rework ch11 auditorium confrontation between Trish & Fang, add hallway chaos during fire alarm

game/script.rpy

@@ -338,6 +338,7 @@ image fang hug flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang hug.png", horizontal=True)
 image naser brooding flip = im.Flip("naser/naser brooding.png", horizontal=True) 
 image anon concerned flip = im.Flip("anon/base set/anon concerned.png", horizontal=True)
 image rosa excited flip = im.Flip("rosa/rosa excited.png", horizontal=True)
+image fang anguish flip = im.Flip("fang/emotive set/fang anguish.png", horizontal=True)
 
 # scene flips
 image moes pizza mirrored = im.Flip("backgrounds/moes pizza.jpg", horizontal=True)

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -4097,6 +4097,7 @@ label chapter_11:
         show anon:
             easeout_back 1 xalign 2.0
         show anon neutral with Dissolve(.25)
+        pause .1
         show reed:
             easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
         show reed shocked with Dissolve(.15)
@@ -4134,20 +4135,93 @@ label chapter_11:
         # TODO: this sound effect is a bit lackluster
         play ambient "audio/effects/firealarm.ogg" loop
         pause .5
-
+        
+        show anon fear with Dissolve(.25)
         "What the fu-?!"
         pause .5
 
         play ambient2 "audio/effects/chatter loop.ogg" fadein 1
         show dimmer_darker behind anon with dissolve
 
+        # general chaos
+        image teacher1 = im.MatrixColor("other/carldelewski.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1))
+        image teacher2 = im.MatrixColor("other/farnsworth.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1))
+        image teacher3 = im.Flip(im.MatrixColor("other/jin.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), horizontal=True)
+        image teacher4 = im.MatrixColor("other/jingo.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1))
+        image student1 = im.MatrixColor("stella/chadshark.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1))  # obligatory Chadshark cameo
+        image student2 = im.Flip(im.MatrixColor("stella/stella neutral.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), horizontal=True)
+        image student3 = im.Flip(im.MatrixColor("rosa/rosa shocked.png",im.matrix.brightness(-1)), horizontal=True)
+        show teacher1:
+            alpha 0.5
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 2.0
+            block:
+                yalign 0.0 xalign 2.0
+                ease_cubic 3 xalign -1.0
+                pause .7
+                repeat
+        show teacher2 behind anon:
+            # alpha 0.5
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 2.0
+            pause .2
+            block:
+                yalign 0.0 xalign 2.0
+                ease_cubic 3 xalign -1.0
+                pause 1.3
+                repeat
+        show teacher3:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign -1.0
+            alpha 0.5
+            pause 0.9
+            ease_cubic 3 xalign 2.0
+            repeat
+        show teacher4 behind anon:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign -1.0
+            # alpha 0.5
+            pause 1.7
+            ease_cubic 3 xalign 2.0
+            repeat
+        show student1 behind anon:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign -1.75
+            # alpha 0.5
+            pause 1.1
+            ease_cubic 3 xalign 2.6
+            repeat
+        show student2:
+            alpha 0.5
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5
+            pause .8
+            ease_cubic 3 xalign -0.6
+            repeat
+        show student3 behind anon:
+            # alpha 0.5
+            yalign 0.2 xalign 2.5
+            pause .95
+            ease_cubic 3 xalign -1.5
+            repeat
+
+        # Anon getting knocked around
+        show anon:
+            pause .8
+            block:
+                pause .5
+                easein_quart 1 xalign 0.35
+                pause .3
+                easein_quart 1 xalign 0.45
+                pause .5
+                easein_quart 1 xalign 0.55
+                pause .2
+                easein_quart 1 xalign 0.4
+                repeat
+
         "Water sprays from the ceiling and the halls are quickly crowded with screaming students running for their lives, the teachers trying fruitlessly to keep them calm."
         pause .5
 
         show anon pissed with Dissolve(.25)
         "{i}Reed, you dirty bastard!!{/i}"
+        pause 1
 
         "I’m shoved aside from all angles by the student body."
+        pause 1
 
         "Just a dozen more feet to the door-!"
         pause .5
@@ -4174,11 +4248,11 @@ label chapter_11:
         "I finally manage to get my hand on the handle and-"
 
         show reed angry behind anon:
-            yalign 0.1 xalign -0.8
+            yalign 0.1 xalign -1.0
         show reed:
-            easein .75 xalign -0.35
+            easein .65 xalign -0.35
         with dissolve
-        pause .25
+        # pause .25
         show reed:
             ease_back 1 yalign -0.1 xalign 0.1
         hide anon
@@ -4208,196 +4282,328 @@ label chapter_11:
         stop music fadeout 3.0
 
         "Reed opens the door with one foot to look in."
-        pause .5
+        show reed:
+            ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.1
 
         Re "You’ll see, man. It’s all going well."
+        pause .5
 
         "I can only watch the scene before me unfold."
         pause .5
 
         play music 'audio/OST/ballad_of_the_boot.ogg' fadein 1.0
         scene auditorium
-        show trish angry at tleft
+        show dimmer_light
-        show fang sad flip at sright
+        show trish angry:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 0.1
+        show fang very sad flip:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 0.9
         with Fade(1, 0, 1)
         pause 1
 
         T "{i}WHY{/i} don't you want to talk about it?"
+        pause .5
         
+        show trish:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.15
+        show trish indignant with Dissolve(.25)
         T "Please talk to me, {i}PLEASE{/i}."
 
         T "It's been days, didn't you have enough time to think about it already?"
+        pause .5
 
+        show fang angry flip with dissolve
         F "Fuck off from my life, already!"
 
         T "No, Fang, I won't! I helped you, remember? I wanna keep helping you."
         
-        show fang angry flip
+        show fang:
+            easein_quart 1 xalign 1.1
+        show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
         F "You USED ME. YOU BETRAYED ME."
 
+        show trish:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
+        show trish shock with Dissolve(.25)
         T "I did not! You couldn't deal with yourself, you weren't happy with how things were going."
 
+        show trish indignant with dissolve
         T "I HELPED you achieve a new YOU, you've embraced something beautiful, I was proud of you!"
 
+        show fang angry flip with dissolve
         F "I don't NEED a NEW me-"
 
         T "I don't UNDERSTAND, would you PLEASE tell ME what's so WRONG?"
+        pause .5
 
         show fang sad flip with dissolve
-
         F "Please Trish, stop talking to me."
 
-        show trish indignant with dissolve
+        show trish:
-
+            easein_back 0.5 xalign 0.1
+        show trish angry with Dissolve(.25)
         T "BUT WHY?"
 
+        show fang:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.2
+        show fang anguish flip with Dissolve(.25)
         F "STOP YELLING."
+        pause .5
 
         T "What about the other guys? What about the band?"
 
+        show fang very angry flip with Dissolve(.25)
+        pause .5
         F "You ruined everything! It was supposed to be fun!"
+        pause .5
 
         show trish unimpressed with dissolve
-
         T "How? Please tell me."
 
+        show fang angry flip with dissolve
         F "You just took control of everything, we were doing what you wanted all the time."
 
-        show trish indignant with dissolve
-
         T "We VOTED to know what to do next!"
 
         F "And we only did what you wanted!"
 
+        show trish angry with Dissolve(.25)
         T "Because I THOUGHT you'd be ok with it, if you didn't agree with anything I did then you should've just TOLD ME"
 
         F "You should have known!"
 
+        show fang sad flip with Dissolve(.25)
         F "You're confusing me!"
-
+            
-        show trish fury with dissolve:
+        T "IT WAS {w=.2}{nw}"
-            yalign 10.0
+        show trish fury:
-
+            yanchor 0 ypos 0.3
-        T "IT WAS {i}YOUR{/i} IDEA."
+            easein_elastic 0.75 xalign 0.15
+        extend "{i}YOUR{/i}{w=.2} IDEA."
 
         T "YOU WERE THE ONE WHO WANTED US TO TAKE THE BAND MORE SERIOUSLY- AND I DID"
 
         T "I WAS JUST DOING WHAT YOU WANTED BECAUSE I THOUGHT IT WOULD HAVE MADE US HAPPIER."
+        pause .5
 
-        show fang hiding flip with dissolve
+        show fang hiding flip
+        show trish sad:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 0.15
+        with Dissolve(1)
+        pause .5
 
-        show trish sad at tleft with dissolve
+        F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-        F "..."
+        T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-
-        T "..."
 
         "Reed’s chokehold is making my wounds flare up again. Can I just die? Right here?"
+        pause .5
 
-        T "You didn't answer about the band, what about Vvurm Drama?"
+        T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}You didn't answer about the band, what about Vvurm Drama?"
-        stop music fadeout 10.0
+
+        # stop music fadeout 10.0
         show fang very sad flip with dissolve
-        F "I don't know Trish. It's over, ok?"
+        pause .5
 
-        show trish fury with dissolve:
+        F "I don't know Trish. It's over, ok?"
-            yalign 10.0
+        pause .5
+        
+        show trish:
+            easein_quart 1 xalign 0.1
+        show trish shock with dissolve
+        pause .5
+        # show trish angry with Dissolve(.25)
 
         T "I was HOPING you were just taking a time-off to cool off and RECONSIDER-"
 
+        show trish fury:
+            yanchor 0 ypos 0.3
+            easein_quart 1 xalign 0.0
+        with Dissolve(.25)
+
         T "WHAT'S HAPPENING TO YOU, FANG?"
+        show trish sad:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 0.0
+        with Dissolve(1)
+        pause .5
 
         F "I don't know who you are anymore, Trish. You did something that's making me question YEARS of my life- WASTED YEARS."
-
+        pause .5
-        show trish fury point with dissolve:
-            yalign 10.0
 
         T "Because of him? That's what it is?"
+        pause .5
+
+        show trish:
+            linear 0.05 xalign 0.0025
+            linear 0.05 xalign 0.0
+            repeat
+        show trish angry with dissolve
+        pause .5
 
         T "You're really just gonna THROW AWAY our entire life together, since we were kids - up until now- just as we're about to make it-"
 
+        show fang anguish flip behind trish with Dissolve(.25)
         F "Trish, no, I didn't mean it- I-"
 
-        T "Everytime I offered you a shoulder to cry on, the songs we wrote, the stories we came up with, all gone? Is that it?"
+        show trish fury:
+            yanchor 0 ypos 0.3
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.1
+        with Dissolve(.25)
+        T "Every time I offered you a shoulder to cry on, the songs we wrote, the stories we came up with, all gone? Is that it?"
 
         T "And for fucking what?"
 
+        show trish fury point with Dissolve(.25)
         T "For a fucking bum you met a few months ago? Is this what you want, to become a trailer wife?"
 
-        show fang ear cover flip
+        show fang:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3
+        show fang ear cover flip with dissolve
+        pause .5
 
         T "To do absolutely fucking NOTHING all day inbetween getting beaten up and feeding little brats to the benefit of some penniless NOBODY?"
+        pause .5
 
         T "I was always here for you, we do EVERYTHING TOGETHER, and THIS is how you thank me? By kicking me out of your life to become a CUM DUMPSTER for this worthless PRION?"
 
-        T "do you NOT see what's wrong here?"
+        T "Do you NOT see what's wrong here?"
+        pause .5
 
-        show trish sad at tleft with dissolve
+        show trish sad:
+            yalign 0.0
+        with Dissolve(1)
 
-        T "..."
+        T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
         T "You told me when the year started you were scared shitless you weren't gonna amount to anything in life."
+        pause .5
 
         T "Are we in this together or not? If not you'll dive headfirst into exactly THAT, you'll be a nobody!"
 
+        show trish:
+            ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.4
+        show fang:
+            pause .5
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.4
         T "Remember? I still HAVE THE MESSAGES, LOOK."
 
         T "You KNOW I'm right. I'm always right!"
-
+        pause .5
+        
+        show trish angry with dissolve
+        show fang:
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.5
         T "Answer me, Fang!"
-        scene hallway
+        pause .5
-        show reed unimpressed at rleft
-        show anon neutral flip at aright
-        with fade
 
+        stop music fadeout 5
         "Reed lets go of my neck completely."
+        pause .5
+
+        play ambient 'audio/effects/school loop.ogg' fadein 3
+        scene door auditorium
+        show reed sad:
+            yalign 0.1 xalign 0.0
+        show anon sad flip:
+            yalign 0.1 xalign 0.7
+        with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+        pause .5
 
         "He wordlessly puts his hands in his pockets and withdraws my phone."
+        pause .5
 
         "The phone is dropped limply in my palm and Reed turns away silently."
-        show reed unimpressed flip at rleft with dissolve
-        hide reed with moveoutleft
-        "I only caught a glimpse of it, but I saw the disappointment in his eyes."
 
-        Re "..."
+        Re "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-        scene hallway
+        pause .5
-        show trish angry at tleft
+
-        show fang ear cover flip at sright
+        show reed:
-        show anon neutral flip behind fang at acenter
+            easein_cubic 1 xalign -0.15
-        with fade
+        pause 1.5
+        show reed:
+            easeout_cubic 1 xalign -0.8
+        pause .5
+        hide reed with dissolve
+        pause .5
+
+        "I only caught a glimpse of it, but I saw the disappointment in his eyes."
+        pause 1
+
+        show anon unimpressed flip with dissolve
         "I stand back up and throw the door open."
 
-        "Silence washes over the room."
+        stop ambient fadeout 3
+        scene auditorium
+        show dimmer_light
+        show trish angry:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 0.4
+        show fang ear cover flip:
+            yalign 0.0 xalign 1.5
+        show anon neutral:
+            yalign 0.1 xalign -0.3
+        with Fade(1, 0, 1)
+        pause 1
 
+        show trish considering
+        show fang shocked flip
+        with dissolve
+        "Silence washes over the room."
+        pause .5
+
+        show fang angry flip with Dissolve(1)
         "Eventually Fang takes a deep breath and lets it out, before facing Trish again."
 
         show fang very angry flip with dissolve
-
+        show trish:
+            pause .5
+            "trish surprised"
+            easein_quart 1 xalign 0.35
         F "Fuck."
 
         F "Off."
+        pause .5
 
-        F "Just fuck off from my life, Trish."
+        F "Just {i}fuck off{/i} from my life, Trish."
+        pause .5
 
-        T "..."
+        T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+        pause .5
+        show trish unimpressed flip with dissolve
+        pause 1
+
+        show trish:
+            easeout_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.5
+        pause .5
+        show trish unimpressed with dissolve
+        hide trish with dissolve
 
         "Trish shoots me another of those petty glares before dashing out the side door."
-        hide trish with moveoutright
+        pause .5
+        
+        show fang:
+            easein_cubic 1.5 xalign 1.4
+        show fang hiding flip with Dissolve(1)
+        
         "Fang folds a seat down and sits in it with her knees to her chest, covering herself with her wings."
-        show fang hiding flip
+
-        show anon neutral
+        show anon behind fang:
-        with dissolve
+            ease_cubic 2 xalign 0.7
+        pause 1
 
         "I sit next to her and she starts silently weeping into her knees."
 
         "I reach through the wings and find a hand to hold."
+        pause .5
 
         "The lunch bell comes and goes, as does the tardy bell for music class."
+        pause .5
 
-        scene black with fade
+        scene black with Dissolve(1)
+        pause .5
 
         "We ended up ditching the last few classes and just go back to my apartment again."
 
-        "..."
+        "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
         jump .PromAnnouncement