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@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
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label chapter_7:
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#Concert Day
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I "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
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@@ -174,9 +175,9 @@ label chapter_7:
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A "Doesn’t ring a bell."
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St "O-oh… well… Uh… How would you like another?"
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St "O-oh…{w=0.3} well… {w=0.3}Uh… {w=0.3}How would you like another?"
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A "Eh… I got time to kill, sure."
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A "Eh… {w=0.3}I got time to kill, sure."
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"She pulls her deck of tarot cards from… {w=.3}somewhere…"
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@@ -218,7 +219,6 @@ label chapter_7:
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A "The fuck does that mean?"
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St "Uh… {w=0.4} er… {w=0.2} {cps=*1.4}Gottago,naturecalls,seeyouattheshow{/cps}!"
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hide stella neutral alt
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show stella neutral alt flip at sleft with dissolve
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play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
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hide stella with easeoutleft
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@@ -234,16 +234,11 @@ label chapter_7:
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"Oh yeah."
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"I step up to the stage to see the band’s point of view."
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hide anon neutral flip
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show anon neutral at sright with dissolve
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hide anon neutral at sright with easeoutright
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scene moebackrooms
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show anon neutral at aleft with easeinleft:
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xalign 0.0
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ease_cubic 0.5 rotate 90 yalign -0.5
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show anon neutral flip with move:
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ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
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show anon neutral flip:
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ease_cubic 0.5 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
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pause 0.5
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#anon fall
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play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' volume 1.3
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scene moebackrooms at shudder
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@@ -290,7 +285,7 @@ label chapter_7:
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A "I just tripped on one of the wires up here."
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show trish unimpressed flip
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show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
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T "Sucks to be you."
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@@ -298,7 +293,7 @@ label chapter_7:
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A "Should I plug them all into a surge protector so you guys don’t fall during the concert?"
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show trish annoyed flip
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show trish annoyed flip with dissolve
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T "What?"
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@@ -308,7 +303,7 @@ label chapter_7:
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A "Whose?"
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show trish unimpressed flip
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show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
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T "...Reed’s."
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@@ -373,7 +368,7 @@ label chapter_7:
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"The band is doing one last sound test, Reed’s bass drum bearing another new logo for VVURM DRAMA that doesn’t look half bad."
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"Trish has a wicked grin on her face and I can practically see the dollar signs in her eyes."
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scene moebackrooms
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scene moes pizza
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show fang hiding at sright
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with fade
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"And Fang…"
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@@ -446,13 +441,16 @@ label chapter_7:
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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F "We’ve got sweet music to play."
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scene moebackrooms with fade
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scene moes pizza
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show dimmer_darker
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with fade
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if LeftStage:
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show trish neutral at tleft
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show fang neutral at scenter
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show reed neutral flip at rright:
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xalign 1.3
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with dissolve
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play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
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"Showtime"
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@@ -461,11 +459,17 @@ label chapter_7:
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"WHAT."
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"They go right into their next song with gusto."
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scene black with Dissolve(1)
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"..."
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"An hour later and the band is wrapping up their last song for the night."
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scene moes pizza
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show dimmer_darker
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show trish neutral at tleft
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show fang neutral at scenter
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show reed neutral flip at rright:
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xalign 1.3
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with dissolve
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"I take my eyes off the stage to get a read on the crowd."
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"Easily a good hundred people showed up to see VVURM DRAMA, better than any of us expected."
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@@ -503,7 +507,23 @@ label chapter_7:
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"{i}Actually{/i} cheering this time."
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play music 'audio/OST/punk_revamp.ogg' fadein 1.0
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show trish happy at tleft
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show reed happy at rright:
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xalign 1.1
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show fang happy at scenter
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with dissolve
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pause 0.5
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show reed happy flip:
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xalign 1.35
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show trish happy flip
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with dissolve
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show fang happy flip with dissolve
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pause 0.5
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show trish happy
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show reed happy:
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xalign 1.1
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show fang happy
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with dissolve
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"The bandmates’ faces light up, and they all glance at each other."
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"The hard work has taken its toll on the three, giving them varying degrees of perspiration."
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"The sweat is trickling down Fang’s forehead, Trish has gone from an afro to dreadlocks, and Reed is providing the restaurant with a nice ocean scent."
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"Fang finishes with a furious flurry of strumming on her fretboard."
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show fang very happy with dissolve
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F "Woooooooo! THANK YOU LITTLE TROODON!"
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"The crowd’s approval is obvious, even in the makeshift mosh pit where I see Stella getting fake curb-stomped."
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@@ -521,17 +541,20 @@ label chapter_7:
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"Rosa is on the other side of the room, too entranced by the music to care."
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"Eh, I don’t see any blood so she’s good."
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scene moebackrooms with fade
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scene moebackrooms
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show anon neutral flip at acenter
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show fang very happy at sleft with easeinleft
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with fade
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show fang very happy at sleft with easeinleft:
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yalign 0.2
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F "ANON!"
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"Before I could react I was swept up in a blur of feathers."
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hide anon
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hide fang
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show fang hug at acenter:
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hide anon
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hide fang
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with dissolve
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show fang hug at acenter with dissolve:
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yalign 0.0
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"Fang wrapped her arms and wings around me and kept rocking back and forth."
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@@ -542,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_7:
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"I tune out the alarms screaming in my head and hug her back."
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hide fang hug
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hide fang hug with dissolve
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show fanganonhug with dissolve:
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yalign 0.0
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@@ -569,11 +592,12 @@ label chapter_7:
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"Trish looks like she’s sucked on a lemon with how twisted her face is."
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"The tiny triceratops pulls Fang out of my hands, and I can picture my fist twisting that horn right off her face."
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hide fanganonhug
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hide fanganonhug with dissolve
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show fang neutral flip at scenter
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show anon neutral flip at sright
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show trish neutral at tleft
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with dissolve
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T "Hmmm... "
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A "Great show, right?"
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@@ -639,7 +663,7 @@ label chapter_7:
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show fang neutral at scenter
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show reed neutral flip at rright:
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xalign 1.3
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with dissolve
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play music 'audio/OST/The.ogg' fadein 1.0
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"Showtime"
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