final lines

game/script.rpy

@@ -83,6 +83,41 @@ label replayStart:
 
     M "If you really want to do this Spartan Run-"
 
+    "She’s already hopped out the car."
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 1
+    window auto hide
+    pause 1
+
+    play music 'audio/she likes this a lotl.ogg'
+    if lewd:
+        scene farelie01 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 10.0) with dissolve
+        pause 10
+    else:
+        scene farelie02 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 10.0) with dissolve
+        pause 10
+        M "Should leave the hat behind."
+
+        "Farelie pouts but complies, setting the designer hat on the backseat."
+
+#if they skip too fast
+    if lewd:
+        scene farelie01 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 0.0)
+    else:
+        scene farelie02 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 0.0)
+
+
+    "I can’t help but shake my head, cutting the engine and making my own exit."
+
+    "I’ve known Farelie all my life, and yet she still manages to surprise me."
+
+    "Like wanting to do anything physically strenuous."
+
+    "Especially with her meds that cost me my entire enlistment bonus."
+
+    "Thank god for housing allowances, since we’ve been living together in offsite housing."
+    pause .5
+
     F "Of course! If you can do this kind of stuff then I wanna do it too!"
 
     M "Farelie, a Spartan run isn’t just a marathon."
@@ -121,27 +156,7 @@ label replayStart:
     pause .5
 
     "Farelie pays no mind to that, opening the backseat of the car and pulling out our backpacks for the day."
-
+    pause .5
-    stop ambient fadeout 1
-    window auto hide
-    pause 1
-
-    play music 'audio/she likes this a lotl.ogg'
-    if lewd:
-        scene farelie01 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 10.0) with dissolve
-        pause 10
-    else:
-        scene farelie02 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 10.0) with dissolve
-        pause 10
-        M "Should leave the hat behind."
-
-        "Farelie pouts but complies, setting the designer hat on the backseat."
-
-#if they skip too fast
-    if lewd:
-        scene farelie01 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 0.0)
-    else:
-        scene farelie02 at Pan((0, 3125-1080), (0, 540/2), 0.0)
 
     F "C’mon, Morgan! The sooner we start the sooner we can get home and have a real dinner."
 
@@ -151,7 +166,6 @@ label replayStart:
 
     M "They’re not bland."
 
-
     M "And if you’re really dead set on this, follow me."
     window auto hide
     pause .5
@@ -504,14 +518,10 @@ label tryagain:
     pause .5
 
     "Maybe I’m pushing her too hard."
-
-    "Coming here was her idea and this is meant to be fun, I shouldn’t be acting like a drill sergeant."
     pause .5
 
     M "Alright, Farelie. That’s good enough."
 
-    "I can see the subtle, grateful look in her eyes. It’s accompanied by a relieved sigh."
-
     "Farelie looks down behind her."
     pause .5
 
@@ -695,6 +705,12 @@ label tryagain:
 
     M "Alright, we should continue."
 
+    F "Aww, but that gator's cute!"
+
+    M "Come on, Farelie."
+
+    F "I wanna hug that gator!"
+
     M "If we want to get out of here by evening, we aren’t going to have much time to sightsee."
 
     M "And we definitely won’t be safe after nightfall."