corrections - all - #1

game/script/14C.good-ending.rpy

@@ -20,9 +20,8 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     "Thinking back, I think there’s a park nearby that has a decent vending machine."
 
-    scene park fair
     show anonc neutral at aleft
-    with fade
+    with dissolve
 
     "Mentally retracing my steps from my senior year I manage to find the park."
 
@@ -250,7 +249,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     F "I wish I could stop it from happening. They're perfect just like this."
 
-    A "Kids can be, Jack mean to each other."
+    A "Kids can be, mean to each other."
 
     F "But not cruel.{w=0.4} The world makes them cruel."
 
@@ -347,7 +346,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     scene c04 with fade
     stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play music "audio/effects/beach loop 2.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play ambient "audio/effects/beach loop 2.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "Catching up with Lucy was the happiest I felt in years, the memories came rushing back as we walked under the hot sun."
 
     A "So you don’t know at all how Reed and Trish are doing?"
@@ -406,7 +405,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
 
     A "Oh. Well, we can still go check it out."
 
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 2.0
 
     scene outside moes
 
@@ -416,8 +415,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     show anonc neutral at aleft
     show fang c happy flip at sright
     with fade
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    play music "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1.0
+    play ambient "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1.0
     "I can see the old piano in my peripheral vision."
 
     A "I’ve been asking so much about what you’re doing now, but what happened while I was away?"
@@ -516,7 +514,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     F "But you can't play..."
 
     A "Then {i}you{/i} play."
-    stop music fadeout 30.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 20.0
     scene c05 with fade
 
     "As we sit by the piano, I think she understands why I'm teasing her like that."
@@ -677,7 +675,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
     F "All the more reason for me to help!"
 
     A "...Alright then. My motel isn’t too far from here."
-    play music "audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg" fadein 5.0
+    play ambient "audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg" fadein 5.0
     scene apartment morning with dissolve
 
     "I wasn’t kidding when I said I had a lot to unpack."
@@ -723,9 +721,9 @@ label chapter_14C:
     A "That would be great. So...{w=0.3}tomorrow then?"
 
     F "Tomorrow, yes."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    stop ambient fadeout 1.0
     scene city morning with fade
-    play sound "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance.ogg" fadein 5.0
+    play sound "audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance.ogg" fadein 3.0
     "We made our way towards her car door, but before getting in, she once again embraces me, this time a little stronger."
 
     show c09 with dissolve