diff --git a/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy b/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
index de88ea6..ba4217a 100644
--- a/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
+++ b/game/script/13D.fang-plays-well,-naomi-jealous,-fang-talks-to-anon-to-break-up-while-she-thinks-about-her-life.rpy
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "The school year’s almost over and she’s barely changed from being that weird punk-goth type."
 
-    "Siiiiip.{w=0.2} Aaaaah.{w=0.2} Refreshing."
+    "{cps=*.45}Siiiiip.{/cps} Aaaaah.{w=0.2} Refreshing."
 
     A "So?"
 
@@ -536,7 +536,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "The line to get in isn’t too long, and it only takes a few minutes to get inside."
 
     play music 'audio/effects/promChatterLoop1.ogg' fadeout 3 fadein 3
-    scene prom with fade
+    scene prom with dissolve
 
     "Inside is about as well decorated as outside."
 
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
         xalign 1.5 yalign 0.0
         ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.3
 
-    Re "...’Sup?"
+    Re "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}’Sup?"
     "Reed must be helping Spears with the sound system."
 
     F "Oh good, Reed’s here."
@@ -582,17 +582,18 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The MUMBLING."
     pause 0.5
+
     "Reed dusts off his hands and lets out a sigh, releasing another mushroom cloud of smoke from the costume."
 
-    Re "Man…{w=0.2} I haven’t talked to you guys in ages, y’know?"
+    Re "Man{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I haven’t talked to you guys in ages, y’know?"
 
-    Re "Not since the whole… {w=0.3}projector thing."
+    Re "Not since the whole{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.1}projector thing."
 
-    A "...You know I sit two seats away from you in math, why didn’t you just talk to me then?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You know I sit two seats away from you in math, why didn’t you just talk to me then?"
 
-    Re "Bro, I would but like… {w=0.3}don’t wanna leave Trish alone."
+    Re "Bro, I would but like{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.3}don’t wanna leave Trish alone."
 
-    Re "She’s still suuuuper beating herself up over it, don’t wanna isolate her even more, y’know?"
+    Re "She’s still suuuuper beating herself up over it,{w=.1} don’t wanna isolate her even more, y’know?"
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5
@@ -603,19 +604,19 @@ label chapter_13D:
         "Weren’t you going to talk to her about it, Fang?":
             A "Weren’t you going to talk to her about it, Fang?"
     show fang prom d sad with dissolve
-    F "I’ve… {w=0.3}been meaning to, but…"
+    F "I’ve{cps=*.125}...{/cps}been meaning to, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "It’s just sort of awkward, you know…"
+    F "It’s just sort of awkward, you know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "I’ll try talking to her soon, I promise."
 
-    Re "Trish is here… {w=0.3}somewhere."
+    Re "Trish is here{cps=*.12}...{/cps}{w=0.1} somewhere."
 
     A "She bought a ticket? Does she even have a date?"
 
     Re "Took advantage of my ‘plus one’ deal for deejaying tonight, dude."
 
-    Re "Don’t think she wanted a dance with King Rex though..."
+    Re "Don’t think she wanted a dance with King Rex though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Reed’s shoulders slump a bit inside the costume."
 
@@ -703,7 +704,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Now would be a good time to mention I can’t dance in any capacity, not just slow dancing."
 
-    "I can’t just stand here like a sperg, need to think of something fast…"
+    "I can’t just stand here like a sperg, need to think of something fast{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Stop being a dweeb, Anon."
 
@@ -713,7 +714,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show anon prom neutral flip with move:
         yalign 0.0
-        linear 0.3
+        linear 0.3 #I'm leaving this bug in
         yalign 0.1
         linear 0.3
         repeat
@@ -768,7 +769,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
                             pause .2
                             "anon prom neutral" with Dissolve(.1)
                     pause .1
-                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.0
+                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.1
         "anon prom neutral" with Dissolve(.5)
         pause .2
         linear .5 rotate 2
@@ -801,7 +802,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
                             pause .2
                             "anon prom neutral flip" with Dissolve(.1)
                     pause .1
-                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.0
+                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.1
         "anon prom neutral flip" with Dissolve(.5)
         pause .2
         linear .5 rotate -2
@@ -841,7 +842,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
                             pause .2
                             "anon prom neutral" with Dissolve(.1)
                     pause .1
-                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.0
+                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.1
         "anon prom neutral" with Dissolve(.5)
         pause .2
         linear .5 rotate 2
@@ -873,7 +874,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
                             pause .2
                             "anon prom neutral flip" with Dissolve(.1)
                     pause .1
-                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.0
+                    easein_cubic 0.45 yalign 0.1
         "anon prom neutral flip" with Dissolve(.5)
         pause .2
         linear .5 rotate -2
@@ -894,17 +895,24 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
         repeat
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.1
+
     "Fang seems glad I’ve joined in, she even tries to mimic a few of my ‘moves’."
 
     "Then she raises an eyebrow and her smile curls a bit more."
 
-    F "Wait,{w=0.2} Anon, are you…?"
-    pause 0.5
-    F "BAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAAH!"
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.0
+    F "Wait,{w=0.2} Anon, are you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
+    pause 0.2
+
+    F "{cps=0.8}BAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAAH!{/cps}"
 
     A "I’m not sure what you were expecting."
 
-    F "Yeah,{w=0.1} no, {w=0.1}that’s great,{w=0.3} keep doing it."
+    F "Yeah,{w=0.1} no, {w=0.1}that’s great,{w=0.2} keep doing it."
 
     F "Holy shit you’re weird."
 
@@ -913,11 +921,26 @@ label chapter_13D:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show reed king rex behind fang with easeinleft:
-        xalign -1.1 yalign 0.1
-    show anon prom neutral flip at aright
+    show reed king rex behind fang:
+
+        xalign -3.1 yalign 0.1
+        ease_cubic 1.2 xalign -0.72
+        pause .15
+        ease_cubic 0.9 xalign -1.19
+    show fang:
+        pause 1.40
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.1
+
+    show anon prom neutral flip at aright:
+        rotate 0
+        xalign 1.0
+        yalign 0.1
     show fang prom d neutral with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
+
     "Reed wades through the crowd and grabs Fang’s shoulder from behind."
+
     show fang prom d shocked flip with dissolve
     F "Yah! What the-"
 
@@ -939,26 +962,58 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show fang prom d neutral with dissolve
 
-    Re "How did you-{w=0.3} nevermind."
+    Re "How did you-{w=0.25} nevermind."
 
     Re "Come on, there’s no time!"
 
+    show reed king rex:
+        easeout_cubic 1.4 xalign 4.0
+
     A "Good luck, Fang."
 
-    hide reed king rex with easeoutright
+    show fang:
+        "fang d prom happy" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.45
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.40
+        "fang d prom sad" with dissolve
+        easeout_cubic 1.6 xalign 3.5
+
+    show anon:
+        "anon prom happy flip" with dissolve
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.725
+        pause .425
+        ease_cubic 0.45 xalign 0.775
+        pause .9
+        "anon prom neutral" with dissolve
+        pause .8
+        "anon prom sad" with dissolve
 
     "Fang gives me a brief hug before following Reed out of the crowd, leaving me alone amongst the sea of sweaty teenagers."
+
     stop music fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/effects/promChatterLoop1.ogg' fadein 2
 
-    hide fang d prom neutral with easeoutright
+    pause .5
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    "..."
+    hide reed king rex
+
+    hide fang d prom neutral with dissolve
 
     "I should go get more of those cheese things from earlier."
 
     "It’s nice to eat like an actual human for once."
 
+    show anon:
+        "anon prom sad"
+        xalign 0.775
+        rotate 0
+        "anon prom neutral flip" with dissolve
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.70
+
     "On my way over to the catering table something catches the corner of my eye."
 
     show trish prom neutral at sleft with dissolve
@@ -969,24 +1024,26 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I really don't pay any mind to her, my focus solely on getting to the buffet table."
 
-    Re "{alpha=0.5}{i}She’s still suuuuper beating herself up over it, don’t wanna isolate her even more, y’know?{/i}{/alpha}"
+    Re "{alpha=0.5}{i}She’s still suuuuper beating herself up over it,{w=.1} don’t wanna isolate her even more, y’know?{/i}{/alpha}"
 
-    "God… {w=0.3}damn it, Reed."
+    "God{cps=*.1}...{/cps} damn it, Reed."
 
     "I really don’t feel like playing therapist again, especially at prom."
 
-    "...But if she’s still hung up on what happened then the least I can do is talk to her, right?"
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}But if she’s still hung up on what happened then the least I can do is talk to her, right?"
 
     "After getting another plate of tiny greasy delights, I begin to approach Trish."
 
     "Worst case scenario I get gored on her horn, and it’s not as threatening as staircases."
-    show anon prom neutral flip at acenter with ease
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.50
     A "Is this seat taken?"
 
     "Trish looks up from her phone and her face flies through a myriad of emotions."
     window hide
     window auto
 
+    show trish prom surprised with Dissolve(.11)
     show trish prom indignant with Dissolve(.11)
     pause .1
     show trish prom angry with Dissolve(.11)
@@ -997,16 +1054,30 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show trish prom neutral at sleft with dissolve
     "At first confused, then fucking pissed, then aroused, then back to fucking pissed, all in the space of an attosecond."
 
-    A "Hey…{w=0.3} Lookin’ good in that dress."
+    A "Hey{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Lookin’ good in that dress."
 
-    T "Y-you too…"
+    T "Y{w=0.08}-you too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Okay, operation confused trigga is off to a good start."
+
     "I hold out the second plate of morsels to her." #Isn't she a fucking vegan?
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 0.42
+
+
     A "I snagged these for Fang, but she had some last minute stage issues to deal with."
 
-    T "O-oh. Uh… {w=0.2}Thanks?"
+    T "O-oh. Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} {w=0.125}Thanks?"
+
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.9 xalign 0.35
+        "anon prom neutral" with dissolve
+        pause .1
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.325
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.05
 
     "I sit down next to her and tuck into my meal."
 
@@ -1014,9 +1085,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Well, she’s got something to deal with and I’m hungry."
 
-    T "No! I mean here!"
+    T "No!{w=0.1} I mean here!"
 
-    A "To… {w=0.3}eat?"
+    A "To{cps=*.1}...{/cps}eat?"
 
     "For emphasis I show her my half finished plate."
 
@@ -1029,12 +1100,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Before her hands can reach for my throat I finish."
 
-    show trish prom neutral with dissolve
+    show trish prom surprised with dissolve
 
     A "And you’re looking lonely."
 
     "Ah, there we go."
 
+    show trish prom sad with dissolve
     "Trish locks up completely."
 
     "Looking closer I can see just how dry her eyes are."
@@ -1047,7 +1119,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Alright, alright. I was just thinking."
 
-    A "And like,{w=0.3} how do I say this..."
+    A "And like,{w=0.2} how do I say this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Trish is focused completely on me now.{w=0.2} Okay brain, help me out here."
 
@@ -1068,49 +1140,72 @@ label chapter_13D:
     A "Make sense?"
 
     "Trish lets out a sigh."
-    show trish prom sad with dissolve
 
-    T "...Why are you doing this?"
+    show trish prom indignant with dissolve
+
+    T "{cps=*.125}...{/cps}Why are you doing this?"
 
     T "After everything I did, you should hate me for it."
 
     "I sigh."
 
-    A "Yeah…{w=0.2} I mean, I still get called names and stuff."
+    show trish prom neutral with dissolve
+
+    A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I mean, I still get called names and stuff."
+
+    show anon prom unimpressed with dissolve
 
     A "And Stella keeps trying to get me to watch shit with her."
 
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+
     A "But fuck it. I won’t have to see those fuckers ever again in a few weeks."
 
     A "That shit’s gonna be in the past."
 
-    A "But…"
+    A "But{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "{alpha=0.5}{i}I’ve… been meaning to, but…{/i}{/alpha}"
+    show anon prom sad with dissolve
+    F "{alpha=0.5}{i}I’ve{cps=*.125}...{/cps} been meaning to, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{/i}{/alpha}"
     stop music fadeout 2.0
+
     A "But it’d crush Fang if she never talks with her best friend again."
 
     pause 0.5
     play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg" fadein 1.0
 
+    show trish prom surprised with dissolve
+
     "Trish’s eyes widen."
 
+    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
+
     A "So. Peace?"
 
     "I hold out the second plate of food to her again."
 
+    show trish:
+        ease_cubic 0.45 xalign 0.10
+        ease_cubic 0.45 xalign 0.0
     "Trish takes the proffered plate. Her dry eyes start to water and a fragile smile grows on her face."
     show trish prom neutral with dissolve
 
     T "Peace."
 
-    A "Cool.{w=0.3} Also speaking of, that food’s probably cold now, too."
+    show anon prom grin flip with dissolve
+
+    A "Cool.{w=0.2} Also speaking of, that food’s probably cold now, too."
+
+    show trish prom happy with dissolve
 
     "It’s a bad joke, but it works in getting a simple laugh out of the triceratops girl."
 
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+    show trish prom neutral with dissolve
+
     "I make quick work of the rest of my pot stickers, noting how Trish is ravenously devouring them."
 
-    "Huh, I guess she was looking a little thin. This month must have been hell for her."
+    "Huh, I guess she was looking a little thin.{w=0.1} This month must have been hell for her."
 
     "We sit in silence until the music changes to something much slower."
 
@@ -1130,17 +1225,25 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Well, how ‘bout with me?"
 
-    T "...Do you even know how to dance?"
+    T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Do you even know how to dance?"
+
+    show trish prom indignant with dissolve
 
     A "I can improvise?"
 
+    #damn i kind of wanted the pinching her nose
+
     T "Let me rephrase that. Do you even know how to slow dance?"
 
     A "There’s a difference?"
 
     "Trish sighs in frustration."
 
-    T "The things I put up with…"
+    show trish prom neutral with dissolve
+
+    pause .25
+
+    T "The things I put up with{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     T "Alright, I’ll teach you."
 
@@ -1151,13 +1254,16 @@ label chapter_13D:
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadeout 1 fadein 1
 
     "Trish grabs me by the elbow and pulls me to the dance floor."
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
     "When Trish finds a spot she’s satisfied with, away from most of the other couples and open, she turns back to me."
+
+    pause .25
+
     scene prom
     show trish and anon cuck fang:
         xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5
         pause 3
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
     T "Left hand on my hip. Now!"
     "Oh wow, she is short as hell."
 
@@ -1172,22 +1278,21 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show trish and anon cuck fang:
         ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.9 yalign 0.5
 
-
     "My left foot moves left."
 
     T "And bring your right foot next to it."
 
     "Okay. That’s one step."
 
-
     T "And that’s it."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Wow, dancing is simple."
 
     "Slowly I find myself getting into the rhythm of the dance."
 
+    pause .5
     show trish and anon cuck fang:
         ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.4
         pause 3
@@ -1216,23 +1321,39 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "What was that?"
 
-    T "Uhh… I think I was hungrier than I thought."
+    T "Uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I think I was hungrier than I thought."
 
     A "Wanna head back to the food table?"
 
     T "Er- yeah. Sorry."
 
     A "For what? Come on."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
     play music "audio/effects/promChatterLoop2.ogg" fadein 1.0
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.0)
 
     "I lead Trish out of the crowd back in the general direction of the buffet."
+
     scene prom
-    show anon prom neutral at aleft
-    show trish prom neutral flip at tcenter
-    with fade
+    show anon prom neutral flip:
+        xalign 2.0
+        yalign 0.1
+        pause .3
+        ease_cubic 1.7 xalign 0.5
+    show trish prom neutral flip:
+        yalign 0.1
+        xalign 2.0
+        ease_cubic 1.7 xalign 0.0
+    with dissolve
+
+    pause .75
+
     A "Thanks for teaching me to dance."
 
+    show trish prom happy with dissolve
+
     T "I’m coming for you if I hear Fang’s got a broken toe."
 
     A "Noted.{w=0.2} You go ahead, I’ll wait at the bench we were at before."
@@ -1244,23 +1365,30 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "She heads off and I go sit in the same spot on the bleachers as before."
     window hide
     window auto
-    show trish prom neutral at tcenter with dissolve
-    hide trish with easeoutright
+    show trish prom neutral  with dissolve
     pause 0.5
+    show trish:
+        ease_cubic 1.7 xalign 1.88
+
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
     "Well then.{w=0.2} Got some time to kill, time to shitpo-"
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/anonDeskSlam.ogg'
     "*THUNK*" with vpunch
 
+    hide trish with dissolve
+
     A "Whoa, Trish, warn me before you jump into the chair."
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show spears neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
+    show spears neutral at sleft with dissolve
     pause .5
 
+    show anon prom shock with dissolve
     Sp "My bad."
 
+    show anon prom neutral flip with dissolve
     A "Oh {cps=*0.25}ffff{/cps}-flint, hello Principal Spears."
 
     A "Is Fang doing alright?"
@@ -1282,15 +1410,55 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "I-I see.{w=0.2} Thanks."
 
+    show spears:
+        rotate_pad False
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.4 rotate 1.6
+            ease_cubic 0.2 rotate 1.5
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.133
+            ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.125
+    show anon:
+        pause 0.5
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.08
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.1
+
     "Principal Spears leans over and places one of his gargantuan hands on my shoulder."
 
-    show spears happy flip with dissolve
+    show spears happy with dissolve
 
     Sp "I’m real proud of you."
 
     "He pats my shoulder out of its socket and gets up."
 
-    show spears neutral flip with dissolve
+    show spears:
+        rotate_pad False
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.2 rotate 0.7
+            ease_cubic 0.4 rotate 1.6
+            pause .2
+            ease_cubic 0.8 rotate 0
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.110
+            ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.125
+            pause .2
+            ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.1
+    show anon:
+        pause 0.4
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.2 yalign 0.04
+            ease_cubic 0.6 yalign 0.1
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.10 xalign 0.5+0.020
+            ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.5-0.020
+            ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.5+0.003
+            ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.5-0.003
+            ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.5
+    pause 0.5
+    play sound "audio/effects/carKick1.ogg"
+    pause 1.5
+
+    show spears neutral with dissolve
 
     Sp "I won’t keep you any longer, I have my own business to attend to in a moment."
 
@@ -1301,14 +1469,21 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Sp "Alright, be seeing you."
 
     A "Later, Principal Spears."
+
+    show spears:
+        ease_cubic 2.2 xalign 2.125
+
     label chadshark:
     "He marches away to get ready for the announcement."
-    scene prom with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
+
+    scene prom with dissolve
     show anonphone with easeinbottom
     "I check my phone to make my post."
 
-    "hey fagets guess whos at prom? later virgins"
-    "pic rel is my date :^)"
+    "hey fagets guess whos at prom? later virgins\npic rel is my date :^)"
 
     scene black with dissolve
     scene prom
@@ -1323,23 +1498,28 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Whatever."
 
-    "Three… {w=0.3}Two…{w=0.3} One…"
+    "Three{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Two{cps=*.1}...{/cps} One{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Refreshing…"
+    "Refreshing{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "Forty replies AND revenge for that soda can."
     scene prom
-    show anonphone
-    with fade
+    show anonphone with Dissolve(1.0)
+    #with easeinbottom
 
     hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
     show anon prom neutral at aleft with dissolve
-    show trish prom neutral flip at tcenter with easeinright
+    show trish prom neutral flip at tcenter:
+        xalign 2.5
+        ease_cubic 2.0 xalign 0.5
+
+    pause .5
+
     T "Alright, sorry, I’m back."
 
     "Trish slides into the chair Spears just left from."
 
-    T "Did someone bend this…?"
+    T "Did someone bend this{cps=*.12}...{/cps}?"
 
     A "Spears."
 
@@ -1351,8 +1531,12 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Hey, you can’t have dessert for dinner."
 
+    show trish prom neutral with dissolve
+
     T "Piss off."
 
+    pause .5
+
     "The music fades until all that’s left is chatter."
 
     "Spears takes to the stage with mic in hand for once."
@@ -1361,7 +1545,12 @@ label chapter_13D:
     hide anon
     hide trish
     with dissolve
+
+    pause .25
+    show dimmer_darker with dissolve
     show spears neutral at scenter with dissolve
+    show spears:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
     Sp "Alright everyone. Before we end tonight’s prom we have a couple of items to take care of."
     stop music fadeout 3.0
 
@@ -1390,23 +1579,52 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Sp "Twenty-twenty class."
 
-    Sp "Aaaaaare…."
+    Sp "{cps=*.6}Aaaaaare{/cps}.{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/drumrollEnd.ogg' fadein 1
     stop ambient fadeout 1
-    Sp "Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!"
+
+    Sp "{cps=*.6}Naaaaaser aaaaand Naaaaoooomiiiiii!{/cps}"
 
     play ambient 'audio/effects/crowdCheerLoop.ogg' fadein 2
     "He tosses the paper over his shoulder and yanks out the crowns from a pocket inside his jacket."
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show spears neutral with easeinleft:
+    show spears with easeinleft:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
         xalign -0.2 yalign 0.0
-    show naser prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
-    show naomi prom happy with easeinleft:
-        xalign 0.9 yalign 0.0
-    show naomi prom happy flip with dissolve
+        #matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((5*255, 5*255, 5*255)))
+        easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+
+    show naser prom happy:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+        xalign -1.9 yalign 0.0
+        block:
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 1.95 xalign 0.35
+            parallel:
+                pause .85
+                easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.04*255, 1.04*255, 1.00*255)))
+    show naomi prom happy:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+        xalign -1.1 yalign 0.0
+        block:
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 1.75 xalign 0.85
+                "naomi prom happy flip" with dissolve
+            parallel:
+                pause .65
+                easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.00*255)))
+        block:
+            pause .2
+            ease_cubic 0.3 yalign 0.1
+            ease_cubic 0.6 yalign 0.0
+            repeat
+
+    pause 1.0
+    show spears happy with dissolve
+
     "Spears backs out of the spotlight, giving a polite applause to the pair as they rush onstage to accept."
 
     "The rest of the class is in a celebratory uproar."
@@ -1420,37 +1638,88 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "This is such an honor to receive."
 
-    N "My, I don’t really have a speech prepared. But…"
+    N "My, I don’t really have a speech prepared. But{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     N "In just one short year, we-"
 
     Sp "Alright, alright, let’s stay on schedule."
 
+    show naomi:
+        "naomi prom happy flip"
+        yalign 0.0
     show naser prom neutral with dissolve
     show naomi prom neutral flip with dissolve
 
     Sp "I promised your parents we’d be out of here by ten."
+    show naomi prom neutral with dissolve
+    show naomi:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 3.99
+        parallel:
+            easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+    show naser:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 3.99
+        parallel:
+            pause .2
+            easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+    pause .5
     hide naomi with dissolve
     hide naser with dissolve
 
+    show spears:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
+        parallel:
+            easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
+
+
     Sp "To close off this wonderful night, I’ve asked a student to play one final song for us."
 
-    Sp "Now I know she’s played before with… mixed results, but please give her a second chance."
+    Sp "Now I know she’s played before with... mixed results, but please give her a second chance."
 
     Sp "To finish up, please welcome Fang!"
+
     window hide
     window auto
+
+
+    show spears:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 2.0 xalign -2.5
+        parallel:
+            easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+    pause .5
     hide spears with dissolve
-    show fang d prom happy at scenter with dissolve
+
+    show fang d prom happy flip with dissolve:
+        matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((0.7*255, 0.7*255, 0.8*255)))
+        xalign 2.3
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 0.5
+        parallel:
+            pause 1.0
+            easeout_cubic 0.40 matrixcolor TintMatrix(Color((1.03*255, 1.03*255, 1.0*255)))
+            pause .02
+            "fang d prom happy" with dissolve
+
+    pause .5
+
     "Spears puts the microphone up and gives a welcoming applause as the cheap curtains draw open."
 
     "Fang is standing onstage front and center, guitar."
 
+    pause .25
+
     unknown "Wait, who?"
 
     unknown "She was there last time, wasn’t she?"
 
-    unknown "I’ll just start recording…"
+    unknown "I’ll just start recording{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show fang d prom sad with dissolve
 
@@ -1547,7 +1816,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
     play ambient 'audio/effects/crowdCheerLoop.ogg' fadein 4
     "The guitar echoes for several seconds before applause begins to fill the air, cheers that I didn’t initiate this time."
 
-    "I begin to join in, but take notice of Fang’s utterly stiff posture."
+    "I begin to join in,{w=.1} but take notice of Fang’s utterly stiff posture."
 
     "Eyes wide, wings pressed against her back, legs locked like a statue."
 
@@ -1558,7 +1827,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I push my way through the crowd and jump up on the stage, taking the nearly catatonic Fang into my arms."
 
-    "Standing in an embrace on stage, my mind barely registers the crowd of students in front of us."
+    "Standing in an embrace on stage,{w=.1} my mind barely registers the crowd of students in front of us."
 
     "Fang gasps and snaps back to reality."
 
@@ -1578,38 +1847,52 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Wait.{w=0.2} Missing one thing."
 
-    "I extend one arm out toward Naomi, who I know is suffering from rectal-ragnarok by now, and raise one finger in particular at her."
+    "I extend one arm out toward Naomi,{w=0.2} who I know is suffering from rectal-ragnarok by now, and raise one finger in particular at her."
 
     "There, picture-perfect."
+
+    window hide
+    window auto
+
+    pause .5
+
     stop ambient fadeout 2
     $ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 2, 'ambient')
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.0)
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     pause 0.5
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    scene park_night with fade
+    scene park_night with dissolve
     play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 2.0
     "The cool night air feels absolutely amazing after we spent so long in the sweatbox of a gym."
 
-    show anon prom neutral at acenter with dissolve:
-        xalign 0.8 #yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35
-    show fang d prom happy with dissolve:
-        xpos 0 #yalign -0.1 #zoom 1.35
+    show anon prom neutral at acenter:
+        xalign -1.4
+        ease_cubic 1.9 xalign 0.375 #yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35
+    show fang d prom happy:
+        xalign -2.2
+        ease_cubic 2.2 xalign -0.325 #yalign -0.1 #zoom 1.35
+    with dissolve
 
     "When I had brought up calling the taxi to take us home, Fang insisted on walking instead."
 
     "And I couldn’t turn her down after she gave me ‘the look’."
 
-    F "MMmmm. Feels fucking nice now."
+    F "{cps=*.6}MMmmm{/cps}. Feels fucking nice now."
 
     "Her wings flutter, and surprises me when droplets of sweat are sent flying from them."
 
     A "Yeah, nice and breezy."
     show fang d prom happy:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xpos 0.05
+        pause .5
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.20
+        pause .2
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.30
     show anon prom neutral:
-        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.65
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.25
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.30+0.25
 
 
     "My arm finds its way around her waist, and Fang takes the hint and starts walking closer with me."
@@ -1620,13 +1903,24 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "It’s as we pass by the park we had visited so many months ago that my phone buzzes in my pocket."
 
-    "...and Fang’s hip."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}and Fang’s hip."
+    show fang:
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.28
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 0.2 yalign 0.03
+            ease_cubic 0.4 yalign 0.0
     show fang d prom shock with dissolve
 
     "The startled noise from Fang’s mouth was part eardrum shattering and part fucking hilarious."
     pause 0.5
-    A "Bahahahahahaha!"
 
+    show anon prom grin with dissolve
+    A "{cps=*.665}Bahahahahahaha!{/cps}"
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.34
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.30
     show fang d prom happy with dissolve
     F "Shut up!"
 
@@ -1634,6 +1928,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Hehehe, sorry. One sec."
 
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+
     "A check of it shows I'm getting dangerously close to my midnight curfew."
 
     "Also, Reed had been texting me several pictures in rapid succession."
@@ -1648,13 +1944,27 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "{i}Reedman: also swing by the hospital some time, bring my backpack{/i}"
 
+    show anon prom grin with dissolve
+
     "He really does it to himself."
 
+    show anon prom neutral with dissolve
+
     "Right, the curfew."
 
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.7 xalign 1.5
+        pause .3
+        "fang d prom happy flip" with dissolve
+        pause .3
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 1.15
+
+
+    pause 1.0
     "Before I can pocket my phone, Fang stops my hand."
 
-    F "Anon…"
+
+    F "Anon{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Hm?"
 
@@ -1682,7 +1992,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The music is tiny and tinny coming out of my phone’s ratty speaker."
 
-    F "Okay, just like I saw with you and Trish…"
+    F "Okay, just like I saw with you and Trish{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Wait, do YOU not know how to slow dance?"
 
@@ -1696,7 +2006,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     with dissolve
 
-    A "Alright, I think she said like this…"
+    A "Alright, I think she said like this{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show fanganon_promdance:
         ease_cubic 1.5 xpos 0.7
@@ -1715,10 +2025,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "We find ourselves in a close embrace beneath the streetlights, now just swaying along and loving each other’s company."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    pause 1.5
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.5)
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     pause 0.5
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}"
 
 
     label FastTimesAtVolcanoHigh:
@@ -1727,7 +2038,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     scene beach
     show anon neutral at acenter
-    with fade
+    with Dissolve(1.5)
+
     play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg"
     "Time seemed to fly after prom, honestly."
 
@@ -1776,20 +2088,46 @@ label chapter_13D:
     "Right as I reach into my pocket for my phone, a van chugs onto the sand from the distance."
 
     "It stops right in front of me and Trish flies out the side door, gasping for breath."
-    show anon neutral flip at aright with ease
-    show trish neutral at scenter with easeinleft
-    T " *huff*{w=0.2}, *huff*..."
+    show anon:
+        pause 1.00
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 1.0
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    show trish neutral:
+        xalign -0.9
+        yalign 0.1
+        parallel:
+            ease_cubic 2.3 xalign 0.55
+        parallel:
+            block:
+                rotate_pad False
+                ease_cubic 0.25 rotate 1.3
+                ease_cubic 0.25 rotate -1.3
+                easein_cubic 0.125 rotate 0
+                repeat 3
+            block:
+                ease_cubic 0.335 yalign 0.11
+                ease_cubic 0.285 yalign 0.1
+                pause .3
+                repeat
+    T " *huff*{w=0.2}, *huff*{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "You look like you just got choked out by Spears."
 
-    show trish neutral flip at scenter with dissolve
+    show trish neutral flip with dissolve
     "She just points back to the van."
 
     "The drivers’ door opens, letting out a gust of smoke from within."
 
     "Reed emerges from the cloud as if nothing’s wrong."
 
-    T "Reed... {w=0.2}*huff*... {w=0.2}Your car.... {w=0.2}*huff*..."
+    T "Reed... {w=0.2}*huff*... {w=0.2}Your car.... {w=0.2}*huff*{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    show trish:
+        block:
+            ease_cubic 0.335 yalign 0.11
+            ease_cubic 0.285 yalign 0.1
+            pause .3
+            repeat 3
+        yalign 0.1
     show reed explanatory at rleft with easeinleft
     Re "Oh yeah, you like it? It’s an electric!"
     window hide
@@ -1797,9 +2135,14 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show reed neutral with dissolve
     pause .25
 
-    show trish neutral flip at scenter:
-      yalign 0.185
-      easeout_cubic 0.7 rotate -90 yalign -0.75
+    show trish:
+        rotate_pad True
+        transform_anchor True
+        yanchor 1.0
+        ypos 1.35
+        parallel:
+            easeout_cubic 0.7 rotate -90
+        #easeout_cubic 0.7 rotate -90 yalign -0.75
     pause .65
     play sound 'audio/effects/anonGardenFall.ogg'
     with vpunch
@@ -1815,16 +2158,21 @@ label chapter_13D:
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show trish neutral at scenter with dissolve:
-      xalign 0.0
-      ease_cubic 1 rotate 0 yalign 0.2
+    show trish neutral:
+        #xalign 0.0
+        #ease_cubic 1 rotate 0 yalign 0.2
+        rotate_pad True
+        transform_anchor True
+        yanchor 1.0
+        ypos 1.35
+        easeout_cubic 1.2 rotate 0
+        pause .1
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.10
 
-    pause .5
+    pause 1.2
 
-    show reed with ease:
-        xalign -0.55
-    show trish with ease:
-        xalign -2.1
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.9 xalign -0.55
     show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25):
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.25
 
@@ -1841,9 +2189,10 @@ label chapter_13D:
     Re "Need a light, amigo?"
     window hide
     window auto
-    show anon neutral flip with dissolve:
-        xalign 0.5
-    show lighter with dissolve:
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.55
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    show lighter with Dissolve(0.1):
         xpos 0.1
         ypos 0.3
         zoom 0.42
@@ -1876,36 +2225,51 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show reed:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.70
     show trish:
-        ease_cubic 1 xalign -2.8
+        ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.10
     show anon:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
     show rosa:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
     show stella:
         ease_cubic 1 xalign 1.15
-    show fang neutral flip behind anon with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.25
-    show naser neutral flip behind rosa with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.90
-    show fang neutral behind anon with dissolve
+    show fang neutral flip behind anon:
+        xalign 2.5
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.2
+        "fang neutral" with dissolve
+    show naser neutral flip behind rosa:
+        xalign 2.5
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.90
 
     Nas "...c’mon babe, please. You know she didn’t do it on purpose!"
 
     show naser neutral flip:
-        xalign 1.2
+        ease_cubic 0.9 xalign 1.2
     show rosa:
-        xalign 1.3
+        ease_cubic 0.9 xalign 1.3
     show stella neutral flip:
-        xalign 1.2
-    with ease
+        ease_cubic 0.9 xalign 1.2
+
+    show naomi angry flip behind naser:
+        xalign 2.60
+        ease_cubic 1.3 xalign 0.60
+        pause .01
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.60
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.62
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.60
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.62
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.60
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.61
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.60
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.61
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.60
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.61
+        ease_cubic 0.11 xalign 0.60
+
 
     "Naomi erupts from the car in a frothing rage, her shirt noticeably stained an orange-red."
     window hide
     window auto
 
-    show naomi angry flip behind naser with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.60
-
     F "Ha! Wish I did."
 
     F "Oh yeah, the box on top is a bit messed up. Long story."
@@ -1924,20 +2288,30 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Nas "Here, take my jacket."
 
-    "Naser starts sliding the jacket off his back and…"
+    show naser:
+        ease_cubic 0.45 xalign 1.12
+        ease_cubic 0.55 xalign 1.2
+
+    "Naser starts sliding the jacket off his back and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     pause 0.5
     "What the-...?"
 
     "What is this noneuclidean bullshit I see before me."
 
-    "Why is there a second jacket below the first…?"
+    "Why is there a second jacket below the first...?"
     show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.3 xalign -0.60
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign -0.70
+
     "Reed taps my back and pulls my eyes away from the spatial anomaly."
 
-    Re "Hurry up and start the fire, man…"
+    Re "Hurry up and start the fire, man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Re "I got the booze all ready."
 
+    play sound 'audio/effects/caveman_magic.ogg'
     "Once the bonfire was set ablaze Stella and Trish started setting up the speakers around in a radius."
 
     Ro "Are you sure these will be loud enough?"
@@ -1952,6 +2326,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Re "Anyway!"
 
+    show reed:
+        ease_cubic 0.80 xalign -0.375
+        pause .15
+        ease_cubic 0.9 xalign -0.70
+
     "Reed drops the ice chest he was holding in the sand."
 
     Re "Went all in man, got the name brands and everything."
@@ -1965,7 +2344,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show reed neutral with dissolve
 
-    Re "About that..."
+    Re "About that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     show naser shocked flip
     show naomi shocked flip
@@ -1973,13 +2352,13 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Nas "You brought alcohol?!"
 
-    Re "I mean, I usually call it liquor, but…"
+    Re "I mean, I usually call it liquor, but{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Nas "Darn it, Reed!"
 
     Nas "We’re all underage, you know even if I were to agree Naomi would pitch a fit!"
 
-    Re "Dude, we all just graduated…"
+    Re "Dude, we all just graduated{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Re "If now isn’t the time to live a little, then when?"
 
@@ -1995,9 +2374,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
     show naomi unimpressed flip
     with dissolve
 
-    Nas "You… {w=0.3}Whatever, I’ll try to keep Naomi from calling the police, fine."
+    Nas "You... {w=0.3}Whatever, I’ll try to keep Naomi from calling the police, fine."
 
-    Re "You’re a real bro, man…"
+    Re "You’re a real bro, man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     show naser neutral flip with dissolve
     Re "If everyone’s ready then let’s get started!"
     stop music fadeout 2
@@ -2020,15 +2399,15 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     N "Why was it us who gets *hic*{w=0.3}, gets the short end of the stick?!"
 
-    Nas "I mean{w=0.2}, I mean, I liked it…"
+    Nas "I mean{w=0.2}, I mean, I liked it{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    N "You’ve said that a dozen times already…"
+    N "You’ve said that a dozen times already{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Re "Y’know, I’m something of a gardener myself."
 
     Ro "Oh!{w=0.2} Really? You should have joined the gardening club back at school, we had the loveliest little poppy bed."
 
-    Re "Poppies, you say? The coincidences keep piling up, don’t they…"
+    Re "Poppies, you say? The coincidences keep piling up, don’t they{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     St "-And the robots are powered by their blood! Super cool right?!"
 
@@ -2054,7 +2433,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I pull one out and turn it over."
 
-    A "The lovers…?"
+    A "The lovers...?"
 
     "The illustration depicts a human and pterosaur in embrace."
 
@@ -2091,7 +2470,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Reed glances behind him before throwing his head back in laughter."
 
-    Re "Little party trick, bro…"
+    Re "Little party trick, bro{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     #empty can throw?
     "He grabs one of Naser’s empty cans and tosses it in my lap."
 
@@ -2119,7 +2498,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     #hide fang with easeoutright
 
-    "I give her a smile and turn back to Reed."
+    "kI give her a smile and turn back to Reed."
 
     Re "We can still mess with them, man. Watch this."
 
@@ -2127,7 +2506,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "The two virgin drunks turn their attention to us, Naser clearly ‘deep’ in thought."
 
-    Nas "Aw, man, like… {w=0.5}I’m gonna be-{w=0.2} gonna go and be a nur-{w=0.2} nyros-{w=0.1} sturgon."
+    Nas "Aw, man, like... {w=0.5}I’m gonna be-{w=0.2} gonna go and be a nur-{w=0.2} nyros-{w=0.1} sturgon."
 
     #show naomi neutral with dissolve
 
@@ -2158,21 +2537,21 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
      "Go to college":
 
-      A "Well… {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
+      A "Well... {w=0.3}Spears convinced me to send out a couple application letters for college."
 
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music…{w=0.3} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
+      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music...{w=0.3} maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
 
      "Not certain just yet":
       A "I’m not sure yet."
 
-      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music… {w=0.3}maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
+      A "I’m thinking of doing something with music... {w=0.3}maybe becoming a sound engineer?"
 
     Re "Oh nice, dude! You can be the band’s sound technician when you’re done!"
 
     #show reed explanatory with dissolve:
     #   xalign -0.55
 
-    A "Yeah, something like that…{w=0.2} What about you?"
+    A "Yeah, something like that...{w=0.2} What about you?"
 
     Re "Me? Flow with the go, dude. Like the dinos of old, gotta get in sync with the universe first, y’know?"
 
@@ -2202,11 +2581,11 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I hold up three fingers, though why is it suddenly nine?"
 
-    "Hmmmm… Gonna need some more beer to fix that."
+    "Hmmmm... Gonna need some more beer to fix that."
 
-    F "God, Anon, I was thinking we could all…{w=0.2} I dunno… {w=0.2}sign it? I saw a lot of others doing that."
+    F "God, Anon, I was thinking we could all...{w=0.2} I dunno... {w=0.2}sign it? I saw a lot of others doing that."
 
-    A "Oh…"
+    A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "I always thought it was a silly tradition."
 
@@ -2230,7 +2609,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     St "Oh I know exactly what to write! First let me do a palm reading!"
 
-    Re "Heh…{w=0.2} I’ll sign it too."
+    Re "Heh...{w=0.2} I’ll sign it too."
 
     N "WOOOOOOOOOO!"
 
@@ -2258,7 +2637,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "Anon? {w=0.2}Hellooooo.{w=0.2} You’ve been staring at the page for the past five minutes."
 
-    A "Right right. Just uh… {w=0.2}thinking of what to put."
+    A "Right right. Just uh... {w=0.2}thinking of what to put."
 
     "Okay, Anon, something meaningful. Something that’ll remind Fang of you every time she reads it."
     pause .5
@@ -2286,7 +2665,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "I can regret the hangover tomorrow, right now I want to just enjoy the night with my friends."
 
-    "..."
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     scene black with fade
     label tink:
@@ -2404,7 +2783,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Her face glows a soft pink in embarrassment."
 
-    A "D’aaaaawww…{w=0.2} Someone’s embarrassed."
+    A "D’aaaaawww...{w=0.2} Someone’s embarrassed."
 
     F "And someone is about to be on the floor again."
 
@@ -2488,7 +2867,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Alas, I must leave the warmth of the bed to make lunch."
 
-    A "...This is gonna suck."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}This is gonna suck."
 
     F "Wear the thing."
 
@@ -2512,7 +2891,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "Nope."
 
-    A "...You realize last month was Homo History Month, right?" #lol homo
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You realize last month was Homo History Month, right?" #lol homo
 
     F "What’s that have to do with an ugly jacket?"
 
@@ -2525,8 +2904,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "Why do you make it so weird? Most people just use tomato sauce."
 
-    hide anon with easeoutright
-    A "...Don’t ask questions you aren’t prepared to know the answer to."
+    show anon:
+        easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 2.75
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Don’t ask questions you aren’t prepared to know the answer to."
 
     "I crack four eggs, separating the yolk from the whites and saving them in a tupperware for later."
 
@@ -2557,7 +2937,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Fang grumbles and starts shifting in the bed, so I turn my attention to making the plates."
 
-    show anon monkey flip at aright with easeinright
+    show anon monkey flip:
+        ease_cubic 1.75 xalign 0.75
 
     "I grab a few sodas from the fridge and place everything on the new rug for an indoor picnic setup."
 
@@ -2618,7 +2999,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "You get Reed to make it do that for you?"
 
-    A "Maybe, however..."
+    A "Maybe, however{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "That’s not what I wanted to show you."
 
@@ -2641,39 +3022,40 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "As the amber dangles in the air, it catches the light from outside and glows the same brilliant orange as her eyes."
 
-    F "Anon…{w=0.3} it’s beautiful."
+    F "Anon...{w=0.3} it’s beautiful."
 
     A "Here."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with dissolve
 
     "I take the pendant from her hands and hold it open to put around Fang’s neck."
 
     "She holds her hair up for my hands to reach across."
 
-    "I try to fumble with the clasp, it’s a bit tricky with the wings getting in the way…"
+    "I try to fumble with the clasp, it’s a bit tricky with the wings getting in the way{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     "The tip of her beak is mere centimeters from my face."
 
-    F "..."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "...There."
 
-    scene d02c with fade
+    scene d02c with dissolve
 
     "Fang lets her hair down again and holds up the pendant."
 
-    F "This is… {w=0.3}thank you, Anon."
+    F "This is... {w=0.3}thank you, Anon."
 
     A "The moment I saw it, I knew it would have been the perfect present."
 
-    F "Speaking of presents…"
+    F "Speaking of presents{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
     scene room anon day
-    show anon monkey flip at aright
+    show anon monkey flip at aright:
+        xalign 0.6
     show fang pendant happy at sleft
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
     "She gestures her snout to the ukulele resting against the corner of the room."
 
     F "You gonna try playing that?"
@@ -2700,7 +3082,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "A comfortable silence fills the room after the notes fade."
 
-    F "...I love that song."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I love that song."
 
     A "I hope so, you wrote it after all."
 
@@ -2714,23 +3096,34 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "You expecting company?"
 
-    show anon monkey with dissolve
-
     "I give her a puzzled look in return before getting up and heading to the door."
 
-    hide anon monkey with easeoutright
+    show anon monkey with dissolve
+    pause .2
+    show anon:
+        xalign 0.6
+    pause .3
+    show anon:
+        easeout_cubic 1.10 xalign 2.25
 
     "My momentary fear of it being a potential addict or murderer are quelled upon opening the door, revealing-"
 
     A "Principal Spears? What are you doing here?"
     window hide
     window auto
-    show anon monkey flip at aright with easeinright:
-        xalign 0.7
-    pause 0.1
-    show anon monkey with dissolve
-    show spears neutral flip behind anon with easeinright:
-        xalign 1.3
+
+    show anon monkey flip:
+        pause 0.80
+        easein_cubic 1.20 xalign 0.75
+        "anon monkey" with dissolve
+
+    show spears neutral flip behind anon:
+        xalign 2.25
+        pause 2
+        easein_cubic 1.25 xalign 1.3
+
+    pause 1.5
+
     "Our ex-principal is squeezed into the narrow hallway, holding a delicately wrapped gift in his hands."
 
     Sp "Anon, I trust that you had a good Christmas?"
@@ -2741,7 +3134,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Inside is a box set of some anime I’ve never heard of before."
 
-    A "...’Rurouni Kenshin’?"
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}’Rurouni Kenshin’?"
 
     show spears happy flip with dissolve
 
@@ -2749,7 +3142,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     Sp "I think you’ll find this quite enjoyable."
 
-    A "I, uh… thank you, Principal Spears."
+    A "I, uh{cps=*.125}...{/cps} thank you, Principal Spears."
 
     "Spears gives a fatherly smile as I shake his hand."
 
@@ -2763,7 +3156,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "He stares with a certain thinly veiled disgust creeping on his face."
 
-    Sp "Anon, I get that we live in a postracial world and all…"
+    Sp "Anon, I get that we live in a postracial world and all{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     Sp "But come on, have a little pride in yourself."
 
@@ -2794,18 +3187,25 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     "Fang throws a handwave back at him."
 
-    hide spears with dissolve
+    show spears:
+        pause .4
+        ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 2.8
+    show spears happy with dissolve
 
     "Spears clambers out the door and shuts it behind him, leaving just Fang and I in the room again."
-    show fang pendant sad with dissolve
-    F "... That’s right, you’re leaving next month…"
 
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang pendant sad with dissolve
+    F "{cps=*.175}...{/cps} That’s right, you’re leaving next month{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
     "Fang curls up in the blanket."
 
     show anon monkey flip with dissolve
 
-    A "...Yeah…"
+    A "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}Yeah{cps=*.175}...{/cps}"
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.8 xalign 0.625
     "I sit next to her on the ground and wrap an arm around her shoulder."
 
     F "Do you really have to go?"
@@ -2820,27 +3220,27 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "You got plans of your own, don’t you?"
 
-    F "Yeah.{w=0.2} So…"
+    F "Yeah.{w=0.12} So{cps=*.1125}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "So…"
+    A "So{cps=*.1125}...{/cps}"
 
     F "We’re still gonna talk."
 
     A "Obviously."
 
-    F "But…"
+    F "But{cps=*.1125}...{/cps}"
 
     "Fang takes a deep breath."
 
     F "I’m not doing a distant relationship."
 
-    "Oh…"
+    "Oh{cps=*.1125}...{/cps}"
 
-    "Oh wow…"
+    "Oh wow{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     A "Is this a break up?"
 
-    "Because ow, my fucking heart."
+    "Because ow,{w=.15} my fucking heart."
 
     show fang pendant neutral with dissolve
 
@@ -2850,7 +3250,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "I don’t want to break up, Anon."
 
-    F "But I was thinking…"
+    F "But I was thinking{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "You’ve been helping me ever since you got here."
 
@@ -2862,7 +3262,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     F "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Want to do some thinking."
+    F "I{cps=*.15}...{/cps}Want to do some thinking."
 
     A "More thinking? Wow, that’s new for you."
 
@@ -2870,7 +3270,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     show fang pendant happy with dissolve
 
-    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Ass{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    F "{cps=*.15}...{/cps}Ass{cps=*.15}...{/cps}"
 
     "Fang giggles as I fake like I’m on a soccer pitch."
 
@@ -2886,11 +3286,17 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "I get you."
 
+    show anon:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.55
+    show fang:
+        pause .2
+        ease_cubic 0.6 xalign 0.275
+
     "I pull Fang closer, my chin resting atop her head."
 
     A "So, not breaking up."
 
-    F "No, just…"
+    F "No, just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "A break?"
 
@@ -2914,9 +3320,9 @@ label chapter_13D:
 
     A "Yes ma’am."
 
-    scene black with fade
+    scene black with Dissolve(1.0)
     stop music fadeout 4.0
-    pause 4
+    pause 3
     window hide
     window auto
     pause 2