uplift SFX and VFX for a bunch of shit

game/script/10.an-excellent-reason-to-start-abusing-mod-powers.rpy

@@ -27,7 +27,9 @@ label chapter_10:
     A "Welcome to Casa Del Shithole, occupancy a miserable weeb."
     pause .5
 
-    scene room anon day alt with Dissolve(1)
+    scene room anon day alt
+    show dimmer_darker
+    with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     "Raptor Jesus threw me a bone at least."
@@ -164,51 +166,69 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     A "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}Fine{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    stop music fadeout 4
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg' fadein 4
+    stop music fadeout 5
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/apartmentLoop.ogg' fadein 4
     pause .5
 
-    scene wounds01 with dissolve
+    scene wounds01 with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
     "I step into my tiny shower stall and turn on the water."
 
     "The shower head sputters before it starts weakly spraying lukewarm water."
-
-    scene wounds02 with dissolve
-    pause .5
+    show black with dissolve
+    play sound "audio/effects/showerStart.ogg"
+    pause .75
+    play ambient1 "audio/effects/showerLoop.ogg" fadein 1.75
+    stop ambient fadeout 1.75
+    pause 1.5
 
     "The temperature of the water doesn’t help the tension in my muscles or the bruises marring my skin."
     pause .5
 
-    "I stretch around and see massive blotches of purple and black splattered across my torso."
+    scene wounds02 with Dissolve(2)
+    hide black
     pause .5
 
-    scene wounds03 with dissolve
-    pause .5
+    "I stretch around and see massive blotches of purple and black splattered across my torso."
+    pause 1
+
+    stop ambient1 fadeout 1
+    play ambient2 "audio/effects/showerMuffledLoop.ogg" fadein 1
+    play ambient "audio/effects/apartmentLoop.ogg" fadein 1
+    scene wounds03 with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 1
 
     "Each contusion is hot to the touch under my fingers and the pain is intense."
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     scene wounds04 with dissolve
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     "The worst is across my chest where the bollard hit me."
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
-    scene wounds05 with dissolve
+    scene wounds05 with Dissolve(1)
+    stop ambient2 fadeout 0.69
     pause .5
+    play sound "audio/effects/showerMuffledEnd.ogg"
+    pause 1
 
-    "I eventually get finished examining my wicked wounds and step out of the bathroom.  Fang is on her phone doing Raptor Jesus knows what."
+    "I eventually get finished examining my wicked wounds and step out of the bathroom."
+    
+    "Fang is on her phone doing Raptor Jesus knows what."
+    pause .5
 
     stop ambient fadeout 3
-    play music 'audio/ost/appreciating her company.ogg' fadein 1
-    scene wounds06 with dissolve
-    pause .5
+    stop sound fadeout 3
+    play music 'audio/ost/appreciating her company.ogg' fadein 2
+    scene wounds06 with Dissolve(1)
+    pause 1
 
     "Fang then pats the bed"
     pause .5
 
     F "Come here."
+    pause .5
 
     "I walk over and lie down on my stomach."
     pause .5
@@ -256,9 +276,10 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "Fang’s hands slow to a stop and eventually pull away, leaving me disappointed."
+    pause .5
 
     "The bed shifts."
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     F "Anon."
 
@@ -272,8 +293,9 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "Oh."
+    pause .5
 
-    scene wounds08 with dissolve
+    scene wounds08 with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
     
     "Okay then."
@@ -286,7 +308,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "And find myself face to beak with her."
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     "Dangerously close."
     pause .5
@@ -317,7 +339,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     "I hope{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
-    play ambient 'audio/effects/apartment loop.ogg' fadein 3
+    play ambient 'audio/effects/apartmentLoop.ogg' fadein 3
     stop music fadeout 4
     pause 1
 
@@ -336,6 +358,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     pause .5
 
     "Wait."
+    pause .5
 
     "{cps=*.3}Oh fuck.{/cps}"
 
@@ -353,8 +376,8 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     "My head sinks back into my pillow."
 
-    A "{cps=*.4}-ffffffffff{/cps}{i}fuck{/i}."
-    pause .5
+    A "{cps=*.3}-ffffffffff{/cps}{i}fuck{/i}."
+    pause 1
 
     "A snort escapes from Fang’s beak."
     pause .5
@@ -369,7 +392,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     "Her fingers brush lightly across the largest bruise on my chest, without ointment."
     
-    scene wounds12 with dissolve
+    scene wounds12 with Dissolve(1)
     pause .5
 
     F "You mutter from time to time. I didn’t start noticing til our{cps=*.1}...{/cps} d-date{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
@@ -380,6 +403,7 @@ label chapter_10:
     "So the entire time{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     F "Yeah{cps=*.1}...{/cps} It’s uh{cps=*.1}...{/cps} kinda cute{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
+    pause 1
 
     A "Raptor Jesus on his cross of rock. So for months now-"
 
@@ -457,6 +481,7 @@ label chapter_10:
 
     "The feel of her warm body pressed against my side is definitely worth it."
 
+    stop music fadeout 6
     "And between that warmth and the plush wing-blanket, my eyes grow heavy again."
     pause .5
 
@@ -469,12 +494,12 @@ label chapter_10:
     "Ah, there{cps=*.1}...{/cps} we{cps=*.1}...{/cps} go{size=-5}o{/size}{size=-10}o{/size}{cps=*.1}{size=-10}...{/size}{/cps}"
     pause .5
 
-    stop music fadeout 4
-    scene black with Dissolve(1)
+    scene black with Dissolve(2)
+    pause .5
 
     "Z{size=-5}z{/size}{size=-10}z{/size}"
 
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
-    pause .5
+    pause 1
 
     return