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label chapter_7:
#Concert Day
I "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
@@ -174,9 +175,9 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Doesnt ring a bell."
St "O-oh… well… Uh… How would you like another?"
St "O-oh…{w=0.3} well… {w=0.3}Uh… {w=0.3}How would you like another?"
A "Eh… I got time to kill, sure."
A "Eh… {w=0.3}I got time to kill, sure."
"She pulls her deck of tarot cards from… {w=.3}somewhere…"
@@ -218,7 +219,6 @@ label chapter_7:
A "The fuck does that mean?"
St "Uh… {w=0.4} er… {w=0.2} {cps=*1.4}Gottago,naturecalls,seeyouattheshow{/cps}!"
hide stella neutral alt
show stella neutral alt flip at sleft with dissolve
play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
hide stella with easeoutleft
@@ -234,16 +234,11 @@ label chapter_7:
"Oh yeah."
"I step up to the stage to see the bands point of view."
hide anon neutral flip
show anon neutral at sright with dissolve
hide anon neutral at sright with easeoutright
scene moebackrooms
show anon neutral at aleft with easeinleft:
xalign 0.0
ease_cubic 0.5 rotate 90 yalign -0.5
show anon neutral flip with move:
ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
show anon neutral flip:
ease_cubic 0.5 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
pause 0.5
#anon fall
play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' volume 1.3
scene moebackrooms at shudder
@@ -290,7 +285,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "I just tripped on one of the wires up here."
show trish unimpressed flip
show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
T "Sucks to be you."
@@ -298,7 +293,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Should I plug them all into a surge protector so you guys dont fall during the concert?"
show trish annoyed flip
show trish annoyed flip with dissolve
T "What?"
@@ -308,7 +303,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Whose?"
show trish unimpressed flip
show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
T "...Reeds."
@@ -373,7 +368,7 @@ label chapter_7:
"The band is doing one last sound test, Reeds bass drum bearing another new logo for VVURM DRAMA that doesnt look half bad."
"Trish has a wicked grin on her face and I can practically see the dollar signs in her eyes."
scene moebackrooms
scene moes pizza
show fang hiding at sright
with fade
"And Fang…"
@@ -446,13 +441,16 @@ label chapter_7:
stop music fadeout 1.0
F "Weve got sweet music to play."
scene moebackrooms with fade
scene moes pizza
show dimmer_darker
with fade
if LeftStage:
show trish neutral at tleft
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
"Showtime"
@@ -461,11 +459,17 @@ label chapter_7:
"WHAT."
"They go right into their next song with gusto."
scene black with Dissolve(1)
"..."
"An hour later and the band is wrapping up their last song for the night."
scene moes pizza
show dimmer_darker
show trish neutral at tleft
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
"I take my eyes off the stage to get a read on the crowd."
"Easily a good hundred people showed up to see VVURM DRAMA, better than any of us expected."
@@ -503,7 +507,23 @@ label chapter_7:
"{i}Actually{/i} cheering this time."
play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0
show trish happy at tleft
show reed happy at rright:
xalign 1.1
show fang happy at scenter
with dissolve
pause 0.5
show reed happy flip:
xalign 1.35
show trish happy flip
with dissolve
show fang happy flip with dissolve
pause 0.5
show trish happy
show reed happy:
xalign 1.1
show fang happy
with dissolve
"The bandmates faces light up, and they all glance at each other."
"The hard work has taken its toll on the three, giving them varying degrees of perspiration."
@@ -511,7 +531,7 @@ label chapter_7:
"The sweat is trickling down Fangs forehead, Trish has gone from an afro to dreadlocks, and Reed is providing the restaurant with a nice ocean scent."
"Fang finishes with a furious flurry of strumming on her fretboard."
show fang very happy with dissolve
F "Woooooooo! THANK YOU LITTLE TROODON!"
"The crowds approval is obvious, even in the makeshift mosh pit where I see Stella getting fake curb-stomped."
@@ -521,17 +541,20 @@ label chapter_7:
"Rosa is on the other side of the room, too entranced by the music to care."
"Eh, I dont see any blood so shes good."
scene moebackrooms with fade
scene moebackrooms
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show fang very happy at sleft with easeinleft
with fade
show fang very happy at sleft with easeinleft:
yalign 0.2
F "ANON!"
"Before I could react I was swept up in a blur of feathers."
hide anon
hide fang
show fang hug at acenter:
hide anon
hide fang
with dissolve
show fang hug at acenter with dissolve:
yalign 0.0
"Fang wrapped her arms and wings around me and kept rocking back and forth."
@@ -542,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_7:
"I tune out the alarms screaming in my head and hug her back."
hide fang hug
hide fang hug with dissolve
show fanganonhug with dissolve:
yalign 0.0
@@ -569,11 +592,12 @@ label chapter_7:
"Trish looks like shes sucked on a lemon with how twisted her face is."
"The tiny triceratops pulls Fang out of my hands, and I can picture my fist twisting that horn right off her face."
hide fanganonhug
hide fanganonhug with dissolve
show fang neutral flip at scenter
show anon neutral flip at sright
show trish neutral at tleft
with dissolve
T "Hmmm... "
A "Great show, right?"
@@ -639,7 +663,7 @@ label chapter_7:
show fang neutral at scenter
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
"Showtime"