actually uses the automated renpy translation feature formatting

didn't use the automated renpy feature so this wasn't correct whoops

game/script.rpy

@@ -316,7 +316,6 @@ transform scloserleft:
 label start:
     $ fangscore = 0
     $ anonscore = 0
-    $ tradwife = False
     $ wingStory = False
     pause 1.0
     call storyline from _call_storyline

game/script/11.school-assignment-and-route-lock.rpy

@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ label chapter_11:
 
     # Doomer ending skips this segment
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending
-    if _return == 2:
+    if _return == Endings.Doomer:
         stop music fadeout 3
         pause 2
         jump lPromAnnouncement
@@ -586,12 +586,12 @@ label chapter_11:
     pause .5
 
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_1
-    if _return == 4:
+    if _return == Endings.Golden:
-        jump lSortingThings # Golden
+        jump lSortingThings
-    elif _return == 3:
+    elif _return == Endings.Tradwife:
-        jump lMendingThings # Tradwife
+        jump lMendingThings
     else:
-        jump lBreakingThings # Shooter
+        jump lBreakingThings # All else fails, go to shooter.
 
     label lSortingThings:
 
@@ -5212,7 +5212,7 @@ label chapter_11:
     pause .5
 
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_2
-    if _return == 3: #tradwife
+    if _return == Endings.Tradwife:
 
         "Things are going pretty well. When we discount Trish’s weekly attempt to talk with Fang."
 
@@ -5467,8 +5467,10 @@ label chapter_11:
     "{cps=*.1}...{/cps}"
 
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_3
-    if _return != 1: # any route except Shooter
+    if _return == Endings.Shooter:
-        # duplicated segment from 11B, 11C and 11D transplanted here
+        return
+    
+    # the following segment makes sense in the context of 11B+11C+11D
     window hide
     window auto
     pause .5

game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -844,7 +844,7 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     show fang considering flip with Dissolve(.25)
 
-    Ro "I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} URGH!{w=.4} Do you have {i}any{/i} idea how long it takes for those to bloom!"
+    Ro "I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} URGH!{w=.4} Do you have {i}any{/i} idea how hard those are to get!"
 
     Ro "Name!{w=.4} What is your name?!"
 
@@ -1388,7 +1388,6 @@ label chapter_5:
 
     A "Err{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} Sorry?"
 
-    # TODO: the line "do you have any idea how long it takes for those to bloom" is also used earlier when Anon first falls into the flowerbed
     Ro "{i}Ay Dios mío{/i}{cps=*.1}...{/cps} do you have any idea how long it takes those to bloom?!"
 
     if not punched_into_flowerbed:

game/src/credits.rpy

@@ -218,7 +218,8 @@ image d_credits_text = Composite(
 
 label lending:
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_4
-    if _return == 4:
+    $ cached_ending = _return # un-necessary to call this so many times
+    if cached_ending == Endings.Golden:
         pause 0.5
         show snootgame_big with dissolve: # Renpy not allowing you to grab images from the gui folder is serious bullshit
             subpixel True
@@ -248,7 +249,7 @@ label lending:
         pause 50
         queue music 'audio/OST/amberlight brillance live end.ogg'
         queue music "<silence 1.0>" loop
-    elif _return == 3:
+    elif cached_ending == Endings.Tradwife:
         play music "audio/OST/Dino Destiny Reader.ogg"
         pause 0.5
         show c_credits_text:
@@ -280,12 +281,12 @@ label lending:
     stop music fadeout 5
     scene black with Dissolve(3)
     pause 2
-    if tradwife:
+    if cached_ending == Endings.Tradwife:
         scene c10 with Dissolve(1.5)
         pause 20
         scene black with Dissolve(2)
         pause 1
-    elif anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4:
+    elif cached_ending == Endings.Golden:
         scene golden ending with Dissolve(1.5)
         pause 20
         scene black with Dissolve(2)

game/storyline.rpy

@@ -23,26 +23,25 @@ label storyline:
     call chapter_10 from _call_chapter_10
     call chapter_11 from _call_chapter_11
     call get_ending from _call_get_ending_5
-    if _return == 4:
+    if _return == Endings.Golden:
         call chapter_11D from _call_chapter_11D
         call chapter_12D from _call_chapter_12D
         call chapter_12_5D from _call_chapter_12_5D
         call chapter_13D from _call_chapter_13D
         call chapter_14D from _call_chapter_14D
-    elif _return == 3:
+    elif _return == Endings.Tradwife:
-        $ tradwife = True
         call chapter_11C from _call_chapter_11C
         call chapter_12C from _call_chapter_12C
         call chapter_12_5C from _call_chapter_12_5C
         call chapter_13C from _call_chapter_13C
         call chapter_14C from _call_chapter_14C
-    elif _return == 2:
+    elif _return == Endings.Doomer:
         call chapter_11B from _call_chapter_11B
         call chapter_12B from _call_chapter_12B
         # no chapter_13 here since the scene is different enough to the other routes for everything to go into 13C
         call chapter_13B from _call_chapter_13B
         call chapter_14B from _call_chapter_14B
-    else:
+    else: # if all else fails, we just assume that we got Endings.Shooter
         call chapter_11A from _call_chapter_11A
         call chapter_12A from _call_chapter_12A
         call chapter_12_5D from _call_chapter_12_5D_1

game/tl/es/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy

@@ -1116,12 +1116,6 @@ translate es movie_4263d346:
     # "I shrug apologetically."
     "Me encojo de hombros a modo de disculpa."
 
-# game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy:847
-translate es movie_98d69c6e:
-
-    # Ro "I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} URGH!{w=.4} Do you have {i}any{/i} idea how long it takes for those to bloom!"
-    Ro "Solo{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} ¡URGH!{w=.4} ¿Tienes {i}alguna{/i} idea de cuánto tardan en florecer?"
-
 # game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy:849
 translate es movie_2fab4cce:
 
@@ -6944,3 +6938,11 @@ translate es strings:
     old "Interrupt"
     new "Interrumpir"
 
+# TODO: Translation updated at 2023-05-07 00:26
+
+# game/script/5.fang-and-anon-cut-class-to-talk-on-the-roof.rpy:847
+translate es movie_f9188bac:
+
+    # Ro "I just{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} URGH!{w=.4} Do you have {i}any{/i} idea how hard those are to get!"
+    Ro "Solo{cps=*.1}...{/cps}{w=.3} ¡URGH!{w=.4} ¿Tienes {i}alguna{/i} idea de lo dificil que son para conseguierlos?"
+

game/utility.rpy

@@ -1,23 +1,31 @@
 ## Utility functions for game setup, debugging etc.
 
-label initstats(anon=0, fang=0, trad=False):
+init python:
+    from enum import Enum
+
+    # Create compile-time macros to more easily track what ending goes to what without the need for magic numbers or strings that can be mistyped
+    class Endings(Enum):
+        Shooter = 0
+        Doomer = 1
+        Tradwife = 2
+        Golden = 3
+
+label initstats(anon=0, fang=0):
     # Sets various game-related global variables
     # :param int anon:  Anon's score
     # :param int fang:  Fang's score
-    # :param bool trad: Tradwife ending flag
     $ anonscore = anon
     $ fangscore = fang
-    $ tradwife = trad
     return
 
 label get_ending:
     # To check what ending we're getting, call this label and then check the value of _return
     # Sensible to have this logic defined in only one place for consistency
     if anonscore >= 4 and fangscore >= 4 and wingStory:
-        return(4) # Golden
+        return(Endings.Golden)
     elif anonscore >= 3 and fangscore <=4:
-        return(3) # Tradwife
+        return(Endings.Tradwife)
     elif anonscore <= 3 and fangscore >=3:
-        return(2) # Doomer
+        return(Endings.Doomer)
     else:
-        return(1) # Shooter
+        return(Endings.Shooter)