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#Let's all go to the Aquarium
scene black with fade
pause 3
scene black with fade
pause 3
#Let's all go to the Aquarium
#label LetsAllGoToTheAquarium: - commented out on 6/12/21 - redundo with new systeo
play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
"Every day after school for the next few weeks I would join Fang to help her practice."
play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
"Every day after school for the next few weeks I would join Fang to help her practice."
"Some days we would go to her place, and other days her father was home early."
"Some days we would go to her place, and other days her father was home early."
"Those days Fang would politely ask Naser to drop her off at my place."
"Those days Fang would politely ask Naser to drop her off at my place."
"The bribes to keep it from her dad stopped being necessary after the third time."
"The bribes to keep it from her dad stopped being necessary after the third time."
"The practice sessions themselves were long and arduous."
"The practice sessions themselves were long and arduous."
"Sessions would go on until either her dad kicked me out or sundown."
"Sessions would go on until either her dad kicked me out or sundown."
"Fang would play for hours on end, occasionally stopping to let me try and to take a break."
"Fang would play for hours on end, occasionally stopping to let me try and to take a break."
"Despite my warnings, shed play until her fingertips were red and raw."
"Despite my warnings, shed play until her fingertips were red and raw."
"I decided it was time for a real break once I ran out of band aids."
"I decided it was time for a real break once I ran out of band aids."
"My great idea was to take out the map of the city Id had since I moved in and throw a dart at it to decide where wed go for the day."
"My great idea was to take out the map of the city Id had since I moved in and throw a dart at it to decide where wed go for the day."
"Theres lots of neat places in the city for dates, the mall, the arcade, a local amusement park."
"Theres lots of neat places in the city for dates, the mall, the arcade, a local amusement park."
"...And the dart landed in the ocean over the dock."
"...And the dart landed in the ocean over the dock."
"The look from Fang told me she wasnt stepping anywhere near a tuna boat."
"The look from Fang told me she wasnt stepping anywhere near a tuna boat."
"The Aquarium it is."
"The Aquarium it is."
scene aquarium with fade
scene aquarium with fade
"So here we are inside after paying admission."
"So here we are inside after paying admission."
"Id suggested she wear some gloves, just to protect her hands."
"Id suggested she wear some gloves, just to protect her hands."
"I dont think she understood the second part, because they were fingerless."
"I dont think she understood the second part, because they were fingerless."
"The Aquarium is a large marble building on a marina."
"The Aquarium is a large marble building on a marina."
"The various exhibits sprawl out to make the place turtle-shaped from a birds-eye view."
"The various exhibits sprawl out to make the place turtle-shaped from a birds-eye view."
"Its a nice place, but I still need to make this entertaining to Fang."
"Its a nice place, but I still need to make this entertaining to Fang."
"She already looks bored."
"She already looks bored."
"Looking through one of the map kiosks, I try to make a mental plan for the trip."
"Looking through one of the map kiosks, I try to make a mental plan for the trip."
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang neutral at sright
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang neutral at sright
A "Uhh… They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs…"
A "Uhh… They got exhibits for the deep sea, the gulf of Mexico, the dopefish, tropical reefs…"
A "... Eenie meanie mini-"
A "... Eenie meanie mini-"
F "Really?"
F "Really?"
A "Sea turtles it is."
A "Sea turtles it is."
"I take Fangs hand and lead her through the lobby into the cmber labeled Sea Turtle Conservatory."
"I take Fangs hand and lead her through the lobby into the cmber labeled Sea Turtle Conservatory."
scene aquariumexhibit
scene aquariumexhibit
F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- omigawd."
F "Anon, are you sure you want to spend the day here? If you wanted to go to the mall or somethin- omigawd."
"A little sea turtle swims out of hiding in the tank right in front of us."
"A little sea turtle swims out of hiding in the tank right in front of us."
"Immediately Fang breaks free of my arm and presses against the glass."
"Immediately Fang breaks free of my arm and presses against the glass."
F "Look at these cute little shits, I love them!"
F "Look at these cute little shits, I love them!"
show fang adorable at sleft
show anon neutral at aright
show fang adorable at sleft
show anon neutral at aright
A "Yeah, I see them."
A "Yeah, I see them."
"I peer into the tank and see a few more hatchlings bob out of the decorative grass."
"I peer into the tank and see a few more hatchlings bob out of the decorative grass."
"The hype becomes contagious and I find myself pressed against the glass as well."
"The hype becomes contagious and I find myself pressed against the glass as well."
Attendant "Please avoid touching the glass, it stresses the little guys out."
Attendant "Please avoid touching the glass, it stresses the little guys out."
A "Oh, sorry."
A "Oh, sorry."
A "Come on Fang, theres more stuff to see."
A "Come on Fang, theres more stuff to see."
F "Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnno."
F "Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnno."
A "Theres more here than just those baby turtles, you know."
A "Theres more here than just those baby turtles, you know."
F "Doesnt matter."
F "Doesnt matter."
A "Youre just going to stay here all day then?"
A "Youre just going to stay here all day then?"
F "Yyyeeeep."
F "Yyyeeeep."
A "Whatll you do for lunch?"
A "Whatll you do for lunch?"
F "Bring me something from the cafe."
F "Bring me something from the cafe."
A "Allright, here I am going off without you."
A "Allright, here I am going off without you."
A "Oh look, a Dumbo Octopus."
A "Oh look, a Dumbo Octopus."
F "Whereisit?"
F "Whereisit?"
"In a snap Fangs moved from pressing her face against the turtle tank to pressing it against the octopus tank."
"In a snap Fangs moved from pressing her face against the turtle tank to pressing it against the octopus tank."
scene aquariumexhibit
show fang happy at sleft
#confirmed that fang has autism
Attendant "Maam, please refrain from-"
scene aquariumexhibit
show fang happy at sleft
#confirmed that fang has autism
Attendant "Maam, please refrain from-"
show fang adorable at sleft
show fang adorable at sleft
F "OmigoshAnonlookatit."
F "OmigoshAnonlookatit."
F "Its like a living egg yolk with button eyes."
F "Its like a living egg yolk with button eyes."
A "Is that the first analogy you can think of…?"
A "Is that the first analogy you can think of…?"
F "And whats over there? Are those seahorses holy crap I have to take a video of this."
F "And whats over there? Are those seahorses holy crap I have to take a video of this."
"I shrug apologetically at the attendant who has given up entirely."
"I shrug apologetically at the attendant who has given up entirely."
"But watching Fang zoom between the exhibits to gush over each oddly cute sea animal was just too much."
"But watching Fang zoom between the exhibits to gush over each oddly cute sea animal was just too much."
"Subtly my phone finds its way into my jacket pocket, already set to record."
"Subtly my phone finds its way into my jacket pocket, already set to record."
show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
show anonphone at scenter with moveinbottom
"Shell probably kill me if she found out."
"Shell probably kill me if she found out."
"But itd be a good death."
"But itd be a good death."
"Wait, whered she go?"
"Wait, whered she go?"
hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
hide anonphone with moveoutbottom
scene aquarium with fade
show fang happy at sleft
"I round the corner to see the next room has a large group of school children hovering over a stingray touch tank."
"That is, a large group of school children and Fang, towering above the rest."
scene aquarium with fade
show fang happy at sleft
"I round the corner to see the next room has a large group of school children hovering over a stingray touch tank."
"That is, a large group of school children and Fang, towering above the rest."
"She does have the act down though."
"She does have the act down though."
scene stingray pool with dissolve
scene stingray pool with dissolve
A "Oh, cool, a stingray pool."
A "Oh, cool, a stingray pool."
A "You plan on touching one?"
A "You plan on touching one?"
F "Touch?"
F "Touch?"
A "Yeah, you can put your hand in and theyll slide against it, watch."
A "Yeah, you can put your hand in and theyll slide against it, watch."
"I roll up my jacket sleeve and push my hand into the water, splaying it out."
"I roll up my jacket sleeve and push my hand into the water, splaying it out."
"Fang and the children lean in intently."
"Fang and the children lean in intently."
"The waters cold, but sure enough, a few of the playful things make their round and slide up right against it like a cat begging for scratches."
"The waters cold, but sure enough, a few of the playful things make their round and slide up right against it like a cat begging for scratches."
A "See?"
A "See?"
"Several in the crowd start jumping with excitement and put their own hands in the water to try for themselves."
"Several in the crowd start jumping with excitement and put their own hands in the water to try for themselves."
"Fang doesnt seem completely convinced, though."
"Fang doesnt seem completely convinced, though."
F "You sure theyre alright to just touch like that? Aren't those dangerous?"
F "You sure theyre alright to just touch like that? Aren't those dangerous?"
A "I mean, its a bit slimy, but theres a hand sanitizer thing on the wall right there."
A "I mean, its a bit slimy, but theres a hand sanitizer thing on the wall right there."
F "That isnt what I meant."
F "That isnt what I meant."
A "Come on, Ill make sure they dont bite."
A "Come on, Ill make sure they dont bite."
"Fang reluctantly grabs my dry arm and I lead her to a spot not occupied by ankle biters."
"Fang reluctantly grabs my dry arm and I lead her to a spot not occupied by ankle biters."
"I put my hand back in and motion for Fang to do the same."
"I put my hand back in and motion for Fang to do the same."
"She hesitates with her hand raised just above the waters surface, then plunges her hand down next to mine."
"She hesitates with her hand raised just above the waters surface, then plunges her hand down next to mine."
"It doesnt take long for a few rays to make the corner and brush up against our hands."
"It doesnt take long for a few rays to make the corner and brush up against our hands."
F "Eep!"
F "Eep!"
A "You alright?"
A "You alright?"
F "Yeah, no, its just… You were right about them being slimy."
F "Yeah, no, its just… You were right about them being slimy."
A "Well, I have yet to hear of a dry fish."
A "Well, I have yet to hear of a dry fish."
F "Shut up."
F "Shut up."
"After a few more rounds of rays, Fang decides shes had enough."
"After a few more rounds of rays, Fang decides shes had enough."
scene aquarium
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang happy flip at sright
with fade
A "See, that wasnt terrible, right?"
scene aquarium
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang happy flip at sright
with fade
A "See, that wasnt terrible, right?"
A "Actually, you got all your fingers right?"
A "Actually, you got all your fingers right?"
F "I dunno, wanna check?"
F "I dunno, wanna check?"
show fang flip off happy flip
show fang flip off happy flip
"Her cheeky grin and raised middle finger confirm her hands integrity."
"Her cheeky grin and raised middle finger confirm her hands integrity."
show fang neutral flip
show fang neutral flip
F "So uh…"
F "So uh…"
F "Which exhibit are we checking next?"
F "Which exhibit are we checking next?"
"I check the aquarium pamphlet to see where we havent been yet."
"I check the aquarium pamphlet to see where we havent been yet."
A "Well… if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
A "Well… if we go outside we can see the dolphin pools. That way it loops back through the deep sea exhibits."
"With Fang in agreement I lead her towards the exit marked with a large dolphin sign."
"With Fang in agreement I lead her towards the exit marked with a large dolphin sign."
scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
"Upon exiting the building my nose is assaulted by a mix of salty air and the smell of raw fish."
"Upon exiting the building my nose is assaulted by a mix of salty air and the smell of raw fish."
"Somehow its even fishier than inside the aquarium."
play music "audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg" fadein 1.0
"Somehow its even fishier than inside the aquarium."
play music "audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg" fadein 1.0
show fang happy at sleft
show anon neutral flip at aright
with dissolve
show fang happy at sleft
show anon neutral flip at aright
with dissolve
F "Ooh, smells like lunch."
F "Ooh, smells like lunch."
A "It says they should be feeding the dolphins pretty soon."
A "It says they should be feeding the dolphins pretty soon."
"The walkway circles around a large pool with several dolphins swimming around, and I can make out the trainer holding a hoop with a bucket of fish by their feet."
"The walkway circles around a large pool with several dolphins swimming around, and I can make out the trainer holding a hoop with a bucket of fish by their feet."
"One of the dolphins jumps straight through the hoop and is rewarded with a fish caught out of the air."
"One of the dolphins jumps straight through the hoop and is rewarded with a fish caught out of the air."
F "Would you jump through a hoola hoop for me if I had treats?"
F "Would you jump through a hoola hoop for me if I had treats?"
A "..."
A "..."
"I notice the trainer has traded the hoop for a large brush and is getting one of the dolphins to open its mouth."
"I notice the trainer has traded the hoop for a large brush and is getting one of the dolphins to open its mouth."
"The trainer starts brushing the Dolphins teeth and showing off the rows of neatly spaced cones."
"The trainer starts brushing the Dolphins teeth and showing off the rows of neatly spaced cones."
"I make a show of craning my neck down to get a view of Fangs teeth from below."
"I make a show of craning my neck down to get a view of Fangs teeth from below."
"She raises an eyebrow for a second and then realizes."
"She raises an eyebrow for a second and then realizes."
"An elbow jams into my shoulder and her other hand covers her snout."
"An elbow jams into my shoulder and her other hand covers her snout."
A "So thats how you brush your teeth!"
A "So thats how you brush your teeth!"
show fang considering with dissolve
show fang considering with dissolve
F "...I dont need someone to bribe me at least."
F "...I dont need someone to bribe me at least."
A "Well if you ever need help Im sure I can get them to lend me one of those brushes."
A "Well if you ever need help Im sure I can get them to lend me one of those brushes."
show fang neutral with dissolve
show fang neutral with dissolve
"And that gets me a jab to the ribs this time."
"And that gets me a jab to the ribs this time."
A "Oh come on, you have to admit they look a bit like you..."
A "Oh come on, you have to admit they look a bit like you..."
F "Ehh, I dont see it."
F "Ehh, I dont see it."
"The dolphin beside her nods in agreement."
"The dolphin beside her nods in agreement."
"...Right then…"
"...Right then…"
show fang happy at sleft
show fang happy at sleft
A "So, how bout we hit the last spot and then go grab our own lunch?"
A "So, how bout we hit the last spot and then go grab our own lunch?"
A "Unless you want to have some tuna with your clone there."
A "Unless you want to have some tuna with your clone there."
"Fang rolls her eyes at that."
"Fang rolls her eyes at that."
"Her dolphin duplicate did too."
"Her dolphin duplicate did too."
A "Youre fucking with me, arent you."
A "Youre fucking with me, arent you."
F "Whatre you talking about?"
F "Whatre you talking about?"
"Fangs aquatic doppelganger makes a laugh-like chirping and finally swims away."
"Fangs aquatic doppelganger makes a laugh-like chirping and finally swims away."
"..."
"..."
A "So Deep Sea then!"
A "So Deep Sea then!"
scene black with fade
scene black with fade
"We leave the dolphin pen, following signs back towards the building."
"We leave the dolphin pen, following signs back towards the building."
"The floor slopes slowly until we reach a door labelled as the sub-level to our destination."
"The floor slopes slowly until we reach a door labelled as the sub-level to our destination."
"Pushing through, we find ourselves in an oversized hamster tube beneath the water."
"Pushing through, we find ourselves in an oversized hamster tube beneath the water."
"Oh, I didnt realize they had one of these."
"Oh, I didnt realize they had one of these."
scene aquariumtube with fade
scene aquariumtube with fade
"From within the glass walkway were surrounded by a myriad of colorful marine life swimming around us."
show fang surprised at sright
show anon neutral at aleft
"From within the glass walkway were surrounded by a myriad of colorful marine life swimming around us."
show fang surprised at sright
show anon neutral at aleft
"Fangs eyes are wide as she tries to follow the different schools of fish that dart to and fro about."
"Fangs eyes are wide as she tries to follow the different schools of fish that dart to and fro about."
"Im more mesmerized by the water filtered light cascading off Fang, casting her in a gentle glow that illuminates her white feathers."
"Im more mesmerized by the water filtered light cascading off Fang, casting her in a gentle glow that illuminates her white feathers."
"God. So glad Im recording this."
"God. So glad Im recording this."
F "Recording what?"
F "Recording what?"
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
A "The uh… The shark! Yeah, that cool looking shark over there!"
A "The uh… The shark! Yeah, that cool looking shark over there!"
"I point to the shark thats currently lazing about, casually drifting by the walkway."
"I point to the shark thats currently lazing about, casually drifting by the walkway."
show fang adorable with dissolve
show fang adorable with dissolve
"Fang turns to gush at the shark, giving me the opportunity to quickly stop my phone and see that my battery is near dead and storage near full."
"Fang turns to gush at the shark, giving me the opportunity to quickly stop my phone and see that my battery is near dead and storage near full."
A "Ah, theres the last exhibit."
A "Ah, theres the last exhibit."
show fang happy with dissolve
show fang happy with dissolve
"I hold open another set of doors, the room within near pitch black."
"I hold open another set of doors, the room within near pitch black."
F "Is it closed?"
F "Is it closed?"
A "Hm?"
A "Hm?"
F "The lights…"
F "The lights…"
A "Oh! Nah, the room is dark because the things inside arent used to light."
A "Oh! Nah, the room is dark because the things inside arent used to light."
F "O-oh."
F "O-oh."
A "Wait… are you sca-"
A "Wait… are you sca-"
F "No! I just… Wasnt expecting it, is all."
F "No! I just… Wasnt expecting it, is all."
"I offer her my hand."
"I offer her my hand."
"Despite her claim otherwise I can feel how tense she is by how her fingernails dig into my hand."
scene black with fade
"I lead her into the darkened room, what little light there is coming from the various animals within."
play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
"Despite her claim otherwise I can feel how tense she is by how her fingernails dig into my hand."
scene black with fade
"I lead her into the darkened room, what little light there is coming from the various animals within."
play music "audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg" fadein 1.0
"The aquariums within are packed with bioluminescent jellyfish, illuminating the darkened room with an ethereal glow."
scene jellyfishroom with fade
"The aquariums within are packed with bioluminescent jellyfish, illuminating the darkened room with an ethereal glow."
scene jellyfishroom with fade
F "Whoa. This is…"
F "Whoa. This is…"
A "Beautiful."
A "Beautiful."
F "Yeah… that…"
F "Yeah… that…"
"I wasnt referring to the exhibit."
"I wasnt referring to the exhibit."
"Fangs grip on my hand eases, and her fingers work to intertwine with mine."
"Fangs grip on my hand eases, and her fingers work to intertwine with mine."
"With what little light there is I can make out Fangs smile."
"My eyes have adjusted enough that I can see Fangs eyes locked onto mine, the gossamer light making them glow."
"My lips press softly onto Fangs beak-end in a chaste peck."
"With what little light there is I can make out Fangs smile."
"My eyes have adjusted enough that I can see Fangs eyes locked onto mine, the gossamer light making them glow."
"My lips press softly onto Fangs beak-end in a chaste peck."
F "eep!"
F "Oi! G-give me a warning next time!"
F "eep!"
F "Oi! G-give me a warning next time!"
A "Mmmm… Naaaah."
A "Mmmm… Naaaah."
"I laugh even as her hip bumps me roughly."
"I laugh even as her hip bumps me roughly."
"Our interlocked fingers prevent her from using her preferred elbow tactic."
"Our interlocked fingers prevent her from using her preferred elbow tactic."
A "So… had fun?"
A "So… had fun?"
F "Mmmm… Maaaaybe…"
F "Mmmm… Maaaaybe…"
F "Ill say yes if you delete that recording."
F "Ill say yes if you delete that recording."
A "Awwww, but you were so cute!"
A "Awwww, but you were so cute!"
F "Sh-shut up! Im sexy damn it! Not cute!"
F "Sh-shut up! Im sexy damn it! Not cute!"
A "Why not both?"
A "Why not both?"
"She glowers."
"She glowers."
A "Feel rested?"
A "Feel rested?"
F "A bit. Ill feel even more rested after some lunch though."
F "A bit. Ill feel even more rested after some lunch though."
A "Sounds like a plan."
scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
"The rest of our rest day was spent just relaxing on the pier."
A "Sounds like a plan."
scene aquariumoutside with dissolve
"The rest of our rest day was spent just relaxing on the pier."
"Snacks on the boardwalk."
"Snacks on the boardwalk."
"A bad sunburn on my neck."
"A bad sunburn on my neck."
"And a very relaxed girlfriend."
"And a very relaxed girlfriend."
"Overall, mission successful."
"Overall, mission successful."
"Except the sunburn."
"Except the sunburn."
"Ow."
stop music fadeout 1.0
"..."
"Ow."
stop music fadeout 1.0
"..."
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