From e77bcbb9a356c46488bd53f96a961465b9ac0696 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: CaveManon Date: Tue, 29 Jun 2021 01:01:03 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/issues/41#issuecomment-585 --- .../1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy | 52 +++++++++++++------ 1 file changed, 36 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index ef2887e..3f27f49 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ image naomi silo shocked = im.MatrixColor("naomi/naomi shocked.png",im.matrix.br # Naser's position when helping Anon get up transform nmidright: - xalign 1.5 yalign 0.1 + xalign 1.5 yalign 0.08 # Naomi's position when handing the brochure to Anon transform scloserleft: @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ label chapter_1: I "On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary" stop music fadeout 1.0 - + ###maybe add some ambiance here? scene garden show anon neutral flip at scenter with fade @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ label chapter_1: I "I lay on the ground,{w=0.4} ass hurt from hitting jagged concrete and splintered wood." I "Thank god for jeans." - + ###Maybe a good idea to have this song fade in, the silence from before clashes a bit. Though, I will hold off on implementing to see how the bench scene would feel with ambience. scene pathetic at Pan((0, 1031), (0, 0), 10.0) with dissolve play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' @@ -271,7 +271,9 @@ label chapter_1: with dissolve I "The hand tightens around my own and pulls roughly." - + ###Naser moves up a bit here, is this intentional? Maybe make it a bit more subtle. + #changed to make it a bit more stubtle, but feel free to tweak as you please + #Documentation on MoveTransition : https://git.snootgame.xyz/Cavemanon/SnootGame/wiki/Tips#MoveTransition show naser neutral flip at nmidright with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve @@ -473,6 +475,8 @@ label chapter_1: A "uh{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.4} I{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}" + ###might be wise to make this more abrupt and maybe fade in some music too + I "There’s whispers now.{w} The hushed tones,{w=0.4} silenced snickers,{w=0.4} blending with the everpresent stares.{w} My heart hammers at my chest and I am sure that they all can hear it.{w=0.5} See the cold chill racing over me." show dimmer_darker behind anon, jinflip with dissolve @@ -544,6 +548,7 @@ label chapter_1: show anon fear flip: xzoom 1 + ###Artists and Writers were hesitant about flipping with zoom last time I did it. Might want to make another version in case they don't approve I "Said disaster was a hand grabbing my shoulder and turning me about." I "My plate of pizza shaped cardboard threatened to smear across my shirt." @@ -593,6 +598,7 @@ label chapter_1: A "{cps=*0.25}Suuuure{/cps}{cps=*0.1}..{/cps}" + ###Might be wise to pull out a different track. If you need more, our sound guy has plenty. stop ambient fadeout 0.25 play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' @@ -702,10 +708,11 @@ label chapter_1: show naomi: easein 0.4 xalign 0.9 - - N "Hey!{w=0.4} Don’t leave me out of the conversation!" - + ###Naomi should change to her cheery expression quicker + show naomi happy flip with dissolve + + N "Hey!{w=0.4} Don’t leave me out of the conversation!" N "How about I help you pick out some cheap food after school?" @@ -955,6 +962,8 @@ label chapter_1: Sp "Oh,{w=0.4} I do need you to come by my office tomorrow for some paperwork." I "I nod and go back to the door where Naser is standing,{w=0.3} holding it open for the last of the audience to go inside." + ###Rock boing no longer plays in the auditorium + stop music fadeout 1.0 scene auditorium show anon neutral flip at aright @@ -1051,7 +1060,8 @@ label chapter_1: pause .5 show naser at nleft with MoveTransition(0.4, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) - play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 2.2 + #play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 2.2 + play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg" show naser table hit behind anon with vpunch pause 0.5 @@ -1086,6 +1096,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naser considering with dissolve + ###Might wanna get a different ring tone play sound 'audio/OST/ringtone.ogg' I "Naser’s phone rings.{w=0.4} He moves aside to answer it." @@ -1176,7 +1187,10 @@ label chapter_1: I "The band doesn’t bother introducing themselves." - play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' + ###Here's the garbage that was supposed to play + #also im convinced link related is the inspiration of song related + #https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pbe9DkMyL8k + play music 'audio/OST/its_the_piece_of_shit_you_asked_for.ogg' I "Instead the purple one begins plucking her bass." @@ -1210,7 +1224,7 @@ label chapter_1: stop ambient fadeout 1 unknown "{cps=*0.5}PFFFT AHAHAHA{/cps}{w=0.4} THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK!!" - play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 2 fadein 1 + play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 1.0 #(In-CG insult layers) window hide @@ -1266,7 +1280,8 @@ label chapter_1: #(In-CG insult layers) I "I watch as she grabs her bass and takes the arm of the purple one,{w=0.3} rushing off stage with the pink drummer." - + ###stop le music, needs some fine tuning + stop music fadeout 3.0 scene black with fade window hide @@ -1279,7 +1294,8 @@ label chapter_1: I "Oh God I can’t take this,{w=0.3} I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much,{w=0.5} I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave" # play ambient fadeout 2.0 - play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 1 fadeout 1.0 fadein 0.25 + #play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 1 fadeout 1.0 fadein 0.25 + play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadeout 1.0 fadein 0.25 scene auditorium show anon neutral flip at aright @@ -1411,6 +1427,7 @@ label chapter_1: pause 0.5 + ###Maybe a better alarm noise is needed play sound "audio/effects/Alarm.ogg" I "{cps=*20}*BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{w=0.7} *BLEEP*{/cps}" @@ -1441,7 +1458,8 @@ label chapter_1: I "With practiced movements I execute a proper combat roll from bed,{w=0.4} tackling the floor and headbutting it into submission." - play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 1.8 + #play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg" volume 1.8 + play sound "audio/effects/Slam.ogg" I "With practiced movements I execute a proper combat roll from bed, tackling the floor and headbutting it into submission.{fast}{w=0.6} My foe defeated,{w=0.3} I groan in victory." with vpunch @@ -2129,7 +2147,8 @@ label chapter_1: pause 0.75 stop music - play ambient 'audio/effects/tinnitus.wav' fadein 5 volume 0.25 # TODO: use Spears yell + tinnitus SFX + #play ambient 'audio/effects/tinnitus.ogg' fadein 5 volume 0.25 # TODO: use Spears yell + tinnitus SFX + play ambient 'audio/effects/tinnitus.ogg' fadein 5.0 Sp "{b}NAOMI!!{/b}" with vpunch @@ -2517,7 +2536,8 @@ label chapter_1: I "Looking around for a place to sit I see the aggravating creamsicle waving at me." - play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' volume 0.65 fadein 0.05 + #play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' volume 0.65 fadein 0.05 + play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg' fadein 0.05 I "Next to her is Naser with a complicated expression." @@ -2685,4 +2705,4 @@ label chapter_1: A "Yeah.{w=0.5} If you need any help Naser,{w=0.4} I owe ya for the pizza." # and CUT :^) - return \ No newline at end of file + return