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Punctuation and smaller capitalization fixes
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@ -62,10 +62,10 @@ label chapter_10:
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pause .5
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F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Nice place{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
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show anon neutral with dissolve
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A "You don’t have to stay. I just wanna curl up in bed and sleep my sorrows away."
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show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
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F "Anon it’s ten in the morning."
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pause .5
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@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ label chapter_10:
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show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
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pause .25
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F "He?"
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A "Don’t make fun of Metal Gear RAYmba or else he’ll shoot you."
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@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ label chapter_10:
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pause 1
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"I eventually get finished examining my wicked wounds and step out of the bathroom."
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"Fang is on her phone doing Raptor Jesus knows what."
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pause .5
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@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ label chapter_10:
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scene wounds06 with Dissolve(1)
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pause 1
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"Fang then pats the bed"
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"Fang then pats the bed."
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pause .5
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F "Come here."
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@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_10:
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F "Just try to relax."
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"I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me"
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"I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me."
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"She eventually finds a sweet spot of pressure to apply. It still hurts a little, but it doesn’t cause me to wince."
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pause .5
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@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ label chapter_10:
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"My eyes feel heavy as the ointment begins to warm up, drawing away tension from my aching muscles."
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"I can make out a steady thumping on my bed"
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"I can make out a steady thumping on my bed."
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"My senses fade more until all I’m aware of is Fang’s fingers tracing circles over my sore back and the sound of thumping."
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pause .5
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@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ label chapter_10:
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scene wounds08 with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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"Okay then."
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pause .5
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@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ label chapter_10:
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pause 1
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"Her fingers brush lightly across the largest bruise on my chest, without ointment."
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scene wounds12 with Dissolve(1)
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pause .5
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