diff --git a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy
index 2ec8459..471a919 100644
--- a/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy
+++ b/game/script/4.anon-needs-help-during-music-period.rpy
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ label chapter_4:
         easein 1.5 xalign -0.275
     with dissolve
     
-    I "Naomi rushes over,{w=.4} followed by Naser.{w=.6} I’d really rather not deal with her anymore today."
+    I "Naomi rushes over,{w=.4} followed by Naser.{w=.6} I’d really rather not deal with her any more today."
 
     show naomi explanatory
     N "Come on,{w=.2} Anon,{w=.4} let's continue our conversation from earlier!"
@@ -268,6 +268,7 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} That doesn’t matter.{w=.4} Shut up."
+    pause .5
 
     show fang neutral flip
     F "Anyways,{w=.4} Naomi insisted on helping me,{w=.3} and I just went along with it."
@@ -369,6 +370,7 @@ label chapter_4:
     pause .25
 
     I "What the fuck am I doing?{w=.5} I’m dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here"
+    pause .5
 
     I "Trish tore at me like she knew I was there."
     pause .5
@@ -490,6 +492,8 @@ label chapter_4:
 
     stop music fadeout 3
 
+    # CH 4 SCENE 4 - Tuning fork
+
     scene bandroom with Fade(1, 0, 1)
     pause 1
 
@@ -499,412 +503,804 @@ label chapter_4:
     play music 'audio/OST/Dragging on and on....ogg'
 
     play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg'
-    I "ARGH!! This stupid-" with vpunch
+    I "ARGH!!{w=.5} This stupid-" with vpunch
     pause .25
 
-    I "Define a Treble clef?{w=.5} I don’t know what a Treble clef is!{w=.5} I don’t care about this shit,{w=.3} it won’t ever be useful."
+    I "\"Define a treble clef\"?{w=.5} I don’t know what a treble clef is!{w=.5} I don’t care about this shit,{w=.3} it won’t ever be useful."
 
     I "Fuck this,{w=.4} who can I cheat off of?"
     pause .5
 
     I "I lean back in my uncomfortable chair hoping to pop my spine back in place."
 
-    # TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6
-    N "{i}Oh! What if you asked Fang for help?{/i}"
+    # TODO: added to resolve Anon's premonition, to be reviewed by writing team
+    # I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Bet if I shared this class with Naomi she'd pester me into asking Fang for help right about now."
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can guess exactly what Naomi would suggest if we shared this class."
 
-    I "I crane my head, looking for Fang. At her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily, drumming her fingers on her desk. Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly."
+    # TODO: this line doesn't actually occur until chapter 6
+    N "{i}\"Oh!{w=.4} What if you asked Fang for help?\"{/i}"
+    pause .5
 
-    I "Agh, and that’s another thing. Who the fuck made guitars?! Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
+    I "I crane my head,{w=.3} looking for Fang.{w=.5} She's at her own desk she’s filling out her assignment page easily,{w=.4} drumming her fingers on her desk.{w=.6} Almost looks like she’s strumming honestly."
+    pause .5
 
-    I "Oh shit, she’s looking at me now."
+    I "Agh,{w=.3} and that’s another thing.{w=.5} Who the fuck made guitars?!{w=.5} Fuck trying to memorize frets or whatever the fuck."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Oh shit,{w=.4} she’s looking at me now."
 
     I "She tilts her head and taps her sheet."
+    pause .5
 
     I "OH!"
 
-    I "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple. My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat."
+    I "I respond with an eyeroll and finger gun at my temple.{w=.6} My thumb hammer drops and I fake die in my seat."
 
-    I "Fang shakes her head, returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak."
+    I "Fang shakes her head,{w=.4} returning to her assignment with a tiny smile gracing her beak."
+    pause .5
 
-    I "I look at the papers we need to finish. Fuck me, how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!"
+    I "I look at the papers we need to finish.{w=.5} Fuck me,{w=.4} how the hell are we suppose to finish these by the end of class?!"
+    pause .5
 
-    # TODO: this line doesn't occur until chapter 6
-    N "It can’t hurt to ask, though, right?"
+    # TODO: this line is also from chapter 6
+    N "{i}\"It can’t hurt to ask, though,{w=.4} right?\""
+    pause .5
 
-    I "Maybe the neon Nero had a good point."
+    I "Maybe the Neon Nero has a good point."
 
-    I "Still, interrupting her now might piss her off."
+    I "Still,{w=.4} interrupting Fang now might piss her off."
 
-    I "FFFFFfuck. I’ll flip a coin."
+    I "{cps=*.25}FFFFFf{/cps}uck.{w=.4} I’ll flip a coin."
+    pause .5
 
     menu:
         "Heads, ask Fang for help":
-            jump Heads
+            pause .5
+            jump .Heads
         "Tails, leave Fang alone":
-            jump Tails
+            pause .5
+            jump .Tails
 
 
-    #>> Heads, ask Fang for help
-    label Heads:
+    label .Heads:
+
     $ fangscore += 1
 
-    # TODO: sound direction says 'Appreciating the Scenery', resolve this
-    play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg'
-
+    # TODO: sound direction says 'Appreciating the Scenery', old script had 'Appreciating the Atmosphere' resolve this
+    stop music fadeout 3
     I "Guess that’s that."
+
     I "May as well get it over with."
+    pause .5
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/appreciating_the_scenery.ogg' fadein 2
+
     I "I slink out of my chair and go around to Fang’s desk."
-    show anon neutral at aleft with dissolve
-    A "Uh...."
-    show fang shocked flip at sright with dissolve
-    I "She jumps in her chair"
-    F "How’d you get- don’t scare me like that!"
-    A "Sorry…"
-    hide fang shocked flip with dissolve
-    show fang neutral flip at sright
-    I "I look at her work and see she’s only a quarter done. Fuck, I hope we have enough time."
-    A "sooo… You seem to be capable of deciphering dead languages."
-    F "Wha-"
-    A "canyouhelpmewiththis?!"
-    F "Help you with the assignment?"
-    A "....Yes. I don’t get any of this. It’s all moon runes to me."
-    F "How’d you even join this class?"
-    A "Only elective that had an open spot. Even though it’s mid semester and I’m expected to be at the level of everyone that’s been here all year."
-    I "Fang leans her head down and holds her hand on top of her muzzle."
-    I "I’m guessing that’s supposed to be like pinching the bridge of your nose."
-    F "Whatever, it’s fine if the teacher gives the greenlight."
-    show reed king rex with moveinleft:
-        xalign -0.35 yalign 0.0
-    Re "It’ll be fine."
-    I "Fang and I jump several inches."
-    F "What are you doing here?!"
-    A "And what’s with the costume?"
-    I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
-    Re "Gotta get a signature for this absent note, man…"
-    Re "Anyways... Mr. Jingo doesn’t care about if you use, like, partners and stuff… He just wants the work done…"
-    A "I… I see. I didn’t know you were also the school mascot, Reed."
-    Re "There’s, like, pockets in here man… You get to bring a lot of cool stuff… As long as you clean it after…"
-    I "I’m not even going to bother at this point."
-    F "Thanks, Reed."
-    Re "s’all good, man…"
-    I "Reed gets up and goes to the teachers’ desk in the corner of the room."
-    hide reed king rex with moveoutleft
-    I "I turn back to Fang expectantly."
-    F "I’m not getting up. Get your crap and sit down already."
-    A "Thanks."
-    I "..."
-    jump PostFlip
 
-    #>>Tails, leave Fang alone.
-    label Tails:
-    I "Guess that settles it."
-    I "Fang wouldn’t want to be bothered right now anyways."
-    I "Looking back to my paper, I try once again to make sense of the questions and music notes."
-    I "Write the following notes in both Treble and Bass clef."
-    I "...What?"
-    show reed king rex flip at rcenter
-    Re "Yo, you should have like... asked Fang for help, man…"
-    I "I have to grab the desk to keep myself from falling out of my chair."
-    A "Reed, what the fuck are you doing here?!"
-    Re "Just getting an absent note signed by teach, man…"
-    A "And what’s with the outfit?!"
-    I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
-    Re "School mascots are pretty cool… You wouldn’t believe the things they let you do with these…"
-    I "I’m not going to ask for clarification."
-    Re "But, uhh… You should get some help or something…"
-    Re "I’ll ask the teacher for you…"
-    A "No, Reed, you don’t have to-"
-    Re "YO, TEACH! THIS GUY NEEDS SOME EXTRA HELP!"
-    I "All eyes turn to us. The desk makes a nice ‘conk’ sound when my head hits it."
-    show jingo at sleft
-    jingo "Does he really?"
-    jingo "Err… Someone… Fang! You help him with the packet."
-    I "Fang glares daggers at the two of us."
-    A "Thanks, Reed."
-    Re "Hey, no problem man! I gotta go…"
-    hide reed
-    I "Reed shuffles over to the teachers’ desk in the corner to get his signature."
-    I "Fang calls out from her chair."
-    F "I’m not getting up. If you need help grab your stuff and get over here."
-    I "The damage is done. May as well at this point."
-    I "..."
-    scene classroom with fade
-    show fang angry flip at sright
+
+    pause .5
+
     show anon neutral at aleft
-    jump PostFlip
+    show fang neutral at sright
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
-    label PostFlip:
+    A "Uh{cps=*.1}....{/cps}"
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
+    pause .1
+    show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "She jumps in her chair"
+
+    show fang surprised flip with dissolve
+    F "How’d you get-{w=.4} {nw}"
+    show fang considering flip
+    extend "don’t scare me like that!"
+
+    A "Sorry{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "I look at her work and see she’s only a quarter done.{w=.5} Fuck,{w=.3} I hope we have enough time."
+
+    A "{cps=*.2}Sooo...{/cps}{w=.3} you seem to be capable of deciphering dead languages."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Wha-"
+
+    A "canyouhelpmewiththis?!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Help you with the assignment?"
+
+    A "{cps=*.1}....{/cps}Yes.{w=.5} I don’t get any of this.{w=.4} It’s all moon runes to me."
+    pause .5
+
+    F "How’d you even join this class?"
+
+    A "Only elective that had an open spot.{w=.4} Even though it’s mid semester and I’m expected to be at the level of everyone that’s been here all year."
+
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "Fang leans her head down and holds her hand on top of her muzzle."
+
+    I "I’m guessing that’s supposed to be like pinching the bridge of your nose."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Whatever,{w=.4} it’s fine if the teacher gives the green light."
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein 1 xalign .4 #1.0
+    show fang:
+        easein 1 xalign 1.35 #1.0
+    with None
+
+    show reed king rex behind anon:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -1.9
+    show reed:
+       easein 1 xalign -1.2
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 1
+    Re "It’ll be fine."
+
+    show anon fear flip:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.6
+    show fang shocked flip:
+        easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.4
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg'
+    with vpunch
+
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Fang and I jump several inches."
     
+    show anon sad flip
+    show fang surprised flip
+    with Dissolve(.75)
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "What are you doing here?!"
+
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    A "And what’s with the costume?"
+
+    I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
+    pause .5
+
+    Re "Gotta get a signature for this absent note,{w=.2} man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    Re "Anyways{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Mr. Jingo doesn’t care about if you use,{w=.3} like,{w=.4} partners and stuff{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} He just wants the work done{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    A "I{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I see.{w=.5} I didn’t know you were also the school mascot, Reed."
+    pause .5
+
+    Re "There’s,{w=.3} like,{w=.5} pockets in here man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} You get to bring a lot of cool stuff{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.5} As long as you clean it after{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    I "I’m not even going to bother at this point."
+
+    F "Thanks,{w=.2} Reed."
+
+    Re "S’all good, man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    I "Reed gets up and goes to the teachers’ desk in the corner of the room."
+
+    show reed:
+        easeout 1 xalign -2.0
+    pause .2
+    hide reed king rex with dissolve
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        ease 1 xalign 0.5
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
+    I "I turn back to Fang expectantly."
+    pause .5
+
+    F "I’m not getting up.{w=.4} Get your crap and sit down already."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Thanks."
+
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like this chick.ogg'
+    pause .5
+
+    scene bandroom
+    show fang happy flip at sright
+    show anon neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.15
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+
+    jump .PostFlip
+
+
+    label .Tails:
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+
+    I "Guess that settles it."
+
+    I "Fang wouldn’t want to be bothered right now anyways."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Looking back to my paper,{w=.4} I try once again to make sense of the questions and music notes."
+
+    I "\"Write the following notes in both Treble and Bass clef\"."
+
+    play music 'audio/OST/Those Other Two Weirdos.ogg' volume 0.8 fadein 3
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?"
+    pause .5
+    
+    show reed king rex:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -0.2
+    show dimmer_light behind reed
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
+
+    Re "Yo,{w=.4} you should have like{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} asked Fang for help, man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    hide dimmer_light
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' 
+    with vpunch
+    pause .5
+
+    I "I have to grab the desk to keep myself from falling out of my chair."
+
+    A "Reed,{w=.4} what the fuck are you doing here?!"
+
+    Re "Just getting an absent note signed by teach,{w=.2} man{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    A "And what’s with the outfit?!"
+
+    I "Reed is in an overly large inflatable T-rex costume."
+    pause .5
+
+    Re "School mascots are pretty cool{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} You wouldn’t believe the things they let you do with these{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    I "I’m not going to ask for clarification."
+    pause .5
+
+    Re "But,{w=.2} uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} You should get some help or something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    Re "I’ll ask the teacher for you{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    A "No,{w=.4} Reed,{w=.4} {cps=*.4}you don’t have to-{/cps}{w=.4}{nw}"
+
+    play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickBigPunch.ogg' 
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg'
+    Re "YO,{w=.1} TEACH!{w=.4} THIS GUY NEEDS SOME EXTRA HELP!" with vpunch
+    pause .5
+
+    I "All eyes turn to us.{w=.6} The desk makes a nice ‘conk’ sound when my head hits it."
+
+    show jingo at sleft with dissolve
+    pause .25
+
+    jingo "Does he really?"
+    pause .5
+
+    jingo "Err{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} someone{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {i}Fang!{/i}{w=.5} You help him with the packet."
+
+    I "Fang glares daggers at the two of us."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "{cps=*.3}Thanks,{/cps}{w=.4} Reed."
+
+    Re "Hey,{w=.3} no problem man!{w=.5} I gotta go{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    hide reed
+    hide jingo
+    with dissolve
+    pause .25
+
+    I "Reed shuffles over to the teachers’ desk in the corner to get his signature."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Fang calls out from her chair."
+
+    F "I’m not getting up.{w=.4} If you need help grab your stuff and get over here."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "The damage is done.{w=.4} May as well at this point."
+
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
+    play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like this chick.ogg'
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    scene bandroom
+    show fang unimpressed flip at sright
+    show anon neutral:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign 0.15
+    with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    
+    jump .PostFlip
+
+
+    label .PostFlip:
+
+    pause .5
     # TODO: Fuck You I Like This Chick
-    F "Jesus... you suck at this"
-    A "No shit, I don’t know what half this shit is!"
-    F "God, they tell you about treble notes in Elementary, it’s E, G, B, D, F for treble and G, B, D, F, A for bass!"
-    A "How the hell do you know any of this"
-    I "Anon then realized, he is horrendously fucking stupid."
+    F "Jesus{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} you suck at this."
+
+    A "No shit,{w=.4} I don’t know what half this shit is!"
+
+    F "God,{w=.3} they tell you about treble notes in Elementary,{w=.5} it’s E,{w=.15} G,{w=.15} B,{w=.15} D,{w=.15} F{w=.15} for treble and G,{w=.15} B,{w=.15} D,{w=.15} F,{w=.15} A{w=.15} for bass!"
+    pause .5
+
+    A "How the hell do you know any of this."
+
+    I "Anon then realized,{w=.4} he is horrendously fucking stupid."
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "I’ve been into playing music since pre-k"
-    I "... Roll with it"
+    pause .5
+
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Roll with it"
+    pause .5
+
     A "So does it take that long to learn that horrid thing?"
-    I "I point at the class’ electric guitar"
-    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
-    F "Nah, I started with piano. I didn’t get my first guitar ‘til freshman year."
-    A "The piano?  Isn’t that the hardest one?"
-    I "I have no clue what i'm talking about"
-    F "Maybe for some, but I started early and got ahead. My grandma had an old piano she would let me mess around with."
-    F "She would try to get me to play all kinds of songs, mostly church stuff because she wanted me to be a little goodie two shoes like she was. It... was fun."
-    F "Then I started taking piano lessons privately because my mom saw that I was interested in it, and in middle school I joined the band for awhile!"
+
+    I "I point at the class’ electric guitar."
+    pause .25
+
+    F "Nah,{w=.3} I started with piano.{w=.5} I didn’t get my first guitar ‘til freshman year."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "The piano?{w=.4} Isn’t that the hardest one?"
+
+    I "I have no clue what i'm talking about."
+    pause .25
+
+    F "Maybe for some,{w=.4} but I started early and got ahead.{w=.6} My grandma had an old piano she would let me mess around with."
+
+    F "She would try to get me to play all kinds of songs,{w=.4} mostly church stuff because she wanted me to be a little goodie two shoes like she was.{w=.6} It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}"
+    show fang considering flip
+    extend "was fun."
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Then I started taking piano lessons privately because my mom saw that I was interested in it,{w=.6} {nw}"
     show fang happy flip
-    F "Only quit because of marching season, I was not wearing a dumb uniform."
-    show fang unimpressed flip
-    I "Fang gets a strange expression, a mix between a blush and a scowl as she returns back to her snappy attitude."
-    F "You done with that yet?  It's taking you way too long, rather have you out of my way."
+    extend "and in middle school I joined the band for awhile!"
+
+    F "Only quit because of marching season,{w=.4} I was {i}not{/i} wearing a dumb uniform."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "Fang gets a strange expression,{w=.4} a mix between a blush and a scowl as she returns back to her snappy attitude."
+
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "You done with that yet?{w=.5} It's taking you way too long,{w=.4} rather have you out of my way."
+    pause .5
+
     I "Cute."
+    pause .5
+
     I "I show her the half-finished worksheet."
+
     A "I still don’t get this fucking part."
-    F "It’s literally three classifications, it’s really easy"
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "It’s literally three classifications,{w=.4} it’s really easy."
+    pause .25
+
     A "It doesn’t list them!"
+    pause .25
+
     F "Did you even read the page?"
-    I "Fang then grabs the paper and points at the top right.  In a small box is a list of three types, woodwind, brass, and percussion."
-    A "Oh..."
-    F "You need me to still help you with this or do you have it from here?"
-    I "Of course I have it, I know this shit, it's just 3 catagories"
-    I "Percussion is simple enough. Getting the differences between woodwind and brass is a bit harder."
-    A "Right. You know your stuff. Band stuff."
 
+    I "Fang then grabs the paper and points at the top right.{w=.5} In a small box is a list of three types,{w=.5} woodwind,{w=.3} brass,{w=.3} and percussion."
+    pause .5
 
-    play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg'
+    A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    I "I heard a sigh from Fang"
+    F "You still need me to help you with this or do you have it from here?"
+
+    I "Of course I have it,{w=.3} I know this shit,{w=.4} it's just 3 categories."
+
+    I "Percussion is simple enough.{w=.4} Getting the differences between woodwind and brass is a bit harder."
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+
+    A "Right.{w=.4} You know your stuff.{w=.5} Band stuff."
+    pause .5
+
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "I heard a sigh from Fang."
+    pause .5
 
     F "I can’t believe this."
+    pause .5
 
     A "What is it?"
 
+    play music 'audio/OST/Summertime Synth.ogg'
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    pause 1
+
     F "Why did you leave your old school?"
 
+    show anon:
+        easein 0.5 xalign 0.1
     A "Wh-"
 
     A "Where did that come from?"
+    pause .25
 
-    F "Just wondering, though I think I know the answer."
+    F "Just wondering,{w=.4} though I think I know the answer."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Why do you care?"
+    pause .5
 
     F "You’re here for just two weeks and already you’ve wedged yourself in with my friends."
+    pause .25
 
-    A "I didn’t really have a choice there, Fang."
+    A "I didn’t really have a choice there,{w=.3} Fang."
 
-    A "I just...wanted to cruise through this year. I’m not good with friends."
+    A "I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} wanted to cruise through this year.{w=.5} I’m not good with friends."
+    
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Sorry,{w=.4} just had a feeling.{w=.5} I myself haven’t gotten many new friends in a few years{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "Sorry, just had a feeling. I myself haven’t gotten many new friends in a few years..."
-
-    F "It’s like I make people avoid me... I don’t like new people…"
+    F "It’s like I make people avoid me{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} I don’t like new people{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     A "That's weird."
 
-    F "Fuck em', you know?"
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Fuck em',{w=.4} you know?"
 
     A "Sure."
+    pause .75
 
-    F "You act like you have a hard time socializing, I’m not seeing it."
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "You act like you have a hard time socializing,{w=.5} I’m not seeing it."
 
-    F "Makes me think you didn’t leave your school out of necessity, but because you really must have fucked up royally."
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Makes me think you didn’t leave your school out of necessity,{w=.4} but because you really must have fucked up royally."
 
     F "I know your kind."
 
-    I "I-I, what did Fang mean by that? It all just came out of nowhere - I mean jeez-"
+    show dimmer_light behind anon, fang with dissolve
 
-    I "We’re talking about how she can’t get friends and now she wants to know about THAT…"
+    I "I-{w=.1}I,{w=.4} what did Fang mean by that?{w=.6} It all just came out of nowhere -{w=.4} I mean jeez-"
 
-    I "Oh God. I’m getting hot."
+    I "We’re talking about how she can’t get friends and now she wants to know about THAT{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    I "It’s Trish. She told Fang and she knows everything."
+    I "Oh God.{w=.5} I’m getting hot."
+    pause .5
 
-    I "Play dumb? Hopefully that will work."
+    I "It’s Trish.{w=.6} Trish told Fang{w=.3} and now she knows everything."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Play dumb?{w=.5} Hopefully that will work."
+    
+    hide dimmer_light with dissolve
 
     A "I have no clue what you’re talking about."
+    pause .5
 
-    F "Honestly? Me neither."
-
-    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Honestly?{w=.4} Me neither."
+    pause .5
 
     F "You’re just some loser that knows NOTHING about music."
 
-    F "And yet you come in from your cave where even their parents must’ve wanted you gone."
+    # F "And yet you come in from your cave where even their parents must’ve wanted you gone."
+    F "You come in from your cave where even your parents must’ve wanted you gone."
+    
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "And yet,{w=.4} you’re now BOTH{w=.15} my science and music partner,{w=.5} on top of worming your way in with MY band and with MY friends-"
 
-    F "But still you’re now BOTH my science and music partner, on top of worming your way in with MY band and with MY friends-"
-
-    F "Anon, what is there TO understand?"
-
-    show fang happy flip with dissolve
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Anon,{w=.4} what is there TO understand?"
 
     I "She’s laughing."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "Hey, you ok?"
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Hey,{w=.4} you ok?"
+    pause .25
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    F "That’s funny, come on."
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "That’s funny,{w=.4} come on."
+    pause .25
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "Haha."
+    A "{cps=*.2}Haha.{/cps}"
+    pause .25
 
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
-
     F "I'll almost miss you when you leave and start finding your own friends."
+    pause .25
 
-    A "Whatever you say, Fang."
+    A "Whatever you say,{w=.3} Fang."
 
-    I "With a roll of her eyes she returns to scrolling through her phone again. I seriously wonder now what she meant."
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "With a roll of her eyes she returns to scrolling through her phone again.{w=.6} I seriously wonder now what she meant."
+
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    pause .25
 
     F "I gotta go."
+    pause .5
 
-    A "Y-you’re leaving so soon?"
+    A "Y-{w=.15}you’re leaving so soon?"
 
-    F "I’m going to the bathroom, stupid."
-    hide fang neutral flip
-    show fang neutral at sright
-    hide fang neutral with moveoutleft
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "I’m going to the bathroom,{w=.4} stupid."
+    pause .5
+    show fang:
+        easeout 1 xalign -0.7
+    pause 0.5
+    hide fang with dissolve
+    pause .5
 
-    I "..."
+    I "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
 
 
+    show dimmer_darker behind anon with Dissolve(.25)
     play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg'
+    pause .25
 
     I "She knows."
+    pause .5
 
     I "But how?!"
+    pause .5
+
+    show anon:
+        easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.6
+    pause .5
 
     I "She left her phone on the desk."
 
     I "I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the room’s lamps"
+    pause .5
 
-    I "It… It wouldn’t be right."
+    show anon neutral flip with dissolve
+    I "It{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} It wouldn’t be right."
+    pause .5
 
-    I "...I have to know."
+    show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I have to know."
 
     I "I reach over to pick up the phone."
+    pause .5
 
     I "Some movement in the corner of my eye solidifies me."
 
-    I "Why’s Reed still here?!"
+    show reed king rex behind anon:
+        yalign 0.1 xalign -1.2
+    show dimmer_light behind anon, reed
+    with Dissolve(2)
+    
+    I "{i}Why’s Reed still here{/i}?!"
+    pause .5
 
-    Re "..."
+    Re "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
 
-    A "..."
+    A "{cps=*.05}...{/cps}"
 
-    Re "... {i}*snrrrk*{/i}"
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    Re "{cps=*.05}...{/cps} {cps=*.2}{i}*snrrrk*{/i}{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
-    I "Oh thank Raptor Jesus. He’s asleep."
+    I "Oh thank Raptor Jesus.{w=.5} He’s asleep."
 
-    I "Fang’s password is…"
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/classroomLoop.ogg' fadein 3
+    hide dimmer_light 
+    hide dimmer_darker
+    hide reed
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
-    I "Wait, only the ‘one’ key is smudged?"
+    I "Fang’s password is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    I "I guess it’s worked until now…"
+    I "Wait,{w=.4} only the ‘one’ key is smudged?"
 
-    I "Ah, the messenger app."
+    I "I guess it’s worked until now{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Ah,{w=.4} the messenger app."
     #TODO: IMPLEMENT MESSAGING GUI
     #do we even have time for this?
     #maybe this will be a post release update
     #lmao as if
     #--refer to Writer1 for the entirety of the texting part as he wants it to be more interactive.
-    I "... There’s surprisingly not a lot."
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}There’s surprisingly not a lot."
 
     I "Seems they interact mostly in person."
+    pause .5
 
-    I "...What did I even just accomplish?"
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What did I even just accomplish?"
 
     I "I shouldn’t have looked."
 
-    I "All because of my paranoia… I just violated someone’s privacy."
-
+    I "All because of my paranoia{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} I just violated someone’s privacy."
+    
+    show anon sad with dissolve
     I "I can feel a pit open in my stomach."
 
     I "I shouldn't have done it."
 
-    I "Trish is Fang’s friend. Not me."
+    I "Trish is Fang’s friend.{w=.5} Not me."
+    pause .5
 
-    I "God damn it, Anon. The fuck is wrong with you."
+    I "God damn it,{w=.2} Anon.{w=.5} The fuck is wrong with you."
 
+    show anon neutral with dissolve
     I "I set the phone back where it was."
 
     I "A glance back at Reed and I confirm that he’s still unconscious."
+    pause .5
 
-
+    stop ambient fadeout 2
     play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg'
 
     I "What’s another secret to keep?"
 
-    I "Each one just building on the last, the growing maw in my gut threatens to make me violently ill."
+    I "Each one just building on the last,{w=.5} the growing maw in my gut threatens to make me violently ill."
+    pause .5
 
-    show fang unimpressed flip at sright with moveinright
+    show fang neutral:
+        yalign 0.0 xalign -0.5
+    show fang behind anon:
+        easein 1 xalign 0.0
+    with Dissolve(1)
+    pause .5
 
     F "Oi!"
 
+    show anon fear:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+    show fang:
+        easein 1 xalign 1.0
+    pause .5
+    show anon neutral
+    show fang neutral flip
+    with dissolve
+
     I "I’m startled as Fang retakes her seat."
+    pause .5
 
     F "Did you manage to do {i}anything{/i} on the sheet?"
+    pause .25
 
     I "I simply shake my head as I show her the incomplete worksheet."
 
-    show fang angry flip with dissolve
-
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
     I "Fang sighs frustratedly."
+    pause .5
 
     A "Look if I’m being a bother-"
 
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "It’s simple you dweeb."
 
-    show fang neutral flip with dissolve
-
-    I "Fang began breaking down the questions, her tone less condescending than when we initially started."
+    I "Fang began breaking down the questions,{w=.4} her tone less condescending than when we initially started."
 
     I "The way she explained it was infinitely better than how Mr. Jingo did at the start of class."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "Over time the sheet was slowly filled in,{w=.4} things finally starting to click now."
+
+    show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Looks like you got the hang of this bit.{w=.5} Good job,{w=.3} dork."
 
-    I "Over time the sheet was slowly filled in, things finally starting to click now."
-    F "Looks like you got the hang of this bit. Good job, dork."
     I "Fang smirks a bit."
+    pause .5
+
     I "I see a chance to strike."
+    pause .5
+
     A "Helps to have an actual decent teacher."
+
+    show fang:
+        easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.05
     show fang surprised flip with dissolve
     I "The slight red tint tells me I was right on the mark."
-    I "There’s also the steady *thump thump thump* of her tail on the back of her seat to clue me in. I can’t help thinking of tugging on the appendage."
-    I "Wait, the thumping."
-    I "*Thump thump… thump thump thump… thump thump… thump thump thump*"
-    A "Hey uh… Is… Is your tail drumming right now?"
-    F "Hm? Oh, that. Kinda."
+
+    I "There’s also the steady *thump{w=.2} thump{w=.2} thump*{w=.2} of her tail on the back of her seat to clue me in.{w=.6} I can’t help thinking of tugging on the appendage."
+
+    I "Wait,{w=.4} the thumping."
+
+    I "*Thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump{cps=*.1}...{/cps} thump thump thump*"
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Hey uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Is{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Is your tail drumming right now?"
+
     show fang neutral flip with dissolve
+    F "Hm?{w=.5} Oh,{w=.2} that.{w=.5} Kinda."
+
     A "Kinda?"
-    F "I’m feeling out a rhythm. Thinking of a new song."
+
+    F "I’m feeling out a rhythm.{w=.4} Thinking of a new song."
+
     A "Is that normally part of the creative process?"
-    F "Maybe, maybe not. Are you done with the packet yet?"
+
+    F "Maybe,{w=.3} maybe not.{w=.6} Are you done with the packet yet?"
+    pause .5
+
     I "I groan."
+    pause .5
+
     A "Still got half a page left."
-    F "That’s just a crossword puzzle. I’m not helping if you can’t do even that."
-    A "I know, I know."
-    I "I have to resort to good ol’ logic to solve the crossword. The longest and shortest words are easy enough to figure out."
-    A "But, uhh…"
+
+    show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "That’s just a crossword puzzle.{w=.4} I’m not helping if you can’t do even that."
+
+    A "I know,{w=.3} I know."
+    pause .5
+
+    I "I have to resort to good ol’ logic to solve the crossword.{w=.4} The longest and shortest words are easy enough to figure out."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "But,{w=.2} uhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
     F "Hm?"
-    A "Thanks for helping me. With the assignment I mean."
-    show fang considering flip with dissolve
-    F "Uhh… Yeah. Sure."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Thanks for helping me.{w=.4} With the assignment I mean."
+
+    show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Uhh yeah.{w=.4} Sure."
+
     I "There’s that red tint again."
-    F "I’ll help again… I mean, if you need it."
-    A "Really? Thanks."
-    F "Yeah, just-"
-    show fang neutral flip
-    I "*DING-DONG BING-BONG*"
-    I "That’s the bell telling us to piss off to the last period. Crap, I still got a few words left."
-    scene black with fade
-    I "I guess the last few words and rush over to the teachers’ desk to turn it in. When I turn back I catch sight of Fang leaving the room in a hurry, tail between her legs."
-    Nas "{i}She’s not that bad once you get to know her.{/i}"
+
+    F "I’ll help again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.4} {nw}"
+    show fang unimpressed flip
+    extend "I mean,{w=.5} if you need it."
+    pause .5
+
+    A "Really?{w=.5} Thanks."
+
+    show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
+    F "Yeah,{w=.3} just-"
+
+    stop music fadeout 1
+    play sound 'audio/effects/schoolBell.ogg'
+    I "{cps=*20}{i}DING-{w=0.7}DONG {w=0.65}BING-{w=0.7}BONG{/i}{/cps}"
+    pause 0.5
+    play music 'audio/OST/Bayside Bumming it.ogg' fadein 1.0
+    stop sound fadeout 1
+
+    I "That’s the bell telling us to piss off to the last period.{w=.5} Crap,{w=.3} I still got a few words left."
+    pause .5
+
+    scene black with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+    I "I guess the last few words and rush over to the teachers’ desk to turn it in.{w=.6} When I turn back I catch sight of Fang leaving the room in a hurry,{w=.4} tail between her legs."
+    pause .5
+
+    Nas "{i}{cps=*.6}She’s not that bad once you get to know her.{/cps}{/i}"
+    stop music fadeout 3
+    pause .5
+
     I "Guess he was right after all."
-    stop music fadeout 1.0
-    scene black with fade
-    I "God, I feel like a jerk now."
-    I "..."
+    pause 1
+
+    I "God,{w=.4} I feel like a jerk now."
+
+    I "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause .5
 
     return
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