From 322beeb6dd220841e461e68b59d62b95f40bf714 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Thu, 15 Jul 2021 19:25:28 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch3 band room scene --- ...p-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy | 305 ++++++++++++++---- 1 file changed, 239 insertions(+), 66 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy index 821b51a..491a80a 100644 --- a/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy +++ b/game/script/3.showing-up-at-band-practice-and-giving-feedback.rpy @@ -803,166 +803,339 @@ label chapter_3: "I slam into the band room door just as the late bell trills,{w=.4} panting and sweaty." - show jingo at sleft with dissolve + show jingo at sleft with Dissolve(1) - jingo "Good timing, Mr. Mous. Just in time for free period." + jingo "Good timing,{w=.3} Mr. Mous.{w=.4} Just in time for free period." + pause .5 - "What…" + "What{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" jingo "Take up anything you like and have fun." + pause .25 - "The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat, threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out." - + show jingo: + easeout 1 xalign -0.5 + pause .25 hide jingo with dissolve - "I looked at the scattered instruments, left alone for whatever reason." + "The teacher then took to his extremely lavish loveseat,{w=.4} threw on a pair of headphones and blacked out." + pause .5 - "Dent looking brass and cracked woodwinds. Even a bass with a missing string." + "I looked at the scattered instruments,{w=.3} left alone for whatever reason." - "Wow. I feel like that right about now." + "Dent looking brass and cracked woodwinds.{w=.4} Even a bass with a missing string." - "I reach for one at random, taking a wooden… thing…" + "Wow.{w=.5} I feel like that right about now." + pause .5 + + "I reach for one at random,{w=.4} taking a wooden{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} thing{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" "It looks like an oak tree made love to an eggplant and this is the aborted monstrosity in Mexico." + pause .5 - "Whatever, I melt into my chair and pull out my phone. Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea." + "Whatever,{w=.4} I melt into my chair and pull out my phone.{w=.5} Seems a majority of my classmates have a similar idea." "I’ve some shitposting to do." - "Let’s see…" + "Let’s see{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 show anonphone with easeinbottom # TODO: phone overlay with Elliot Raptor, and the text ‘he made some valid points :^)’ - "Ah yes, perfect. Click post aaaand now to wait." + "Ah yes,{w=.4} perfect.{w=.6} Click post {cps=*.3}aaaand{/cps} now to wait." + pause .5 hide anonphone with easeoutbottom - "Nefarious deed for the day done, I look around the room out of boredom." - "Oh fuck no." - "Fang has a weapon of mass hearing loss." - "I’m covering my ears in preparation when the ptero-rist starts strumming and…" + "Nefarious deed for the day done,{w=.4} I look around the room out of boredom." + pause .5 + + "Oh fuck no." + + "Fang has a weapon of mass hearing loss." + + "I’m covering my ears in preparation when the ptero-rist starts strumming and{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 play music 'audio/OST/Beach Chill Out.ogg' "Oh wow." + "I still have my hearing." + pause .5 + "In fact she’s actually playing something pleasant." - "It’s mellow. Relaxed. A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it." + pause .5 + + "It’s mellow.{w=.5} Relaxed.{w=.6} A slow rhythm that carries a strange nostalgic hint to it." + "The difference between this and the performance is night and day." + pause .5 + "What gives?" - "Looking a bit closer, she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm." + pause .5 + + "Looking a bit closer,{w=.4} she’s swinging her tail a bit to the rhythm." + "She uses her tail as a metronome?" - "Suddenly, the phone slips from my hand onto the floor." - stop music - A "SHIT!" + pause .5 + + "Suddenly,{w=.3} the phone slips from my hand onto the floor." + + stop music fadeout .25 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + A "SHIT!" with vpunch + "The sound it makes as it clatters on the ground is a klaxon of pants-shitting terror." + "It lies face down on the isle." + pause .5 + "Do I really want to pick it up and potentially face a harsh reality?" + "Schrodingers’ crack." - "...I can’t just leave it there." + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I can’t just leave it there." + pause .5 + "I pick up the phone and slowly turn it over." + "It’s the moment of truth." - "...No cracks?" - "Thank the Lord." - show fang considering at scenter with dissolve + pause .5 + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}No cracks?" + pause .5 + play music 'audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg' - F "Yeah, you got lucky." - show fang happy with dissolve + "Thank the Lord." + + show fang happy at scenter with Dissolve(1) + + F "Yeah,{w=.3} you got lucky." + pause .5 + "Fang has stopped playing and is throwing a small smirk my way." - "I should probably say something…" - "Her playing is pretty good, I'll compliment that." + pause .5 + + "I should probably say something{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + "Her playing is pretty good,{w=.4} I'll compliment that." + pause .5 + A "That sounded way better than in the video Reed took." - hide fang shocked - show fang angry at scenter - "..." + + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) + + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "Wrong choice of words." - F "You’re still not off my shit list, watch it." - "Quick Anon, think" - A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then, you’re obviously a lot better with it." - hide fang angry - show fang neutral at scenter + + show fang angry + F "You’re still not off my shit list,{w=.4} watch it." + + "Quick Anon,{w=.3} think." + pause .5 + + A "Why didn’t you play guitar back then,{w=.4} you’re obviously a lot better with it." + + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "Would’ve if I could’ve." + pause .5 + A "What do you mean?" + pause .5 + "There’s an empty seat next to Fang." - "Finders’ keepers, I guess." - F "The band is just Reed, Trish, and I." + + "Finders’ keepers,{w=.4} I guess." + + show anon neutral flip: + alpha 0 + yalign 0.1 xalign 1.2 + show anon: + easein 1.5 xalign 0.775 alpha 1 + show fang: + easein 1.5 xalign 0.1 + pause 1 + + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + F "The band is just Reed,{w=.2} Trish,{w=.2} and I." + F "So we all have to decide by majority what happens." - F "Reed says using a bass is more unique, and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’." + + F "Reed says using a bass is more unique,{w=.4} and Trish always says how it’s a ‘promising business model’." + A "But it sounds like you play the guitar much easier than a bass." + + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) F "I play the bass just fine." - F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout, you damn well better know what you’re doing." + + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + F "I think the problem is more that if you want to make an unconventional band layout,{w=.5} you damn well better know what you’re doing." + F "If you’re anything short of masterful it won’t sound good." - F "And when it comes to music, it either sounds good or it doesn’t." + + F "And when it comes to music,{w=.4} it either sounds good or it doesn’t." + F "Simple as." + "She continues strumming." - A "But it’s just a high school band, right?" + pause .5 + + A "But it’s just a high school band,{w=.4} right?" + A "Shouldn’t it just be fun?" - F "It is, yeah." + + F "It is,{w=.4} yeah." + A "Even though you’re just doing what they want without getting a say in it?" + + play sound 'audio/effects/badA.ogg' + show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) "Fang flinches and misses a note." - F "..." - F "It’s not like that…" - F "It’s just… Trish says… I mean… God damn it." - F "Look, we’re better with two basses. Trish and Reed say so." - stop music + pause .5 + + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + F "It’s not like that{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + + F "It’s just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Trish says{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} {nw}" + show fang considering + extend "I mean{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.2} God damn it." + pause .5 + + show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) + F "Look,{w=.4} we’re better with two basses.{w=.6} Trish and Reed say so." + pause .5 + A "The au--" + + stop music fadeout 0.1 + "Uhp" + "Fuck" - "I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her outloud." + pause .5 + + "I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her out loud." + + show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) F "What was that?" + pause .5 + play music 'audio/OST/fighter.ogg' fadein 1.0 - A "Nuthin’" + A "{cps=*.2}Nuthin’{/cps}" + + show fang angry with Dissolve(.25) "Fang growls at that." - F "You know what, we’re having band practice after school today." + pause .5 + + show fang considering with Dissolve(.25) + F "You know what,{w=.4} we’re having band practice after school today." + + show fang neutral F "Just show up and see for yourself." + pause .5 + A "And what if I don’t?" + + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) F "You’ll be a little bitch that’s wrong." + pause .5 + "Oh." + "In that case." - A "Fuck you, I’m right, your band sucks with two basses, and you shoulda been on guitar!" + + A "Fuck you,{w=.4} I’m right,{w=.4} your band sucks with two basses,{w=.6} {nw}" + show fang unimpressed + extend "and you shoulda been on guitar!" + "I lock eyes with her." + pause .5 + + show fang: + easein_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.0025 F "Fuck you!" + pause .5 + + show anon behind fang: + easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.725 A "Fuck you!" - F "Fuck! You!" - A "FUCK YOU!" + + show fang: + easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.1 + show fang angry + F "Fuck!{w=.4} {nw}" + show fang: + easein_quart 0.5 xalign 0.2 + extend "You!" + + show anon: + easein_back 0.5 xalign 1.1 + pause .15 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' + show anon angry flip + A "FUCK YOU!" with vpunch + show jingo at sleft with dissolve - stop music fadeout 1.0 - jingo "Aaaaand we’re caaaaaalm now." + stop music fadeout 3 + + jingo "{cps=*.2}Aaaaand{/cps} we’re {cps=*.15}caaaaaalm{/cps} now." + + show anon neutral flip + show fang unimpressed + with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 + "Fuck me." - "..." - hide jingo with fade + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' + # CH3 SCENE 5 - - # TODO: SCENE hallway - show hallway + play music 'audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg' fadein 2 + scene hallway with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 F "Hurry up, dweeb. If I can keep ahead of you while carrying two instruments, you can speedwalk." + A "You sure you don’t want me to carry one?" + F "Pfeh." + "Fang is leading me back to the auditorium with both the acoustic guitar ‘borrowed’ from the music room and her bass in hand, one over each shoulder." # TODO: SCENE auditorium doors "When we eventually get to the auditorium, Fang stops." + "Is something wrong?" + A "Uh, is everything-" + F "The doors, moron." + "She swings the guitar cases on her shoulders around a bit." + "Oh." - "I step around her and grab the hanlde, pulling the door wide open." + + "I step around her and grab the handle, pulling the door wide open." + A "Ladies first." + "Fang growls and stomps on my foot as she walks past." + "..." + A "FUCK!" + F "Hurry up already." - # TODO: SCENE auditorium - - scene bandroom + scene auditorium show reed neutral flip at rright show trish neutral at tcenter "Inside, Reed and Trish already have everything set up onstage."