From 8647f53355ae4ce2191033eb99e4456d01010ebe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Mon, 2 Aug 2021 13:10:28 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] ch3 alterations from feedback --- ...p-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy | 85 +++++++++++++------ 1 file changed, 60 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy index 73b911d..7e2687c 100644 --- a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy +++ b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy @@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ label chapter_3: I "Naomi hovers over Naser,{w=.4} who currently has Gucci under his eyes." pause .5 - Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Talked to the soccer team earlier." + Nas "So,{w=.3} I uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} talked to the soccer team earlier." Nas "They’re going to make the first game after all." @@ -480,9 +480,9 @@ label chapter_3: ease 1.5 xalign 1.075 repeat - Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} Got the L&L Club to finally take down their christmas decorations{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "I also{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} got the L&L Club to{w=.4} {cps=*.5}finally take down their{w=.3} christmas decorations{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} The library’s clean again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + Nas "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {cps=*.3}{size=-5}the library’s{/size}{size=-10} clean again...{/cps}{/size}" pause .5 show naser: @@ -592,13 +592,14 @@ label chapter_3: N "But from Anon?" A "But from me?" + pause .5 I "Naser continues." Nas "I asked her what she was doing,{w=.4} and she just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" show naser unimpressed flip - Nas "Just says 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'." + Nas "Just says{w=.2} 'fuck off...',{w=.4} so I think 'maybe dad will help'." show naser sad flip Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}He didn’t." @@ -620,6 +621,8 @@ label chapter_3: easeout_quart 1 xalign 1.3 yalign -0.3 pause .5 hide naser with dissolve + + show naomi shocked play sound 'audio/effects/anonHeadbutt.ogg' with vpunch stop sound fadeout 1 @@ -628,9 +631,10 @@ label chapter_3: I "There’s a rumbling snore and it’s clear that Naser has checked out." A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.5}Riiiiiiiight{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - pause .5 + show naomi sad with dissolve I "Naomi looks distraught." + pause .5 N "He’s always like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -682,7 +686,7 @@ label chapter_3: play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' I "GOOD LORD HE’S HEAVY." with vpunch - stop music fadeout 2 + stop music fadeout 4 pause .5 N "Alright,{w=.4} the Nurses’ Office is down the main hall on the left side,{w=.4} near the front desk." @@ -890,6 +894,10 @@ label chapter_3: stop music fadeout .25 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + show dimmer_light: + alpha 0 + show dimmer_light: + linear 0.25 alpha 1 A "SHIT!" with vpunch pause .5 @@ -899,6 +907,7 @@ label chapter_3: pause .5 I "Do I really want to pick it up and potentially face a harsh reality?" + pause .5 I "{cps=*.5}Schrodingers’ crack.{/cps}" @@ -910,15 +919,23 @@ label chapter_3: I "It’s the moment of truth." pause .5 + show anonphone with easeinbottom + pause .5 + I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No cracks?" pause .5 + hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg' I "Thank the Lord." - show fang happy at scenter with Dissolve(1) + show fang happy at scenter behind anonphone with Dissolve(1) - F "Yeah,{w=.3} you got lucky." + hide anonphone with easeoutbottom + + F "Yeah,{w=.5} you got lucky." pause .5 I "Fang has stopped playing and is throwing a small smirk my way." @@ -1150,6 +1167,8 @@ label chapter_3: I "Oh." + show anon: + easein_back 1 xalign 0.25 I "I step around her and grab the handle,{w=.4} pulling the door wide open." pause .5 @@ -1164,14 +1183,14 @@ label chapter_3: show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) show fang neutral flip behind anon: - easeout 1 xalign 0.25 - pause .4 - hide fang with dissolve - pause .25 + easeout 1 xalign 0.15 + pause .6 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' show anon shocked: easein_elastic 0.5 yalign -0.05 xalign -0.3 + show fang: + linear 0.25 xalign 0.15 alpha 0 A "FUCK!" with vpunch F "Hurry up already." @@ -1255,19 +1274,27 @@ label chapter_3: show jewlcase at truecenter: xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5 zoom 0.3 - linear 0.5 align (.15, .4) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 395 - show jewlcase behind dimmer_light with dissolve - play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + linear 0.4 align (.15, .4) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 395 + show jewlcase behind dimmer_light with Dissolve(.4) + play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg' show anon: - easein_quart 0.25 xalign -0.3 #-0.275 - easein 0.25 xalign -0.275 + easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.4 + # B: previous iteration of this animation commented out + # easein_quart 0.25 xalign -0.3 #-0.275 + # easein 0.25 xalign -0.275 + # show jewlcase: + # easein_quart 0.25 xpos 0.14 + # easein 0.25 xpos 0.15 + # pause 0.5 + # show jewlcase: + # easeout_cubic 0.5 ypos 1.1 rotate 445 show jewlcase: - easein_quart 0.25 xpos 0.14 - easein 0.25 xpos 0.15 - pause 0.5 - show jewlcase: - easeout_cubic 0.5 ypos 1.1 rotate 445 - pause 1.5 + xpos .15 ypos .4 + linear 0.5 align (.3, 1.5) knot (0.25, 0.25) rotate 180 + pause .2 + show anon sad flip with Dissolve(.25) + pause 1 + hide jewlcase show trish angry flip with Dissolve(.25) T "What the fuck?!" @@ -1275,12 +1302,20 @@ label chapter_3: I "It strikes against my head with a dull *tonk* and lands on the ground in front of me." pause .5 - show jewlcase: - xalign 0.5 + show anon neutral with dissolve + pause .25 + show anon: + easein 1 xalign -0.275 + pause .5 + + # leet renpy hax + show jewlcase show dimmer_light behind jewlcase show fang behind jewlcase show trish behind jewlcase show reed behind jewlcase + hide jewlcase + show jewlcase with easeinbottom: rotate 20 xalign 0.5 zoom 1.5 yalign 0.5 show dimmer_light as xtra_dimmer behind jewlcase with Dissolve(.25)