Tweaked 13A with new prom sprites, 14A with timing, sound, and new cg's. x3, x7 adjusted. removed ear ringing sound.

game/script/14A.KO_OP-ending.rpy

@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
-image fangfog = im.Blur(im.MatrixColor("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), 1.5)
 image red = "#ff0000"
 
 label chapter_14A:
@@ -723,11 +722,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0, 'ambient1') #policeSirenReverbLoop
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
-    scene roof fog
-    show fangfog:
-        yanchor 0.5 xanchor 0.5
-        ypos 0.6 xpos 0.5
-        alpha 0.25 zoom 0.25
+    scene roofshooter
 
     play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.7
     play ambient3 "audio/effects/radioChatterLoop.ogg" fadein 5 volume 0.3
@@ -817,7 +812,7 @@ label chapter_14A:
     hide red
     with Dissolve(0.4)
     hide fang flash blurred with Dissolve(2)
-    pause 2
+    pause 3
 
     A "{i}ARGH!{/i}"
     pause .5
@@ -828,18 +823,19 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient3')
 
     "Hot, searing pain."
-
+    pause .5
     "My left leg crumples under me."
     pause 1
 
     "As I fall I see Fang’s beautiful amber eyes."
+    pause .5
 
     "They’re red and puffy, with makeup-less tears running freely down her cheeks."
-    stop sound fadeout 5
+    stop sound fadeout 4
 
     window hide
     window auto
-    pause 1
+    pause 1.5
 
     play audio 'audio/effects/shooterWitnessed.ogg' volume 0.6
     play ambient1 'audio/effects/hungrybeast.ogg' volume 0.05 fadein 2
@@ -1175,7 +1171,11 @@ label chapter_14A:
     pause 2
 
     scene black with Dissolve(1)
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
+    A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
+    window hide
+    window auto
+    pause 1
 
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
     scene shooterroof:
@@ -1183,20 +1183,25 @@ label chapter_14A:
         #xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
         #zoom 1.12
     with Dissolve(3)
-    stop ambient1
-    pause 1
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
 
-    "She jumps."
-    pause .5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg' volume 0.2 fadein 2
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 1.5, 'ambient1')
+    pause 0.5
 
-    A "{i}Fang!{/i}"
+    #"She jumps."
+    #pause .5
 
-    window hide
-    window auto
     play sound 'audio/effects/shooterFangJumps.ogg' volume 0.7
+
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.6, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.6, 'ambient')
     pause 6
 
+    stop ambient
+    stop ambient1
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
+
     "I can’t look over."
     pause .5
 
@@ -1305,15 +1310,23 @@ label chapter_14A:
     stop ambient fadeout 5
     play ambient1 "audio/effects/drizzleLoop.ogg" fadein 3
     play ambient2 "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 3
-    scene a15 with Fade(2, .5, 2)
+
+    scene black with Dissolve(2)
+    pause 0.5
+    scene a15 with Dissolve(2)
     pause 2
 
     "The alternations of footsteps and the crutch make me feel more mechanical than human."
+    pause 0.5
 
     "Then again, that may be true regardless of having a crutch."
-
     window hide
     window auto
+    pause 0.5
+
+    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 5
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.3, 4, 'ambient')
+    scene a14 with Dissolve(2)
     pause 2
 
     "The two graves are right next to each other."
@@ -1376,14 +1389,14 @@ label chapter_14A:
 
     stop ambient1 fadeout 10
     stop ambient2 fadeout 20
-    play ambient "audio/effects/windShooterLoop.ogg" fadein 20
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 20, 'ambient')
 
     "{i}{cps=*.3}Don’t leave me alone.{/cps}{/i}"
     pause 1
 
     "I just feel completely and utterly and hopelessly alone."
 
-    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 3, 'ambient1')
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 6, 'ambient1')
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 3
@@ -1412,7 +1425,8 @@ label chapter_14A:
     $ quick_menu = False
     window hide
 
-    stop ambient fadeout 20
+    stop ambient fadeout 25
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 25, 'ambient')
 
     pause 7
 
@@ -1427,4 +1441,5 @@ label chapter_14A:
     scene black with Dissolve(17.0)
     pause 5
 
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'ambient')
     return