naomi arc3 r4r

game/script.rpy

@@ -345,6 +345,7 @@ image white = "#FFF"
 image dimmer_lighter = "#00000033"
 image dimmer_light = "#00000066"
 image dimmer_darker = "#00000088"
+image dimmer_darker2 = "#00000088"
 image lighter_freeze = '#1E90FF05'
 image light_freeze = '#1E90FF08' #11
 image dark_freeze = '#1E90FF08'
@@ -370,7 +371,7 @@ image nonalcoholic = "images/other/soda.png"
 image amberpendant = "images/other/amberpendant1.png"
 image amberpendant6veryhappy = 'images/other/amberpendant6veryhappy.png'
 image amberpendant4shock = 'images/other/amberpendant4shock.png'
-
+image chillicheesefries = 'images/other/chilli cheese fries.png'
 
 #additional character images
 image fang pendant happy = Composite(
@@ -457,7 +458,8 @@ image naser tablehit flip = im.Flip("naser/naser table hit.png", horizontal=True
 image naomi future flip = im.Flip('images/naomi/naomi future.png', horizontal=True)
 image fang d happy flip = im.Flip('images/fang/future sets/fang d happy.png', horizontal=True)
 image naser neckhold flip = im.Flip('images/naser/naserneckhold.png', horizontal=True)
-
+image anon grin = 'images/anon/base set/anon grin.png'
+image anon grin flip = im.Flip('images/anon/base set/anon grin.png', horizontal=True)
 
 #extra chapters other images
 image home fang night blurred = im.Blur('images/backgrounds/home fang night.jpg', 2.0)
@@ -467,7 +469,10 @@ image d01_blur = im.Blur('images/cgs/d01.jpg', 1.5)
 
 image fangroomfuture = "images/backgrounds/fangroomfuture.png"
 image livingroomdayalt = "images/backgrounds/livingroomdayalt.png"
+image emptyroomnight = "images/backgrounds/emptyroomnight.png"
 
+image naomifangcg = "images/cgs/naomifangcg.png"
+image naomifangcg blur = im.Blur("images/cgs/naomifangcg.png", 1.5)
 image naomiletter = 'images/cgs/naomiletter.png'
 
 image projector9_blur:
@@ -488,18 +493,22 @@ image schooloutside_blur:
 #caller bgs
 image anonday_videocall_bg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/foodcourt.jpg", 0.9),(0,40,576,920))
 image anonnight_videocall_bg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/room anon dark.jpg", 0.9),(100,40,576,920))
+image fangphonebg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/backgrounds/anonroomday2.png", 0.9),(400,40,576,920))
 image fpvcblack = im.Scale("images/other/black.png", 565, 1100)
 image call_ended = im.Scale("images/other/black.png", 656, 700)
 
 
 #callers
 image anon_vc_neutral = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon neutral.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
+image anon_vc_angry = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/emotive set/anon angry.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800))
+image anon_vc_sad = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/emotive set/anon sad.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
 image anon_vc_neutral_alt1 = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon neutral.png", 2.0),(800,250,653,800))
 image anon_vc_concerned = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon concerned.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
 image anon_vc_happy = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon happy.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
 image anon_vc_grin = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon grin.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
 image anon_vc_unimpressed = im.Flip(im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/anon/base set/anon unimpressed.png", 2.0),(900,250,653,800)), horizontal=True)
 image no_caller = im.Alpha('images/other/black.png', 0)
+image anonfangfor_phonebg = im.Crop(im.FactorScale("images/other/anon_fang_xmas.png", 1.0),(650,140,653,800))
 
 #fangphone effect - video call with Anon mainly
 layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
@@ -520,7 +529,10 @@ layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
          "anonnight_videocall_bg"
 
       attribute call_ended_bg:
-         "no_caller"     
+         "fangphonebg"     
+
+      attribute call_ended_bg_black:
+         "call_ended"        
 
    group talker:
       pos (410, 65)
@@ -539,12 +551,21 @@ layeredimage fangphonevideocall:
 
       attribute anongrin:
          "anon_vc_grin" 
+      
+      attribute anonsad:
+         "anon_vc_sad"
+
+      attribute anonangry:
+         "anon_vc_angry" 
 
       attribute anonunimpressed:
          "anon_vc_unimpressed" 
       
       attribute call_ended:
-         "no_caller"
+         "anonfangfor_phonebg"
+      
+      attribute call_ended_poff:
+         "call_ended"
 
    always:
       "fangphonelayer1"

game/script/12C.anon-fang-lovey-dovey.rpy

@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ label chapter_12C:
     
     pause 0.5
     "What."
-    show fang neutral flip
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
     Lucy "Er, what? I don’t speak… whatever the fuck that was."
 
     Ro "*giggle* I believe Stella means that the sun is setting and we need to go set up her telescope."

game/script/12D.aquarium.rpy

@@ -112,11 +112,14 @@ label chapter_12D:
     "In a snap Fang’s moved from pressing her face against the turtle tank to pressing it against the octopus tank."
 
     scene aquariumexhibit
-    show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
+    show fang happy at sleft:
+        yalign 0.0 xcenter 0.4
+    with dissolve
+    
     #confirmed that fang has autism
     Attendant "Ma’am, please refrain from-"
 
-    show fang adorable at sleft
+    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve
 
     F "{cps=*1.5}OmigoshAnonlookatit.{/cps}"
 
@@ -126,47 +129,62 @@ label chapter_12D:
     
     #Fang has the zoomies
     F "And what’s over there? Are those seahorses{cps=*1.5} holy crap I have to take a video of this.{/cps}"
-    show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve: #maybe try this with a block: statement? removed: at sleft - no change 
+
-        ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.75 ypos 0.1 xpos 0.6 #OK
+    #old method
+    # show fang adorable at sleft with dissolve: #maybe try this with a block: statement? removed: at sleft - no change 
+    #     ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.75 ypos 0.1 xpos 0.6 #OK
+    #     pause 1.0
+    #     linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0 #maybe the xzoom is causing the issue? tried removing it, didn't help
+    #     ease_cubic 0.3 zoom 0.8 ypos 0.1 xpos -0.2  #ok
+    #     pause 1.0
+    #     linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0    
+    #     ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.4 xpos 0.15 ypos 0.3
+    #     pause 1.0
+    #     linear 0.1 xzoom 1.0
+    #     ease_cubic 0.3 zoom 1.0 xpos 0.35 ypos 0.1 #ok
+    #     pause 1.0
+    #     linear 0.1 xzoom 1.0
+    #     ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.3 xpos 0.6 ypos 0.33
+    #     pause 1.0
+    #     linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
+    #     pause 0.1
+    #     repeat
+    
+    #new method
+    show fang:
+        block:
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 0.25 xzoom 1.0
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.75 ypos 0.1 xpos 0.6
         pause 1.0
-        linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0 #maybe the xzoom is causing the issue? tried removing it, didn't help
+        block:
-        ease_cubic 0.3 zoom 0.8 ypos 0.1 xpos -0.2  #ok
+            parallel:
+                linear 0.25 xzoom -1.0
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.8 ypos 0.1 xpos -0.2
+        pause 1.0  
+        ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.4 xpos 0.0 ypos 0.3
         pause 1.0
-        linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0    
+        block:
-        ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.4 xpos 0.15 ypos 0.3
+            parallel:
+                linear 0.25 xzoom 1.0
+            parallel:
+                ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 1.0 xpos 0.2 ypos 0.1
         pause 1.0
-        linear 0.1 xzoom 1.0
+        ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.3 xpos 0.65 ypos 0.33
-        ease_cubic 0.3 zoom 1.0 xpos 0.35 ypos 0.1 #ok
         pause 1.0
-        linear 0.1 xzoom 1.0
-        ease_cubic 0.5 zoom 0.3 xpos 0.6 ypos 0.33
-        pause 1.0
-        linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
-        pause 0.1
         repeat
+
+    pause 1.0
     "I shrug apologetically at the attendant who has given up entirely."
-    #contingency plan lol, fucking renpy
-    # show fang adorable with dissolve:
-    #     zoom 0.8
-    #     yalign -0.1
-    #     xalign 1.1
-    # pause 1.0
 
 
     "But watching Fang zoom between the exhibits to gush over each oddly cute sea animal was just too much."
-    # show fang adorable flip with dissolve:
-    #     zoom 1.0
-    #     xpos 0.1
-    #     yalign 0.1
-    # pause 1.0
 
     "Subtly my phone finds its way into my jacket pocket, already set to record."
-    # show fang adorable at scenter with dissolve:
-    #     zoom 0.6
-    #     xpos 0.3
-    #     ypos 0.6
 
-    show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
+    show anonphone at scenter with dissolve # moveinbottom
 
     "She’ll probably kill me if she found out."
     hide fang adorable with dissolve
@@ -174,10 +192,10 @@ label chapter_12D:
     pause 0.5
     "Wait, where’d she go?"
 
-    hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
+    hide anonphone with dissolve #moveoutbottom
 
     scene aquarium with fade
-    show fang happy at sleft
+    show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
     "I round the corner to see the next room has a large group of school children hovering over a stingray touch tank."
     "That is, a large group of school children and Fang, towering above the rest."
 
@@ -244,11 +262,11 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     F "I dunno, wanna check?"
 
-    show fang flip off happy flip
+    show fang flip off happy flip with dissolve
 
     "Her cheeky grin and raised middle finger confirm her hand’s integrity."
 
-    show fang neutral flip
+    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
 
     F "So uh…"
 
@@ -314,7 +332,7 @@ label chapter_12D:
 
     "...Right then…"
 
-    show fang happy at sleft
+    show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
 
     A "So, how bout we hit the last spot and then go grab our own lunch?"
 

game/script/13C.fang-and-anon-go-to-beach-and-prom.rpy

@@ -143,9 +143,9 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     scene black with fade
 
-    scene home fang night with fade
+    scene home fang night 
     show anon prom neutral flip at aright
-
+    with fade
     "This thing must cost a fortune."
 
     "Fang’s dad is a police commissioner if I recall."
@@ -173,9 +173,10 @@ label chapter_13C:
     FD "You’d be surprised how useful staying quiet and stationary can be."
 
     FD "How close you can get to someone without them knowing-"
-    hide fangdadlarge with dissolve
+    hide fangdadlarge 
-    show fangdad neutral at sleft with dissolve
+    show fangdad neutral at sleft 
-    show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter with dissolve
+    show fangmom unimpressed flip at fmcenter 
+    with dissolve
 
     FM "Sweetheart."
 
@@ -819,7 +820,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     A "Trish!"
 
-    show trish prom indignant flip at scenter
+    show trish prom indignant flip at scenter with dissolve
 
     "My shout shocks the desperate triceratops away from Lucy."
 
@@ -896,7 +897,8 @@ label chapter_13C:
 
     "Rosa blocks her way long enough for me to grab her wrist."
     show anon behind trish
-    show trish prom angry with dissolve
+    show trish prom angry 
+    with dissolve
 
     T "Wh- Rosa, hey!!"
 
@@ -1079,6 +1081,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     "I shrug and shake my head as we as continue to approach the vendor."
     show tracy neutral:
         xalign 1.1
+    with dissolve
     SV "Well if it isn’t my favorite skinnie! And you brought your lady friend!"
 
     A "It’s like ten at night, you can’t get that many customers this late, right?"
@@ -1330,7 +1333,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
     "Lucy mutters a one-two count before taking a left step back."
 
     "My right foot follows and lands on her toes."
-    show fang blacklight neutral
+    show fang blacklight neutral with dissolve
     F "OW!"
 
     A "Sorry!"

game/script/14D.gold-ending.rpy

@@ -599,9 +599,10 @@ label chapter_14D:
 
     F "You’re such a dweeb."
     #ENDING 4 THEME GOES HERE
-    #stop music fadeout 3.0
+    stop music fadeout 2.0
     A "I know."
     #play music 
+    play music 'audio/OST/ending_14D.ogg' fadein 1.0 
     scene d04b with fade
 
     "That didn’t stop Lucy from shuffling closer until our legs were pressed together."

game/script/2xN.Naomi-arc-2.rpy

@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ label chapter_2xN:
 
     ##fade in cg
     #this one music pops on purpose
-    play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg'
+    play music 'audio/OST/good faith.ogg' fadein 1.0
     scene naomiletter with fade 
     N "It’s addressed to me, specifically?"
 

game/script/3xN.Naomi-arc-3.rpy

@@ -0,0 +1,731 @@
+
+label chapter_3xN:
+    #Naomi Arc Three
+    play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 2.0
+    scene livingroomdayalt
+    show fang pendant unimpressed at sleft
+    show naser sad flip at sright
+    with fade 
+
+    "What the fuck just happened?"
+
+    "One second Naser and Naomi were talking…"
+
+    "Now I’ve got a cripple brother looking more lost and confused than ever before."
+
+    "And little miss ‘perfect life’ crying like a baby outside my house."
+
+    show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
+    Nas "M-maybe I…{w=0.5} I should-"
+
+    show fang pendant angry with dissolve
+    F "Naser for once in your life, do the smart thing and shut up!"
+
+    show naser shocked flip with dissolve
+    show fang pendant sad with dissolve 
+    "I wince as I see Naser recoil at my harsh words."
+
+    "Can’t fall back into bad habits now."
+    show fang pendant considering with dissolve
+    show naser sad flip with dissolve
+    "Think Lucy, Think! How do you unfuck this fuck-up?"
+    show fang pendant angry with dissolve:
+        xzoom -1.0
+    "I look out the window and watch as Naomi continues wailing."
+
+    "Even though I despise the idea, Naomi needs someone to be there for her and support her now more than ever."
+    
+    "With the thought of what I’m about to do, I realize just how much Anon had really done for me."
+
+    "But god damn it, I really don’t want to…"
+    show fang pendant unimpressed with dissolve:
+        xzoom 1.0
+    stop music fadeout 5.0
+    "I turn back to face my brother, who looks like he wants to jump from our house’s roof."
+
+    F "I’m gonna go try and calm Naomi down."
+
+    F "Stay here and finish cleaning."
+
+    "Naser nods and takes up the broom Naomi set aside, distracting himself by sweeping up the rest of the trash on the floor."
+
+    show naser sad flip:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5
+
+    "Easy part done." 
+
+    show fang pendant neutral with dissolve:
+        xzoom -1.0
+    pause 1.0
+    hide fang with easeoutleft
+    show naser sad flip:
+        ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.6
+
+    "I take a calming sigh and walk out the door to the wailing idiot trying to wake up the whole neighborhood."
+
+    scene home fang outside night 
+    show naomi sad flip at sleft:
+        yalign -0.5
+    show fang pendant neutral at sright:
+        xzoom -1.0
+    with fade 
+    stop music fadeout 1.0
+    play ambient 'audio/OST/good faith leadup piano.ogg' fadein 3.0
+    F "So...{w=0.3} what happened back there?"
+
+    show naomi sad flip:
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.5 
+    "Naomi doesn't reply." 
+
+    "Rather, she keeps on sobbing like her whole world is falling apart."
+    #naomi sobbing motion
+    show naomi sad flip:
+        ease_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign -0.48
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.48
+        pause 1.0
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.5
+        pause 1.0
+        ease_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.48
+        pause 2.0
+        repeat
+    show fang pendant unimpressed with dissolve 
+    F "Naomi?{w=0.5} The fuck is wrong with you?"
+
+    show naomi sad flip:
+        ease_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.4 yalign -0.48
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.5
+        pause 1.0
+        ease_cubic 0.2 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.48
+        ease_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.45
+        ease_cubic 0.1 yalign -0.48
+        pause 0.5
+        repeat
+    
+    "Somehow, her sobbing gets louder, to the point that I feel my ears start to ring. Any louder, and she’s going to give me tinnitus."
+
+    show fang pendant angry with dissolve
+    F "NAOMI! What THE FUCK did you two tell each other!?"
+
+    show naomi sad at sleft with dissolve:
+        yalign -0.5
+    "Naomi finally looks up to me with a tear-stained face."
+
+    N "A break…{w=1.0} N-Naser s-said he… {w=1.0}he wants to take a break!"
+
+    show fang pendant angry with dissolve
+    "I almost want to slap the bitch." 
+
+    "She’s putting on all the waterworks because Naser wants some time away from her?"
+    pause 1.0
+    F "...And?"
+
+
+    show naomi angry with dissolve:
+        ypos 0.5 xalign -0.4
+        ease_cubic 0.2 rotate -15
+        ease_cubic 1.0 rotate 0 yalign 0.2 
+
+    
+    "Naomi, who had still been lying on her knees up to this point, scowls at me with a face full of fire and fury before rising to her feet."
+
+    N "What do you mean {i}‘and’{/i}?" 
+    pause 0.5
+    
+    N "Naser and I are the perfect couple!"
+
+    N "He is the perfect boyfriend!"
+
+    N "And I am the perfect girlfriend!"
+
+    N "We’re supposed to have the perfect life together!"
+
+    N "Wh-why does he want us to take a break in our relationship!?"
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xpos -0.55
+    pause 0.1
+    hide naomi with easeoutbottom
+    "Naomi buries her face in her hands and sits on the curbside. Thankfully, she doesn’t burst into more wails, which is at least an improvement."
+
+    "Shit.{w=0.5} Why am I the one who has to fix this mess?" 
+
+    "I’m probably the least qualified person when it comes to relationships."
+
+    "Still… {w=0.5}not like Naser’s going to be any better at this."
+
+    "Fuck… {w=0.5}guess it really comes down to me..."
+    show naomifangcg with dissolve 
+    play ambient1 ['<sync ambient>audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0
+    "I sit down next to Naomi on the curb." 
+
+    "My presence makes her tense up, which also results in her shutting off the waterworks to at least appear more dignified."
+
+    F "So Naser wants to take a break." 
+
+    F "Big fucking whoop!"
+
+    F "It’s not the end of the world. It just means… {w=0.5}you two have some things to think about…"
+
+    "I know my words are directed at Naomi, but a part of me can’t help but feel they are also applicable to me."
+
+    "After all… {w=0.5}I’m still trying to figure out what’s really going to happen between Anon and myself…"
+
+    N "What is there to think about!?{w=0.3} Naser and I were supposed to be together!" 
+
+    N "I was going to take care of him every day!" 
+
+    N "Cook dinner!{w=0.3} Clean the nest!{w=0.3} Romantic nights out!{w=0.3} Children running around the house!" 
+
+    N "What am I going to do now!?{w=0.3} I already told my parents that I’m moving out!{w=0.3} Where do I go!?{w=0.3} What do I even do!?"
+
+    "I find myself scowling at Naomi’s words…"
+    pause 0.5
+    F "So, this is what all this shit’s about?" 
+
+    F "Your {i}‘perfect’{/i} little plan falling apart before your eyes?"
+
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 4.0
+    F "You haven’t really changed in the last year..."
+
+
+    "Naomi's head snaps toward me, her eyes baleful and teary as she glares daggers at me."
+
+    N "E-excuse me!?"
+
+    N "W-w-what’s that supposed to mean!?"
+
+    F "You heard me." 
+
+    F "I mean you were, are - and if you keep this up, will be - a total fucking bitch ‘til the day your ass turns back to dust."
+
+    "Naomi’s brows furrow." 
+
+    "She grits her teeth so tightly that for a second, I think she’s going to make her gums bleed."
+
+    N "F-Fu-Fuck you, you… {w=0.5}you discount-brand guitarist!"
+
+    F "Insult me all you want. You know I’m right."
+
+    N "Naser and I are a-absolutely perfect for each other! Not like with you and A-Anon!"
+
+    "This asshole. She’s lucky I don’t have anything blunt I can use to beat the shit out of her."
+
+    "I cross my arms and give Naomi a flat look."
+
+    F "Perfect for one another? I’m not the one with a broken relationship after a single fucking night!"
+
+    F "Me and Anon… yeah, we fight, but we always come out of it stronger."
+
+    F "We’re taking a break… but that doesn’t mean our relationship’s over."
+
+    F "Unlike yours…"
+
+    "At first, Naomi gives me a look of absolute rage." 
+
+    "Her hands curl into fists and her face turns a bright red."
+
+    "But that expression doesn’t last long as her eyes again fill with tears and her shoulders slump."
+    pause 0.5
+    N "Why…?"
+
+    F "Why what?"
+
+    N "Why talk to me?"
+
+    N "If you hate me this much, why are you wasting your breath even acknowledging my existence?"
+
+    N "You really get a rise about kicking me when I’m at my lowest!?"
+
+    N "Do you want to hit me again like you did before prom!?"
+
+    F "You offering? Because I can oblige!"
+
+    "I give Naomi a smug grin in an attempt to liven the mood a bit, but my attempt at humor goes completely unnoticed."
+
+    "She only stares at me with absolute contempt."
+
+    "Naturally, I glare right back at the bitch."
+
+    "Still, seeing Naomi like she is now, a part of me can’t help but pity her."
+
+    "At the back of my mind, I remember a certain memory." 
+
+    "One that I’ll always treasure:"
+
+    A "{alpha=0.5}{i}All that matters is her.{/i}{/alpha}"
+    play ambient1 ['<sync ambient>audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0
+    "I sigh and let all my anger fade away." 
+
+    "Anger isn’t going to do anything right now."
+
+    F "I’m not here to kick your ass… {w=0.5}even if you deserve a beating."
+
+    F "I just…"
+
+    "I look toward the window and see Naser still sweeping, his shoulders hunched and wings drooped."
+
+    "God damn it."
+
+    F "Naser’s kicking himself over this."
+
+    F "Y’know the kinda guy he is."
+
+    F "At least you should, anyway."
+
+    N "B-but-"
+
+    F "He worries.{w=0.5} He always worries."
+
+    F "Constantly.{w=0.5} Naser can’t help himself."
+
+    "It’s like my words are stabbing Naomi in the heart as she starts to shrink more and more."
+
+    F "I think it’s how he shows he cares."
+
+    F "That he’s willing to take everyone’s issues and ignore his own."
+
+    N "I… {w=0.5}but he said…"
+
+    N "He said he wanted to take a break! Just like you and Anon!"
+
+    N "You had to have put him up to this! You! You-"
+
+    N "You HOME WRECKER!"
+
+    "I can’t help but roll my eyes at her words."
+
+    F "God, you’re so fucking stupid."
+
+    F "No, I didn’t put him up to this shit. Hell, I didn’t even tell him that Anon and I went on break!"
+
+    F "Naser… {w=0.5}did you actually TELL him how you set me and Anon up from the very start?"
+
+    "The dumb bitch blanches at that."
+
+    "Nailed it."
+
+    F "That’s another thing about my brother, y’know…"
+
+    F "He can be stupidly dense."
+
+    F "He probably didn’t even know you were trying to move in with him."
+
+    N "T-then how do you know?!"
+
+    "Ha.{w=0.5} Called it."
+
+    F "You and your stupid plans."
+
+    F "Would it kill you to just, I don’t fucking know, tell someone?"
+
+    "Naomi sags and whimpers."
+
+    N "I was going to move in with him."
+
+    N "Go to the same college and graduate together."
+
+    N "We would have a perfect life together…"
+
+    "I facepalm at her words."
+
+    "Perfect this. Perfect that."
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 5.0
+    "I can’t fucking stand Naomi’s bullshit anymore." 
+
+    "I stand up and for once look down on the salmon-toned asshole."
+    hide fang
+    show naomifangcg blur with dissolve
+
+    show fang pendant angry at sleft with easeinbottom:
+        xalign -0.2
+    F "For fuck’s sake, get over yourself!"
+
+    F "You’re. {w=0.5}Not. {w=0.5}Perfect!"
+
+    N "E-excuse me!?"
+
+    show naomi angry flip at sright with easeinbottom:
+        xalign 1.2
+    "Naomi stands up, her previous sadness supplanted by anger."
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 1.0
+    N "I’ll have you know that I’ve dedicated my whole life to being as perfect as can be!"
+
+    F "That’s complete bullshit, and you know it."
+
+    F "Before you and my brother started bumping uglies you were just some meek nerdy bitch."
+
+    F "Mostly harmless."
+
+    F "But then you became... {w=0.5}whatever this is."
+
+    "I motion to her whole being."
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.4 xalign 0.1
+    F "You became a bossy, machiavellian perfectionist BITCH with plans on top of plans like you’re some kind of chessmaster!"
+
+    F "You never actually cared about Naser in the first place, did you?" 
+
+    F "You only wanted him for the prestige it would bring you!"
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.6
+        ease_cubic 0.2 xalign 0.7
+
+    "FUCK! Ow!" with hpunch
+
+    "I can feel a searing heat on my cheek."
+
+    "Surprised she had it in her."
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.8
+    "Naomi isn’t looking me in the eyes, but she’s huffing as she cradles her hand to her chest."
+
+    N "I LOVE Naser! He actually cared about a useless girl like me! So I had to become his perfect girlfriend!"
+
+    "I rub my cheek and do my best to keep my temper under control." 
+
+    "Though I want to, jumping on top of the bitch and beating the shit out of her is not the answer right now."
+
+    F "Does a ‘perfect girlfriend’ intentionally try to secretly manipulate her boyfriend’s family without even telling him?!"
+
+    "Naomi’s breath hitches."
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.9
+
+    F "How do you think Naser would react to finding out what you did?"
+
+    N "... He…"
+
+    "Naomi shuts her mouth as fast as she opens it."
+    show naomi considering flip with dissolve
+    F "Probably wouldn’t like it, would he?"
+
+    F "Aaron Fuckwingham was way too protective of my retarded ass to approve."
+
+    F "And he clearly did care about you, too."
+
+    F "It wasn’t even that you didn’t care to know how Naser felt. You knew and actively disregarded that information."
+
+
+    show naomi sad flip with dissolve
+    N "Shut up…"
+
+    F "No way, I’m-"
+
+    N "I know already…"
+
+    show naomi sad with dissolve
+    "The dumb bitch shifts her head to the side, trying to hide her eyes."
+
+    N "P-please, couldn’t y-you let me just...{w=0.5} g-grovel h-here?"
+
+    "Naomi’s words are coming out haphazardly. It’s clear that she’s having a hard time forming thoughts."
+
+    "She’s already pretty fucked up. But she needs to hear what comes next, even if it hurts her."
+
+    show fang:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.6
+    F "You know what your problem is, Naomi?" 
+
+    F "You’ve stayed stuck in your own little world with your own little plans, thinking that everything you do is always going to turn out just like you planned."
+
+    F "Well guess what? The world doesn’t revolve around you!"
+
+    show naomi considering flip with dissolve
+    "Naomi raises an eyebrow at me at first." 
+
+    "She then grimaces before fixing me with a look that I can only describe as disgust."
+    show naomi sad flip with dissolve
+    "Yet as the seconds tick by, Naomi’s expression changes." 
+    play ambient1 ['<sync ambient>audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg', 'audio/OST/good faith leadup drums synth.ogg'] fadein 5.0
+    "Her grimace slowly vanishes, replaced instead with a thousand-yard stare."
+
+    N "You’re…" 
+    pause 0.5
+    N "...You’re right…" 
+
+    N "I… {w=0.5}I haven’t changed one bit…"
+
+    show naomi:
+        ease_cubic 0.5 yalign -0.5
+    pause 0.2
+    hide naomi with dissolve
+
+    "She grabs hold of her head and once more falls on her knees."
+
+    N "Ever since I… {w=0.5}I stopped being a meek nerdy girl, I became obsessed with perfection... {w=0.5}to the point that I… I wound up becoming some kind of coral castellan."
+
+    N "Did I work hard to get there?{w=0.5} Yes." 
+
+    N "Should I have worked so hard when it led to where I am today?"
+
+    N "... I… {w=0.5}I don’t know anymore…"
+
+    N "All I know is that…{w=0.5} aside from your brother… {w=0.5}nothing's ever really made me happy…."
+
+    N "...Nothing…"
+
+    pause 0.5
+    hide fang with dissolve
+    hide naomifangcg blur
+    show naomifangcg
+    with dissolve
+    "Against my better judgment, I kneel next to Naomi and put a hand on her shoulder."
+
+    F "Hey, just because you’re a manipulative fucking bitch doesn’t mean that you haven’t done some good."
+
+    F "I mean… {w=0.5}you did bring me and Anon together."
+
+    F "Also… {w=0.5}you did make my brother happy… {w=0.5}even if it was under your authoritarian thumb…"
+
+    "I kinda feel sick saying that." 
+
+    "I shouldn’t be praising her manipulative bitchiness, but I can’t deny that Naser was genuinely happy being with Naomi."
+
+    "Even if most of that happiness was a side-effect and not a direct result of a healthy relationship..."
+
+    F "Maybe… {w=0.5}maybe a break is what you two need now more than ever."
+
+    F "Time away to think." 
+
+    F "Time away to contemplate what the two of you really mean for each other." 
+
+    F "Time to really figure out what the two of you mean to each other…"
+
+    "Once again, though my words are meant for Naomi, a part of me can’t shake the fact that they’re applicable to me as well…"
+
+    N "Y-you really think so?"
+
+    "I shrug my shoulders."
+
+    F "I don’t fucking know." 
+
+    F "Maybe this break’s what the two of you need to really start a new phase of your relationship."
+
+    F "Or maybe this is it… {w=0.5}and maybe you two will go your separate ways…"
+
+    "I almost feel myself tearing up as I say those words."
+
+    "I don’t want to admit it, but a part of me fears that my words may turn out to be prophetic in regard to Anon and Myself…"
+
+    "Naomi is eerily quiet as she absorbs my words."
+
+    "I keep my hand on her shoulder. I’m not entirely sure why though." 
+
+    "Maybe as a sign of support?"
+
+    "The fuck did I know."
+
+    "Still, being there for Naomi - even if most of me still hated the bitch - felt good…"
+
+    N "So… {w=0.5}What… {w=0.5}What am I supposed to do now?"
+
+    "The question really struck me harder than it should have."
+
+    "What was next?"
+
+    "I don’t know any proper answer." 
+
+    "But the one thing I can do is try to bury this hatchet with Naomi once and for all…"
+
+    "So I spoke with Naomi. Truly spoke to her."
+
+    "For the first time, we talked on a common ground."
+
+    "Even though both our voices were already dry, we just kept letting it out for hours."
+
+    "Every insult and begrudging compliment we’d ever thought of each other was put out to air."
+
+    "When we run out of words we just lay in silence."
+
+    "I nearly drift off to sleep on the sidewalk when a car pulls up in front of us."
+
+    "Oh, Naomi must’ve called a taxi."
+
+    scene home fang outside night
+    show naomi sad flip at sleft
+    with fade  
+    "I crank one eyelid open and see Naomi hesitantly moving to get in the backseat."
+
+    show naomi sad with dissolve
+    "She stops with her hand on the handle."
+
+    N "Fang?"
+
+    F "..."
+
+    N "This is probably just me being deliriously exhausted, but…"
+
+    N "I… {w=0.5}I enjoyed this talk we had."
+
+    F "You better. Not everyday I pour out my soul to anyone that isn’t Anon."
+
+    show naomi neutral with dissolve
+    "Naomi actually laughs at my humor this time."
+
+    "Progress…"
+
+    N "Hanging out might not be so bad sometimes..."
+
+    "She goes quiet. Before she can muddy up her thoughts with something else, she gets in the taxi." 
+
+    N "See you around…"
+
+    show naomi neutral flip with dissolve
+    pause 0.1
+
+    hide naomi with easeoutleft
+    "She shuts the door before I can say anything and is gone within seconds."
+
+    "Yeah, I can probably hang around with Naomi again…"
+
+    F "..."
+
+    F "......"
+
+    "I need to get up from this curb."
+    stop ambient fadeout 5.0
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 5.0
+    show black with fade 
+
+    "A few of my feathers have bent and gotten stuck to the concrete from being pressed into it for so long."
+
+    "The door was still unlocked, luckily."
+
+    scene home fang night  
+    show dimmer_lighter
+    show dimmer_darker behind dimmer_lighter
+    show dimmer_darker2 behind dimmer_darker
+    with fade
+
+    "Good thing I don’t live in Skin Row." 
+
+    "My place would probably be down to the foundations by now."
+
+    "..."
+
+    "Dragging myself up the stairs, I remember Naomi and Naser didn’t even really get to say goodbye."
+
+    "He took it about as well as I expected."
+
+    "Judging by the loud music coming from his room he’s still upset."
+
+    "He’ll probably stop crying by the time he’s leaving in a few days."
+
+    scene fangroomfuture 
+    show dimmer_lighter
+    show dimmer_darker behind dimmer_lighter
+    show dimmer_darker2 behind dimmer_darker
+    show fang pendant unimpressed behind dimmer_darker,dimmer_darker2 at scenter
+    with fade
+    play music 'audio/OST/good faith.ogg' fadein 5.0
+    "I sigh into my pillow."
+
+    "This shit is definitely not my style."
+
+    "When I turn over to the cool side of my pillow my fingertips brush against the corner of my phone."
+
+    "A break…"
+    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended behind dimmer_lighter at scenter with dissolve:
+        yalign -0.045
+
+    "Before I can think otherwise, my fingers tap the number I’ve memorized by heart."
+
+    show fangphonevideocall bgnight anonsad with dissolve
+
+    "It takes a few seconds but the screen changes to display Anon’s tired face, barely lit by his shitty phone’s screen."
+
+    show fangphonevideocall bgnight anonconcerned with dissolve
+
+    A "Lucy? It’s three in the morning…"
+
+    F "I know, but…"
+
+    A "You okay?"
+
+    F "Yes. I just wanted to see you."
+
+    A "Hm…"
+
+    F "Anon, I know we’re on break."
+
+    F "But I want to see you."
+
+    A "You mean, like, visit?"
+
+    unknown "Oi! Shut the fuck up I’m trying to sleep!"
+    show fangphonevideocall bgnight anonneutral with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    A "Damn it."
+
+    A "If I could I would-"
+
+    F "When’s your next break?"
+
+    A "What?"
+
+    F "When. Is. Your. Next. Break?"
+
+    A "Err, a couple months?{w=0.5} July I think?"
+
+    F "Text me the date."
+
+    A "Yeah sure, but why-"
+
+    F "I’ll buy the ticket in the morning."
+
+    F "If you can’t come see me then I’ll just visit."
+
+    unknown "ANON I SWEAR TO GOD!"
+
+    show fangphonevideocall bgnight anonangry with dissolve
+    A "EAT A PLATE OF PENISES YOU COPPER PRICK!"
+
+    "I can see his face start to turn pink."
+
+    show fangphonevideocall bgnight anonneutral with dissolve
+    A "R-right! Yeah, I’ll give you the date and address."
+
+    F "You better!"
+
+    A "I guess I gotta go now."
+
+    F "Good night Anon."
+
+    A "Night Lucy."
+
+    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg call_ended with dissolve
+    pause 3.0
+
+    show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg_black call_ended_poff behind dimmer_darker2 at scenter
+    hide dimmer_lighter
+    with dissolve
+    pause 0.5
+    
+    hide fangphonevideocall with easeoutbottom
+    "My screen fades to black and drops down onto my sheets."
+    show fang pendant happy behind dimmer_darker2 at scenter
+    F "I love you."
+
+    "It’s just a break after all."
+
+    "..."
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 2.0
+    stop music fadeout 3.0
+    pause 3
+    scene black with fade
+    pause 1
+    return

game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy

@@ -2586,7 +2586,7 @@ label chapter_6:
     A "At this point it seems like you just {i}want{/i} to be a stressed mess."
 
     A "Maybe I do like your sister."
-    show naser angry
+    show naser angry 
 
     A "Sure, she’s rude, violent, and maybe a bit bipolar."
 

game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy

@@ -156,8 +156,7 @@ label chapter_8:
     # show reed neutral flip at sright
     # hide reed neutral flip with easeoutleft
     show trish neutral at tright with move
-    hide trish
+    show trish neutral flip with dissolve
-    show trish neutral flip at tright
     show anon neutral at acenter with move
     "His breathing becomes a rumbling snore."
 
@@ -227,8 +226,8 @@ label chapter_8:
     F "Shit! The bus! We can make it to the last one if we run!"
 
     "OH GO FUCK YOURSELF BILL WITHERS."
-    hide fang neutral
+ 
-    show fang neutral flip at sleft
+    show fang neutral flip at sleft with dissolve
     hide fang neutral flip with easeoutleft
     hide anon neutral with easeoutleft
 
@@ -556,7 +555,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         hide dimmer_light behind fangguitar with dissolve
         "The music had stopped but her own emotions warred on."
 
-        hide fangguitar
+        hide fangguitar with dissolve
         show fang hiding at scenter with dissolve
         "Fang sat there, looking down at her guitar realizing she showed me something she had never shown anyone before."
 
@@ -821,8 +820,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         show fangdad unimpressed flip behind anon at sright with easeinright
         
         show anon neutral flip with dissolve
-        hide fangdad unimpressed flip
+        show fangdad unimpressed at sright with dissolve
-        show fangdad unimpressed at sright
         hide fangdad unimpressed with easeoutright
         "He gives me a shove off the porch and I hear the door slam behind me."
         show anon neutral flip at turnaround
@@ -835,7 +833,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         "Or maybe some Carfe…"
         pause 0.5
         "God dammit Reed."
-        show anon neutral 
+        show anon neutral with dissolve 
         hide anon neutral with easeoutleft
         "I turn away from the luxurious home and walk down the pathway to the sidewalk."
 
@@ -1206,7 +1204,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         FM "You’re welcome back ANY time you’d like!"
 
         "I manage a weak wave as Fang continues to rush me towards the door in embarrassment."
-        show fang surprised at scenter
+        
         scene home fang outside night
 
         "We reach the front door and she quickly turns back inside."

game/script/9.anons'-dirty-laundry-gets-put-up-to-air.rpy

@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     A "What exactly is ‘carfe’?"
 
-    show reed shocked flip
+    show reed shocked flip with dissolve
 
     Re "You don’t know man?"
 
@@ -131,17 +131,17 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     A "Really now?"
 
-    show trish explanatory
+    show trish explanatory with dissolve
 
     T "It was used in war by skinnies a while back. It’s a deadly tranquilizing agent."
 
-    show trish neutral
+    show trish neutral with dissolve
 
-    show reed unimpressed flip
+    show reed unimpressed flip with dissolve
 
     Re "It’s only deadly when you make it wrong, man."
 
-    show reed neutral flip
+    show reed neutral flip with dissolve
 
     Re "But yeah, it’s great stuff if you know how to do it."
 
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "More plastic than person."
 
-    show naomi happy flip
+    show naomi happy flip with dissolve
 
     N "Why, thank you, Principal Spears!"
 
@@ -951,7 +951,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     Re "Give you some privacy, amigo."
 
-    show reed neutral flip:
+    show reed neutral flip with dissolve:
       xalign 1.4   
     hide reed with easeoutright
 
@@ -990,7 +990,7 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     "I turn away from Trish as she buries her head in her hands again."
 
-    show anon neutral at aright
+    show anon neutral at aright with dissolve
     hide anon neutral with easeoutright
 
     "Part of me wonders if she’ll use that against me, but right now it just feels good to get it out of my system."
@@ -1127,11 +1127,11 @@ label chapter_9:
 
     unknown "HEY LOSER, THINK FAST!"
 
-    show anon neutral flip at aleft
+    show anon neutral flip at aleft with dissolve
     "I turn towards the voice, and the world slows down."
     
     
-    show anon fear flip at aleft 
+    show anon fear flip at aleft with dissolve
     "My field of vision is filled with a soda can, and I freeze up like a deer in headlights."
 
     show sodacan blurred: