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game/script/7.concert-day.rpy

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     show anon neutral flip:
       xalign 1.9 yalign 0.1
       ease_cubic 1.6 xalign 1.0
-    with Dissolve(0.9)
+    with Dissolve(0.8)
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -99,11 +99,11 @@ label chapter_7:
     St "I’m on time, right?"
     show anon neutral flip at aright with Dissolve(.25)
 
-   #  show stella neutral alt flip at stright with easeinright
+    show stella neutral alt flip:
-    show stella neutral alt:
+      xalign -0.5 alpha 0.0
-      xalign -0.5 yalign 0.1
+    show stella:
-      ease_cubic 1.2 xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1
+      easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 yalign 0.1 alpha 1.0
-    with Dissolve(0.9)
+    show stella neutral alt with dissolve
     window hide
     window auto
 
@@ -337,12 +337,13 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     window hide
     window auto
+    show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(0.25):
+      xalign 1.6 alpha 0.0
 
     show anon: #neutral
       ease_quart 0.6 xalign 0.0 
-    show trish natural flip: # neutral flip
+    show trish: # neutral flip
-      xalign 1.6
+      easein_quart 1 xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1 alpha 1.0
-      ease_quart 1 xalign 1.0 yalign 0.1
     pause 0.0001
     show anon neutral
     show trish neutral flip
@@ -464,9 +465,10 @@ label chapter_7:
     pause 0.8
 
     show fang surprised at sright:
-      ease 0.25 yalign 0.2
+      ease_quart 0.25 yalign 0.2
-      ease 0.25 yalign 0.1
+      ease_quart 0.25 yalign 0.1
-    pause 0.001
+    pause 0.5
+
     show fang surprised flip at scenter with Dissolve(0.25)
 
     "She jumps a little as I step back on stage. Her knuckles are bright white as they strangle the leather strap."
@@ -537,6 +539,7 @@ label chapter_7:
       ease_quart 0.5 xalign 0.6
     F "Ladies, Ladies, please."
 
+    show trish unimpressed flip behind fang with Dissolve(0.25) 
     F "Shut the fuck up."
     stop music fadeout 1.0
     F "We’ve got sweet music to play."
@@ -677,12 +680,12 @@ label chapter_7:
       show fang very happy behind anon:
          xalign -0.5
          ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.25 yalign 0.2
-      with dissolve
+      with Dissolve(0.25)
       hide anon
       hide fang
       show fang hug at acenter:
          yalign 0.1
-      with dissolve
+      with Dissolve(0.25)
 
       "Fang wrapped her arms and wings around me and kept rocking back and forth."
 
@@ -722,7 +725,7 @@ label chapter_7:
       "Her face is beet red and the warmth in my own cheeks tells me I don’t look far behind."
       show trish unimpressed flip:
          zoom 0.8
-         xalign 1.0 yalign 0.0
+         xalign 1.0 yalign -0.1
       with dissolve
  
       "Trish looks like she’s sucked on a lemon with how twisted her face is."
@@ -1072,7 +1075,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     show reed neutral flip: #rright
       xalign 2.1
       ease_cubic 1.4 xalign 1.3
-    with dissolve
+    with Dissolve(1.2)
     Re "Yooo, {w=.3} Anon!"
 
     "Reed crosses right through the puddles, tracking grimy footprints without a care."
@@ -1109,7 +1112,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     A "Fang wasn’t herself?"
     show reed explanatory flip with Dissolve(0.25)   
-    Re "Honestly... That’s probably something to be left for Fang and Fang alone to talk about… Sorry."
+    Re "Honestly... That’s probably something to be left for Fang and Fang alone to talk about... Sorry."
 
     A "Er... ri{cps=*0.65}iiiii{/cps}ght."
 
@@ -1133,7 +1136,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     "Before I even got a moment to picture what it might have been like not even a year ago, Trish appears behind Reed."
 
     "She looks like she’s about to snap both our necks."
-
+    show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(0.25)
     T "Hey, Reed, what are you two talking about?"
 
     Re "Just talking about some memories of the band, Trish."
@@ -1141,7 +1144,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     T "You didn’t tell him anything about me, did you?"
 
     A "Glasses."
-
+    show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(0.25)
     T "Reed, you absolute ass."
 
     "Reed just shrugs."
@@ -1149,6 +1152,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     "By this point the restaurant has been mostly cleaned up with only a few tables left to put back."
 
     play music 'audio/OST/you need gopher chucks.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    show trish considering flip with Dissolve(0.25)
     T "So Anon, we showed you ours, now it’s your turn to show us yours."
 
     A "What, out here in public? Didn’t peg you for the kinky type." #lol sex
@@ -1267,9 +1271,9 @@ label chapter_7:
     Re "Yooo, my man!"
     show reed neutral flip with Dissolve(0.25)
     show reed:
-      ease_quart 0.4 xalign 1.05
+      ease_quart 0.4 xalign 1.0
     show anon:
-      ease_quart 0.4 xalign 0.35
+      ease_quart 0.4 xalign 0.4
     pause 0.1
     show reed:
       ease_quart 0.4 xalign 1.2
@@ -1292,7 +1296,10 @@ label chapter_7:
     "Oh no."
 
     A "Oh, uh, actually…"
-    show anon concerned with Dissolve(0.25)
+    show anon concerned 
+    show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(0.25)
+    $ renpy.music.set_volume(0.35, 1, 'music')
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' volume 1.0 fadein 0.5
     "{cps=*3.0}THINK OF SOMETHING{/cps}{w=0.1} {cps=*3.0}THINK OF SOMETHING{/cps}{w=0.1} {cps=*3.0}THINK OF SOMETHING!{/cps}"
 
     A "I had to leave because of, uh…"
@@ -1300,18 +1307,19 @@ label chapter_7:
     "DON’T SAY SOMETHING STUPID YOU ONLY GET ONE SHOT AT THIS."
 
     A "Family issues."
-    stop sound fadeout 0.5
+    stop ambient fadeout 1.0
+    hide dimmer_darker with Dissolve(0.25)
+   #  stop sound fadeout 0.5
     show trish neutral flip
     show anon neutral with Dissolve(0.25)
     "Nailed it."
 
-    Re "Bummer man… glad you’re here instead."
+    Re "Bummer man... glad you’re here instead."
-
+    stop music fadeout 5.0
     A "Yeah, yeah, thanks man."
     
     T "Sounds personal, guess we shouldn’t pry."
 
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
     T "We’re all friends here, after all."
 
     "Guess we are all friends at this point."
@@ -1337,6 +1345,8 @@ label chapter_7:
     Moe "I knew my lil Lucy could pull dis shindig off."
     show moealt:
       ease_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.4
+    with Dissolve(0.25)
+    pause 0.001
     show fang embarrass flip:
       xzoom -1.0
     with Dissolve(.25)
@@ -1348,7 +1358,8 @@ label chapter_7:
    
     show moealt:
       xzoom -1.0
-    show fang happy
+    show fang happy:
+      xzoom 1.0
     with Dissolve(0.25)
 
     Moe "Alas, I’m expecting a late night visita’, so I needs you punks to piss off."

game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy

@@ -28,15 +28,21 @@ label chapter_8:
 
     F "Geez, {w=0.3} Anon, you look like you’re dying right now."
 
-    show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
+    show anon sad flip at aright with dissolve
 
-    A "The sun… {w=0.5} can go… {w=0.5}fuck itself…"
+    A "The sun... {w=0.5} can go... {w=0.5}fuck itself..."
 
+    show fang behind anon:
+        ease_quart 1 xalign 0.5
+        pause 0.5
+        ease_quart 1 xalign 0.2
     "Fang chuckles and pats my back as I lean over my desk."
 
     "On second thought, tank tops seem cool. Reed is usually wearing one."
 
-    show jingo at sleft with easeinleft
+    show jingo:
+        easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0  #at sleft with easeinleft
+    with dissolve
 
     jingo "Alright class, the Principal’s got something to say, then you’ll be leavin’ early."
 
@@ -96,7 +102,10 @@ label chapter_8:
     window auto
 
     hide carldelewski with dissolve
-    show spears neutral at scenter with easeinleft
+    show spears:
+        easein_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.5 yalign 0.0
+    show spears neutral with dissolve
+    #  neutral at scenter with easeinleft
 
     show spears angry with Dissolve(.25)
     play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'