From 93c62bdf50ab6e6710e578dd73869b7ff9079a62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nio <niohoggr@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 17 Aug 2021 00:27:23 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] chapter 8

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 game/script.rpy                               |  24 ++
 ...and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy |  23 +-
 ....anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy |   2 +-
 game/script/7.concert-day.rpy                 |  38 +--
 .../script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy | 222 ++++++++++--------
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diff --git a/game/script.rpy b/game/script.rpy
index 945f5ef1..4285945a 100644
--- a/game/script.rpy
+++ b/game/script.rpy
@@ -339,6 +339,15 @@ image dimmer_darker = "#00000088"
 #Images for effects
 image moespizza effect = "/images/backgrounds/moespizza effect.jpg"
 image moespizza blurred = im.Blur("/images/backgrounds/moespizza effect.jpg", 1.5)
+image door blurred = im.Blur("/images/other/jewlcase.webp", 1.5)
+image guitarpick = "/images/other/pickthrown.png"
+
+image moes_pizza_blur:
+   "moespizza effect" with dissolve
+   pause 1
+   "moespizza blurred" with dissolve
+   pause 1
+   repeat
 
 #WAOH ITS THE TITLE SCREEN!!!!
 label splashscreen:
@@ -410,6 +419,21 @@ transform rleft:
 transform rright:
    xalign 1.7 yalign 0.1
 
+#misc transforms
+transform shudder:
+    subpixel True
+    around (.5, .5) alignaround (.5, .5) xalign .5 yalign .5
+    rotate 0
+    linear 0.0 rotate -0.75
+    block: 
+      linear 0.04 rotate 0.75
+      linear 0.05 rotate -0.75    
+      linear 0.07 rotate 0.75
+
+transform turnaround:
+    linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
+ 
+
 label start:
     $ fangscore = 0
     $ anonscore = 0
diff --git a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
index fc359e30..bedeb64b 100644
--- a/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
+++ b/game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy
@@ -4112,25 +4112,32 @@ label chapter_5:
     show fang surprised:
         easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
     show anon ohshit
+
     play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'
     Sp "WHO THE FUCK IS UP HERE!" with hpunch
     pause .5
 
     play music 'audio/OST/we just turned on the microphone in our programmers_ house.ogg' fadein 1
     play sound 'audio/effects/rooftopDoorSmash.ogg'
-    #door flies here
-    show jewlcase:
+    #door flies here, just substitute the jewlcase with the eventual door
+
+    show anon ohshit: 
+        linear 0.2 xpos -0.2
+    show fang surprised: 
+        linear 0.2 xpos -0.05 
+
+
+    show door blurred:
         subpixel True
         xpos 1
-        ypos 0.35
+        ypos 0.25
         zoom 1.0
         block:
-            linear 0.3 xpos 0.45 ypos 0.45 zoom 0.25             
-            # linear 0.3 
-            # repeat
+            linear 0.3 xpos 0.45 ypos 0.35 zoom 0.25             
+          
         linear 0.1 ypos 0.55 zoom 0.18
-    hide jewlcase with dissolve
-    #door has flewn
+    hide door with dissolve
+    #door has flown
 
     show roof day broken behind anon, fang with vpunch
     pause .7
diff --git a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy
index a1645c95..4d4fbbf2 100644
--- a/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy
+++ b/game/script/6.anon-helps-fang-find-a-venue-for-band.rpy
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_6:
     #Not A Date
     scene room anon dark with fade
-    "-One Month Later-"
+    "{cps=*0.2}-- One Month Later --{/cps}"
     play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "I’m laying in bed on a saturday morning."
     "It’s been raining the last few days, so I’m stuck inside."
diff --git a/game/script/7.concert-day.rpy b/game/script/7.concert-day.rpy
index da9840cd..47fceaf8 100644
--- a/game/script/7.concert-day.rpy
+++ b/game/script/7.concert-day.rpy
@@ -1,32 +1,3 @@
-transform shudder:
-    #this one has the weird fading thingy - not sure why or if it is really coming from this transform
-    subpixel True
-    around (.5, .5) alignaround (.5, .5) xalign .5 yalign .5
-    rotate 0
-    linear 0.0 rotate -0.75
-    block: 
-      linear 0.04 rotate 0.75
-      linear 0.05 rotate -0.75    
-      linear 0.07 rotate 0.75
-
-transform turnaround:
-    linear 0.1 xzoom -1.0
- 
-#this needs the blurred transformation of the image in scirpt.rpy - I also just added a copy of moes pizza for this purpose, I think an image already defined as a scene might interfere with being also used as something else
-image moes_pizza_blur:
-   "moespizza effect" with dissolve
-   pause 1
-   "moespizza blurred" with dissolve
-   pause 1
-   repeat
-
-#  show moes_pizza_blur with vpunch:
-#    subpixel True
-#    xpos 0.5 ypos 1.0 xanchor 0.5 yanchor 1.0 zoom 1.02
-#    alignaround (.5, .5)
-#    linear 10.0 yalign 1.0 clockwise circles 1
-#    repeat
-
 label chapter_7:
     #Concert Day
     I "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
@@ -107,8 +78,9 @@ label chapter_7:
     show anon neutral at aleft
     
     St "I’m on time, right?"
-    show stella neutral alt flip at sright
-
+    show stella neutral alt flip at stright with easeinright 
+   
+ 
 
     "Where did she come from?"
 
@@ -141,7 +113,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     A "Y-you {i}do{/i} know what your shirt says, right?"
 
     show stella shock alt flip with dissolve:
-        yalign 0.5
+      yalign 0.5
 
     "Stella gives me a quizzical look and glances down at her shirt, her face turning bright red."
 
@@ -167,7 +139,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     St "What’s your favorite anime? I {i}loooove{/i} PreCure!"
 
-    "Raptor Jesus{w=.4} on his {w=.4}cross {w=.4}of{w=.4} rock."
+    "Raptor Jesus on his cross of rock."
 
     "It takes all my strength not to physically cringe."
 
diff --git a/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy b/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy
index 1c5a6d59..0c57834b 100644
--- a/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy
+++ b/game/script/8.anon-and-fang-study-together.rpy
@@ -3,16 +3,16 @@ label chapter_8:
     #Study Session
 
     play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0
-    "-A Few Weeks Later-"
+    "{cps=*0.2}-- A Few Weeks Later --{/cps}"
 
     scene bandroom
 
     "Things have cooled off since the concert back in February."
-
+    pause .5
     "There’s no major events coming up, so the days have gotten longer."
 
     "The weather has started to warm up as well."
-
+    pause .5
     "Each morning I’ve been walking through a thick blanket of fog that always dissipates by lunchtime."
 
     "It’s a drastic shift compared to the hot/cold binary of fly-over life."
@@ -25,21 +25,21 @@ label chapter_8:
 
     show fang happy at sleft with dissolve
 
-    F "Geez, Anon, you look like you’re dying right now."
+    F "Geez, {w=0.3} Anon, you look like you’re dying right now."
 
     show anon neutral flip at aright with dissolve
 
-    A "The sun… can go… fuck itself…"
+    A "The sun… {w=0.5} can go… {w=0.5}fuck itself…"
 
     "Fang chuckles and pats my back as I lean over my desk."
 
     "On second thought, tank tops seem cool. Reed is usually wearing one."
 
-    show jingo at sleft
+    show jingo at sleft with easeinleft
 
     jingo "Alright class, the Principal’s got something to say, then you’ll be leavin’ early."
 
-    hide jingo
+    hide jingo with dissolve
 
     "With that we were all directed to the auditorium."
 
@@ -90,6 +90,7 @@ label chapter_8:
     show spears neutral at scenter with moveinleft
 
     show spears angry with dissolve
+    play sound 'audio/effects/spearYellRumbleVoice.ogg'
 
     Sp "ALRIGHT YOU LITTLE PUNKS."
 
@@ -131,18 +132,30 @@ label chapter_8:
     play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "Our motley crew make it to the front lawn of the school and Reed falls flat on his back in the freshly mowed grass."
 
-    scene outside school with fade
-    show fang neutral at sleft
-    show anon neutral:
-       xalign 0.3 yalign 1
-    show trish neutral at tcenter
-    show reed neutral at sright
+    scene outside school with fade 
+    show reed neutral with dissolve:
+        xpos 0.0
+        linear 1.0 xpos 0.6
+    show reed neutral at scenter with easeinleft:
+      xalign 0.0
+      linear 1.0 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
+    
+    #original code
+    # scene outside school with fade
+
 
     Re "Later guys."
 
+    show fang neutral at sleft with easeinleft
+    show anon neutral with easeinleft:
+       xalign 0.3 yalign 1
+    show trish neutral at tcenter with easeinleft
+    show reed neutral at sright 
+
     hide reed
-    show reed neutral flip at sright
-    hide reed neutral flip with moveoutleft
+    #This was Reed's original exit, which is contradicting the narrative
+    # show reed neutral flip at sright
+    # hide reed neutral flip with moveoutleft
     show trish neutral at tright with move
     hide trish
     show trish neutral flip at tright
@@ -159,13 +172,13 @@ label chapter_8:
 
     "Fuck using my own data to pirate all these games I’ll probably never play."
 
-    T "I wasn’t asking you, douche."
+    T "I wasn’t asking you, {w=0.2} douche."
 
     F "I kind of just wanna go home."
 
-    T "...Kay… Talk to ya later Fang."
+    T "{cps=*0.4}...Kay{/cps}… Talk to ya later Fang."
 
-    F "Yeah… Later…"
+    F "Yeah…{w=0.4} Later…"
 
     T "Fuck you Anon."
 
@@ -175,7 +188,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
     "Tch. Fuck her."
 
-    A "Whatever. See you monday, Fang."
+    A "Whatever.{w=0.3} See you Monday, Fang."
 
     show anon neutral:
          linear 0.3 xalign 0.9
@@ -183,10 +196,10 @@ label chapter_8:
     "Before I can turn away Fang’s hand catches the sleeve of my unnecessary sweater."
 
     hide anon neutral
-    show anon neutral flip:
+    show anon neutral at turnaround:
         xalign 0.9
 
-    F "A-actually… I was thinking…"
+    F "A-actually…{w=0.3} I was thinking…"
 
     A "Hmm?"
 
@@ -194,18 +207,18 @@ label chapter_8:
 
     F "Wanna like, study at my place? I uh… kinda need help… with science."
 
-    A "Suuurrrreewaaait. Wouldn’t your dad make me into a hunting trophy?"
+    A "S{cps=*0.4}uuurrrree{/cps}waaait. Wouldn’t your dad make me into a hunting trophy?"
 
     F "I don’t think you’re that good of a catch."
 
-    "Ow. My ego."
+    "Ow.{w=0.3} My ego."
 
-    F "Besides, he’s working a late shift tonight and my mom should be out clothes shopping or something. Again."
+    F "Besides, he’s working a late shift tonight and my mom should be out clothes shopping or something.{w=0.3} Again."
 
     "It’s okay Anon, you’re just going to Fang’s house."
 
     "Alone."
-
+    pause 0.5
     "♪ Just the two of us. ♪"
 
     "Bill Withers shut the fuck up holy fuck AAAAAAAA."
@@ -236,9 +249,9 @@ label chapter_8:
 
     "I obviously thank the bus driver again."
 
-    "Wait. Alone with Fang? At her place?"
+    "Wait.{w=0.3} Alone with Fang?{w=0.3} At her place?"
 
-    "Bill Withers begins to blare inside my head again God just fuck off FUCK."
+    "Bill Withers begins to blare inside my head again. God just fuck off, FUCK."
 
     scene home fang day
 
@@ -348,6 +361,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         "I take the guitar from her hands and put the strap on, letting its weight hang from my shoulder."
 
         "Fang hands me the pick and I aimlessly strum the guitar, the mess of a noise sounding a far cry from her elegant playing."
+        play sound "audio/effects/badA.ogg"
 
         "Well I tried."
 
@@ -369,9 +383,9 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "Her hand covers mine as she tries to readjust the position of it."
 
-        F "No like- Gah stop fighting back!"
+        F "No like- {w=0.3}Gah stop fighting back!"
 
-        A "Ow hey- Quite tha- OW!"
+        A "Ow hey- {w=0.3}Quite tha- {w=0.3}OW!"
 
         F "Oh my fuck, Anon. Just relax your hand!"
 
@@ -382,7 +396,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         A "Wha-"
 
         "Fang walks behind me."
-
+        pause 0.5
         F "Don’t turn around!"
 
         A "Why-"
@@ -395,7 +409,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "..."
 
-        "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"
+        "{cps=*0.5}AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA{/cps}"
         play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg' fadein 1.0
 
         F "Anon, are you paying attention?"
@@ -499,12 +513,13 @@ label chapter_8:
         "I oblige, and repeat notes several times."
 
         "Fang’s tail starts wagging along with my strumming, turning into her usual metronome."
+        pause 1.0
 
         F "...Wait..."
 
         "She takes the guitar from me and sits on the edge of her bed, toying with the chord I was strumming."
 
-        F "I... I think I’ve figured that song out, Anon."
+        F "I...{w=0.3} I think I’ve figured that song out, Anon."
 
         play music 'audio/OST/Amberlight Brilliance - Demo.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
@@ -522,7 +537,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "Thinking back, she must have made countless songs like this, most of them never heard by anyone and left forgotten."
 
-        "She soon started to hum with the song she was playing, harmony and melancholy blending with the melody,"
+        "She soon started to hum with the song she was playing, harmony and melancholy blending with the melody."
 
         "As Fang poured her very being into that instrument in her hands it dawned on me what this was."
 
@@ -532,7 +547,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "Musical notes that bore the weight of words she couldn’t define."
 
-        "All of which sounded beautiful, melding together into a harsh yet intoxicating piece of dissonant serenity,"
+        "All of which sounded beautiful, melding together into a harsh yet intoxicating piece of dissonant serenity."
 
         stop music fadeout 1.0
 
@@ -554,7 +569,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "That wanted to pretend that no one else mattered,"
 
-        "That part was ejected. Forcibly."
+        "That part was ejected. {w=0.2}{i}Forcibly{/i}."
         hide fanganonguitar
         show fanganonhug
         with dissolve
@@ -575,7 +590,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "She felt like a porcelain doll in my arms. Tears of sorrow and relief stain my shirt and wet my chest."
 
-        F "thank you...thank you...thank you..."
+        F "Thank you...{w=0.2}thank you...{w=0.2}thank you..."
 
         "Unlike the rooftop Fang’s voice was a weak mumble, broken by hiccups and uneasy breaths."
 
@@ -586,6 +601,13 @@ label chapter_8:
         "I have no clue how long it lasts, but Fang is able to compose herself with time."
 
         "I let her move away, choosing to sit next to her on the soft mattress."
+        hide fanganonhug with dissolve
+        show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
+        show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve
+
+        # show fang neutral at sleft with easeinleft
+        # show anon neutral with easeinleft:
+        #    xalign 0.3 yalign 1
 
         "Her eyes are puffy and red, and once again her make-up has left tracks of orange and black on her cheeks."
 
@@ -661,11 +683,17 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         A "J-jam session?"
 
-        "Not that kinda jam session. Fuck."
+        "Not that kinda jam session. {w=0.2}Fuck."
         A "So what’s the whole pirate princess thing about?"
-
         "She doesn’t have a candle so I’ll be fine."
-
+        show fang unimpressed flip at scenter with dissolve
+        show guitarpick:
+            subpixel True
+            xpos 0.5 ypos 0.5
+            block:
+                linear 0.3 xpos 0.26 ypos 0.14 rotate -65
+                linear 0.2 xpos 0.35 ypos -0.15 rotate -65
+        play sound 'audio/effects/anonDink.ogg'
         "A guitar pick bounces off my eye."
 
         A "Gah!"
@@ -675,10 +703,11 @@ label chapter_8:
         A "I know, I know, sorry, geez!"
 
         A "But, really though. What was the deal with that?"
+        pause 0.5
+        show fang neutral flip at scenter with dissolve        
+        F "{cps=*0.4}... It’s just{/cps}… Something that I did sometimes."
 
-        F "... It’s just… Something that I did sometimes."
-
-        A "What, play pretend? All kids do that."
+        A "What, play pretend? {w=0.3} All kids do that."
 
         F "Yeah, but I mean, this was a bit different."
 
@@ -698,10 +727,10 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         F "Being someone new, trying to figure everything out again…"
 
-        Re "{i}Fang wasn’t Fang.{/i}"
+        Re "{i}{alpha=0.5}Fang wasn’t Fang.{/alpha}{/i}"
 
         "Hmmm…"
-
+        show fang happy flip at scenter with dissolve
         F "Anyways, go ahead and just try playing."
 
         "She reaches over and plucks a string on the guitar I'm holding."
@@ -709,12 +738,13 @@ label chapter_8:
         A "Just whatever comes to mind?"
         F "Yeah. Just try and play whatever."
         stop music
-        "And then… All hell broke loose."
-
+        "And then…{w=0.3} All hell broke loose."
+        # hide fanganonhug with dissolve
+        hide anon neutral
         show fangdad neutral at scenter with dissolve
         hide fang happy
         show fang shocked at sleft
-        FD "What the HELL are you doing here, Anon?"
+        FD "What the {b}HELL{/b} are you doing here, Anon?"
         play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
 
         show anonfacecloseup at truecenter
@@ -733,7 +763,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "And he brought his murder weapon."
 
-        "My life flashes before my life and my first thought is: god my life sucks."
+        "My life flashes before me and my first thought is: god my life sucks."
 
         "The Fang bits were pretty cool I guess."
 
@@ -743,7 +773,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         show anonfacecloseup at truecenter
 
-        FD "Out. Now."
+        FD "Out. {w=0.3}{b}Now{/b}."
 
         "It takes all my strength to prevent my bladder from doing its best Stella impression right about now."
 
@@ -756,38 +786,41 @@ label chapter_8:
         "PTERO-CLAWS HURT LIKE CRAP, MAN."
 
         scene home fang outside night
-        show anon neutral at acenter
-        show fangdad unimpressed flip behind anon at sright
 
         FD "The next time I catch you alone with my daughter, I will use your head as a rubix cube."
-
+        
+        show anon neutral flip at acenter with moveinright
+        show fangdad unimpressed flip behind anon at sright with moveinright
+        
+        "He gives me a shove off the porch and I hear the door slam behind me."
         hide fangdad unimpressed flip
         show fangdad unimpressed at sright
         hide fangdad unimpressed with moveoutright
 
-        "He gives me a shove off the porch and I hear the door slam behind me."
+        show anon neutral flip at turnaround
 
         stop music fadeout 1.0
         "I can hear her father’s raised voice from here."
 
-        "Sheesh… guy needs like… all the chill pills…"
+        "Sheesh… {w=0.3}guy needs like…{w=0.3} all the chill pills…"
 
         "Or maybe some Carfe…"
-
+        pause 0.5
         "God dammit Reed."
-
+        show anon neutral 
+        hide anon neutral with easeoutleft
         "I turn away from the luxurious home and walk down the pathway to the sidewalk."
 
-        scene skinrow
-        show anon neutral at aleft
+        scene skinrow with fade
+        show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
         play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 1.0
         "Shit. And things were getting…"
 
         "Getting…"
+        pause 0.5
+        "Argh, {w=0.3} I dunno."
 
-        "Argh, I dunno."
-
-        "But like, after Fang’s song she was…"
+        "But like, after Fang’s song she was…{w=0.4}"
 
         "Fucking hell, why are emotions so fucking difficult."
 
@@ -799,14 +832,14 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "But really, all I can think about is how she was after that song."
 
-        "I saw something… something…"
+        "I saw something…{w=0.3} something…"
 
         "How do I fucking contextualize it."
 
         "In the moment I thought I knew."
 
         "Holding her in my arms…"
-
+        pause 0.5
         "*Bzzz bzzz*"
 
         "A text? Shit, that’s rare."
@@ -840,7 +873,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "My cheeks warm as I recall the feeling of her hands over mine."
 
-        "Fuck… I wonder… how does she feel about me?"
+        "Fuck…{w=0.3} I wonder…{w=0.3} how does she feel about me?"
 
         "I mean, she’s shown me so much of her now."
 
@@ -854,7 +887,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         scene black with fade
 
-        "-Two weeks later-"
+        "{cps=*0.2}-- Two weeks later --{/cps}"
 
         "I’m looking over my final grades for this semester."
 
@@ -928,7 +961,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         F "Yeah, yeah. You only got this one shot and all."
 
-        F "Ffffffffffiiiiine. What’re we doing first?"
+        F "{cps=*0.5}Ffffffffffiiiiine{/cps}. What’re we doing first?"
 
         A "Ehh, why not science first since that’s your hardest subject."
         play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' fadein 1.0
@@ -957,11 +990,11 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         F "Don’t feel like it. We reading or not?"
 
-        "Fang sits beside me on the ground, Her oversized beak obscuring a good portion of the side of the page in my peripheral vision."
+        "Fang sits beside me on the ground, her oversized beak obscuring a good portion of the side of the page in my peripheral vision."
 
         "I can feel the prickle of her feathers barely brushing against my back."
 
-        F "We’re on chapter sixteen, right?"
+        F "We’re on chapter sixteen,{w=0.3} right?"
 
         A "Eighteen. Are you even paying attention during class?"
 
@@ -984,7 +1017,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         A "Argh, fuck you."
 
         F "Ha, you wish."
-
+        pause 0.5
         "Don’treadintothat."
 
         A "If I read the first page out loud, would you read the second?"
@@ -1001,15 +1034,15 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "In conductors, electrons are free to move around and flow easily. This is not true for insulators, in which the-"
 
-        F "*SNNNRRRRRRRRRK*"
+        F "*{cps=*0.4}SNNNRRRRRRRRRK{/cps}*"
 
         A "...Electrons are more tightly bound to the nuclei (which we'll discuss next). When current is applied, electrons move-"
 
-        F "*SNNNRRRRRRRRRK*"
+        F "*{cps=*0.4}SNNNRRRRRRRRRK{/cps}*"
 
         A "Dammit Fang, I’m trying to read to you here, cut that out."
 
-        F "*SNNNRRRRRRRRRK*"
+        F "*{cps=*0.4}SNNNRRRRRRRRRK{/cps}*"
 
         "She really did pass out!"
 
@@ -1017,11 +1050,11 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         A "Fang, seriously, get up or I’ll poke you."
 
-        F "*SNNNRRRRRRRRRK* mmmrrrrfooouurmooooreminuuuutes."
+        F "*{cps=*0.4}SNNNRRRRRRRRRK{/cps}* mmmrrrrfooouurmooooreminuuuutes."
 
         A "Don’t think I won’t Fang! These guns are cocked and loaded!"
 
-        F "*SNNNRRRRRRRRRK*"
+        F "*{cps=*0.4}SNNNRRRRRRRRRK{/cps}*"
 
         "Target locked."
 
@@ -1045,7 +1078,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         F "Oh no."
 
-        FM "Luuuuucy? Naaaaser? Are you here?"
+        FM "Luuuuucy?{w=0.3} Naaaaser?{w=0.3} Are you here?"
 
         FM "I got your favorite, dino nuggies!"
 
@@ -1057,13 +1090,13 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         show fang neutral with dissolve
 
-        FM "Helloooo? Anyone home?"
+        FM "Helloooo?{w=0.3} Anyone home?"
 
         "I hear footsteps getting progressively closer as Fang’s mother searches for any sign of life in the house."
 
         "A door down the hall opens."
 
-        FM "Sweeeetie? Naseeeer? Oh, I guess he must be bowling with Moe again."
+        FM "Sweeeetie?{w=0.3} Naseeeer?{w=0.3} Oh, I guess he must be bowling with Moe again."
 
         show fang sad with dissolve
 
@@ -1089,7 +1122,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "I wasn’t aware their beaks got red too."
 
-        F "Moooooooom! He’s not- what did I say about knocking!"
+        F "Moooooooom! He’s not-{w=0.3} what did I say about knocking!"
 
         FM "That you and lil’ Nassie need to knock on our door at night when it’s your parent’s ‘special’ time."
 
@@ -1123,7 +1156,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "Before I can open my mouth, Fang jabs me in the ribs."
 
-        F "Oh my god mom, he doesn’t have time for this!"
+        F "{cps=*1.3}Oh my god mom{/cps}, he doesn’t have time for this!"
 
         "Fang pulls me off the ground and begins to push me towards the door."
 
@@ -1135,17 +1168,16 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "I manage a weak wave as Fang continues to rush me towards the door in embarrassment."
         show fang surprised at scenter
-        scene home fang outside
+        scene home fang outside night
 
         "We reach the front door and she quickly turns back inside."
 
-        F "OkaybyeseeyouatschoolAnon."
+        F "{cps=*1.3}OkaybyeseeyouatschoolAnon.{/cps}"
 
-        scene home fang outside night
-        show anon neutral at aleft
+        show anon neutral at aleft with moveinleft
         "I hear the door slam behind me and am left alone on the porch."
 
-        "Well that was… interesting."
+        "Well that was…{w=0.3} interesting."
 
         "Guess I’ll go wait at the bus stop."
 
@@ -1214,9 +1246,9 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         SV "You just get back from another date?"
 
-        A "What? No, it was a study session- Why am I telling you this?"
+        A "What? No, it was a study session-{w=0.4} Why am I telling you this?"
 
-        SV "Yeah, a ‘study’ session."
+        SV "Yeah, a {i}‘study’{/i} session."
 
         SV "I get ya."
 
@@ -1228,9 +1260,9 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         A "Hm?"
 
-        SV "Kids these days… She was coming onto ya, dummy!"
+        SV "Kids these days…{w=0.3} She was coming onto ya, dummy!"
 
-        "Oooooooohh."
+        "{cps=*0.5}Oooooooohh.{/cps}"
 
         "Fuck."
 
@@ -1240,17 +1272,17 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         A "What’s that?"
 
-        SV "I was right! HA!"
+        SV "I was right!{w=0.3} HA!"
 
         SV "By the way, that wasn’t your ride, was it?"
-
+        show anon neutral at turnaround
         "I look back to see the tail end of the city bus rounding the corner onto the next street."
-
+        show anon neutral flip at aleft with dissolve   
         SV "Next one comes in forty-five minutes."
-
+        pause 0.5
         A "...Shut up and gimme a Danger Dog."
 
-        SV "Well, someone knows their franks."
+        SV "Well, {i}someone{/i} knows their franks."
         SV "Comin’ right up."
 
         "..."
@@ -1258,7 +1290,7 @@ label chapter_8:
         stop music fadeout 1.0
         scene black with fade
         play music 'audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg' fadein 1.0
-        "-Two weeks later-"
+        "{cps=*0.2}-- Two weeks later --{/cps}"
 
         "I’m looking over my final grades for this semester."
 
@@ -1272,7 +1304,7 @@ label chapter_8:
 
         "Got a pretty great grasp on the core subjects, too."
 
-        "In the end, Mr Jingo screwed us over by making music midterm a live demonstration."
+        "In the end,{w=0.3} Mr Jingo screwed us over by making music midterm a live demonstration."
 
         "Horrid marks there. But I did get things pretty great with math and english."
         stop music fadeout 1.0