Punctuation and smaller capitalization fixes

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@ -62,10 +62,10 @@ label chapter_10:
pause .5
F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Nice place{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
show anon neutral with dissolve
A "You dont have to stay. I just wanna curl up in bed and sleep my sorrows away."
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Anon its ten in the morning."
pause .5
@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ label chapter_10:
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
F "He?"
A "Dont make fun of Metal Gear RAYmba or else hell shoot you."
@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ label chapter_10:
pause 1
"I eventually get finished examining my wicked wounds and step out of the bathroom."
"Fang is on her phone doing Raptor Jesus knows what."
pause .5
@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ label chapter_10:
scene wounds06 with Dissolve(1)
pause 1
"Fang then pats the bed"
"Fang then pats the bed."
pause .5
F "Come here."
@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_10:
F "Just try to relax."
"I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me"
"I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me."
"She eventually finds a sweet spot of pressure to apply. It still hurts a little, but it doesnt cause me to wince."
pause .5
@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ label chapter_10:
"My eyes feel heavy as the ointment begins to warm up, drawing away tension from my aching muscles."
"I can make out a steady thumping on my bed"
"I can make out a steady thumping on my bed."
"My senses fade more until all Im aware of is Fangs fingers tracing circles over my sore back and the sound of thumping."
pause .5
@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ label chapter_10:
scene wounds08 with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Okay then."
pause .5
@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ label chapter_10:
pause 1
"Her fingers brush lightly across the largest bruise on my chest, without ointment."
scene wounds12 with Dissolve(1)
pause .5