From e6a26869c042d83cd6ba82c91f38a5af3b980121 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nutbuster Date: Sun, 31 Oct 2021 18:02:02 +1100 Subject: [PATCH] Revert "13C Another FINAL Revision" This reverts commit 315c5e34a26c2b2982681a1c03986f4f15a343b7. --- ...13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy | 49 +++++-------------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy index 9eb89ac..0e887ce 100644 --- a/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy +++ b/game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy @@ -2289,14 +2289,12 @@ label chapter_13C: A "..." show anon sad flip with dissolve - A "...We might not see each other again..." + A "...We might not even see each other again..." - A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste life waiting for me..." + A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste time waiting for me." A "But...{w=0.5} I'll never forget you, Lucy..." - A "Never." - show fang surprised with dissolve Lucy "..." @@ -2314,52 +2312,31 @@ label chapter_13C: Lucy "..." - A "Lucy...{w=0.5} it’s okay..." + "She lets out a loud sigh." - "Lucy lets out a loud sigh." + Lucy "...I’ve never told this to anyone other than Trish...{w=0.5} but there was this guy I dated back in my freshman year." - Lucy "...I’ve never told this to anyone other than Trish..." + Lucy "We only lasted a week though." + + Lucy "Same with the next, and the one after..." Lucy "..." - Lucy "There was this guy I dated back in my freshman year." + Lucy "I’ve never had a relationship that’s lasted more than a week..." - Lucy "He was...{w=0.5} only one who was interested in my plain and dull ass." - - Lucy "We only lasted a few months though." - - Lucy "I...{w=0.5} up driving him away with all my..." - - Lucy "..." + Lucy "Eventually, I gave up on dating..." show fang angry with dissolve - "Lucy grits her teeth in anger." - - Lucy "I fucked it all up by dumping my baggage!" + "She grits her teeth in anger." Lucy "Every time, I fucked it all up by dumping my baggage, or by being some social retard!" - "Lucy covers her face with her hands." + "She covers her face with her hands." - Lucy "After he broke up with me, no one else would even consider dating me." - - Lucy "I became that weirdo everyone avoided!" - - Lucy "..." - - Lucy "...Eventually, I gave up on dating altogether..." - - #TODO: Choreography kino here 2 - "Lucy lets out a sob." - - Lucy "Anon...{w=0.5} I never wanted to dump all my baggage on you..." + Lucy "Anon...{w=0.5} never wanted to dump all my baggage on you..." Lucy "It's wasn’t right!" - Lucy "It's...{w=0.5} wasn’t right..." - - Lucy "..." - #TODO: Choreography kino here "I move to place a hand on Lucy's shoulder." @@ -2367,7 +2344,7 @@ label chapter_13C: A "You can let it all out." - "Lucy takes a deep breath." + "She takes a deep breath, then exhales." show fang anguish show anon concerned flip