From a44ee38c7b526bbdd0f3c36ee9a76f0cbab1630e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Seth M. Price" Date: Mon, 27 May 2024 19:47:05 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Fix select comma splices MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit There are a lot of comma splices, but “fixing” them all would totally change the feel of the game. These two were the only ones that stood out in any way thus far. --- game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy index c5dcbf3..f65989a 100644 --- a/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy +++ b/game/script/1.first-two-days-anon-meets-fang.rpy @@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ label chapter_1: N "I think he means the loan program, sir." - Sp "Tell him to come in later, I’m dealing with another student." + Sp "Tell him to come in later; I’m dealing with another student." pause .65 play sound 'audio/effects/slapstickPunch.ogg' @@ -2213,7 +2213,7 @@ label chapter_1: "The halls before class are as crowded as always, with hundreds of students filing in unison towards their homerooms." - "By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot, I've walked the same path twice already after all." + "By now I was starting to be able to make my way around on autopilot—I've walked the same path twice already after all." pause .5 "Even after the longest sleep of my life, I still feel miserably tired and ready to crash once again."