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@@ -10,73 +10,73 @@ label chapter_12C:
show fang neutral flip at sright with dissolve
F "I wish I could get some help for the other periods, this took way too long."
Lucy "I wish I could get some help for the other periods, this took way too long."
F "Fuck, man. Trish keeps staring at me during class expecting me to talk to her, I gotta avoid Reed and Stella now because they're always around her too, it's agonizing!"
Lucy "Fuck, man. Trish keeps staring at me during class expecting me to talk to her, I gotta avoid Reed and Stella now because they're always around her too, it's agonizing!"
F "I keep having these dreams where she mans up and I'm forced to talk to her again! They feel more like nightmares now!"
Lucy "I keep having these dreams where she mans up and I'm forced to talk to her again! They feel more like nightmares now!"
F "Rosa is too busy to help{w=0.2} - with the exercises, I mean - but I hope the camping trip will be fun."
Lucy "Rosa is too busy to help{w=0.2} - with the exercises, I mean - but I hope the camping trip will be fun."
A "Well it's done. All of it."
F "Thanks, Anon. You're a pretty cool guy."
Lucy "Thanks, Anon. You're a pretty cool guy."
A "No problem, I just like helping you, I guess."
F "...and without asking for anything in return."
Lucy "...and without asking for anything in return."
F "..."
Lucy "..."
hide fang
hide anon
show kissu1
with fade
F "You're so good to me."
Lucy "You're so good to me."
A "Thanks. F-{w=0.3} Lucy."
F "Is there nothing you really want from me?"
Lucy "Is there nothing you really want from me?"
A "You mean repay? I don't know, things are too good now, though."
F "More naps?"
Lucy "More naps?"
F "Or perhaps hugs?"
Lucy "Or perhaps hugs?"
F "Hand holding?"
Lucy "Hand holding?"
pause 0.5
"I'm sweating profusely."
F "Or maybe...{w=0.4}a kiss?"
Lucy "Or maybe...{w=0.4}a kiss?"
A "Kiss?{w=0.1} With that huge snoot?"
F "Why? Are you afraid? Have you never kissed a dinosaur before?"
Lucy "Why? Are you afraid? Have you never kissed a dinosaur before?"
A "No?"
F "Not even a human girl?"
Lucy "Not even a human girl?"
A "{cps=*0.5}Uhhh...{/cps}"
F "So I'm your first?{w=0.2} That's exciting."
Lucy "So I'm your first?{w=0.2} That's exciting."
A "This is so weird, I don't know how I'm feeling right now. Don't you feel weird too?"
F "I've kissed shorter snouts, yours can't be that different."
Lucy "I've kissed shorter snouts, yours can't be that different."
F "Uh...{w=0.3}look Anon, if it doesn't work out..."
Lucy "Uh...{w=0.3}look Anon, if it doesn't work out..."
F "...It won't change anything.{w=0.3} Right?"
Lucy "...It won't change anything.{w=0.3} Right?"
A "Promise?"
F "Of course I promise! Get over here you fucking pussy!"
Lucy "Of course I promise! Get over here you fucking pussy!"
A "O-okay."
F "I won't bite, though I've never had human before..."
Lucy "I won't bite, though I've never had human before..."
A "Okay, here it goes..."
scene black with fade
@@ -85,51 +85,51 @@ label chapter_12C:
A "Well?"
F "T-that’s just the lips!"
Lucy "T-that’s just the lips!"
"..."
F "T-the tongue, come on."
Lucy "T-the tongue, come on."
"..."
F "What are you doing?!"
Lucy "What are you doing?!"
A "Your mouth hinges way back, I have to hang my jaw."
F "Don’t do that, it’s stupid!"
Lucy "Don’t do that, it’s stupid!"
A "Wait, {i}you{/i} open wide now."
F "That’s even sillier."
Lucy "That’s even sillier."
"..."
F "*glug*{w=0.2} *hack*{w=0.2} *urk*"
Lucy "*glug*{w=0.2} *hack*{w=0.2} *urk*"
A "Oh god how long is your tongue?! I think I almost threw up."
F "*cough*{w=0.2} Oh god *cough*{w=0.2} I think I reached your tonsils! *hurk*"
Lucy "*cough*{w=0.2} Oh god *cough*{w=0.2} I think I reached your tonsils! *hurk*"
A "Shit sorry sorry sorr-"
F "No no. It’s fine.{w=0.2} Let me think."
Lucy "No no. It’s fine.{w=0.2} Let me think."
F "Let’s try the other one again."
Lucy "Let’s try the other one again."
A "O-okay…"
"..."
F "Don’t open as *mnph*...{w=0.4} wide."
Lucy "Don’t open as *mnph*...{w=0.4} wide."
"..."
F "Wait…"
Lucy "Wait…"
"..."
F "Tilt to the side… like this."
Lucy "Tilt to the side… like this."
"..."
@@ -139,21 +139,21 @@ label chapter_12C:
A "I don’t know…{w=0.2} I’ll probably never get the hang of this."
F "Really? I uh… {w=0.2}think it was… {w=0.2}nice."
Lucy "Really? I uh… {w=0.2}think it was… {w=0.2}nice."
A "Wait seriously?"
F "Y-yeah. You’re not a {i}bad{/i} kisser."
Lucy "Y-yeah. You’re not a {i}bad{/i} kisser."
A "Bullshit."
F "Seriously, here."
Lucy "Seriously, here."
"..."
"..."
F "Don’t be shy now…"
Lucy "Don’t be shy now…"
A "Lucy."
@@ -163,11 +163,11 @@ label chapter_12C:
show kissu2
with fade
F "See? Getting better."
Lucy "See? Getting better."
A "Mmm…"
F "I can feel your heart beating. It’s so loud."
Lucy "I can feel your heart beating. It’s so loud."
stop music fadeout 1.0
scene black with fade
A "Y-yeah,{w=0.2} same."
@@ -222,15 +222,15 @@ label chapter_12C:
Ro "{i}But I see the stars at night so well, so Stella has slumber parties often!{/i}"
F "{i}Anon! We should go to!{/i}"
Lucy "{i}Anon! We should go to!{/i}"
A "{i}Wait what why?{/i}"
F "{i}We can go stargazing Anon. Just imagine it.{/i}"
Lucy "{i}We can go stargazing Anon. Just imagine it.{/i}"
A "{i}But camping? Can’t we just-{/i}"
F "{i}C’mon Anon. Don’t you want to watch the stars together with me?{/i}"
Lucy "{i}C’mon Anon. Don’t you want to watch the stars together with me?{/i}"
"{i}Lucy’s pleading eyes lock onto mine.{/i}"
@@ -274,9 +274,9 @@ label chapter_12C:
Ro "Guess that’s just him."
F "Come on, quit teasing him."
Lucy "Come on, quit teasing him."
F "Who cares if he hasn’t evolved to fire yet?"
Lucy "Who cares if he hasn’t evolved to fire yet?"
"I trip into the tent and tear the whole thing down."
stop music fadeout 1.0
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
show fang neutral at sleft
with easeinleft
show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve
stop music fadeout 3.0
Ro "I never pictured Fang coming over."
Ro "Lucy really is lucky to have you."
@@ -327,10 +327,11 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Lucy gets that look in her eye and snatches the bigger one right off."
St "Eventide draws near. I believe it best we sojourn from the fated ones, Rosa. My scrying glass awaits."
pause 0.5
"What."
show fang neutral flip
F "Er, what? I don’t speak… whatever the fuck that was."
Lucy "Er, what? I don’t speak… whatever the fuck that was."
Ro "*giggle* I believe Stella means that the sun is setting and we need to go set up her telescope."
@@ -338,7 +339,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Rosa and Stella take their plates of imposter kebabs and start walking to the other end of Rosa’s yard."
show fang neutral at sleft with dissolve
stop music fadeout 1.0
play music "audio/OST/middle_of_nowhere.ogg" fadein 1.0
hide rosa
hide stella
@@ -348,11 +349,11 @@ label chapter_12C:
"With nothing to do but wait for night time I also begin to remove kebab."
F "Bleh. I think Stella undercooked this. Gimme some of yours."
Lucy "Bleh. I think Stella undercooked this. Gimme some of yours."
A "No way, you have your own."
F "Well I want yours too. You’re supposed to share with your girlfriend."
Lucy "Well I want yours too. You’re supposed to share with your girlfriend."
"Damn her and her filthy ptero-logic."
@@ -366,19 +367,19 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Once she pulls away I’m left holding a crispy yet clean wooden stick."
F "Mmmm… {w=0.4}Stolen food is the best food."
Lucy "Mmmm… {w=0.4}Stolen food is the best food."
show fang happy with dissolve
A "Well that was uncalled for."
F "Here, take the gross one."
Lucy "Here, take the gross one."
"Lucy hands over her undercooked kebab."
A "Whatever, I like it rare anyways."
F "You should be thanking me, then."
Lucy "You should be thanking me, then."
"She leans her head into my shoulder."
@@ -386,15 +387,15 @@ label chapter_12C:
"I hold the stick over the fire to char a bit more."
F "That’s just going to burn the outside."
Lucy "That’s just going to burn the outside."
A "Can’t be harder than roasting a marshmallow, right?"
F "Did Rosa bring any?"
Lucy "Did Rosa bring any?"
A "Think so. Save your kebab stick for them."
F "Think I’d rather use a regular stick off the ground than get a greasy marshmallow."
Lucy "Think I’d rather use a regular stick off the ground than get a greasy marshmallow."
A "Heh."
@@ -403,19 +404,19 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Somewhere in the distance I hear Stella yelling at Rosa about leaving the telescope cap on."
F "..."
Lucy "..."
F "Rosa said earlier that I’m lucky to have you."
Lucy "Rosa said earlier that I’m lucky to have you."
A "You feel lucky? I’m thinking it’s the other way around."
F "I do."
Lucy "I do."
F "Rosa was right, I wouldn’t have thought about going camping back in first semester."
Lucy "Rosa was right, I wouldn’t have thought about going camping back in first semester."
F "Guess I really have been changing a lot."
Lucy "Guess I really have been changing a lot."
F "... Your kebab’s on fire."
Lucy "... Your kebab’s on fire."
A "Huh-{w=0.3} Shit!"
@@ -433,7 +434,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
"I put the stick in biting range and she gnaws the chunk off."
F "Yeah, It’s not undercooked anymore. That’s for certain."
Lucy "Yeah, It’s not undercooked anymore. That’s for certain."
A "Looks like I poured jet fuel on it."
@@ -445,23 +446,23 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Reminds me of home."
F "The stars do?"
Lucy "The stars do?"
A "Hm? Oh. Yeah, there wasn’t a lot of light pollution around Rock Bottom."
A "In the brief time I was in scouts, I got to look at the constellations a bit."
F "Name a few."
Lucy "Name a few."
A "I don’t remember now, this was like a decade ago."
A "...{w=0.3} Orion’s belt?"
F "Anyone can name Orion’s belt."
Lucy "Anyone can name Orion’s belt."
A "Uh… big spoon and lil spoon?"
F "You mean the dippers?"
Lucy "You mean the dippers?"
A "Also yes."
@@ -469,13 +470,13 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Her head leans on my shoulder and I can’t help but smile."
F "Something like this, then?"
Lucy "Something like this, then?"
A "Eh, close enough."
A "I think you can see Mars too, it’s supposed to be the red one."
F "Uh… I think that’s the moon, Anon."
Lucy "Uh… I think that’s the moon, Anon."
A "..."
@@ -485,19 +486,19 @@ label chapter_12C:
A "Still managed to get my badge though."
F "Aren’t you the big strong man."
Lucy "Aren’t you the big strong man."
A "...{w=0.3} Fuck it. A compliment’s a compliment."
"We gaze up at the night sky in companionable silence."
F "Oh! Look!"
Lucy "Oh! Look!"
"Lucy points to the sky at a shooting star."
A "Well hey, you got a wish?"
F "That’s not a shooting star, dork."
Lucy "That’s not a shooting star, dork."
A "It isn’t?"
@@ -516,23 +517,23 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Man, being here with Lucy, after such a wonderful night…"
"I feel like no matter what, everything’s going to be just fine."
F "...I feel the same."
Lucy "...I feel the same."
"I’m just going to start biting my tongue."
F "Thank you for being here with me, Anon."
Lucy "Thank you for being here with me, Anon."
A "I mean… {w=0.3}This was all you. And Rosa and Stella too."
F "No, you big dweeb… {w=0.3}I mean…"
Lucy "No, you big dweeb… {w=0.3}I mean…"
F "You’ve always been there for me even when I was so mean to you."
Lucy "You’ve always been there for me even when I was so mean to you."
F "I don’t know what kind of road I was going down when you met me, but…"
Lucy "I don’t know what kind of road I was going down when you met me, but…"
F "But I know it wasn’t a good place to be. I don’t know where I was going to end up if I never found you."
Lucy "But I know it wasn’t a good place to be. I don’t know where I was going to end up if I never found you."
F "You saved me, Anon. And I’ll always be grateful for that."
Lucy "You saved me, Anon. And I’ll always be grateful for that."
"She sits up and looks down to me with that warm smile of hers."
@@ -566,7 +567,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
"Lucy’s eyes open as she smiles impishly at me."
F "I love you."
Lucy "I love you."
"Yeah.{w=0.3} Me too."