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#Announcing a Show | Golden
#le inconsistant indention has arrived
#le wrong move indent slut
play music "audio/OST/Appreciating her Company.ogg" fadein 1.0
"About fifteen minutes into the assignment, the two of us are just about done."
"Were making surprisingly good time."
F "Uhm… and you said that the electrons hold the negative charge, right?"
A "Yeah, yeah."
F "Cant imagine when Id be using this crap in real life."
A "You never know, you might shrink one day."
show fang happy behind anon with dissolve
F "Yeah, and you might stop pretending youre livestreaming on Yousnoot."
A "As far as you know I might be giving you incorrect answers, you know."
F "Mhm, sure."
"The teacher is making his rounds checking on the students and gets to our desks."
show farnsworth at sright with moveinleft
Drf "Hello, Anon. Fang."
Drf "Are you two getting along well?"
AnonAndFang "Yes, Mister Fernsworth."
Drf "Great to hear."
Drf "You know, Im real proud of you two."
Drf "I remember at the start of the year you were at each other's' throats."
Drf "And now look at you!"
"The two of us cringe."
A "Uhh… Yeah, thanks."
Drf "At any rate, you two understand the material, right?"
A "Oh yeah, Fang and I are fine."
A "I was just helping them with a few problems."
"Phew, remembered it this time."
Drf "Good, good."
Drf "I wont keep you any longer then."
hide farnsworth with moveoutleft
"Fernsworth meanders to pester the next few students."
A "Anyways, where were we?"
show fang:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.5
show fang happy flip with dissolve
"I turn back to Fang and her mischievous grin."
pause .5
A "What?"
"Her grin only grows."
pause .5
A "What?! Whats with the look?"
"She shakes her head and holds up her wrist."
"She shakes her head and covers her mouth."
A "Uh… its ten thirty-seven? Why is that funny?"
A "Uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} did I say something funny?"
F "Anon you ignorant slut."
F "Notice something missing?"
F "Notice something about me? Anything at all?"
pause .5
A "...Why do you have feathers on your elbows anyway?"
A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Why do you have feathers on your elbows anyway?"
F "Gawd! No! Im not enbie, Anon."
F "Gawd! No! Im not actually enbie, Anon."
pause .5
A "Oh… Still, why do you have feathers on your elbows?"
"What? Oh! 'She'."
A "Oh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} still, why do you have feathers on your elbows?"
"Fang rolls her eyes and digs her feathered elbow into my side."
show fang:
easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
show fang happy with Dissolve(.15)
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
pause .5
A "Alright alright, I get it."
show anon:
ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
A "Just joking around."
F "Shame your jokes suck."
"We chuckle together."
pause .5
A "So, like, I can say youre my girlfriend now?"
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"The blush becomes contagious and I find myself looking back at the worksheet."
"... Girlfriend…"
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Girlfriend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Suddenly Im feeling squeamish all over again."
pause .5
"I mean, we went on dates before, but shes never straight up said shes my girlfriend"
"I mean, we went on dates before, but shes never straight up said shes my girlfriend{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
"Now Im on the spot."
pause .5
"It only makes sense that I ask her to prom, right?"
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A "Hey, Fang, you-"
F "Were going to prom together, right?"
pause .5
A "O-oh, yeah. Totally."
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A "I mean, only with you?"
F "Yes or no, dork."
pause .5
A "Yes."
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A "Like plucking feathers."
"She playfully elbows me again."
show fang:
easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
pause .15
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
pause .5
"She playfully elbows me again."
pause .5
show anon:
ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
"I think I get the feathers on the elbow thing now, because those things fucking dig in. Ow."
F "Do you even have something to wear?"
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A "You actually gonna wear a dress?"
F "Ive got this sick looking dress shirt…"
show fang neutral with dissolve
F "Ive got this sick looking dress shirt{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
show fang happy with Dissolve(.25)
F "Naaaah, shirts suck."
A "Wings again?"
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F "Wings again. At least I can wear a backless dress."
"I cup my chin and try to picture the dress."
pause .5
"The heat"
"The heat creeping up my face tells Fang exactly what Im thinking."
show anon grin with dissolve
"I grin and nod approvingly."
show fang:
easeout_cubic 0.25 xalign 0.35
ease_cubic 0.5 xalign 0.4
pause .15
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.0
pause .5
"And earn a third elbow to my side."
show anon:
ease_cubic 1 xalign 0.05
show anon neutral with dissolve
A "Wait, hold on."
A "Do you still go by Fang, at least?"
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F "Taking it one step at a time, you know?"
show fang considering with dissolve
F "Theres only about ten minutes left of class, are we gonna have enough time to finish the assignment?"
A "Shit, yeah. Forgot."
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A "Its gonna be close though."
show fang:
easein_back 1 xalign 0.35
show fang neutral with dissolve
"Fang scoots her chair closer to me."
F "No time to waste then, yeah?"
stop music fadeout 4
pause .5
"Splitting the questions between us, Fang and I are able to finish the assignment seconds before the bell."
"Somehow."
pause .5
play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 1.0
play music "audio/OST/to_swagger.ogg" fadein 2
scene hallway
show fang happy:
yalign 0.0 xalign 1.0
show anon neutral:
yalign 0.1 xalign 0.4
with Fade(1, 0, 1)
"We walk through the hall together, at least until we have to split to our separate classes."
scene hallway with dissolve
show anon neutral at aleft
show fang happy at scenter
show anon shrug with Dissolve(.25)
A "Hey wait, you did the word search bit this time, right?"
A "I thought you said you were terrible at those?"
show anon neutral with dissolve
F "And youve believed me up to this point."
pause .5
A "I feel used."
F "Thats because I used you."
pause .5
A "Ill get you fo-"
Sp "Ah, Fang! There you are, a moment please."
show anon:
easein 1 xalign 0.55
show fang:
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with None
show spears neutral:
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show spears:
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show anon neutral flip behind fang
show fang surprised flip
with dissolve
pause 1
"We turn to see Principal Spears trailing behind us."
pause .5
F "Yes?"
show spears neutral flip at sright with dissolve
Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here…"
Sp "Fang, I was planning on asking you during your next class, but since I found you here{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
Sp "Im embarrassed to say were missing one event slot during prom. Scheduling error."
Sp "And your teacher, Mr Jingo, recommended you for your musical talents."
pause .5
Sp "Im not asking you to make your decision right now, but if youd consider helping out by performing a musical number or two that would help monumentally."
pause .5
show fang happy flip with dissolve
F "Oh!"
A "Fangs going to play for the school?"
Sp "If Fang agrees to."
F "Well, uh Sure!"
F "Well, uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} Sure!"
F "Yeah, Id love to do some songs for prom."
show spears happy with Dissolve(.25)
Sp "Fantastic news, Fang. When you can, please swing by the office."
F "Thank you, Principal Spears. Ill come after school today."
"Spears nods and heads off."
pause .5
hide spears with moveoutright
show spears:
easeout 1.2 xalign -0.9
pause .2
show spears happy flip with dissolve
hide spears with dissolve
pause .5
show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Shit, now I really need to get a good dress."
show anon:
easein_cubic 1 xalign 0.45
show anon neutral with dissolve
A "I thought you had one?"
show fang unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "A party dress isnt a performance dress!"
F "Its like- you know what I mean."
A "I guess?"
pause .5
A "You dont seem as excited as last time you got somewhere to play."
show fang sad flip with dissolve
F "I know, I mean... last time I had a whole band to play with."
pause .5
A "You sure youll be alright playing solo?"
show fang considering flip with dissolve
F "Probably."
F "Ill also need to practice a lot more…"
F "Ill also need to practice a lot more{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
pause .5
show fang neutral flip with dissolve
F "Youll help me, right?"
A "Of course."
A "As long as you dont need me up on stage with you."
show fang happy flip with Dissolve(.25)
F "Im trying to keep the crowd from throwing things this time around, actually."
pause .5
A "Bite me."
F "Speaking of. Ill see you at lunch, right?"
A "Yeah, of course."
pause .5
show fang behind anon:
easein_back 1 yalign 0.14 xalign 0.8
easein_cubic 1 yalign 0.0 xalign 1.2
pause .5
"Fang pecks me on the cheek and starts down the hall to her next class."
hide fang neutral with moveoutright
show fang:
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pause .2
show fang happy with dissolve
hide fang with dissolve
pause .5
show anon grin with dissolve
"I feel my lips spread into a grin. Its kind of weird to think of it, but Im actually excited for prom."
stop music fadeout 1.0
pause .5
stop music fadeout 4
scene black with Dissolve(1)
pause .5
"Man, I hope dads suit has actually been to the cleaner, I dont wanna disappoint."
"..."
"{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
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