first draft

game/script/7.concert-day.rpy

@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 label chapter_7:
     #Concert Day
-    "-One Week Later-"
+    I "{cps=*0.2}-- One Week Later --{/cps}"
+    pause .6
 
     scene moes pizza
     show anon neutral at aright
@@ -13,30 +14,38 @@ label chapter_7:
     "More excitement from Fang and the band and trepidation on my part around Fang."
 
     "Having come to terms with how I feel, I just can’t stop noticing all the little things she does."
+    pause .5
 
     "Like her cute tail wagging to a silent tune."
+    pause .5
 
     "Or her weird and funny way of eating."
+    pause .5
 
     "Or how soft and huggable her wings look."
+    pause .5
 
     "Raptor Jesus, if this is what love is I kind of want to sample buckshot."
+    pause .5
 
     "And yet I don’t want it to stop."
 
     "Even now as Moe and Reed work on clearing the floor of tables and making a noise."
 
     "And I’m drooling like an idiot as I watch Fang bend over a large Amp."
+    pause .5
 
     unknown "Ahem"
 
     "Even now her tail wags to that mysterious beat in her head."
+    pause .5
 
     unknown "AHEM"
 
     "Not to mention the way those jeans hug her hips and ass-"
-
-    unknown "AH-HEM!"
+    pause .5
+    
+    unknown "AH-{b}HEM!{/b}{w=.3}"
 
     A "Hm?"
     show anon neutral flip with dissolve
@@ -105,7 +114,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     "Stella gives me a quizzical look and glances down at her shirt, her face turning bright red."
 
-    St "Oh my… th-this was the only clean shirt I had…"
+    St "Oh my…{w=.4} th-this was the only clean shirt I had…"
 
     "If I didn’t feel the way I did about Fang, I’d think Stella’s stammering was kinda cute."
 
@@ -133,7 +142,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     St "Oooh, we should watch it together sometime!"
 
-    St "I have the box set of every season!"
+    St "I have the box set of {i}every{/i} season!"
 
     St "We could marathon it over a long weekend or something!"
 
@@ -200,6 +209,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     hide stella neutral alt flip
     show stella neutral alt at sright
     hide stella with moveoutright
+    play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
 
     "She flees in denim pissing fear."
     stop music fadeout 1.0
@@ -222,8 +232,9 @@ label chapter_7:
 
 
     "And then promptly trip."
-    #anon fall
 
+    #anon fall
+    play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg'
     "*FWAP*"
 
     A "Argh!"
@@ -285,7 +296,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     T "...Reed’s."
 
     A "..."
-
+    pause .5
     T "..."
 
     A "And you trust his word on something like this?"
@@ -316,7 +327,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     label LeaveStageAsIs:
     $ anonscore += 1
-    "Reed may not understand cable management, but then again neither did I."
+    "Reed may not understand cable management,{w=.4} but then again neither did I."
 
     "Probably better to let sleeping fossils lie."
 
@@ -332,7 +343,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     "I’ll just put them all on one of Moe’s surge protectors."
 
-    "Aaaaaand done."
+    "{cps=*0.5}Aaaaaand{/cps} done."
 
     label PostCableConundrum:
 
@@ -404,7 +415,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     show trish fury flip with dissolve:
       xalign 0.5 yalign 10.0
 
-    T "YOU CAN’T USE THAT WORD, THAT’S OUR WORD!"
+    T "YOU CAN’T USE THAT WORD, THAT’S {b}OUR{/b} WORD!"
 
     show trish angry flip at tcenter with dissolve
 
@@ -548,7 +559,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
       show fang happy flip with dissolve
 
-      F "What? It was great though! Everyone was cheering!"
+      F "What? {w=0.2} It was great though! Everyone was cheering!"
 
       show trish indignant with dissolve
 
@@ -570,7 +581,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
       A "Have you sold much?"
 
-      T "Three buttons, four stickers, and an Apron!"
+      T "Three buttons, four stickers, {w=.2} and an Apron!"
 
       A "An apron?"
 
@@ -827,7 +838,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     show reed neutral flip at rright with moveinright
 
-    Re "Yooo, Anon!"
+    Re "Yooo, {w=.3} Anon!"
 
     "Reed crosses right through the puddles, tracking grimy footprints without a care."
 
@@ -865,7 +876,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     Re "Honestly… That’s probably something to be left for Fang and Fang alone to talk about… Sorry."
 
-    A "Er… riiiiiight."
+    A "Er… ri{cps=*0.7}iiiii{/cps}ght."
 
     Re "Only thing that stayed the same was like... me and my carfe, bro."
 
@@ -939,7 +950,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     T "By the way Anon, I saw you talking to that Stella girl before the concert. You have something going on there?"
 
     "I feel a pit in my stomach as a look of betrayal crosses Fang’s face."
-
+    play sound 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "Right into Trish’s trap, hook, line, sinker and rod."
 
     menu:
@@ -959,7 +970,7 @@ label chapter_7:
          A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
       "No.":
          A "I do NOT have a thing for Incontineisha."
-
+   stop sound fadeout 1.0
     Re "Who?... Thought like, we were talkin’ bout whatsherface."
 
     T "The one with the Dino Duel cards."
@@ -984,7 +995,7 @@ label chapter_7:
 
     play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
     "SHIT."
-
+    play sound 'audio/effects/heartbeat.ogg' fadein 1.0
     A "O-oh, I haven’t? Huh."
 
     F "Who really cares where you went to last?"
@@ -1022,7 +1033,7 @@ label chapter_7:
     "DON’T SAY SOMETHING STUPID YOU ONLY GET ONE SHOT AT THIS."
 
     A "Family issues."
-
+    stop sound fadeout 0.5
     "Nailed it."
 
     Re "Bummer man… glad you’re here instead."