From d35a7f0437966ecb0a9cb17a72f31e756a085998 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Bowie Date: Fri, 20 Aug 2021 21:39:00 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rework ch11 'sorting things' route --- .../11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy | 273 +++++++++++++----- 1 file changed, 206 insertions(+), 67 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy b/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy index 0e74301..a137d24 100644 --- a/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy +++ b/game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy @@ -341,7 +341,7 @@ label chapter_11: "While I’m checking for any more broken bones my phone buzzes." stop ambient fadeout 3 - play music 'audio/OST/intercept.ogg' fadein 1.0 + play music 'audio/ost/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 1 pause .5 show anonphone at scenter with easeinbottom @@ -381,7 +381,6 @@ label chapter_11: "I’ll worry about that when I get home." pause .5 - stop music fadeout 3 scene black with Dissolve(1) pause .5 @@ -391,7 +390,6 @@ label chapter_11: #Naser Drama #THIS SECTION IS SCORE DEPENDENT - play music 'audio/ost/its_footloose_now.ogg' fadein 1 scene hallway show anon neutral at acenter with dissolve @@ -435,11 +433,12 @@ label chapter_11: "I’m going to die." pause .5 - unknown "You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!" + unknown "{size=-5}You’re gonna die weeb! Naser’s looking for your weeb ass!{/size}" pause .5 show anon neutral with dissolve "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Best to get it over with now." + pause .5 "I meander my way to the school’s auditorium." pause .5 @@ -458,7 +457,7 @@ label chapter_11: "He’s hunched over with his head resting in his hands, and glances at me from the side." pause .5 - play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0 + play music "audio/OST/The Hunt for more (You)s.ogg" fadein 1.0 noloop show naser considering: yalign 0.1 xalign 1.1 with Dissolve(1) @@ -714,7 +713,7 @@ label chapter_11: show anon neutral show naser neutral flip - with dissolve + with Dissolve(.75) pause .5 Nas "Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Let me get this straight." @@ -736,7 +735,7 @@ label chapter_11: A "That a challenge?" show naser surprised flip with Dissolve(.25) - Nas "Wha-are you even paying attention?" + Nas "Wha- are you even paying attention?" A "I can be a great boyfriend, just you watch." @@ -834,6 +833,7 @@ label chapter_11: pause .5 Nas "Next, either get a good supply of earplugs or say goodbye to your sense of hearing entirely. She can and will stay up until two a.m. listening to music on full blast." + pause .5 "Naser tells me more information about Fang than I probably should have known." @@ -946,6 +946,7 @@ label chapter_11: pause .5 A "Probably a good idea to not get confrontational or anything, yeah?" + pause .5 "Naser nods and I unlock the door." pause .5 @@ -1274,7 +1275,7 @@ label chapter_11: A "FUCK! God, again with the tests?" pause .5 - show naser brooding flip with dissolve + show naser annoyed flip with dissolve Nas "What am I supposed to tell dad then? Hell, what have you been telling him?" F "That I’ve been staying at Naomi’s place for a group project." @@ -1302,6 +1303,7 @@ label chapter_11: pause .5 A "Are you actually okay staying here though?" + pause .5 "Fang shrugs and looks away." @@ -1378,7 +1380,7 @@ label chapter_11: "We ended up watching Top Spear until midnight while Fang hogged her bag of nuggies." pause .5 - stop music fadeout 4 + stop music fadeout 3 scene black with Dissolve(1) pause .5 @@ -1387,122 +1389,191 @@ label chapter_11: play music "audio/OST/Fuck You I Like This Chick.ogg" fadein 1.0 scene outside school with Dissolve(1) + pause .5 "I was ready for an uneventful day of school." "In fact I’d be extremely happy if it was." + pause .5 "This entire week has been the most dramatic in my life." "Even the walk to school was dramatic, with Fang escorting me as if she was Secret Service." + pause .5 - "In English class I’m still trying to catch up with the rest of the class." + scene classroom with fade + pause .5 + + "In English I’m still trying to catch up with the rest of the class." "In any other class I’d have been caught up, but Mr. Tsuki is an absolute slave driver." + pause .5 "My phone buzzes, and I try to tell myself it’s not worth getting distracted." "The next question is on Serif’s history, however, and I decide it’s not worth it." - show anonphone at center with moveinbottom - "Fang: Ughh" + pause .5 - "Fang: Pleeeease tell me your morning is going better than mine" + show anonphone at center with easeinbottom + pause .5 - "Anon: could be better, why?" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Ughh" - "Fang: I didnt even think of Trish" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Pleeeease tell me your morning is going better than mine" + pause .5 - "Fang: She hasnt seen me in two days and is trying to bother me with band stuff" + "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} could be better, why?" + pause .5 - "Fang: Shes reeeaaaally not taking me taking a break well" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} I didnt even think of Trish" - "Anon: oh. you serious about quitting music and all that?" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} She hasnt seen me in two days and is trying to bother me with band stuff" + pause .5 - "Fang: What :V" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Shes reeeaaaally not taking me taking a break well" + pause .5 - "Fang: Why would I quit music" + "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} oh. you serious about quitting music and all that?" + pause .5 - "Fang: Just taking off from the band for a while" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} What :V" - "Anon: ah." + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Why would I quit music" - "Fang: Think Trish gets the memo now" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Just taking off from the band for a while" + pause .5 - "Fang: Apparently cold shoulder works wonders on her :V" + "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} ah." + pause .5 - "Anon: you think that’ll work for long?" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Think Trish gets the memo now" - "Fang: No lol" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Apparently cold shoulder works wonders on her :V" + pause .5 - "Fang: Will have to make distance at lunch" + "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} you think that’ll work for long?" - "Fang: Lets eat on the roof or something" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} No lol" - "Anon: good idea" + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Will have to make distance at lunch" + pause .5 + + "{i}Fang:{/i}{fast} Lets eat on the roof or something" + + "{i}Anon:{/i}{fast} good idea" + pause .5 "She doesn’t respond further so I turn my attention back to the assignment." - hide anonphone with moveoutbottom + pause .5 + + hide anonphone with easeoutbottom " ‘{i}Serif fonts can be broadly classified into one of four subgroups: old style, transitional, Didone and slab serif, in order of fir-{/i}-’ Nope." "Nope, just writing a review of BIIC: A PostPaleo RPG here." + pause .5 "(I passed the assignment.)" + pause .5 + + scene black with dissolve + pause .5 "After a torturous science period where Fang poked my bruises whenever she got bored lunch came around." - scene cafeteria - show fang happy at sleft - show anon neutral at aright - with fade + "Fang and I got plates of country fried steak and start heading up the stairs, chattering about possibly seeing a movie this weekend." + pause .5 + + scene hallway + show fang happy: + yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0 + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.3 + with fade + F "-seemed like a Kong fan." + pause .5 A "Did Naser say that?" - F "Maybe… But c’mon, it looked like it’d be a great movie." + F "Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps} But c’mon, it looked like it’d be a great movie." + pause .5 "Before I can retort I hear footsteps rushing in from behind." + pause .5 - show trish happy with dissolve: - xalign -0.2 - - show fang neutral with dissolve + show trish happy: + yalign 0.0 xalign -0.6 + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0 + show fang neutral + with dissolve T "Fang! I thought we’d be hanging out in the auditorium. Y’know, like usual?" + pause .5 - scene hallway - show fang neutral at sleft - show anon neutral at aright - show trish indignant: - xalign -0.2 - with fade - + show fang: + easeout 1 xalign 2.2 + pause .5 + hide fang with dissolve "Fang doesn’t even bat an eye and continues up the steps." - hide fang with moveoutright - show trish indignant with move: - xalign 0.3 + show trish surprised with dissolve + pause .5 + + scene roof day broken with fade + pause .5 "Trish follows even as Fang starts taking the steps two at a time." T "Fang! C’mon!" "If the door was still there I’m pretty sure Fang would’ve kicked it open." + pause .5 + show fang considering: + yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0 + show fang: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 1.3 + with dissolve "Instead she quickly turns with a huff and starts to scale the ladder one-handed." + + show fang: + easeout 0.5 xalign 1.5 + hide fang with dissolve + pause .5 - hide anon with moveoutright + show anon neutral: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.7 + show trish surprised: + yalign 0.0 xalign 0.3 + show anon: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9 + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5 + with dissolve + pause .5 "Before Trish can climb it I pull myself up the ladder awkwardly." - "Each step up a rung I need to pause, the rough movements causing bouts of pain across my chest." + show anon: + easeout 0.5 xalign 1.1 + hide anon with dissolve + pause .5 + "Each step up a rung I need to pause, the rough movements causing bouts of pain across my chest." + pause .5 + + show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) "Trish growls as I take my time climbing up. Halfway up I’m able to hand Fang my tray of food and scale the ladder at a slightly faster snail’s pace." + pause .5 "Once I’m at the top I swing my legs onto the ladder, blocking Trish from climbing up too." + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.6 show trish angry with dissolve - T "Asshole! Let me talk with Fang!" + pause .5 A "Know any theaters with easily accessible fire exits?" @@ -1510,97 +1581,163 @@ label chapter_11: A "Sweet, saves me some money." - T "Anon I swear to fuck!" + show trish: + easein_elastic 0.75 xalign 0.65 + play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickpunch.ogg' + T "Anon I swear to fuck!" with vpunch + pause .5 + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5 + show trish indignant with Dissolve(.25) T "Fang, please! Just say something!" "I can tell Fang is getting annoyed at Trish not taking the hint." + + show trish neutral with dissolve F "Trish, I just don’t want to see you right now, okay?" + pause .5 - T "But… why?! I’m your best friend!" + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45 + show trish surprised + T "But{cps=*.1}...{/cps} why?! I’m your best friend!" + pause .5 F "I still need some time away after what you did." T "What about Reed? What about VVURM DRAMA? We can’t perform with just the two of us!" + pause .5 F "I think you should leave, Trish." + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.7 + show trish unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) T "I think you aren’t thinking straight!" + show trish: + easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.9 T "We {i}need{/i} you to come back to-" + show dimmer_lighter behind trish with Dissolve(.25) F "Trish." + pause .5 "Her voice is a calm fury, cold and collected and bitter." + show trish neutral with dissolve + pause .5 F "I am trying to have lunch." F "With my boyfriend." F "That you just humiliated in front of everyone barely two days ago." + + show trish considering with dissolve F "I am perfectly capable of deciding for myself if I want to take a break." + pause .5 F "If and when I want to get back into the band, I will talk to you." + show trish surprised with dissolve + F "For now, all you’re doing is pissing me off and ruining our lunch together." + pause 1 F "Leave." - show trish sad with dissolve + hide dimmer_lighter with dissolve "Trish’s jaw hangs open, a barely audible squeak of protest escaping her." + pause .5 + + show trish: + easein_quart 1.5 xalign 0.85 + show trish sad with Dissolve(1) "She wipes a tear away with her jacket sleeve and shimmies down the ladder." + pause .5 - T "... Sorry." + T "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Sorry." + pause .5 + + show trish: + easeout_back 1.5 xalign 1.1 + pause .5 hide trish with dissolve + pause 1 + "Fang waits until her footsteps quiet before letting out a sigh." scene roof day - show fang sad at sleft - show anon neutral flip at aright - with fade + show fang sad: + yalign 0.0 xalign 0.2 + show anon neutral flip: + yalign 0.1 xalign 0.8 + with Fade(1, 0, 1) + pause .5 - F "... That hurt." + F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}That hurt." + pause .5 + + show fang: + easeout 0.5 xalign 0.35 + easein 1 xalign 0.2 + show anon: + pause .5 + easein 1 xalign 0.725 "Fang’s hand finds mine and grasps it." "Her grip is feather light, and I can feel her shuddering breath as a shiver in her palm." "I offer her silent reassurance, my fingers curling around her hand softly." + pause .5 F "Anon, do you think I fucked up?" + pause .5 "I consider for a moment." "While Trish did mess up, big time, she’s still Fang’s best friend." - "It wasn’t all malicious. Just… Misguided." + "It wasn’t all malicious. Just{cps=*.1}...{/cps} misguided." + pause .5 "Maybe some time apart will help both Fang and Trish." - "Maybe… but y’know…" + "Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps} but y’know{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 "I know you can hear this, though." + show fang neutral with dissolve "Fang simply rolls her eyes." - show fang happy with dissolve - + show fang happy with Dissolve(.25) F "Such a dweeb." A "Yep." + pause .5 "She held my hand the entirety of lunch." "Which was nice." - scene black with fade - stop music fadeout 1.0 + pause .5 + + stop music fadeout 3 + scene black with dissolve + pause .5 + "But it made eating my mediocre steak fucking difficult." - "..." + "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + pause .5 + + jump .PromAnnouncement label .MendingThings: @@ -3213,6 +3350,8 @@ label chapter_11: "..." + jump .PromAnnouncement + label .BreakingThings: A "I don’t follow."