From a2e733f972bdf3f675a5e85e1ee07819d2577bcc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Sat, 7 Aug 2021 12:04:56 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework Ask Naser segment --- ....anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy | 159 ++++++++++++------ 1 file changed, 111 insertions(+), 48 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy index a9637c4..8df46e1 100644 --- a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy +++ b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy @@ -1868,23 +1868,35 @@ label chapter_6: label .AskNaser: - A "Actually, Naser." + A "Actually,{w=.3} Naser." Nas "Hm?" + show naser: + ease_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.9 + pause .5 + "Naser slows his gait so he’s walking next to me." + pause .5 Nas "Something on your mind?" + show fang behind naser, naomi + show anon: + ease 1 xalign 0.375 + show dimmer_lighter behind anon, naser with dissolve "I lean in and start whispering." - A "Yeah…" + A "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "It may be a good idea to split into groups." + pause .5 - Nas "Ha, you’re funny." + show naser: + easein 1 xalign 1.0 + show naser explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25) - show naser explanatory flip + Nas "Ha,{w=.4} you’re funny." "Naser’s brow grows slick with sweat." pause .5 @@ -1892,42 +1904,56 @@ label chapter_6: "Christ what did his dad tell him?" "This is gonna be difficult." + pause .5 A "Take a look at her man." A "You know she doesn’t get along with Naomi." - "His eyes shift back, catching sight of Fang’s poorly withheld anger." - - show naser sad flip + show naser neutral flip with dissolve + "His eyes shift back,{w=.4} catching sight of Fang’s poorly withheld anger." + pause .5 + show naser sad flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Ugh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" A "It’s only a matter of time before things go nuclear." - A "And as much as I’d find a catfight amusing, neither of us want to see Fang and Naomi duke it out." - - show naser considering flip + A "And as much as I’d find a catfight amusing,{w=.4} neither of us want to see Fang and Naomi duke it out." + show naser considering flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Be that as it may{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - show naser neutral flip - + show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "We still can’t split." + show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "I’m supposed to be keeping an eye on you two right now." - show naomi happy with dissolve + show naomi: + ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.65 + pause .15 + show naomi neutral flip with dissolve + show dimmer_lighter behind naomi + show naomi happy flip + with Dissolve(.25) + show anon fear: + easein_quart 1 xalign 0.325 + show naser neutral flip: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3 - N "what are we whispering about?" + N "What are we whispering about?" "RAPTOR-JESUS FUCK." - "Naomi has circled around behind us and pokes her head between Naser and I." + show anon neutral with dissolve - Nas "Don’t worry about it, babe." + "Naomi has circled around behind us and pokes her head between Naser and I." + pause .5 + + Nas "Don’t worry about it,{w=.2} babe." Nas "Anon just wanted to split the group for a bit." @@ -1935,78 +1961,114 @@ label chapter_6: N "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + show naomi: + ease 0.25 yalign 0.05 + ease 0.25 yalign 0.0 + N "That’s a wonderful idea!" + show naomi neutral flip + show naser considering flip + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .5 - show naomi neutral - - Nas "But babe, you know I’m supposed to-" + Nas "But babe,{w=.3} {cps=*.6}you know I’m supposed to-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}" + show naomi explanatory with Dissolve(.25) N "I think you should trust Anon a bit more!" + show naomi neutral with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 A "Do you really think I’m the frisky type?" + show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) "Naser looks at me for a moment." + pause .5 - show naser unimpressed flip + show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) Nas "Yes." + pause .5 A "Wow." Nas "It’s true." + pause .25 + show naomi considering with Dissolve(.25) N "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - A "A) Go fuck yourselves." + A "A){w=.4} Go fuck yourselves." - A "And B) I’m not some degenerate." + A "And B){w=.4} I’m not some degenerate." + pause .5 show naomi explanatory + N "Still,{w=.4} despite his looks,{w=.3} the Anon I know won’t end up doing anything weird!" - N "Still, despite his looks, the Anon I know won’t end up doing anything weird!" - - show naser neutral flip + show naomi neutral + show naser neutral flip + with Dissolve(.25) + pause .25 Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You really think so?" N "Sure!" - show naomi neutral + pause .25 + show naser unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You promise to not make it weird or anything, right?" + Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You promise to not make it weird or anything,{w=.4} right?" - A "I-I{cps=*.1}...{/cps} What? Whatever, no, of course not." + A "I-{w=.2}I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} What?{w=.4} Whatever,{w=.4} no,{w=.2} of course not." + show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25) N "Seems it’s settled then!" - N "Come on, Naser! We’ll go look on the east side of town!" + N "Come on,{w=.2} Naser!{w=.4} We’ll go look on the east side of town!" + show naomi neutral show naser considering flip + with dissolve Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Alright{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - Nas "I trust you, Anon." - - show naser neutral + show naser neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) + Nas "I trust you,{w=.2} Anon." + hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve + show naser behind naomi + show naomi: + ease_cubic 1.25 xalign 1.2 + pause 1 + show naomi: + easeout 1 xalign 2.1 + show naser: + easeout 1 xalign 2.6 + with None + show naser neutral + show naomi keikaku + with dissolve + hide naomi + hide naser + with dissolve + "Naomi grabs Naser by the arm and leads him around a corner and onto another street." "Naser gives one last worried look back before he’s out of sight." + pause .5 - hide naser - hide naomi - with moveoutright - + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) F "What were the three of you huddling about?" - "Fang was walking behind us this whole time? I didn’t notice." + show anon neutral flip with dissolve + "Fang was walking behind us this whole time?{w=.5} I didn’t notice." - A "Oh, I was just getting rid of them." + A "Oh,{w=.3} I was just getting rid of them." show fang happy with dissolve - - F "Oh, man, you’re a lifesaver." + F "Oh,{w=.4} man,{w=.2} you’re a lifesaver." A "Seems like it was either this or someone ends up with a black eye." + pause .5 F "You think I’d stop at a black eye?" @@ -2099,6 +2161,7 @@ label chapter_6: "Two can play this game you citrine psycho." "I look at Naomi and give her a subtle nod." + pause .5 show naomi keikaku flip with dissolve pause .25 @@ -2133,12 +2196,12 @@ label chapter_6: show askfang2 with Dissolve(.25) pause 1 A "That’s fuckin’ rude." - pause .5 - - show askfang3 with Dissolve(0.25) pause 1 - # show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.15) - # pause 1 + + show askfang3 with Dissolve(0.3) + pause 1 + show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.15) + pause 1 show askfang5 with Dissolve(0.15) pause 1 show askfang6 with Dissolve(0.15) @@ -2147,13 +2210,13 @@ label chapter_6: "Fang looks at me and grins wickedly." pause .5 - Nas "Please Fang." + Nas "{cps=*.5}Please Fang.{/cps}" pause .5 #Le Sigh - # hide askfang4 + hide askfang4 show askfang4 with Dissolve(0.25) - pause .25 + pause .5 F "I promise." F "Now go."