From 78ec029f09cabd6bdaca7e4536d1a742b4f34e9b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: rachc659 Date: Wed, 10 Jul 2024 18:28:28 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Done! --- game/script/x4-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy | 38 ++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/x4-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy b/game/script/x4-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy index 2a45a80..f71419a 100644 --- a/game/script/x4-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy +++ b/game/script/x4-passion-of-the-trigga.rpy @@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ label chapter_x4: "I lean back against the wall, my freshly polished horns feeling fantastic today." - "I deserve it after all the shit I deal with at school. Not to mention the tiny terrors at home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "I deserve it after all the shit I've dealt with at school. Not to mention the tiny terrors at home{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" pause .5 - "A part of me wants to feel bad that I left Fang on their own the other day." + "A part of me wants to feel bad for leaving Fang on their own the other day." "Especially with that useless skinnie." @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ label chapter_x4: with dissolve T "Our chance to make VVURM DRAMA the hit it deserves to be!" - "Our celebration continues until someone, probably one of the teachers passing by, knocks on the music room’s door several times." + "Our celebration continues until someone, probably one of the teachers passing by, knocks on the music room's door several times." show fang happy show trish considering flip @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ label chapter_x4: "Then I remember the person responsible." pause .5 - "Ah, maybe skinnie isn’t so bad." + "Ah, maybe Skinnie isn't so bad." pause .5 "Pffft, nah. I probably coulda convinced that fucking fossil too." @@ -78,14 +78,14 @@ label chapter_x4: show trish neutral flip with dissolve "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "I look at Fang and notice them with a look on their face I haven’t seen in a very long time." + "I look at Fang and notice them with a look on their face I haven't seen in a very long time." - "Like they’re daydreaming again." + "Like they're daydreaming again." pause .5 - "It’s kinda weird. Like they’re too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" + "It's kinda weird. Like they're too{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - "Embarrassed looking? Hmm?" + "Embarrassed-looking? Hmm?" pause .5 T "So{cps=*.1}...{/cps} You two do anything else all day?" @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ label chapter_x4: T "You sure he's not just trying to get into your pants or something?" show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - "Fang sighs and looks up. Their snout waves back and forth as they stare up at the dirty looking ceiling while thinking." + "Fang sighs and looks up. Their snout waves back and forth as they stare up at the dirty-looking ceiling while thinking." pause .5 F "I don't know{cps=*.1}...{/cps} he has this thing he does where he mumbles{cps=*.1}...{/cps} I don't think he knows he does it." @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ label chapter_x4: show trish: easein_back 1 xalign 0.775 show trish surprised flip with Dissolve(.25) - "What! With Anon! Him!" + "What!? Anon!? Him!?" show trish unimpressed flip with Dissolve(.25) T "Fang, are you for real right now?" @@ -158,25 +158,25 @@ label chapter_x4: show fang unimpressed with Dissolve(.25) "They huff and cross their arms." - F "I’m just saying. Anon’s a good friend." + F "I'm just saying. Anon's a good friend." pause .5 show trish considering flip with dissolve - "A friend? The way they said it doesn’t sound like friend shit." + "A friend? The way they said it doesn't sound like friend shit." "Not like with me." show trish neutral flip with dissolve - T "Puhlease, Fang. Anon’s just like every other guy at Volcano High." + T "Puhlease, Fang. Anon's just like every other guy at Volcano High." show trish smug flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "Only worse because he’s broke and from the boonies." + T "Only worse because he's broke and from the boonies." show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) - F "C’mon Trish, you’re being harsh on him. You don’t even know Anon." + F "C'mon, Trish. You're being harsh on him. You don't even know Anon." show trish neutral flip with Dissolve(.25) - T "I don’t need to know him to know he’s just like the rest of them." + T "I don't need to know him to know he's just like the rest of them." pause .5 show fang: @@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ label chapter_x4: F "Maybe{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" - T "No maybes about it, Fang. Their type are all the same. Nothing but loser assholes." + T "No maybes about it, Fang. His type are all the same. Nothing but loser assholes." show fang neutral with Dissolve(.25) F "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}" @@ -233,11 +233,11 @@ label chapter_x4: "I hand Fang the blue strat, which they immediately set to tuning just right." - "Mr. Jingo really needs to get some new gear, these things aren’t maintained at all." + "Mr. Jingo really needs to get some new gear; these things aren't maintained at all." stop music fadeout 4 pause .5 - "Even this bass, no one ever even uses it." + "Even this bass. No one ever even uses it." pause .5 "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"