From 3af087ee77c2d39533b2211cd60b846894ce545b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Thu, 24 Jun 2021 21:05:45 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework concert disaster & subsequent run in with Spears --- .../1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy | 119 ++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 70 insertions(+), 49 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index 4be5664..c849492 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -942,7 +942,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "I did." - "I take a box down from the stack. Others have already started stacking their plates." + "I take a box down from the stack.{w=0.3} Others have already started stacking their plates." "I check the logo on the box." @@ -974,6 +974,8 @@ label chapter_1: "I lean against the wall, chewing bits of supreme and observing the rest of the crowd." + show dimmer_light behind anon with dissolve + unknown "{cps=*0.6}-nother shitshow-{/cps}" unknown "{cps=*0.6}She’s so stupid-{/cps}" @@ -982,6 +984,8 @@ label chapter_1: unknown "{cps=*0.6}Bunch of losers-{/cps}" + hide dimmer_light with dissolve + "Everyone seems to share the same sentiment." "So why the hell did they even show up for this?" @@ -1004,13 +1008,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "{i}What?!{/i}{fast}" - # show anon neutral at acenter with move - # show anon neutral flip at aright with move - - # show naser angry flip at ncenter with dissolve - # show naser angry flip at sleft with move - - # ANGERY dinosaurs vibrating at incredible high speed + # VERY angry dinosaur vibrating at incredible high speed show naser angry flip: linear 0.05 xalign 0.595 linear 0.05 xalign 0.605 @@ -1067,7 +1065,7 @@ label chapter_1: Nas "Fa-{w=0.5}{nw}" window hide - with hpunch + with hpunch # TODO: some crash / crack SFX would punctuate these interruptions, think AA "The voice on the other end is loud and shrill." @@ -1094,7 +1092,7 @@ label chapter_1: show naser neutral with Dissolve(0.25) - Nas "Look,{w=0.4} whatever happens{w=0.3} promise you won’t hold this against them." + Nas "Look,{w=0.5} whatever happens{w=0.3} promise you won’t hold this against them." Nas "They're actually a really a nice person once you get to know them" @@ -1110,61 +1108,63 @@ label chapter_1: hide naser with Dissolve(1.5) - "I enter the hall and take a seat in the back, away from the rest of the crowd." + "I enter the hall and take a seat in the back,{w=0.3} away from the rest of the crowd." scene black with fade "The lights dim and the curtains are drawn open." - stop music fadeout 1.0 + stop music fadeout 1.0 # TODO: was there meant to be music playing before this? - scene fang band playing with fade + scene fang band playing with Dissolve(2.0) "Onstage is a trio of people my age." - "I think Fang is the drummer? He doesn’t look related to Naser, maybe it is the main front-woman?" + "I think Fang is the drummer?{w=0.5} He doesn’t look related to Naser,{w=0.4} maybe it is the main front-woman?" "That must be Naser’s sister." A "Wh-" - "Then why the whole confusion over her sex? For fuck’s sake." + "Then why the whole confusion over her sex?{w=0.4} For fuck’s sake." - "I’m just getting thrown around today. I don’t know." + "I’m just getting thrown around today.{w=0.5} I don’t know." "She looks familiar." "The band doesn’t bother introducing themselves." - play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' "Instead the purple one begins plucking her bass." "It all went tumbling down from there." - "What I thought was a guitar sounded horrifically wrong, far too heavy." + "What I thought was a guitar sounded horrifically wrong,{w=0.5} far too heavy." "The lead guitarist was using a fucking bass." "And then the vocals kicked in." - "It’s horrific screeching, combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass created a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed." + "It’s horrific screeching,{w=0.3} combined with the amelodious shredding on a bass created a cacophony equal to hundreds of cats ritualistically sacrificed." "I fight the urge to cover my ears." - "I don’t know too much about music, but even I know that you don’t use two basses in one band unless you know exactly what you’re doing." + "I don’t know too much about music,{w=0.4} but even I know that you don’t use two basses in one band unless you know exactly what you’re doing." - "Ooooooh nooooooo." + "{cps=*0.4}Ooooooh nooooooo.{/cps}" - "Ooooooooh God." + "{cps=*0.5}Ooooooooh{/cps} God." - "What were they thinking?!" + "What were they thinking?!{fast}" with vpunch "I looked back to the crowd to gauge their interest." "Surely I’m not alone in thinking this is an absolute travesty." unknown "PFFFT AHAHAHA THEY STILL FUCKING SUCK!!" + + play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' volume 1.5 fadein 2.0 + #(In-CG insult layers) window hide $ i = 0 @@ -1175,34 +1175,37 @@ label chapter_1: #(In-CG insult layers) - "The crowd was standing, jeering and laughing with whoever said that." + "The crowd was standing,{w=0.3} jeering and laughing with whoever said that." "More words were said but the laughter eclipsed them and the music." - "Wait, what happened to the music?" + "Wait,{w=0.4} what happened to the music?" - "On-stage, the trio looked panicked." + "On-stage,{w=0.3} the trio looked panicked." - "The drummer was inching off stage, while the purple bassist was about to break down into tears." + "The drummer was inching off stage,{w=0.4} while the purple bassist was about to break down into tears." - "But the frontwoman stood there. Stood her ground." + "But the frontwoman stood there.{w=0.7} Stood her ground." #(In-CG insult layers) window hide $ showCG() #(In-CG insult layers) - scene fang band screaming + scene fang band screaming with vpunch - unknown "FUCK YOU!" + unknown "{b}FUCK YOU!{/b}{fast}" - "She tossed her bass aside, raising both hands and proudly displaying a finger on each of them." + "She tossed her bass aside,{w=0.3} raising both hands and proudly displaying a finger on each of them." unknown "FUCK ALL OF YOU!" - unknown "NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU, BITCH!" + window hide + pause 0.5 - "Pffft… That struck a chord with her." + unknown "NO ONE WOULD WANT TO FUCK YOU,{w=0.2} BITCH!" + + "Pffft{cps=*0.2}...{/cps}{w=0.2} That struck a chord with her." #(In-CG insult layers) @@ -1214,7 +1217,7 @@ label chapter_1: $ i = i + 1 #(In-CG insult layers) - "I watch as she grabs her bass and takes the arm of the purple one, rushing off stage with the pink drummer." + "I watch as she grabs her bass and takes the arm of the purple one,{w=0.3} rushing off stage with the pink drummer." scene black with fade @@ -1226,16 +1229,21 @@ label chapter_1: pause 1 $ i = i + 1 - "Oh God I can’t take this, I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much, I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave" + "Oh God I can’t take this,{w=0.3} I’m gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much,{w=0.5} I’m just gonna grab my pizza and leave" + + stop ambient fadeout 2.0 + scene auditorium show anon neutral flip at aright show spears neutral at sleft + show dimmer_darker behind anon, spears with fade - "I turn towards the door and see Principal Spears, a fierce glare freezing me in place." - Sp "Anon." + "I turn towards the door and see Principal Spears,{w=0.4} a fierce glare freezing me in place." - "Oh fuck" + Sp "Anon.{fast}" + + "{cps=*0.2}Oh fuck{/cps}" "His voice is even more stern than this morning." @@ -1245,41 +1253,54 @@ label chapter_1: Sp "I don’t want to hear about any of this come tomorrow." - Sp "I expect some goddamned maturity from you, Anon." + Sp "I expect some goddamned maturity from you,{w=0.2} Anon." Sp "You’ll be an adult once you graduate." - A "Uh… Why me though?" + A "Uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}{w=0.3} Why me though?" - Sp "I’ve taught many students, and I can tell these things." + Sp "I’ve taught many students,{w=0.4} and I can tell these things." + + show anon fear flip + show spears: + easein_quart 1.0 xalign 0.5 "His hand lands on my shoulder." "It’s grip was firm as it weighed on me." - Sp "Listen here, Anon. You are not the only person in the world." + show anon neutral flip with Dissolve(1) + + Sp "Listen here,{w=0.2} Anon.{w=0.7} {cps=*0.5}You are not the only person in the world.{/cps}" Sp "Everyone’s fighting their own battles." "The hand squeezes before pushing me towards the door." - show anon neutral at aright + show anon neutral at aright with Dissolve(0.25) + + show spears: + xalign 0.6 + show anon: + xalign 1.1 + with MoveTransition(0.5, time_warp=_ease_in_time_warp) Sp "I want to see you in my office first thing tomorrow." - Sp "Now get out of here, this is the only warning that you’ll get from me." + Sp "Now get out of here,{w=0.4} this is the only warning that you’ll get from me." Sp "Next time it will be campus clean-up." - stop audio + stop music fadeout 0.5 + hide anon with Dissolve(1) + + show spears neutral flip with Dissolve(0.25) - stop sound - stop music "Behind me the principal’s voice shakes the room." - show spears angry with dissolve + show spears angry flip with vpunch - Sp "WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!" + Sp "{b}WHOSE SORRY ASS AM I GOING TO HAVE TO SUPLEX!{/b}" # TODO: suitable SFX scene hallway with dissolve show anon neutral at aleft