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2021-11-26 19:48:58 -06:00
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game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy
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@@ -57,6 +57,8 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .5
"I whip out my phone, and consider the best way to make people upset online."
window hide
window auto
pause .5
menu:
"Reply to the obvious shill thread":
@@ -65,7 +67,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Bait the obvious underaged poster":
pass
pause .5
"The thread goes 404 right as I'm ready to post my well thought-out reply."
"Better hide my phone before someone sees fit to take it from me, the only human around town. I think."
@@ -74,7 +76,7 @@ label chapter_1:
$ renpy.music.set_volume(0.8, 8, 'ambient')
play ambient2 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdMurmurLoop.ogg' volume 1.4 fadein 8.0
pause .5
pause 1.5
"It’s the sounds that reach me first.{w=.4} The chatter of people milling about."
pause .5
@@ -94,6 +96,8 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .5
"{cps=*0.2}{b}{size=+10}{i}Volcano High{/i}{/size}{/b}{/cps}"
window hide
window auto
pause .5
$ renpy.music.set_volume(0.7, 0, 'ambient1')
@@ -110,16 +114,20 @@ label chapter_1:
window hide
window auto
pause 0.5
show anonphone with easeinbottom
pause 0.5
"A check of my phone says I’m 30 minutes early."
"Wonderful."
window hide
window auto
pause 0.5
hide anonphone with easeoutbottom
pause 0.5
"I move to the entrance, only to see all of the steps occupied by students."
@@ -259,7 +267,8 @@ label chapter_1:
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause 0.5
scene garden
show anon neutral flip at scenter
show anon neutral flip at scenter:
yalign 0.1
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorNatureLoop.ogg' fadein 6
play ambient1 'audio/effects/teenageCrowdFarLoop.ogg' volume 0.4 fadein 2.0
with Dissolve(1)
@@ -273,14 +282,22 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .5
"It was perfect."
pause 0.5
window hide
window auto
pause 0.25
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45
easein_back 1 yalign 0.0
pause 1.5
"I flop down on the wet bench and the violent crack from it makes my heart drop."
pause .5
"Almost perfect but good enough."
pause .5
"I feel a tightness in my chest,and my lungs fight to draw air in."
"I feel a tightness in my chest and my lungs fight to draw air in."
show anon sad flip with dissolve
pause 0.5
@@ -296,9 +313,10 @@ label chapter_1:
"Three weeks."
"It took a day for me to want to change schools, and three weeks to make it happen."
"It took a day for me to want to change schools, three weeks to make it happen, and now this is my life for the next year. "
pause 0.5
"And this is my life now for the next year. I think back to my old man’s ultimatum."
"I think back to my old man’s ultimatum."
"{i}Once the lease is done, Anon, either college or the service.{/i}"
@@ -345,6 +363,8 @@ label chapter_1:
"I lay on the ground, ass hurt from hitting jagged concrete and splintered wood."
"Thank god for jeans."
window hide
window auto
stop ambient fadeout 1
stop ambient1 fadeout 1
@@ -360,11 +380,11 @@ label chapter_1:
"I groan."
A "{cps=*0.35}Never better{/cps}"
A "{cps=*0.35}Never better...{/cps}"
"I instinctively apply my ‘chill guy’ facade in the presence of strangers to hide how uneasy I am today."
"A hand is held over my face.{w=0.5} In my pain addled confusion I shake it."
"A hand is held over my face.{w=0.5} In my pain addled confusion, I shake it."
pause .5
unknown "Naser!"
@@ -389,7 +409,9 @@ label chapter_1:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
pause 0.5
show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve
show anon neutral with dissolve:
yalign -0.2 xalign 0.5
easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.1
"The force is enough for my feet to get under me, stumbling back up to stand before the pair of strangers."
@@ -450,12 +472,12 @@ label chapter_1:
"The title alone makes me gag."
"The pink one, Naomi, looks at me expectantly."
"The orange one, Naomi, looks at me expectantly."
pause .5
"The brochure is full of the typical trivialities."
"College prep, financial assistance, after school programs."
"College prep, financial assistance, after school programs{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"None of it matters."
@@ -753,7 +775,7 @@ label chapter_1:
easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.45
show naomi happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
N "We share first period and english together!"
N "We share first period and English together!"
N "Come on, I’ll introduce you to the class and you’ll be able to make all sorts of new friends!"
@@ -1070,24 +1092,31 @@ label chapter_1:
"I don’t want to make a scene."
pause .6
A "{cps=*0.2}Suuuure{/cps}{cps=*0.1}..{/cps}"
A "{cps=*0.2}Suuuure{/cps}{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
window hide
window auto
pause .5
scene black with Dissolve(1)
#TODO: music variation
stop ambient fadeout 3
play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1
pause .25
scene cafeteria
show anon neutral at aleft
show naomi neutral flip at sright
show naser neutral flip behind naomi:
xalign 0.7 yalign 0.1
with fade
with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Before I even sit down the barrage of questions begins."
pause .5
show naomi explanatory flip:
ease 0.18 yalign 0.05
@@ -1095,7 +1124,13 @@ label chapter_1:
pause .25
repeat
N "SO!{w=0.4} What do you think of Volcano High!{w=0.3} How about your classes?{w=0.3} You seem-"
N "SO!{w=0.5}{nw}"
N "What do you think of Volcano High?{w=0.4}{nw}"
N "How about your classes?{w=0.3}{nw}"
N "You seem-{w=0.3}{nw}"
"I just nod along, starting to not pay attention."
@@ -1198,7 +1233,7 @@ label chapter_1:
N "I know some {i}great{/i} vegan shops in the area!"
pause .5
"My stomach roils at the V-word."
"My stomach rolls at the V-word."
A "{cps=*0.25}Maaaaybe{/cps} another time, sorry."
@@ -1351,7 +1386,7 @@ label chapter_1:
A "{cps=*0.15}FWR?{/cps}{w=0.4} Like, Franklin W. Roosevelt?"
Nas "Nah.{w=0.4} Fucked wing retard."
Nas "Nah.{w=0.4} Fucked-wing retard."
show naser unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "Fang’s words, not mine."
@@ -1403,7 +1438,7 @@ label chapter_1:
stop music fadeout 6
pause .5
"Finally the doors open and I smell the cheesy, heart clogging goodness within."
"Finally the doors open and I smell the cheesy, heart-clogging goodness within."
show naser happy with dissolve
Nas "Sweet. Come on, Anon."
@@ -1529,7 +1564,7 @@ label chapter_1:
hide naser with dissolve
pause .5
"Left on my own I stack my plate up with some quality grease topped delight."
"Left on my own I stack my plate up with some quality grease-topped delight."
show anon:
easein_quart 1.0 xalign 1.15 yalign 0.01
@@ -1622,22 +1657,14 @@ label chapter_1:
A "I don’t, what are you talking about man?"
show naser annoyed at nleft with dissolve
pause 1.0
show naser angry with Dissolve(0.25)
stop music fadeout 3
Nas "{cps=*0.5}I brought them here so Fang has an audience.{/cps}"
pause 0.25
$ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.02, 'music')
stop music fadeout 0.2
pause 0.75
pause 1
A "Oh."
$ renpy.music.set_volume(1, 0, 'music')
pause 1
play sound 'audio/effects/cellphone.ogg' # CC0
@@ -1654,7 +1681,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naser:
easeout_cubic 1 xalign -1.0
show naser flip neutral with Dissolve(0.25)
pause 0.25
pause 0.15
hide naser with dissolve
pause 0.5
@@ -2107,7 +2134,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Finally, I lean out of bed and turn the alarm clock off."
"I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school, and it takes twenty to walk."
"I have a good forty-five minutes before I need to be at school - and it takes twenty to walk."
"That leaves twenty-five minutes to get ready."
@@ -2130,7 +2157,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 1.5
"A tiny one room apartment with only a computer, bed, television, and fridge."
"A tiny, one room apartment with only a computer, bed, television, and fridge."
"A whole year in this shithole."
@@ -2144,7 +2171,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show anon neutral at acenter with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Picking myself up, I slide into todays’{w=0.2} (and everydays’){w=0.2} clothes and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before."
"Picking myself up, I slide into todays’{w=0.2} (and everyday's){w=0.2} clothes and pour myself a bowl of off-brand cereal I picked up the day before."
"My eyes scan over my phone while I shovel my sugary breakfast into my mouth."
pause .5
@@ -2157,10 +2184,10 @@ label chapter_1:
"*Crunch*{fast}"
"Like a poorly oiled machine until it runs out of fuel with a noisy slurp."
"Like a poorly-oiled machine until it runs out of fuel with a noisy slurp."
pause .5
"Soon enough it's time to leave for school. I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders."
"Soon enough, it's time to leave for school. I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders."
"I take my jacket off the hanger and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -2190,7 +2217,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"I approach the grand building, looking to find a place in line between the other students trundling into the front doors."
"The halls before class are as crowded as always, hundreds of students filing in unison towards their homerooms."
"The halls before class are as crowded as always, with hundreds of students filing in unison towards their homerooms."
"By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, I've walked the same path twice already after all."
pause .5