Punctuation and smaller capitalization fixes

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18 changed files with 324 additions and 325 deletions

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@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Its the sounds that reach me first.{w=.4} The chatter of people milling about."
pause .5
unknown "Bro"
unknown "Bro."
unknown "Its been too long!"
@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"The fog shrouding gives the school an ominous vibe to it."
"I look at the name written on the arch over the entrance"
"I look at the name written on the arch over the entrance."
pause .5
"{cps=*0.2}{b}{size=+10}{i}Volcano High{/i}{/size}{/b}{/cps}"
@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"My feet carry me over the soggy grass as I look for somewhere else to be."
"On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary"
"On the side of the building is where I find sanctuary."
window hide
window auto
@ -349,10 +349,9 @@ label chapter_1:
unknown "Oh my goodness! Are you okay?"
pause .5
"I groan"
"I groan."
A "{cps=*0.35}Never better{/cps}"
"I instinctively apply my chill guy facade in the presence of strangers to hide how uneasy I am today."
"A hand is held over my face.{w=0.5} In my pain addled confusion I shake it."
@ -360,7 +359,7 @@ label chapter_1:
unknown "Naser!"
Nas "Right, right"
Nas "Right, right."
scene garden
show naser neutral flip:
@ -823,7 +822,7 @@ label chapter_1:
Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Ohayo gozaimasu curassu. Tudei yu habu e niu curassu-meito tsu Borukeino Hai{/cps}"
pause 0.5
"What"
"What?"
Tsuki "{cps=*0.6}Anon-kun puriizu camu appu zen intorudiusu yooru serfu{/cps}"
pause 0.5
@ -1114,7 +1113,7 @@ label chapter_1:
show naomi sad flip with dissolve
"Naomi is starting to look disappointed Im only picking up on Nasers interjections"
"Naomi is starting to look disappointed Im only picking up on Nasers interjections."
Nas "If you need a bit more extra chow, theres going to be free refreshments at my si--{w=0.4} uh{cps=*0.1}...{/cps}"
@ -1551,7 +1550,7 @@ label chapter_1:
linear 0.05 xalign 0.605
repeat
"Naser grasps at the air unsure what to think or do at the moment.{w=0.5} I think hes angry"
"Naser grasps at the air unsure what to think or do at the moment.{w=0.5} I think hes angry."
window hide
window auto
@ -1863,7 +1862,7 @@ label chapter_1:
pause 1
$ i = i + 1
"Oh God I cant take this, Im gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much, Im just gonna grab my pizza and leave"
"Oh God I cant take this, Im gonna grow a 6 pack from laughing so much, Im just gonna grab my pizza and leave."
scene auditorium
show anon neutral flip at aright
@ -2122,7 +2121,7 @@ label chapter_1:
"Soon enough it's time to leave for school. I grab my backpack and slide it over my shoulders."
"I take my jacket off the hanger and"
"I take my jacket off the hanger and."
show anon unimpressed with dissolve
@ -2221,12 +2220,12 @@ label chapter_1:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"I just realized I dont know what to say to him"
"I just realized I dont know what to say to him."
pause .5
"\"I wasnt laughing AT your sister,{w=0.4} I was laughing WITH the crowd\""
"\"I wasnt laughing AT your sister,{w=0.4} I was laughing WITH the crowd.\""
"No,{w=0.3} that sounds bad"
"No,{w=0.3} that sounds bad."
pause .5
"\"Weird sisters,{w=0.2} amirite?\""
@ -3212,7 +3211,7 @@ label chapter_1:
Re "Nah man, scool."
Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it"
Re "They called me because they wanted me to kill bugs crawling on the drums with a couple sticks, I don't know why a bunch of people came there to watch it."
pause .5
Nas "Right{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=0.4} And youre absolutely sure Trish is taking it okay?"

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@ -62,10 +62,10 @@ label chapter_10:
pause .5
F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Nice place{cps=*.1}...?{/cps}"
show anon neutral with dissolve
A "You dont have to stay. I just wanna curl up in bed and sleep my sorrows away."
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Anon its ten in the morning."
pause .5
@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ label chapter_10:
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .25
F "He?"
A "Dont make fun of Metal Gear RAYmba or else hell shoot you."
@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ label chapter_10:
pause 1
"I eventually get finished examining my wicked wounds and step out of the bathroom."
"Fang is on her phone doing Raptor Jesus knows what."
pause .5
@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ label chapter_10:
scene wounds06 with Dissolve(1)
pause 1
"Fang then pats the bed"
"Fang then pats the bed."
pause .5
F "Come here."
@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ label chapter_10:
F "Just try to relax."
"I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me"
"I sigh and try my hardest not to freak out when she touches me."
"She eventually finds a sweet spot of pressure to apply. It still hurts a little, but it doesnt cause me to wince."
pause .5
@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ label chapter_10:
"My eyes feel heavy as the ointment begins to warm up, drawing away tension from my aching muscles."
"I can make out a steady thumping on my bed"
"I can make out a steady thumping on my bed."
"My senses fade more until all Im aware of is Fangs fingers tracing circles over my sore back and the sound of thumping."
pause .5
@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ label chapter_10:
scene wounds08 with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Okay then."
pause .5
@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ label chapter_10:
pause 1
"Her fingers brush lightly across the largest bruise on my chest, without ointment."
scene wounds12 with Dissolve(1)
pause .5

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@ -499,7 +499,7 @@ label chapter_11:
"I can see the gears in his head turning, but his expression is telling me he doesnt actually know what he wants to do."
pause .5
"I'll keep my distance just in case"
"I'll keep my distance just in case."
pause .5
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Why did you call me here?"
@ -507,7 +507,7 @@ label chapter_11:
Nas "Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Shut up. Let me think."
pause .5
"He sighs, and turns to me"
"He sighs, and turns to me."
show naser brooding flip with dissolve
Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ label chapter_11:
show naser happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "Yeah man, sure."
"He nervously chuckles"
"He nervously chuckles."
pause .5
show naser brooding flip with dissolve
@ -1906,7 +1906,7 @@ label chapter_11:
A "Why don't you ask her yourself?"
scene sadserangry with Dissolve(.25)
Nas "I JUST SAID THEY WON'T TALK TO ME"
Nas "I JUST SAID THEY WON'T TALK TO ME!"
Nas "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -4122,7 +4122,7 @@ label chapter_11:
easeout 0.75 xalign 1.3
pause .25
hide reed with dissolve
scene hallway with fade
"Reed is chasing close behind only a few feet behind me."
@ -4146,7 +4146,7 @@ label chapter_11:
"Did he give up?"
pause .5
stop music fadeout 0.2
play ambient "audio/effects/firealarmreverbloop.ogg" loop fadein 0.5
pause .5
@ -4415,7 +4415,7 @@ label chapter_11:
F "And we only did what you wanted!"
show trish angry with Dissolve(.25)
T "Because I THOUGHT you'd be ok with it, if you didn't agree with anything I did then you should've just TOLD ME"
T "Because I THOUGHT you'd be ok with it, if you didn't agree with anything I did then you should've just TOLD ME!"
F "You should have known!"
@ -4428,7 +4428,7 @@ label chapter_11:
easein_elastic 0.75 xalign 0.15
extend "{i}YOUR{/i}{w=.2} IDEA."
T "YOU WERE THE ONE WHO WANTED US TO TAKE THE BAND MORE SERIOUSLY- AND I DID"
T "YOU WERE THE ONE WHO WANTED US TO TAKE THE BAND MORE SERIOUSLY- AND I DID."
T "I WAS JUST DOING WHAT YOU WANTED BECAUSE I THOUGHT IT WOULD HAVE MADE US HAPPIER."
pause .5

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@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
easeout 1 xalign 1.3
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
hide anon
hide fang
hide fang
with dissolve
scene black with Dissolve(1)
@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
"Either way, I snap several pictures from various angles while Fang continues her sermon."
F "Alright, whats next?"
show fang:
ease_cubic 1 xalign -0.6
pause .55
@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
"It was a clip of Stygy playing the national anthem as a protest song or something."
"It sounded kinda cool, Ill give him that much."
play ambient 'audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg' fadein 4
stop music fadeout 4
pause .5
@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.75
with dissolve
show anon:
easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.25
show anon fear with Dissolve(.25)
@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
"She drags me away from the screen to whatever it is she wants to take inspiration from."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 4
play music 'audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg' fadein 1.0
scene black with Dissolve(1)
@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
A "Im pretty sure we got everything, you could probably reconstruct the entire exhibit using only these pictures I took."
F "I guess{cps=*.1}...{/cps} just cant have this part of the plan go wrong, you know?"
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.15
show anon neutral with dissolve
@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
show fang:
easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.85
show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "OH WAIT!"
stop music fadeout 4
@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
"I hand her back her phone."
pause .5
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.75
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
F "Right, so Ill tell her we should meet at-"
A "Actually, Fang, hold on a second{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Hm?"
@ -737,13 +737,13 @@ label chapter_12A:
pause 1
"I place the basket of fries in front of Fang and she immediately starts digging in."
"So much for not being hungry."
show reed happy sunglasses flip with Dissolve(.25)
"Reed gives me a thumbs up, wearing his giant oversized sunglasses again."
show reed sunglasses flip
show reed sunglasses flip
show trish unimpressed flip
with dissolve
@ -805,7 +805,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
"Trish looks smug. What did I agree to?"
pause .5
F "Great! We can try Trishs new song in the next rehearsal!"
T "Im surprised you agreed to that, I would have thought you wanted us to play some anime song instead."
@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
"Know what. I dont care any more."
show fang neutral
show fang neutral
show trish neutral flip
with Dissolve(.25)
F "Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps} but lets talk about that later. Im cravin a milkshake now."
@ -907,7 +907,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
F "Whatd I miss?"
T "Just talking to White Knight about his taste in music."
pause .5
pause .5
show dimmer_light behind anon, fang, trish, reed with Dissolve(.25)
"Fuck this."
@ -937,7 +937,7 @@ label chapter_12A:
Re "Peace, dude."
pause .5
show anon:
easein_cubic 0.75 xalign 0.225
ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.3
@ -962,4 +962,4 @@ label chapter_12A:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 1
return
return

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@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
show naomi prom neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
pause .2
hide anon
hide naomi
hide naomi
with dissolve
"Before I can even say anything, Naomis dragging me by the shoulder into the kitchen."
@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
with Fade(1, 0, 1)
pause 1
"She gives me a death stare for what seems like a solid minute before she begins yelling at me"
"She gives me a death stare for what seems like a solid minute before she begins yelling at me."
play music 'audio/ost/protestra_punk.ogg' fadein 1
@ -177,13 +177,13 @@ label chapter_13A:
pause .75
easein_back 1 xalign 0.65
"Naomi sighs and walks away, shoving into my shoulder on the way out, completely disregarding my presence."
show anon prom neutral with dissolve
N "Just go, get out of here."
N "This conversation is over."
show naomi:
easeout_cubic 0.5 xalign 1.6
pause .15
@ -209,7 +209,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
"The arguing from the other room quickly and very loudly breaks my train of thought and I stride back to where everybody is gathered."
pause .5
scene home fang night
show fangdad unimpressed flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
show fang a prom unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
pause .2
hide anon
hide fang
hide fang
with dissolve
"Without a word she grabbed me by the wrist and dragged me through the front door, guitar in her other hand."
@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
"The driver chuckles at his own remark."
pause .5
A "Were doing fine, take us to Volcano high"
A "Were doing fine, take us to Volcano High."
D "Prom Im guessing? Ya two high school sweet-hearts should stay safe out there! Crazy worl out there innit?"
pause .5
@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
D "Sure, sure."
"The Driver sighs a little"
"The Driver sighs a little."
pause .5
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorloop.ogg' fadein 3
@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
"The taxi pulls away from the curb and rounds the corner back onto the main road."
pause .5
stop ambient fadeout 4
play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
A "Sounds like we got plenty of time."
F "Youd be surprised. Come on."
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
play music 'audio/OST/Many Such Cases of Being So True.ogg' fadein 1.0
show fang a prom sad
show trish prom sad flip
show trish prom sad flip
with dissolve
pause .5
@ -628,7 +628,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
"Going great, actually":
A "Going great, Actually"
A "Going great, actually."
pause .5
Sp "Wheres your date, I thought I saw the two of you enter."
@ -672,7 +672,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
"I swirl the punch in my cup around before chugging the last of it."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}I just want to go home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
hide dimmer_light with dissolve
Sp "-ake responsibility and take it seriously."
@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
pause .5
Sp "{cps=*.3}Aaaaaare{/cps}{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
stop ambient fadeout 0.25
play sound 'audio/effects/drumrollend.ogg' fadein 0.25
pause 1
@ -809,7 +809,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
hide naomi
with dissolve
pause .5
show spears:
ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
show dimmer_darker behind spears with Dissolve(1)
@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
pause .5
play music 'audio/ost/summertime synth.ogg' fadein 2
scene auditorium
scene auditorium
show dimmer_darker
show dimmer_darker as dimmer_xtra
with Dissolve(1)
@ -1283,7 +1283,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 1
stop ambient fadeout 0.5
play sound 'audio/effects/showermuffledend.ogg' fadein 0.25
"Some minutes later with my knife and I hear the shower sputter to a stop."
@ -1493,7 +1493,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
stop music fadeout 5
scene roomthrash7 with Dissolve(.25)
A "THATS ENOUGH"
A "THATS ENOUGH!"
pause 1
"While Fang is recoiling, I take the moment to grab her by the wrists and rush her over to sit on the bed."
@ -1514,7 +1514,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
scene roomthrash9 with hpunch
"Before I can finish, Fang plants her foot on my chest and pushes my away with all her strength."
"Before I can finish, Fang plants her foot on my chest and pushes my away with all her strength."
"The force makes me stumble back several feet."
@ -1596,7 +1596,7 @@ label chapter_13A:
A "Look{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
A "You're tired, I'm tired, let's just sleep and think it over tomorrow"
A "You're tired, I'm tired, let's just sleep and think it over tomorrow."
pause .5
"As I drape the blanket over her shoulders, she reaches out to squeeze my hand."
@ -1647,4 +1647,4 @@ label chapter_13A:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 1
return
return

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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene stair2 with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
"Lucy comes downstairs in a white dress."
"The back of the dress trails down the stairs behind her."
@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene home fang night
show fang c prom happy:
xalign -0.3
show anon prom neutral flip at acenter
show anon prom neutral flip at acenter
with fade
A "Yeah, been here a while."
@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene black with dissolve
pause .5
play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
pause .275
scene home fang night
@ -245,11 +245,11 @@ label chapter_13C:
FD "Home by midnight."
show anon prom neutral flip
show fang c prom happy flip
show fang c prom happy flip
with dissolve
hide fang
hide anon
hide fang
hide anon
with easeoutleft
"I only manage a weak nod as Lucy rushes me towards the door."
scene black with fade
@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
xalign 1.1 yalign 0.1
with dissolve
"Naomi is attempting to talk to Lucy, overwhelming her with questions"
"Naomi is attempting to talk to Lucy, overwhelming her with questions."
stop music fadeout 1.0
play music "audio/OST/west_coast_kicking.ogg" fadein 1.0
"Lucy's looking on edge, I should probably intervene quick."
@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
T "Seriously, say something!"
F "Trish, I can't even look at you anymore"
F "Trish, I can't even look at you anymore."
T "Why?"
@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Rosa blocks her way long enough for me to grab her wrist."
show anon behind trish
show trish prom angry
show trish prom angry
with dissolve
T "Wh- Rosa, hey!!"
@ -886,7 +886,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "Yeah. Fresh air sounds pretty good right now."
"I hold my hand out and Lucys hand links with it."
scene outside school night
scene outside school night
show anon prom neutral at acenter
show fang c prom happy at sleft
with fade
@ -1114,7 +1114,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
play music "audio/OST/its_footloose_now.ogg" fadein 1.0
"The music playing from the stereo sounds positively ancient."
"Probably one of her parents CDs. If it even uses CDs"
"Probably one of her parents CDs. If it even uses CDs."
A "Wait what was that about lights?"
@ -1275,15 +1275,15 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Eight months since I first joined Volcano High and it felt like just yesterday."
play ambient 'audio/effects/outdoorLoop.ogg' fadein 1.0
play music 'audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg' fadein 2.0
scene white with fade
scene park
scene white with fade
scene park
show fang neutral at sleft:
xalign 0.25
xalign 0.25
show anon concerned behind fang at acenter:
xalign 0.65
show naser happy flip at nright
with dissolve
"The sun bears down on us in an atmosphere thats more water than air."
with dissolve
"The sun bears down on us in an atmosphere thats more water than air."
"Somehow, I feel like Im the only one feeling the heat right now."
@ -1291,7 +1291,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Naser finally took a day off from his part-time job working for GrubKlub, so the three of us went to the park for something of a picnic."
show naser angry flip with dissolve
show naser angry flip with dissolve
Nas "I WILL NOT MAKE THE DELIVERY DANCE, ANON STOP ASKING ME TO DO IT!"
show anon grin with dissolve
@ -1309,10 +1309,10 @@ label chapter_13C:
xalign 0.5 yalign 0.4
ease_cubic 0.3 rotate 90 xpos 0.84 ypos 0.45
ease_cubic 0.5 rotate 110 ypos 0.62
show naser rstained unimpressed with dissolve:
xzoom -1.0
show chillicheesefries:
ease_cubic 0.7 ypos 1.3
@ -1355,7 +1355,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.35
pause 0.1
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.25
show anon:
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.55
pause 0.1
@ -1365,7 +1365,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"I down the rest of my soda to keep alive and look down at my plate."
show anon neutral
show fang neutral
show fang neutral
with dissolve
"Not really that hungry anymore. Should just toss-"
@ -1393,7 +1393,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang considering flip with dissolve
F "Oh you know, the usual. Dreading the future as an adult, trying to figure out what to do for a living. Stuff like that."
SV "The more you think about it, the more daunting it becomes."
SV "The more you think about it, the more daunting it becomes."
SV "You just gotta let go of your expectations and see where life takes you!"
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
@ -1477,7 +1477,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"She gestures to me and then to Naser, who looks up from the remains of my leftovers like a deer being caught in headlights."
show fang neutral
with dissolve
with dissolve
SV "Uh…{w=0.5} You got those from Berta, right? You know she puts sawdust in the fryer to save money?"
show naser fullystained surprised at nright with dissolve:
xzoom -1.0
@ -1498,7 +1498,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
SV "I shouldnt be gushing like this, your situation is probably much more complex than I think."
show fang neutral flip
show fang neutral flip
show tracy:
xalign -0.25
with dissolve
@ -1518,7 +1518,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
pause 0.5
show naser fullystained considering with dissolve:
xzoom 1.0
pause 1.0
pause 1.0
hide naser with easeoutright
show tracy behind fang:
@ -1528,8 +1528,8 @@ label chapter_13C:
"The street vendor gives Lucy a pat on the shoulder before returning to the helm of her food cart, which she wheels around with surprising dexterity."
SV "Hey. If you ever feel alone and need to chew someones ear off with your woes, me and my delicious hotdogs are always available!"
show tracy neutral with dissolve
show tracy neutral with dissolve
pause 0.1
hide tracy with easeoutleft
@ -1550,8 +1550,8 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "Yes…"
stop ambient fadeout 2.0
scene black with fade
scene black with fade
scene nascar day
"Naser drives us back to my place in relative silence."
@ -1564,16 +1564,16 @@ label chapter_13C:
Nas "Well…{w=0.5} Enjoy your last night together..."
"Lucy and I step out of the car, and he speeds away like normal."
scene emptyroomnight
show fang neutral at sleft:
xalign -0.2
xalign -0.2
show anon neutral at acenter
with fade
with fade
play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 1.0
F "..."
"Ive already shipped everything important back home and donated the books."
"Ive already shipped everything important back home and donated the books."
"Even the T.V.s gone."
@ -1596,7 +1596,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fangphonevideocall call_ended_bg_black call_ended_poff at scenter with easeinbottom
hide anon
hide fang
hide fang
with dissolve
"We curl together on my bed, staring at Lucys phone app boot up."
@ -1622,7 +1622,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
hide fangphonevideocall with easeoutbottom
"My interjection snaps her out of her mood, and she sets her phone down gently on the empty computer desk."
show fang sad at sleft
show fang sad at sleft
show anon neutral flip behind fang at acenter
with dissolve
F "Sorry, I…"
@ -1631,7 +1631,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "I have at least two other phones with pictures in them…"
F "I dont think Ill ever look through those now."
F "I dont think Ill ever look through those now."
F "Or maybe I'll do it when I really feel like letting go was the best decision."
@ -1647,7 +1647,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang neutral with dissolve
"Lucy sighs, and her exhaled breath seems to expel her mood."
"I look at the clock and nearly jump."
"I look at the clock and nearly jump."
"We had been looking at all the pictures for a long time."
@ -1660,7 +1660,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"There isnt much left, just some green onions, a few pieces of beef, and five eggs."
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
pause 0.5
hide fang with easeoutleft
"Meanwhile, Lucy looks through my pantry and cupboards for anything else to cook."
@ -1673,8 +1673,8 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang:
ease_cubic 2.0 xalign 2.5
stop music fadeout 2.0
pause 1.5
stop music fadeout 2.0
pause 1.5
hide fang with dissolve
play music "audio/OST/Appreciating the Atmosphere.ogg" fadein 3.0
@ -1684,12 +1684,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
"With our feast finished, and with nothing else to do now that all my stuff is packed and shipped off to Rock Bottom, Lucy and I just return to my bed."
"I close my eyes for a bit, trying to get lost in my girlfriends warm embrace."
"I close my eyes for a bit, trying to get lost in my girlfriends warm embrace."
show fang happy at scenter
show fang happy at scenter
show anon neutral flip at aright:
xalign 0.9
with dissolve
with dissolve
pause 1.5
show fang:
@ -1736,7 +1736,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"I decide to return the favor by also poking at her, starting with her stomach, and gradually moving up to her chest and armpits."
show anon grin flip:
xalign 0.8
xalign 0.8
show fang happy:
xalign 0.5
with dissolve
@ -1759,11 +1759,11 @@ label chapter_13C:
ease_cubic 0.3 xalign 0.65
hide anon
hide fang
with dissolve
hide anon
hide fang
with dissolve
show fang hug at acenter with dissolve
"That seems to do it, and Lucy pulls me closer to her, wrapping me in a tight and warm hug."
"I return the embrace, tempted to resume my tickling assault, but far too comfortable in my ptero gfs embrace to care about anything else in the world."
@ -1792,36 +1792,36 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Her angelic hands ever so gently guide me to look into her eyes."
"She has a smile with a hint of mischief."
"She has a smile with a hint of mischief."
"Before I realise where this is going, her finger lands on my nose."
F "Boop!"
F "Boop!"
"Her smile widens to a playful grin and I cant help but join in."
"Such a beautiful sight to behold..."
"How can I resist?"
"How can I resist?"
"I inch closer, and our lips meet..."
"..."
stop music fadeout 2.0
scene black with fade
scene black with fade
pause 2.0
scene emptyroomday
show anon neutral flip at acenter
with fade
show anon neutral flip at acenter
with fade
"All in all, it isnt that bad a night at all."
"..."
play music "audio/OST/she_fucks_human_men.ogg" fadein 2.0
"I woke up absolutely spent."
"I woke up absolutely spent."
"Im covered in feathers, and Lucys ambrosia scent hangs heavy over the bed sheets."
"Im covered in feathers, and Lucys ambrosia scent hangs heavy over the bed sheets."
"Lucys already awake, and shes bathed before me."
"Lucys already awake, and shes bathed before me."
"Now shes rummaging through my fridge for whatever food we have left."
@ -1829,7 +1829,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
play sound "audio/effects/shower.wav" fadein 1.0
"Rather than waste time asking the obvious, I decide to hit the shower."
scene black with fade
scene black with fade
"As the water strips away last nights scents off me, I get to thinking how Lucy must be feeling right about now."
"I imagine what tomorrow will be like, not just for me but also for Lucy."
@ -1847,7 +1847,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene emptyroomday
show fang neutral flip at sright
with fade
with fade
"I open the bathroom door and see Lucy sitting on my bed, staring blankly at her phone and swiping across messages."
A "What's up?"
@ -1861,7 +1861,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "What are you checking?"
F "Old messages and photos."
F "Old messages and photos."
F "You know, it's weird. There's not enough pictures of you in here…."
@ -1869,13 +1869,13 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "Hold on, lets fix that!"
scene emptyroomday
show anon smiley at acenter
show anon smiley at acenter
show photoviewfinder
with fade
"Lucy raises her phone and points its camera lens at me."
F "Stop smiling! You look retarded."
show anon happy with dissolve
show anon happy with dissolve
play sound 'audio/effects/camera_shutter_click.wav'
"{i}click{/i}"
@ -1904,15 +1904,15 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Theres a heavy silence between Lucy and me for a few seconds."
A "It... {w=0.5}It still feels wrong to me, you know?"
A "It... {w=0.5}It still feels wrong to me, you know?"
A "That I'm still too new at this boyfriend stuff."
A "That I'm still too new at this boyfriend stuff."
A "That Ill never get the hang of it."
A "That if only I had a few more months of practice… maybe I could be better at it..."
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
"Lucy lets out a short snort."
@ -1928,12 +1928,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
ease_cubic 0.33 xalign 0.6
"Lucy lightly punches me on the shoulder."
F "Thats bullshit, and you know it!"
F "Thats bullshit, and you know it!"
F "If anything, I'm the boring one!"
show fang sad flip with dissolve
"Lucy deflates as she grabs on to her right arm."
show fang sad flip with dissolve
"Lucy deflates as she grabs on to her right arm."
F "I mean, take away my spikes, wrist bands, and stompers and what do you have?"
@ -1956,7 +1956,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "I wish I knew what that was."
show fang hiding flip with dissolve
"Lucy cringed, her hands moving to cover her face."
"Lucy cringed, her hands moving to cover her face."
"Emotions warred across her face as she tried to form coherent words."
@ -2008,7 +2008,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "She's not at fault. I'm just a fucking idiot..."
show anon concerned with dissolve
A "Lucy..."
A "Lucy..."
A "I just...{w=0.5} forget that I have to walk on eggshells around certain topics..."
@ -2048,21 +2048,21 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "This whole thing with making everyone's lives around me hell, testing the waters with identifying my gender… {w=0.5}it was a complete disaster..."
show fang angry flip with dissolve
F "You can't really compare the damage I did to myself to you jerking off to cartoons, okay?!"
show fang shocked flip with dissolve
pause 0.3
show fang hiding flip with dissolve
show fang hiding flip with dissolve
"Lucys eyes widen in horror as she facepalms and falls back on the bed."
show fang very sad flip with dissolve
F "...Fuck...{w=0.5} I might have said too much…"
F "...Fuck...{w=0.5} I might have said too much…"
F "I already ruined our last day together with stories from when I was just a shit person..."
"Lucys eyes start to shimmer."
show anon neutral with dissolve
A "Hey! It's fun to compare!"
A "Hey! It's fun to compare!"
A "I still like you, so I guess girls have it easier."
@ -2088,23 +2088,23 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang hug:
ease_cubic 0.5 rotate -90 yalign -0.5
hide fang hug with dissolve
"I try to hold us both upright, but the awkward angle and the unevenness of the bed eventually causes us both to fall back into bed."
"The world really disappears when we're like this. Something Im infinitely glad for..."
F "Anon...{w=0.5} do you like me better the way I was before…"
F "Anon...{w=0.5} do you like me better the way I was before…"
F "Or do you like me better for who I am now?"
"I say my next words without hesitation."
A "You're much better now."
A "You're much better now."
A "Not cutting weeds in my eyes and kicking me in the face."
A "Though I guess you miss your old life."
A "Though I guess you miss your old life."
A "I must feel like a killjoy in comparison..."
@ -2128,13 +2128,13 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "I just like seeing you ramble."
A "You'll find stuff that interests you."
A "You'll find stuff that interests you."
A "Just do you, Lucy!"
"Our foreheads touch."
"Our foreheads touch."
"She grabs my face with both her hands, all the while looking at me like Im the most precious thing in her life."
"She grabs my face with both her hands, all the while looking at me like Im the most precious thing in her life."
"All I want to do is bring her closer to me."
@ -2151,7 +2151,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene black with fade
scene emptyroomday
with fade
with fade
play music "audio/OST/Skinrow Soul.ogg" fadein 2.0
"Naser somehow manages to defy our expectations by being late for once."
@ -2168,8 +2168,8 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene skinrow
show fang sad at sleft:
xalign -0.2
show anon neutral at acenter
with fade
show anon neutral at acenter
with fade
"Naser isnt here yet, so we end up standing by the apartment lobby with nothing but our thoughts."
@ -2181,23 +2181,23 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "...What am I going to do when you're gone?"
show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve
show anon neutral flip at acenter with dissolve
"Lucys words surprise me, but Im ready with an answer this time."
A "You'll make the right choices."
A "You're the only smart person I know."
show fang unimpressed with dissolve
"Lucy gives me a deadpan look."
show fang unimpressed with dissolve
"Lucy gives me a deadpan look."
F "Im being serious here, Anon."
A "So am I, Lucy."
A "So am I, Lucy."
A "You're a goddamn Intellectual!"
show fang considering with dissolve
show fang considering with dissolve
"Lucy bashfully turns her head away, appreciating the compliment."
F "You know, the guys in the army aren't the smartest lot."
@ -2209,7 +2209,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang happy with dissolve
"Lucy begins snickering."
F "They're gonna send you back in a shoebox!"
F "They're gonna send you back in a shoebox!"
F "Hahahahahahaha!"
@ -2223,7 +2223,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "Eh, the mosh pits will not be as entertaining without you fumbling around awkwardly in them."
A "I could do without them."
A "I could do without them."
A "You, on the other hand, seem eager to go back to that."
@ -2236,12 +2236,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "I don't want to hold you back or make you waste time waiting for me."
show anon sad flip with dissolve
show anon sad flip with dissolve
A "...We might not even see each other again..."
A "But...{w=0.5} I'll never forget you, Lucy..."
show fang surprised with dissolve
show fang surprised with dissolve
F "..."
show fang sad with dissolve
@ -2251,22 +2251,22 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "Im the one whos supposed to barge in and break us up!"
show anon neutral flip
show fang very sad
show fang very sad
with dissolve
F "...I've done it so many times..."
F "But..."
F "But..."
F "The fucking allosaurus dickwad I had my first time with wasn't half as special as you."
F "And I didn't just date boys, you know."
F "And I didn't just date boys, you know."
F "I didn't limit my options, and I still think there was more to you!"
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
A "As in...?"
show fang unimpressed with dissolve
show fang unimpressed with dissolve
F "You know I'm bi, right?"
A "..."
@ -2279,12 +2279,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "Lucy..."
show fang angry with dissolve
show fang angry with dissolve
"Lucy grits her teeth in anger."
F "It wasn't serious, okay!"
F "Those people had problems that needed addressing."
F "Those people had problems that needed addressing."
F "That's not me!"
@ -2292,19 +2292,19 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "Lucy!"
show fang surprised with dissolve
show fang surprised with dissolve
"My voice causes my girlfriend to flinch."
show anon behind fang:
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
"I move to place a hand on her shoulder."
show fang sad with dissolve
"I move to place a hand on her shoulder."
show fang sad with dissolve
A "Lucy… {w=0.5}It's okay..."
A "Your parents are cool."
A "Your parents are cool."
A "I would never believe theyd hurt you."
"Lucy lets out a sigh."
F "Anon… {w=0.5}I don't wanna dump all my baggage on you."
@ -2320,7 +2320,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "It was so humiliating..."
F "Naser might have known... {w=0.5}and he suffered so much because of it..."
F "Naser might have known... {w=0.5}and he suffered so much because of it..."
F "I can't imagine just how much more my parents would've hated me if theyd known the real truth."
@ -2334,11 +2334,11 @@ label chapter_13C:
F "All those relationships were just about who had the most baggage they could dump on each other and gain the most pity points."
F "And I always lost because I never had it that bad."
F "And I always lost because I never had it that bad."
F "I… {w=0.5}I was just an ungrateful slut."
show fang hiding with dissolve
show fang hiding with dissolve
"Lucy lets out a groan and facepalms."
F "I don't know if I'll ever live this shit down!"
@ -2356,7 +2356,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Instead, I only stare deeply and softly into Lucys citrine eyes."
play sound "audio/effects/71739__audible-edge__chrysler-lhs-tire-squeal-04-04-25-2009.ogg" fadein 3.0
show anon neutral with dissolve
show anon neutral with dissolve
"Before I can do anything else with my girlfriend, I hear the sound of tire screeching and the roar of an engine."
"A familiar gray-toned car pulls up right next to us, stopping so abruptly that it leaves a set of skid marks."
@ -2379,7 +2379,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"I look at the time on my phone."
"Much as I wanted time to stand still, the bus departing to boot camp would be leaving in less than an hour."
show anon concerned flip with dissolve
show anon concerned flip with dissolve
"I give Fang one last look, and she in turn looks at me."
"We both know what needs to happen next."
@ -2402,25 +2402,25 @@ label chapter_13C:
scene bus_stop
show naser neutral at nright:
xalign 1.35
show anon neutral at acenter
show anon neutral at acenter
show fang sad at sleft
with dissolve
with dissolve
"The three of us get out of the NasCar and stand around the bus stop, waiting for the inevitable."
play ambient "audio/effects/windLightLoop.ogg" fadein 2.0
show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
pause 0.5
show fang unimpressed flip with dissolve
pause 0.5
hide fang with easeoutleft
"Lucy mentioned needing to do something, heading into the office."
show naser considering flip with dissolve
"The silence between Naser and I is deafening."
show naser considering flip with dissolve
"The silence between Naser and I is deafening."
"Naser suddenly clears his throat."
Nas "Listen, Anon…"
A "Yeah?"
show naser neutral flip with dissolve
show naser neutral flip with dissolve
Nas "Uhh… {w=0.5}youre gonna be gone for a while."
A "... Yeah."
@ -2433,7 +2433,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "Huh?"
show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
Nas "Whatre they gonna make you do? Something like digging ditches? N-not to come off as rude or anything."
"I sigh and shake my head."
@ -2445,7 +2445,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "I think the code thing was 12K…{w=0.5} 19K?"
A "They were pushing me into being a tank guy."
show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
Nas "Can you even drive dude?"
A "..."
@ -2457,12 +2457,12 @@ label chapter_13C:
pause 0.5
show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
show naser explanatory flip with dissolve
Nas "Whats shitposting?"
A "N-nevermind.{w=0.5} The number thing is 46R."
show naser neutral with dissolve
show naser neutral with dissolve
"Naser nods his head and looks off."
"Before the silence could set in again Naser speaks up, his voice carrying a tone of relief."
@ -2483,7 +2483,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
A "It was you and Lucy that patched things up. And Im glad you guys made amends."
show naser happy flip with dissolve
show naser happy flip with dissolve
"Naser gives me a surprised look, but he smiles and nods."
"We hear the unmistakable roar of a city bus overpowering the other cars as it turns onto the street."
@ -2533,9 +2533,9 @@ label chapter_13C:
"It's settled, then."
show fanganonhug at acenter
hide anon
hide anon
hide fang
hide naser
hide naser
with dissolve
"We hugged once again, but she put some serious muscle into it. I reciprocate."
@ -2548,9 +2548,9 @@ label chapter_13C:
"The bus driver grows impatient and starts honking. The time has come."
hide fanganonhug
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show fang sad at sleft
hide fanganonhug
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show fang sad at sleft
show naser neutral flip at nright:
xalign 1.35
with dissolve
@ -2568,7 +2568,7 @@ label chapter_13C:
"He squeezed my hand in return, and then recoiled. My grip was stronger than he was anticipating."
"I got inside and waved back at them. I give the driver my regards and laid back, looking at my feet."
hide anon with dissolve
stop music fadeout 5.0
"I must've thought about a lot of things then, like what if I just jumped out the window and ran to her,"
@ -2579,8 +2579,8 @@ label chapter_13C:
show fang hiding at scenter:
xalign -0.1
show naser sad flip behind fang at ncenter
with dissolve
show naser sad flip behind fang at ncenter
with dissolve
"I caught her in mid-motion, crying in Naser's shoulders."
@ -2592,30 +2592,30 @@ label chapter_13C:
"Vanished from each others lives."
scene white
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show hotel behind anon
show anon neutral flip at acenter
show hotel behind anon
with dissolve
"I was dropped at a hotel with the other dudes, a surprisingly diverse crowd of humans and dinosaurs conversed."
#push transition, idk if it needs a hide
# hide hotel
# hide hotel
show airport behind anon
with dissolve
"We waited there for another bus that took us to an airport."
show black behind anon
show black behind anon
with dissolve
"I think I might have slept as soon as I sat on the airplane seat, because I don't remember the take-off or the drill."
scene fromairplane with fade
"I was fortunate enough to get a seat by the window, I flipped it up and saw a desert with a two-lane road cutting through."
"I don't even know where I am now, only that I'm nowhere near Lucy."
scene black with fade
scene black with fade
"God I hope I see her again."
#end of new stuff
stop music fadeout 2.0
stop ambient fadeout 1.0
return
return

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@ -8,16 +8,16 @@ label chapter_13D:
F "Nice suit! Did ya get it from the suit store?"
scene gold_fang_home_prom_stars with Dissolve(2)
scene gold_fang_home_prom_stars with Dissolve(2)
pause 1
"Holy shit, she can really rock that dress."
pause 2.0
FD "Ahem."
"Ah. {w=0.2}Shit."
scene home fang night
show fang d prom happy flip at sright
with fade
@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
play sound 'audio/effects/camera.ogg'
pause .275
scene home fang night
@ -129,16 +129,16 @@ label chapter_13D:
show naomi prom neutral flip:
yalign 0.0 xalign 1.05
with Fade(.1, 0, .4, color="#fff")
pause .25
play sound 'audio/effects/cameraMult.ogg'
pause .275
scene black with Fade(.1, 1, 2, color="#fff")
pause .5
"The onslaught of flashes continues as the four of us are directed to stand and pose together in every possible combination."
"After a millenia Fangs mother is satisfied, or her camera ran out of storage."
pause .5
@ -1092,7 +1092,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
show naser prom happy at sleft with easeinleft
show naomi prom happy with easeinleft:
xalign 0.9 yalign 0.0
show naomi prom happy flip with dissolve
show naomi prom happy flip with dissolve
"Spears backs out of the spotlight, giving a polite applause to the pair as they rush onstage to accept."
"The rest of the class is in a celebratory uproar."
@ -1260,7 +1260,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
"The cool night air feels absolutely amazing after we spent so long in the sweatbox of a gym."
show anon prom neutral at acenter with dissolve:
xalign 1.1 yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35
xalign 1.1 yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35
show fang d prom happy with dissolve:
xpos -0.15 yalign -0.1 zoom 1.35
@ -1496,7 +1496,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
"Before I can respond, he reaches into his pocket and fishes out a lighter which is promptly tossed my way."
show lighter at scenter with easeinbottom:
yalign 0.5 zoom 2.0
yalign 0.5 zoom 2.0
"Catching it out of the air, I only briefly catch the words FUCK COMMUNISM engraved in its side when I hear yet another car approaching."
hide lighter with easeoutbottom
@ -1801,7 +1801,7 @@ label chapter_13D:
T "Well do hair and horns and piercings and-{w=0.2} oh! Engravings too! Fang even said-"
F "That Id be your first customer, Ive told you a million times by now"
F "That Id be your first customer, Ive told you a million times by now."
"Fang returns from wherever it is she went, now carrying an object in her hands."
#show fang neutral flip with easeinright:
@ -1921,8 +1921,8 @@ label chapter_13D:
"Ill never be able to look at marinara the same way."
pause 0.5
"But pasta-based trauma aside, its now the day after Christmas."
scene blue
show anonfang_xmasmorningbed
scene blue
show anonfang_xmasmorningbed
with fade
"Im sitting in my bed, looking through one of my favorite presents."

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@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
label chapter_14C:
#Volcano Highschool Musical
scene black with fade
scene black with fade
"{cps=*0.2}-- Three years later --{/cps}"
@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
Lucy "Of course. That promise means the world to me, Anon."
"We stay embraced in the hot sun for just a moment longer before I let go again."
"Lucys gaze lingers on the children, her eyebrows knit together in contemplation."
show fang c happy flip with dissolve
@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ label chapter_14C:
F "No one ever played with me like that, no one ever approached me like that, it was so pure, so innocent."
A "Should have shown them a picture of you in your high school clothes"
A "Should have shown them a picture of you in your high school clothes."
show fang c happy flip with dissolve

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@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ label chapter_14D:
pause 0.3
"Its the sounds that reach me first. The chatter of people milling about."
unknown "Bro"
unknown "Bro."
unknown "Its been too long!"

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@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ label chapter_2:
"{cps=*0.2}-- Two Days Later --{/cps}"
pause .5
"Alarm is off"
"Alarm is off."
pause .5
"You know the drill."
@ -557,7 +557,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show farnsworth at sright with dissolve
Drf "Hurry up Mr. Anon, your partner is waiting for you"
Drf "Hurry up Mr. Anon, your partner is waiting for you."
window hide
window auto
@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ label chapter_2:
hide dimmer_light with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}What?"
pause .5
Drf "Very well."
@ -634,7 +634,7 @@ label chapter_2:
# TODO: fill this dead air with some relatively upbeat music to make Fang getting mad more dramatic
play music 'audio/ost/Appreciating the Moment.ogg'
"CHAD RECOVERY SUCCESSFUL"
"CHAD RECOVERY SUCCESSFUL!"
pause .5
F "None of your business. Just do the damn assignment and dont bother me."
@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ label chapter_2:
easein_cubic 1.0 xalign 0.45
pause 1
Drf "Oh dear"
Drf "Oh dear."
pause .5
"Mistakes have been made."
@ -966,7 +966,7 @@ label chapter_2:
pause .5
show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
F "Non-binary people don't owe you androgyny"
F "Non-binary people don't owe you androgyny."
pause .5
"Doesnt seem like its something she wants to hear right now."
@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ label chapter_2:
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.1
"I drag my chair backwards and clumsily rise from my seat"
"I drag my chair backwards and clumsily rise from my seat."
A "It was great meeting you guys, Ill be going back to my desk, though{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -2547,7 +2547,7 @@ label chapter_2:
A "Uhhhh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I guess Ill have to go now, see you around."
pause .5
"Be a little nicer, Anon"
"Be a little nicer, Anon."
show anon happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
A "Ask if you need anything, Ill help you out."

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@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ label chapter_3:
A "You guys need something?"
T "Nah, just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time"
T "Nah, just wanted to chat a bit since we got the time."
show trish neutral flip with dissolve
"Theres something in her tone of voice{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ label chapter_3:
show naomi happy with Dissolve(.25)
N "Why dont you wipe that alfredo sauce off your cute little face."
"Shes so saccharine shed give a third world country diabetes"
"Shes so saccharine shed give a third world country diabetes."
pause .5
Nas "Its my sister again{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -1126,9 +1126,9 @@ label chapter_3:
# TODO: cheesy record scratch?
$ renpy.music.set_volume(0, 0.02, 'music')
"Uhp"
"Uhp."
"Fuck"
"Fuck."
pause .5
"I almost said 'the audience at the concert' to her out loud."
@ -2257,7 +2257,7 @@ label chapter_3:
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Ok, just for one second"
"Ok, just for one second."
window hide
window auto
pause .5

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@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ label chapter_4:
show dimmer_light behind anon, trish with dissolve
pause .25
"What the fuck am I doing? Im dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here"
"What the fuck am I doing? Im dead if I out myself whilst outnumbered here."
pause .5
"Trish tore at me like she knew I was there."
@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ label chapter_4:
"Reed puts the projector in the corner of the room, and Trish makes for the exit with Fang."
"I follow after, cheeks still filled with food"
"I follow after, cheeks still filled with food."
# CH 4 SCENE 3
@ -538,7 +538,7 @@ label chapter_4:
F "{cps=*.4}AHAHAHAHAHAHHA.{/cps} {w=.4}{nw}"
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9
extend "God you are such a dweeb"
extend "God you are such a dweeb."
show anon grin with dissolve
"I flash her my biggest shit-eating grin."
@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ label chapter_4:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.1
pause .1
show fang shocked flip with Dissolve(.25)
"She jumps in her chair"
"She jumps in her chair."
show fang surprised flip with dissolve
F "Howd you get-{w=.4} {nw}"
@ -921,10 +921,10 @@ label chapter_4:
"Anon then realized, he is horrendously fucking stupid."
show fang neutral flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Ive been into playing music since pre-k"
F "Ive been into playing music since pre-k."
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Roll with it"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Roll with it."
A "So does it take that long to learn that horrid thing?"
@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@ label chapter_4:
"She left her phone on the desk."
"I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the rooms lamps"
"I can see the imprint of the password being illuminated by the rooms lamps."
pause .5
show anon neutral flip with dissolve

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@ -1348,7 +1348,7 @@ label chapter_5:
"The world spins and I land on my ass where we were weeding."
pause .5
"At least something broke my fall"
"At least something broke my fall{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
"Wait.{w=.4} Isnt this the flowerbed?"
@ -1658,7 +1658,7 @@ label chapter_5:
A "except Im sorry."
A "I messed up and that was a dick move"
A "I messed up and that was a dick move."
A "But if you keep this up well both be going-"
@ -2638,7 +2638,7 @@ label chapter_5:
with vpunch
pause 1
"Woah"
"Woah."
pause .5
A "Ow{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -4178,7 +4178,7 @@ label chapter_5:
"Fang points at my oversized hall pass."
pause .5
A "Yeah, sure"
A "Yeah, sure."
window hide
window auto
pause .5
@ -4388,10 +4388,10 @@ label chapter_5:
play sound 'audio/effects/rooftopDoorSmash.ogg'
with vpunch
show anon ohshit:
show anon ohshit:
ease_cubic 0.2 xpos -0.2
show fang surprised:
ease_cubic 0.2 xpos -0.05
show fang surprised:
ease_cubic 0.2 xpos -0.05
show door blurred flip behind anon, fang:
subpixel True
@ -4402,12 +4402,12 @@ label chapter_5:
zoom 3
block:
linear 0.6 xpos 0.45 ypos 0.50 zoom 0.60 rotate -270
linear 0.25 xpos 0.30 ypos 0.55 zoom 0.18 rotate -360
pause .55
show roof day broken behind anon, fang
hide door with Dissolve(.25)
#door has flown
#door has flown
pause 1.75
show roof day broken behind anon, fang

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@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ label chapter_6:
FD "You ever play golf before, boy?"
"Don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii golf"
"Don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii Golf don't say Wii golf-"
A "N-no, not on a proper green before."
pause .5
@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@ label chapter_6:
F "Pssh."
pause .5
"Suddenly an image of Fangs dad pops in my mind and I realize I probably shouldnt be seen alone with her behind a public restroom"
"Suddenly an image of Fangs dad pops in my mind and I realize I probably shouldnt be seen alone with her behind a public restroom."
"Under penalty of holy shit my spleen is outside my body."
pause .5
@ -2811,7 +2811,7 @@ label chapter_6:
unknown "The uncle you seek is elsewhere."
pause .5
A "What"
A "What?"
pause .5
unknown "Yes,{w=.3} I know of that,{w=.3} which you,{w=.3} oh so,{w=.3} Desperately seek."
@ -4388,7 +4388,7 @@ label chapter_6:
A "Maybe its not your job."
A "I mean, you go out of your way to try and help her"
A "I mean, you go out of your way to try and help her."
A "Hell even Naomi has tried."

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@ -44,12 +44,12 @@ label chapter_7:
"And Im drooling like an idiot as I watch Fang bend over a large Amp."
pause .5
unknown "Ahem"
unknown "Ahem."
"Even now her tail wags to that mysterious beat in her head."
pause .5
unknown "AHEM"
unknown "AHEM."
"Not to mention the way those jeans hug her hips and ass-"
pause .5
@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ label chapter_7:
if anonscore >= 3 and fangscore >= 4:
#>>golden
St "Upright Strength"
St "Upright Strength."
St "OH! {w=.3} I dont think you need to worry about whats to come, Anon."
elif anonscore >= 3 and fangscore <= 3:
#>>tradwife
@ -465,7 +465,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Dont worry so much."
A "Just don't fret about it, youll be fine"
A "Just don't fret about it, youll be fine."
show fang happy flip with dissolve
@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ label chapter_7:
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
"Showtime"
"Showtime!"
F "All right! Next up we got 'The!'"
@ -651,7 +651,7 @@ label chapter_7:
ease 0.75 xalign 0.45
repeat
F "OHMYGOD OHMYGOD WE DID IT WE DID IT"
F "OHMYGOD OHMYGOD WE DID IT WE DID IT!"
F "THEY ACTUALLY LOVE VVURM DRAMA!"
@ -762,7 +762,7 @@ label chapter_7:
show reed neutral flip at rright:
xalign 1.3
with dissolve
"Showtime"
"Showtime!"
"I take my eyes off the stage to get a read on the crowd."
@ -1213,7 +1213,7 @@ label chapter_7:
A "Oh, uh, actually…"
"THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING"
"THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING THINK OF SOMETHING!"
A "I had to leave because of, uh…"

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@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ label chapter_9:
N "Why, thank you, Principal Spears!"
"The projector comes to life, displaying a basic slideshow title card reading"
"The projector comes to life, displaying a basic slideshow title card reading."
A "Reed, how do you know when to move it forward?"
@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ label chapter_9:
"..."
play music 'audio/OST/you can_t sage here.ogg' fadein 1.0
"What the fuck"
"What the fuck-"
"{i}HOW!{/i}"
@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ label chapter_9:
"Each one more and more embarrassing than the last."
show projector9_blur at wiggle
# scene projector9
# scene projector9
"I…{w=0.3} oh god…"
@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ label chapter_9:
A "Wait, get what off your chest?"
A "Were…{w=0.2} were you in on it?"
# hide fang sad
# hide fang sad
show fang angry flip at scenter with dissolve
"Fangs questioning glare makes Reed shudder."
@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ label chapter_9:
Re "...So I asked Trish to go get the thing from Naomi."
Re "I guess she mustve, like…{w=0.2} changed the slides before giving it to me?"
A "{cps=*1.4}And you didnt think to check?!{/cps}"
@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ label chapter_9:
"Spears voice shocks me from my eavesdropping."
"What am I supposed to say to Trish?"
"Fang tries to give a reassuring smile but its so fragile."
"Like this is all her fault and not that backstabbing bitch."
@ -625,9 +625,9 @@ label chapter_9:
"I enter Spears office and my eyes are immediately drawn to Trish sitting in front of his desk surrounded by crumpled up tissues."
show trish sad at tleft
show anon neutral flip at aright
show spears neutral at scenter
show trish sad at tleft
show anon neutral flip at aright
show spears neutral at scenter
with dissolve
Sp "Trish, is there anything you would like to tell Anon?"
@ -780,12 +780,12 @@ label chapter_9:
show fang sad at sleft with dissolve:
xalign 0.5
show reed considering at sleft with dissolve
"Reed has taken my place beside her with a comforting arm around her shoulder."
"If this was any other situation I might have felt a bit jealous."
show reed considering flip:
show reed considering flip:
xalign 1.4
show fang sad at sleft
show anon neutral flip:
@ -952,7 +952,7 @@ label chapter_9:
Re "Give you some privacy, amigo."
show reed neutral flip with dissolve:
xalign 1.4
xalign 1.4
hide reed with easeoutright
"..."
@ -1129,8 +1129,8 @@ label chapter_9:
show anon neutral flip at aleft with dissolve
"I turn towards the voice, and the world slows down."
show anon fear flip at aleft with dissolve
"My field of vision is filled with a soda can, and I freeze up like a deer in headlights."
@ -1146,19 +1146,19 @@ label chapter_9:
"The can smacks me in the forehead while I was mid-stride, and I shift my footing to try and regain balance."
"Catch it out of the air.":
"The can smacks me in the forehead while I was mid-stride, and I shift my footing to try and regain balance."
play sound "audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg"
show sodacan blurred:
ease_cubic 0.1 xalign 0.3 yalign 0.22 rotate 90
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.5 yalign 1.7 rotate 60
hide sodacan blurred with dissolve
hide sodacan blurred with dissolve
show fang shocked flip with dissolve
"Except my foot catches on the edge of the stairlip and slips."
hide fang with dissolve
show anon with easeinleft:
parallel:
ease_cubic 1.0 rotate 90
ease_cubic 1.0 rotate 90
parallel:
ease_cubic 0.1 yalign 0.0
ease_cubic 0.3 yalign -0.1
@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ label chapter_9:
scene outside school with vpunch
pause 0.5
scene outside school with hpunch
play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' fadeout 0.5
play sound 'audio/effects/anonDumbassFall.ogg' fadeout 0.5
pause 0.5
scene outside school with vpunch
pause 0.5
@ -1229,8 +1229,8 @@ label chapter_9:
pause .5
show schooloutside blurred
show fangcarriesanon
with Dissolve(1.5)
show fangcarriesanon
with Dissolve(1.5)
pause .5
"She tucks her arms around my shoulder and pulls me to my feet again."
@ -1368,4 +1368,4 @@ label chapter_9:
"..."
return
return

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@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
pause 1
FD "Well, folks, were here."
show anon neutral with dissolve
FD "Black Hole Bowling."
@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
Nas "Surprised you brought Anon along, Dad."
Nas "Thats pretty unlike you."
show fangdad unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
FD "It {i}was{/i} just going to be the three of us{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
pause .5
hide naser with dissolve
pause .5
show anon unimpressed with Dissolve(.25)
"Struggling to not fall over or snap in half like a skin-colored twig, I lugged the bag over."
pause .5
@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
show moealt:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.7
with dissolve
Moe "Terrorizin the poor kid, I bet."
"Moe sets a tray of fountain drinks and snack foods on the table with his grabby claw hands."
@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
pause .5
"Eager to escape his clutches I bolted for the console and started entering our names."
show anon:
easeout_cubic 1 xalign -0.5
pause .25
@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
show fangdad neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.0
with Dissolve(1)
"He made a show of inserting his clawed fingers into each of the holes while making sure I had a real good angle."
"He even oriented the ball so that the holes lined up into a little screaming face."
@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
"His eyes linger on me for a moment."
pause .5
FD "You can put some real force into it and {w=.2}{nw}"
FD "You can put some real force into it and {w=.2}{nw}"
show fangdad:
easein_back 0.75 xalign 0.7
extend "{i}BAM{/i}."
@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
Moe "Alrights Anon, yer up."
"I nod and get up from my seat."
"I nod and get up from my seat."
pause .5
show anon neutral:
@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
"Lining up the shot I look down the lane at the pins."
show anon pissed
show anon pissed
show dimmer_light behind anon
with dissolve
"Using Rips advice I picture Naomis face on the pins."
@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
play sound 'audio/effects/whoosh.ogg'
pause .2
play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickbigpunch.ogg'
show anon fear
show anon fear
with hpunch
pause 1
@ -406,7 +406,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
A "WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS FUCKING TOM AND JERRY BULLSHIT HOW THE FUCK DOES THIS FUCKING HAPPEN!"
A "DONT JUST STAND THERE AND GAWK YOU JACKASSES GET A FUCKING FIRST AID BOX OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE! YOU USELESS FUCKING ASSHOLES HOLY SHIT THIS HURTS LIKE HELL"
A "DONT JUST STAND THERE AND GAWK YOU JACKASSES GET A FUCKING FIRST AID BOX OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE! YOU USELESS FUCKING ASSHOLES HOLY SHIT THIS HURTS LIKE HELL!"
A "AAAAAA FUCK MY FUCKING FOOT I THINK I BROKE MY FUCKING FOOT!"
@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ label chapter_x1:
show anon:
easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.7 yalign 0.1
show anon sad
show anon sad
hide dimmer_light
with dissolve
pause 1
@ -577,4 +577,4 @@ label chapter_x1:
scene black with Dissolve(2)
pause 1.5
return
return

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@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
"A feathered elbow pierces my side."
show fang considering with Dissolve(.25)
F "Her mother works two jobs overtime just so Trish can go to school with us instead of Reef City Continuation."
F "Her mother works two jobs overtime just so Trish can go to school with us instead of Reef City Continuation."
show anon shrug with dissolve
A "Whats so bad about Reef City anyway?"
@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
Ro "Why dont we change the subject?"
Ro "Were getting close to Trishs place, no?"
show anon neutral
show fang neutral
show reed neutral flip
@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
with dissolve
pause 1
show trish indignant flip with Dissolve(.25)
T "Youre here! Finally!"
@ -235,12 +235,12 @@ label chapter_x6:
A "Whats that supposed to mean?"
F "Sorry we took so long, Trish."
F "And hey there Riley. Ready for the party?"
pause .5
Riley "Man fuck this party."
Riley "Aint no hot bitches here, so it aint a real party trigga."
show stella sad with Dissolve(.25)
@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
show rosa neutral flip:
yalign 0.2 xalign 1.2
show stella neutral flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1
show reed neutral flip:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.8
with Fade(1, .5, 1)
@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
show stella considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
St "Isnt there an easier way to distract them?"
show trish neutral
show trish neutral
show stella neutral flip
with dissolve
T "Theres only one tablet, and one TV."
@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
Re "Fang, you wanna help a bit?"
show reed neutral flip
show reed neutral flip
show fang neutral
with Dissolve(.25)
@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
show stella explanatory flip with Dissolve(.25)
St "You mean a moon jump?"
show anon shrug
show anon shrug
show stella neutral flip
with dissolve
A "I always just called them bounce walk."
@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
show trish considering with Dissolve(.25)
T "Thats the dullest name Ive heard for them. Anyways, its called a castlehop."
show anon neutral
show anon neutral
show rosa considering flip
show trish neutral
with dissolve
@ -544,7 +544,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
show trevor neutral
show tana neutral
with dissolve
"The two swirl back around"
"The two swirl back around."
pause .5
"With the hidden lighter between my hands I let the combustible gas slowly coat the palm of my hand."
@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
show rosa :
easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.2
show stella:
easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.1
easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.1
show reed:
easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 0.95
with None
@ -688,8 +688,8 @@ label chapter_x6:
show stella explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
St "These came out really well, Fang!"
show stella neutral
show reed explanatory
show stella neutral
show reed explanatory
with Dissolve(.25)
Re "I got the burnt one and its still pretty great."
@ -699,7 +699,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
"Fang isnt paying attention."
"Shes entirely focused on her greasy prey."
show fang happy flip with dissolve
"After a few test bites she throws the whole thing in the air{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@ -737,7 +737,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
F "Nuh uh, no fuckin way."
"Fangs wings shield her face in embarrassment."
show tana neutral flip with dissolve
"My phone goes off again."
@ -809,7 +809,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
T "Whats Naser doing here?"
show trish neutral flip
show stella explanatory flip
show stella explanatory flip
with Dissolve(.25)
St "Whats with the trailer?"
@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
"I give Naser a wave and he rips the tarp off."
show anon neutral flip with dissolve
pause 1
play music 'audio/ost/bayside_revamp.ogg' fadein 0.5
show trish:
easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.7 #0.7
@ -866,7 +866,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
"The flatbed has been made into a makeshift stage, and gleaming in the sunlight is the complete equipment set of VVURM DRAMA, speakers and all."
pause .5
show anon grin with dissolve
show anon grin with dissolve
A "Sorry, Fang, I kind of stole your idea for a surprise."
@ -1214,7 +1214,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
"It feels like Id be ruining Trishs moment if I stayed."
pause .5
show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
show rosa considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
Ro "Anon, youre going to sing too, right?"
pause .5
@ -1252,7 +1252,7 @@ label chapter_x6:
"The song ends with no one thankfully laughing at me."
"Trish inhales sharply and blows out the candles."
show reed explanatory with Dissolve(.25)
Re "So, whatd you wish for{cps=*.1}...{/cps}?"
show reed neutral with Dissolve(.25)
@ -1340,11 +1340,11 @@ label chapter_x6:
stop music fadeout 5
pause 1
scene black with Dissolve(2)
pause .5
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause 2
return
return