am?’{w=.5} Maybe?{w=.5} Not really{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    show fang anguish
+    show fang anguish with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
 
     F "The other half I’m daydreaming of being something special."
 
-    F "That I’m different from everyone. Above them… I know more than them."
+    F "That I’m different from everyone.{w=.5} Above them{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I know more than them."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "They’re both lies. I’m fuckin’ lying to myself but…"
+    F "They’re both lies.{w=.5} I’m fuckin’ lying to myself but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "It’s like I’m just here to be a drain on myself and others."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I’m stuck with myself, I can’t just drop everything and try other things now."
+    show fang:
+        block:
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.195
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.2
+            repeat 4
+        pause .75
+        block:
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.195
+            linear 0.045 xalign 0.2
+            repeat 7
+        pause 1
+        repeat
+    F "I’m stuck with myself,{w=.5} I can’t just drop everything and try other things now."
 
     F "It’s just too late for that."
 
     F "There’s too many ways to fuck up."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "Music is the only thing I’ve ever been decent at, and even then…"
+    F "Music is the only thing I’ve ever been decent at,{w=.4} and even then{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "She looks to me desperately, at a loss for words."
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.25
+    "She looks to me desperately,{w=.4} at a loss for words."
+
+    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "..."
     menu:
         "stay quiet...":
-            jump quiet4e
+            pause .5
         "Interrupt":
+            pause .5
             jump interrupt4e
 
-    label quiet4e:
     $ fangscore += 1
     $ anonscore += 1
-    A "..."
 
-    F "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .25
 
-    show fang very angry
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_quart 1 xalign 0.4
+    show fang very angry with Dissolve(.25)
 
     F "Why won’t you say anything?"
+    pause .5
 
     F "Here I am begging for help and you haven’t said a word!"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "You’re always so sure of yourself, yet here you are listening to me in a crisis and you can’t say anything?!"
+    F "You’re always so sure of yourself,{w=.4} yet here you are listening to me in a crisis and you can’t say anything?!"
 
-    "Fang grips my jacket with both hands, digging in."
-
-    scene fangroofcry with fade
+    "Fang grips my jacket with both hands,{w=.4} digging in."
+    pause .5
+    
+    scene fangroofcry with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause 1
 
     F "What is it you have that I don’t?!"
+    pause .5
 
     F "What is it you want from me?!"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "What is it I want from you?!"
+    F "What is it I want from {i}you{/i}?!"
+    pause .5
 
     F "When you got here a few weeks ago you were just some nobody kid without friends who lives alone on financial assistance!"
 
     "She’s shaking my arm around."
+    pause .5
 
     F "And now everyone I know is friends with you!"
 
-    F "You have no talents, no specific knowledge anywhere, no real personality…"
+    F "You have no talents,{w=.5} no specific knowledge anywhere,{w=.5} no real personality{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     F "WHAT IS IT WITH YOU THAT YOU CAN LACK AN IDENTITY BUT KNOW EXACTLY WHO YOU ARE?!"
+    pause 1
 
-    "Honestly I…"
+    "Honestly I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "dunno"
+    A "{size=-5}dunno{/size}"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "...What…"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "I dunno how to say it. All I know is I’m me…"
+    A "I dunno how to say it.{w=.6} All I know is I’m me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "You’re… You?"
+    F "You’re{cps=*.1}...{/cps} you?"
+    pause .5
 
     "I struggle to find the right words."
 
-    "Fang stares pleadingly. Eventually she buries her eyes in my jacket arm."
+    "Fang stares pleadingly.{w=.5} Eventually she buries her eyes in my jacket arm."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "It's like.. I don’t know..."
+    A "It's like{cps=*.1}..{/cps}{w=.4} I don’t know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "You’re trying to be something you’re not."
+    pause .5
 
     A "It needs to happen naturally."
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang looks up from my arm."
 
-    F "Naturally…?"
+    F "Naturally{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
 
-    A "If you are forcing this… whatever... then it's like some misplaced idea or like, a refusal to leave the comfort zone..."
+    A "If you are forcing this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} whatever{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} then it's like some misplaced idea or like,{w=.5} a refusal to leave the comfort zone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Argh, what I’m trying to say is…"
+    A "Argh,{w=.4} what I’m trying to say is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "I ended up trying to be someone else too."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "To the point that I rejected who I really was and started to fuck myself up."
+    A "To the point that I rejected who I really was{w=.3} and started to fuck myself up."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "I’m not about making others' notice me, or about being great at something."
+    A "I’m not about making others' notice me,{w=.5} or about being great at something."
 
-    A "I just do what makes me, well, me."
+    A "I just do what makes me,{w=.4} well,{w=.4} me."
 
-    A "I'm the only me here, and I think it's safe to assume that there's several of you. Like, you don’t know, you said it yourself."
+    A "I'm the only me here,{w=.4} and I think it's safe to assume that there's several of you.{w=.6} Like,{w=.4} you don’t know,{w=.5} you said it yourself."
+    pause .5
 
     "Her fingers tighten around my arm."
 
     "I’m not certain she’s breathing right now."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "And there’s tons of different people going through what you are right now, trying to force their egos, only to reject who they really are."
+    A "And there’s tons of different people going through what you are right now,{w=.6} trying to force their egos,{w=.4} only to reject who they really are."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Not to undermine your feelings or anything."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "And at the end of it all, I’ve accepted that ‘I’ am, and will always be, ‘me’."
+    A "And at the end of it all,{w=.4} I’ve accepted that ‘I’ am,{w=.4} and will always be,{w=.5} ‘me’."
 
     A "Ya see?"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I have to… Figure it out myself…?"
+    F "I have to{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} figure it out myself{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang’s grip loosens."
+    pause .5
 
     scene roof day
-    show fang ear cover at sleft
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
-    with fade
+    show fang very sad:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.7
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.3
+    show anon neutral flip behind fang at aright
+    with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
+    show fang ear cover with dissolve
 
     "She puts her hands around her knees and lowers her head."
 
     "Her expression is one of complete resignation."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I don’t… I can’t do anything on my own."
+    F "I don’t{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I can’t do anything on my own."
 
+    show fang anguish behind anon with dissolve
     F "How am I supposed to do something like this?"
+    pause .5
 
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
+    pause .5
     A "You aren’t alone."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "I’m here. Reed and Trish are here. You already know Naser wants to help."
+    A "I’m here.{w=.6} Reed and Trish are here.{w=.6} You already know Naser wants to help."
 
-    F "..."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang very sad
+    show fang very sad with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     A "It doesn’t need to be all at once."
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang looks back to me and gives a sad smile."
 
-    F "... Alright…"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alright{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang sad
-
-    "She tries to dry her tears again, only to smudge her face with blood and makeup again."
+    "She tries to dry her tears again,{w=.4} only to smudge her face with more blood and makeup."
 
     "I remove my jacket and offer the sleeve to her."
 
-    "She sniffles, then grabs it to wipe her eyes."
+    show fang sad with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .25
 
-    "...It’s laundry day anyways."
+    "She sniffles,{w=.4} then grabs it to wipe her eyes."
+
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}It’s laundry day anyways."
 
     show fang happy with dissolve
 
-    "After returning my jacket, Fang looks to me again with a somber smile."
+    "After returning my jacket,{w=.5} Fang looks to me again with a somber smile."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Why did you come up here?"
 
-    F "It’s nice up here. Quiet."
+    F "It’s nice up here.{w=.5} Quiet."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "But why? And why alone?"
+    A "But why?{w=.5} And why alone?"
 
-    F "To think. Maybe to throw myself a pity party. I do this every year."
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "To think.{w=.5} Maybe to throw myself a pity party.{w=.6} I do this every year."
 
     A "Up here?"
 
-    F "Nah… Just somewhere I can be alone."
+    F "Nah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} just somewhere I can be alone."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Every year though?"
 
-    F "... Since I was 11…"
+    show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Since I was 11{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Jeez. What happened?"
+    A "Jeez.{w=.5} What happened?"
 
     show fang sad with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
-    F "I broke Naser’s wing."
+    F "{cps=*.4}I broke Naser’s wing.{/cps}"
+    pause .7
 
-    "Ah. My foot tastes extra salty today."
+    "Ah.{w=.5} My foot tastes extra salty today."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "We used to be really close. He looked up to me."
+    F "We used to be really close.{w=.5} He looked up to me."
 
-    F "I was supposed to watch him. I’m his big sister after all."
+    F "I was supposed to watch him.{w=.5} I’m his big sister after all."
+    pause .5
 
     F "He had asked me if we could really fly."
 
     "Fang stretched her wings to highlight that."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I said ‘of course’... I looked away for a second and then it happened…"
+    F "I said{w=.2} ‘of course’{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I looked away for a second{w=.3} and then it happened{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     F "He jumped off the bluff."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Her eyes become distant, and I can only guess just how vividly she’s reliving this moment of her past."
+    "Her eyes become distant,{w=.5} and I can only guess just how vividly she’s reliving this moment of her past."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I watched as he jumped. As he bounced off the cliff and into the water."
+    F "I watched as he jumped.{w=.5} As he bounced off the cliff and into the water."
 
-    F "I climbed down as fast as I could, hoping to God he wasn’t dead."
+    F "I climbed down as fast as I could,{w=.4} hoping to God he wasn’t dead."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "But the current… Dad and the lifeguard had to go in because the current was too strong."
+    F "But the current{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Dad and the lifeguard had to go in because the current was too strong."
 
     "Her voice quakes as she’s engulfed in her memory."
+    pause .5
 
     F "When mom came with the medic-"
 
-    show fang hiding
+    show fang hiding flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
     "Fang chokes back a sob and continues."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "Naser was… I thought he was dead…"
+    F "Naser was{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I thought he was dead{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "...Covered in blood…"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Covered in blood{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "...Limbs mangled…"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Limbs mangled{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "My baby brother, just 9 years old, had jumped off the bluff, thinking he could fly!"
+    show fang very sad with dissolve
+    F "My baby brother,{w=.3} just 9 years old,{w=.4} had jumped off the bluff,{w=.5} thinking he could fly!"
 
+    "Fang’s eyes grow wet again." 
+
+    show anon behind fang:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.7
+    pause .5
+    
     hide fang
     hide anon
     show fanganonhug
     with dissolve
-
-    "Fang’s eyes grow wet again. Without a second thought I draw her into a hug, comforting her."
+    
+    "Without a second thought I draw her into a hug,{w=.4} comforting her."
 
     "Her voice is muffled by my jacket but she continues."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I’m why his wing is a fucking mess. I did it…"
+    F "I’m why his wing is a fucking mess.{w=.5} I did it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "So why…"
+    F "{size=-5}So why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/size}"
+    pause .5
 
-    F "Why doesn’t he hate me…"
+    F "{size=-10}Why doesn’t he hate me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/size}"
+    pause 1
 
-    Nas "{i}{alpha=0.5}She’s still family.{/alpha}{/i}"
+    Nas "{i}{alpha=0.75}\"Fang’s still family.\"{/alpha}{/i}"
+    pause .5
 
     A "Because you’re his sister."
 
-    "Fang flinches in my arms, but doesn’t pull away."
+    "Fang flinches in my arms,{w=.4} but doesn’t pull away."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "You’re the one that’s hurting, Fang. Not Naser."
+    A "You’re the one that’s hurting,{w=.2} Fang.{w=.5} Not Naser."
+    pause .5
 
-    "I surprised myself there. I honestly don’t know how I managed this conversation."
+    "I surprised myself there.{w=.5} I honestly don’t know how I managed this conversation."
+    pause .5
 
-    "I let go of Fang and lean back, giving her some space. Her breathing is evening out, and she looks far more composed now."
+    "I let go of Fang and lean back,{w=.4} giving her some space.{w=.6} Her breathing is evening out,{w=.4} and she looks far more composed now."
+    pause .5
 
     hide fanganonhug
+    show fang sad:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.3
+    show anon neutral flip behind fang:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.7
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.9
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang sad at sleft
-    show anon neutral flip at sright
-
-    F "... I’m sorry for what I said earlier."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I’m sorry for what I said earlier."
 
     A "Huh?"
+    pause .5
 
     F "About how you’re a nobody."
+    pause .5
 
     A "You’re pretty much right."
 
-    F "Maybe, but I shouldn’t have put it so harshly."
+    F "Maybe,{w=.4} but I shouldn’t have put it so harshly."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "All this time I thought people like you were…"
+    F "All this time I thought people like you were{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "Useless? Something like that."
+    show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
 
-    F "But here you are, proving me wrong time and time again."
+    F "Useless?{w=.5} Something like that."
+    
+    show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+
+    F "But here you are,{w=.4} proving me wrong time and time again."
+    pause .5
 
     A "I get what you mean."
 
@@ -3405,339 +3689,483 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     A "I’ve been breaking your rules like you’ve been breaking mine."
 
-    F "Maybe we’re both just useless nobodies."
-
     show fang happy with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    F "Maybe we’re both just useless nobodies."
 
     "She chuckles to herself."
 
     jump postFangAndAnonTalk
 
-    label interrupt4b:
 
-    "She seems at a loss for words."
+    label .interrupt4b:
 
-    "I should say something."
+        "She seems at a loss for words."
 
-    A "You’re feeling helpless, right?"
+        "I should say something."
+        pause .5
 
-    A "Like you don’t matter?"
+        A "You’re feeling helpless,{w=.4} right?"
 
-    show fang sad
+        A "Like you don’t matter?"
+        pause .5
 
-    "Fang looks at me with desperation."
+        show fang sad flip with dissolve
+        pause .5
 
-    F "Y...Yes…"
+        show fang:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
+        pause .5
+        show fang very sad flip with Dissolve(1)
+        pause 1
+        show fang sad with dissolve
+        pause .5
 
-    A "Here’s what I think…"
+        "Fang looks at me with desperation."
+        pause .5
+
+        F "Y{cps=*.1}...{w=.2}{/cps}yes{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+        pause .5
+
+        A "Here’s what I think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+        jump postinterruption
 
-    jump postinterruption
 
     label interrupt4c:
-    "Here’s a good place to butt in."
 
-    A "You aren’t a burden to me."
+        "Here’s a good place to butt in."
+        pause .5
 
-    show fang sad
+        A "You aren’t a burden to me."
+        pause .5
 
-    "Fang removes her head from her knees and looks to me with pleading eyes."
+        show fang very sad with Dissolve(1)
+        pause .5
+        show fang sad with dissolve
+        pause .5
+        "Fang removes her head from her knees and looks to me with pleading eyes."
+        pause .5
+        
+        F "What?"
+        pause .5
 
-    F "What?"
+        A "I’m your friend too,{w=.4} right?"
 
-    A "I’m your friend too, right?"
+        A "I don’t think you’re a burden."
+        pause .5
 
-    A "I don’t think you’re a burden."
+        "Fang sniffles a bit."
+        pause .5
 
-    "Fang sniffles a bit."
+        A "Here’s what I think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "Here’s what I think…"
+        jump postinterruption
 
-    jump postinterruption
 
     label interrupt4d:
 
-    "Now’s a good time."
+        "Now’s a good time."
+        pause .5
 
-    A "You’re Fang."
+        A "You’re Fang."
+        pause .5
 
-    show fang sad
+        show fang sad with Dissolve(1)
+        pause .5
 
-    "She looks to me with tears streaming down her cheek."
+        "She looks to me with tears streaming down her cheek."
 
-    A "Even if you don’t see it, you’re still you."
+        A "Even if you don’t see it,{w=.5} you’re still you."
+        pause .5
 
-    A "The Fang I know likes music, bad movies, and doesn’t take crap from any adults."
+        A "The Fang I know likes music,{w=.4} bad movies,{w=.4} and doesn’t take crap from any adults."
 
-    A "Am I right?"
+        A "Am I right?"
+        pause .5
 
-    "Fang nods slowly."
+        "Fang nods slowly."
+        pause .5
 
-    A "Here’s what I think…"
+        A "Here’s what I think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+        jump postinterruption
 
-    jump postinterruption
 
     label interrupt4e:
-    "Here we go."
 
-    A "It’s never too late to try something new."
+        "Here we go."
+        pause .5
 
-    F "...I can’t."
+        A "It’s never too late to try something new."
+        pause .5
 
-    F "I just can’t."
+        show fang very sad with Dissolve(1)
+        pause .5
+        F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can’t."
 
-    show fang sad
+        F "I just can’t."
+        pause .5
 
-    A "You have support from me and Naser, right?"
+        A "You have support from me and Naser,{w=.4} right?"
 
-    F "..."
+        F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+        pause .5
+                
+        show fang sad with dissolve
+        pause .5
 
-    F "...Maybe..."
+        F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+        pause .5
 
-    A "Here’s what I think…"
+        A "Here’s what I think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    jump postinterruption
+        jump postinterruption
 
 
     label postinterruption:
-
+    
+    show anon behind fang:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
     "I put my arm on Fang’s shoulder."
+    pause .5
 
     A "You’re in a pretty bad spot right now."
 
-    A "Self-improvement is hard, but there’s nothing to be gained without sacrifice, right?"
+    A "Self-improvement is hard,{w=.5} but there’s nothing to be gained without sacrifice,{w=.4} right?"
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang gives a slight nod."
 
-    A "You need to step out from your comfort zone more often, even if you think there’s no time."
+    A "You need to step out from your comfort zone more often,{w=.4} even if you think there’s no time."
 
-    A "There’s no harm in diversifying, right?"
+    A "There’s no harm in diversifying,{w=.4} right?"
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang looks away from the coastline and to me."
 
-    F "... I don’t know. Maybe you’re right..."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I don’t know.{w=.5} Maybe you’re right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     A "You could also try harder to get along with Naser."
 
     A "I guarantee there’s not that much in the way between you two."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "...You’ll be there to support me, right?"
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You’ll be there to support me,{w=.4} right?"
 
     A "Sure."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I don’t know if I’m strong enough to do all that…"
+    show fang very sad with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    F "I don’t know if I’m strong enough to do all that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     A "I believe you can be."
 
     A "Being weak is nothing to be ashamed of."
 
     A "Staying weak is."
+    pause .5
 
     A "You don’t have to do it alone."
+    pause .5
+    
+    show anon behind fang
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.8
+    pause .5
+    
     hide fang
     hide anon
     show fanganonhug
     with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "Fang embraces me tight."
+    pause .5
 
     F "Thank you."
+    pause 1
 
     "We sit in silence for a few minutes."
 
-    ".."
+    "{cps=*.1}..{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "...."
+    "{cps=*.1}....{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Eventually, she lets go."
+    "Eventually,{w=.4} she lets go."
+    pause .5
+
+    hide fanganonhug
+    show fang sad:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.8
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.3
+    show anon neutral flip behind fang:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.9
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    "Fang’s breathing is evening out,{w=.4} and she looks far more composed now."
 
-    "Fang’s breathing is evening out, and she looks far more composed now."
 
     label postFangAndAnonTalk:
 
-    scene roof day
-    show fang neutral at sleft
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
-    with fade
-
-    F "Hey, can I see that?"
+    pause 1
+    F "Hey,{w=.4} can I see that?"
 
     "Fang points at my oversized hall pass."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Yeah, sure"
+    A "Yeah,{w=.4} sure"
+    pause .5
 
     hide anon
     hide fang
     show hallpass
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
-    "She takes it from my hands, our fingers brushing for a second."
+    "She takes it from my hands,{w=.4} our fingers brushing for a second."
 
     "She blushes while she handles the acoustic bathroom pass."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "I think… I think I finally got the tune, Anon."
+    F "I think{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I think I finally got the tune,{w=.3} Anon."
 
     A "Tune?"
+    pause .5
 
-    "She finishes tuning the guitar and tests it. With a nod to herself Fang begins strumming."
+    "She finishes tuning the guitar and tests it.{w=.5} With a nod to herself Fang begins strumming."
 
-    "The rhythm is slow and the tone is soft, enough so that her humming blends perfectly with it."
+    "The rhythm is slow and the tone is soft,{w=.5} enough so that her humming blends perfectly with it."
 
-    "I lean back, bobbing my head along to the impromptu music."
+    "I lean back,{w=.4} bobbing my head along to the impromptu music."
+    pause .5
 
     "The streaks from her tears that had once marred her pretty face only help the highlight her soft smile now."
 
-    "I hum along now too, which causes Fang to giggle. The rhythm is slowing to a crawl, the song about to end."
+    "I hum along now too,{w=.4} which causes Fang to giggle.{w=.6} The rhythm is slowing to a crawl,{w=.5} the song about to end."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "With a meteor coming soon"
-    F "Everyone’s going to die"
-    F "So I’ll say to everyone"
-    F "Goodbye Volcano High"
+    F "{cps=*.6}With a meteor coming soon{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    extend "{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Everyone’s going to die{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    extend"{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}So I’ll say to everyone{/cps}{w=.6}{nw}"
+    extend"{cps=*.6}\n\ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ \ {fast}Goodbye Volcano High{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
-    "The lyrics surprise me, but I shrug it off."
+    "The lyrics surprise me,{w=.4} but I shrug it off."
+    pause .5
 
     A "You ready to get up?"
 
     "Fang nods and wipes her tears one last time with her forearm."
+    pause .5
 
-    "I stand and pop my back, looking out over the fence at the ground below."
+    hide hallpass with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    "I stand and pop my back,{w=.4} looking out over the fence at the ground below."
 
     "From here I can see the afternoon sun starting to encroach on the skyline of the small coastal town."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Turning to Fang, I crouch a bit and extend my hand to her."
+    "Turning to Fang,{w=.4} I crouch a bit and extend my hand to her."
 
-    "She moves her bloody hand to take it, but hesitates."
+    "She moves her bloody hand to take it,{w=.3} but hesitates."
+    pause .5
 
-    "..."
-
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "She softly grasps my hand."
 
     "She winces in pain."
+    pause .5
 
-    "You know…"
+    "You know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "It’s strange, I expected the alarms to go off again, but…"
+    "It’s strange,{w=.6} I expected the alarms to go off again,{w=.4} but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "This feels different, somehow."
+    "This feels different,{w=.4} somehow."
 
     "More natural."
+    pause .5
 
-    show weridkissu
-    hide hallpass
-    with dissolve
-    "I’m careful to hoist her to her feet. Mindful of her injured palm. But her beak accidentally bumps into my cheek on her way up."
+    "I’m careful to hoist her to her feet.{w=.5} Mindful of her injured palm." 
 
+    show weridkissu with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause 1
+    
+    "But her beak accidentally bumps into my cheek on her way up."
+
+    pause 1
+
+    "Ah,{w=.3} there they are."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Fang’s eyes contract and she instinctively hops backwards,{w=.4} covering her muzzle with her hands and turning her head away in her flusteration."
+
+    "I clench my lower jaw and look at my palm,{w=.4} slick with sweat and her blood."
+
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 8
     stop music fadeout 5.0
-
-    "Ah, there they are."
-
-    "Fang’s eyes contact and she instinctively hops backwards, covering her muzzle with her hands and turning her head away in her flusteration."
-
-    "I clench my lower jaw and look at my palm, slick with sweat and her blood."
+    pause .5
 
     "The silence continues for an immeasurable amount of time."
-
-    A "Haha… So that’s how dinos kiss… Haha…"
+    pause .5
 
     hide weridkissu
-    show fang happy at scenter
-    show anon neutral flip at aright
+    show fang surprised flip:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
+    show anon neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.25
     with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
+    A "{cps=*.3}Haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} so that’s how dinos kiss{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} {cps=*.5}haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     #[Internal screaming sfx here]
 
-    "FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFU-"
+    "FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFU-{w=.4}{nw}"
 
-    F "Haha… not really haha… haha…"
+    show fang sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Haha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} not really{w=.4} hahaha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.3}haha{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "Ha ha… haaaa… uh…"
+    A "Ha ha{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} {cps=*.5}haaaa{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "I look for something, anything, to end this awkwardness."
+    show fang sad with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
-    "Like the guitar hall pass. Wait…"
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    "I check my phone, seeing that Mr. Jingo’s class will be ending in 10 minutes."
+    "I look for something,{w=.4} {i}anything{/i},{w=.4} to end this awkwardness."
 
-    show anon sad flip
+    "Like the guitar hall pass.{w=.5} Wait{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    "I check my phone,{w=.4} seeing that Mr. Jingo’s class will be ending in 10 minutes."
     play music 'audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    pause .5
+    show anon sad with dissolve
 
-    A "Fuck… the assignment…"
+    A "Fuck{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} the assignment{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Fang finally looks my way again, though her face is still flush."
-
-    show fang surprised
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.2
+    pause .2
+    show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
+    "Fang finally looks my way again,{w=.4} though her face is still flush."
+    pause .5
 
     F "What?"
 
-    A "Mr. Jingo’s assignment. There’s no way in hell I’ll be able to do it at home."
+    A "Mr. Jingo’s assignment.{w=.4} There’s no way in hell I’ll be able to do it at home."
+    pause .25
 
-    F "Pfffft."
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "{cps=*.3}Pfffft.{/cps}"
 
-    show fang happy
-    show anon neutral flip
+    "Fang’s hands try to cover her beak,{w=.4} failing horribly to contain her giggles."
 
-    "Fang’s hands try to cover her beak, failing horribly to contain her giggles."
-
-    F "Hehehehehehe. God, you really suck at music."
+    F "{cps=*.6}Hehehehehehe.{/cps}{w=.5} God,{w=.4} you really suck at music."
 
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     "I glare at her."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "haaaaah... Why don’t you just drop it? It’s an elective anyway."
+    F "Haaaaah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} why don’t you just drop it?{w=.4} It’s an elective anyway."
 
     "Because I need to maintain my GPA for college."
 
-    A "Because… I kinda like it…"
+    A "Because{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I kinda like it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "I blush and look down to the entrance of the roof below us."
 
-    F "Hmm… maaaaybe I’ll help you…"
+    F "Hmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.3}maaaaybe{/cps} I’ll help you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Fang hops down, her wings easing her landing."
+    "Fang hops down,{w=.4} her wings easing her landing."
+    pause .5
 
     F "I owe you for the fuckin’ therapy session anyway."
 
     A "Oh thank fuck."
+    pause .5
 
-    "I climb down the ladder. Those wings must be really convenient."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    show fang surprised flip
-    show anon fear flip
-    play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    Sp "WHO THE FUCK IS UP HERE!"
+    "I climb down the ladder.{w=.5} Those wings must be really convenient."
+    stop music fadeout 1
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+    pause .5
 
-    "The door flies open, off its hinges, through the suicide fence and over the side of the building, crashing loudly on the concrete below."
+    show fang surprised:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    show anon ohshit
+    play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'
+    Sp "WHO THE FUCK IS UP HERE!" with hpunch
+    pause .5
 
-    scene roof day broken
-    show fang shocked flip at sright
-    show anon fear flip at aright
-    with fade
+    play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg' fadein 1
+    play sound 'audio/effects/rooftopDoorSmash.ogg'
+    pause .7
 
-    show spears angry at sleft with moveinleft
+    show roof day broken behind anon, fang with vpunch
 
-    Sp "I KNOW SOMEONE IS DITCHING UP HERE! MY HUNTING INSTINCTS CAN TELL!"
+    "The door flies open,{w=.3} off its hinges,{w=.3} through the suicide fence and over the side of the building,{w=.4} crashing loudly on the concrete below."
+    pause .5
+
+    Sp "I KNOW SOMEONE IS DITCHING UP HERE!{w=.4} MY HUNTING INSTINCTS CAN TELL!"
+    pause .5
 
     "Oh double fuck."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Uh…"
+    show spears angry flip:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 1.8
+    show spears:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
-    Sp "YOU!"
+    A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Principal Spears looks at us, finger pointed at me as if to fire a special beam cannon through my chest."
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
+    show fang shocked:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.05
+    show anon fear
+    Sp "YOU!" with vpunch
 
-    Sp "In all my god damned years… On top of the roof! Explain. NOW!"
+    "Principal Spears looks at us,{w=.4} finger pointed at me as if to fire a special beam cannon through my chest."
 
+    Sp "In all my god damned years{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} on top of the roof!{w=.5} Explain.{w=.4} NOW!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     "Bullshit mode activate."
 
     A "I got lost looking for the bathroom?"
+    pause .5
+
+    show dimmer_darker behind spears, anon with Dissolve(.25)
 
     "Spears incinerates me on the spot."
+    hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(.25)
 
+    pause .5
+    show fang neutral with dissolve
+    pause .5
     F "Estrus season?"
+    pause .5
 
     "For a brief instant I picture Fang in a bikini."
+    pause .5
 
     #if persistent.lewd == True:
     #  show howlewd at truecenter with dissolve
@@ -3745,104 +4173,152 @@ label chapter_5:
     #  hide howlewd with dissolve
 
     "Hot."
+    pause .5
 
+    show fang sad with Dissolve(.25)
     "Fang gets a similar stare and withers down."
 
-    Sp "I’m not stupid. Ptero estrus season isn’t for another few months."
+    show spears neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    Sp "I’m not stupid.{w=.4} Ptero estrus season isn’t for another few months."
+    pause .5
 
-    Sp "Empty your pockets. Now."
+    Sp "Empty your pockets.{w=.4} Now."
+    pause .5
 
-    show anon neutral flip
-    show fang neutral flip
+    "I reduce myself to hoover flags.{w=.4} All I had on me was my phone and a ratty wallet held together with hot glue and duct tape."
+
+    "Fang does the same,{w=.3} dropping her own phone,{w=.4} a spare guitar pick,{w=.4} and an unopened pack of cigarettes."
+    pause .5
+
+    "Spears looks at Fang dead in the eyes,{w=.4} rips the package open,{w=.5} and stuffs every cigarette in his mouth at once."
+
+    show anon concerned
+    show fang surprised
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+
+    "To our mortified stares,{w=.4} he chews them until they are a brown glob and spits it over the fence,{w=.4} landing on a rather oriental looking car."#
+    pause .5
+
+    Sp "Anon.{w=.4} Go to class.{w=.6} Now.{w=.6} \nFang.{w=.75} To the Nurse’s."
+
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    show anon neutral
+    show fang neutral
     with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 6
 
-    "I reduce myself to hoover flags. All I had on me was my phone and a ratty wallet held together with hot glue and duct tape."
+    show spears:
+        easeout 1 xalign 1.6
+    show spears neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    hide spears with dissolve
+    pause 1
 
-    "Fang does the same, dropping her own phone, a spare guitar pick, and an unopened pack of cigarettes."
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.9
+    pause 2
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
-    "Spears looks at Fang dead in the eyes, rips the package open, and stuffs every cigarette in his mouth at once."
+    "I look to Fang one last time.{w=.6} She looks a mess."
 
-    "To our mortified stares, he chews them until they are a brown glob and spits it over the fence, landing on a rather oriental looking car."
-
-    Sp "Anon. Go to class. Now. Fang. To the Nurse’s."
-
-    scene bloodywing with dissolve
     play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    pause .5
+    scene bloodywing with Dissolve(1.5)
+    pause 1
 
-    "I look to Fang one last time. She looks a mess."
+    "Her wings are ragged,{w=.5} feathers misaligned and a clear patch of them missing on one."
 
-    "Her wings are ragged, feathers misaligned and a clear patch of them missing on one."
+    "Stains on her legs from her make-up,{w=.4} tears{w=.3} and blood."
 
-    "Stains on her legs from her make-up, tears and blood."
-
-    "Drying blood on her hands, arms and beak."
+    "Drying blood on her hands,{w=.4} arms and beak."
 
     "Eyes puffy and red from crying."
+    pause .5
 
-    "But her smile… was…"
+    "But her smile{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} was{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     "I wave her goodbye and wordlessly return to class."
+    pause .5
 
-    scene bandroom with fade
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
+    scene bandroom with Fade(1, 1, 1)
+    pause .5
 
-    "I only have a few minutes, but I can’t focus on the assignment. I’ll have to take it home as homework."
+    "I only have a few minutes,{w=.4} but I can’t focus on the assignment.{w=.6} I’ll have to take it home as homework."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "{alpha=0.5}{i}Hmm… maaaaybe I’ll help you{/i}{/alpha}"
+    F "{alpha=0.75}{i}\"Hmm{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {cps=*.3}maaaaybe{/cps} I’ll help you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}\"{/i}{/alpha}"
+    pause .5
 
-    show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
+    show anonphone with easeinbottom
 
     "I take out my phone and consider messaging Fang again."
+    pause .5
 
     "!"
 
-    "My heart thumps roughly in my chest. Just what is with me today."
+    "My heart thumps roughly in my chest.{w=.5} Just what is with me today."
+    pause .5
 
-    hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+    hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
+    pause .5
 
-    "All this drama… When did my life become a soap opera…"
+    "All this drama{cps=*.1}...{/cps} when did my life become a soap opera{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Heh… even included a dramatic kiss…"
+    "Heh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} even included a dramatic kiss{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "I look at my hand, her blood now dried and dusty on my palm."
+    "I look at my hand,{w=.4} her blood now dried and dusty on my palm."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Did… That count as a kiss?"
+    "Did{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} that count as a kiss?"
 
-    "I mean, it was unintentional. She backed off and all."
+    "I mean,{w=.4} it was unintentional.{w=.5} She backed off and all."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Jeez, my insides feel like liquid."
+    "Jeez,{w=.4} my insides feel like liquid."
 
     "Surely that’s just my disgusted reaction to Spear’s scare tactic up there."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Nah, this isn’t fear. Unlike a bottomless pit the feeling is..."
+    "Nah,{w=.3} this isn’t fear.{w=.5} Unlike a bottomless pit the feeling is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Pleasant…"
+    "Pleasant{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Yeah, I kinda like it. Hmmmm…"
+    "Yeah,{w=.3} I kinda like it.{w=.5} {cps=*6}Hmmmm{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I wonder if Fang-"
+    pause .5
 
     "!"
+    pause .5
 
-    "The feeling intensifies. But why? I only thought of-"
+    "The feeling intensifies.{w=.5} But why?{w=.5} I only thought of-"
 
     "It’s not as if she-"
 
     "But-"
 
-    "..."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    scene black with fade
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    stop music fadeout 4
+    scene black with Fade (2, 0, 0)
+    pause .5
 
     "Do I like Fang?"
+    pause .5
 
     "!!!!!!"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Fuck."
+    "{cps=*.25}Fuck.{/cps}"
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
 
     return
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