rework ch5 carpark scene

game/script.rpy

@@ -223,6 +223,7 @@ image reed sad flip = im.Flip("reed/reed sad.png", horizontal=True)
 
 #shocked flips
 image anon shocked flip = im.Flip("anon/emotive set/anon shocked.png", horizontal=True)
+image anon ohshit flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon ohshit.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang shocked flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang shocked.png", horizontal=True)
 image fang c shocked flip = im.Flip("fang/future sets/fang c shocked.png", horizontal=True)
 image reed shocked flip = im.Flip("reed/reed shocked.png", horizontal=True)

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -1,3 +1,8 @@
+init python:
+    # some stupid bullshit you have to do to get sounds playing in an ATL block
+    def fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy(a,b,c):
+        renpy.play('audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg', channel='sound')
+
 label chapter_5:
 
     # Gardening Club
@@ -81,6 +86,7 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     "The flower bulbs are still closed for the winter,{w=.4} but a few are peeking out."
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/OST/Ramo de Rosas.ogg' fadein 2
     show rosa neutral flip with Dissolve(1):
         yalign 0.2 xalign 1.2
@@ -222,6 +228,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     with dissolve
 
     "The caveman’s bellow reverberates throughout the entire school,{w=.4} even though I’m pretty sure he wasn’t using the PA system."
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 5
 
     show rosa:
         easeout 1 xalign 1.5
@@ -263,6 +270,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     "She must never find out about Saturnia."
     pause .5
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg' fadein 1.0
     scene garden
     show spears neutral flip:
@@ -346,6 +354,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     St "You should all pair off now to split the work evenly,{w=.4} decide amongst yourselves."
     show stella neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     stop music fadeout 3
     show rosa:
         easeout 1 xalign 1.5
@@ -364,6 +373,7 @@ label chapter_5:
     "Everyone else almost immediately groups off."
     pause .5
 
+    stop ambient fadeout 3
     play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Leaving just me{w=.3} and take a wild guess who else."
@@ -466,6 +476,7 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     "Damn my scrawny arms."
 
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg'
     stop music fadeout 3
     show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Alright this is good."
@@ -784,9 +795,23 @@ label chapter_5:
     pause .25
     Ro "An-{w=.2}on!{w=.5} Why are you still in there?{w=.5} Get up niño,{w=.3} get up!"
 
-    # B: leaving this without a visual for now due to the reasons in the previous comment
+    # B: I know this visual doesn't really work so well because it's not clear that Anon was meant to be lying in the flowerbed, but whatever
-    "She grabs one of my hands and{w=.2} wHOA-"
+    show rosa:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
+    "She grabs one of my hands and{w=.4} {nw}"
+    show anon fear:
+        easein_back 0.7 xalign 0.05
+    show rosa:
+        easein_back 0.7 xalign 0.5
+    extend "wHOA-"
 
+    show rosa:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.65
+    show anon:
+        easein 0.5 xalign -0.1
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    
     A "You trying to rip my arm off?"
 
     "She grabs a bicep proudly."
@@ -1422,60 +1447,117 @@ label chapter_5:
     Ro "You better!"
     pause .5
 
-    scene outside school with fade
+    scene outside school 
-    show anon neutral at acenter with moveinleft
+    with Fade(1,0,1)
 
-    "There aren’t many cars in the parking lot, so finding Fang shouldn’t be too hard to find."
+    "There aren’t many cars in the parking lot,{w=.4} so Fang shouldn’t be too hard to find."
+
+    # B: this music is meant to play as per the audio direction doc, but it's pretty chill considering Fang is flipping out
     play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
-    "That pair of wings rustling in-between two parked cars is probably a hint, not sure."
+    "That pair of wings rustling in-between two parked cars is probably a hint,{w=.4} not sure."
+    pause .5
 
-    "I silently approach, hiding behind the other cars in the lot."
+    "I silently approach,{w=.4} hiding behind the other cars in the lot."
 
+    show fang angry with dissolve:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5
     "She’s huddled around the passenger door of a garishly yellow minivan."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Wait, is she…?"
+    "Wait,{w=.4} is she{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
 
-    "Shit, I gotta stop her."
+    "Shit,{w=.4} I gotta stop her."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Fang, what are you doing?!"
+    show anon concerned:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang very angry flip with dissolve:
+    A "Fang,{w=.5} what are you doing?!"
-       xalign 1.4 yalign 0.0
 
-    F "Fuck off, fuck-knuckle."
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.6
+    show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+    F "Fuck off,{w=.2} fuck-knuckle."
+    pause .5
+    show fang angry with dissolve
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "Fang, don’t break into a teachers’ car, we’ll get-"
+    A "Fang,{w=.4} {cps=*.75}don’t break into a teacher's car{w},{/cps}{cps=*.5} we’ll get-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
 
+    show fang:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.2
+    show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Shut the fuck up cunt smuggler I’m focusing on this."
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     "I’m over it."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Why are you doing this?"
 
-    show fang angry flip
+    show fang angry flip with dissolve
 
-    F "... It’ll be fun."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}It’ll be fun."
 
-    F "Hehehehe…"
+    F "{cps=*.5}Hehehehe{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "Why, you want to join in on a joyride?"
+    F "Why,{w=.4} you want to join in on a joyride?"
 
     "She looks at me like it’s a genuine question."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "No, I don’t."
+    A "No,{w=.4} I don’t."
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang kicking with dissolve:
+    show fang:
-       xalign 1.6 yalign 0.0
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8
-    show anon fear at sleft with move
+    pause .25
+    show fang very angry with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .25
+    show fang:
+        easeout_back 0.5 xalign 1.3
+    pause 0.5
+    # TODO: would love an impact-with-suspension-creak SFX or something here
+    # TODO: also a car alarm
+    show anon fear
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' # placeholder
+    show fang kicking with hpunch
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Fang, what are you doing?!"
+    A "Fang,{w=.1} what are you doing?!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang:
+        block:
+            easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
+            pause .25
+            easeout_back 0.25 xalign 1.4
+            function fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy # placeholder
+            repeat 5
+        block:
+            easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
+            pause .5
+            easeout_back 0.25 xalign 1.4
+            function fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy # placeholder
+            repeat 5
+        block:
+            easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
+            pause .75
+            easeout_back 0.25 xalign 1.4
+            function fang_kicks_a_car_workaround_sfx_fuck_renpy # placeholder
+            repeat
+    pause 2
 
     A "Stop kicking the car!!"
+    pause .5
 
     A "Damn it Fang!"
 
@@ -1489,138 +1571,240 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     F "What do you care?!"
 
-    F "We’re already in detention, what’s a FEW MORE DAYS?!"
+    F "We’re already in detention,{w=.4} what’s a FEW MORE DAYS?!"
-    show anon angry with dissolve
+
-    A "... TO JAIL, FANG."
+    show anon angry with Dissolve(.25)
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}TO JAIL,{w=.3} FANG."
+    pause .5
 
     F "GO."
 
     F "AWAY."
+    pause .5
 
     A "YOU WANT TO GET OUR PARENTS INVOLVED?!"
+    pause .5
 
-    "Fang stops kicking the glass, drained of energy and out of breath."
+    show fang:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 1.0
+    pause 1
+    show fang sad with dissolve
+
+    "Fang stops kicking the glass,{w=.4} drained of energy and out of breath."
 
     show fang sad at sright
     show anon neutral
     with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
+    "Thankfully,{w=.4} the glass isn’t even scratched."
+    pause .5
 
-    "Thankfully, the glass isn’t even scratched."
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You’re right for being angry at me,{w=.5} you’re talented and skilled,{w=.4} and I got nothing to show for myself,{w=.4} and what I did was wrong{cps=*.1}..{/cps}"
 
-    A "... You’re right for being angry at me, you’re talented and skilled, and I got nothing to show for myself, and what I did was wrong.."
+    A "But you’re better than this,{w=.4} come on."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "But you’re better than this, come on."
+    F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
-    F "..."
 
     "Fang won’t look my direction."
 
     "At least she hasn’t started kicking the car again."
+    pause .5
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Might be a good idea to give her some space."
+    pause .5
 
-    "... Might be a good idea to give her some space."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
     "All of a sudden I feel like I shouldn’t be here."
+    pause .5
 
     play music 'audio/OST/you need gopher chucks.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
     unknown "HEY!!"
 
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.2
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.1
+    with None
+    show fang surprised flip
+    show anon ohshit flip
+    with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause .5
+
     unknown "WHAT ARE YOU GUYS DOING TO MY CAR?!"
 
+    show dimmer_light behind anon, fang with Dissolve(.25)
     "We freeze."
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
-      "Get out of there.":
+        "Get out of there.":
-        scene black with fade
+            pass
-      "GET OUT OF THERE.":
+        "GET OUT OF THERE.":
-        scene black with fade
+            pass
-      "GET THE FUCK OUT OF DODGE.":
+        "{b}GET THE FUCK OUT OF DODGE.{/b}":
-        scene black with fade
+            pass
+    
+    scene black with fade
 
     "Fang immediately bolts towards the front of the school."
 
-    "I follow after, legs pumping furiously in an attempt to both catch up to Fang and avoid the teacher screeching at us from behind."
+    "I follow after,{w=.4} legs pumping furiously in an attempt to both catch up to Fang and avoid the teacher screeching at us from behind."
 
-    "I see Fang veer into the school, the door closing slowly after."
+    "I see Fang veer into the school,{w=.4} the door closing slowly after."
 
     "By the jacket on my back I’m able to slip in just before the door shuts completely."
 
-    "Fang is panting in the stairwell near the door. And I’m sure I’m redder than I was earlier with the vines."
+    "Fang is panting in the stairwell near the door.{w=.5} And I’m sure I’m redder than I was earlier with the vines."
 
-    scene garden with fade
+    scene hallway with fade
-    show fang angry at sleft
+    pause .5
-    show anon neutral at aright
+    show fang sad:
-    F "Why… hah hah… did you… follow me?"
+        yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    show anon neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.9
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
+    with dissolve
+    pause 1
+
+    show fang sad flip with dissolve
+    pause .5
+    F "Why{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} hah{w=.3} hah{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} did you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} follow me?"
+    pause .5
 
     "Why?"
 
-    A "Be haaaaah… because… I’m sorry…"
+    A "Be{w=.2} {cps=*.5}haaaaah{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} because{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I’m sorry{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    pause 1
 
-    "Her snear returns and she makes to turn away."
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2#
+    pause .2
+    show fang angry with dissolve 
+    "Her sneer returns and she makes to turn away."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "I fucked up. Yes, I was at that concert. And yes, I laughed. I never expected to actually become your friend."
+    A "I fucked up.{w=.75} Yes,{w=.4} I was at that concert.{w=.6} And yes,{w=.3} I laughed.{w=.6} I never expected to actually become your friend."
+    pause .5
 
     "Her wings block my view of her."
 
-    "But she hasn’t left yet. Maybe I can fix this after all."
+    "But she hasn’t left yet.{w=.4} Maybe I can fix this after all."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "I just wanted to coast through school. I was happy being a loner."
+    A "I just wanted to coast through school.{w=.5} I was happy being a loner."
 
-    A "I’ve always been one, after all."
+    A "I’ve always been one,{w=.3} after all."
-    show anon neutral at acenter with move
+    pause .5
-    hide fang neutral with dissolve
+
+    show fang:
+        easeout_cubic 1 xalign 2.5
+    pause .4
+    hide fang with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     "Without a word Fang climbs the stairs."
+    pause 1
 
     play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.6
+    pause 1.5
 
     "Fuck."
+    pause .5
 
     "I consider following but her silence was evidence enough she wants nothing to do with me."
 
     "And standing here by myself I have time to think of my own admission."
+    pause .5
 
-    "If Fang leaves me alone, I’ll get exactly what I want. Right?"
+    "If Fang leaves me alone,{w=.4} I’ll get exactly what I want.{w=.4} Right?"
 
     "She could probably talk Trish and Reed into leaving me alone too."
 
     "I’ll get the easy life I wanted."
+    pause .5
 
     "So why the fuck do I feel absolutely empty right now?"
+    pause .5
 
+    show anon sad with dissolve
     "I sigh and slump over on the stairs."
 
     A "Can today get any worse?"
+    pause .5
 
-    show stella neutral at stleft
+    show stella considering:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.5
+    show stella:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.1
+    with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
     St "Karma would suggest yes."
+    pause .5
 
     "Oh."
 
-    "You know, I always thought that tempting fate thing was just a dumb cliche."
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    "You know,{w=.4} I always thought that tempting fate thing was just a dumb cliche."
+
+    "It still is.{w=.4} But maybe Stella has a good point about astrology."
+    pause .5
 
-    "It still is. But maybe Stella has a good point about astrology."
     show stella explanatory
-    St "Rosa! I found our errant runaway!"
+    St "Rosa!{w=.4} I found our errant runaway!"
+    show stella neutral with Dissolve(.25)
 
     "I hear the shrill screech of a latina banshee approach."
-    show rosa angry at sright with dissolve
+
+    show rosa angry flip behind anon:
+        yalign 0.2 xalign 2.6
+    show rosa:
+        easein_cubic .75 xalign 1.5
+    with dissolve
+
+    show anon:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.45
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
     Ro "Where did you go?!"
 
-    Ro "You were supposed to get Fang and return! RETURN!!"
+    Ro "You were supposed to get Fang and return!{w=.4} {nw}"#
+    show rosa:
+        easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.25
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.35
+    extend "RETURN!!"
 
-    A "Oh… Right. Yeah, uh… Sorry."
+    A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Right.{w=.4} Yeah,{w=.2} uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Sorry."
 
     Ro "You will be sorry!"
 
-    St "There’s two hours left for the rest of the students, but that makes four for you."
+    show stella considering with Dissolve(.25)
-    show rosa neutral
+    St "There’s two hours left for the rest of the students,{w=.4} but that makes four for you."
-    Ro "Do not worry An-on! We stay as well!"
+
+    show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.75)
+    pause .5
+    show rosa neutral flip
+    Ro "Do not worry An-{w=.15}on!{w=.5} We stay as well!"
+    pause .5
+
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{cps=*.3}Greaaat.{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1)
 
-    A "... Greaaat."
-    scene black with fade
     "The next few hours were grueling hell."
 
     "Carrying bags of the most rancid smelling fertilizer back and forth…"